三年级英语老师的作文实用14篇 作文题目【最新20篇】

Dear Mr. Hu

First of all, I wish you good health and all the best! I heard that your

Spring Festival this year was spent in Shanxi. I think it must be a very happy

one. Is the Spring Festival in Shanxi lively? Next, I will tell you about my

colorful spring festival life!

On New Years Eve, after dinner, it was still early. My mother and father

came to the county front street to feel the new years atmosphere. The streets

are full of excitement, and clusters of colorful balloons float around in the

wind, like girls in full dress and dancing. One after another gorgeous fireworks

in full bloom, like a spring message. Pedestrians on the road step on the pace

of leisure, are ready to a beautiful mood to welcome the arrival of the new

year. All of a sudden, I saw the "stars" over the Shanmen bridge, and I couldnt

help shouting: "Mom, look! There are so many Kongming lanterns!" Wow! Its so

beautiful! "While appreciating, my mother regretted:" if I knew that new years

Eve was so beautiful and lively, its time to bring a camera. "The Kongming

lights were still rising one after another, with good wishes to the mysterious

night Empty, the mountain city festival night set off a different kind of warmth

and harmony.

Next, the whole family sat around and watched the Spring Festival Gala,

which was a very hard program in our family. What impressed me most at this

years party was the magic of making goldfish dance. Its amazing! Of course, I

also absolutely supported the crosstalk between Jia Ling and Bai Kainan. There

are also Jay Chous singing and Zhao Benshans sketches, I also love to see, ha

ha!

Speaking of the new year, my most interesting thing is to buy balloons. In

the past, I asked my father to buy me some balloons when I was a few years old.

But this year, I decided to save RMB, so I decided to buy only one balloon. I

secretly boast in my heart that I have grown up. However, the father said,

"sensible child, lets buy five balloons."

When we came to the street, we were full of colorful lights and busy

traffic. Balloons of different shapes make me dazzled and dazzled. My first

choice is Haibao, the mascot of the 2010 Shanghai World Expo. The World Expo is

the pride of Chinese people. My mother took me to visit the World Expo. I cant

forget the grand occasion. Ill buy a Haibao balloon as a souvenir. The second

one is rabbit balloon. Because this year is the year of the rabbit. The mother

rabbit has a big mouth, red eyes, a bow on one ear and a diamond necklace on her

neck. Its really impressive. She is carefully feeding the baby rabbit sitting

on her lap with carrots. I also bought an oil rope balloon, the color is my

favorite purple, long, very stand out from the crowd. My favorite is two love

balloons. These two hearts, like the love of my parents, have accompanied me for

11 years.

This is my spring festival life. Mr. Hu, do you find it interesting?

wish

我在英语学校换过好几位老师，而令我印象最为深刻的还是王欣老师。

王欣老师中等个子，一头长发随意扎起，她笑时嘴角有两个梨涡，让人感到温暖。在我心里，她就像神一样完美、善良、乐观、开朗……，而她最显著的特点就是温柔、细心。

她从来不对我们发脾气，就算她多么需要发泄，也不会迁怒于我们。又一次例外，老师到外边接了个电话，回来后脸色很差，十分苍白，嘴唇也颤抖着，而我们仍在吵闹。终于她忍无可忍地大吼：“吵什么，你们能不能懂点事。”我们愣了，低下了头，几分钟难挨的沉默后，她才继续讲课。后来几天都由代课老师上课，我们感到不自在，觉得课程枯燥无聊。几天后，她回来了，大家围着她七嘴八舌地问，她笑吟吟地回答，只是面容有些憔悴。

在诸多的事中，我记得最清楚的是她改变我的性格。在英语学校，除了上课发言我几乎不说话，于是我成了孤家寡人，她似乎觉察到了什么，叫我来，希望我能多说话，多表达，理由是想多听听我的声音，我答应了，但效果不佳。于是，她开始有意无意的让我和同学，外教交流。起先我试图逃避，后来我发现，敞开心扉，与别人交流原来也是一件愉快的事，慢慢地，我变得健谈起来。当我去感谢王老师，她冲我微微一笑，我瞬间明白了，我也对她报以一笑，接着我们心照不宣地笑了。

虽然教完三级后，王老师就不教我们了，但我想，如果我们重逢的话，我一定送她个大大的拥抱。并附在她耳边说：“王老师，谢谢你！”

Do you think what is the most important in your life?Maybe some answers are dreams.I may directly answer “lovers”.你认为你的生活中最重要的是什么?也许有些人的答案是梦想。我可以坦率地回答“爱人”。

In my opinion, lovers not simply mean your partner of life, but the people you love: your parents, husband or wife, children and friends.I have a happy life because of their company.I even can’t imagine the life without them.在我看来，爱人不仅仅指你的生活伴侣，而是你所爱的人：你的父母，丈夫或妻子，孩子和朋友。我拥有幸福的生活，因为有他们的陪伴。我甚至无法想象没有他们的生活。

My mum told me” money is not as important as you think, you neednt think too highly of it.Don’t be greedy, my girl.”I got it.Person around us is the most important.If they are unhappy, you won’t be happy.There is many beautiful scenery in our life, however, the most important thing we should notice is that, without the people we love, they worth nothing.我妈妈告诉我，“钱不是像你想像中的那么重要，你不要把它看得太重要。不要贪心，我的女孩。“我记住了。我们身边的人是最重要的。如果他们不开心，你也会不开心。在我们的生活中有很多美丽的风景，但是我们应该注意到最重要的是没有我们所爱的人，那些东西就是毫无价值。

In reality, many people are chasing wealth which results to the ignorance of people around them.Obviously, its not a brilliant choice.Don’t’ be controlled by wealth or money.About life , this is my idea, what’s about yours?在现实中，许多人因追逐财富而忽略了身边的人。很显然的，这不是明智的选择。不要被财富或金钱控制。这就是我对生活的看法，你的呢?

Dear Mr. Lai,

尊敬的赖老师：

I am writing this letter just want to say thanks to you. I am going to graduate in two weeks. You have been my class adviser for three years. During these three years you have spent lots of energy on us. You are not only teaching knowledge in the class, but also care our life. Sometimes we are afraid of you, because of your strict requirement for our study. However, you are so helpful in the daily life. No matter what difficulties we are in, you will help if you can. So, I also want to say sorry to you for making so much trouble. But you bear all my trouble. I don’t know what kind of class adviser I will meet in the future study, but I will remember and appreciate you forever. I want to say thank you again.

我写这封信只是想跟你说声谢谢。还有两周我就要毕业了。你做了我三年的班主任。在这三年你花了那么多精力在我们身上。你不仅仅在课堂上传授我们知识，而且在生活上也很关心我们。不过有时候我们有点怕你，因为你对我们学习的严格要求。不过，在日常生活中你是那么的乐于助人。无论我们遇到什么样的困难，只要能够帮得上忙你都会帮我们。所以，我还想对你说声对不起，给你带来那么多的麻烦。但是你都一一包容了。我不知道我会在今后的学习中遇到什么样的班主任，但是我会一直记得你、感激你的。我想再次说声谢谢。

Regarded

Student

学生

Look this is my English teacher .Hes tall and fat .Hes very fanny !

He has two small eyes ,and a big mouth.I tell you, he looks like a big bear.

So,If I meet him I often said :Hello,Mr bear .And he said :Hell ,small bear.Because my classmates think I look like a bear too.

My English teacher works very hard .And he often tell us :You must

very hard to leron English .

I like my English

teacher very mueh!!!!

Welcome to meet my English!!!!

敬爱的吴老师：

您好!不久，我已经踏上六年级的阶梯。吴老师，您为我们付出了许多汗水。今天我在这里和您谈谈心里话。

您是一位关心学生的好老师。记得有一次，我班的一位同学由于身体不舒服，在课堂上有些头晕。当消息传到您的耳中时。您就叫那位学生扒在桌面上好好休息，给他一杯热水，还向他问寒问暖。

还有一次，您给我们讲课时，一会打哈欠，一会揉揉鼻子，我们都知道，我们都明白，是你的感冒使得你如此。我想：“吴老师，您怎么不在讲台上休息一会儿呢?”可是我知道，您是为了我们而在顽强地给我们讲课……

在将近期末考试的时候，老师比我们更为紧张，所以常常放学后多上一节课，给我们补课。有些学生埋怨老师不应该放学留下。但您不在乎听他们所讲的话。时时帮助不会的学生，教他们解决的方法，给他以容易的理解，让他能够明白。我们遇到不会的问题便向您请教，您也耐心地给予我们讲解。

此致

敬礼!

写信人：

日期：

I want to say”Thank you”to MiWang our English teacher. I can never pay you back for your kindneand your patience. I used to be weak in English. You found my problem and helped me out. With your help I am now good at English. I still remember your smile on the day when I won first prize in the English speech competition. It was you who gave me the confidence.

我想对我们的英语老师说谢谢。对您的善良和耐心我是无法报答的。我曾经英语不好，你发现了我的问题并帮助我走出困境。在您的帮助下，我现在英语很好，我仍然记得当我在英语演讲比赛中获得第一名时您的微笑。是您给了我自信。

Dear Mr. Shan

Hello! The Spring Festival is coming. I sincerely wish you a happy new year

and smooth work!

I have been getting along with you for four years. When I first came into

this campus, I was still a little girl. You taught me how to learn and how to be

a person. I remember that I got the first full mark in the Chinese test in grade

one. Your encouraging words and affirmative eyes have made me unforgettable.

Since then, I have determined to be a good student with both good character and

learning.

Mr. Shan, I know that my handwriting is not good. Every time I see you

annotate "write carefully" at the end of your homework, I feel very ashamed.

This winter vacation, I set a goal for myself to practice calligraphy for an

hour every day. Do you know what? I have written the words in the fourth grade

Chinese textbook three times and practiced each word 12 times, so as not to let

you worry about my words any more.

Single teacher, I quietly tell you that I like you very much. It is you who

have taught me rich knowledge, you have taught me the truth of being a man, it

is you who have cultivated my positive and enterprising character, and you have

given me a pair of powerful wings to let me roam in the world of knowledge!

Single teacher, you have worked hard for us. You should pay more attention

to your body and drink more water, which is good for your voice. Id like to

express my highest respect to you! I can only repay you with excellent results -

teacher, you have worked hard!

I wish you a happy New Year!

Your students

Dear Miss Liang,

I am writing to thank you for your hard work for me. With your help, I make great progress in my study. A year ago, my study was bad and I didn’t want to learn, but you never give me up. You told me that I was clever. As long as I work hard, I would be great. In this year, you cared much about my study and helped me a lot. When I made mistakes, you always pointed them out and helped me to correct. Now, my study is much better than before, and I want to express my gratitude to you. Hope you everything goes well.

Sincerely yours,

Lily

新学年开始了，大家屏气敛息地等待着新的英语老师的到来。上课铃声刚响过，便见一位大姐姐拿着教具精神抖擞地迈进我们的课室。她顶着一头乌黑发亮的长发，闪着一双水灵灵的大眼睛，挺着一个秀气的鼻子，鼻子上面还架着一副精致的眼镜，表情却是十分严肃。起初，我们看到她那严肃的模样，心里都不禁惴惴不安，以为这又是一个“凶恶”的老师。

英语老师在讲台上停住，环视了一下坐得端端正正的同学们，绽出了一个笑脸：“Hi！ Goodmorning， everyone…”她既优雅又自信的风格一下子就把我们给吸引住了。

“吾姓邓，名小丽，你们以后可以叫我邓老师，或者Mis邓，请同学们往后多多包涵！”邓老师眨了眨眼睛，脸上现出了调皮状：“大家不要太喜欢我哦！”教室里顿时笑倒一片。

邓老师等同学们的笑声停止后，很快敛起笑容，撇着嘴说道：“另外，请同学们要注意了，上课看课外书的、睡觉的、走神的，讲话的……统统都逃不过我的法眼！”说到这里，她脸上出现“得意”状，“本老师的眼睛可是会‘180度转动’的！”说完，她用酷酷的目光从我们的脸上扫过，从左边再到右边，又从右到左，直看得我们个个心生敬畏。

“好了，我们现在正式开始上课……”邓老师转眼又换成一副和蔼可亲表情。

嘿嘿，我的英语老师表情丰富吧？这才是刚开始，以后她的表情包可多了，“害羞”的、“惊讶”的、“发怒”的、甚至是“抓狂”的……当然“微笑”的表情包她是用得最多！要不，我们全班同学又怎么会这么喜欢她呢！

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[暑假英语作文题目大全

With the fast development of online communication tools and online chatting tools, an increasing number of people are inclined to make friends online. However, is it wise to make friends online? People from different backgrounds and cultures have divergent views concerning this issue.

随着网络通信工具和在线聊天工具的快速发展，越来越多的人倾向于在网上交友。然而，在网上交朋友是明智的吗?来自不同背景和文化的人们对这一问题有不同的看法。

For one thing, those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it. They claim that making friends online has many advantages compared to communicate with each other in face to face. For instance, making friends online can communicate with our friends at any time to strengthen our relationship and save a lot social resources. And we can keep in touch with our friends when we have no time to visit them in person. They also point out that making friends online provides a good chance for us to communicate with people from different social backgrounds and cultures. In other words, making friends online can broaden our horizon and widen our personal relationships. In addition, it also makes contribution to narrow our gap in area and culture.

一方面，那些已经受益于网上交友的人是赞成的。他们说网上交友有比彼此面对面交流更有优势。例如，网上交友可以随时与我们的朋友交流来加强我们的关系，节约社会资源。在我们没有时间见面时，我们可以与我们的朋友保持联系。他们还指出，网上交朋友为我们提供了一个与不同的社会背景和文化的人交流的好机会。换句话说，网上交友可以拓宽我们的视野，拓宽我们的个人关系网。而且，这也为缩小我们在地域、文化方面的差距作贡献。

However, for another, other people hold opposite views towards this issue. They argue that it is dangerous to make friends online. They cite many examples that people cheated by online friends. And they figure out that sometimes it will cause some misunderstanding in culture because some online friends tell lies and provide wrong information.

然而，另一方面，其他人对这个问题持有相反的观点。他们认为在网上交朋友是很危险的。他们举出很多被网友欺骗的例子。他们指出有时会引起一些文化上的误解，因为一些网上的朋友会说谎并提供错误的信息。

In my point of view, I am inclined to favor the former though we should be careful when making friends online. To put it in a nutshell, it is wise to make friends online.

在我看来，我倾向于同意前者，但在网上交友的时候我们是应该小心。简而言之，在网上交朋友是明智的。

老师，你讲课的语言悦耳的像叮咚的山泉，亲切似潺潺的小溪，激越如奔泻的江流，下面我就带大家去看看这位老师。

我要说的这位老师呢，其实就是我们的英语老师。先来介绍一下我们的英语老师：英语老师长得十分可爱，有一双不大不小的眼睛，总是戴着一副红色框的眼镜，并且身材十分苗条，说话的时候也很幽默，大家都爱上她的课。

记得有一次上完英语课后，老师心平气和的对我们说，下一节课我们要玩一个非常好玩的游戏。顿时，安静地教室突然像炸开了的锅一样乱，欢呼声，尖叫声，交织在一起，欢欣雀跃。我也十分期待下一节的英语课。

终于到了星期五。“下一节课就是英语课了”！这时，教室里又乱了。“太棒了！太棒了”！有的人还拍着桌子，大叫。“太好了！太好了”！上课的铃声似乎比以往更响了。可是等了五分钟，还不见英语老师的人影。“难道今天又什么事不能来给我们上课”？我忐忑不安的想着。同学们把刚刚笑开了花的脸都低了下去，垂头丧气，大失所望。

就在这时，突然，听见走廊里有清脆的脚步声，“啊！是英语老师！太好了！”，教室里又开始欢呼起来了。“同学们，对不起来晚了，我们快一点学完这些单词，好快点做游戏”。“好”，同学们响亮的回答。才用了三十五分钟，我们就将两屏的单词全部都搞定了。学完之后，我们开始玩游戏了，同学们一个个都兴奋不已，这真是一节成功的英语课。

老师您用人类最崇高的感情——爱，播种了春天，播种理想，播种力量；用语言播种，用彩笔耕耘，用汗水浇灌，用心血滋润。

My Teacher＇s House

My English teacher has a big house.

It has a living room, a big dining room, two bedrooms, a study, two bathrooms and a big kitchen.

In the living room, there is a big picture, four brown sofas, white fans and blue walls. The TV set is big. There is a big Chinese knot on the wall. There are lanterns below the lights. I like them.

This is my English teacher’s house.

[英语作文我的英语老师的房子

I have a Chinses Teacher。 Her name is Lui Xiaohong。 She is from Lanchang。 She’s very active and strict。 She has two big eyes。 She’s very nice。But she is short。 She like to smile。 I don’t know what season she like。 Because I don’t know her very well。 Her class is very funny， I like it。

In a word， I love my Chinese Teacher。

他看起来挺老，打扮的挺帅气，几乎天天都穿着西装，偶尔也穿穿常服。虽然他没生气，但他的脸异常严肃，让人不敢靠近。

这个老师太可怕了，在男同学面前简直就是魔鬼。没完成作业就让你去跑步，没背好书就不准吃饭，他放下狠言：“准备好干粮在教室，别饿死在这里！”他上课手拿一把铁尺，害怕的同学不敢讲话，不害怕的还说得不亦乐乎。如果他一铁尺下去，估计就要了半条命。

他挺负责，一词不落地讲得一干二净，什么也不留下。听懂的同学听懂了，没听懂的也还是那样。

美中不足的是他的字。他的字就像几条毛线缠在一起，让我连n与m都分不清了。每当做笔记的时候，下面的同学都叫苦连天，我戴着眼镜也看不懂他写的什么，他们抱怨：“这写的什么字啊！太难看了！”他好像听到了，笑着说出了一句：“字如其人。”

他就是许老师，我的英语老师。

要是以前的黄老师有许老师这样严格就好了。

要是许老师的字有黄老师那样好看就好了。

There is a lovely teacher in our class. we like her as our friends. we would like to tell her everything, sadness and happiness . She helps us on our lessons and guides us on other things. I am happy to have such a good teacher.

Hi, Im a child just in grade three, my name is pillars, I really very happy to introduce myself to you.

To introduce my personality, I was very shy on the outside, met a stranger facial muscle is always very nervous, sometimes even become common most familiar greeting coy. Can be in the home, my power and prestige eight sides, always reel talking with family, sister and brother play crazy, occasionally a little small temper. But I believe, I one day bumped into a stranger, can leisurely like in the home, laughing with them.

Introduction after my personality, then introduce my hobbies. I love reading of a book is a powder, I turned over every book at home. Gradually, home of the book is not enough to my reading, I often went to the bookstore, impatient, sometimes even forgot to bring money, again afraid a good book is finished, so we have to lift the book, on the bookcase, sometimes see sore eyes, his feet support can not put down, so we have to hold a book, squatting on the ground, close eyes, in order to temporary rest, but always cant wait want to see. Sometimes a thick book was quickly kill me in a few minutes, and then into a mind, his wisdom constantly on my way home to understand the content of this book, slowly one by one answer in mind.

I not only love reading, and has a certain interest in painting. Either on the draft paper, or in the white paper, who I met, were painted a mesh not miserably to see the whole paper is not miss even a corner. It is this persistent painting, now that I have been able to draw people to life.

I am a love of learning, reasonable obedient good boy.

大家好，我是一个刚刚上三年级的孩子，我的名字叫柱子，我真的很开心把自己介绍给大家。

再介绍一下我的性格，我在外面比较内向，遇见生人面部肌肉总会十分紧张，有时连平常最熟悉的打招呼也变得吞吞吐吐。可在家里，我威风八面，总会滔滔不绝地与家人交谈，与姐姐弟弟疯狂的玩耍，偶尔也会发一点小脾气。但我相信，我终有一天碰见生人，能够像在家里那样从容不迫，跟他们谈笑风生。

介绍完我的性格，接下来就介绍一下我的兴趣爱好。 我是一个极爱看书的超级书粉，家里的书我都翻了个遍。渐渐地，家里的书已经不足够我的阅读量，我就常常跑去书店，有时心急，连钱都忘了带，又怕好书被买完，只好捧起书，倚靠在书柜上，有时看得眼睛酸疼，脚无力支撑也不舍放下，只好抱紧书，蹲在地上，微闭双眼，以求暂时的休息，但总是迫不及待的想去看完。有时厚厚的一本书也被我在几十分钟内迅速秒杀，然后把智慧吸入脑子中，在回家的路上不断地去体会这本书的内容，脑子中的疑问慢慢地一个一个解答出来。

我不仅爱看书，而且对画画有一定的兴趣。不论在草稿纸上，还是在白纸上，凡是我碰过的，都被画个目不惨睹一整张纸连一个角落也不肯放过。正是这种坚持不懈的作画，现在我已经能够把人画得栩栩如生。

我就是个爱学习，懂事听话的好孩子。

In everyones life, the path of the may not always smooth, each person will encounter difficulties and setbacks. When you face difficulty and setback, you dont fear, never retreat, must be brave to face them, to find a way to overcome, and overcome, so that you beat yourself.

I also have such an experience.

In a day, our teacher let us do a teacher himself out of the test paper, a few questions before I finished it easily, but alone has baffled me to the last question, I want to left again, method let me call back later, I want to right again, method and let me call back later, I left no stone unturned, racking their brains, think along while also didnt think out the solution to this problem. Ten minutes passed, and 20 Zhong Guo, thirty minutes passed, 35 minutes passed...... there are still five minutes seemed close examination paper, how to do? In the last few minutes, I suddenly shine at the moment, find the problem solving methods to the problem. Then I thought: this method is not in front of my eyes? Why cant I didnt see it? as luck would have it, I have just finished the question, the teacher will submit to us, after down, I know "everything be afraid and they were afraid that the word" seriously.

In this question, I know a truth, no matter what happens, as long as serious, you will overcome the present difficulties, wont let him give avenue, and extend to a more difficult way.

The classmates, please believe that, although the road ahead even more dangerous and more bumpy, but as long as you seriously and carefully to do every thing, begin with careful, ends in earnest, there would be no bad thing you do, as long as they have "serious" 2 words, then you can overcome all difficulties, overcome all difficulties, beat off all the obstacle on the road of life, make your life more meaningful!

在每个人的一生中，走的路不可能总是平坦的，每个人一定会遇到困难和挫折。当你面对困难和挫折时，你千万不要胆怯，千万不能退缩，一定要勇敢的面对它们，想办法战胜，并且克服，这样你就等于战胜了你自己。

我也有一次这样的经历。

在一天，我们老师让我们做一张老师自己出的考卷，前几道题我轻轻松松的就做完了，可是惟独有最后一道题把我给难住了，我左想一遍，方法让我给打回去了，我右想一遍，方法又让我给打回去了，我想尽了一切方法，绞尽脑汁，想了半天也没把这道题的解法想出来。十分钟过去了、二十分钟过去了、三十分钟过去了、三十五分钟过去了······眼看还有五分钟就要收卷子了，怎么办呢?在最后的几分钟里，我忽然眼前一亮，找到着这道题的解题方法。当时我想：‘这方法不就在我的眼前么?我怎么就没看见呢?’说来也巧，我刚刚做完了那一道题，老师就要我们交卷，下去以后，我知道了“世上万物怕就怕这认真二字”。

在这次做题中，我知道了一个道理，无论做什么事，只要认真，你一定会克服眼前的困难，不会让他给大道，并且向更艰难的路走去。

同学们，请相信，虽然前面的路更加艰险，更加坎坷不平，但是只要你认真地对待和认真地去做每一件事，以细心开头，以认真结尾，就没有你做不好的事，只要自己拥有“认真”二字，那么你就可以战胜一切困难，克服一切困难，打退一切人生路上的拦路虎，使你的一生更加有意义!

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

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