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我的好朋友英语作文初一水平(汇编20篇)

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给自己朋友的一封信英语作文带翻译

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Dear Jim,

亲爱的吉姆,

Last Sunday my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park.

上周日我和我的同学去了香山公园。

We met at 7 oclock at the school gate. The weather in Beijing that day was great. At around 8 oclock, we arrived at Xiangshan Park. There is a high tree on the bottom of the hill. We had a party and played games under the tree. Then we climbed to the top of Xiangshan Mountain. It was not very difficult for us to do it. Next, we had lunch at the top of the hill. It was delicious. After lunch, we saw some birds. They were friendly. And we saw a whole picture of Beijing. "What a beautiful city!" I said. At that moment, we all felt so proud. I live in Beijing now. The 2008 Olympic games was held here.

我们七点在校门口集合。那天北京的天气很好。八点左右,我们就抵达香山公园。在山脚下有一棵高高的树。我们在树下开了一个聚会,玩游戏。然后我们爬上香山的山顶。对我们来说并不是很难。接下来,我们在山顶上吃午饭。很美味。午饭后,我们看见了一些鸟。它们很友好。我们看到了北京的全貌。”真是一个美丽的城市!”我说道。在那一刻,我们都感到非常的骄傲。我现在住在北京。2008届奥运会将在这里举行。

I hope you can visit to Beijing in the future and I am sure you’ll like here.

希望将来你可以来参观北京,我肯定你一定会喜欢的。

Best wishes.

最好的祝福

Sincerely yours,

Li Ming

李明

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篇1:初一英语作文:英语自我介绍

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Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the beautiful city of Beihai.

你好,每个人!我的名字是温妮。我是一个15岁的女孩。我住在美丽的城市北海。

Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.

我是一个活跃的,可爱的,聪明的女孩。在学校我最喜欢的科目是数学。也许有人认为很难学好。但我喜欢它。我相信如果你尽你最大的努力,一切都可以做得很好。

also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good friends!

也很喜欢运动。例如,跑步、排球等等。我是善良的。如果你需要帮助,请到我这里来。我希望我们能成为好朋友!

OK. This is me. A sunny girl.

好吧。这就是我。一个阳光明媚的女孩。

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篇2:我的朋友英语作文

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I have a friend call Yang Linrui, he is medium height, thin body, a white frame, he likes to wear a jacket shorts. In the summer.

Yang Lian likes playing basketball, usually a free will go to the playground for a while. Each PE lesson, as long as the teacher ask what students want to play basketball, he like already ready, shoot high up, also put up your hands and say: "I, me, me." For fear that the teacher couldnt see him. However, he did play well play basketball, is our class basketball team player, especially 3-pointers, especially well.

Although he was a valiant soldier on the basketball court, off the court is a crying ghost, a little bit of injustice will red-rimmed and shed tears, to have much sorrow. At ordinary times, by whom is inadvertently touch, he would cry. Remember once our class basketball training, after training, I suddenly grabbed his ball, is originally wanted to open a joke, didnt think he suddenly cried, hands and feet. Make me very embarrassed.

He has a bad habit, it is to eat eat not to clean. Every noon meal at school, the teacher give him having meal, no matter how many, she will always remain a few metres in the dish, also change not to drop.

Because both of us as basketball players, often practice together, love will come in time, we gradually become inseparable friends.

我有一个朋友叫杨林瑞,他中等个子,身子瘦瘦的,一张白净的瓜子脸,夏天他喜欢穿短衣短裤。。

杨涟瑞喜欢打篮球,平时一有空就会去操场上打一会儿。每节体育课上,只要老师一问哪些同学要打篮球,他就像早就准备好了一样,一下子把手高高地举起来,还一边举手一边说:“我、我、我。”生怕老师看不见他似的。不过,他打篮球确实打得好,是我们班的篮球队主力队员,尤其是三分球,投得特好。

别看他篮球场上是一员猛将,场下却是个爱哭鬼,一点点委屈就会眼圈红红的并流下泪来,跟有多大伤心事似的。平时,就是被谁无意中碰一下,他也会哭。记得有一次我们班训练篮球,训练结束后,我把他的球一下子抢了过来,本来是想跟他开一个玩笑,没想到他一下子哭了,手脚无措。弄得我十分尴尬。

他还有一个不好的习惯,就是吃饭吃不干净。每天中午在学校就餐,老师给他舀饭,无论多少,她总会剩几颗米在盘子里,老也改不掉。

由于我们俩同为篮球队员,常常在一起练习,日久生情,我俩渐渐地成了形影不离的好朋友。

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篇3:MyBirthday初一英语作文

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March 5th is my birthday.

It’s also a special day to memorize a great person -- Lei Feng. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs.

After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.

What a joyful birthday it was!

[My Birthday初一英语作文

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篇4:我的好朋友英语作文

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Her father is a business man。 He goes to work by car。 He has got a big pany。 He is great! Her mother is an accountant in her father’s pany。 She goes to work with her father。 She gets up at 8:30。 Sometimes they go to work early, so Angel must cook breakfast for her grandma。 She cooks well。 Angel says she is going to visit me this weekend。 I cannot wait!

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篇5:写给朋友的圣诞节英语一封信

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Dear Grandpa Santa Claus,

Hello!

Im a big fan of yours! Listen to some of my aunt said, you are to give

children gifts, so, every Christmas, I spent my bed hang Christmas stockings,

hope that the next day to receive your gift, every morning, I can see your gift

in my stocking, I am very, very happy, because I received your gift.

Santa Claus grandpa, I envy oh, riding your small reindeer, flying in the

sky, if I remember correctly, you should have two rows of small reindeer, your

small reindeer grow like what? Ive always wanted to have one of my own. Flying

with you in the sky!

Time a year passed, I also grew up, at this time, I just know that there is

no Santa Claus, that I socks in the small gift, is the mother sent, but I am

still very happy, after all, this is my mother gave me.

Santa Claus grandpa, I want a few gifts, I hope you can promise me: I want

a pink pink puppy, I want a super cute Christmas doll......

Father Christmas, I wish you a smile, good health, good luck in your work,

and a happy family.

Bye bye! Father Christmas, I will write to you next time!

advance

Salute!

Your loyal fans

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篇6:关于朋友英语年级

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I like to make friends so much, because I want to know more about the new

things, making friends can broaden my knowledge. But the true friend is really

hard to make. A true friend can say whatever he wants to say, he dares to point

out my weakness and helps me to make progress. Though the words are not nice but

are good for me, I want to make the true friend.

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篇7:英语初一

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In the 21st century, the scientific and economic development of mankind has

reached a high degree. But I want to ask: have you ever thought that the exhaust

gases from the industry pollute the air? Does the industry waste water seriously

contaminate the water? A lot of snacks will eat the ozone layer to make

ultraviolet radiation harmful to human health?

In scientific and economic development, we should also think about the

environmental damage and the causes of global warming. Protect the environment,

trees, flowers and birds will bring you wonderful scenery. Can you listen

carefully to the graceful singing of the birds? Can you ever stroke the birch

smooth coat or the rough skin of the pine? Can you smell the intoxicating

fragrance of the flowers?

Let the stream crowd through your open fingers. You will feel the beauty of

nature. Let the wind blow you, you will feel the wild nature. Let the rain be on

you, you will feel the naughty nature of nature.

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篇8:初一关于志愿者的英语作文

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This afternoon, our classmates dressed in neat uniforms, volunteers on the cap, began volunteering --

We divided into two group, a number of initiatives with miss zhou, a batch of picking up litter and yan teacher to square. Its my pleasure, was chosen by miss zhou to the initiative. Followed from the store before we come to the experimental middle school, take action! "Uncle hello, we are extending to the situation of primary school volunteers. You know we delay, kratos elementary school campus experimental middle school have?" We have a stretcher, uncle smiled to the florist asked. "Yes!" Uncle looked confused, replied. "Oh, we want to initiative to you." My partner [garbage? Said, "first, I hope you can dont throw rubbish path at the playground, does not affect the environment, can do it?" The uncle nodded: "can!" "Second, dont talk loudly, to avoid disturb the students learning." I the tacit understanding of a second. "Well, no problem." Uncle smiled and nodded. "Then please receive initiative book!" [garbage? Uncle handed the initiative to the flower shop, a company a standard stretcher, out of the flower shop. "Yeah, success!" Me and [garbage? High-five ". "Teacher, completed a!" We call the teacher. Miss zhou out his phone and said, "come, take a photo! The classmates huddled in a block, a bright smiling face record together, "click"! We finished, and initiative.

"Hello!" , "thank you for your support! . "there are several initiatives. Such word, replaying fall back such as flow! Although sweat wet clothes, but our heart is full of joy. The activity of today and further increased my courage, increased my confidence!

今天下午,我们班的同学穿着整齐的校服,戴上志愿者帽,开始了志愿活动——

咱们分两批,一批与周老师做倡议,一批与颜老师到广场捡垃圾。我很荣幸,被周老师选去倡议了。我们来到了实验中学前的一家家店面,开始行动啦!“叔叔您好,我们是延奎小学的志愿者。您知道实验中学有我们延奎小学的分校吗?”我行了个队礼,微微一笑对花店叔叔问。“知道啊!”叔叔疑惑的打量着,答道。“噢,我们想向您提出倡议。”我的搭档陈星?说道,“第一,希望您能不乱丢垃圾道分校操场,不影响环境,能做到吗?”叔叔连忙点头:“能啊!”“第二,不大声喧哗,避免打扰学生们学习。”我默契的说出第二条。“好,没问题啊。”叔叔笑笑,点点头。“那请接收倡议书吧!”陈星?把倡议书递给了花店叔叔,我们一同行了个标准的队礼,走出花店。“耶,成功咯!”我与陈星?击掌叫好。“老师,完成一家了!”我们叫唤着老师。周老师拿出手机,说:“来了,拍张照吧!”同学们挤在一块,灿烂的笑脸记录在一起,“咔嚓”!我们拍完照,又去倡议啦。

“您好!”,“谢谢您的支持!”,“有几点倡议。”这样的话语一遍遍重复着,都倒背如流啦!虽然汗水打湿了衣裳,但我们心中充满了喜悦。今天的活动更进一步的增加了我的勇气,增加了我的信心!

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篇9:介绍我的朋友英语作文及翻译

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Li Ming is my best friend in our class.

She has a pair of big eyes, like two watery grapes, like any clues, slight escapes her eyes. Her nose is small, but very sensitive. Her lips were red, mouth a little. Her ears, though small, but she is very careful listening in class. She has dark hair black, with long pigtails. She is short and thin. She likes singing and reading.

She is a man of ingenuity. On one occasion, an art teacher taught us to do the fan, she taught two kinds of methods. Students successfully finished the first fan, but the second they wont do, no matter what they fold, how sticky, fans still do not come out. At this moment, I saw my deskmate li Ming has looked at the art book unhurriedly, wanted to think, she put a piece of folded the paper in the material bag, again in a piece of paper, fold paper according to the first method I saw her, I thought to myself, she this is not a waste of material? But I just found that she one fold the paper into two, according to the order of the positive and negative sides deftly fold, fold after she put the paper together with lines, use glue to stick the one at the beginning of paper, then glue stick chopsticks, finally stick chopsticks on another opening of the paper, it made the fan. I also made a right away, the students saw, began to ask li Ming, she pointed to the art book, let the students look at art book. The students also made a second fan.

My friend is a man of ingenuity, envy I have a friend like you?

我最好的朋友是我们班的李明。

她有一双水灵灵的大眼睛,像二颗水灵的葡萄,像是任何蛛丝马迹、风吹草动都逃不过她的双眼。她的鼻子小小的,但非常灵敏。她的嘴唇红红的,嘴巴小小的。她的耳朵虽然小小的,但是她上课听讲很仔细。她的头发乌黑乌黑的,扎着长长的马尾辫。她个子矮矮的、瘦瘦的。她喜欢唱歌、看书。

她是一个心灵手巧的人。有一次,美术老师教我们做扇子,她教了二种方法。同学们都顺利地做完了第一把扇子,可第二把他们都不会做,无论他们怎么折、怎么粘,扇子还是做不出来。这时,我看见我的同桌李明却不慌不忙地看了看美术书,想了想,她把一张折过的纸放进材料袋中,又换了一张纸,我看见她把纸按第一种方法折,我心想:她这不是在浪费材料吗?可我这才发现,她将纸的一格折成二格,按正反正反的顺序灵巧地折下去,折完之后她用线把纸绑起来,用胶水把纸的其中一个开头粘牢,再将胶水把筷子粘起来,最后将筷子粘在纸的另一个开口,这样扇子就做成了。我也马上做了一把,同学们见了,纷纷向李明请教,她却指了指美术书,让同学们看美术书。同学们也做出了第二把扇子。

我的朋友是一个心灵手巧的人,你们羡慕我有一个这样的朋友吗?

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篇10:描写真正的朋友英语

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We all like to make friends, because no one can survive without a friend. If you ask someone how many friends do they have, most will answer a lot. Indeed, we make friends in different stage, even we are old, we still make friends. But not all friends are as honest as they are, some friends we made since we are young, some are just meet a couple of times and we don’t know much about them. The former are real friends, while the latter are not true friends. What is the real friend, a real friend is someone who you can talk about anything and can be show up the moment you need. Other friends are just for drinking and eating, they will not help you if you are in trouble. When we make friends, the real one is what we need.

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篇11:初一英语作文教学

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初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:

(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。

(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。

(4)书写规范、准确。

(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:

(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;

(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。

(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;

(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;

(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:

1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

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篇12:朋友的派对小学优秀英语作文

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i have a good friend. her name is emily. we are very friendly. yesterday was her thirteenth birthday. her friend and her parents held a party for her.

in the evening, all her friends came to emily’s home. each had a very nice present for her. at the moment, emily felt very happy. and so were her parents and her friends. look! the meal was on the table. how delicious they were! there were all kinds of food: eggs, fish, fried chicken, dumplings, pork, beef and some fruits.

after supper, emily sang a song“ happy birthday to you!” she has a nice voice. everybody said that she was a good singer. then we celebrated emily, “happy birthday to you! ” she said, “thank you! ” after this, emily’s mother took a birthday cake to the table. we gave presents to emily and emily began to blow candles. everybody was very delighter.

at last, we watched cartoon. what a good, nice birthday party.

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篇13:英语作文:朋友间的信任

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朋友间的信任

The Trust Between Friends

Friends are important for us, everyone has their own friends, we share sorrow and happiness with our friends. We are making new friends now and then, but it is hard to find the genius friends, the trust between friends are hard to build. If the trust exists, friends can talk anything, they are willing to show who they are in front of their friends. While if the trust doesn’t exist, the friendship is not real deep, people will ask you when they are in trouble. The real friendship is built on the basis of trust. My best friend will never ask me to do thing all the time, instead, she cares about me, and comforts me when I am upset. That’s a real friend.

译文:

朋友间的信任

朋友对于我们来说很重要,每人认都有他们的朋友,我们和朋友分享喜怒哀乐。我们会时而不时地交朋友,但是交到真正的朋友很难,朋友间的信任很难建立。如果信任存在,朋友间可以讨论任何事情,他们愿意在朋友面前展示真正的自己。

然而如果信任不存在,友情就不会很深,人们只会在他们有困难的时候才叫上你。真正的友情是建立在信任的基础上的。我最好的朋友永远都不会一直叫我去做事情,相反的,她一直关心我,当我感到烦恼时,给予我安慰。这是真正的朋友。

[英语作文:朋友间的信任

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篇14:英语作文-我的朋友

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My Friends 我的朋友

I have many good friends. They are Yuan Tianzhuo, Ji Nan, Lu Fangzhou and Wang Yang.

Yuan Tianzhuo is my deskmate. He is fourteen years old. He is tall but thin. His maths is very good, he usually gets marks in maths. But his English is not very good. So I help him with his English and he helps me with maths.

Ji Nan is from the countryside. He is a good student and he is fourteen, too. He is polite and helpful. He likes sports. I like sports, too. Our hobbies are the same.

Lu Fangzhou is thirteen. He is polite and helpful, too. He is tall and strong. His home is near mine.

I don’t know Wang Yang’s age, but I know he’s polite and helpful. He is tall. He is poor in his study. We all help him.

我有很多好朋友。他们是元天卓,济南,路方舟和王阳。元天卓是我的同桌。他十四岁。他高而瘦。他的数学很好,他通常在数学上取得高分。但他的英语不是很好。所以我帮助他学英语,他帮助我学数学。济南是来自农村。他是个好学生,他也是十四。他很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他喜欢运动。我也喜欢体育。我们的爱好是相同的。路方舟是十三岁。他也很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他高大强壮。他家在我家附近。

我不知道王阳的年龄,但我知道他很有礼貌而且乐于助人。他很高。他学习差。我们都帮助他。

[英语作文-我的朋友

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篇15:我的朋友和家人英语作文

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我的朋友家人My family and my friend》

My name is Liu Yang . I’m twelve years old . I have a big family .My father is a teacher and my mother is a teacher ,too . My grandpa is a worker and my grandma is a worker ,too . Sometimes my mother and I go shopping . I like reading books .I have sixty books in my home . My grandpa is not very old . He likes watching TV .We are very happy.

Shen Ziwei is my friend .She is twelve years old, too . We are in the same class.She is beautiful .Her hobby is playing the piano and reading books .

At school , she plays games with me . We are good friends .We have a good time every day.

我的名字是刘洋。我十二岁。我有一个大家庭,我的父亲是一位老师,我的母亲也是一位老师。我的爷爷是工人,我奶奶也是工人,太。有时我和妈妈一起去购物。我喜欢读书,我有六十本书在我的家里。我的爷爷不是很老。他喜欢看电视,我们很高兴。

沈紫薇是我的朋友。她十二岁了,太。我们在同一个班,她很漂亮,她的爱好是弹钢琴和看书。

在学校,她和我玩游戏。我们是好朋友,我们每天都很愉快。

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篇16:英语作文我的知心朋友

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I‘ve loved my mother’s desk since I was just tall enough to see above the top of it as Mother sat doing letters. Standing by her chair, looking at the ink bottle, pens, and white paper, I decided that the act of writing must be the most wonderful thing in the world.

Years later,during her final illness,Mother kept different things for my sister and brother. “But the desk”, she said, “is for Elizabeth”。

I never saw her angry, never saw her cry. I knew she loved me, she showed it in action. But as a young girl, I wanted heart-to-heart talks between mother and daughter.

They never happened. And a gulf opened between us. I was “too emotional”。 But she lived “on the surface”

As years passed and I had my own family. I loved my mother and thanked her for our happy family. I wrote to her in careful words and asked her to let me know in any way she chose that she did forgive me.

I posted the letter and waited for her answer. None came.

My hope turned to disappointment,then little interest, finally, peace——it seemed that nothing happened. I couldn‘t be sure that the letter had even got to Mother. I only knew that I had written it, and I could stop trying to make her into someone she was not.

Now the present of her desk told me, as she‘d never been able to, that she was pleased that writing was my chosen work, I cleaned the desk carefully and found some papers inside——a photo of my father and a one-page letter, folded and refolded many times.

Give me an answer, my letter asks, in any way you choose, Mother, you always chose the act that speaks louder than words.

[英语作文我的知心朋友

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篇17:至给朋友的一封信英语

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Dear __:

We have not seen each other for a long time. I miss (think of) you very

much. I wish (that) I had wings and could fly to your home. However, this is

impossible! Father (My father) has gone abroad of late. If I had had time then,

I would have accompanied him. Only Mother (my mother) and I are at home now (at

present). We are leading (living) a quiet and happy life. We look as if we were

fairies. I hope (that) I can hear from you very often. Sincerely yours.

Your friend:__

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篇18:作文初一英语

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Chinese food is colorful, varied, delicious, and nutritious. Chinese people

cares not only about the taste of the food, but also about its color and smell.

Food in different places has different flavors. Beijing food is quite oily and

salty; Shanghai food is sweet and light; Sichuan food is spicy and hot; and

Cantonese food is fresh and tender. Whats more, there are some popular local

snacks. For example, Beijing Roast Duck has a good reputation for its tender

meat, while the steam buns in Shanghai are well known for their juicy

ingredients.

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篇19:关于朋友英语年级

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Huang yixuan is my best friend. She is lovely. She is as tall as me. She

has a black long hair. Her round face is always red, just like an apple. She

likes smile. She like study, but doesnt like sports. She enjoys fishing.

Sometimes she will ask me to go with her and her dad to fishing. Her favorite

color is blue. So do I. she is good at playing piano. She is a perfect girl in

my mind.

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篇20:关于我的朋友英语作文双语

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He is my best friend, also is the popularity of the best in the class, the students were happy to together with him, because he is always worthy of our learning place.

Remember once the exam, because I am reading a book to see very late at night, and rose up in the morning, due to the tense and forgot to bring my ruler, until it was time for the upcoming exam only to find that, when he is in class exam next door, saw me at the door, worried, and came out, he asked me: "whats wrong with you, how fast the exam, you still hovering outside, isnt it too nervous?" I said: "of course not, Im reading a book to see the very late last night," "then why are you still outside the door back and forth?" Because reading late last night, and woke up this morning was a little nervous, he forgot to bring my ruler, you know, take an examination of mathematics must be ruler drawing, oh, oh, so you wait, also said he ran back, and then come back soon, put him in front of my new ruler is broken, so good, you first take out it, the exam must refueling oh! Then he went back, I stood in the doorway leng for a few seconds, then went back to the seat, of course, the exam was a success.

Another time is crowded bus, he and I are in the class when the bus there were so many people, and dont have a space, such as car after a few stand, less people down, Ill pull him see there are two locations often sitting position, when the car came to a very old old man, looked at him slowly pace, heart began to not worry, when the car is all as if nothing has occurredly sitting, I was just standing, thought that the look of surprise, but he did not for the likelihood of standing next to me, make me have a little embarrassed.

他是我最好的朋友,也是班上人缘最好的,同学们都很乐意与他在一起,因为他身上总有值得我们学习的地方。

记得有一次考试,因为我晚上看书看到很晚,早晨起来的时候,由于紧张而忘记带尺子,直到快要考试的时候才发现的,当时他就在隔壁班考试,看见我在门外转来转去,心急如焚的样子,便走了出来问我说:“你怎么了,怎么快考试了,你还在外转来转去的,是不是太紧张了?”我说:“当然不是了,昨晚我可是看书看到了很晚的,”“那你怎么还在门外来来回回?”就是因为昨晚看书到很晚,而且今天早上起来的时候有点紧张,便忘了带尺子,你知道的,考数学一定要尺子作图的,哦,这样啊,你等着,还不等说完他便跑了回去,接着又马上回来,当着我的面把他新买的尺子折断了, 这样好了,你先拿出用吧,这次考试要加油哦!接着他便回去了,我站在门口愣了几秒,便回到了座位上去了,当然,考试考的很顺利。

还有一次是我和他在下课挤公交的时候,当时公交车上人很多,没有一个空位,等车过了几站,人便少了下来,我看见还有两个位置便马上拉他往往位置上坐,这时车子来了一位年纪很大的老爷爷,看着他慢慢的步伐,心便不由的担心起来,这时车上的人却都若无其事的坐着,我刚好的站着,没想到诧异的目光,他却不为以然的站着我旁边,弄的我都有点不好意思了。

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