我的好朋友英语作文初一水平（优秀20篇）

A cherry small mouth, a face of dark skin, thin body, there is a pair of small eyes, she is my good friend, Rebecca.

Rebecca is our class "funny king". Remember once, in music class, the teacher released "unfortunately" of music, let a person up unfortunately, suddenly quiet in the class, the students you look at me, I look at you, who also dare not to perform. Suddenly a cry, "let me," we are all back, turned out to be agreement. She walked on stage, twisted up his "lines", this is our class laughed, Rebecca didnt joke you may think, take a first table of the book of the classmate, roll into a ball, on the students "boom" knocked up, his mouth still read something, like a monk qiaomuyu. Rebecca and lifted her clothes, touch the belly said: "thats great!" This is to let the boy didnt dare to look her. Look at the students, some laugh straight is collywobbles, some are rolled out, the teacher also beside laugh.

Rebecca loves singing, but singing is not her funny level is high. After all, "gold no pure gold, no one is perfect! She was singing, as if she broke the music box, old out of tune. Although she sings also pretty into, also think is just the thing, but I sound like Am tone-deaf drake, like "doraemon" fat tiger, which can sing it? But she never CARES, in his own words: xiang chang jiu chang...

This is my partner, I believe he is coming, you will like her.

一张樱桃小嘴，一脸黝黑的皮肤，瘦瘦的身材，还有一双水灵灵的小眼睛，她就是我的好朋友——林明。

林明是我们班的“搞笑大王”。记得有一次，上音乐课时，老师放出《济公》的音乐，让一个人上来演济公，班里一下子安静下来，同学们你看看我，我看看你，谁也不敢上台表演。突然一声“让我来”，我们全部扭回头，原来是林明。她走上台，扭起他那“水蛇腰”，这是我们班哈哈大笑，林明可能觉得还没逗笑大家，就拿起到第一桌同学的书，卷成一团，在那个同学头上“咚咚”的敲了起来，嘴里还念着些什么，就像和尚敲木鱼一样。林明又把衣服撩起，摸着肚皮说：“太爽了!”这下让男生都不敢朝她看。看看同学们，有的笑的直叫肚子疼，有的眼泪都流出来了，老师也在旁边大笑。

林明酷爱唱歌，不过，她唱歌可就没她搞笑的水平高了。毕竟，“金无足赤，人无完人”嘛!她唱起歌来，就像摔坏了的八音盒似的，老跑调。虽然她唱得也挺投入，还自认为挺够味的，可我听起来却像一只五音不全的公鸭，就跟《哆啦A梦》里的胖虎一般，这哪能叫唱歌?可她从来不在乎，用自己的话说：想唱就唱……

这就是我的伙伴，相信他来了，你们一定会喜欢她的。

As you know, sports can help the body to keep healthy.

I enjoy many kinds of sports , such as swimming, running, and dancing. However, the sport that I like most is swimming. Because I was born in the year of the snake, I like water very much as a snake. During summer vacations, I go swimming with my mother, although I should get up very early every day, I do not feel hard, because I can enjoy the cool summer water. In the other hand, swimming is a good sport, it can exercise every parts of our body, when you swimming, you should move your hand, your leg, your head, and every body parts should cooperate with each other. Swimming can make me more and more strong.

So dear friends,lets go swimming together.

[我喜欢运动初一英语作文

I have a good friend. Her name is Betty. She a lovely girl. She is 14 years old . I`m one year older than her. Her eyes are bigger than mine. Her hair is black and long. My hair is longer than hers. Betty is 156 centimeters tall. Im two centimeters taller than her. She is about 40 kilos. Im 50 kilos. So she is thinner than me. Betty is a beautiful and helpful girl. She does better in English than me. She often helps me with my English. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes dancing very much. She wants to be a dancer one day. She dances beautifully. I can learn a lot from her. I think well be good friends forever.

Whats friends? Do you have friends? I have many friends, so I always feel

happy. In the morning, some of my friends will go to school with me. We often

talk and laugh on the way to school. Sometimes we will stop to buy some snacks,

school things and other stuff. When I am in school, I always study with friends.

When I have something confusion, I will ask them to help. So do they. We help

each other. After class, we play together, and go to the shop to buy snacks.

They accompany me, so do I. I think this is friends.

dear zhang,

my name is liming.guo dehao you recently?

thanks your help i was only able to enter high school,im happy.i am very delicious new environment singular,and new school is very beatiful.here the new teachers and new classmates very good relations,so i in the new environment of very happy.i do not worry, i will study hard to repay your exs education.

finally, the teacher you want a happy blessing fortunately, good health.

best wish for you!

your student,

liming

1、 Dear friend,

My name is Sally. I am from China. I want a pen pal in Australia. I am 14 years old. I have no brothers or sisters in my family. MY favorite subject in school is science, because I think its very interesting. I like playing the piano and playing basketball on weekends. How about you? Can you write and tell me something about yourself?

Yours,

Sally

2、 My name is Wang Lin . Now I live in Hangzhou , China. I want to find a pen pal in England. Im now 14 years old . I speak Chinese .And I can speak a little English. I like sports ,swimming is my favorite . I also like playing the computer games . My favorite subject in school is math. I like to go to movies with my friends. My favorite movie is Beauty and Beast . Now I live with my parents .

Can you write to me soon ?

Wang Lin

3、 I have a good friend, his name is Bill. He is from Sydney, Australia. Now he lives in Beijing with his parents. He is 14 years old and his birthday is in October. He speaks English and he can speak a little Chinese. He has lots of friends in Beijing. He often plays soccer after school with them. Its his favorite sport. He likes Chinese action movies very much. He thinks they are interesting. He favorite actor is Jet Li.

4、 Jenny is an American girl She is 13 years old. She is very tall and a little thin. She has long black straight hair. She is a good-looking girl .She likes wearing a red T-shirt and blue pant. She likes singing and dancing. Her favorite singer is Gloria Green. She thinks Gloria is great. Look! Jenny is coming. She is not wearing a red T-shirt today. She is wearing a red dress.

5、 My favorite animal is a cat. I have a cat in my family. Her name is Mimi, I think she is from China. She is two years old now. She likes to eat fish every day. She is kind of lazy, but she is very cute. I like to palsy with it after school.

6、 Lin Tao usually goes to the zoo with his parents. He likes to see animals. In his room there are many toys. Most of them are boy animals. All kinds of animals in his room are his good friend. Every day he plays with them. Sometimes he asks his friends to his home to play. On vacation or weekends he like to see the monkeys and elephants in the zoo, and the dolphin show is his favorite.

7、 Jim likes Zhejiang food because its delicious. He cant stand Sichuan food because its very hot(辣). He likes Guangdong food. He doesnt mind Beijing food and he sometimes eat it . He doesnt like Human food because it doesnt agree with him (它不合他的口味)。

8、I like playing basketball .Its very interesting . I often play it with my friends. Its a team work.. Everyone needs to work together with others. (每个人都需要和别人合作). I can also make many new friends in the game. My favorite basketball player is Yao Ming. He is very tall and plays basketball very well. I want to play in NBA one day like him.

9、This is a popular person. Most(大多数) people like him. Hes not young ,about 50 years old . But he looks kind of funny. He has a round face (脸) with round eyes , a big mouth and short black hair . He likes telling jokes and makes people laugh(笑). Do you know who he is ? He is Mr. Bean

10、Tom, Nancy , Lily and Jack are my good friends .They all love to watch different TV shows. Tom likes sports, so he likes sports shows. Nancy watches comedies and she loves sitcoms. But Lily cant stand them .She just likes game shows. Jack doesnt like sitcoms either. He enjoys talk shows. So you know they are all TV shows fans.(他们都是电视迷)

[描写朋友自己或家人的喜好七年级英语作文

In the last century, the government carried out the policy of family

planning to control the increasing population. So most families have only one

child, but recently, a new policy has been announced and people can have the

second child. It sounds like the good news for the family, as the only child can

have a sibling to company. While for some parents, they seem to be not the

qualified parents. A boy complained that his parents’ second child was the smart

phone, because they lowed down their heads all the time. Many parents did not

realize the lack of communication with their children. If they want another

child, they’d better learn to communicate their kids first.

At college, i missed my parents a lot. as the term was drawing to an end, i eagerly looked forward to going home. and i planned to do a thousand and one things during the vacation. above all, i wanted to help my mother with housework. i also wished to read many hooks which my teachers had recommended. however, at home, my mother would never let me do anything. she completely deprived me of sharing her work. as soon as i opened a book to read,she would sit down beside me and ask me about all kinds of things at the college. to please her,i told her one thing after another,and soon i forgot all about books. even when i was actually reading,she would, now and then,insist that i should eat an egg or drink a cup of tea. when i left home at the end of the vacation, not a thing in my plan had been carried out. but i felt very happy. i believed much more deeply than before in the old saying: home, sweet home. there’s no place like home!

My Best Friend

Blair is my classmate as well as my best friend. We have already known each other for ten years. We live in the same block so that we always go to school together. She has long hair, big eyes and sweet smile, which makes her popular in my class. Blair works hard and she is a good student in the eyes of teachers. Besides, she is clever and kindhearted. When others turn to her for help, she always tries her best to help. I feel proud to have such a good friend.

我最好的朋友

布莱尔是我的同学以及我最好的朋友。我们已经认识十年了。我们住在同一个街区,我们总是一起去上学。她有长头发,大眼睛,嘴角挂着甜美的微笑,使她在我 们班很受欢迎。布莱尔努力工作,她是一个好学生的老师。除此之外,她很聪明和善良。当别人向她求助时,她总是试着最好的帮助。我感到自豪有这样一位好朋 友。

导语：随着环境污染愈加严重，水资源也被破坏，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

When I was very small, I stayed in the hometown with my grandparents. I had the great time there, I liked the environment so much. There was a long river in front of my house, the water was very clean, I could see the small fish swim. My grandma usually washed her clothes along the river side. But now when I went back to my hometown, the river was very dirty, the water was light yellow and there were so many rubbish floating in the river. It made me feel that the river had lost its life. I missed the old time when I was playing in the river. It is human being that ruin the environment, if we dont take action to protect it, we will destroy ourselves.

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在我很小的时候,我和我的爷爷奶奶呆在家乡。我过的很愉快,我喜欢那里的环境。在我的房子前面有一条很长的河,水很干净,我可以看到小鱼游泳。我奶奶通常沿着河边洗她的衣服。但是现在当我回到家乡,河水很脏,水是淡黄色的,有很多垃圾漂浮在河里。我觉得这条河已经失去了它的生命。我想念在河里玩耍的旧时光。是人类破坏了环境,如果我们不采取行动来保护它,我们将毁灭自己。

Friends areimportant for us, everyone has their own friends, we share sorrow and happinesswith our friends. We are making new friends now and then, but it is hard tofind the genius friends, the trust between friends are hard to build. If thetrust exists, friends can talk anything, they are willing to show who they are infront of their friends. While if the trust doesn’t exist, the friendship is notreal deep, people will ask you when they are in trouble. The real friendship isbuilt on the basis of trust. My best friend will never ask me to do thing allthe time, instead, she cares about me, and comforts me when I am upset. That’sa real friend.

朋友对于我们来说很重要，每人认都有他们的朋友，我们和朋友分享喜怒哀乐。我们会时而不时地交朋友，但是交到真正的朋友很难，朋友间的信任很难建立。如果信任存在，朋友间可以讨论任何事情，他们愿意在朋友面前展示真正的自己。

然而如果信任不存在,友情就不会很深，人们只会在他们有困难的时候才叫上你。真正的友情是建立在信任的基础上的。我最好的朋友永远都不会一直叫我去做事情，相反的，她一直关心我，当我感到烦恼时，给予我安慰。这是真正的朋友。

[300字英语作文：朋友间的信任

When I was a child， I enjoyed reading books that were without words。 The pictures and the color affected me。 When I was a pupil， I liked reading books about science。 The knowledge and the magic things attracted me。 When I was a student， I preferred to read novels。 They were full of action and exciting。 The plots were interesting。

Now I still love books。 They make my life bee more and more wonderful。 Different kinds of books bring me different feelings。 They are my best friends。 I can get knowledge from books。 I can read books whenever and wherever I want。For the time being， I enjoy reading ics best。 Because studying is hard and tiring， I feel relaxed when I am reading ics。 They make me happy and bring me great joy。 Books are good for me。 They will string along with me forever……

她，留着一头的运动头，一双水汪汪的眼睛，闪着智慧的光芒.一张樱桃小嘴，能说会道。她就是我的朋友，王飞虹.

她不仅学习好，而且还是我们办得画画能手呢.初一第一学期快结束了，美术老师让我们每一个同学都画一幅画以做美术成绩，于是我们都动笔开始画，过了一会，同学们基本上都画完了，老师便让王飞虹收同学们的作品，她收完了之后，交给了老师，老师评完分数后，开始念分了，同学们大都是70到80之间，可王飞虹却得了100分，同学门都不服，让老师重得，老师便让同学们都看了看，原来她和老师画的一模一样.同学们不禁对她肃然起敬.

还有一次，学校开运动会，我报名参加了赛跑，可偏偏在那天下午我忘了穿

运动鞋，刚好王飞虹的鞋和我的一样大，可是我们却在那天吵了家，我赌气不和她说话，现在我不知道该怎麽办了，这是她走了过来，说，“怎末，没穿运动鞋，还是我借你吧”。我望着她，不知说什麽好，他说一定要跑第一，我含着泪点了点头。我一定要跑第一，我在心里喊着。

她，就是我的朋友，我们十分友好。

True friends dont have to contact every day, when youre depressed, find someone to vent when first thought the man, when you have good things to share right away the first person to think of...

True friend after a long and you will have to talk about, even if two people together there is no words dont feel embarrassed!

True friend he will understand your temper, your habits, in front of him you dont need to disguise, you can blunt he lost his temper, he can understand you.

He will make you happy when you sad, he will follow you when you are happy happy together, two people occasionally because a little things that conflict, but the contradiction will be more stable after your feelings.

A true friend is the person you care about When you most care about people hurt themselves, that kind of mood... So, dont think so much, my friend dont care how many, there are several bosom friend is enough...

俗话说得好“在家靠父母，出门靠朋友”。交朋友就像盖房子一样，如果你不打好基础是没有一个知心朋友的。如果你没有朋友你的一生就没有意义了，我就有一个助人为乐的好朋友—晓玉，我跟她“姐妹”相称。我们一起玩，一起学习，留下了许多美好的回忆。

她，一头乌黑发亮的头发，大大的眼睛，活脱脱的一个小公主。大方、幽默，使她成为我们班的焦点。在我们之间发生过很多事情让人难以却忘。

记得那是以个凉爽的星期一早晨，我开开心心的来到学校，一进教室，就见“火星人”在一个个的问“地球人”作业，我也在其中。当“火星人”拿着一搭作业走到我面前，用一口流利的普通话跟我说：“交作业。”我立刻在我的书包进行“大搜索”，“搜索”进行了两三秒钟，但对于“火星人”来说已经过了几小时，过了一会，她说：“放心，我不会帮你瞒天过海的。因为我相信你一定会做完的，实在不行我帮你和老师说一下，你下午再交，怎么样？”看着，她那样子使我很无奈，我满不在乎地说：“下午我一定交。”果然不出我所料，老师上课果然说了不交语文作业的事，那些同学因为没有和老师说明情况，而受到了惩罚，事后我就非常的感激我的好朋友晓玉。要不是她我恐怕早就被老师的教鞭抽的稀巴烂了。又一次，她看见我又为一点小事儿生气了，拿着笔，一步跨过来说：“怎么，又生气了，你怎么就那么爱生气呢？不要那么小肚鸡肠嘛！人家都说沉默是金，我看宽容才是金呢。”听完之后，我被她逗得嘴角上扬，说：“哪有说宽容是金的？”“就是，宽容是金，宽容是金！”我们俩顿时嘻嘻的笑了。“记住，以后不要在生气了！否则我就生气了！”她帮我改正了不少毛病，我因为有了这样一个不可多得的朋友而感到骄傲。

记得还有一次，那是我们最后一次春游，同学们个个满面春风、喜上眉梢，中午自由活动时，我们坐在遮阳伞下乘凉，谈论毕业后出去吃一顿的设想，她讲的是那样津津有味，满脸的笑容……“记得，一定要去哦！一个都不准落下！”她说着。

她是我小学五年的好伙伴，这个朋友陪我度过了五年的小学生活，无论有多么困难，她都以她那灿烂的笑容去面对。无时无刻地，她那笑容之花都在绽放着……

朋友，谁都不能没有朋友，朋友固然重要，但是能有几个难忘的朋友，能有几个真正的好朋友呢！

我会永远记住她——这个永远难忘的朋友！

I have a good friend, his name is Mike. He has a small nose and a wide mouth. Although he has a wide mouth, but he is not talkative. His favorite food is eggs, because it is good for your health. We often go climbing with him, we like to climb the mountain. Hes very friendly, my classmates all like him.

【翻译】

我有一个好朋友，他叫Mike.他有一个小小的鼻子和一个大嘴巴.虽然他有一个大嘴巴，但他并不多嘴.他最喜欢的食物是鸡蛋，因为它很健康.我们经常和他一起去爬山，我们很喜欢爬山.他非常友好，我的同学都很喜欢他.

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

My friend and I both are from China. My friend is short, handsome, honest and funny. His father is soldier, he is about thirty-eight, his mother is a housewife, she is little heavy.

我和我的朋友都来自中国。我的朋友是短暂的，英俊的，诚实的和有趣的。他的父亲是军人，他是三十八，他的母亲是一个家庭主妇，她很重。

His likes play the piano. I would like play the piano. He doesn’t like study, he likes play. He and I both are good friend, we often play basketball together. I like writing now, but my friend doesn’t like writing. My study is hard-working and I am very kind. I have some books and like to read books.

他喜欢弹钢琴。我喜欢弹钢琴。他不喜欢读书，他喜欢玩。他和我都是好朋友，我们经常在一起打篮球。我喜欢写作，但我的朋友不喜欢写作。我的学习很勤奋，我很善良。我有一些书和喜欢读的书。

My friend and I both are good friend!

我的朋友和我都是好朋友!

Molly is my new friend.She is 12 years old.She has big eyes and long brown hair.She is tall and thin.She learn at Green school in London and she is good at all subjects.Im proud of her.She favourite hobbies are playing classical music and playing the piano.She is shy,when she with strangers,she feels nervers.She is afraid of dogs.This is my new friend ――Molly.

[英语作文我的新朋友

Zhang Ying is my good friend. Shes in Class1, Grade4 of Tianjiao Primary School. Shes a model student. Shes clever and shes helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, maths, English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesnt like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.

Dear Xiao Wang,

I am delighted to know that you will be able to visit me for a week during

the National Day holiday. I am looking forward to your visit and to the

opportunity to catch up. Welcome to my home in Nanjing!

As you know, Nanjing has many places of interest to see, to discover, and

to enjoy. Among its historical sites are stone city wall, the Confucius Temple

with its magnificent night view, and Dr. Sun Yetsens Mausoleum. With all its

universities, Nanjing is a cultural center, offering an abundance of artistic

and musical performances. Its also a city of beautiful gardens and parks, such

as the Xuanwu Lake Park. With all these features, we will have a fun-filled

week, especially that in early-October, there are many sunny and mild days for

outdoor activities. So, I would suggest visiting these places first, and

deciding on the others as our week develops.

Finally, since at this time of the year the weather gets a little chilly in

the evening, I would suggest that you bring some warm clothing with you. Also,

as there will be crowds of people at the stations and on the trains, you need to

be very careful with your belongings!

Best wishes for a pleasant journey!

Yours,

Zhang Ying