从错误中学习英语作文附翻译（20篇）

俗话说千里之行始于足下。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为我最喜欢的活动，偏离了一项、课外活动这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher.

正 my father and my mother are both teachers.

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：我累了。这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：im tired.

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo.

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo.

误 the apples cheap. ill take some.

正 the apples are cheap. ill take some.

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

正 because of the heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting.

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father.

正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father.

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school.

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.

例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.

(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

误 when i get to the station the train leave.

正 when i got to the station the train had left.

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

[中考英语作文：十大常见错误分析

The sorrows of young werther is a German writer johann Wolfgang Goethe is one of the most famous masterpiece. Johann Wolfgang von Goethe, a German modern outstanding poets, writers and thinkers. The sorrows of young werther this epistolary novel written in first person, not only conveys the feudal system in Europe from the ancient to the capitalist system of excessive transformation period, the middle-aged and young generation to pursue "personality liberation", "emotional freedom", "return to nature of social status", "establishing equal relationship" between peoples strong desire, also illustrates the authors own distinct position. In 1774 published a novel has aroused strong repercussions, the whole of Europe an victor hot, Goethes hand revealed deep sleep in contemporary deeply excited all the secrets of the mind.

We can see victors image: tsing yi huang trousers and thin sensitive and sentimental. He kept the childlike innocence confronts the nature of his heart is bright and clean, like a deep stagnant water. He attaches great importance to the natural sincere feelings cherish his "heart is better than all other" Albert rational calm very unhappy. His love at first sight, for she had also because she is so innocent in manners do keep a girl lovely nature. Green, in the heart of victor is completely natural and beautiful his love for her is reached the degree of "forgetting"!

She is just victor lover? She is the embodiment of victor all ideal almost representative of beauty. When victors ideal in reality nothing is near, he met and she became his heart clings to object and shelter. His love for her is hot, unselfish, has deviated from the true meaning of love, because it is a kind of irrational and abnormal love, is not the final result of the destruction of others is to destroy them. Rather than his love and his love is his one thousand to from the conquest of the opposite sex to prove the existence of self value. Because of this, in the face of rational barriers victor heart will have such a complicated entanglements and deep pain. He hovered between reality and green, and the fact that, after all, not a lover and victor becomes more crazy. But he lost his friend victor all hope in life, the passion of youth, the courage of life is destroyed by a thus only to an extreme way -- suicide to show resistance of reality. Schiller profoundly analyzes the victors tragedy, he said: "a person with a warm feelings to hug an ideal and escape from reality in order to pursue the infinite reality; he constantly seek him in his outside forever in his own destruction in the nature of things; he felt his own dream is the only reality of his own experience is permanent; he sees their presence as bound shall crush it in order to further the absolute reality."

In the writers love is the greatest hero for it can cling to life; In the writers love is the small only is a tool for personality liberation and realize self value. The protagonist in the novel the continuous and endless memories, fierce inner conflict, also bitter sweet in love feeling, only when he was unable to get a beloved is cruel and gloomy beauty. The so-called vigorous love and heart full of tears, is actually a thick young feelings and deep that must not turn dark young sorrow. Youth it is destined to always full of unease and restlessness, too many boiling blood to be cathartic for ideal can be without any hesitation.

The heroine in the sorrows of young werther self-consciousness is quite strong. Youth and beauty are what he ardently desire. Born for freedom, he died for freedom, he would rather die than to give up his ideal and pursuit. However the value goal of how to implement? Will not, of course, through the practice of reforming society, we have not such ideological awareness, the hero of them, the fate of the palm is only one are pieces of quiet. So they can only choose to make love till death do it the end of time and regret, then maybe can express in the heart of anguish? In this sense it is not only their personal tragedy, also is the tragedy of The Times.

参考翻译：

少年维特之烦恼是德国作者约翰·沃尔夫冈·歌德最著名的代表作之一。歌德是德国近代杰出的诗人、作家和思想家。少年维特之烦恼这部以第一人称写就的书信体小说，不仅传达了欧洲从古老的封建制度向资本主义制度过度的转型时期，中青年一代追求“个性解放”、“感情自由”、“恢复自然的社会状态”、“建立平等的人与人之间的关系”的强烈愿望，也阐明了作者自身鲜明的立场。1774年小说一发表便引起了强烈的反响，整个欧洲掀起了一阵维特热，歌德的手揭开了沉睡在当代的深深激动着的心灵里的一切秘密。

我们可以想见维特的形象：青衣黄裤清秀而瘦弱敏感而多情。他保持了童真的本性面对世界时他的心明净如一泓清水。他重视自然真诚的感情珍视他的“心胜于其它一切”对阿尔伯特似的理智冷静的人非常不满。他对绿蒂的一见钟情、一往情深也正是因为她如此天真无邪在举止行事中保持了一个少女可爱的自然本性。绿蒂在维特的心中完全就是自然与美的化身他对她的爱简直达到了“忘我”的程度!

绿蒂难道仅仅是维特的恋人?她几乎是维特全部理想的化身美的代表。当维特的理想在现实中无所依傍的时候，他遇见了绿蒂，绿蒂成为了他心灵的攀附对象和避难所。他对她的爱虽是炽热的、忘我的，却已偏离了爱的真义，因为这是一种非理性的、变态的爱，最后的结果不是毁灭他人就是毁灭自己。与其说他爱的是绿蒂，不如说他爱的是他自己千方百计地要从对异性的征服中证明自我存在的价值。正因为如此，在理性的藩篱面前维特的内心才会产生如此复杂的纠葛和深沉的痛苦。他在现实与绿蒂之间徘徊而终究得不到爱人的事实又使维特变得愈加疯狂。最终他还是失去了绿蒂维特全部的人生希望、青春的热情、生活的勇气都被一道摧毁从而只得以极端的方式——自杀来表露对现实的反抗。席勒深刻地分析了维特的悲剧他说：“一个人物以热烈的感情拥抱一个理想并且逃避现实以便追求非现实的无限;他不断地在他身外寻求他永远在他自己的天性中所破坏的东西;他觉得他自己的梦想才是唯一现实的东西他自己的经验无非是永久的束缚;他把自己的存在看作是束 缚应当把它粉碎以便深入绝对的现实。”

在作家的笔下爱情是伟大的主人公为它生可以死死可以生;在作家的笔下爱情又是渺小的只不过是承载个性解放和实现自我价值的工具。小说里主人公那绵绵无尽的情思、激烈的内心冲突、亦苦亦甜的恋爱感受，只有在他无法得到心上人时才具有残酷而无望的美的意味。所谓轰轰烈烈的爱情与充满血泪的心路，事实上是浓得化不开的年少情愫与深黯的少年悲戚。青春向来就注定充满不安和躁动，太多沸腾的热血亟待宣泄为理想献身可以无半点犹疑。

在少年维特之烦恼中主人公的自我意识相当强烈。青春和美都是他热切向往的东西。他为自由而生，为自由而死，他宁死也不愿放弃自己的理想和追求。然而这种价值目标如何实现呢?当然不可能通过改造社会的实践，我们的主人公还没有这样的思想觉悟，他们，在命运的掌心里只能是一枚渺续安静的棋子。因此他们只能选择爱爱它个地老天荒、至死不悔，这样或许能抒发心中的苦闷?在这个意义上说这不仅仅是他们个人的悲剧，也是整个时代的悲剧。

[少年维特之烦恼英语读后感及翻译

I have a friend. Her name is Candy. She is twelve year old. She has black and short hair. She has a little mouth, two big eyes. She is so cute. Her mom and dad love her. She has a happy family. Her friends like her too, So she’s happy every day.

She is a student of Yi Zong Fu Xiao. She is in Class Four Grade Six. She studies very hard. English is her favourite subject. She likes to speak English. She can speak English very well now. She always says “Learn by doing.” So she thinks speaking is very important in learning English.

We are very busy studying when we are in school. But on the weekend, we are free. We often do homework together on Saturdays. After that, we can watch TV at home. Sometimes, we play games. We have the same hobbies. She likes riding bikes and watching TV and so do I. Her favourite sport is swimming. She’s very good at it. She often teaches me how to swim in summer.

I like her very much. I am lucky to be her friend.

我有一个朋友。她的名字是糖果。她是十二岁。她有黑色的短头发。她有一个小嘴巴，两只大眼睛。她是如此的可爱。她的妈妈和爸爸爱她。她有一个幸福的家庭。她的朋友们也喜欢她，所以她快乐每一天。

她是一个医宗附小学生。她是六年级四班。她学习很努力。英语是她最喜欢的科目。她喜欢说英语。她英语讲得很好了。她总是说“做中学”。所以她认为说话是非常重要的学习英语。

我们都很忙，当我们在学校学习。但在周末，我们是自由的。我们常常一起做家庭作业，星期六。在那之后，我们可以在家看电视。有时，我们玩游戏。我们有相同的爱好。她喜欢骑自行车和看电视等，也是她最喜欢的运动是游泳。她很擅长。她经常教我如何在夏天游泳。

我非常喜欢她。我很幸运能成为她的朋友。

[我的朋友英语作文以及翻译

Li Ming is my classmate, he is always the best student in my class. The

teachers speak highly of him all the time. I wondered how he can do so well, so

I talked to him. He told me that he kept reading books every hour a day, if he

was busy, he would do it before sleeping. I thought about most of us, we could’t

wait to play computer games after we finished the homework. I could find

something was different between Li Ming and other students, now I understand

why, reading the books broadens his vision and enriches his mind, helping him to

be a better man. So I make up my mind to keep reading.

李明是我的同学,他总是班上最好的学生。老师赞扬他。我想知道他如何能做的那么好,所以我和他聊天。他告诉我他一直每天读书一个小时,如果他很忙,他也会在睡觉前看。我想对大多数人来说,我们无法等到完成作业后再去玩电脑游戏。我能找到李明和其他学生之间不一样的东西,现在我明白为什么,阅读书籍开阔了他的视野,丰富了他的思想,帮助他成为一个更好的人。所以我下决心保持阅读。

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★小学英语日记带翻译★

★儿童节英语日记★

Today, my family go to the zoo. We go there by car, and we arrive there at

around 3 p.m. I see many kinds of animals in the zoo, like dog, elephant, rabbit

and giraffe. They are so cute. I watch them for a long time. At around 6 p.m, we

go back home. This trip is interesting.

今天，我们一家去了动物园。我们坐小汽车去的，下午3点左右到达了那里。在动物园里我看到了好多种动物，比如小狗，大象，兔子还有长颈鹿。它们很可爱。我观察它们很长时间。在下午6点左右，我们回到了家。这次旅行真有趣。

Improve our environment

Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life . What should we do to improve our environment ?

We should plant more trees . And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers , lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin . Don’t spit in public places . Don’t draw on public walls . It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy .

良好的环境能使人觉得愉快。改善环境，使我们的生活。我们应该做什么来改善我们的环境?

我们应该种更多的树。我们应该阻止那些工厂废水流入河流，湖泊和田野。每当我们看到地上的垃圾，我们应该把它捡起来扔到垃圾桶。不要在公共场所吐痰。不要在公共墙上画。这是我们的职责，保持地球的干净和整洁的。

Its very important to keep healthy.

I think we should have healthy diet every day and eat proper food. We shouldnt eat junk food because it is bad for our health. Drink water and milk as often as possible. Milk is a great drink that can give us more calcium that make our bones much stronger.

Dont eat too much because it will make you uncomfortable and fat. Dont spend too much time watching TV, DVDs and Videos or using computers. Its good to take more exercise such as basketball, bike riding , swimming and so on. Follow these and you can be healthy.

保持健康是非常重要的。

我认为我们每天都应该有健康的饮食,吃适当的食物。我们不应该吃垃圾食品,因为它对我们的健康有害。尽可能多的喝水和牛奶。牛奶是一种伟大的饮料,可以给我们更多的钙,使我们的骨骼更强。

不要吃太多,因为它会让你不舒服和脂肪。别花太多时间看电视、dvd和视频或者使用电脑。很好多加锻炼,如篮球、骑自行车、游泳等等。遵循这些,你可以很健康。

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello,everyone. Im Li Hua. Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.

In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

Thank you for your listening!

我们能为环境做些什么

你好，每个人都。我是李华。很高兴谈论我们能为环境做些什么，我想我们每个人都可以做一点点来帮助解决这个问题。

我们能做的第一件事就是在用布袋代替塑料袋，当我们去购物。它有助于保护环境。我们能做的第二件事是尽可能重复使用旧课本可以。我们也应该永远不会忘记关灯，当我们离开教室时，为了节省能源。更重要的是，它会更好，如果我们步行或骑自行车上学。我们应该尽最大努力减少污染和浪费。

事实上，即使是最简单的日常活动也能对环境产生很大的差异。我相信我们可以让世界变得更美好的生活。

谢谢你的倾听!

What a fine day today !I’m very happy in this fine day 。 Beaucse today I don’t have to do my homework and I can play with my good friends 。There is lots of snow now ，so we make a sonw man 。That’s really intersting 。We play with snow to about 6:30 。Of couse I must go home now。 What a fan day !翻译：多么好的天气阿！在这样的好天气里我十分高兴，因为这天我不用写作业，并且能够和朋友们出去玩。那里此刻有很多雪，所以我们堆了一个雪人。那真的很搞笑。我们玩雪，一向到晚上6：30。当然此刻我务必回家了。 多么搞笑的一天啊！

冬天来了，你喜欢冬天的雪吗？下面是小编整理的相关内容，欢迎大家阅读参考！英语作文季冬季带翻译范文一

In winter, is a very beautiful season. It is not like spring gentleness, also is not as hot as summer, more dont like autumn sunshine is bright, but winter is charming.

You look carefully, a piece of green in the field, the greenhouse rows, patches, melon and fruit garden, farmers uncle in sowing and reaping. Master cheng yen, street traffic. Roadside Holly still carried the head and spine straight. Various snacks: dumplings, fans, Fried rice... Dazzle you. Open air conditioning, in the supermarket variety: green vegetables, dumplings, fruits, drinks... Its everything. Especially after a heavy snow, houses, land, crops, as with a layer of silver dress. The wind blows, snow or satisfied. Street like a jade belt into the distance, fall the leaves of the branches full of fluffy silver bar, winter and summer evergreen pine tree, filled with fluffy snowballs, like the earth covered with a layer of blanket. I and friends in the snow, some snowball, some make a snowman, snowball fights, enjoy it.

I love winter, love this beautiful scenery!

冬天，是一个十分美丽的季节。它不像春天那样的温柔，也不像夏天一样火热，更不像秋天一样阳光灿烂，但冬天却是迷人的。

你仔细望去，田野里一片碧绿，温棚一排排、一片片，瓜果满园，农民伯伯在播种着、收获着。大街上人来人往，车水马龙。路边的冬青依然那样抬着头、挺直腰。小吃多种多样：水饺、粉丝、炒饭……让你眼花缭乱。超市里空调开放，品种丰富：青菜、水饺、水果、饮料……真是应有尽有。特别是一场大雪过后，房屋、地上、庄稼像披上一层银色的衣裳。风一吹，雪花飘飘扬扬。马路像一条玉带伸向远方，落了叶的树枝上挂满了毛茸茸的银条，冬夏常青的松柏树上，堆满了蓬松的雪球，大地像铺上了一层毛毯。我和小伙伴们在雪地里，有的滚雪球，有的堆雪人，有的打雪仗，玩得开心极了。

我爱冬天，更爱这美丽的景色! 英语作文季冬季带翻译范文二

The weather in winter is a set of all the phenomena in a given atmosphere at a given time. It also includes interactions with the hydrosphere. The term usually refers to the activity of these phenomena over short periods (hours or days), as opposed to the term climate, which refers to the average atmospheric conditions over longer periods of time. When used without qualification, weather" is understood to be the weather of Earth.

Winter is cold. Let’s play the snowball and make snowman. The snowman is big . I like to play snowball. I am on the snow. The snow is cold. I have a scarf and coat. So I am not cold. I like the Christmas. Because I can see santa clus in Christmas . Christmas tree is beautiful. The presents are on the Christmas tree. I like winter. Do you like winter?

冬天的天气是一组给定的大气中的所有现象在给定的时间。它还包括与水圈的交互。这个术语通常指的是这些现象的活动在短时间(几小时或几天),而不是气候这个词,指的是在更长时间的平均大气状况。使用时没有资格,天气”被认为是地球的天气。

冬天是寒冷的。让我们玩雪球,使雪人。雪人是大的。我喜欢玩雪球。我在雪地上。雪是冷的。我有一条围巾和外套。所以我不冷。我喜欢圣诞节。因为我可以看到圣诞老人俱乐部在圣诞节。圣诞树是美丽的。礼物在圣诞树上。我喜欢冬天。你喜欢冬天吗?

I have a good mother, mother love me, I love my mother.

My mother more than 30 years old, short, round face has a pair of bright big eyes, small mouth, a small nose, a smile... Ha ha, I want to let my mother has a pair of small dimples, but she didnt, but smile still look good.

I have a good mother, because she is very concerned about my study. Since the first grade, my study became a mothers care. Come home from school every day, the mother of control is the first thing I remember homework carefully check, if there is leakage problem, she would let me fill in time; If there are any errors, she would explain for me and help me to correct them. My position is not correct to hold pen, mother sat by my side, see me stroke at a writing, if not correct, mother gave me immediately correct, until I correct.

I have a good mother, because she is very concerned about the growth of the I. Holidays, mother took me to go swimming. The pool, I how also learn cant, mom worried, do demonstration for me. She breaststroke, freestyle, swim very fast. I really envy, against the mother shouted: "mom, teach me." Then I slowly learned how to swim, mother happy to touch my head and said: "good exercise to tall."

This is my mother, a care for my mother. I want to study well, return my mothers love for me.

我有一个好妈妈，妈妈爱我，我爱妈妈。

我的妈妈三十多岁，个头不高，圆圆的脸上有一双明亮的大眼睛，小嘴巴，小鼻子，一笑……呵呵，我想让妈妈有一对小酒窝，可她没有，但是笑起来还是很好看。

我有一个好妈妈，因为她很关心我的学习。自从上了一年级，我的学习就成了妈妈最牵挂的事。每天放学回家，妈妈第一件事就是对照我的记作业本认真检查，如果有漏题，她一定会让我及时补上;如果有错误，她一定会为我讲解，帮助我改正。我的握笔姿势不正确，妈妈就坐在我身边，看我一笔一划地书写，如果不端正了，妈妈马上给我纠正，直到我正确。

我有一个好妈妈，因为她很关心我的成长。假日里，妈妈带我去游泳。泳池里，我怎么也学不会，妈妈着急了，为我做示范。她一会儿蛙泳，一会儿自由泳，游得可快了。我真是羡慕，对着妈妈喊：“妈妈，教教我。”后来我慢慢学会了游泳，妈妈高兴地摸着我的头说：“锻炼好身体，才能长得高。”

这就是我的妈妈，一个关心爱护我的好妈妈。我要好好学习，回报妈妈对我的爱。

The drawing portrays a tragic scene in which people are still polluting and leaving about the rubbish. Lots people show bad manners , entirely indifferent to the environment of the world we are living in.

The aim of the painter is assailing the serious environmental problem——pollution, for which several factors are responsible. Population as by far increased, our country is marked by the surpassing growth of economy; living standards are high up. But the environment leaves much to be regretted.

How miserable it is to live in such an environment! Who is to blame for the tragic？ Everybody should be responsible. we must prevent garbage from being thrown away into rivers, ponds, and lakes. With the water pollution going on someday we shall die with no water to drink at all. The scenery spots waiting to be re-beautified. Wild realization of what is our environment responsibility should be awakend. The must be exercises of our authority over the tourists to punish them sternly when they are found defiling our nature. Only in this way may can we cure the problems drastically, and regain perfect environment to live in.

这幅图画描绘了一幅悲惨的景象，人们仍在污染和留下垃圾。许多人表现不好的举止，对我们生活的世界环境漠不关心。

画家的目的犯了严重的环境问题——环境污染，所负责的几个因素。人口比我国的人口增长更为显著，我国的经济增长率明显超过了国民经济的增长，生活水平也很高。但是环境让许多遗憾。

生活在这样的环境中是多么的可悲！谁是谁的悲剧？每个人都应该负责。我们必须防止垃圾被扔进河里，池塘，湖泊。有一天我们会死，没有水喝的水污染。景点等待重新美化。我们的环境责任是什么野生的实现应该唤醒。必须锻炼我们的权力者的严厉惩罚他们，当他们发现玷污我们的本性。只有这样，我们才能彻底治愈这些问题，重新获得理想的生存环境。

[ 环境污染英语作文带翻译

First of all, let me tell you a true event. That is my grandpa with me by boat from yichang to three gorges occurs when one thing.

We all got up that morning, the people on board, is preparing to play water to wash shu. But the faucet for half a day on the boat were down only a few drops of water, one asked, originally is the boat ran out of water! So, we only have stood in long lines, slowly, etc. Although I looked at the ship, the ship under a stream of water, but no one would like to use it. Because the water is so dirty, so HunHuang, who dare to use? Line only slowly, slowly, etc!

Although in the high-speed development of science and technology nowadays, but the impact on our environment. Reduced river pollution, air pollution, the trees, the increasing of the desert... All this is all thanks to the human! Countries while in value, although the world in value, environmental protection, what and how much these things figure up attention? In my opinion, is rare. Although countries in so to speak, but whats the use of words and not of deeds? Did just a few, too! Dont grab from main reason! You see, the Yellow River water is not still contaminated? So the factory does not still pollute the atmosphere? Should grasp, starts from the quality of people, quality grab, but the country and the world to do so? No! Just like to do even when you are done. In the polluted environment is not so?

Animals are extinct, flash floods in explosion, dust storms still exist... It fully shows the environmental pollution! Countries will only go to disaster relief, instead of simply grabbed, will only go to disaster relief, whats the use? Dont all kinds of disaster is still in? We should like lu xun. He had become a is in order to save the Chinese, and he found that it will not solve the fundamental, so he became a writer, to save the people of the spirit. Because this is the fundamental! So, we as the master of the 21st century, you should understand, what is the root of the damage to the environment, from the point to solve it. Work hard -- the 21st century we!

首先，我先给大家讲一个真实的事件。那是我随我的外公从宜昌坐船前往三峡时发生的一件事。

那天早晨，船上的人都起来了，正准备打水洗淑。可是船上的水龙头半天也只下来几滴水，一询问，原来是船上的水用完了!所以，大家只有排着长长的队伍，慢慢的等。我望着船下，船下虽然有着流不尽的江水，但却没有一个人愿意来使用它。因为江水太脏了，是那么的浑黄，又有谁敢去使用呢?只有慢慢的排队，慢慢的等!

如今科技虽然在高速发展，但这影响到了我们的环境。河流污染，大气污染，树木的减少，沙漠的增多……这一切的一切都是拜人类所赐!国家虽然在重视，世界虽然在重视，什么环境保护日，这些事又有多少人影起了注意呢?在我看来，是极少的。国家虽然在这么说，可是光说不做又有什么用呢?做了也只是少数罢了!根本没有从主要原因抓起!你看，黄河的水不是还在被污染吗?工厂不照样还在污染大气吗?抓，就应该从小抓起，从人们的素质，品质抓起，可是国家乃至世界这么做了吗?没有!即使做了也只是做样子罢了。环境不是照样还在被污染吗?

动物还在灭绝，山洪还在爆发，沙尘暴照样存在……这都充分说明了环境还在污染!国家只会去赈灾，而不去根本抓起，只会去赈灾，这又有什么用呢?各种灾难不还是照样在发生吗?我们应该像鲁迅一样。他当初从医是为了拯救中国人，而他发现，这解决不了根本，所以，他当了作家，去拯救人们的精神。因为这就是根本!所以，我们作为21世纪的小主人，就应该明白，什么是破坏环境的根本，从要点去解决它。努力吧――21世纪的我们!

My summer holiday, I will

Looking forward, looking forward to, the annual summer vacation is finally here!

I cheerfully summer of a better life for their design: first of all, I will read many books, Yang hongying, zheng yuanjie, I want to once see a enough; Also, I want to exercise my body well, swimming, playing, ride a bike, I want to be in a happy movement minus my whole body fat...

But, mother is pushing a boring summer vacation plan to me: morning, learn aoshu; In the afternoon, learn, English writing; In the evening, summer vacation homework. Oh my god! Where this is leisurely summer vacation, this is clearly a new summer class!

I protest! My summer holiday, I decide! My mother schedule discontentedly, write a few words - "I want to happy! I want to relax!"

Yes, I want to learn, also want to play, my summer vacation must is up to me.

我的暑假我作主

盼望着、盼望着，一年一度的暑假终于到了!

我兴致勃勃地为自己设计暑期的美好生活：首先，我要读很多课外书，杨红樱的、郑渊洁的，我要一次看个够;还有，我要好好锻炼我的身体，游泳、打球、骑自行车，我要在快乐的运动中减去我的一身肥肉……

可是，妈妈却把一份令人生厌的暑假计划推给我：上午，学奥数;下午，学写作、英语;晚上，做暑假作业。天哪!这哪里是悠闲的暑假，这分明是一所新开的暑假课堂!

我抗议!我的暑假我作主!我不满地拿过妈妈的计划表，在上面写上几个大字——“我要快乐!我要放松!”

是的，我要学习，也要玩，我的暑假必须由我作主。

Today is my birthday and Im so excited about it. In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said, "Today is my birthday, dont forget it!" At school, I got many gifts and cards from my classmates and had a lot of fun. But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.

When it was time to leave school I couldnt wait to go home. When I open the door, there wasnt anybody in the house. There was only a note that said, "Coming home late tonight,mum and dad. "I try to call them but there was no answer.I was so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be! I was so sad that I couldnt eat anything. I just did my homework and waited for them.

And then,things changed completely. It was about time for dinner, my mother called and told me to go to the restanrant near our house. When I got there I couldnt believed my eyes. Everybody was there:my parents,my relatives, my friends and even my classmates. There was so many gifts and a big cake. What a surprising birthday party! We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever.

今天是我的生日，我很兴奋。早上我把一张纸条放在桌子上对我的妈妈说，“今天是我的生日，别忘了它！”在学校里，我从我的同学那得到了许多礼物和卡片,我很开心。但我仍然期待放学后的生日晚会。

当放学的时候，我迫不及待的想回家。当我打开门的时候，没有人在房子里。只有一张纸条，说，“今晚会晚回家，妈妈和爸爸。”我试着打电话给他们，但没有人回答。我很震惊，他们忘了我的生日？怎么会是这样！我伤心的我不能吃下任何东西。我只是做了我的家庭作业，等他们。

然后，事情发生了变化。这是吃晚饭的时间了，我的母亲打电话告诉我去我家附近的餐馆。当我到那里的时候，我不能相信我的眼睛。大家都在那儿：我的父母，我的亲人，我的朋友和我的同学。有那么多的礼物和大蛋糕。多么令人惊喜的生日派对！我们都很开心，这是最好的生日晚会。

今天是一年一度的除夕。中国人的传统习俗一般都是在这天晚上只吃饺子，我家却年年做“年夜大餐”。看，今年的年夜饭多么丰盛呀！

Today is the annual New Years Eve. The traditional Chinese custom is usually only to eat dumplings on this night, but my family is doing &ldquo every year; the big meal ” Look, what a great meal this year!

下午四点多，我们全家便开始忙碌的工作起来。第一种食物当然还是饺子，它毕竟是传统食物，给它个排老一的机会。和面、拌馅、包饺子我们分工细致，这饺子香不香可就在这和面、拌馅上。馅儿拌好了吃起来香，面和好了薄皮大馅儿更是让人舍不得放嘴呀。当然这包饺子也很重要哟！如果包的不美观谁都不爱吃哟，所以包饺子也是一门学问滴。爸妈把面、馅儿都准备好了，该我大显身手了。我左手捏一个，右手拿一个 ，一会儿，一个个小贝壳似的饺子就呈现在我眼前。第一道工序做完，该到下一步了——做满汉全席。

More than four in the afternoon, our family began to work in a busy way. The first kind of food, of course, is a dumpling. Its a traditional food after all, giving it an opportunity to get older. With the noodles, the stuffing and the dumplings, we have a fine division of labor. The dumplings are not fragrant on the noodles and the stuffing. The stuffing mix good tastes fragrant, a large stuffing thin surface and good people are more reluctant to put his mouth. Of course, this bag of dumplings is also very important! If the package is not beautiful, everyone does not love to eat, so it is also a school of learning. The parents in the face, with all ready, I the display skills to the full. I pinched one in my left hand and one in the right hand. In a moment, a small shell like dumpling was present in my eyes. Finish the first step, the next step of — — do manhanquanxi.

妈妈准备了近十几种菜———鸡鸭鱼肉样样齐全，还有各种青菜。快看，我家的烹饪大师——“李大厨”（本人的妈妈）来了。只见她右手拿着炒锅，左手拿着勺子，走进了厨房。先炒蒜苔，后炒木耳，最后炒银耳。顿时，厨房里传出噼噼啪啪的爆炒声，同时也飘散出了炒菜了清香。屋外也想起了噼里啪啦的鞭炮声，空气里弥漫上了火药的气息。屋里屋外这热闹的景象混合在一起，真有一番过年的景象。妈妈把各种各样的肉变着花样做出各种各样的菜。我还给这些凉菜、热菜分别取了好听的名字：百花争艳、芙蓉水上漂、莲子鸡汤、水果沙拉……光听这些名字你肯定也早就口水流了三千尺吧！

Mother prepared more than a dozen kinds of vegetables — — — chicken and duck fish meat samples complete, and all kinds of green vegetables. Look, my master culinary master — — “ chef Lee ” (my mother) come. She saw her right hand with a frying pan, a spoon in her left hand, and she walked into the kitchen. First fried garlic, stir fry after, finally fried tremella. Suddenly heard the sound of crackling, stir in the kitchen, but also have a cooking fragrance. The house was also reminded of the crackling sound of firecrackers, the air was the smell of gunpowder. The bustling scene outside the house was mixed, and there was a real picture of the new year. Mama made all kinds of dishes by changing all kinds of meat. I returned to the cold and hot dishes are a good name: floating on the water, a hundred flowers contend in beauty and the lotus lotus seed soup, Fresh Fruit Salad … … listen to these names you must also have three thousand feet of it flow slobber!

终于等到了开饭，一盘盘色香味俱全、香喷喷的饭菜端上桌来，我看得眼花缭乱。开饭喽！我狼吞虎咽的把这美味佳肴直往嘴里塞，吃了一个圆溜溜的小肚子。妈妈把果汁和红酒拿出来，倒在高脚杯里。这是我们每年必备的一个节目———新年祝愿（每年的年夜饭前我们都要把自己认为最好的祝愿送给家人）。今年还是我第一个上场，我端起酒杯祝愿爸爸和妈妈———寿比南山，笑口常开，工作顺利。爸爸妈妈也把他们的祝愿送给了我，祝我身体健康天天好心情。然后我们端起酒杯，“干杯”！我们的家真是一个温馨和睦的家庭，我爱我家。

Wait until the last dinner, a few color aroma and taste, delicious food on the table, I see dazzling. Dinner! I wolfed down the food it straight into his mouth, eat a round belly. Mom take out the fruit juice and wine, pour in the goblet. This is our annual program — — — new years greetings. We must give our best wishes to our families before the annual meal. This is my first play, I wish mom and Dad took up his glass of — — — longevity, happiness, work smoothly. Mom and dad gave me their wishes, and I wish me good health every day. Then we put up a glass, “ ”! Our home is really a warm and harmonious family, and I love my family.

我家不仅年夜大餐丰盛，家庭也那么幸福，我既为有一个会做美食的的妈妈感到骄傲，也为有一个美满的家庭感到骄傲。

My family is not only a big meal, but also a happy family. I am proud of having a mother who can cook delicious food, and I am proud of having a happy family.

Bat falling upon the ground was caught by a Weasel, ofwhom he earnestly besought his life. The Weasel refused,saying, that he was by nature the enemy of all birds. TheBat assured him that he was not a bird, but a mouse, andthus saved his life.

Shortly afterwards the Bat again fellon the ground, and was carght by another Weasel, whom helikewise entreated not to eat him. The Weasel said that hehad a special hostility to mice. The Bat assured him thathe was not a mouse, but a bat; and thus a second timeescaped.It is wise to turn circumstances to good account.

一只蝙蝠坠落到地面上来，被一只鼠狼捉住了，蝙蝠哀求讨饶。鼠狼不答应，说它自己最爱和鸟类为敌。蝙蝠便证明它自己不是鸟，只是一只老鼠，因此鼠狼就放了它。

不久这只蝙蝠又坠落到地上来，被另一只鼠狼捉住，它同样地哀求讨饶。那鼠狼说它自己最恨老鼠，蝙蝠证明自己并不是老鼠，而是一只蝙蝠；因此，它第二次又安然地逃离危险了。随机应变乃聪明之举。

[少儿英语作文带翻译：蝙蝠和鼠狼

I have a best friend, we know each other when we are five years old, now we talk about everything. But sometimes we will have the argument, none of us want to give in first. We make a deal that the next day we will meet in a place every time, so we become good again. I cherish our friendship so much.

我有一个最好的朋友,我们彼此认识的时候是在我们五岁的时候,现在我们无所不谈。但有时我们会有争吵,谁也不想先屈服。我们达成协议,第二天我们会在一个地方见面,这样我们再次和好。我珍惜我们的友谊。

As long as everyone sacrificed a little love, the world will become a better future. We should love each other, the world will become better.

By my side everywhere people care for each other, which is a stranger to help me remember.

Nine years old that year summer vacation, I went to aunts house with two little cousin under 6 years old, only that thing happened.

I remember one day, I and several friends, two cousin when running in the back garden of an alley, saw a shabby umbrella. We looked curiously umbrella, playing a great, one by one to the other side of the umbrella. I are running forward, suddenly, a large stone stumbled me, me a stumble and fall down, a sharp and long thing cut my knee, I climbed up a look, and screamed; oh, my gosh! "A deep and thick wound is bleeding. Im nasty, I cry of pain, voice through several alley. Friend and cousin asked; what happened to you? We go to look for a person to come and save you. "I nodded. Aunt out busy and cant go to her. Is friend and cousin all have someone, neighbor aunt heard, saw I was bleeding knees, immediately turn out the medicine cabinet, carrying. She become a cabinet dig out a bottle of tincture of iodine, dip in with cotton, daub on my wound. Bullet, I looked at the aunt, her head sweat pour, return in mouth muttered; you is how to return a responsibility? Injuries like this is very serious... "I touched, gently said. thank you, aunt! "She is wound therapy for me, not to listen to me. In a short time, wound fully dressed. When I was about to thank aunt, she walked away, walked and said; you be careful next time, dont want a scar! "My tearful, others noisily said what, I also dont listen.

Later, my knee still left a scar, I will never forget the cold appearance, inner passion neighbor aunt of high character.

Out of the hand of our love, let us love each other.

只要人人都献出一点爱，世界将变成美好的未来。我们应该相互关爱，这个世界才会变的美好。

在我身边处处有人互相关爱，其中一位陌生人帮助我的是记忆深刻。

九岁那年的暑假，我去姑姑家带两个六岁以下的小表弟，才发生了那件事。

记得有一天，我和几位小伙伴、两个表弟在后花园的小巷奔跑时，看见了一把破烂不堪的雨伞。我们几个好奇地望望雨伞，一下玩性大发，一个接一个跳到伞的另一边去。我也正在向前跑，突然，一块大石头绊住了我，我一个踉跄，跌了下去，一根又尖又长的东西划伤了膝盖，我爬起来一看，惊呼;‘‘天啊!’’一条又深又粗的伤口正在不停地流血。我急了，疼痛难忍的我嚎啕大哭，声音穿过了好几条巷子。小伙伴和表弟问;‘‘你怎么样了?我们去找人来救你。’’我点了点头。姑姑出去忙了，不能求助于她。正在小伙伴和表弟满世界找人的时候，邻居阿姨闻声出来，一看见我正在淌血的膝盖，马上翻出医药箱，提着跑了过来。她从医药箱里翻出了一瓶碘酒，用棉花蘸一下，涂抹在我的伤口上。我咬咬牙，望了一下阿姨，她头上大汗满淋，嘴里还喃喃地说;‘‘你是怎么回事?伤成这样是很严重的……’’我感动了，轻轻地说;‘‘谢谢您，阿姨!’’她正在为我的伤口治疗，无心去听我的话。不一会儿，伤口完全包扎好了。我正要感谢阿姨时，她却走远了，边走边说;‘‘你下次小心点儿，希望别留下疤痕呀!’’我的眼泪夺眶而出，别人七嘴八舌地说些什么，我也听不进去了。

后来，我的膝盖上还是留了伤疤，我永远都不会忘记那位外表冷酷，内心热情的品德高尚的邻居阿姨。

伸出我们的友爱之手，让我们互相关爱。

Spring Festival is one of the traditional festivals in China. On the 30th day of the year, children should pay a New Years greetings to their elders. People want to be reunited with their loved ones and have a New Years eve dinner. To stay at home, watch "Spring Festival gala", while keeping watch; At 12 am, outside the home, the window, downstairs, firecrackers sound deafening, people set off firecrackers, completely intoxicated in the Spring Festival this festive season.

I spent the Spring Festival at my mother-in-laws house. In the evening, I watched the "Spring Festival gala" as usual, and when it was getting closer to 12, the host was counting down "10,9,8... 3,2,1. As the Numbers approached, the sound grew more and more slowly, and continued until 12 o clock. When the countdown is over, our house is busy! "Happy New Year! Chinese New Year! Youre one year older." Then our family went downstairs and set off fireworks. The other day, my uncle bought a lot of firecrackers. There is a gyro, a little bee, a pearl, a world, and a lot of names. The appearance of firecrackers also has many. Flower face, butterfly... Some of heaven and earth ring 20 hair, some of the world sounds 50, and there is another 100. Of all the firecrackers, the most striking is the sound of heaven and earth. Its about the same size as a small table. I can feed four or five people. It is also heavy and requires two or three adults to move. After a long wait, the other firecrackers were finally finished. Thats the beginning! "Knock! Pa! Bam! Pa! Bam! Pa! ...... "The voice was so loud that it was like a loud thunderclap of thunder.

Although I covered my ears, when the sound was too loud, I could hear it. In the last few rounds, "bam! Bam! Bam! Pa! Wow! The explosion of firework, like a flame, scattered all around. It was a magnificent sight! When I got home, my heart was still very long. Who will clean it up? Of course its my aunt and uncle. In order to make nanjing more beautiful, they would sacrifice the time of the New Year, to be honest, meticulous, meticulous and selfless. And are now on duty of the polices uncle aunts, they in order to make the safety of the citizens have a year, in every corner of the city of nanjing, dedicated to patrol the, thought of here, I entered the beautiful dreams...

春节是我国传统节日之一。在年30这天，小朋友们要给长辈拜年，拿红包；人们要和亲人团聚，吃年夜饭；更要在家，一边看“春节联欢晚会”，一边守岁；等到凌晨12点，家外，窗边，楼下，鞭炮声震耳欲聋，人们放着鞭炮，完全沉醉在春节这欢乐的节日中。

我是在婆婆家过的春节。晚上，我照旧在看“春节联欢晚会”，当离12点越来越近时，主持人进行倒计时“10，9，8……3，2，1。”随着数字的接近，声音越来越缓慢，一直延续着，直到12点。当倒计时数完时，我们家热闹起来了了！妈妈高兴的喊道：“过年啦！过年啦！你又长大了一岁。”接着，我们一家下楼放烟火。前几天，舅舅买了许多鞭炮。有地陀螺，有小蜜蜂，有夜明珠，有天地响，还有许多叫不上名字的。鞭炮的样子也有许多。花脸，蝴蝶……有的天地响20发，有的天地响50发，还有的天地响100发。在这么多的鞭炮中，最引人注目的要数一种天地响。它的个头同一个小桌子差不多。能供四五个人吃饭。它的重量也很重，需要两三个成年人才能搬动。等了好久，终于把其他鞭炮放完了。当头好戏开始了！“嘭！啪！嘭！啪！嘭！啪！……”这声音惊天动地，好似雷公公发怒的巨响。

我虽然捂住了耳朵，当声音实在是太大，还是能听见。到了最后几发，“嘭！嘭！嘭！啪！哗哗哗哗哗！！”炸开的烟花如火焰一般向四周散去，那情景非常壮观！回到家，我的心仍然久久不能平静。谁来清理呢？当然是清洁工叔叔阿姨了。他们为了让南京更加美丽，不惜牺牲过年的时间，认认真真、仔仔细细、一丝不苟、无私奉献地打扫。还有，现在正值班的警察叔叔阿姨们，他们为了让市民们安全的过个年，在南京市的每一个角落，兢兢业业地巡逻着，想到这里，我进入了美丽的梦乡……

My fathers name is ____. He has an English name, Jack. He is thirty-eight years old. My father is a worker. Heworks in a factory. He has two big eyes and two big ears. He has short hair. My father is very thin. He is only fifty kilograms. He likes learning English very much. He learns English everyday. My father likes watching TV. His favorite television channel is CCTV-10, because he can learn a lot English from the program Outlook English at that channel.

English is my fathers good friend. I am my father?s friend, too.

【参考翻译】

我的父亲叫__。他有一个英文名字,杰克。他今年38岁，是一个工人。他工作在一个工厂。他有两个大眼睛和两个大耳朵。他有短的头发。我的父亲是非常瘦。他只有50公斤。他非常喜欢学习英语。他每天都学英语。我的父亲喜欢看电视。他最喜欢的电视频道是CCTV-10,因为他可以学到很多英语的项目前景的英语频道。

英语是我父亲的好朋友。我也是我父亲的好朋友。