初三英语作文保持健康(汇集20篇)

People want to have good health.what is good health?you are feeling strong and well.your eyes are bright and clear.your face is clean and fresh.you feel happy and ready for anything.you enjoy your work and life.you are in good health.exercise is one of the forms to keep our body in good health.exercise trains the muscles and makes them stronger.you can walk and throw a ball because you have trained your muscles to do these things.feel the soft part of your arm.you are feeling muscles.when you bend your arm you can feel the big muscles move and become firmer.exercise not only keeps the muscles of the limbs and body in good condition,but also strengthens the muscles of the heart and organs of breathing.exercise helps to make the heart strong.have you ever felt your beat?it beats faster when you are running than when you are sitting still.the heat pumps blood more freely when we do exercise,and serves all parts of the body better.exercise helps the lungs to do better work.too full and rapid breathing develops the muscles of the chest.lets take part in exercise.the earlier,the better.

With the fast development of online communication tools and online chatting tools, an increasing number of people are inclined to make friends online. However, is it wise to make friends online? People from different backgrounds and cultures have divergent views concerning this issue.

随着网络通信工具和在线聊天工具的快速发展，越来越多的人倾向于在网上交友。然而，在网上交朋友是明智的吗?来自不同背景和文化的人们对这一问题有不同的看法。

For one thing, those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of it. They claim that making friends online has many advantages compared to communicate with each other in face to face. For instance, making friends online can communicate with our friends at any time to strengthen our relationship and save a lot social resources. And we can keep in touch with our friends when we have no time to visit them in person. They also point out that making friends online provides a good chance for us to communicate with people from different social backgrounds and cultures. In other words, making friends online can broaden our horizon and widen our personal relationships. In addition, it also makes contribution to narrow our gap in area and culture.

一方面，那些已经受益于网上交友的人是赞成的。他们说网上交友有比彼此面对面交流更有优势。例如，网上交友可以随时与我们的朋友交流来加强我们的关系，节约社会资源。在我们没有时间见面时，我们可以与我们的朋友保持联系。他们还指出，网上交朋友为我们提供了一个与不同的社会背景和文化的人交流的好机会。换句话说，网上交友可以拓宽我们的视野，拓宽我们的个人关系网。而且，这也为缩小我们在地域、文化方面的差距作贡献。

However, for another, other people hold opposite views towards this issue. They argue that it is dangerous to make friends online. They cite many examples that people cheated by online friends. And they figure out that sometimes it will cause some misunderstanding in culture because some online friends tell lies and provide wrong information.

然而，另一方面，其他人对这个问题持有相反的观点。他们认为在网上交朋友是很危险的。他们举出很多被网友欺骗的例子。他们指出有时会引起一些文化上的误解，因为一些网上的朋友会说谎并提供错误的信息。

In my point of view, I am inclined to favor the former though we should be careful when making friends online. To put it in a nutshell, it is wise to make friends online.

在我看来，我倾向于同意前者，但在网上交友的时候我们是应该小心。简而言之，在网上交朋友是明智的。

Maybe many people know the universe is very big. Some scientists thought the universe seems to be rapidly expanding its component galaxies moving ever farther apart. So it’s very big. There are many heavenly bodies in the universe. If you stand in space, you will see many beautiful stars, like sun and other planets.

And then, let’s recognize our solar system. There are eight planets in our solar system. They’re Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune. The Sun is very hot. Its surface has 5600℃. Its gravitation is very strong. So the Earth goes around Sun. And the Earth is our home. We’re living on the Earth, and it is the most beautiful in the solar system. It has lots of water and plants. And the moon is the Earth’s partner. It goes around the Earth. And other planets are very far from the Earth. So the people can’t reach them and none of them has an environment with air. The people also can’t live in them.

Finally, let’s see in the sky in the night. There is much beautiful and magic view in the universe.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：AbouttheUniverse

During May Day holiday, I went to my uncle’s home to meet my new little bother and he is a baby.

My little bother has got big eyes, a small nose, and a small mouth that looks like a cherry. But my little bother cant talk, and the only thing he can do is crying.

My little bother is very lovely. He likes frown very much. When he frowns, it looks like that he is just thinking some questions. When he falls to sleep, it looks like swimming. When he cries, the sound is very interesting. It sounds like he is counting numbers or he is singing. Maybe he wants to be a singer.

I love my little brother, Do you like him? I hope my little bother can be a super star in the future. At that time I will be proud of him.

Today, the young generation likes to stay up, because after a day’s working, they will find fun at night, so they are getting home very late and then wake up late, too. As they are wake up so late, they will ignore their breakfast and wait for the lunch, today people will call the meal brunch, it means to eat things between breakfast and lunch time. The fact is that not eating breakfast is bad for our health, our body hasn’t take in things all the night, we need to take in some nutrition in the morning time, so the body can have the energy to work. Thinking about this, how a machine can work well without electricity, and the breakfast is the electricity. As breakfast is so important, we must have it on time, so our body can work well and keep healthy.

We cant have good luck forever,so learning how to face difficulities is important.Some people feel upset when they meet difficulities,and they dont want to try to let their dreams come ture anymore.They just want to find a place and stay at there for a long time.So they wont have a great success in the end.But others are different,some people dont think difficulities are troubles,they believe " Difficulities is the mother of the successand"Believe in myself and I will win ,they are confident and brave,and they choose to face the difficulities with a smile.They try their best to solve their problems and if they dont feel well,theyll talk to their friends or family members,so that they can be happier and more confident.And they dont mind what others say about them,they can always find a good way for themselves to relax.

I think if you can have a good psychology when you meet difficulities in your life,and be more confident and brave,

try to find a good way to relax,maybe talk to others or have a rest,and then think it over,make a plan to solve your problems.If you do so, youll find that your difficulities are not as difficult as you think before!

我们不可能永远好运,所以学习如何面对英明是很重要的。有些人感到心烦时满足英明,他们不想让自己的梦想成真了。他们只是想找个地方,呆在那里很长一段时间。所以他们不会有一个巨大的成功。但其他人是不同的,有些人不认为英明的麻烦,他们相信“英明是成功之母”,“相信自己,我将赢”,他们有信心和勇敢,选择微笑着面对英明。他们尽力解决他们的问题,如果他们不舒服,他们会告诉他们的朋友或家人,这样他们可以更快乐、更自信。他们不介意别人怎么说,他们总是可以找到放松自己的好方法。

我认为如果你能有一个好的心理学当你遇到你生命中的英明,和更加自信和勇敢,

找一个放松的好办法,也许跟他人或休息一下,然后好好想想,制定一个计划来解决你的问题。如果你这样做,你会发现你的英明并不像你想的那么困难!

All over the world people enjoy sports. Sports help to keep people healthy and happy, and to live longer.

Sports change with the seasons. People play different games in winter and summer. Swimming is fun in warm weather, but skating is good in winter.

Some sports are so interesting that people everywhere go in for them. Football, for example, has spread around the world. Swimming is popular in all countries near the sea or in those with many rivers. Some sports or games go back thousands of years, like running or jumping. Chinese wushu, for example, has a very long history. But basketball and volleyball are rather new. People are inventing new sports or games all the time. Water skiing is one of the newest in the family of sports.

People from different countries may not be able to understand each other, but after a game together they often become good friends. Sports help to train a persons character. One learns to fight hard but fight fair, to win without pride and to lose with grace.

When I was young,the body is not good at all,often catch a cold.Then I listen to my grandma said: exercise can make people healthy.

So I began to practice badminton,I practiced for several years,I in those years practice almost a cold,sick,no small trouble.

I remember once,my mother and I play.The start of the match,a mother of a fly ball,let me be taken by surprise,the first round is completed,I temporarily behind.Second I adjust the good mentality,the mothers weakness,defeated the mother.

After the game,I came back home the sequence of events listen to my father,her father laughed and said:transport functions bring health and happiness,you know,you can grow up.

Sports can bring people happiness and health.

Please come here to participate in the movement!

My parents are teachers, so they want me to read more books. When I started to learn reading, they bought me a lot of novel books, such as Harry Potter, Alice In the Wonderland and so on. I saw the movie first, and then I would have the interest to read the novels. I found that the novel were with much more details and I was absorbed in it. The literary books not only described an attractive world, but the more important thing was that it enlightened me to be a better girl. what I learned from these novels helps me to be independent and I have my own thinking.

我的父母是老师,所以他们想让我读更多的书。当我开始学习阅读的时候,他们给我买很多小说书,比如《哈利波特》,《爱丽丝梦游仙境》等等。我一般先看电影,然后我就会有兴趣读小说。我发现小说有更多的细节,我完全沉浸其中。文学书籍不仅描述了一个有吸引力的世界,但更重要的是,它启发我成为一个更好的女孩。我从这些小说学到的将帮助我独立,拥有我自己的思考。

[The Literary Novel初三学生英语作文

I likeChristmas, it is just like our spring festival.

Maybe the spring festival is much more important and interesting than christmas, but i like christmas day better. Because we can spend time with our friends and classmates during christmas. When it is snowy,

Christmas becomes much more lovely, just like in fairytales. I can imagine i am in a fairytale, the girl who sold the matches is my friend, the ugly duck becoming more and more beautiful and so on. What a beautiful place! So we can also call christmas “snowy lovely day.”

On christmas day, shops are red and green. There are so many christmas cards, christmas hats, christmas dolls and many colourful things. So shops look very beautiful. We can give a card or a doll to our friends and say “merry christmas.” By the way, i think studying can also become much more interesting.

The Great Wall of China is called the "Ten thousand Ii Great Wall" in

Chinese. In fact, it s more than 6 000 kilometres long. It winds its way from

west to east, across deserts, over mountains, through valleys till at last it

reaches the sea.It is one of the wonders of the world.The Great Wall has a history of over twenty centuries. The first part of it

was built during the Spring and Autumn Period.

During the Warring States Period, more walls were put up to defend the

borders of the different kingdoms.It was during the Qin Dynasty that the kingdom of Qin united the dif ferent

parts into one empire.

To keep the enemy out of his empire, Emperor Qin Shi Huang had all the

walls joined up. Thus, the Great Wall came into being.The Great Wall is wide enough at the top for five horses or ten men to walk

side by side.Along the wall are watchtowers, where soldiers used to keep watch.Fires were lit on the the towers as a warning when the enemy came.It was very difficult to build such a wall in the ancient days without any

modern machines.

All the work was done by hand. Thousands of men died and were buried under

the wall they built. The Great Wall was made not only of stone and earth, but of

the flesh and blood of millions of men.

Today the Great Wall has become a place of interest not only to the Chinese

but to people from all over the world. Many of them have come to know the famous

Chinese saying: "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man."

I have a beautiful house. my parents and i live in our house now. it is near the lake. we all like our house. we are very happy.

our house is not very big, but i think it is very good. look! here is the door. it is open. let us go and visit our house.

welcome to our house. there are three bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a large sitting room in our house. let us look at my small room first. there is a bookcase in my room. there are many books in the bookcase. on the right of the bookcase, there is a bed. there is a doll and some clothes on the bed. there are a lot of posters on the wall. near the bookcase, there is a desk. i study at it every day. on the desk, there is a computer. i often play computer games on it. there are two lamps and a clock in my small room, too.

look at our parents’ room, there is a tv and a sofa. there is a big bed in it, too. there are lots of pictures and two lamps on the wall.

then look at our sitting room, there is a tv and two sofas in it. there are two tables and chairs in the sitting room, too.

we like our house very much. do you like it?

Sports do us good in many respects. It goes without saying that taking

exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like

basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of

cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and

arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a

period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, there are two sides to

everything, and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or

ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities.

Whats more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.

星期六早上我去了北京动物园。

I went there with my teachers by bus. It took us half an hour to get there. There were many kinds of animals. First, we went to see pandas. They were my favorite animals. How lovely they were!Then we watched the elephant show. The elephants were so clever that they were able to answer some math questions. At last, I took some photos of them. I had a great time. I stayed in Beijing Zoo for 2 hours.

我和我的老师们一起坐公共汽车去了动物园。去到那里花了我半个小时。有各种各类的动物。首先，我们去看了大象。它们是我最喜欢的动物。它们是多么可爱啊！之后我们看了大象表演。大象是如此的聪明，它们可以回答一些数学问题。最后，我给它们照了一些照片。我玩得很开心。我在北京动物园呆了两个小时。

When I came back home, I was tired but happy. I will remember these lovely animals. I am looking forward to seeing them again.

当我回到家的时候，我又累又开心。我会记住这些可爱的动物的。我期待着再次见到它们。

8My hometown

Great changes in my hometown

More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life .

Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of ways of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People’s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to the government’s efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful .

9My house

We have a new flat. It’s on the third floor. There are there bedrooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a big living room. I have my own room now. It’s big and nice. There is a big curtains and an air-conditioner. It’s nice. I love my new room very much.

9 My House

We have just moved into a new flat,like most people here living in their houses in the suburbs. Our house is big though it consists only two floors.

On the first floor there is the dining room, the lounge or sitting room, the kitchen and the hall. In the hall we set a stand for hats, coats and umbrellas. A staircase leads from the hall to the landing on the second floor; On this floor there are four bedrooms, a bathroom and a lavatory.In front of the house we have a small garden in which we grow flowers: roses,tulips and some fruit trees. Thereis also a vegetable garden where we grow all kinds of vegetables, such as cabbages, cauliflowers, and tomatoes. We all know how to plant vegetables for my father was once a vegetable grower.

At the side of the house is a garage. We havent got a car up to now, but my moths said: wed have one at the end of this year. People ,in this high-consumer city are very rich, not like the people live in the inland,cities.

我的家

我们家刚搬进一座新房。房子就像这里郊区大多数的住房一样。虽然只有两层，但房子很大。

一楼是饭厅、休闲室、起居室、厨房和门厅。我们把帽予、外套和雨伞放在门厅里。楼梯从门厅通往二楼。二楼有四间卧室，一个洗澡间和厕所。

房子前面有一个花园，里面种满了花，有玫瑰、郁金香，还有一些水果树。还有一个菜园，种了各种各样的蔬菜，有大白菜、花椰菜、西红柿等。我们都知道怎么种菜，因为爸爸曾经是菜农。

房子的一边是车库。我们还没有车，但妈妈说到年底就会有的。高消费城市的人们都很富有，不像住在内陆城市的人们。

10 The National Day

"Oct,1 of every year is our National Day.Today is Oct 1st,2012 and is also our National Day.It is a important festival in Ｃhina.The Fｉve- Star Flag is flying high in the sky of the Tiananmen Square. And we can have a eight-- days holiday.During the holiday,people can go to some places of interest for visiting.

On the early morning of the 1st day, I had my breakfast quickly with my family, and then went shopping outside with my several friends.After lunch, I went to the park and played badminton with my younger brother.I had planed to travel to some places of interest but yoｕcan see so many people ， so many cars，and traffic jam everywhere , so I spent the holiday at home. I got together with my family to enjoy the moonlight, discussed some interesting topics,talked about the legends such as "ChangEr". Of course,I didnt forget to do my homework. According to plan， I did my homework everyday,so I think I had a good time and I am very happy. And I wish everyone has a happy holiday.

汉语对照：

每年的10月,1日是我们的国庆日。今天是,2012年的10月1日,也是我们的国庆节。在中国这是一个重要的节日。五星国旗在天安门广场上空中高高飘扬。我们可以有一个8天的假期。节日期间,人们可以去一些名胜古迹参观。

在第一天的清晨,我和家人很快就吃完了早餐,然后和我的几个朋友去购物。午饭后,我去了公园，和我的弟弟和打羽毛球。我本来打算前往一些有趣的地方,但看到人多,车多,到处都塞车,所以我就在家度假了。我和家人一起欣赏月光,讨论了一些有趣的话题,谈了一些传奇故事,例如“長娥奔月”。当然,我没有忘记做功课。根据计划,每天我都做作业的,所以我过得很愉快，也很开心

[关于初三的英语作文

An increasing number of people are becoming aware of the significance of health maintainence . Just as the basic need of human beings for survival , like food to prevent starvation , and clothing to keep away from cold , being healthy is one essential element , which would be easily ignored . Here , tips for keeping good healthy are to be : work regularly and rest adequately , keep in good hours and have a healthy diet . If you do not intent to get yourself sick , exercising every moring would surely be the best way to prevent disease .

越来越多的人们已经意识到健康的重要性。只是作为人类生存的基本需要，如食物来防止饥饿，和衣物御寒，健康是最重要的一个要素，这将很容易被忽略。在这里，保持身体健康的小秘笈：规律的工作、充足的休息，保持良好的时间和有一个健康的饮食。如果你不想把自己生病，那么每天的晨练一定是预防疾病最好的方式。

Often can be seen that there are senior folks jogging and playing Taiji on the square or garden . And many young peers would much like to take sports gathering , such as table tennis and badminton , instead of spending the whole night getting drunk in bars . And as is known to all , tobacco an alcohol are the two greatest evils that creat negative affections on our health . Thus a man should definitely be sure of what to eat and what not , what to drink and what not . Besides , joining a family outdoor pinic in a shining weekend would be a lovely way to keep psychologically/mentally healthy . Anyway , health is the most precious gift that man can ever have .

经常可以看见，很多老年人在广场或公园慢跑，打太极拳。和许多年轻人也喜欢的体育盛会，如乒乓球和羽毛球，而不是花整晚在酒吧喝醉酒。而众所周知，烟草酒精是两个最大的罪恶创造不利影响我们的健康。因此，一个人应该明白，什么该吃什么不该吃什么，喝什么。此外，在一个阳光灿烂的周末参加一个家庭户外野餐会保持心理/精神健康可爱的方式。总之，健康是人所能拥有的最珍贵的礼物。

Today is Womens Day. I think it would be one of the most beautiful memories in my mothers life.

今天是妇女节。我觉得它会是我妈妈人生中最重要的记忆之一。

After school, I head to the supermarket which is not far from my home. Yes, you are right! I intend to cook a simple meal for my mother. It takes me an hour and a half to cook two dishes and a soup. It is not until my mom comes back that I finish my cooking. There is a sweet smile on her face. At that moment, there’s nothing could be better than her smile. Everything I do is worthy. With an air of warmth, I say, Mom, Happy Womens Day. Then she smiles.

放学后，我去了离家不远的超市。是啊，你猜对了。我想为妈妈做一顿简单的饭菜。我花了一个半小时，煮了两菜一汤。我妈妈回来前，我就煮好了。她脸上露出了甜美的微笑。在那一刻，没有什么能比她的微笑更美好的了。我所做的一切都是值得的。在温暖的气氛中，我说， 妈妈，妇女节快乐。”然后她微笑了。

How wonderful today is! I sincerely hope that my mother is happy every day.

今天是多么美妙啊!我真诚的希望我的母亲每天都是快乐的。

Summer vacation is coming, the happy mood cant tell, dont have to get up early to go to school every day, dont need to do homework every day, practice, also can see a lot of animation, ha ha...

But once a year of Latin dance competitions in the summer, often have to deepen practice, I like to dance, not only can enhance physical fitness, can also be good temperament, let me become more beautiful!

This years summer have another plan, is to go to my dream for a long time of Hong Kong Disney, finally look forward to that day, my mother and I and my cousins family, can early boarding a plane to Hong Kong Disney, flew to the fantastic when you get there, and I saw on TV about the tomorrowland, adventureland, fantasyland, American town and r Jones, the warehouse, I feel the most exciting is a roller coaster, the best is a small world, the most fun is a buzz lightyear ride, small town in the United States still has a lot of a lot we like gadgets, every little girl can fondle admiringly, eat the delicious homemade ice cream to street ice cream car.

My life is quite rich yellowed over the summer vacation, I had a very happy, play of very good! Looking forward to next year!

暑假到了，那种开心的心情无法表达，不用天天早起上学了，也不用天天写作业，练琴了，还能看很多的动画片了，哈哈……

不过每年一次的拉丁舞比赛就在暑期，还得经常加深苦练呢，我喜欢跳舞，不仅可以增强体质，也能练好气质，让我变得更加漂亮哦!

今年的暑期还有一个计划，就是去我梦想以久的香港迪斯尼，那天终于盼到，我和妈妈还有堂弟的一家人，登上开往香港的飞机可心早飞到了梦幻般的迪斯尼，到了那里，跟我在电视上看到的差不多那有明日世界、探险世界、幻想世界、美国小镇和反斗奇兵大本营，我感觉最刺激的是过山车，最美的是小小世界，最好玩的是巴斯光年星际历险，在美国小镇还有很多很多我们每个小女生都喜欢的小玩意，简直爱不释手，吃到最好吃的要数街边雪糕车的自制雪糕了。

我的暑假生活还挺丰富多彩吧，我过得很开心，玩的很过硬!期待明年吧!

这是04年某省的中考题目：根据美国朋友Bob来信的内容写一篇英文回信。

Dear friend,

亲爱的朋友，

Hello, Im your new friend. My name is [ename]Bob[/ename]. Im fifteen. Im American. I live in New York.

你好，我是你的新朋友。我的名字叫鲍勃，我十五岁，是美国人，我住在纽约。

I am a middle school student. Im good at maths. It is very interesting. My favourite sport is basketball. And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player. I like music. My friend and I often sing pop songs together.

我是一个初中生，我擅长数学，它很有趣。我最喜欢的运动是篮球，我不仅仅是一个篮球迷，也是一个很好的选手。我喜欢音乐，我经常跟我的朋友一起唱流行歌曲。

After school, I am interested in getting on-line. I have known a lot about China from the Internet. Now I am learning Chinese. I hope I will visit your country one day.

放学之后，我喜欢上网，通过网络，我了解了很多关于中国的事情，现在我在学汉语，我希望有一天能去你的国家游览。

Please write to me and tell me something about your life. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

请给我回信说说你的生活吧，我期待着你的来信。

[关于初三英语作文的范例：英语书信

Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health. But how to keephealthy? Different people may give different answers to this question. In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.

现在越来越多的人都关注自己的健康。可是如何保持健康呢?不同的人会给出不同的答案。在我看来，是十分必要的。

First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day. Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder. This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure. Thats why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises. Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise. Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music. In the afternoon,there are also many people keen on sports. Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events. Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.

首先，它每天做一些锻炼是绝对必要的。研究表明，多多锻炼身体使心脏跳动更快、肺更加努力工作。加强心脏功能，降低心脏病发作的可能性，同时有助于降低血压。这就是为什么越来越多的人在各种体育运动变得活跃。每天早上，许多人早起锻炼。一些练习太极拳和剑术而有的跑步，慢跑，散步或跳舞的音乐。在下午，也有很多人喜欢体育。有些打篮球或排球或乒乓球，还有些爱好体操或径赛项目。通过运动和锻炼，身体越来越健壮。

Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health. They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish. Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.

医学研究已经证明，人们吃的食物会影响他们的健康。他们劝告人们多吃水果和蔬菜，少吃牛肉、猪肉等肉类，因为肉类比家禽和鱼含有更多的脂肪。脂肪可积聚在动脉里，阻挡血液流通，并引起心脏病发作或中风。

Getting rid of bad habits like smoking and drinking alcohol is also an important way to keep healthy. Smoking and drinking alcohol injure ones health a great deal, and therefore should be given up. Unfortunately few people follow this advice.

摆脱坏习惯也是保持健康的重要方式。吸烟、酗酒极大地损害健康，因此应该放弃。不幸的是，遵照这一忠告的人寥寥无几。

If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they greatly improve their health.

如果人们遵循这三种方式保持健康，他们大大提高他们的健康。

whether teen should make their own decision

Whether teen should make their own decisions?I think we can talk about this question from two ways. On the one hand ,Although teen are young ,they have to make many important choices by themselves .such like making fiends ,wearing what kinds of clothes…… ,Teen should learn to plan things for themselves ,they need some skills to make a living in the future.many parents care about their children too much. This gives their children a lot of pressure .that is not good for teen. One the other hand ,although teen can make their decisions by them selves,but as for some serous things ,teen should also accept advice from their parents .because parents have more experience and they can tell you what is right and wrong.

点评：文章观点明确，能通过一分为二的辩证的观点看问题，非常好。思路清晰，句子前后连贯，过渡自然，句子结构正确，能够使用一些重要的短语和句型，简单句和复合句的并用增强了文章的色彩，提高了文章的档次。文章写得非常成功！继续努力哦！

美中不足： 只要注意一下个别单词的使用和字母的大小写就可以了。

[初三英语作文-whether teen should make their

Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save people s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.