我的英语老师作文初一【推荐20篇】

以 My Chinese Teacher 为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下: 1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。 2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。 3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。 My Chinese Teacher Of all the s

以My Chinese Teacher为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:

1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。

2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。

3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。

My Chinese Teacher

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.

My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.

Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And were getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

[我的语文老师初中英语作文

我的英语老师姓沈林，大家都叫她ms林，她又是我们班的班主任。她长着一双明亮的眼睛，亮得像一汪清水，山着亮光。一头乌黑的长头发，端庄美丽的脸庞给人和蔼的感觉。

上英语课的时候，英语老师轻盈地走到讲台上，用英语说：“上课，同学们好！”我们说：“老师好！”

她讲课时，眼睛不时地扫视大家，使大家感到害怕，不敢做小动作。她讲课声音清脆，讲得生动，使我们听得津津有味，连我们班的“淘气大王”也专心地听课了。我平常爱和同桌讲话，可是现在竟然也全身心地投到了ms林绘声绘色的讲课中去了。

从她的讲课中，我们可以看出，ms林是一位好老师。

我真幸运，现在有了这样一位好老师教我。

What a colorful world of the fall,this is a credit to the leaves,they have

red and green,the autumn dress up like a large garden.

Red maple leaves,like palms,just five piece children.Leaves a small number

of prominent teeth,the base of the heart-shaped,dark green to dark green above

to below the axillary vein has hair sense,the edge is also trimmed with lace

irregular.Bark grayish brown,with the old growth,the surface grooves and

scales.Maple leaves,autumn brings a festive and warm.

Holly tree is the symbol of vitality,crown thriving,flourish.Leaves

oval,pointed at both ends,like the two tilt of the boat.Stem and leaf surface

veins is very clear,long from bottom to top,from coarse to fine.The front of

dark green leaves,very smooth,negative light green,because there are many

prominent veins and coarse stems.Holly leaves have wavy lines on the edge of the

same jagged,but not scratchy.

The campus,red maple,holly green,a passionate,full of vitality,this is

really the mental outlook of our young pioneers it!I love autumn,I love the fall

on campus.

敬爱的英语老师：

您好!

我是您的学生李换双，马上要毕业了，感谢您培养了我，感谢您在学习上和生活上对我的关心和照顾。谢谢!

自从初一开始，我就与您直接接触。记得刚开始我就是一名普通的学生，后来因为我的英语成绩出众，您指定我担任英语课代表，我很高兴的接受了。从此以后，对英语除了喜爱，还有责任在此。实时的英语测验，我都得到了不错的成绩，自己心里非常高兴。但是随着时间的流逝，我的骄傲油然而生，慢慢的成绩开始下滑，有一次课堂上出题，我只得到了及格分。您给我的批语，是不理想。我看到三个大红字，在我的作业本上，心里悔恨极了。真是骄傲使人落后，耐心的听了您的讲解，改正错误，继续努力学习。

还有一次，学校食堂停电了，没有饭吃。我就去了您的家里，您拿出来自己家里的方便面和烧饼。硬要塞给我，我接受了，回去跟同学分享了，到处炫耀是您给我的，我可高兴了。如今，我就要参加中考了，马上就毕业了，马上就要离开您了。心里对您充满了感激，却又不知道该如何表达。唯一自己能做的就是，以后好好学习，找到好的工作，经常回来看望您。

最后祝愿您工作顺利，身体健康!

写信人：

日期：

Dear staff and their families

hello everyone!

"Spring comes early again", the Spring Festival of the year of the sheep is

quietly coming to us. On the occasion of the Spring Festival, principal Chen of

Taishan junior high school, together with the school leadership, extended new

years blessing and festival greetings to the hard-working staff and their

families, and extended high respect and sincere thanks to the family members who

have been caring and supporting the work of the school for a long time!

The past 2014 has been an extraordinary year. It has been a year when we

have worked hand in hand, overcome difficulties and forge ahead in unity. It has

also been a year of fruitful achievements and good news. Under the correct

leadership of the superior competent department, all the staff of our school are

in the same boat through ups and downs, unite as one, work hard and forge ahead

with determination, overcome many difficulties and strive for first-class

achievements. The school was rated as a modern school in Jiangsu Province; in

the assessment of the school by the Education Bureau, the school won the second

prize; more than 20 students entered Baoying county middle school, and a large

number of students were admitted to other senior high schools free of charge; in

the provincial supervision, the school scored high and passed the supervision of

experts, leading experts listened to 24 classes, and 23 courses were awarded

excellent grades; In the national middle school students composition contest,

Yang Yichen, a student from class 6 of junior high school, participated in the

provincial final and won the first prize. In the final examination just

finished, each grade reached or exceeded the assessment index issued by the

school at the beginning of the school year. When we are immersed in these

achievements bring us joy and joy, we will think that these gains come from the

hard work of teachers. It is you who guide students to constantly improve their

moral quality; it is you who work hard to let students broaden their horizons

and appreciate the brilliant scenery of scientific and cultural knowledge. Of

course, the achievement of these achievements is inseparable from the support of

the family members of the staff. There are also sweat and effort of the family

members in these achievements. Here we would like to sincerely say "thank you

for your hard work". Winter vacation is a holiday full of festivities, and the

Spring Festival is an auspicious and happy festival. In order to have a full and

civilized Festival, the school puts forward the following suggestions.

Give yourself more reminders. We should always pay attention to the safety

of fire, electricity and gas during the holidays. When visiting relatives and

friends, we must pay attention to guard against theft, close the doors and

windows, lock the door, and do not drive after drinking to ensure the safety of

yourself and your family. We should consciously avoid gambling, drinking, feudal

superstitious activities and indulging in the Internet. We should do more

physical exercise every day and take part in healthy and beneficial cultural and

recreational activities. Pay attention to scientific diet, dont overeat and

take good care of your body.

Give more time to study. Winter vacation has a relatively concentrated time

to be at your disposal. It is suggested that you should arrange a little time

for self "charging". On the one hand, we should sum up the experience and

lessons in the work of this semester and formulate the work plan and objectives

for the next semester; on the other hand, we can calm down to get familiar with

the curriculum standards of teaching subjects and read the textbooks for the

next semester in advance. Read one or two good books, study some education and

teaching theory, constantly enrich, enrich, improve themselves. Let thinking and

practice walk together, let oneself better adapt to the needs of classroom

teaching reform.

Give your family more care. Enjoy the family, our life journey is not

lonely, spread the family, can win the respect of others. During the Spring

Festival, lets be filial to our elders, take care of our younger ones, and keep

in touch with our friends. In particular, we should take care of our bodies,

experience the beauty of human nature and feel a better life in dedication and

care.

Finally, once again, I wish you all a safe, happy, peaceful and meaningful

festival. I wish all staff and their families a happy Spring Festival, all the

best of luck, good health and a happy family!

Dear teachers

hello everyone!

Novel coronavirus our wills unite like a fortress. The Spring Festival

holiday in 2020 has been a long time for us. Facing the sudden outbreak of the

new coronavirus, the people of the whole country are united in their efforts to

fight the epidemic. In this battlefield without gunpowder smoke, as a member of

the real primary school kindergarten, we should always put "the life safety and

health of teachers and students first", respond to the epidemic situation with a

positive attitude, and do our best with a high sense of social responsibility!

To this end, the following initiatives are issued to all teachers:

1、 Be the forerunner of scientific epidemic prevention

Teachers should follow the novel coronavirus pneumonia prevention

guidelines and other epidemic prevention regulations, do not gather, do not

gather, do not gather at the gathering place, eliminate contact with the

relevant personnel in key areas of epidemic prevention and control, wear masks

outside, wash hands frequently, return to good hygiene habits, do well in their

own and family health management, and actively cooperate with the community

(Village) group control. Work, strengthen physical exercise, improve physical

quality, fully show the good image of peoples teachers.

2、 To be a caretaker of students

At this special moment, every teacher should pay more attention to and care

for children. Through wechat group, QQ group and other ways, we should further

strengthen the scientific prevention guidance for children and parents, do a

good job in the touch and arrangement of each child, understand the daily

movement and health situation of children, and summarize them according to the

times of the school. Guide parents to take good care and supervision, remind

parents to pay close attention to childrens physical and mental health,

appropriate exercise, reasonable diet, to ensure childrens physical and mental

health.

3、 Be the practitioner of online service

As the saying goes, "spring is at the end of a year". According to the

guiding opinions on primary and secondary schools and kindergartens during the

delayed start of epidemic prevention and control in Chongqing city "issued by

the Municipal Academy of education and science, Shixiao kindergarten has decided

to guide children to" suspend classes and never stop school, Da Ai Yong online

"during the period of school extension

1. According to the needs of epidemic prevention and control, the school

will be postponed. Teachers scientifically arrange their own work and life at

home, and take grade group as the unit, formulate online learning activities

(including one week activity plan, work and rest schedule, activity content,

childrens learning feedback and other requirements).

2. Through the class wechat group (or QQ group) upload activity

arrangement, effectively carry out the class self-help learning guidance work

(childrens learning feedback).

3. Adhere to professional reading, read "learning with children" carefully,

and think about the kindergarten based curriculum of "etiquette education"

combined with class examples.

In this special holiday, lets always pay attention to the growth of

children and use professional strength to convey warmth and love! Home hand in

hand, accompany children to spend special holidays!

Dadukou Experimental Primary School Kindergarten

★英语话题作文10篇★

★英语书信格式及范文★

★给英语老师的信带翻译★

★给某人写信英文范文★

The teacher often said: "three years long, between the classmate to help each other, complement each other." Time flies like an arrow, the sun is like a boat. Everybody good knowledge of it at first a stranger, what kind of novel look at those students, more than a year has passed, have already established a profound friendship between. Teacher speak the truth and did not get tired.

He is very nice in our eyes, but sometimes a little naughty. He kindly no matter the students how to tease him when he is only a smile, he would not speak ill of students in front of the parents. He is always carrying a smooth bald head into the classroom, with a Chinese book under her arm is in a good mood when smiling, pull a long face when in a bad mood. The students secretly likes to call him "elder brother". In your leisure time, he also has a funny always take out a cellular phone to give us a few jokes, even if some students dont want to listen to pour cold water on him and just laugh it off. No one dared to speak out of the class when he was serious, a question all scrambling to raise their hands.

Teacher in my eyes is very cute, but also have a hateful, I admit that we all love to talk, the teacher in the above convention KaiXiaoHui below, we better not demons in class to find a so-called "bosom friend", just because, talk a few words will soon be living the learner to breaking up"

As the saying goes: "a day for the teacher, lifelong for the father." And one of our class to take this opportunity to extort a teacher, not cheat the achievements were classmates laughed: such as emotional school so many teachers are your parents, so many students are your brothers and sisters. We are all sweat.

Teacher, thank you for not give dozen small report, thank you for your trust in us, have been so teaches us thank you so much!

老师常说：”三年之长，同学之间要互相帮忙，取长补短。“光阴似箭，日月如梭。刚来的时候大家都好知识陌生人，用哪种新奇的眼神看着那些同学，一年多过去了，之间早已经建立起了深厚的友谊。老师讲的大道理又何尝不是都听腻了。

在我们眼中他很慈祥，有的时候却又有点调皮。他慈祥的时候不论同学们怎样戏弄他他都只面带微笑，他不会在家长面前说学生的种种坏话。他总是带着一平滑的光头进教室，腋下夹着一本语文书心情好的时候面带笑容，心情不好时愁眉苦脸。同学们背地里都喜欢叫他“强哥”。他也有搞笑的时候，空闲时总是掏出手机给我们讲几篇笑话，即便有的同学不想听倒泼冷水他也只是一笑而过。他严肃起来的时候全班没人敢出声，一提问题大家都争先恐后的举起手。

我眼中的老师很可爱，但也有令人可恨得时候，我承认，我们都爱讲话，老师在上边开大会我们在下边开小会，在班级里好不容鬼找了个所谓的“知己”，就因为唠了几句话就快被活“生生给拆散了”

俗话说得好：“一日为师，终身为父。”而我们班的某位同学就借此机会想敲诈老师一笔，还没等诈成就被同学嘲笑道：感情学校这么多老师都是你父母，这么多学生都是你兄弟姐妹。我们都汗言了。

老师，谢谢您不给打小报告，谢谢您一直以来都这么的信任我们，谢谢您教会了我们这么多!

我上五年级了，要说我最喜欢的新老师，那就是英语老师——王海梅。

王老师黑黑的，一张圆圆的脸，大大的眼睛上带着一副眼睛，红润的嘴巴旁边有两个逗人的小酒窝。

王老师虽然个子不高，但课上得十分精彩，她像一双无形的双手，把我们像磁铁一般吸引住了。王老师让有的组开火车朗读，如果你读得很好，口型、读音读正确的话，王老师会用欣赏的眼光表扬你：“Good！”。假如你读音跟口型都不正确的话，王老师会很耐心地把你教对。你读正确了，王老师会欣喜地说声：“Goog！”每当同学们被人夸奖之后，心里就像喝了蜜一样甜，脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。

我们班的调皮鬼——陶文星，上英语课竟然规规矩矩的，听得非常认真。那是因为第一节课的时候，陶文星把两个红色书签贴在自己的脸上，活像个逗人的小丑，同学们都哄堂大笑。王老师见了，微笑着说：“大家看，帅。”大家都被老师的话逗得哈哈大笑。

接着，老师语重心长地对陶文星说：“你看，大家都笑了，说明这个不帅，以后不要再玩了，好吗？”说完后，她就把陶文星脸上的书签撕了。陶文星也点了点头。

下课了，同学们都和王老师在一起玩，王老师跟我们一起谈谈自己生活和烦恼，这时她就是我们的知心朋友。

我喜欢我的英语老师，她幽默、平易近人、爱表扬人，我们都很喜欢她。

一转眼，我已是一名初中生了。来到了一个陌生的地方，陌生的人，还有我们的老师。

我们班的班主任是宁老师，第一次看见她（其实也不是以第一了，在补习的时候就见过了，我就觉得她很亲近，因为她不发什么脾气。可是，第一天上课时就发了好大的火，因为一位同学无故旷课惹起的。那时候我们可是提心吊胆的啊！宁老师夏天的时候最爱穿裙子，我都感觉有些腻了，，不过总结起来也挺好看的，宁老师是中等身材，你可别小看她那一张嘴，她可是能说会道呢！一双眼睛如孙悟空的火眼金睛一样，一有什么人讲话或做小动作她都能立马发现，厉害吧！(这个技能我都被发现了好几次）。我和新老师认识还没多久，不是很了解啦！以后我再跟你们细细道来吧！

教我们语文的是李老师，她大概三十几对了，个子突高，头发如学生头一般，但周围又有些碎碎的短发，慈祥的脸上嵌刻这一双清澈的眼睛和面带着严肃的表情。上课时，脸上总带着不易察觉的微笑，课堂上她的声音就似她的法宝，只需一听她声音的大小就知道有人在讲话了！有一次上课，我听课听着听着就看到外面去了，心思早不在课堂上了，已经飞到了九霄云外去了。就在我沉浸的时候，李老师大声的说：“这个‘而’字在这里的意思于前面的不同……”我当时就吓了一跳！心跳都有些频繁的跳着呢！你可别小看她‘弱不禁风’的，我都觉得她有点女强人的味道！哈哈！

数学的是鞠老师，一听这个姓你们脑海中会冒出‘猪’这个字吧！没办法，睡觉读音这么相似呢？鞠老师身材稍胖，声音没有李老师有特色，但她也有自已不平凡的地方，至于特点，小的还没观察出，不过，生物老师的特点在于跟我们讲话的时候。她相貌挺普通，但我却觉得她好有趣哦！上课的时候，她对我们说：“今天第一节课捏，同学们就自已拿书本看看呐，自已看课本捏。”我听了都有点偷笑，之后，生物老师每句话中都有带‘捏’‘呐’这几个词耶！而且用的次数都超过二次以上哦！我想，这应该就是生物老师的口头禅吧！不对不对，每次都在最后讲，应该是‘借口禅’，哇哈哈，我太有才了！

在这里就只介绍这几位新老师了，因为还有些老师不了解，所以现在就不一一介绍了。

在新学期中，我又认识了几位良师益友，虽说老师有时很啰嗦，不过，我知道也是为我们好。老师，这是一个光彩夺目的名称，像一颗颗灿烂的明星，永远闪耀在我们的心中。

[我们班的新老师初一作文

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

In the past in the junior middle school time，I believe that everyone has a memorable teacher yourself。I also dont listed outside。 She is my teacher in charge——Miss He.Shes very beautiful and very kind to us. She has long hair and big eyes and she is 1.70 metres tall. In the second day, I had a bad illness。So take a week off to the teacher. After Miss He knows told I have a good for illness.A week later, back to school. Miss He find I talk to say I teach math, immediately to the mid-term exam, you have been away for a week of class. Your math foundation and thin. Meet dont understand in class and after class can come to me, also can turn to the math class representative for help, I have a greeting。In what the help of the teacher and theclassrepresentative, mid-term exam I had obvious increase in math. I never say thank you to the teacher, borrow the composition today say thank you. I wish the teacher everything goes well.

Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing to share my ideas about our English class. Now, our main material in the class is the textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can get some other resources, such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We can learn the basic knowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other materials. In addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which will be useful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from learning and develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours,

Bella

The traffic problem is one of the most serious problems in my hometown.

Recently, more and more people have private car, but the roads are so narrow

that we have to fight against the heavy traffic when we go out. Especially

during the rush hours, cars and buses are unable to move. To make things worse,

many people are killed in the traffic accidents. How miserable it is!

For the sake of our life and security, some measures must be taken to

change the present situation. In the first place, as there are a great many

cars, we should control the number of private cars and vehicles and use the

public transportation more often. Secondly, the government should widen the

roads and build more flyovers, so as to ease the traffic pressure and reduce the

traffic accidents. In addition, the undergrounds and light rails should be

constructed, so that we can have more choices when going out and do not have to

worry about the traffic jams in the future.

I believe the traffic problem could be solved if we devote our actions to

them.

我的英语老师唯一的爱好就是跳江南styl，他喜欢笑，讲起课来很随意，讲着课随便都可以插入5分钟的笑话，或者不经意间就和同学们聊起天来，所以他整个人看起来很随和，同学们都喜欢他的课，因为在他的课堂上总是乱七八糟的。

我也不例外，我特别喜欢上英语课，当然喜欢英语课的另外一个原因是我的英语成绩还不错。有一天上英语晚自习的时候，英语老师组织同学们考试，先交完试卷的同学们可以自己干自己的事情，他要求同学们不要说话就行，于是我拿出一张纸，在上边画上两只小猪，用英语在旁边标注着英文两只小猪的对话，写完后我居然大胆的在纸上边用铅笔标注着英语老师的名字。当我拿着自己的杰作开心的给同桌看时，居然被我那小气的同桌给告发了。

我知道自己闯了祸，像一个犯了错的罪人一样顿时立在自己的座位旁边不敢出声。还好老师给我面子，没当着全班同学的面数落我，让我和同桌跟着他去办公室谈，他让我写份检讨拿给他，可当我第二他拿给他检讨的时候他看也没看一眼，告诉我说下不为例，果真是宰相肚里能撑船，多么随和的一个人，他大人不记，我这个小人自然就好过了。

“老师”——是人类灵魂的工程师，她们哺育了一棵又一棵稚嫩的幼苗，培养了一批又一批出色的人才。在她们那精心呵护之下，我们降、活泼的成长。在那么多的老师中，给我印象最深的却是她——教了我半个学期的数学老师——陈老师。

陈老师中等身材，留着一头乌黑亮丽的长发，白净的脸上嵌着一双炯炯有神的大眼睛，仿佛能够看出我们同学的内心世界。但是，她留给我印象最深的却是她那爱生如子的好品质。

记得有一次，我发了高烧，烧到了三十九度五。恰好爸爸出差了，妈妈又在值班，所以我没有去学校请假。陈老师知道后，立马来到我家看望我。她握着我的手，微笑着对我说：“孩子，你发烧了，高烧三十九度五呢！你想吃点什么，老师去给你买……”当时，我虽然高烧不退，但我神志很清醒。“陈老师，您来了。”我对陈老师说。“是的，孩子，老师来了。孩子，你感觉怎么样？”这时，我的眼睛湿乎乎的……第二天，我还是没有去学校上课，陈老师又来看望我了。她见我捧着语文书，便对我说：“孩子，你别太累了，等你病好后，我们都会帮你补课的，你现在最重要的就是休息……”我心中汹涌澎湃：陈老师，您每天忠于家务，忙于家务，现在我病了，您又来看望我……想到这里，我的泪水夺眶而出……在陈老师的关心下，我的病一天天好了起来。回到学校，我就参加了期中考试，由于这几天没有上课，我才考了70多分。这时候，陈老师又忙来安慰我：“孩子，这次考试没有考好不怪你，来，我帮你把落下的功课补上吧！这道题……”在陈老师的帮助下，期末考试，我终于取得了100分的好成绩。陈老师在“寄语表”上写到：“‘天才是百分之一的灵感，百分之九十九的汗水。祝贺你取得了优异的成绩，但成绩只能代表过去，不能够代表未来，愿你再接再厉，取得更好的成绩！”看完这张“寄语表”后，我多想对陈老师说：“陈老师，在我这100分里，有一半分是您的，谢谢您！”

现在，我来到了北京。虽然离开了陈老师，可我还是想对她说：“陈老师，您永远是我最尊敬、最爱戴的人！”

[我的老师初中初一优秀作文

Three grade, and we have an English class, teaches us English is a female teacher, she xing4 pan, we call her pan. Pan grow very beautiful, she is slim, her eyes are large, eyelash long, like comb furl hairstyle. One day in English class, pan with her gentle and pleasant sound tell stories in English, led us to read English words, we soon learned to pan, teacher like us, revealing the happy smiling face. That day, many of our classmates have a to do amiss, pan it carefully to teach us, teach again and again, never see her hair far and has never seen her appear impatient. Pan with her gentle and friendly voice asked: "can?" That sounds like a mother, like a warm breeze of our hearts, let me really moved! Again and again the pronunciation errors, dont have standard pronunciation, English teacher still use soft voice teach us. I like our English teacher -- pan teacher!

Dear Mr. Wang,

Hello!

Recently, our class held the "Beautiful Christmas Chorus Competition" activity, I was unable to participate in the school recitation team recording activity, so I feel very sorry.

Remember Monday, you asked the students: "these days there are two festivals - Christmas and New Years Day, which holiday do you want to celebrate? We happen to coincide with the selection of "Christmas", of course, this is also my favorite holiday, it can be seen that we love Christmas in particular. Although, the festival chose my favorite, but when the team leader, not so gratified. You let the students recommend, but for some reason, the students did not choose me. I think, if you can recommend yourself first, then let the students vote on it. Because only let the students recommend or vote, the recommended students may not want to be, while the equivalent students like me, but may not have the opportunity, do you think I said reasonable?

Teacher, in fact, this is a small matter, the most regrettable is not able to spend Christmas with my classmates. How I envied bu Qingyang the other day for his successful participation in the party! Do you know? That afternoon, during the rehearsal of the recitation team, we were absent-minded, dejected and extremely sad.

Teacher, in fact, I understand your work, you are also for our good, I just want to talk with you about my heart.

merry

The work is smooth

Song Yuxuan

Our school sports activities are rich and colorful, students can according to their own interest and hobby.

Look! Side of the students in playing table tennis, play is really fierce. If you were a little to disturb him, he will definitely not ignore you, if he lose the best chance to beat the opponent, he would have called you. Their meets table tennis table tennis racquet "lit up" sound, like playing music. Rival, always grasp the opportunity, look, the chance came, rival buckle the board, too handsome, this plate highlighted his personality.

Play basketball in the fashion now. Students of a class is a race against time to play basketball, especially the game the most interesting, can exercise the body, and can cultivate the spirit of teamwork, he is of great benefit to people. The school team after concentrated training, has the extraordinary skill, saw this scene I really envy for them. I also want to be a player when he grows up.

On physical education teacher ordered us to do a minute sit-ups and make record, the result of our class Huang Xu classmate, broke the record in four grade: 51 sit-ups. He once in Tian Ji games, after arduous efforts to create a miracle, won the first place.

Sports can strengthen peoples physique, as a celebrity said: "life is movement, and knowledge is gained by accumulation.

我们学校的体育活动真是丰富多彩，同学们可以根据自己的兴趣、爱好参加。

瞧!这边的同学在打乒乓球呢，打得真激烈。你要是稍微打扰他一下，他绝对会不会理睬你，如果他失去打败对手的机会，他准会骂你。他们的乒乓拍碰到乒乓的时候发出“蹦蹦蹦”响声，像奏乐似的。对手一直把握机会，看，机会终于来了，对手反扣一板，动作实在太帅了，这一板突出了他的个性。

现在流行打蓝球了。同学们一下课就争分夺秒的去打篮球，特别是比赛最有趣，既能锻炼身体，又能培养团队合作精神，他对人们大有好处。那些校队经过集中训练，有着非同一般的球技，看见这一幕我真是对他们羡慕不已。长大后我也要当一名球员。

上体育课的时候老师命令我们做一分钟的仰卧起坐并做好记录，结果我们班的黄旭同学，打破了小学四年级的最高记录：51个仰卧起坐。他曾经在田际运动会中，经过艰辛的努力创造了奇迹，获得了第一名的好成绩。

运动能增强人的体质，正如名人所说：“生命在于运动，知识在于积累。

Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher. She oomes from New Zealand. She is thirty-one years old. She has fair hair, white skin and gray eyes. She is tall and slim. She looks very kind. And in fact, she is kind indeed.

Ms Jerry is a good teacher. Although she only comes to our school twice a week, yet she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students. Once. she was ill, but she went on giving us lessons. When we learned this, we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.

Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm:" Eaoh lesson she Will bring us new pictures, new stories, new games and new songs. Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.

Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.

陆昊然

“哈哈哈！”经常能听见笑声从教室传出，这肯定就是我们幽默的英语老师在上课。

她长得不高不矮，面容清秀，樱桃小嘴，长发披肩，还有双会说话的眼睛，经常逗的我们哈哈大笑。

她才三十几岁，却有着丰富的知识，还会用一些英语说笑话，下课时她会带我们做游戏，给我们东西吃，因此我用英语给她取了个外号叫，“howlong”。

虽然平时龙老师这么幽默，但是一上课就像变了一个人似的，非常严肃，只要是她讲过的题，我们一而再，再而三的错，她就会大发雷霆，但是她一看我们的表情又会哈哈大笑。比如有一次一张试卷上的题要改否定句，一般疑问和特殊疑问句，我们班有13个人没做出来，一开始她发怒了，用马克笔和戒尺重重的敲在白板上，后来我们都会了她就笑了。

这就是我们的龙老师，我会永远记住她。

Of all the subjects， I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher。 Though she has been teaching us for only three years， I respect and love her very much。

My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short。

Ms Sun works very hard。 She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office。 She tries to make her classes lively and interesting。 And we enjoy her lessons very much。

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us。 And were getting on well with each other。 But she is very strict with us in our studies。

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese。 All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school。

在所有的科目中，我最喜欢语文，因为我有一个好的语文老师，虽然她教我们三年了，我很尊重她。

我的中文老师是三十六岁，她既不高也不短。

孙老师工作很努力，她总是第一个来，最后一个离开她的办公室，她试图使她的课生动有趣。我们非常喜欢她的课。

孙女士对我们很友好，对我们很友好，我们相处的很好，但是她对我们的学习要求很严格。

孙老师教我们，我们都喜欢学中文，所有的学生都认为她是我们学校最受欢迎的老师之一。