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879初三英语作文带翻译:我的朋友
全文共 1366 字
+ 加入清单A persons life, there are many friends. If lost friends, will lose much fun! Now we are about to separate, and interactions of the two friends will also be less, so I want to write about them.
Huang Tinghui: when two years later, we have known each other for two years. Remember at the beginning, you turn to our class. Due to your poor eyesight to sit with me. The teacher write on the blackboard the word you couldnt see, you often ask me, I also tell you patient, so we established profound friendship. We laugh together, cry together, mad at a quarrelling, together to do according to evil. And you together of dribs and drabs, I will never forget.
Easy 媱 : in my mind your temper is very good, is also a name change most in our class. We will be together. Sometimes see the meat on your face, I will run to knead your face, you are always gentle smile, the smile has included in the friendship.
Along the way of the company of friends, no friends, no today of I, really thank you friends support, maybe well separate, but the fate.
一个人的一生,有许许多多的朋友。如果失去了朋友,将会失去多少生活乐趣呀!现在我们马上要分开了,和我俩个好友的交往也会少了,所以想写写她们。
黄婷慧:一晃俩年过去了,我们已经认识了俩年了。记得当初,你转到我们班。由于你视力不好跟我坐。老师写在黑板的字你看不清,你时常问我,我也耐心的告诉你,就这样我们建立深厚的友谊。我们一起笑过,一起哭过,吵过架生过气,还一起搞恶做据。和你在一起的点点滴滴,我永远也不回忘记。
易媱:在我的印象中你的脾气很好,也是我们班名字改的最多的一个。我们在一起中会闹脾气。有时候看到你脸上的肉,我就会跑过去捏你的脸,你总是温柔的一笑,这笑容中包括的有友谊。
一路上都有朋友的陪伴,没有朋友就没有今天的我,真的感谢朋友分支持,也许我们会分开,但是缘分。
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篇1:初二英语作文:我的中文老师
全文共 691 字
+ 加入清单Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.
My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.
Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.
Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we’re getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.
Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.
篇2:我的好朋友英语小
全文共 2183 字
+ 加入清单Friends and our friendship can last forever, it is necessary to see how you make friends, and what kind of friends are sincere friends?
Bored, picked up the "Analects of Confucius, Yu Dan experience" this book, casually turned, there are four characters: "Friends of the road.". A look into a fan, tell everyone: there are three kinds of friends to help themselves, is the so-called "good friends", is straight, friends of friends duowen. That is, honest, honest, well-informed friends. But dont make flattering, "both sides" and "light goldbrick" these three kinds of bad friends!
Read "the only way" I learned a lot, but did not personally practice, I still have some doubts, not spanned Confucius said in the end is not correct, I am going to try to make friends.
I think, to determine the target: ray Junjie, she is an honest, honest, knowledgeable and articulate people. The teacher often praises her. I want to make friends with her, there will be harvest.
On Monday, I came to school and went straight to Lei Junjie and told her what I wanted to do with her. She agreed without hesitation and said, "OK."! You need more advice. Im sure to be your friend." With her words, I dont want to mention how happy I am. In the next few days, she and I help each other, exchange learning methods, achievements have also been rapid progress, with obvious progress, the biggest progress is love reading, learn knowledge from books, got fun. Thank you very much indeed - my friend Lei Junjie.
On a final exam, she got good grades, and I have got a general, a friend came to me, I know the results, see me sad, faint smile, I think she would laugh at me, who knows, she not only did not laugh at me, but I care about, comfort me up, she gently said to me: "dont be sad, there is a chance, refuels diligently, the victory will be waving to you!" I was touched by her words of encouragement to her friends. It was her encouragement and friendship that made me motivated. I decided to refuel, work hard, study hard and move towards my goal. I believe that I am the best!
As Confucius said, such a friend is a true friend, a true friend of mine! I really hope our friendship lasts forever.
篇3:七年级关于阅读的好处英语作文
全文共 1368 字
+ 加入清单If set up a holiday, I want to set up a reading festival.
There is a celebrity once said: books are the ladder of human progress. Can learn directly from the book in predecessors experience, knowledge to make our trips up again on the way forward little, little detours. Reading can broaden our horizons, cultivate our feelings... The benefits of reading.
But now, we learn a lot of pressure, although we also want to read more books, but the heavy academic burden and a variety of extracurricular cram school, the remedial class is our breath, where still have time to read more books? So I can look forward to establish a special reading festival.
In reading festival on this day, we dont have to go to school, dont do your homework, you can enjoy all the extra-curricular, explicitly swim in the sea of knowledge. Can communicate with friends their own reading experience, express their own unique insights. Can also and students to act out the scene in the book! Reading festival can each month once or twice a week.
How I hope to have a reading festival!
如果设立一个节日,我要设立一个读书节。
有一个名人曾经说过:书是人类进步的阶梯。从书中可以直接学到前人的经验,知识使我们再前进的路上少摔跟头,少走弯路。读书可以开阔我们的视野,陶冶我们的情操……读书的好处数不胜数。
可是现在,我们的学习压力很大,虽然我们也很想多读书,可是过重的学业负担和五花八门的课外补习班,辅导班压得我们喘不过气来,哪里还有时间多读书呢?因此,我特别期盼能设立一个读书节。
在读书节这一天,大家不用上学,不用做作业,可以尽情地看课外书,痛痛快快地在知识的海洋里畅游。可以和同学朋友交流自己的读书体会,表达自己的独特见解。还可以和同学把书中的情景表演出来!读书节可以每个月一次或每周两次。
我多么希望有一个读书节啊!
篇4:我的暑假的初二英语作文
全文共 1435 字
+ 加入清单Time like running water, quietly walked around us. Yes, time flies like an arrow, the sun is like a boat, glance left and right of the summer vacation has finally arrived, I like a caged bird fly freely outside. We is the master of the summer vacation in this summer vacation, we can relax.
But as for me, we cant get nothing in this summer vacation, every day to travel. Our parents will make sure that our classes, on this day that, mom and dad to take us in the scorching sun of summer. Of course we cant live up to the expectations of my parents and teachers, make this summer have a full and happy. Give yourself "come on" in the summer vacation.
The beginning of the summer vacation, I booked a summer vacation plan: every morning at 7 a.m. start, every day for three days in the summer vacation homework assignments, and then review the phonetic symbol, listening to the phonetic symbol, the phonetic symbol, and then write an English composition, finally back idioms, idioms. But also want to review what we have learnt before, as the saying goes: consider ".
Lets have a good this summer, full, happy.
时光像流水一样,在我们身边悄然走过。是的,光阴似箭,日月如梭,左顾右盼的暑假终于到了,我像关在笼子里的鸟在外面自由自在地飞翔。在这个暑假里我们是暑假的主人,我们可以放松自己。
而我呢,我们不可能在这个暑假里一无所获,每天游山玩水。我们的家长保证会让我们上补习班,每天上这上那,爸爸妈妈在这骄阳似火的夏天送我们。当然我们不能辜负老师和爸爸妈妈的期望,让这个暑假过得又充实又愉快。在暑假里给自己“加油”。
暑假的一开始,我就订了暑假计划:每天早上7点30分开始做,每天做三天《暑假作业本》里的作业,接着复习音标,听音标,默音标,再写一篇英语作文,最后背成语,默成语。不过也要复习复习以前学过的内容,俗话说的好:温故而知新”嘛。
让我们这个暑假过得美好,充实,愉快吧。
篇5:高三期末英语作文预测朋友
全文共 2499 字
+ 加入清单True friends almethodscome to you when their assistance is in need.they are making an attempttheir most efficientthat will help you without thinking whon they may be able to get from it. This invariably wins them love and respect from otbers, for they devote themselves to the happiness of alternatives.
as much because the time of my scripting this newsletter, Aero has been helping me with my selecting the courses with wonderfuleffort. hes a chumly and zealous guy. i feel he has been liked by others since way back as a result of his characteristics. hes almethodsbrisk,enthusiastic, energetic and hes smiling regardless of when or where you spot him. However, i love him for any other reason.it kind of feels that between us theres a diffehiremethod to speak and that it is not the U.S.ual way in which we communicate this type ofs words and gestures. He has almethodsbeen a chum of mine be cause I just like the best way he acts and lives and the best way we communicate.
One morning every week ago, he came to me and asked if he may well be of help. Actually I were worrying about my processthis semester for days since I hadnt got any English courses yet! Still i used to be totally caught off guard by Aeros offer althoughhe had almethodsbeen kind. i assumed it was my very own business and that it had never occurred to me ny other personwould offerto assist with my selecting the courses. So I declined his kindness. The very next day, im goingt a cough and that it later turned out to be a four-day topfever. In those days, i used to be extremely weak and lay in bed all day hard and longly had any strength even to eat. I lost the facility to manage the prospective vacancies of the English courses ever since im goingt a topfever. i began to regret declining Aeros offer. only at that moment, Aero called,asking about my fitnessand told me to have an even rest, saying that he would shoulder the responsibility of choosing my English courses for me. Now im scripting this newsletter because the housework of this writing course and that id love to re emphasize that this is all as a result of my friends attemptthat ive finally made it.
i used to be really grateful to him when he known asand staleered to assist and that its hard to exactmy gratitude with words. All i want to mention about its t that moment, i noticed that he had offered to assist not as it made him feel he was vitalbut because he meant business. Hes a person of integrity. im pleased with having this type of friend.
篇6:关于朋友的英语谚语大全带翻译
全文共 437 字
+ 加入清单A friend is easier lost than found
得朋友难,失朋友易。
A friend without faults will never be found.
没有十全十美的朋友。
Life without a friend is death.
没有朋友,虽生犹死。
Misfortune tests the sincerity of friends.
患难见真情。
Old friends and old wines are best.
陈酒味醇,老友情深。
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
Between friends all is common.
朋友之间不分彼此。
He is a good friend that speaks well of us behind our backs.
背后说好话,才是真朋友。
A friend is never known till a man has need.
需要之时方知友。
篇7:初中英语作文介绍朋友的Myfriend
全文共 618 字
+ 加入清单I have a good friend. Her name is Betty. She a lovely girl. She is 14 years old . I`m one year older than her. Her eyes are bigger than mine. Her hair is black and long. My hair is longer than hers. Betty is 156 centimeters tall. Im two centimeters taller than her. She is about 40 kilos. Im 50 kilos. So she is thinner than me. Betty is a beautiful and helpful girl. She does better in English than me. She often helps me with my English. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes dancing very much. She wants to be a dancer one day. She dances beautifully. I can learn a lot from her. I think well be good friends forever.
篇8:我的朋友英语作文
全文共 1850 字
+ 加入清单I have a very good good friend, her name is angelita li, laugh length of a pair of small eyes, high nose bridge below has a small mouth very will talk, with short hair, slim figure, always wearing a school uniform.
She is the love of learning. Remember once, on physical education, physical education teacher let us free activities, the students after the teacher leave homework, ran out to play, I am no exception, also ran out to play, youre the one didnt go out, I thought that she didnt finish the homework, entered the room, she was going over his lessons, I asked her why she didnt go out to play, she said no to review the lessons, want to review the homework and then go out to play, I thought: I am inside the room with her review your lessons, or did you go out to play? I want to ah ah, after and make some kind of ideological struggle, I decided to study in the room, theres something more important than learning? So, I was inside the room and youre the one, in a short time, we finished reviewing, I took her hand went out to play together, on the way we go out, I thought: I must take angelita li as my learning good example, efforts to learn from her.
Until now, whenever I am in learning, lazy and lax on her study scene will appear in front of my eyes, become my motivation for progress. Is a good friend with peoples lives affect how important it is!
I like the day, but I prefer the beautiful scenery of spring.
我有一个非常要好的好朋友,她叫李安琪,长着一双会笑的小眼睛,高高的鼻梁下面有一张很会说话的小嘴,留着短短的头发,苗条的身材,总爱穿着一套校服。
她很爱学习。记得有一次,上体育课,体育老师让我们自由活动,同学们把老师留的作业写完后,都跑出去玩,我也不例外,也跑出去玩,李安琪却没出去,我以为她没写完作业,进屋一看,她正在复习功课,我问她为什么没有出去玩,她说没有复习完功课,要复习完功课再出去玩,我想:我是在屋子里面和她一起复习功课,还是自己出去玩呢?我想呀想呀,在和自己做了一番思想斗争后,我决定还是在屋子里学习,有什么东西比学习还重要么?于是,我便和李安琪一起在屋子里面学习,不一会儿,我们复习完了,我拉着她的手一起出去玩了,在我们出去的路上,我想:我一定要把李安琪当成我学习的好榜样,努力向她学习。
直到现在,每当我在学习上出现懒惰与松懈时,她那认真学习的一幕就会浮现在我的眼前,成为我上进的动力。可见一个好的朋友对人一生的影响是多么的重要啊!
篇9:初二英语作文大全
全文共 940 字
+ 加入清单Different people have different hobbies.For example,someone likes
reading,someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on.
I used to read books and draw pictures because by reading books I could
learn many funny things.But now I dont like it.I can only learn from books.I
couldnt get knowledge from others.I need a change.Traveling is my favorite
hobby now.But I cant go traveling a lot.I can visit many different places of
interest by traveling.I can learn a lot about people,places and history.Its
very interesting.What is your hobby?Lets share each other!
I have many good friends.They all have their hobbies.Ann studies very
hard.So her hobby is book reading.Tony loves labour,and his hobby is
gardening.He usually plants flowers and trees in his yard.Judy is a quiet
girl.She likes knitting.She always knits some sweaters for her dolls.We have
different hobbies,but we are good friends.
I love traveling.I have great fun in traveling.
篇10:初二关于中国梦英语作文
全文共 1866 字
+ 加入清单Dream, is a beacon of your life; dream, is your better vision; dream, is you ideal wings; and having dreams, you will have a future.www.zhlzw.com
“Now, everybody was discussing the Chinese dream, I think, realizing the great rejuvenation of the Chinese nation, is the greatest dream of the Chinese nation since the modern time.??the words are claimed by Xi Jinping. This is the general secretary of Xi jinping ?s Chinese dream. But as a contemporary college students, what is our Chinese dream? Can we dare to dream?
The answer is yes. We college students have no dare not dream, we not only need to bravely dream, but also hard to dream! As we all know, the highest honor of the nursing field is get the Nightingale prize. Each of years china had more or less people gotten this honor. Whenever I see the time that they wearing a silver medal and holding flowers standing on the podium to getting applause and glory, I couldnt help of imaging myself standing on the stage like them in future, that could be how glorious. This is my dream, my dream of Nightingale?s.
And I, a new era of college students, I am proud of my dream, proud of our motherland. When the dream into reality, in a era which let the youth realizing their ideal, I believe my dream will be realizing in the near future!www.zhlzw.com
Finally, I would like to inviting all of yours, please stretch out your hands, let us applause to achieve the dream of tomorrow!
梦想,是人生的灯塔,梦想,是你更好的远景;梦想,是你理想的翅膀,梦想,你会有一个future.www.zhlzw.com
“现在,每个人都在讨论中国梦,我认为,实现中华民族的伟大复兴,中华民族是最伟大的梦想自现代时间。? ?这句话是由习近平称。这是总书记习近平?年代的中国梦。但作为一个当代大学生,我们的中国梦是什么?我们敢于梦想吗?
答案是肯定的。我们大学生没有不敢梦想,我们不仅需要勇敢的梦想,但也很难梦想!我们都知道,护理领域的最高荣誉是南丁格尔奖。每一年中国已经或多或少的人得到这个荣誉。每当我看到他们穿着银牌和拿着鲜花站在领奖台上获得掌声和荣誉,我不禁想象自己站在舞台上就像他们在未来,这可能是光荣的。这是我的梦想,我的梦想的夜莺。
和我,一个新时代的大学生,我很自豪我的梦想,为我们的祖国感到骄傲。当梦想变成了现实,在一个时代,让青年实现自己的理想,我相信我的梦会实现在不久的将来! www.zhlzw.com
最后,我想邀请你,请伸出你的手,让我们掌声实现明天的梦想!
篇11:2024七年级下册英语作文题目:MyFavouritesubject
全文共 1035 字
+ 加入清单My name is Susan. I‘m 12 years old.My favorite subject is Math.
Because I think it‘s difficult but funny.I like green very much.I often play volleyball after school.I think it‘s interesting .I like
playing the violin and the piano.My favorite day is Sunday.Because in that day I don‘t go to school.
It is time for sports It is about half past four.It is time for sport.The students are on the playground.
They are playing a football match.LiDong is one of them.He is good at football.He plays well.He is on the school football team.LiDong says,I like playing football.It is my favourite sport.LiDong‘s friends,PanChen and WangHaisay,He‘s a football fan.Ronaldo is his favourite player.
Look at the boys around the basketball court.Many boys are watching a basketball match.The tall boy,Tanglin,is very good at playing basketball.He is very fast and he plays well.Many of his friends say,He is a good basketball player.His favourite basketball player is YaoMing.His team is sure to win.
I hope they can be the good players of our country,too.
篇12:初二英语
全文共 540 字
+ 加入清单I have a good friend, we met each other when I was five years old. She is
my neighbor and the first time I saw her, she smiled at me. It was her smile
that made me feel she was a nice person to get along with. Indeed, she was a
reliable friend. When I was in trouble, she would be the first person to give me
a hand. Once I lost my key, when she heard, she tried hard to help me remember
where I lost it. I am so lucky to have her as my friend. It is hard to meet
someone who can make you feel safe and she is the one. She is the angel in my
life.
篇13:我的好朋友英语
全文共 638 字
+ 加入清单I have a close friend whose name is LiBing。 He is half head taller than me。
He likes to dress in blue jeans and he is very friendly to people。
我有一个好朋友名叫杰克。他比我高半头。他喜欢穿蓝色牛仔服,对人十分友好。
Once I was ill at home。 He lived far away from my house but he came and
helped me with my study。
有一次我生病在家。他家离我家很远,但他放学之后帮忙我学习。
He always says, "A life without a friend is a life without sunshine。" My
friend has done the same as he says。 Im happy to have such a friend。 If he is
in trouble, Ill try my best to help him。
他常说:“一个人没有朋友,就像生活没有阳光。”我的朋友这么说,也这么做了。有这样的朋友我真的很高兴(作文地带也推荐翻译为“自豪”)。假如他遇上麻烦,我必须会尽力帮忙他。
朋友不需要说的太多,只需要一个问候,就能让他心里泛起涟漪,作文地带期望每一个人都能够在您幸运的时候还记得起以前和你在一齐的朋友。
篇14:我最好的朋友初中英语
全文共 703 字
+ 加入清单What#39;s the meaning of a friend to you?
Maybe you think that a friend is someone who will listen to you when you#39;re filled with sorrow.
Maybe you think that a friend is someone who will give you a gift on your birthday.
But to me, a friend is someone I can rely on.
When I was eight years old, I met, my best friend, Jennifer. Her personality was different from mine.
She#39;s very resolute and brave. When I was sad, she was the person who would sit next to me, comforting me.
When I was happy, she was the person with whom I could share my joy. As of now, we have been friends for eight years.
Although we#39;re not classmates anymore, I believe that we#39;ll still be good friends tomorrow and forever.
篇15:初二年级英语作文带翻译:myfamily
全文共 950 字
+ 加入清单I have a happy family.My family have five poeple:grandpa,grandma,father,mother,and me.
My grandparents live in countryside.They have six rooms.The room is big.There are two apple in the ground.They have sixteen goats and three cows.The goat is white.The cow is yellow.They are healthy.
My parents and me live in city.My father is a worker.His work is hard.My mother is a high schools Chinese teacher,She take bicycle go to work at sevenclock.In the afternoon,she doesnt go home.In the evening,she make supper.The food is delicious.I am a student.I have Chinese,math and English everyday.That is boring.I have many friends.After class,I play with my friends.
We are tried,but we are very happy.I love my family
我有一个幸福的家庭。我的家庭有五人:爷爷,奶奶,爸爸,妈妈,和我。
我的祖父母住在乡下。他们有六个房间。房间是大的。有两个苹果在地上。他们有十六个山羊和三头牛。山羊是白色的。牛是黄色的。他们是健康的。
我的父母和我住在城市。我的父亲是一个工人。他的工作是很难的。我妈妈是一个中学的语文老师,她在7点带自行车去上班。下午,她不回家。在晚上,她做晚饭。食物是美味的。我是一个学生。每天我有语文、数学和英语。这是无聊的。我有很多朋友。下课后,我和我的朋友玩。
我们试过了,但是我们很开心。我爱我的家庭
篇16:我和我的朋友英语MyFriendandMe
全文共 318 字
+ 加入清单Hello,everyone.I m Sally.I have a friend.Her name is Amy.We are in the same class.She studys harder than me.I m 160cm tall.She is 165cm.So she is taller than me.She likes darwing very much.I like taking photos.I m 15 years old.But Amy is 16 years oid.So she is older than me.
What about you?And what about your friend?
篇17:初二英语日记:Mybestfriend
全文共 652 字
+ 加入清单My best friend is Li Ming. We are in the same class.
He is as old as me, but he is taller and stronger than me. Both of us have black eyes and black hair, but his hair is shorter than mine.
As for hobbies, we have something in common in some ways. I like the friends who have the same hobbies with me. Both of us like sports. We often exercises together after school. But he is more outgoing and better at sports than me. Besides, collecting stamps is our same hobby, too. We often exchange our stamps with each other.
About the learning, I think I’m a little smarter than him. Most of my subjects are better than his, so I often help him with his study.
篇18:七年级我的动物朋友优秀
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+ 加入清单我家养了一只小仓鼠,我叫它小乐,因为它总是乐呵呵的。
它住在一个无比豪华,甚至可以说是奢侈的总统级房子里,里面有两层楼,上层是卧室,下层是活动的场地,中间用一根长长的滑梯连接着。下层有一个暖和的睡袋和许多的木屑,在它的房子里面有一个大大的滚轮,木屑里还藏着少许的谷物和面包虫干,随时随地都有美食伺候着,他的日子过得比猪还舒坦!
我每次去给小乐喂食物,只要我的身影前一名秒刚靠近笼子,后一秒笼子里一双乌黑发亮的大眼睛就出现在笼子面前,扑闪扑闪的盯着我手里的食物,满是期待。我心中暗想:我的天呐,他什么时候跑得这么快了!就在我发愣的时候,它见我老半天不给他吃食物,就俯下身子跟着我,喉咙里发出低沉的吱吱声,似乎在威胁我动作快点。每逢这时我心中总会打冷战,他的一个眼神令我不敢再继续想下去了,我飞快的把食物放到他的专属碗里,刚想走开它又威胁我等他吃完,无奈之下我只好跟个小二一样服侍他,真是虎落平阳被犬欺啊!
小乐的性格实在有些古怪,说他威武吧,那也对!不然我怎么会被他吓得给他当小二呢?可他也有害怕的时候,有一次我把它带到我的书桌上,小乐好奇的左顾右盼,它看见不远处有一团卷起的东西,走进一看立马吱吱的乱跑,好像在说:不好了,有一条蛇,我总算是知道什么叫做好奇心害死猫了,救鼠啊!它到处乱跑跟只无头苍蝇似的。跑着跑着没力气了,也还算聪明,竟然装死:整个趴在地上,一动不动的把小舌头伸出来,眼睛半睁半闭,装的还挺像,真像个经验丰富的演员,别提多搞笑了。
我很喜欢我的小仓鼠。
篇19:中考英语作文范文我的朋友
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+ 加入清单I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it.
He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good
pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future.
篇20:初二期中考试备考:高分英语作文技巧
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+ 加入清单要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点:实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。