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1000英语写作小技巧
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+ 加入清单一. 肯定不如否定好
修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点,在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。
双重否定也是种修辞,而且对于考生来说,只要稍加注意,可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。
例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”,如果写成The postman comes on time every day,就不如变成双重否定,The postman never fails to come on time,就变成了亮点句,起到强调作用。
“几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响”,写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not been affected by the earthquake.
应用类似的修辞会在中为同学们加分。
二. 陈述不如倒装妙
在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种:倒装,强调,从句,独立主格和分词结构,以及虚拟语气。
倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式,就足以应对书面表达。
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篇1:我的自传英语作文范文我的自传写作指导
全文共 2702 字
+ 加入清单一、什么是自传
自传是叙述自己生平经历的文章。生平经历是指一个人生活的整
个过程。婴儿——幼儿——上学——现在
1、婴儿时期(吃、哭、爬、学说话、学走路……)
听妈妈说那时候的我是怎样的?(高、矮、胖、瘦、乖、闹、聪明……)例文欣赏
示例1:听妈妈说,小时候的我胖乎乎的,很聪明。刚到了九个月就会说话了,把妈妈叫得很开心;10个月就会学走路了,摇摇晃晃,东倒西歪但不让人扶。有一次从床上掉下来,至今胳膊上还留有伤疤;奶奶说我那时候特别乖巧,但也特别淘气。
特点:聪明、淘气
示例2:刚出生的我在医院里又哭又闹,说着平常人不懂的“外星球语”,让爸妈很苦恼,白天我咬着奶瓶呼呼大睡,晚上我就活跃起来,让大人抱着我到处去溜达,如果一松手,那哭声在你耳朵里徘徊,仿佛一栋楼都会震动起来!
特点:爱闹
2、幼儿时期
⑴、脑中充满疑问
“妈妈,天上的星星为什么会眨眼睛?”“妈妈,我的肚子为什么会饿?”“妈妈,为什么天上的月亮有时是圆的,有时是弯弯的?”⑵、探索世界
把家里的小闹钟、把我的玩具拆得七零八落
⑴、⑵表现出我很聪明
⑶、上幼儿园
哭着、喊着不肯上幼儿园这些表现出我又很淘气
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示例1:一眨眼的功夫,时间老人已把婴儿时期带走了,幼儿时期缓缓走来。妈妈和幼儿园的老师都说我好动。为此我觉得自己得了儿童多动症,其实我确实挺爱动的。在幼儿园里,我基本不会规规矩矩的坐上三分钟;就算坐在椅子上,也是东摇西摆。结果一次在课堂上“发挥”多动时,老师误以为我在吃东西,我的脸烧了又烧,简直就像一
只掉进油锅里的虾。
示例2:幼儿时期的我最爱跳舞。记得有一次,妈妈手机里传出了一阵响亮的歌声,在一旁搞东西的我听见了,便情不自禁的跳起来,屁股一扭一扭的,手也摆动起来,不时还走一下猫步,仿佛我已经沉浸在这欢乐地歌声里,无法自拔一样!一旁的妈妈鼓起掌来,笑着说:“看来我们家会有一位舞神了。”奶奶听后,大笑起来,家里充满了快乐的气氛。
3、我上学了
⑴、有了稳定的兴趣。如:①、爱上了学习②、迷上了阅读
⑵、进不了
⑶、交了很多朋友
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示例1:进入小学后,在优美的校园里,我感受到了学习的快乐,从此爱上了学习。现在,我是班里的学习委员、语文课代表。我的作文经常受到老师表扬,不仅在作文比赛上获过奖,还经常在一些刊物上发表呢!
示例2:八岁的我爱书如命。故事书、漫画书、作文书、科幻书、小说等等,不管什么书,我都一股脑儿拿起来就读。不管晚上作业有多少,事情有多忙,我都会挤出一点时间来看书。
我看书很着迷。我会随着书中的趣事哈哈大笑;也会为着书中令人落泪的悲惨故事而伤心痛哭;看到本领高超、助人为乐的人,我会产生敬佩之情;看到那些烧杀抢掠的恶人和那些贪赃枉法的坏人,我心中的愤怒油然而生……每当妈妈看见我忽而大笑、忽而大哭,忽而喜悦,又忽而愤怒时,总会无可奈何地叹息道:“这丫头,真是没办法!”
示例3:我进入了XX小学读书,在这座优美的校园里,我对学习有了比较大的变化,表现比较积极,一年级第一批就加入了少先队,四年级参加了鼓号队,曾经当过体育委员、语文课代表。在学习上能多看课外书籍,经常去剑英图书馆借书或去新华书店看书,同时注意积累好词好句,坚持每个星期写一扁日记,因此语文成绩比较理想,对作文比有兴趣,作文经常被老师表扬;数学成绩还算可以,但是英语一直是我的弱项,总感到压力好大。
示例4:我结交了很多朋友,他们也十分乐意和我交往,使我从交往中得到了许许多多的快乐。我对他人十分的诚实守信,从来不说恶意
的谎言,答应别人的事情绝对做到,因此,他们也很乐意跟我玩,和我谈心。我有时也会跟别人一起哈哈大笑或讲悄悄话,跟同学们打成一片,让我成为他们心目中的好朋友。有了他们我的生活充满了朝气,充满了快乐。我对人十分有礼貌,助人为乐也是我的本份,他人有困难,我一定会竭尽全力去帮助他。
4、现在的我
长大了、懂事了、学会承担了、有理想了。
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示例1:随着年龄的增长,我变得越来越懂事了。想起妈妈以前整天都为我操心,而我却总是惹她生气,我的心里真不是滋味。
星期五放学回到家,妈妈放下我的书包,就径直走进厨房准备做饭。我想:妈妈工作了一整天,已经很累了,又要去接我,回到家还要做饭,这多么不应该!想到这,我马上走进厨房。
“妈妈。”
“有什么事儿吗?”
“妈妈,您去休息吧,我帮您做饭。”
“不用了,你快去做作业吧,饭菜很快就好了。”
“妈妈,就让我为您做一顿饭吧,嗯?”
妈妈只好笑了笑,点了点头。
晚饭后,我又替妈妈把碗碟洗得干干净净,把家里打扫了一遍,最后还为妈妈捶背按摩。妈妈很高兴,对我说:“孩子,你长大了,懂事了,妈妈真高兴!”我听到这句话,心就像被浸在一罐世界上最甜的蜜糖里。
这就是12岁的我,懂事的我。
示例2:现在的我,会承担责任了;十二岁的我会像挤海棉一样挤时间了;十二岁的我,会自己面对困难了;十二岁的我,成熟了许多;十二岁的我已经长大了,一些鸡毛蒜皮的小事,我自己已经会应付了。面对十二岁的人生,我好像还有点混浊,但比起以前已经进步了许多。对于我来说,未来是一条坎坷的岔路,我一定要选择正确地道路,要一直努力认真的向前走。只要努力学习,就会考上重点大学。
二、行文线索
1、不懂事,爱哭、爱闹——有点听话——开始懂事
2、听话的乖孩子——爱学习的好学生——懂事、知道孝敬父母
3、淘气,耍小聪明——明白事理,大智慧
三、详略取舍
1、详写部分的选择:
⑴、记忆最深刻、最难忘的那段岁月
⑵、最能体现你这个人的特点
⑶、转变最大、成长最快的那段时期
2、其它部分可略写
四、开头和结尾
㈠、开头:
1、简要的介绍自己
2、对自己有一个粗略、整体的评价
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示例1:本人名叫陈思婷,属龙,2000年11月18日,伴随着一阵哭声,我从医院诞生了,胖乎乎的显得十分可爱,嫩滑的脸蛋上,有着一对小酒窝。长大后,我的皮肤黝黑,有人叫我“非洲黑珍珠”!我只好不好意思地笑纳!
示例2:2000年7月20日,随着一阵“哇哇”的哭声,一个可爱的婴儿来到了这个五彩缤纷的世界。从此,生活的大舞台上就有了我的小天地。我的小脚丫在小天地里任意的涂鸦,涂鸦成我难忘的昨天。㈡:结尾
1、对自己成长的总结
2、对未来的向往
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示例1:岁月如梭,整整12年过去了,我从不懂事的小孩子,变成了有志气的大姑娘,我希望,以后能改掉坏习惯,开心快乐地成长。示例2:比起小时的我确实是进步了很多,可是人生的道路是曲折而漫长的,学海无涯,我还有许多东西不懂,我想:只要有远大理想,带着顽强拼搏的意志和勇气走下去,就能够迈进成功的殿堂,就能对国家有贡献!
示例3:这就是我,一个有着多样性格的我。看完我的自传,你们喜欢我吗?
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篇2:期待初中英语
全文共 540 字
+ 加入清单I used to receive gifts like a basketball, a swatch or a CD. But the gift
I’m looking forward to is a bicycle though I can’t ride it now. How I want to
learn it well so that I can ride anywhere I want to go! Every morning, it is my
father who always drives me to school in all kinds of weather. Especially in the
past few days, he has worked hard until midnight. If I ride my own bicycle to
school, he will be able to sleep a little longer and work a bit harder. I hope
my dream of owning a bicycle will be realized in the shortest possible time.
篇3:初中英语作文有翻译
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+ 加入清单People always say that we are lacking of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can’t agree with it anymore. Last week, I woke up very early in the morning, so I decided to take a walk. The street was very quiet and there were many old people dancing in the square. Without many cars, I realized the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops decorates so well, which attrated my eyes. The city was coverd by the green trees, which made it a green city. I liked this feeling so much. At this moment, I found the city was so lovely, I just ingored its beauty usually.
人们总是说我们缺乏发现实现生活中的美丽的眼睛。我十分同意。上周,我早上很早就醒了,所以我决定出去散步。街上很安静,有很多老人在广场上跳舞。街上没有了很多小车,我意识到这个城市看起来那么干净和漂亮。一些咖啡店装修很好,吸引了我的眼球。这座城市被绿色的树木覆盖着,这是一个绿化放的城市。我很喜欢这种感觉。这时,我发现这个城市是如此的可爱,平常我忽略了它的美。
篇4:有关手机控的初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单Today, we talk about mobile phones, and as mobile phones are growing, more and more people are using mobile phones, which brings us a lot of convenience. There are also countless people who are addicted to mobile phones, especially small-school students, and i dont really object to mobile phones, and mobile phones are a good relaxation tool. I dont think its bad to play a mobile phone, but the middle school students are self-control, and they cant control the length of time they spend on their phones. So im addicted to cell phones, so i suggest relaxing a mobile phone, but it requires parental supervision, proper play, and not obsolete. You can relax your emotions, so i suggest that every day you can come back to play for an hour a day and relax and dont be too old to play. Relaxing, relaxing, relaxing relaxation
篇5:关于描写大海的初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单The first go to the seaside Summer holiday has already come. How happy am I!
The favorite thing I wanna do is traveling. I joined an outdoor club and went to the seaside in Zhejiang province with other members. On July 20, we started our journey at 21:00 in the evening. I was so sleepy that I fell asleep in the bus.
Suddenly someone was pushing me. I opened my eyes and a beautiful sea was right there. What a beautiful place! We swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The wind, the sunshine, the blue sky and the happy boys and girls formed a wonderful picture! At noon, we cooked seafood like crabs, shrimps, seashells and so on. They are all so delicious.
篇6:校园的景色初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单My campus is the most unforgettable place in my whole life, miss my mother similar, I love you great of campus.
My campus front door has me the name of mother school on the door with a southern exposure, in the sun flickering give out light.Again go toward in is a center road, the both sides contain many flowers, beauty pole!It is a toilet in the southeast.At southwest Cape of is a dining room.Agreeable center road s going toward is a teaching building ago.The five planets red flag flaunts aweather before the building in the teaching.The empress of the building is a dormitory.This is the layout of my campus.
In this campus has been concerning my teacher.They are very kind.At I have difficult of time, they win difficult courage for me, I thank them very much.
篇7:初中英语作文:小组活动能帮助我们更好的学习英语
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+ 加入清单In our English Class, we often have group activities. There are usually three or four students in one group. In my opinion, the group activities help us study English better. First of all, we should know what the task is all about and how we will do it. Second, we have to make ourselves understood that what we try to conevy.
We should know that each group member should play a different role and students should work together.
If we have any questions, we should turn to our teacher for help.
At the same time, we should have communicate with our group members. Last but not least, we must preform our activities in front of the whole class. It helps us to learn English better.
在英语课堂中,我们经常组织集体活动。一般来说,每个组都有3、4名学生。在我看来,小组活动能帮助我们更好的学习英语。首先,我们得知道小组的任务是什么,我们应该怎么做。其次,我们要让他人明白自己所表达的东西。每个组员都扮演着不同的角色,学生们要相互合作。如果我们有任何问题,可以向老师求教。与此同时,我们应该与其他的组员进行交流。最后一点,我们必须要在全部同学的面前表演所接受的任务。做表演让我们的英语学得更好。
[初中英语作文:小组活动能帮助我们更好的学习英语
篇8:初中英语作文机遇和成功-OpportunityandSuccess
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+ 加入清单机遇是成功的因素之一。但是机遇并不经常光顾小学生作文 你也可以投稿,而且并不是所有机遇都必然导向成功。除此之外,机遇通常就在刻苦的工作中,只是许多人觉察不到而已。因此如果你想成就事业,就必须努力工作以做好迎接机遇的准备。否则,即便机遇来了你也会失去它。我认为,我们社会中的每个人都有许多机遇,但只有那些做好充足准备的有才能的人才会利用机遇取得成功。
Opportunity and Success
Opportunity is one of the elements of success. But opportunities don’t come often. And not all the opportunities can certainly lead to success. Moreover, opportunities are usually disguised as hard work; therefore most people don’t recognize them. So if you want to achieve something, you must make efforts and get prepared. Otherwise, you will take no advantage of opportunities when they come to you. In my opinion, there are plenty of opportunities for everyone in our society, but only those who have made enough preparations and are highly talented can make use of them to achieve their purpose.
篇9:初中三年级学生英语
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+ 加入清单My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon。 Looking back, I have many memories of my English study。
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English。 I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases。 For a time I wanted to give it up。 Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible。 Step by step I made great progress in English。
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well。
篇10:以新学期新计划为话题的初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单The plan for the new term
Another new term comes again,so I should have a study plan to promot myself.
Firstly,I descide to finish my homework more carefully than before.And pay more attention to the knowledge which I didnt know it clearly.
Secondly,I will do a lot of read to widen the range of my knowledge,and try to combine thoery to practice.
Finally,I will learn to adjust, to be more positive and more helpful.
Thats what I plant to do in a new term.
篇11:初中生暑假英语日记怎么写
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+ 加入清单Matt gave us a class this afternoon, at the first part of the class, we saw a film. It was mainly about American football. After the film, we began t get to know the American football. It is similar to soccer, but it was much rougher. Players might get more easily. In another word, it was a game full of danger, they played just like fighting. One of the players just broke his leg during the match, and he would never play American football, because of his leg. What a pity! Matt told us that when he was in high school, he also take part in American football. He had broken his fingers for three times and his leg for once. Then I was puzzled, it was a very dangerous game, why was is popular?
篇12:家乡的变化初中英语
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+ 加入清单My hometown used to be a backwardplace, because it was deep in the mountains, where there were no nice buildingsand the roads were so narrow and dirty. People lived a poor life.
我的家乡过去是一个落后的地方,因为它在深山里面,那里没有漂亮的建筑物,公路也是又小又脏的。人们的生活都很贫苦。
While in recent years, with thedevelopment of society, my hometown has been greatly changed. Now the roads aregetting much wider. There are many different cars and buses running on theroads. Trees and flowers are planted on the two sides of the roads. They canprovide us with oxygen and fight against the pollutants. So the sky becomescleaner and brighter. Whats more, you can see many modern and beautifulbuildings everywhere, and the living conditions are improving. People areenjoying a comfortable life now.
近年来,随着社会的发展,我的家乡发生了很大的变化。现在的路是越来越大了。有许多不同的汽车和公交车在道路上运行。道路两边种满了树木和鲜花。他们可以为我们提供氧气,与污染物抗争。现在天空变得更清洁、更明亮。更重要的是,你随处可见到许多现代和美丽的建筑,人们的生活条件也得到了改善。现在人们在享受舒适的生活。
篇13:英语说明文写作要点
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+ 加入清单说明文是阐述事物的特征、本质、性能、结构、用途或科学原理的一种文体。其说明的对象可以是具体的,如:自然环境,仪表设备等;也可以是抽象的,如概念定律等。
说明文的写作相对于论说文来说,有一定的套路可循,因此不是十分复杂。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分类法、因果法等;说明自然环境方面的内容常用时间次序法、分类法等。当然,随着对象的不同,具体应该采用的方法也会有所不同。
说明文的写作应该注意的事项有下面几点:
1.语言简明扼要,通俗易懂,避免夸张华丽的辞藻,要把真实的一面展现在读者面前。
2.说明时一定要把握一个中心主题。说明文中细枝末节较多,但不能喧宾夺主。
3.说明的次序非常重要。合理的次序会使文章条理清楚,脉络明晰。因此,练习时可以尝试不同的次序进行写作,找出最合理的一种。
4.由于说明文写实性较强,有时难免会让人感到没有生气。因此,可以适当使用一些比喻、拟人等修辞手段,来增加文章的色彩。
篇14:关于微信的利弊初中英语作文篇
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+ 加入清单Wechat is a new app that almost all the people use on their phone. you can video chat when every you want and its for free. also you can talk through that app. its very convience. You can sreach for people who live around you who are using the same app. but at the same time, people are addict to it. they can not live without it. and people are having less and less conversation face to face. even worse, some people got tricked in this app, and lost lots of money. so this app can be good or bad, depend which way you using it.
篇15:初中生英语
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+ 加入清单I
consider my parents as the most important people in my life. This is not because
they’re wealthy or famous. Rather, what I value about most is the care and love
they show to me.
My
parents might work hard, but they’re always there for me. Whenever I get into
trouble and desperately need a hand, they come over first to support me and
encourage me. I grew up with their constant care and love. While they’re getting
older with grey hair and wrinkles, they never lose dignity in both life and
jobs.
From
my parents, I have learned that one person can really make a difference. I’ll
never forget their care and love. Gratefulness brings a great fullness to life.
I wish they could always be happy and healthy. It is high time we expressed our
gratitude to people we cherish!
篇16:初中关于读书的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Smoe people say that money is the best thing in the world. but i consider reading books as the best and the most precious thing one can ever have.
Reading books is very important. first of all, it is knowledge that makes society develop and by reading books you can get all kinds of knowledge. furthemore, reading books makes you a qualified person and makes your life enjoyable.
One is never too old to learn. no matter what time you rcalize the importance of reading books, you can enjoy it during the rest of your life time. love books, for they are your best friends.
篇17:初中英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单Tuesday is my birthday , my boyfriend spent with me . This birthday is the
first birthday who spent with me . We had a good evening , he sent me a present
and we had a delicious dinner. I am very happy that my roommate also sent a
present to me .
I found something have become better , I believe the god is blessing me! He
gave me some hard things and bad luck ,then gave me happiness and lover .
I have touched with my good high school classmates ,they are also in
Shanghai.
I thank the god , he let me studay more in the society.( thank god for all
he let me study in the society.)I thank myself , I am a optimistic girl , I am a
idealism girl . I need more social experience.
篇18:关于清明节的英语作文初中
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+ 加入清单"As" this sentence is confirmed by the wonderful nature, yesterday the
wisper under light rain, my heart is heavy like a rock, because want to master
and old milk grave, before, I dont understand the real meaning of the qing Ming
day, until today after sweeping the tomb, I understand the true meaning of
tomb-sweeping day!
At seven o clock in the morning, we prepare to master and old milk grave,
grave is a fresh thing for me, we take tools and set off.
Walking the winding mountain road, I cant wait, after about an hour, we
came to the master and old grandmas grave, a year didnt come, graves are
covered with wild grass, you well after the division of labor, began to busy,
everything is in place, we started to burn money, along with the smoke, I seem
to see their shadow, they told me: study hard and cherish life.
Yes, life is short, happy every day to live, to continuously surpass
ourselves, surpass ourselves, dream will come true; The superego, the dream into
power; Beyond the self, to create beautiful life! I think life is constantly
transcend self, beyond the dream!!!!! Panoramic view of the city house on the
mountain, the mountain was full of golden golden in the rape, deep breath, deep
and remote light fragrance, fresh air, the flowers with irresistible power
explanation of the meaning of life!
篇19:初中国庆英语
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+ 加入清单national day plan
with the coming of national day, i have a one week holiday.
i really expect to it, because i want to have a short trip during these days.
i will travel tojiuzhaivalleywith my parents for three days.
i have heard that the scenery ofjiuzhaivalleyis very beautiful in autumn and it’s the best time to travel there.
autumn is my most favorite season so i want to enjoy the beauty of such a wonderful place.
i do some preparations for this trip.
for example, i search the internet to see the travel raiders and i have known where the most attracting place is and where to live in.
i am sure it will be a wonderful journey.
there are only several days for the coming trip, but i have been too excited to wait.
篇20:初中英语
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+ 加入清单It was a sunny day today,when i got up in the morning,i decided to see my
grandparents.so i took the bus and got there at noon,they were happy to see
me,and i was very happy,too.
In the afternoon,my farther asked me to help him water the plant,and i was
happy to see the flowers smiling in the wind.
In a word,today is a unforgetive day.because i saw my relatives and helped
people.