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Today is the winter solstice, mother said to eat dumplings, the winter solstice eat dumplings is a custom in my hometown, eaten in the morning my mother and I went to the supermarket to buy dumplings materials. Have eggs and leek, after buying food back home mother will not idle, and began to chop stuffing, then I go to school before mom, start with noodles. Because is the first time and, first of all, I poured a cup noodles into the pot, pour warm water and began to face to, looks good, but not as easy as imagined, less water, the face is too dry, it is much more water, and the surface is thinning, repeated several times to get the surface and good, but too much, and the face Im afraid we eat at noon, at this moment, moms dumpling stuffing also chop, we will work up and started to make dumplings.

Dumplings in the teaching of the mother, like like like dont like all packages, finally to eat, my own package dumplings.

Really is happy day!

今天是冬至，妈妈说要吃饺子，冬至吃饺子是我家乡的风俗，早上吃过饭妈妈和我就去超市买包饺子用的材料。有鸡蛋和韭菜，买完菜回到家妈妈就没闲着，就开始剁馅，然后我就学妈妈以前的样子，开始和面。因为是第一次和面，首先我把一碗面倒到盆里，浇上温开水就开始和起面来，看起来有模有样的，可是完全不像想象的那么简单，不是水少了，面太干了，就是水倒多了，和的面就变稀了，反复了好多次才把面和好，但是和的面却太多了，恐怕我们一中午都吃不完，这时，妈妈的饺子馅也剁好了，我们就忙活起来，开始包饺子了。

饺子在妈妈的教导下，似像似不像的都包好了，最后终于吃上了，我自己包的饺子。

真是开心的一天呀!

In winter, is a very beautiful season. It is not like spring gentleness, also is not as hot as summer, more dont like autumn sunshine is bright, but winter is charming.

You look carefully, a piece of green in the field, the greenhouse rows, patches, melon and fruit garden, farmers uncle in sowing and reaping. Master cheng yen, street traffic. Roadside Holly still carried the head and spine straight. Various snacks: dumplings, fans, Fried rice... Dazzle you. Open air conditioning, in the supermarket variety: green vegetables, dumplings, fruits, drinks... Its everything. Especially after a heavy snow, houses, land, crops, as with a layer of silver dress. The wind blows, snow or satisfied. Street like a jade belt into the distance, fall the leaves of the branches full of fluffy silver bar, winter and summer evergreen pine tree, filled with fluffy snowballs, like the earth covered with a layer of blanket. I and friends in the snow, some snowball, some make a snowman, snowball fights, enjoy it.

I love winter, love this beautiful scenery!

冬天，是一个十分美丽的季节。它不像春天那样的温柔，也不像夏天一样火热，更不像秋天一样阳光灿烂，但冬天却是迷人的。

你仔细望去，田野里一片碧绿，温棚一排排、一片片，瓜果满园，农民伯伯在播种着、收获着。大街上人来人往，车水马龙。路边的冬青依然那样抬着头、挺直腰。小吃多种多样：水饺、粉丝、炒饭……让你眼花缭乱。超市里空调开放，品种丰富：青菜、水饺、水果、饮料……真是应有尽有。特别是一场大雪过后，房屋、地上、庄稼像披上一层银色的衣裳。风一吹，雪花飘飘扬扬。马路像一条玉带伸向远方，落了叶的树枝上挂满了毛茸茸的银条，冬夏常青的松柏树上，堆满了蓬松的雪球，大地像铺上了一层毛毯。我和小伙伴们在雪地里，有的滚雪球，有的堆雪人，有的打雪仗，玩得开心极了。

我爱冬天，更爱这美丽的景色!

Our campus is beautiful and clean.

Especially the view of the school just built soon pool, the water is clear and clean, several small koi fish alive in the water, really cute. Cascade tank top and a small spray, a start the water flow in the flowing and metope, give a person a kind of very pure and fresh and lively feeling. Also used by the side of the pool of some plants to decorate, I did not know at the moment the water and a few small lotus flowers purple, little fish in water activities after a while, a short while again drill to lotus holed up peoples eyes. Although this tank nothing special, but it is not only to school spring scenery and move feeling, and it is a beautiful scenery, I really like the fountain. The center of the pool, there are a number of aquatic plants. Look, a spirited big carp tail up addicted, the chest, the pieces of fish scales, in the sun a bit, a bit, just like a crystal pearl! Beside the pool has a special management department of the pool, near the previous administration and buy some books about pool, isnt it a shame now has moved out.

? A circle near the pool and dedicated to pool of flower every day. Against the sun to the school, students can see the beauty into the gate of the pool, visible this pool is quite popular with the students, it has a good time to school students will come to visit, even after a long time, some students came to visit a pool view. All of them are actually swam to see those life - carp. But since carp died, and I have no students came to see, actually I also very sad, good carry of life did not have.

Oh, I think of it, beside the pool and two kirin, in their mouth with little water, how I wish come in to add a few water in vibrant life! This school pool is more interesting and more to the campus scenery, the fountain has its matchless magical color!

我们的校园又美丽又干净。

特别是学校刚修建不久的景色水池，水又清澈又干净，几条小锦鲤鱼在水里活蹦乱跳的，真可爱。水池小瀑布上面还有一个小型喷水器，一开动水就顺墙面潺潺而流，给人一种非常清新活泼的感觉。水池旁边还用了一些我一时也说不上来的植物装饰，水中还有几朵紫色的小莲花，小鱼儿一会在水上活动，一会又钻到莲花下躲藏人们的眼光。虽然这个水池没什么特别，可是它不但给学校增添春色和动感，而且又是一处好看的景色，我真喜欢这个喷水池。池正中，有许多水生植物。瞧，一条欢蹦乱跳的大鲤鱼翘着尾嗜，挺着胸脯，那一片片鱼鳞，在阳光下忽闪，忽闪，真像一颗晶莹的珍珠哩!水池旁有一个专门管理水池的管理处，以前管理处旁还有一些关于水池的的书买呢，不可惜现在已经搬走了。

?水池旁有一圈专门来装饰水池的鲜花，每天。学生们迎着朝阳到学校，一进大门就能看到这个美丽的这个水池，可见这水池挺受学生们的欢迎，刚建好的时候学生一到学校都会上来参观，即使过了很久，还有学生来参观景色水池。其实他们都是来看那些游动着的生命——鲤鱼的。可是自从鲤鱼死后，就没学生过来看了，其实我也很难过，好端端的小生命一个个就没了。

哦，我想起来了，水池旁边还有两个麒麟头，在它们的嘴里会喷出小水柱，我多么希望快快在水里增加几条有活力的生命啊!这样学校的水池才更有趣，也更给校园增添风光，这样的喷水池也有它无比神奇的色彩哦!

In my heart, my father is a great man, he wakes up early and goes to work,

in the event, he goes home late. He is working so hard, all he does is for the

family and to support my education. Once I ask him if he is tired, he smiles and

says that I am his sweet burden. I feel so moved, his love for me is so

deep.

在我心里，我的爸爸是个伟大的人，他很早就起来上班，在晚上，他很晚才回家。他一直都很努力工作，他所做的一切都是为了家庭和支持我的教育。曾经我问他是否感到很累，他对我微笑，说我是他甜蜜的负担。我很感动，他对我的爱是如此的深。

Winter holiday is coming, what did he wear? Oh, it turned out that he wear a coat is made from homework, made of extracurricular class pants, there is a happy little hat. I really wanted him, he quickly ran to the front of me to ask: "you dont want me? I said: of course.

You have to give me the clothes to I wear on you. "I heard it said:" ah! How these clothes except hat looks uncomfortable? Said, "I have to wear a hat, winter vacation, said:" dont be so luo li bothersome, quick give I put on it. "I had to reluctantly to put on the rest of the two, this is not to wear, the wear to the good, the ironing in the morning, afternoon to take pants, its only half an hour a day the little hat, I thought: this winter vacation as well in school.

However, not long before, I have some relief. Because, hat giving me my winter vacation I dream of pulley shoes you want. At this point, I feel happy. At this time, I and my brother and sisters to slide to slide in the home, can be happy.

And after a while, in the afternoon. I will go to school, because I have a pair of roller shoes, I do feel very relaxed, because I am very happy.

Boys and girls, lets relax and happy spend a good time!

寒假来了，他穿了些什么呢?哦，原来他穿的是用作业做的上衣，用课外班做的裤子，还有一个快乐小帽子。我太想得到他了，他飞快地跑到我的面前问：“你想不想得到我呀?我说：当然想。

你就得把我身上的这些衣服给我穿在你的上。”我听见了说：“啊!这些衣服除了帽子以外，怎么看起来别别扭扭的呢?”说着我便把帽子给戴上了，寒假说：“别这么罗哩罗嗦的，快把它给我穿上。”我只好无可奈何地把剩下的两件给穿上了，这不穿还行，这一穿到好，上午熨衣服，下午带裤子，一天只有半个小时戴这个小帽子，我想：这寒假还不如上学好呢。

可是，没有过多久，我就有些欣慰乐。因为，寒假的帽子给我送来了我做梦都想要的滑轮鞋。此时，我觉得特别的快乐。此时，我和弟弟妹妹们在家里滑来滑去的，可高兴了。

又过了一会，到下午了。我就去上课外班了，因为我有了一双滑轮鞋，我做什么都感觉到很轻松，因为我很快乐。

同学们，让我们放松心情，快快乐乐的度过这段美好的时光吧!

Oh, the winter is coming! When the up in the morning, but I cant afford to linger in bed, at this moment, I knew - winter is coming; When I gradually added a few pieces of thick clothes, at this moment, I knew, if winter comes, Drifted down the light snow falling on that day, I knew - winter is coming... In winter, when we unconsciously quietly came to our side. In winter, it is how mysterious!

The north wind blowing, with blow to the face, like the prick of an acupuncture, pain unceasingly. The pedestrians on the road less and less, only people have wrapped themselves, like a big steamed stuffed bun. Some middle-aged women have also turned into "Arab women", leaving only a pair of complicated big eyes on his face. Green girl, however, that those who are not so, they wear skirt, standing on high heels, and gracefully walk the road, is really "want to grace, dont temperature". In the winter, how naughty!

Oh! If winter comes, even our warm suzhou snow began to fall. Look, look, it is to the world of a be dressed in white, and the beautiful snow covered everything with a beautiful clothes, everything is white, on the roof, the ground and the trees... Even the car is glistening snow, seems to be the whole world is surrounded by snow, the whole world was snow decorated whiteness. A warm winter day out, according to us warm. There is a lovely ah, winter!

Whether charactizing a fine spring, the summer the sun is shining, or her of the cool autumn, I still like to be dressed in white in the winter!

啊，冬天来了!当早上该起来的时候，我却还赖在被窝里不起，这时，我就知道——冬天来了;当我身上渐渐地又增加了几件厚厚的衣服，这时，我就知道——冬天来了;当天上飘下淅淅沥沥的小雪的时候，我就知道——冬天来了……冬天，在我们不知不觉的时候，悄悄地来到了我们身边。冬天，是多么神秘啊!

北风呼呼地吹着，吹到脸上，就如同被针刺了似的，疼痛不已。路上的行人越来越少了，仅有的人们也都把自己裹得严严实实的，像个大包子一样。一些中年女士也纷纷变成了“阿拉伯妇女”，脸上只留下了一双扑朔迷离的大眼睛。可是，那些青春少女们却不是这样，她们穿着裙子，踩着高跟鞋，及其优雅地走着路，可真是“要风度，不要温度”啊。冬天，是多么调皮呀!

呵!冬天来了，就连我们暖和的苏州也下起了鹅毛大雪。你瞧，放眼望去，简直是来到了一个银妆素裹的世界——美丽的雪花给万物披上了一件漂亮的衣裳，一切都是白茫茫的，屋顶上、地上、树梢上……就连车子上也都是白花花的雪，似乎整个世界都被皑皑白雪笼罩了，整个世界都被皑皑白雪装饰得洁白无暇。温暖的冬日也出来了，照得我们暖洋洋的。啊，冬天也有可爱的一面!

不管是鸟语花香的春天，艳阳高照的夏天，还是金凤送爽的秋天，我还是喜欢银妆素裹的冬天!

winter vacation plan

How time flies(时间过得真快)，unconsciously(不知不觉地) the next winter vacation (寒假)will soon come.In order to improve(提高) myself as well as enjoy a happy holiday，I made the winter vacation plan.

时间过得真快，不知不觉得下一个寒假就要到了，为了提高我自己同时快乐的度过假期，我制定了寒假计划。

Firstly i want to continue with my study，i think study is a life process，so no matter what the situation I am in，i will look for chances to continue it.I have bought several new books ，including those books on my major(专业)and some novels ，I will try to finish reading them in the holiday and write notes.

首先，我会继续学习，我认为学习是一种终身的过程，所以不管我处在那种情况之下，我都会寻找机会学习。我已经买了一些新书，这些书有的跟我的专业有关，也包括一些小说。我将努力读完他们并写下读书笔记。

Secondly，since it is the holiday，I will share it with my family and friends .You know the spring festival will soon come， I believe I would chatting and play games with my friends and family .I think I will enjoy the vacation.

其次，既然是放假，我将和我的家人朋友一起度过，你知道春节就要来临了，届时我会和我的家人朋友一起聊天啊，玩游戏啊等等，我相信我定会度过一个快乐的假期。

[英语作文之我的寒假学习计划

写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。

一.名词

写作中，学生们常把握不好名词的数、所有格以及一些集合名词的用法。

1.Hegavemeaverygoodadviceyesterday.

句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加apieceof，类似的词有：news,bread,work,paper,chalk,furniture,information等等。

2.Thatgirllovesreadingbook.

可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books.

3.Hewentintoabooksshopandboughtadictionary.

一般表示有生命的东西的名词的所有格用’s，如mymother’scar,而此处适宜用名词修饰名词，改为abookshop.

4.MyfamilyiswatchingTV.

一些集合名词如看成一个整体，则用单数的谓语动词，如Myfamilyisahappyone.如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team,class,audience等。

5.Iboughtsomepotatosandtomatosatthesupermarket.

中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato,potato,Negro,hero;其余的都加s变为复数。

6.Thishasnothingtodowiththeirbelieves.（这和他们的信仰没关系。）

以f,fe结尾的词变为复数时一般去f,fe加ves，如knife—knives,

thief—thieves;而roof和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs.

二.冠词

7.Thebosswantstohireanusefulperson.

用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说aEuropeancountry.

8.Planeisamachinethatcanfly.

plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有amachine,因此只能在其前面加a，变为Aplane。

9.Heplayedapianoatthepartyyesterday.

把a改为the，因为乐器前用定冠词。

10.Themachinewasinventedin1920s.

在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代inthe80s。

11.XiaoHongwenttoschoolbythebuseveryday.

去掉the，因为表示交通方式用by直接加交通工具。

三.代词

使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。

12.Heisoneofthosespeakerswhomakehisideasperfectlyclear.

定语从句的先行词是thosespeakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。

13.Whomdoyouthinkhasleftthelightson?

放在疑问句特殊疑问词后的doyouthink/believe/guess/imagine/suppose等都不参与句子成分。本句中去掉doyouthink后缺的是主语，应把Whom改为Who。

14.ThebosspretendednottoseeJohnandI.

John和I在句中都做的宾语，应把I改为me。

15.Thesebooksaremine；thoseinthebagareher.

her是形容词性物主代词，后面应该加名词books，或把her改为hers。

四.数词

16.Therearefourteenhundredsstudentsinourschool.

hundred/thousand/million/score/dozen等词前有具体数字时后不加s，前面没有具体数字时在其后加s和of，表示大约几百几千的概念。如two

hundredstudents（两百个学生），hundredsofstudents（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。

17.Theirschoolistwiceaslargerasourschool.

表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large.

18.Today’shomeworkisafive-hundred-wordscomposition.

几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.

19.TwothirdofthestudentsinourschoolarefromAmerica.

英语表达中分数的分子用基数词，分母用序数词，分子大于一时分母后要加s，所以就把third改为thirds.

五.形容词和副词

形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。

20.Thepatientappearednervouslywhenhetalkedtothedoctor.

appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.

21.Theartistworkedhardlytofinishhisdrawingsontime.

此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard也可以是副词，表努力，因此把hardly改为hard.

22.Thisshirtismorecheaperthanthatone.

more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。

23.Heisthemostsuccessfulofthetwobusinessmen.

两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.

24.Heworkslessharderthanheusedto.

表不如?...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.

25.Thebookisfairlymoreinterestingthanthatone.

fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much,even,still,far,alot,alittle,abit,any,no,byfar,rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.

26.Thisisasaninterestingastoryastheoneinthemagazine.

as?as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为asinterestingastoryastheone.

27.Theweatherhereisnicerthan.

同样的事物才能相比较，weather和不具有可比性，因此应改为Theweatherhereisnicerthanthatof.

29.Iwouldrathertakeatrainthanwentbybus.

这个词组为wouldratherdo?thando?，因此把went改为go.

30.Isthereinterestinganythingatthemeeting?

修饰anything,something,everything,nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。

31.Ineverhaveseensuchapersonbefore.

像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为Ihaveneverseensuchapersonbefore.

32.Thebookisworthtoberead.

beworthdoing意为值得被做。因此改为Thebookisworthreading.

33.Itissurethathewillsucceed.

sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.

34.Heisregardedasoneofthebestalivewritersatpresent.

alive为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive放在writers后面。

35.Idon’tknowthathehasfinishedtheworkyet.

yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet改为already.

36.Hesaidnearlynothingatthemeeting.

nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly改为almost。

六.介词

37.Heusuallygoestoschoolbyhisfather’scar.

by加上名词表示一种交通方式，中间什么都不加，如bycar,bybus,byplane等；如果名词前有其他的词修饰，则应用除by以外的其他介词，此处把by改为in.

38.Pleasewaitmeattheschoolgate.

wait为不及物动词，需加介词for后才能再跟名词或代词做宾语。

39.HehasbeenmarriedwithBettyformorethantwentyyears.

marry不跟with连用，应把with改为to。

40.Ifinishedtheworkontimeunderthehelpofhim.

As the most important festival in China since ancient times， the Spring Festival is always being excepted by we kids。 Because we dont need to do any homework during this time very year。Its really a precious holiday for us。 And our parents are free from their work too。 We go to our grandparents to get together with them to enjoy the moment when the new year comes。

I will priciate if the holiday to be longer。

作为一直以来中国最重要的节日，春节总是带给我们这些小孩美好的期待。首先，在这春节期间我们不用写作业了。这对我们来说真是弥足珍贵的假日。我们的父母也放假，所以我们能一起去爷爷奶奶家欢度新年，一起享受新年钟声敲响时的快乐。

当然，如果这假期长一点的话我们会更开心的。

Sweep the stairs, seems to be a very common thing, but it brings me a lot of feelings. Before winter vacation, we came to the neighborhood to apprentice activity, and our task is to sweep the stairs.

Normally, I in the home is an "eye", seldom do household chores, that just began to sweep a little do not know how to start. Before didnt work, I found that the public stair is very messy, there are some waste paper, garbage, there are a lot of dust. I cant help but give birth to a touch of disgust. However, I still matters. I from top to bottom and from bottom to top, back and forth several times to already was too tired to full head big sweat, faint. I saw on the third floor corridor is very dirty, then hurriedly picked up a broom and dustpan, carefully swept down from the upstairs down the stairs. And for a long time, ran ran down on the stairs, I head a little dizzy, carelessly almost wrestling, I heart fibrillation fibrillation, thought, is not swept. But look at other students already full head big sweat, but it is still trying to sweep the stairs. I was determined to continue to sweep the stairs. People say that the most glorious labor, I think this is the best reason to comfort themselves, hum, edge sweep the stairs.

At this time already clean many stairs. Looking at his own work achievement my heart is happy. Suddenly, I understand the purpose of the event: trains the student to love labor good habits and consciousness of protecting the environment and dedicated spirit. Indeed, as a primary school student, is should have these qualities. If without them, and learn again good, also is not a good student of all-round development. So, I have more power, picked up the broom, humming a little song, continue to sweep up the stairs to seriously, though it is hard process but the harvest is great.

I am from the little thing, learned a lot. Here, I want to say to all: the earth is my home, environmental protection depends on everybody, not everyone work together, it is impossible to improve sanitation. Although I dont understand the technology, also do not know the importance of high-tech, but I know a little, some high-tech pollution is very serious, why dont you improve it? I also know that now there are a lot of people to participate in the activities, but rather some weak power, I hope there are more and more people can participate in, the earth regained vigor!

扫楼梯，看起来是一件很平常的事情，可它却给我带来了很多的感想。在放寒假之前，我们来到居委会进行见习活动，而我们的任务就是扫楼梯。

平时，我在家里就是一颗“掌上明珠”，很少做家务活，以致于刚开始扫的时候，有点无从下手。在没干活之前，我发现公用楼梯很脏乱，有一些废纸、垃圾，还有不少灰尘。我不禁生出一丝厌恶之情。然而，我还是动手了。我从上到下，又从下到上，来来回回的几次下来已累得满头大汗、有气无力。我看见三楼楼道非常脏，便连忙拿起扫帚和簸箕，小心翼翼地从楼上顺着楼梯往下扫。扫了很久，在楼梯上跑上跑下的，我的头竟有点晕，一不小心差点摔跤，我的心颤了颤，心想：不扫了。可是看看别的同学已满头大汗了，但仍在努力地扫着楼梯。我下定决心，要继续把楼梯扫完。人们都说劳动最光荣，我自认为这是让自己得到安慰的最好理由，边哼歌，边扫楼梯。

这时楼梯已经干净了许多。望着自己的劳动成果我的心也快乐起来了。忽然间，我明白了这次活动的用意：培养学生热爱劳动保护环境的良好习惯和意识以及乐于奉献的情操。的确，作为一名小学生，是应该具备这些品质的。如果没有了它们，学习再好，也不会是一个全面发展的好学生。于是，我更加有了动力，拿起扫帚，哼着小曲儿，继续认真地扫起楼梯来，虽然过程艰苦但是收获却不凡。

我从这件小事中，体会到了许多。在这里，我想对所有的人说：地球是我家，环保靠大家，没有大家的共同协作，是不可能搞好环卫的。我虽不懂那些高科技，也不知那些高科技的重要性，但我深知一点，有些高科技污染很严重，为什么不改善它呢?我也知道现在正有许多人参与着这个活动，但力量未免有些薄弱，我希望还有更多的人能参与进来，使地球恢复往日的生机!

俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动，偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher.

正 my father and my mother are both teachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：im tired.

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.

误 the apples cheap. ill take some.

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.

(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

误 when i get to the station the train leave.

正 when i got to the station the train had left.

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

[中考英语作文：十大常见错误分析

The Great Wall is one of the "world heritage" in our country, it is like a dragon hovering in the northern Chinese vast land. The epitome of the ancient Chinese working people sweat and wisdom, is the symbol of ancient Chinese civilization. It now, however, is to smile, is suffering from the wreck and destruction of people, has lost its past glory and majesty.

As more and more tourists to visit the Great Wall, brought obvious damage to the Great Wall, for example: such as white plastic bags, water bottles, peel, confetti trash everywhere, seriously damaged the health of the Great Wall. Tourists also graffito of the scribble on the wall, make the wall stretched, destroyed the beauty of the Great Wall. Local villagers are horse-refraining pits and on the path to the Great Wall the erection of the ladder, secretly run to collect fees, Im ashamed of their behavior. Worse is that some real estate developers for their own interests, regardless of other peoples discouraging, built a lot of buildings around the Great Wall, excavators rumbling, forklift truck is still in back and forth, very busy, do not hesitate to destroy the scenery around the Great Wall, accelerate the destruction of the natural landscape around the Great Wall...

Standing on the Great Wall, holding the stone on the wall, ear seems to sounded the horn, the ancient war eyes seemed to show verve magnificent scenes in wartime. Great Wall through countless the baptism of war and the years vicissitudes of life, still stand tall in front of us. It with grand and spectacular attracts numerous tourists to visit. It is a symbol of our ancient working peoples wisdom. So, we need to protect the Great Wall. As long as the tourists throw less trash, the Great Wall will be more beautiful. Therefore, I want to tell you: please protect our ancient Great Wall! Let us join hands to start from the us, start from now and make a civilized tourists.

I believe that as long as you are my efforts, the ancient Great Wall will always magnificent stands on this vast land of China.

长城是我国的“世界遗产”之一，它像一条长龙盘旋在中国北方辽阔的土地上。凝结了中国古代劳动人民的血汗和智慧，是中国古代文明的象征。可是，现在的它，正在强颜欢笑，正在遭受了人们的摧残与破坏，已失去了它往日的辉煌与雄伟。

随着参观长城的游客越来越多，给长城带来了显而易见的破坏，例如：白色塑料袋、矿泉水瓶、果皮、纸屑等垃圾随处可见，严重地破坏了长城的卫生。游客还在城墙上乱涂乱画，弄得城墙狼狈不堪，破坏了长城的美观。当地村民还在垛口处和通往长城的小路上私自搭设梯子，设点收费，我为他们的行为感到羞耻。更可恶的是一些房地产开发商为自己的利益，不顾别人的劝阻，在长城周围建了很多建筑物，挖土机还在隆隆作响，铲车还在来回穿梭，忙得不可开交，不惜破坏了长城周围的景色，加速了长城周围自然景观的破坏……

站在长城上，扶着墙上的条石，耳边似乎响起了古代战争时的号角声，眼前似乎展现打战时气魄雄伟的场面。长城经历了无数次战争的洗礼和岁月的沧桑，至今还巍然屹立在我们面前。它以雄伟与壮观的景象吸引着无数前来参观的游客。它是我们古代劳动人民智慧的象征。所以，我们要保护长城。只要游客少扔一些垃圾，长城就会多一份美丽。因此，我要向大家呼吁:请大家保护我们古老的长城吧!让我们携起手来，从我们做起，从现在做起，做一个文明的游客。

我相信:只要你我的努力，古老的长城会永远雄伟壮丽的屹立在中国这辽阔的土地上。

Spring, a beautiful and with a dream-like scenery season! In this season, flowers on the earth, and all things recovery. This all of all, have brought joy to people.

Under the spring rain, misty. The distant trees and houses in the misty rain looks hazy; The distance of the road, water, Bridges, a beautiful landscape. The flowers in the garden with grass added a bit more charming; On campus, the top seems to be more clear. Under the rainy, moisten the earth, all revel in the beauty of the spring rains foil.

After a spring rain, more brilliant flowers, the grass more green, trees are more vitality. A dazzling golden dandelion on the side of the road, purple small wildflowers it under the peach tree, sing bees between dividend apricot flowers, butterflies fly in the blue sky, the bird whispers in the four seasons evergreen pine tree.

A breeze blowing, the lake that had long on the leaves of the willow fly under a lot of white catkin. Catkin dancing with the wind on the lake, beautiful lake like a shy little girl, with a gauze blocked side face. The lake house is like a mirage, give a person a kind of unspeakable beauty, linger.

Ah! The beautiful spring, you replace the white winter, you give people hope.

春天，一个美丽又带有梦幻般的景色的季节!在这个季节里，大地上百花齐放，万物复苏。这一切的一切，都给人带来了欢乐。

春雨，蒙蒙的下着。远处的树木和房屋在烟雨中更显得朦胧;远处的马路，流水，小桥，构成了一幅美丽的风景画。花园里的花与草更增添了几分妩媚;在校园里，读书声似乎更清亮了。春雨沥沥的下着，滋润着大地，一切都陶醉在春雨衬托的美景下了。

一阵春雨过后，花儿更艳了，草儿更绿了，树木更有生机了。金色的蒲公英在路边耀目，深紫色的小野花在桃树下送情，蜜蜂在分红的杏花间歌唱，蝴蝶在蓝色的天空中飞舞，鸟儿在四季常绿的松树上细语。

一阵微风吹来，湖边那刚长出嫩叶的柳树上飞下了许多白色的柳絮。柳絮伴着微风在湖面上飞舞，美丽的小湖像一位害羞的小姑娘，用纱巾挡住了半边脸蛋。湖边的房屋都像海市蜃楼一样时隐时现，给人一种无法形容的美感，令人流连忘返。

啊!美丽的春天，你替代了白色的冬天，你给人们带来了希望。

My home four mouth people, father watching TV, love of mother, love to play computers sister, the last one is naughty to me.

Dad, character gentle love watching TV. The wulin wind started at a time, dad did not leave before the TV, I mutter: "my father is such a couch potato."

Mother also very gentle character has a pair of watery big eyes, cherry small mouth, not fat or thin body. Mother love dressing up, charmingly mother will go out every morning. Remember once, my mother didnt know where to put the doll bright eye. I cant help but say: "oh, mom how nice!"

Sister has a head of jet-black hair and a pair of beautiful eyes, sister love playing computer, every time I see computer sister boast about. Remember that a sister bought a laptop computer, my sister did not leave the computer all day, my sister is a geek.

My personality is lively, the hobby is art, and I am also very naughty. That time, my good friends birthday party, I saw the cake, my mind had an idea. From with some butter on the cake, I went to my good friend, wipe on the face, in a very short time her face was I became a clown.

This is my family, this is my happy and happy family!

我的家有四口人，有爱看电视的爸爸，爱打扮的妈妈，爱玩电脑的姐姐，最后一个就是调皮的我了。

爸爸性格温柔，爱看电视。那一次武林风开始了，爸爸死活都不离开电视前，我小声嘀咕了一句：“爸爸真是个电视迷。”

妈妈性格也很温柔有一双水汪汪的大眼睛，樱桃小嘴，身子不胖不瘦。妈妈爱打扮，每天早晨妈妈都会漂漂亮亮的出门。记得有一次，妈妈不知道要去哪里就把自己打扮的漂漂亮亮的好看极了。我忍不住的说：“啊，妈妈好漂亮!”

姐姐有一头乌黑发亮的头发，还有一双好看的眼睛，姐姐爱玩电脑，每次见到电脑姐姐都兴奋不已。记得那一次姐姐买了一台笔记本电脑，姐姐一整天都没有离开电脑一下，姐姐就是一个电脑迷。

我的性格活泼，爱好是美术，而且我也很淘气。那一次，我的好朋友过生日，我一看到蛋糕，脑子里就有了主意。我从蛋糕上抹了点奶油，就往我的好朋友脸上抹，不一会儿她的脸就被我抹成了小丑。

这就是我的家庭，这就是我幸福而又美满的家庭!

A hot day

Today is very hot,the heightest temperature reached to 40 degree.So I

stayed at home all the day.I recited english text this morning,after I finished

my homework,I prepared lunch for my families.I cooked egg-fried rice for

lunch,because there was eggs in the fridge only and I didnt want to go out

shopping for the hot weather.In the afternoon,I slept half of the day.It was

time to cook dinner when I wake up.It was a boring day,I hate hot weather.

参考翻译

炎热的一天

今天天气非常地热，最高温度达到40度，所以我一整天都呆在家里。早上我被英语文章。完成了家庭作业之后，我就为全家人准备午餐。我做了鸡蛋炒饭作为午餐，因为冰箱里只有鸡蛋，并且由于天气热我不想出去购物。下午，我睡了大半天。当我醒来的时候就已经是做晚饭的时间了。这是非常无聊的一天，我讨厌炎热的天气。

How can I help others

Last month， our school hold an activity about" learn from uncle Lei feng".As we all known， Lei feng devoted his whole life to helping others.but he gets lots of respects. He give us a good example.we should learn from him to help others. We can feel good when we help others.

How can I help others. I think I can do lots of things. For example， I can help my classmates with their study and other things. I can give my seat to the old people on bus. And I can sent money or clothes to help the poor children. I can also volunteer to take care of the old people on weekends.

Everyone may have troubles in his life. Helping others is very important in our life. I think we can get much when we help the people around us.And our world will become more and more beautiful.

学习建议：

I think you must listen carefully and be active in class.

Speak English as much as possible.

Dont be afraid of making mistakes.

Youd better read widely and learn some important parts by heart. You should practice writing often.

Of course there are many other ways.

You can also see English films, learn to sing English songs or make friends with foreigners.

They are all very helpful.

Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.

Im sure youll learn English well.

My holiday

The summer holiday is coming.

I will go to / am going to Hainan with my parents for a holiday.

My father has been there, but my mother and I havent been there yet.

We plan to go there by plane.

Well go to Sanya first after we get to Hainan.

Sanya is very beautiful. Its famous for “Tianya Haijiao”.

Well go to see the sea as soon as we arrive at the hotel at the seaside. Because I like the sea very much.

If the weather is fine/ nice, well go diving.

It must be exciting.

We can spend all day on the beach, and swim or have a walk. Well go shopping before we leave Hainan.

I think there are many things to see and to eat there.

I m looking forward to going there.

I cant wait!

I believe I must spend a perfect holiday!

My holiday

The summer holiday is coming.

I will go to Hainan with my parents for a four days holiday. We will go to Sanya which is a very beautiful city in hainan. First, we are going to the beach to swim.

And when we are tired, we will sit on the beach to enjoy the beautiful scene.

Second, we will go to visit other interesting places.

We will take many photos there. Finally, we will taste some delicious food.

I think our holiday will be an interesting experience.

亲爱的小明，

我很高兴收到你的信。

在你的信你问我如何学好英语。

我认为你必须认真听取，并在课堂上活跃。

尽可能讲英语。

不要怕犯错误。

你最好广泛阅读和背诵一些重要的部分。你应该经常练习写作。 当然还有很多其他的方式。 您还可以看到英语电影，学唱英文歌曲或跟外国人交朋友。 他们都是非常有益的。

世上无难事，如果你把你的心。

我敢肯定你会学好英语。

我的假期暑假即将到来。

我会去/我会与海南度假我的父母。

我父亲一直在那里，但我母亲和我还没有去过那里。

我们计划乘飞机去那里。

我们将去三亚后，我们第一次到海南。

三亚是非常美丽。它提出的“天涯海角著名的”。

我们会去看海，当我们在海边在抵达酒店。因为我很喜欢大海。

如果天气好/很好，我们会去潜水。

它必须是激动人心的。

我们可以整天在海滩上，和游泳或散步。

我们一起去购物，才离开海南。

我觉得有很多东西可看，吃那里。

我米期待着去那里。

我不能等待！

我认为我必须花一个完美的假期！

我的假期

暑假即将到来。

我将前往海南与4天假期，我的父母。

我们将去三亚是海南一个非常美丽的城市。

首先，我们会去海边游泳。

当我们累了，我们会坐在海滩上欣赏美景。

第二，我们会去参观其他有趣的地方。

我们将采取有许多照片。最后，我们将品尝美味的食物。 我觉得我们的假期将是一个有趣的经历。

我们都邻国。好邻居胜过远亲。这是共同的，我们可能会与遇到困难.当我们好邻居，他们将永远来帮助您。邻国应该在与对方。

我的邻居，有一个女儿。我们是同龄，但我们不要? T研究在同一所学校。晚上我们总是一起做功课。她擅长数学，我很擅长英语。因此，我们经常互相帮助来自作文

Good Neighbours

We all have neighbours. A good neighbour is better than a distant relative. It is common that we may meet with difficulties.When we have igood neighbours, they will always come to help you. Neighbours should get on well with each other.

My neighbour has a daughter. We are of the same age but we don~t study in the same school. In the evening we always do homework together. She is good at maths and I am good at English. So we often help each other.

When I got home, it was very dark. Why? There is no electric. Every year in

Beijing, there is lack of electric to supply. Because there are a lot of

factories. And it is very cold in winter. So the government decided: supply

electric to resident and the factories must stop working. My house is in the

manufacturing district. I was unlucky. It was very cold. So my father use the

electric making machine to make electric. Oh! What a unlucky winter!

当我回到家，这是非常黑暗。为什么呢?没有电。每年在北京，还有就是缺少电力供应。因为有很多工厂。这是非常寒冷的冬天。因此，政府决定：供应电对居民和工厂必须停止工作。我的房子是在生产区。我是不幸的。这是非常寒冷。所以，我的父亲用途电制造的机器使电。哦!什么是倒霉的冬天!

今年最难忘的就是元宵节了，那天的天气不怎么好，但街上人山人海，大街小巷都挂着五颜六色的灯笼，真是美丽极了。

This year, the most memorable is the Lantern Festival, the day the weather

is not so good, but the streets are crowded with people, the streets are hung

colorful lanterns, it is beautiful.

我和爸爸、妈妈、姐姐、弟弟一起到了中山公园，中山公园的大门在工人叔叔和阿姨们的巧手下被彩灯和其他材料，装饰得特别漂亮。大门上挂着几百个火红的彩灯，就好像红红的太阳，带着微笑，欢迎每个朋友的到来。我们随着人群来到中山公园内，里面的彩灯更好看。我看到一个“美丽的城堡”，代表着美丽祖国的大好河山。还有的彩灯上是叔叔阿姨们用彩纸和其它材料做成的小，朋友在那里跳起了美丽的舞蹈。真让我看得眼花缭乱。

I and my father, mother, brother and sister went to Zhongshan Park,

Zhongshan Park door lights and other materials in the hands of workers and their

uncle aunt, decorated very beautiful. There are hundreds of red lights on the

gate, like the red sun, with a smile, welcome every friends arrival. We came to

Zhongshan Park with the crowds, and the lights were better. I saw a beautiful

castle “ ”, represents the beauty of the motherland beautiful rivers and

mountains of a country. There are lights on is the uncles and aunts with colored

paper and other materials made of small and beautiful dance friends there. It

really makes me look dizzy.

今年的元宵节，真是使我无法忘怀。

This years Lantern Festival is really something I cant forget.

My summer vacation

This years summer vacation, I so happy.

The summer vacation, I at home carefree get boring, until one day, my dance teacher told me that we are still in perfect order, dance dance of the class is rhythm feeling worse, if good rhythm, can go to the match in a couple of months.

Once I listen to, the game soon, then looking for right away. Ah! Where there is a plate to exercise good rhythm?

"Ah," I sighed. Suddenly remind of a computer. Yi? The computer can play MP3, isnt it? Ha ha! Some I le. I immediately opened up the computer, listening to music. I have heard for three weeks, finally recognized the lasting appeal. Turned out to be "dong man dong man" "dong man dong man" every first "dong" is "a" first "man" is "2" the second "dong" is "three" the second "man" is the "four". Rhythm is "1234, 1234" repeatedly, but want to use English.

I believe that as long as we work hard and have good grades.

Happy summer vacation, happy summer vacation, summer vacation without anxiety.

我的暑假

今年的暑假，我过的特别开心。

暑假，我在家闲得无聊，直到有一天，我的舞蹈老师告诉我，我们这个班舞蹈跳的还是井井有条，就是节奏感差些，要是节奏感好，过几个月就可以去比赛了。

我一听，马上就要比赛了，便马上到处找起来。啊!哪里有碟子让了锻炼好节奏感啊?

"哎"我叹了口气.突然想起电脑.咦?电脑不是可以播放MP3吗?呵呵!有的我乐了。我立即把电脑开起来，听曲子。我听了整整三个礼拜，终于听出了里面的韵味。原来是"咚哒哒咚哒哒""咚哒哒咚哒哒"每第一个"咚"就是"一"第一个"哒哒"就是"二"第二个"咚"就是"三"第二个"哒哒"就是"四"。节奏就是"一二三四，一二三四"重复不停的念，不过要用英文。

我相信，只要我们努力比拼，就一定会有好成绩的。

开心的暑假，快乐的暑假，没有忧虑的暑假。

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