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1000我的英语老师英语
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+ 加入清单Our Foreign Teacher
Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher. She oomes from New Zealand. She is thirty-one years old. She has fair hair, white skin and gray eyes. She is tall and slim. She looks very kind. And in fact, she is kind indeed.
Ms Jerry is a good teacher. Although she only comes to our school twice a week, yet she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students. Once. she was ill, but she went on giving us lessons. When we learned this, we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.
Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm:" Eaoh lesson she Will bring us new pictures, new stories, new games and new songs. Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.
Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.
我的外籍老师
Jerry老师是个外籍教师,来自新西兰,今年三十一岁。瘦高身材的她头发金黄,皮肤白皙,眼睛灰蓝。她看上去很温柔,事实上她也的确很温柔。
Jerry老师是一个好老师。尽管,每星期她只来我们学校两次,但她对工作负责,对学生要求很严。有一次她病了,但仍坚持给我们上课。当我们知道这个情况后,我们都听得比平时更仔细。
Jerry老师以极大的热情教我们英语。每节课她都会给我们带采新图片,新故事,新游戏和新歌曲。她的课堂上总是充满着愉快的笑声和欢乐的歌声。
Jerry老师是一个人人都爱戴和尊敬的好老师。
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篇1:感恩老师的英语书信
全文共 568 字
+ 加入清单Dear Miss Wang:
I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your help in my study. Without your help , my study would not be the top three in my class. It was you who always standed by me when I am fall. You pointed my mistakes and told me how to make them right. You always worked tirelessly to train my patience.Your continuous encouragement is my greatest motivation.
I sincerely hope that you can have a good health and stay happy. In addition, I wonder if you can pay a lot of attention to your health, get more rest.
Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!
篇2:圣诞节送给英语老师的一封信
全文共 1591 字
+ 加入清单Dear Miss Zhao,
Hello!
Teacher, three years ago, I stepped into the second primary school, and had the honor to become a student in your class. When I saw your first eyes, my nervous mood suddenly relaxed, because you are so kind.
I have gradually discovered that you have serious moments. I remember once I was distracted in class and didnt listen. Suddenly met your eyes to stop. Blushing, I listened carefully. I am especially grateful to you for not criticizing me in public and protecting my self-esteem. I have taken your teachings to heart. From then on, I was very careful in class.
After class, you talk and laugh with us, we all love to share their own secrets with you, you will help us solve some small troubles, and give us some small suggestions. You are not only our good teacher and helpful friend, but also our compass on the way of learning.
Remember the first grade writing is not careful, under your guidance, I insisted on practicing Chinese, and got a good result.
In the third grade, I especially like piano, you encouraged me, like to learn, but must adhere to oh! I took note of your words and stuck to it. In this years 18th National Campus art Festival in Hefei district general finals won the gold medal. They also qualified for the national finals. Ill keep going.
How time flies! Its already the fourth grade. Under your hard teaching, I from a naughty child into a sensible teenager, a good habit of learning.
In the next two years, I will cherish every minute with you and repay you with good results.
Merry:
Good health, good luck in everything!
Your student: Chen Chen
篇3:我的英语老师大学英语作文
全文共 1565 字
+ 加入清单mr shao taught me english when i was in senior three.with the bald head and hunchback, the fifty or some man distinguished himself from his counterparts in many ways.
he was so addicted to tobacco that he couldnt even skip acigarette in the corridor at the interval between two classes. due to the long time consumption of cigarettes, his teeth had gone totally bad and occasionally let off unpleasant smell which really disturbed us when we were talking to him. at times, he came to recognize it and consequently found out a solution. he suggested we write down our problems and he answer them in the written form. although i knew all along that he was a careful man, his quotations of five different dictionaries on a single multiple choice problem was still beyond my wildest dream.
whats more, none of us could imagine how ecellent his ancient chinese literature was. what he tended to do in his class was to recite several segments of the famous ancient prose and then put them into english. however, under the pressure of college entrance eam, the students didnt seem to be so interested in his performance. therefore, he tried to stimulate the class by editions of times as prizes for answering questions. it worked on us instantly.
on the day of the entrance eam, he waited nervously with us out of the eamination room. he kept reminding us not to drink water in case that we would feel like going to toilet during the eam. not withstanding his constant claims that we students were far less important than his beloved daughter, we did feel his devotion to us.
篇4:雷老师的“雷人”哲理初一作文
全文共 685 字
+ 加入清单生活中的点点滴滴,磕磕碰碰,一幕幕……都有值得我们回味和感动的事情,走进岁月的长廊,翻开回忆的相册……
追忆成空,那天我们在上化石吟,雷老师瞟了一眼第四组,貌似是有什么风吹草动,接着就冒出了句“小伙子上课不要想小姑娘,小姑娘上课不要想小伙子,要想就想雷老师啊!想想雷老师的哲理。岁月静好,我们现在的主要任务是学习,除了学习还是学习!以后上课要发呆就想老师哈!”我们当场被雷老的话笑死了,这也太雷人了吧!一场“雷人”事件结束了!“雷电”交加的日子真正来临了!一节语文课,雷老师在上此学期深爱的”姑娘“——春,可惜生活总是如此的不平凡,班里的语文尖子——小乐同学在看12课,这下雷老师可火了,“雷雨”交加啊!对咱班的小乐同学做了大大的批评,一些我已经忘怀,任记得的就是:“你和我少年时那样,自满,对自己很是满意,总以为自己最好,我多次在你写的作文后面的评语上,贬义交加,希望你不要老是以议论的手法来写,我希望你写的文章感性点,我曾经和你一样自满,上初中那会,我什么课都没听,在那里看小说,我小学成绩很好,年年是班长,可上初中那会我老是看小说,我话说是班长,可我连班主任的课也不听,再看小说……直到英语老师在别的同学面前说对我已经放弃了,不再理我了,我才醒悟过来,我奋力学习,用一个寒假的时间把英语补上来,之后我的英语成绩年年第一,保持到初中毕业,我告诉你这些,只是想让你知道,人不能自满,不听别人的意见,这样的话,你不会有进步的……下课铃声响了,雷老师结束了讲话,可我却思绪万千……
雷老师的“雷人”哲理中,富有趣味但也有内涵,既有深度,又有高度。
[雷老师的“雷人”哲理初一作文
篇5:初一英语作文大全:mydream
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+ 加入清单Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact, a big dream is made up of many small dreams.
My name’s Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I won’t give it up, I must get it over.
I’m sure it’s very important to dream. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.
每个人都有梦想。作为青年学生,我们的梦想多姿多彩。它们构成了伟大的中国梦。梦想可以是远大的,也可以是微小的。实际上,远大的梦想是从实现许多微小的梦想开始的。
我叫李红。我也有一个梦想:我希望成为一名伟大的科学家。从现在起,我必须好好学习,为实现梦想而努力。不管遇到怎样的困难,我都要克服它,决不会放弃。
我相信梦想的力量。有些梦想是比较现实的,有些梦想可能并不那么现实。不管我们的梦想是什么,我们都应该为了梦想而坚持,总有一天它们会实现的。
篇6:我的英语老师
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+ 加入清单陆逸轩
她有一头棕黑相间的头发,平时喜欢扎马尾辫。两道浓浓的眉毛下面有一双宝石般的大眼睛,每当上课时,那双大眼睛总是闪烁着智慧的光芒。高高的鼻梁下有一张秀气的樱桃小嘴,十分美丽。她的个子不高,身材很苗条,看起来楚楚动人。
英语老师的爱好很广泛:唱歌、跳舞……其中,在学校最常见的,就是带着我们“走进”游戏世界,这样既能让我们学到许许多多单词,又让我们牢记这些知识,还能让我们体会单词知识的魅力,十分有趣。
英语老师上课非常有意思,而做游戏则是更胜一筹。有一次,英语老师打开了游戏“时装秀”的大门:第一项任务是用旧报纸、木块……这些被别人瞧不起的东西,做成各式各样的衣服。我选了“魔法师”这个角色,回家,我和妈妈一起做好了魔法师的衣服、帽子、魔法杖。第二天,我和大家一样,穿着自个儿的衣服在讲台前后、左右走秀,老师则用手机为我们拍下了这有意思的一幕。
这样一来,我们就和英语老师结下了深厚的感情,我也会珍惜和英语老师在一起的时光。
我爱我的英语老师!
篇7:我的英语老师作文
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+ 加入清单今天我去昂立学校学英语,第二节课,外教老师Tom来了。外教老师个子高高的瘦瘦的,皮肤黑黑的,黑得像木炭,在太阳底下黑的闪着耀眼的光,嘴唇大大的,很爱笑,露出白白的牙齿,粉色的舌头,头发卷卷的。
外教老师Tom很爱逗我们玩,还带着墨镜给我们讲课,让我们看不清他的眼睛,Mark说:“Teacher Tom,你摘下眼镜来吧。”Teacher Tom摘下了眼镜,我们看到他的眼睛细细的,眼珠是白白的,和他的黑皮肤形成了鲜明的对比。Teacher Tom上课的时候,嘴唇咧得大大的,因为他很爱笑,他给我纠正发音的时候,他让我站起来,他蹲下扶着我的胳膊,大嘴咧到了腮帮子上了,一遍又一遍的。直到我发音准确。
这就是我的外教老师,虽然他浑身乌黑乌黑的,除了眼珠和牙齿。但我们都很喜欢他。
篇8:英语作文:我的英语老师_MyEnglishTeacher
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+ 加入清单老师是为我们传授文化、科学和技术的人,泛指在某方面值得学习的人。下面语文迷为大家整理了介绍英语老师的英语作文,希望对你有帮助。
My English Teacher_英语作文篇一
I have a very good English teacher.My classmates and I all like her very much.She is very friendly to us.We all like to have English classes very much.
She is tall and beautiful.She looks like a middle school student.She has big eyes,a small nose,a small mouth and long black trousers.
Her name is Wang Yanjun.We often call her Miss Wang.She teaches English very well.In class ,she looks like our elder sister .She often helps us to solve problems.After class,she looks like our friend.We often play games together.
This is my English teacher.I love her and I love to study English,too.I believe my English will be better and better.
My English Teacher_英语作文篇二
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She is very young and beautiful. She is tall and she looks like a model, She is always happy every day, just like a child, I like her very much, because she acts in every lesson and we have an interesting class every day.
One day, we learned a lesson called "Try it on"It was about Professor Barfin, who bought a hat from Mexico and let Sandy try it on. the teacher asked me to play the role of Sandy. But I didnt have a Mexican hat. Just when I was hesitating, Miss Wang put a big paper bag on my head and said, "Try it on!" I suddenly cried, "I cant see anything!" As a result, I learned the sentence and remember it very well.
王老师是我的英语老师。她很年轻,很漂亮。她个子高高的,看起来就像一个模特。她天天都很高兴,就像一个孩子。我非常喜欢她,田为她每堂课上都表演一番,我们每天都上一堂有趣的课。
一天,我们学了一课题目叫做“试试它”。它是关于Baffin教授的,他从墨西哥买了一顶帽子,想让Sandy试一试。老师让我扮Sandy的角色,但我没有一顶墨西哥帽子。正当我犹豫不决时,王老师把一个纸袋套在了我头上,说:“试试它!”我突然大叫起来:“我什么也看不见了!”结果,我学会了那句子,并且记得非常好。
My English Teacher_英语作文篇三
Hello! I’m He Baoyi. We have three new teachers this term. But my favourite teacher is English teacher. Who is she? Yes, she’s Linda. Do you want to know her?
Linda is very beautiful. Look! She has a round face, two small black eyes, a straight nose, a big mouth and two small ears. Her hair is very long. She is not tall and not short. She likes wearing a white dress. She looks like an angle.
Linda works very hard every day. And she is strict to us. But she is kind. Her class is so much fun. Really? Yes. In class, she is our good teacher. After class, she is our good friend. Her favourite food is tofu. It ’s very very healthy. She is not only good at pingpong, but also good at singing. She likes talking with us. We all like her.
篇9:我的英语老师小学生作文
全文共 395 字
+ 加入清单昨天,我到学校的时候,我的同桌对我说;咱们英语王老师从今往后在也不教咱们英语了.我说;这怎么可能.他说;是别的同学告诉我的.
最后他还跟我说是因为王老师找到工作了,所以才被掉走了.最终我还是没有相信他.
可是,在我去办公室改错题的时候我才发现王老师真的不教我们英语了.这时候我感觉我一定是看错了.等我回到教室的时候很多同学都说王老师掉走了,而且还换了一个男英语老师.
到了上英语课的时候,果然换了一个英语老师,我很后悔,王老师没有早一点跟我们说.可是这个老师刚进来就跟我们说;你们想不想见一个人呀.同学们都不约而同地回答到;想.其实我们早就知道是王老师,王老师一近来我们就都哭了.因为王老师教了我们四年.我知道王老师肯定是第一个来看的我们班.王老师还说有时间会回来看我们的.到了下午的时候王老师走了.我和我的同伴去送走了王老师.
我想王老师一定会回来看我们的.我一定要好好学习,不辜负王老师的期望.
篇10:描写老师的英语短文
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+ 加入清单Hello,my name is Jie. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li. She is a very good teacher.
She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun.She sings songs with us, plays games with us. We are so happy . And we learn English well. Our English are very very good.So I like her very much.
She likes reading books and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much.
This is my favourite teacher.She is a good teacher .I like my English teacher very much. What about you?Do you have a good teacher, too?
我最喜欢的老师
嗨,我的名字叫杰。我有许多好老师,但我喜欢的老师是李老师。她是一个很好的老师。
她很年轻,但她的英语很好。她每天教我们英语。她的课堂很有趣。她跟我们一块唱歌,和我们一起玩游戏。我们非常快乐幸福。我们英语学得很好。我们的英语是非常好的。所以我非常喜欢她。
她喜欢读书和运动。下课后,李老师经常和我们一起运动,我们很高兴。我们非常喜欢她。
这就是我最喜欢的老师。她是一个好老师。我非常喜欢我的英语老师。你呢?你也有一个好老师吗?
篇11:初一英语作文:我的英语老师
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+ 加入清单Look this is my English teacher .Hes tall and fat .Hes very fanny !
He has two small eyes ,and a big mouth.I tell you, he looks like a big bear.
So,If I meet him I often said :Hello,Mr bear .And he said :Hell ,small bear.Because my classmates think I look like a bear too.
My English teacher works very hard .And he often tell us :You must
very hard to leron English .
I like my English
teacher very mueh!!!!
Welcome to meet my English!!!!
篇12:写给老师的一封信英语
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+ 加入清单Dear Mrs Hu,
I am very glad to write to you about what I think in my mind.
First of all, I think I have to admit that you have excellect command of
English and teach us much knowledge, which is not only English but also lots of
thinking on life .
Next,You help us how to see the world and even how to apply for a good
job.
but I think what impressed me most was the way you work. You do everything
so patiently and carefully, which is highly thought of by all the
classmates...All of these leads us to respect you very much.
Well,AS for me,I think full of humor is your another impressed
charactistics.You know, I just regard your class as a very enjoying meal. I
guess It’s widely acknowledged that all of your students like It very much.
To conclude,I think you are a very good teacher. I hope you will pay more
attention to your health and be happy every day.
Sincerely,
Zhao zhouxing
篇13:我的英语老师
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+ 加入清单在我的脑海中,经常出现英语老师那张熟悉、可爱的脸庞,在梦里也经常出现那个熟悉的背景,那就是我们和蔼可亲的缑老师。
缑老师年轻漂亮,在我的记忆里,缑老师是那么的温柔,那么的可亲可敬。有一天,我们班有很多人没有做起作业,老师把没有做起英语作业的人都叫了出来,老师挨个地打他们(她们),打了一半后,老师的手就有点红了,还有点肿,可是,老师还要继续打,打完人不是老师的两只又白又嫩的手不是就很就很红很肿了么,而且还很疼,那些不做作业的只会哭,他们(她们)也不看看英语老师的手有多红、多肿,还有多疼。
其实,老师也是为了我们好,如果他们(她们)现在不做英语作业,以后到了初中也不会做英语作业的,而且到了初中英语还是正课,还更难。所以我想对同学们说:同学们,你们想,如果没有了老师,我们还到哪里去学习知识呢,所以,你们要好好珍惜跟老师在一起的一分一秒,千万不要浪费时间哦!还有一次,英语老师突然没来上课,我听数学老师说英语老师感冒了,我心里就像和打了点一样,伤心的想,英语老师生病了,难道是因为我们么?老师,我希望你能早日康复,早一点来给我们上课,不过要病好才能来哦!
老师,对不起,我以后再也不惹您生气了,我一定会听您的话,每次,只要布置作业,我就会完成,保证让老师您满意。这就是我的英语老师!
篇14:描写的老师的小学英语作文
全文共 615 字
+ 加入清单My teacher is very strict, also is very nice. Because of the strict teacher, let we learned to strict with myself. Because of the teachers kindness, let us feel warm, let the knowledge we learned several not over.
My teacher looks very strict, but very kind at heart, she kind of eternity like waves, will not change. As bright as the sun, her eyes filled with wisdom, laugh very natural, very nice. Her mind is the source of wisdom, ask the teacher shell answer out wonderful answer, led we came to the sea of knowledge, with the wisdom of key to open the doors of magic, share knowledge, discuss problems together.
篇15:初一英语作文教学
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+ 加入清单初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!
写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。
七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。
一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。
“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果
因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。
二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。
所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。
根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:
1、看图说话书面表达题要领
首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。
其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:
(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。
(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。
(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。
(4)书写规范、准确。
(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。
2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领
在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:
(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;
(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。
(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。
(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;
(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;
(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。
三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。
我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。
对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。
以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:
Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the government take any measures to carry it , it isnt working well in it.
There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.
If we all do that,we will have healthy and happy.
从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,
于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:
1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW TO SAVE OUR MOTHER等。
2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse and worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With the development of economy ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.
3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry it 。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take some measures to keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it doesnt work well.
4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".
5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect trees and because the trees can keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.
5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.
6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。
除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。
结束语
路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。
篇16:母校的英语老师六年级作文
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+ 加入清单我在学校5年多了,从未想过我会走出这个校园。可是,事实是不能改变的。
母校给了我们温暖,我们每一个同学都不想离开我们的母校。老师就像辛勤的园丁,在我们渴了的时候,把知识的甘霖给予我们;在我们烦恼的时候,她总会用滑稽的言语逗我们开心。我还要感谢每一个教我们的老师让我们都学到了知识尤其是刘老师就是我们的英语老师他长着浓浓的眉毛一双眼镜挂在鼻梁上看起来很有学问。
每一次在我们上英语课的时候刚上课便说“上课了同学们快背学了都是自己的啊。“我们都很烦躁在我们心情不好的时候他会讲一个笑话有一次我记得这样一个故事:有一个人啊造假钱希望买价钱少的物品让人家给他更多的真钱有一次他来到一个农村为什么呢因为农村人不懂骗人的诈术便来到一个小卖店来到卖店门口说:“老板来一根棒棒糖说完给老板一张15元的钞票老板是城市里来的便给他一支棒棒糖又给骗子一张14元的钞票”。骗子蒙圈了心想:他怎么也有啊。又和老板说:“你哪来的钱啊我都没见过啊”。老板笑着说:“小伙子别以为农村人就没见过世面对付你这种小骗子我在城市见多了自然也就习惯了这棒棒糖你就拿去吃吧以后别骗人了。”小偷恍然大悟:“哦原来我来晚了。”我们同学听后都笑了,都说老师很幽默。这就是我的英语老师,这样一个有知识而且又幽默的老师。
可是,我们快要毕业了。不想离开母校也不知道毕业后什么时候会再见到英语老师。时间啊,你慢慢走,让我们多陪陪我的老师们吧。
篇17:六年级作文我的英语老师
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+ 加入清单我的老师长着瓜子脸,眼睛小得像两颗小樱桃,嘴巴时圆时扁,牙珍珠似的白。她就是我的英语老师——刘老师,我们都叫她刘老师,她读英语很标准,也很会教学生。
刘老师有很和善的一面——有一次原本不是您上的课,可是您却来上我们的课,我们当时还有些怨恨,但是您居然给我们道歉,而且您上课给我们带来了许多乐趣,和我们玩一些游戏,让我们从中学到了许多。
老师有时也很严肃——对待没交作业的同学,她总是很“凶”的,罚他们抄书或是补写几次作业,所以,班上一些不听话的学生也变得乖很多了。
我们就像是一朵小花,老师就像是“园丁”一样精心的照顾着我们。老师,我想对你说:你是我开启智慧的敲门砖;你是我打开幸福之门的金钥匙,是您让我懂得怎样做人,不要让自己迷失在任何地方。
是您让我学会了英语,开启了让我通向世界各国的门!
篇18:英语作文介绍自己最喜欢的老师
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+ 加入清单My English teacher appears very beautiful and she looks about 40 years old.She has a son.
我的英语老师非常漂亮,大约四十岁。她有一个儿子。
Our English teacher is very strict with us,and sometimes,she is very friendly and kind to us.
我们的英语老师对我们非常严格,但有时候她又对我们很和蔼。
She is also humorous.On the April Fools Day,she said to us,"you are going to have a holiday this afternoon".Many students thought it true.Many students dare not talk,because she is very strict.We are afraid that we cannot pass the exam,because the teacher will criticise us if we dont pass.She doesnt give us too much homework,and she doesnt give us too much pressure.Sometimes,we like our Engllish teacher.
她还很幽默。在愚人节那天,她对我们说:“今天下午放假。”很多学生都以为是真的。很多学生不敢说话,因为她非常严格。我们害怕不能通过考试,因为那样老师会责备我们。老师从不给我们留很多家庭作业,但同时也不会给我们过多的娱乐时间。我爱我们的英语老师。
I like English,and I like my English teacher.
我爱英语,我爱我们的英语老师。
编辑点评:写人的小作文,我们经常会遇到,也要多练习,才能写出真情实感。
篇19:我的英语老师初一学生作文
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+ 加入清单在教棒和粉笔的共同飞舞中,在老师声声叮咛,鼓励和无微不至地呵护下,多少位良师被学子深深地印在心里啊!
——题记
我在这里写的是一位普普通通,平凡得不能再平凡的人民教师,50来岁,由于终日为我们不辞辛苦的操劳,脸上布满了皱纹,她的两眼黑得发亮,锋利的目光,仿佛要把什么刺穿似的。我有点害怕。她只教我们还不到四个月,但是,每当我想起她时。她对我们的严就像教练训练运动员那样一丝不苟;她对我们很关心,体贴,就像对待自己的儿女一样。 但是,那一次,我尽对她起了怨恨。那是一节自习课,英语老师让同学们把作业本A订正好交到办公室去批改,作业本B作好的也去批改。我怀着喜悦的心情拿着作好的B去批改,"报告""进来"她的声音很平稳,我走了进去,队伍并不长,我跑到英语老师右边去批改,无意间发现了电脑里有语文竞赛的成绩,我便很期盼得到自己的成绩,不听话的手尽往鼠标地区前行,不经意间,我触摸到了,这下手更不听使唤,一直往下翻动着,"啊"我目瞪口呆,倒数第三,我的喜悦心情沉淀了下来,"谁呀,谁在动我的电脑?"一声果断而又严厉的语言向我发起进攻,我吓了一大跳,我心里想:哎呀,这下怎么办呀,不如来个死不承认,或者,英语老师的教棒在桌上"吃吃"作响,"把手拿过来。"我害怕极了,真想使用一下神仙的仙术,把英语老师的教棒变成长长的棉花棒,只有我能看见,而老师看不见,软软的棉花棒触摸了我一下,"哇!"教棒落下来了,打得好痛呀,我有点生气,心里暗暗想着;你这个老太太,太坏了,我只不过碰了一下鼠标,看了电脑屏幕一眼,也不过如此,您竟打我,只要教育几下就行了嘛,我可是个怕痛的女孩。我心中的怨恨一直不能平静。但刚想完,那教棒的滋味和对老师的怨恨跑掉了,我寻找着,发现它屹立在英语老师身上展现出来的无可抗拒的人格魅力上。
她总穿着比别人温暖的衣服,长得虽不出众,但是她的人格魅力在我心中是最出众的,那一次英语课,因我们作业做得不好,而被英语老师斥责了一翻,最使我深受教育的是这样一句话:我做事情,要做就要做到最好。"这声音在教室里久久回荡,震撼着我的心灵。一颗'作一个高尚的人"的种子便埋下了,自从那节课后,我猛然发觉自己长大了好多好多,幼稚正向我告别。我的心底默默地感谢这位教我如何做人的英语老师。
篇20:送给英语老师的一封信
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+ 加入清单Dear Ms.XXX,
I write this letter because I want to talk to you about thepunishment of copying the sentences on the English book.
I don’t think this punishment is fair.
Firstly, I am quite sure that I did complete my homework before. Itis a weekend assignment. Li Peiqi goes to myhouse every Friday. We do our homework together. She can prove thatI did it exactly.
Secondly, I remembered that I handed in the paper.
Thirdly, I don’t know the rule of punishment before. Besides, Idon’t know my paper disappear.
Last, I still like you so much while I would like you to know thetruth.
Love,
Dora
20**-6-11