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1000怀念的英语作文初中
全文共 3673 字
+ 加入清单At the memory of my childhood, apart from outside the Chinese New Year
Dragon Boat Festival on a number of the most lively, and because parents are
busy job, a child usually with my grandmother to stay in the countryside
together. Dragon Boat Festival at that time to make me unforgettable.
With the usual, like the Chinese Lunar New Year, Dragon Boat Festival the
day before at night, so my grandmother will always obediently sat bedside, give
me some holiday rules, such as talking nonsense not to not allowed to eat cold
tzu not allowed with small partnership roughnot allowed to play in the water ...
... I have always been granted to his head. Grandma let me early, so that
tomorrow can have a good spirit.
Good morning, I got up early, get dressed on the first toward the kitchen,
when the grandmother has the kitchen to manage everything well, cooking up a few
bundles tied and Gui Gui leaf rope, the nothing glutinous rice lying quietly
filled a small bucket of water, like a pearl Jingying, cooking benches placed on
some of the small dishes, which containing various materials: there is peanuts,
there is red bean paste, there is meat, red pond.
So I sat eating breakfast table and watched busy grandmother.
The countryside are on both sides of the cooking, while used to boil water
while cooking to cooking and grandmother had already cleaned the duck Add big
pot, wooden ladle scoop from another pot of hot water a few dipper Add cauldron
of water, and then also carefully Add 1 tsp salt, and then Tim foci in a few
branches, it has been sitting next to me started to give my son a series
network.
Grandmother‘s hand because of the long-term labor has rough bark like a
general, but without losing dexterity, an envelope with red string woven into
the sub on.
At this point, the eggs are cooked, the grandmother picked up one of the
largest on the use of red paper red dye, and then do a clean cloth, into yard,
hanging on my neck. Then, my grandmother pocket containing seeds, candy,
peanuts, often very happy to me, because this way I can and small partners to
look at a dragon boat race.
Grandmother always put me to the gate, asked the want me to come back as
soon as possible to eat tzu. I always fell on the disappeared.
Small partners at this time are almost , and Sisters from the big head next
door, led us to the river this group watch dragon-boat race. Because of the
smaller rivers, so only two of the dragon boat, each boat has 13 individuals, 12
individuals paddle, one individual Ta and shouting slogans, One, Two, Hey Yo,
one, two, as soon as possible, 12 dark young man moves neatly划着, two dragon boat
sailed forward catch.
However, the children will know what look? We are only just a bustling Fig.
Girls in general saw a moment, we found that boring, and sat to one side from
snacks to share, boys, it is not, of their total enjoy chasing the dragon boat
race down the shore, because of the people paddling up the larger, almost every
boys who have significant traces of water splashing.
, and are perhaps a boat to the end of the bar, just things finished, stood
up, with partners go hand happily go home.
The sun is also slowly climbing the air, the kitchen has a bay leaf
fragrance, and I quickly jumped on the kitchen, the has been the major tzu. In
general, I would put that on the threshold sit tzu eat clean, and occasionally
there will be a few rice grains to eat chicken and watch the greedy big
cock-like, I was also amused ... ...
Today, even though over the Dragon Boat Festival, the mother every year
package tzu, made give my son, even though the mother‘s skill is not less than
the grandmother, but I always feel that what less.
I really miss the Dragon Boat Festival childhood ah!
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+ 加入清单People always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree with it anymore. Last week, I woke up very early in the morning, so I decided to take a walk. The street was very quiet and there were many old people dancing in the square. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorates so well, which attrated my eyes. The city was coverd by the green trees, which made it a green city. I liked this feeling so much. At this moment, I found the city was so lovely, I just ingored its beauty usually.
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篇8:关于英语作文的写作方法指导
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+ 加入清单导语:写作方法就是写作中进行表现时运用的方法,是作者为表情达意而采取的有效艺术手段。
学生写作时,如果语句平平,只选用一些普通的、直截了当的词,那么,这样写出来的文章根本没有可阅读行,就像是一碗没有油盐酱醋面条一样,让人提不起一点精神和看下去的欲望,呆板、单调,没有可读性。如果一篇文章要让读者有可读性、有深度,同学们更应该掌握一些高级点词和语句来装饰你的文章,突出这篇文章的彩头,使文章增添文采,给读者以不一样的感受。具体方法可以参照下面的语句:
1. 画龙点睛,一篇文章的开头很重要。
在通常情况下,英语句子的排列方式为“主语+谓语+宾语”,即主语一般都会在谓语前面。但若根据情况适当改变句子的开头方式,比如在文章的开始的时候写一些倒状语句或以状语为起始语句的开头,这样子的文章更具表现力和感染力。如:
(1) There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.
→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.
在小山顶上有一座古庙。
(2) You can do it well only in this way.
→ Only in this way can you do it well.
只有这样你才能把它做好。
(3) A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗户边坐着一个年轻妇女。
2. 避免重复使用同一词语
为了使表达更生动,更富表现力,同学们在写作时应尽量避免重复使用同一词语来表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常谈的词语。如有的同学一看到“喜欢”二字,就会立刻想起like,事实上,英语中表示类似意思的词和短语很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如:
I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
我喜欢看书,而我的兄弟却喜欢看电视。
3. 合理使用省略句
合理恰当地使用省略句,不仅可以使文章精练、简洁,而且会使文章更具文采和可读性。如:
(1) He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是这样,我以后再来拜访。要是不忙,我现在可以见他吗?
(2) If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.
→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.
如果天气好,我们就去;如果天气不好,我们就不去了。
(3) She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.
她本可申请这份工作的,但她没有。
4. 适当运用非谓语结构
非谓语结构通常被认为是一种高级结构,适当运用非谓语结构,会给人一种熟练驾驭语言的印象。如:
(1) When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
听了这消息他们都高兴得跳了起来。
(2) As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
由于不知道她的地址,我没法和她联系。
(3) As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.
→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.
他出生农民家庭,只上过两年学。
5. 结合使用长句与短句
在英语写作中,过多地使用长句或过多地使用短句都不好。正确的做法是,根据实际情况在文章中交替使用长句与短语,使文章显得错落有致,这样不仅使文章在形式上增加美感,而且使文章读起来铿锵有力。如:
At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
中午我们晒着太阳吃野餐。休息一会儿后,我们唱的唱歌,跳的跳舞,还有的讲笑话、下棋,大家玩得很开心。
6. 适当使用短语代替单词
(1) He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
他已决定长大了当老师。
(2) He doesnt like music.
→ He doesnt care much for music.
他不大喜欢音乐。
(3) He told me that the question was now under discussion.
→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.
他告诉我问题现正正在讨论中。
7. 恰当套用某些固定表达
(1) He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.
→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
他太累了,不能再往前走了。
(2) The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
这电影很有趣,学生和老师都很喜欢。
(3) Your son is old. He can look after himself now.
→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
你的儿子已经长大,可以自己照顾自己了。
8. 尽量使句子带点“洋味”
(1) Dont worry. Be bold and try it, and youll learn it soon.
→Dont worry. Just go for it, and youll get it soon.
别担心,大胆试一试,你很快就会学会的。
(2) Thank you for playing with us.
→Thank you for sharing the time with us.
谢谢你陪我玩。
9. 综合使用各类所谓的“高级”结构
(1) Now everyone knows the news. I think Jim must have let it out.
→ Now everyone knows the news. I think it must have been Jim who has let it out.
现在人人都知道这消息了,我想一定是吉姆把它泄露出去的。
(2) We had to stand there to catch the offender.
→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.
我们所能做的只是站在那儿,设法抓住违章者。
(3) If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.
→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.
如果她的语音不比她的老师好的话,至少也不会比她老师的差。
10. 适当使用名言警句点缀
在写作时根据实际情况恰当地用上一两句名言警句来点缀文章,不仅使文章显得有深度、有智慧,而且会让文章在评分中上一个“得分档次”。如:
(1) As the proverb says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” Though you fail this time, you needn’t lose heart. As long as you work hard and stick to your dream, you will succeed one day.
(2) There is a proverb goes like this “Life isn’t a bed of roses.” It is ture that it is likely for everyone to meet problems and difficulties in life.
(3) In the modern world, more and more people live alone, which is not so good for our life. It is better for us to make more friends and enjoy friendship. Just as a proverb says, “A near friend is better than a far-dwelling kinsman.”
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篇9:初中英语日记
全文共 302 字
+ 加入清单July 10 20XX
I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.
篇10:2024年初中英语作文写作技巧
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+ 加入清单小编导语:英语作文是英语考试中的一个得分点,那么在写作过程中有什么技巧呢,下面是小编收集整理的相关资料,希望对您有所帮助。
1、首尾呼应,画龙点睛在文章的结尾,把含义较深的话放在末尾,以点明主题,深化主题,起到画龙点睛的效果。如“I Cannot Forget Her” (我忘不了她)的结尾:
After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
2、重复主题,句结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上,达到强调的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我爱家乡)的结尾:
I love my home town, and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.
3、自然结尾随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Fishing”(钓鱼)的结尾:
I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
4、含蓄性的结尾
用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接点明作者的看法,而是让读者自己去领会和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的结尾:
Evening came before we realized it. We put down our sickles and looked at each other. Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.
5、用反问结尾
虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,并具有特别的强调作用,引起读者深思。如“Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我们要不要学做家务?) 的结尾。
Everyone should learn to do housework. Dont you agree, boys and girls?
6、指明方向,激励读者结尾表示对将来的展望,或期待读者投入行动。如“Lets Go in for Sports”(让我们参加体育运动)的结尾:As we have said above, sports can be of great value. They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter. A sound mind is in a sound body. Lets go in for sports.
篇11:初中英语作文爬山-ClimbingtheHill
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One day, Mother and I went to climb Mount Huang. When I began to climb, I felt very easy. But when I climbed the haft way, I was verytired.and quite out of breath. I asked mother, "Can I climb to the top?" Mother answered, "As long as you have courage, you can conquer every mountain,
no matter how high it is! "So I went ahead. Half an hour later, I climbed to the top finally. What a wonderful day I had!
篇12:关于我的家乡英语作文初中
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+ 加入清单My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is
rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had
no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken
place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals,
cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is
greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard
so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
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缩写是根据词数、字数的要求对原文加以压缩、概括,从而达到缩短篇幅、简化内容、突出中心等目的的写作形式。简言之,缩写是原文的“高度浓缩”。缩写时要忠实于原文,保留原文体裁、题材、主要内容、主要思想、结构顺序、语言风格、人称视角和表现方法等;既要使篇幅缩短,结构紧凑,又要使内容简明扼要,重点突出;不能对原文加入个人的认识、体会或对原文进行评论,也不能加入原文中没有的内容。
扩写则与缩写相反,是把篇幅短小的内容扩展成为篇幅较长的文章。扩写时,可以施展个人的想像力,在不离原文核心内容的前提下海阔天空,任意发挥,从而使细节更加充实、生动,使情节更加具有感染力,使解释、说明、论证更加充分有力。
摘要是一篇文章或一本书的梗概,多指论文或报告内容的提要。一些期刊、杂志上论文的“提要”、“摘要”,某些报纸、杂志在一篇文章前面写的“编者按”,一本书的前言等均属此列。写摘要就是简明扼要地向读者介绍一篇文章,一本书,一篇论文或一个报告的主要内容,使读者用较少的时间阅读后,能了解文章或书的来龙去脉。摘要可以改变体裁。写摘要时,笔者可以用原文的人称、语气、也可以用第三人称,即笔者的语气,但是不能改变原文的事实和观点,也不能丢掉原文的要点,应写成连贯的文章而不能写成提纲。
总之,改写、缩写、扩写、摘要都是对原有的文章进行适合某种需要的裁剪或放大,选取原文的精要而和盘托出,对其要点和实质容不得偷换和贪污。这些写作形式对学习写作的学生来说,是一种练习综合分析、归纳概括能力的好方法;对成人来说,是工作中的很好的帮手。
一个作家可以把一本小说改写成剧本,把一则简短的消息扩展为一部短篇或长篇小说;一名记者可以把一段会谈改写成一篇通讯报导或特写;一个编辑可以把收到的稿件根据版面大小或缩或扩写成适当的文章;我们在听领导人、某方面的专家做报告时要作点笔记,然后写出摘要文章;我们写成一篇论文后,可以给它写一段简短的摘要,等等。这些都是人们在生活、工作中必不可少的书面表达形式。所以,学会这些写作技巧,能使我们适应各方面的需要。
篇14:我的宠物初中英语作文
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Recently, three owls appeared suddenly on our campus. They made me think of my pet from childhood. When I was little, we had an owl at home. It was small, gray, and had two big eyes. We liked it very much. Every time I went home, it greeted me by making “goo-goo” sounds. We always played with it and talked to it. It would blink its eyes just like it understood what we were saying. It was like my best friend. But when the weather became colder, we forgot to keep it warm , and it died. It made us sad for a long time, and it also taught me how important it is to take care of animals.
篇15:英语日记的写作格式
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+ 加入清单I have nine little goldfish. Eight goldfish are all orange and one is black. I like the black one best. We call it Xiao Hei. Its body is black. It has two big and round eyes, a small mouth, and a big tail. Though its very small, it swims fast.
I often feed them and change water for them. We are good friends.
篇16:我在海洋公园快乐的一天初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单Ocean Park is very exciting and fun. The cable car is very good, when you look out the window, you will see very beautiful scenery, but one thing I don’t like is we need to wait 45 minutes. If you want to go quickly, you can take the ocean train, just like the subway. It’s very fast.
When you go up, ther are many rides, like a roller coaster, water ride and many things to do. I want to cry when my mom and I get on the roller coaster. I yelled, because the roller coaster is so exciting. I don’t want to ride it again, so I go to the ocean museum, and the polar bear place. The last thing is very good, it’s a waterride. We are very bored when we were in the middle. Suddenly, the water is pushing the boat. “Ahhhh!” I’m shouting, I’m very excited, the water is very fast, then the boat goes down. “Wow!” My mom yelled, and the ride is over. Our shirts are all wet, and the sky is almost dark, so we leave the park, and go back to Kowloon Hotel.
What a fun day!
篇17:春节初中英语小
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+ 加入清单China has always had a splendid traditional culture, and there are Dragon Boat Festival, qingming festival, National Day... I like the Spring Festival best.
The streets are full of lanterns, people are busy buying couplets, the annual goods, the arrival of the Spring Festival
Every time Chinese New Year, we young children wear new clothes, wear new hats, the adults face a satisfied smile. Its been a great year for people to eat family reunion dinner. In the evening, the grown-ups are playing mahjong, playing poker, and eating melon seeds, chatting and talking. Children like to set off fireworks. The bold children go to the fire, the timid children look behind. Fireworks are colorful... Just play and play! Have fun!
It was a long time before I left my friends to go home. I thought to myself, "I wish I could spend the Spring Festival every day."
篇18:初中暑假的英语
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+ 加入清单This afternoon, my father took me to the Olympic swimming, I was very happy, because for the first time I go to, have been very much looking forward to, every time my dad said, but did not go into, finally can go this time. But then I thought: "our two people will be bored, so I invited my brother and uncle to play."
I went swimming with my brother in the swimming pool. Has begun! First I was in the front, then I was a little tired, my brother was speeding up the "overtaking", and finally I couldnt get over it, I lost!
Then, my brother and I against uncle and father, I took my gun "embedded" underwater, brother to guide dad and uncle to come over, I suddenly emerged from the water, with water gun against them. We have a method, is "a diversion" we are currently using to a place where water spray nozzle, uncle and father went away in the past, we attack from behind them. The attack succeeded.
In the end, we won 2-1! We are so happy! Ill be back next time. I had a great time this summer vacation
今天下午,爸爸带我去奥体游泳,我高兴极了,因为我第一次去,一直很期待,每次爸爸都说去,可是都没有去成,这次终于可以去了。可是我又一想:我们两个人玩会无聊的,所以我就邀请了哥哥和叔叔一起来玩。
进了游泳池我和哥哥比赛游泳。开始了!首先我在前面,后来我有点累了,哥哥马上加速“超车了”,最后我一直反超不了,我输了!
然后,我和哥哥对战叔叔和爸爸,我拿着水枪“埋入”水底,哥哥把叔叔和爸爸引过来,我突然从水里冒出来,用水枪攻击他们。我们又有了一个方法,就是“声东击西”我们现用水枪向一个地方喷水,叔叔和爸爸就走了过去,我们从他们的背后攻击。攻击成功了。
最后,我们2比1的分数赢了!我们十分的开心!下次我还要来。今年的暑假我过得十分欢乐
篇19:大学英语四级写作方法
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+ 加入清单Where possible, reduce the use of "which," "who" "that" "whom" "whether... or not" etc.
少用关系代词
学会运用关系代词是你学习英文过程中的一个重要的阶段。学会少用它们则表明你取得了更大的进步。在校对你的作品时,仔细检查一下所有的which’s, who’s that’s和whom’s是否必要。删除不必要的关系代词会使你的文章更精彩。
Example:
Unnecessary: It is a truth that is universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
(用两个 that’s,读起来很别扭)
Better: It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.
-- Jane Austin
注:被动语态修饰的名词通常不须用关系代词。
Unnecessary: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, which was built with American assistance.
Improved: In 1970 India dedicated a nuclear power plant near Bombay, built with American assistance.
Unnecessary: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation which was undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.
Improved: During this period, Churchill spoke for a nation undivided and curiously happy, as it has never been in my lifetime, before or since.
Unnecessary: Justice theories have a long tradition, which goes back to Plato and Aristotle in the 5th century B.C.
Improved: Justice theories have a long tradition, going back to Plato and Aristotle in the 5th century B.C.
Unnecessary: Shirley Temple’s father blew nearly the entire $3 million that she made by tap dancing which made her famous in the movies.
Improved: Shirley Temple’s father blew nearly the entire $3 million she made tap dancing her way to fame in the movies.
Unnecessary: We told them they were the victims who deserved sympathy the most.
Improved: We told them they were the victims, most deserving of sympathy.
Unnecessary: Only a person who is oblivious* to the facts of modern life would doubt the need of vocational education today.
Better: Only a person oblivious to the facts of modern life would doubt the need of vocational education today.
Unnecessary: Not everyone in North America likes the taste of green tea, whether it contains caffeine or not.
Better: With or without caffeine, not everyone in North America likes the taste of green tea.
Unnecessary: Usually the Washington family married people who were socially better off than themselves, but the second marriage of George’s father was an exception.
Better: Usually the Washingtons married their social betters, but the second marriage of George’s father was an exception.
Unnecessary: In some instances, a letter can take ten days by air and six to eight weeks by ship to reach the person to whom the letter is addressed.
Better: In some instances, a letter can take ten days by air and six to eight weeks by ship to reach its intended receiver.
篇20:初中英语作文有翻译
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+ 加入清单As a middle school student, I learn many subjects, I study so hard every day. When I get home, I will do my homework and then go over the book. But when holiday comes, I feel a little confused, because I don’t want to study and do something new. Then I don’t know what to do, my mind get blank. I decide to develop my interest. Some day, I happened to see a tennis match and I couldn’t stop watching, then I fell in love with tennis. So I started to learn playing tennis, I felt so happy. Now tennis is my favorite sport, I find a way to relax myself.
作为一个中学生,我学许多科目,我每天那么努力学习。当我回家时,我会做作业,然后复习书本。但当假期来临的时候,我感到有点困惑,因为我不想学习,想做一些新的事情。我就不知道要做什么,我的头脑一片空白。我决定培养我的兴趣。有一天,我碰巧看到一场网球比赛,我无法停止下来看,然后我爱上了网球。因此我开始学习打网球,我感到很高兴。现在网球是我最喜欢的运动,我找到一个方法来放松自己。