我的假期英语作文高三(汇总20篇)

I have a happy holiday. In the holiday. I have do lots of thing.

First, I make a plan. Plan about everyday life and study. My life have rule.

Second, I according to plan execuition. Enable my holiday is very amplitude.

I watch TV, too. I love English today. Because I like English very much.

Sometimes I play the computer. I can watch MTV and learn English on computer.

I have a good holiday.

New Years day arrived, the school put three days off, I want to think how to arrange this three days holiday. Vacation the first day of my parents and I went to the grandmother home, grandmother home is very far from my home, the grandmother home, my mother cook at home with my grandma, my father and I went to grandma house playing in front of the river. Finished before you know it on the first day of the holiday, but I had a very happy and very happy.

On duty went to the second day of the holidays, mom, dad at home with my homework, dad said: after I had finished my homework, such as to take me to play behind the mountain, I hasten to write my homework quickly, good let dad took me out to play for a while, I used a very short time to finish your homework and check again. After finishing the homework, dad took me to the house behind the mountains play an afternoon. The second day of the holiday finished, just like that.

Tomorrow is the last day of the holiday I will review well at home, because the final is coming up, cant disappoint my parents and teacher I have to take an examination of a good best.

元旦到了，学校放了三天假，我要好好想一想这三天假期怎么安排。假期的第一天我和爸爸妈妈去了姥姥家，姥姥家离我家很远，到了姥姥家，妈妈在家陪姥姥做饭，爸爸和我去了姥姥家前边的小河玩。不知不觉的第一天假期过完了，但我过得很开心也很高兴。

假期的第二天，妈妈值班去了，爸爸在家陪我写作业，爸爸说：等我写完作业带我去后边的山上玩，我赶紧快写作业，好让爸爸带我出去玩 一会，我用了很短的时间把作业写完了也检查了一遍。写完作业后爸爸带我去了家后边的山上玩了一下午。假期的第二天就这样过完了。

明天是假期的最后一天我要在家好好复习，因为快要期末考试了，不能让老师和爸爸妈妈失望我要考出一个好最好成绩来。

Autumn sun lush, along the breeze blowing in the body is very comfortable.

I and my father, my mother decided to go to plum play. This year is the 61st anniversary of the National Day, far to see the mouth of the plum with a bright five-star red flag, people are taking pictures under the flag to commemorate the 61st birthday of the motherland, I could not help but with the flag Came a close contact.

Into the plum garden, everywhere crowded, can be lively! Everyones face is full of joy of the festival. Here are the National Day during the dragon lights will be held, a variety of paper lamp shape is very nice, there are monkeys, white rabbits, frogs, and swans ... ... my favorite is the dragon and peacock lanterns, they are With porcelain plate, porcelain dish, porcelain cup, porcelain spoon from the fight, and do lifelike, very beautiful. In the plum square on the east side of the square there is a group of Tiananmen and China table model, like a small version of Beijing Tiananmen Square, do very realistic.

I also stood in the "Tiananmen Square" before leaving a shadow, that photo to wash when people thought I was in Beijing Tiananmen Square shot it! Today can be really busy ah, usually very little out to play, although today is very tired to play, but still play with the mom and dad very happy!

译文：

秋天的太阳懒洋洋的，顺着清风吹在身上十分舒爽。我和爸爸、妈妈决定一起去梅园玩。

今年是国庆节61周年，远远的就看到梅园的大门口挂着一面鲜艳的五星红旗，人们都在国旗下拍照留影，以此纪念祖国的61岁生日，我也忍不住跟国旗来了个亲密接触。

走进梅园里，到处人山人海，可热闹了！每个人的脸上都充满了节日的喜悦。这里国庆期间正在举办火龙灯会，各种各样的纸灯造型十分好看，有小猴、有白兔、有青蛙、还有天鹅……我最喜欢的是巨龙和孔雀的彩灯，它们是用瓷盘、瓷碟、瓷杯、瓷勺拼扎而成的，做得栩栩如生，非常漂亮。 在梅园东面的广场上有一组天安门和华表的模型，就像是北京天安门的缩小版，做的很逼真。

我还站在“天安门”前留了个影，那张照片去洗的时候，人家还以为我是在北京天安门拍的呢！ 今天可真热闹啊，平时很少出来玩，虽然今天玩的很累，但还是和爸爸妈妈一起玩的很开心！

Courage is very important. Everyone needs it. We will meet many

difficulties in our life and sometimes we will fail, but we can’t lose courage.

If we lose courage, we can’t do anything, because we don’t dare to do anything;

we are afraid of failure. This is my Chinese teacher me in the first class. I

agree with him. For example, we don’t have the courage to hands up to say our

answer, how can we know we are right or wrong. I will remember his word

forever,” never lose courage .”

My vacation

my winter holiday is very dull. i stay at home for most of time. sometimes i visit my friends and play basketball with them. sometimes we go shopping.

one day， we go to the kfc. we have hamburgers， chicken coke and french fries. we have sore throats. we go home and have a rest. then we feel better. we go and play puter games! how mad we are!

this is the only thing i can talk about in the holiday.

My experience in working is not too long, but it is a bumpy experience.

A weight of less than ninety of the furniture I chose this profession, I have often been thin people bullying and indifference, and no longer call these I dont care, naive I thought that as long as the sincerity to pay, will service our weaknesses will be accepted, which in the eyes of others like it never happened.

My job is to give the furniture edge, every day I carefully to each board edge, to the class two, 2 to 3 meters and the bed, wardrobe, bookcase, small drawers for ten cm. In the face of the big 2, 3 meters long. I always try to make up for their own strength, so let the boss see have been shot, the boss asked not to put on the table, from the Paizi underground picking up, this alone is me, even physical good people also fear is it is very difficult, someone said, that time I luckily escaped unharmed.

And once we took the bull to feed the real pull the material, because of my physical strength can not suddenly fell away, again by the boss, then how this did not have the strength to hate myself. When the machine was bad, I had to blow my temper. I had a face when I didnt throw the board, and I had to bear it. Who called us a part-time job. Whos patience is limited, the boss see I placed the board edge on the table, and said angrily: I couldnt remember, to another factory made you open it, I always couldnt, Ill give you the boss fight.

Although I have been laid off, the heart is always a bit awkward, but I am also free at the same time, there is a loss. Some things can be held and put down.

Here I call on the brothers and sisters of the whole society, and people who have the same experience with me, and sometimes life should be simplified. You can pick it up, and you can put it down. Let the migrant workers live with dignity!

I have a good winner vacation!

In my winner vacation ，I often did my homework， and helped my mother clean rooms.

I sometimes went shopping with my friends . We had a good time! I also watched TV and played puter games. During Spring Festival ，I visited my grandparents.

I was very happy ，I think my winner vacation was very interesting!

As it’s known to all, China is popular for its emperor of bicycles. This is because our country is still a developing country and few people can afford private cars. The demand for a means of transport is met by making millions of bicycles available.

Riding a bicycle has a lot of advantages over driving a car. First, it is a physical exercise to ride a bicycle. In contrast, sitting in the car, one tends to gain weight. Besides, it is much more economical to ride a bike than drive a car. On the one hand, the only fee a bike-rider has to pay is the annual tax. However, the annual fees for a car are costly. On the other hand, a bike neednt be equipped with a parking lot, but a car must. Most important of all, it is beneficial to the environment to ride a bicycle because the bike doesnt consume petrol; it is a pollution-free transport. In contrast, the exhaust released by the car is harmful to the environment.

Since China is a developing country with a large population, bicycles will still be the most popular means of transport in China for quite a long time. Most people will still ride bicycles to go to work or to school. The emperor country of bicycles will remain for at least dozens of years.

导语：吸烟等于挥霍自己的健康，缩短自己的寿命。吸烟有害健康，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

A small smoke, endanger ten thousand myriad. Smoking is equal to prodigal oneself health, shorten oneself life. Smoking is harmful and healthy

smoking is harmful and healthy

this is how clear caution, how well-meaning advice! Cigarette resembles invisible killer , it is in casual a health that damages you, gobble up your life. There also is such person beside us, know perfectly well smoking ill health, but he still smokes. Do you know ? In the aerosol of the generation when smoking, have a variety of 3000 harmful material. Endanger among them the biggest is nicotine. Tar and carbon monoxide. The nicotine in a smoke is OK kill with poison a small white rat. Absorb 40-60 milligram nicotine the person dies possibly. The person that smokes for a long time suffers from chronic tracheitis easily. Coronary heart disease, suffer from even on lung cancer. Tar is nicotian flaming child, among them a variety of cancer make thing. The harmful material in cigarette body can enter their body insensibly, the neurological, respiratory system that destroys them. If be mixed for a long time cigarette intimate contact the immune force that can reduce human body, make memory drops likely still. The nicotine in cigarette has direct destruction to vitamin C action, because of smoking may prevent human body to be absorbed to it. If human body is long-term devoid vitamin C, get likely scorbutic.

did not smoke again please! A small smoke, endanger ten thousand myriad. Smoking is equal to prodigal oneself health, shorten oneself life. Let us have a smokeless beautiful season!

参考翻译

一股小烟，危害一万万千。吸烟等于挥霍自己的健康，缩短自己的寿命。吸烟有害健康

吸烟有害健康

这是多么清晰的告诫，多么善意的忠告!香烟就像无形的杀手，随意伤害你，吞噬你的生命。还有这样的人在我们身边，明知吸烟不健康，但他还是抽烟。你知道吗?在烟雾产生的气溶胶中，有多种3000种有害物质。其中危害最大的是尼古丁。焦油和一氧化碳。烟中的尼古丁可以用毒药毒死小白鼠。吸收40-60毫克尼古丁可能导致患者死亡。抽烟的人长期患有慢性气管炎容易。冠心病，甚至患肺癌。焦油是烟草燃烧的孩子，其中各种癌症做的事情。香烟中的有害物质的身体可以进入他们的身体不知不觉，神经系统，呼吸系统，摧毁他们。如果长期与香烟亲密接触会降低人体的免疫力，使记忆下降的可能依旧。香烟中的尼古丁对维生素C有直接的破坏作用，因为吸烟可以阻止人体对其吸收。如果人体长期缺乏维生素C，就可能坏血病。

请不要再吸烟!一股小烟，危害一万万千。吸烟等于挥霍自己的健康，缩短自己的寿命。让我们拥有无烟美丽的季节!

Once a year the Tomb-sweeping Day to Tomb-sweeping Day, is Chinas traditional festivals, is also the most important festival is the ancestor worship, ancestor worship, an activity has mourn the passing of a loved one. This day, Grandma had been ready to give grandpa grandma and grandpa too too grave for something, uncle drove the car, we soon came to the mountain. First we went to the great grandfathers grandmas grave and put flowers, and burn some paper money. Then to Grandpas tomb, the tomb they are not far away, we take out the grandpas love of alcohol and tobacco, put in my grandfathers tomb, the grandfather to burn some money, so as to express our thoughts and wishes to relatives! And pray for them silently in my heart, bless them on the other side of the heaven and we can live happily.

In a flash, grandpa has been dead for four years. Grandpa died due to illness, when the time is still very young, I vaguely remember some of the pictures I played with my grandfather when I was young, I can not help but feel a bit more missing and sad.

One day the grave would end this way. On this special day, I realize the value of life.

Sky blue white clouds, the wind light warm sunshine. White leaves, green grass, dedicated to the beautiful green campus. When we are doing their own thing, ever imagined that one day we will lose the beautiful campus?

"Recess, when you are in the hallway, with students on the playground to chat, play, see the paper scraps, dont be afraid of ugly, bent down to pick them up, nobody will laugh at you mind their own business. Im green, my beautiful! When you see someone on the wall the scri le book, practice painting, should be stopped. Because you want to environmental protection. The campus, is so fascinating, because it is deep in the perceptual and rational thought, let the young heart from naive to mature. The campus, is really want to stay, because it gives each student memories of the vast space, how many heart lost in the wind and rain to find yourself in the twilight. Green campus, students from the holy land, green grass, tree flower, wood on all of us students mutual care, will often in the awaken of spring. So, we need to protect the environment, to create a beautiful campus.

The green campus is beautiful. But she taught us, the more is the enlightenment of the mind, the mold of thought and the cultivation of the inner temperament. When spring quietly but go to, all things recovery, full of vitality in the trees. A day after the end of the course, the campus into our happy amusement park. Badminton, basketball, table tennis... .. All corners of the land have classmates laughing sound...

"The school is our home, we are the master of the school, construction by us. Let us start from the intravenous drip, take good care of the campus environment, self-restraint, mutual inspection, clear the status of their environmental protection work in school. The school green need you, need me, need we all work together."

天蓝白云伴，风轻阳光暖。白的叶，绿的草，专属于美好的绿色校园。当我们正做着自己的事的时候，是否曾设想有一天我们将失去这个美丽的校园?

“课间，当你与同学们在走廊上，操场上聊天，嬉戏时，看到纸屑，不要怕丑，弯腰拾起，没有人会笑你多管闲事。我环保，我美丽!当你看到有人在墙上信笔提书，大练画技时，应当制止。因为你要环保。校园，是如此令人神往，因为它深情灌输着感性与理性交织的思想，让年轻的心从幼稚走向成熟。校园，是如此令人留恋，因为它给予每位学子回忆憧憬的广阔空间，令多少颗失落的心在风雨晨昏中找回自我。青青校园，学子圣地，碧树芳草，一花一木，靠我们全体学子共同呵护，才会春意常在。所以，我们要保护环境，创建美好校园。

绿色校园是美丽的。但她给我们的，更多的是心灵的启迪，思想的陶冶，内在气质的培养。当春天悄然而至，万物复苏，盎然的生机弥漫在树梢。一天的课程结束之后，校园变成我们快乐的游乐园。羽毛球，篮球，乒乓球…。。各个角落空地上都有同学们的嬉笑声……

“学校是我们的家，我们是学校的主人，建设靠的是我们。让我们从点滴做起，爱护校园环境，自我约束，相互检查，明确自身在学校环保工作中的地位。学校绿色需要你，需要我，需要我们大家共同努力。”

Winter holiday will soon be over, really is coming. See, it is such a rich and colorful holiday ah, what to compare it to, it is like seven rainbow of colors, like a changeable clouds, like colorful shells... Always beautiful, brilliant. How could such a good winter vacation life, I was the only one person alone, write it out, let everybody a enjoy!

One of my winter holiday life: study. Holiday life, learning is indispensable, consolidate the previous knowledge that can let you can also preview in advance once you are going to learn after the part. Learn to learn well, dont half-hearted by playing. I have more than 4 hours of study time every day. Of course, I also have a few hours of exercise time, go out for a walk, many activities, some exercises. Sometimes I read some books, the expanded aspect of knowledge, of course, is the computer class, because I like computer, dont make the vision loss.

My holiday life # 2: sports. To do more sports is the guarantee of a healthy body. Everyone should have a favorite sports, I like most is skating and playing badminton. The skating sport is very simple, but you really come to ice are different! This is not your imagination of so simple and easy. Stand up, it is very simple, of course, but you slip a lap down is very difficult. Because I spent a long time, technology also can also wrestling this word is very strange to me now. Badminton everyone who will, learning to learn tired want to relax, you can play a minute ball, it can be you tired when I let you relax.

My winter holiday life # 3: the computer.

Computer is wonderful its hard to express in words. Do you know? The size of a small mouse mouse, can bring you into a magical world of computers. You can use it to play computer games interesting, to carry out the exploration of one adventure; You can use it to mail hair net friend, share strangers friend sent joy; You can also use it on the Internet, enjoy the fun of surfing the Internet. In this high-tech virtual world, how can you know the progress of modern science and technology rapidly, the pace of the modern human is powerful.

This is my winter holiday life, my life colourful winter holiday. It has trained me a loving heart, I love all beautiful things in the world. All, how can I was the only one, write it out, let everybody a enjoy!

寒假马上就要过去了，真令人依依不舍。看，它是一个多么丰富多彩的假期啊，把它比喻成什么呢，它像七色的彩虹，像多变的云朵，像缤纷的贝壳……永远美好，灿烂。这么好的寒假生活，怎能只有我一人独享呢，把它写出来，让大家一块享受吧!

我的寒假生活之一：学习。假期生活中，学习是必不可少的，这样可以让你巩固以前的知识还可以提前预习一下以后将要学的部分。学就要学得好，不要三心二意边玩边学。我每天都有大于4小时的学习时间。当然我也会有几小时的运动时间，出去走走多多活动一下，锻炼一下身体。有时我看一些课外书，扩大知识面，当然是电脑类的，因为我很喜欢电脑，千万不要使视力下降。

我的假期生活之二：体育运动。多做些体育运动是有个健康身体的保障。每个人都应该有个自己最喜欢的体育项目，我最喜欢的就是滑冰和打羽毛球。滑冰这项体育运动说起来很简单，可是你真正地来到冰场上可就不一样了!这可不是你想象中的那么简单那么容易。当然站起来是很简单的，但你滑一圈下来就是很难的。因为我花了很长一段时间了，技术也还可以现在摔跤这词对我是很陌生了。羽毛球大家是谁都会，学习学累了想放松一下你就可以打会儿球，它可以在你疲劳之际让你轻松一下。

我的寒假生活之三：电脑。

电脑的奇妙真是很难用语言表达出来。你知道吗?一个小老鼠般大的鼠标，就能带你进入一个神奇的电脑世界。你可以用它玩有趣的电脑游戏，进行一个个惊险刺激的探险;你可以用它接发网友的邮件，分享素不相识的朋友寄来的欢乐;你还可以用它上网，享受网上冲浪的乐趣。在这高科技的虚拟世界中，你能知道现代科技的进步是多么迅速，现代人类的步伐是多么有力。

这就是我的寒假生活，我多姿多彩的寒假生活。它培养了我一颗充满爱的心灵，使我爱世界上一切美好的事物。，怎能只有我一人独享呢，把它写出来，让大家一块享受吧!

Directions:

Study the following two pie charts carefully and write an essay entitled The Changes in College Students’Ways of Spending Vacations. In this essay you should:

(1) interpret college student’s ways of spending vacations in 1980 and2004,

(2) analyze possible reasons for the change, and

(3) your comments about the change.

You should write 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

As is clearly shown by the two pie charts, from 1980 to 2004 the students who go traveling and do social practices during vacations increase greatly while those who stay at home decrease a lot. For instance, in 1980, only 9% of the students took advantage of their vacation time to do social practice, but its percentage has been more than tripled in 2004. Obviously, great changes have taken place in the way that college students spend their vacations.

Considering these changes, we can find there are possibly three main reasons. Firstly, with the fast development of economy, many people have become rich, which makes it possible for more students to go traveling. Most parents tend to support their children to travel financially. Secondly, the reason lies in the fact that the boom of tourism has made traveling attractive and, also, modem transportation has made it easier for students to go out to travel. The travel agencies not only provide historic sightseeing but also cultural as well as educational tour around China. What is more important, the fast changing society has raised higher requirements for college graduates. The authorities of Chinese university or college have been encouraging their students to do social practices in the hope that college students would broaden their view to know more about the society and become more adaptable to the future work after they graduate. Therefore, more students go out traveling or doing social practices during the vacations.

As a college student, I think the charts reflect the exciting progress on the college students’ thinking patterns. We have become much mature to realize how to spend our vacations meaningfully and practically. Form the changes in the charts, it is easy for us to predict that more and more college students will walk out their home and throw themselves into more various vacation activities.

[关于大学生假期怎么过的英语作文

Believe in Yourself，And You Will Win One night in August when I was doing my physics exercises，I met a difficult problem. Forty minutes passed I still couldn’t work it out.. The answer was on the last few pages of the book. How I wanted to see the answer! But our teacher told us to do our homework by ourselves! My sister was in senior Two. Then she wanted to help me. But I refused. I studied the note and read my text book again and again. Finally，from one example my teacher gave us，I worked the problem out! How happy I was! Now friends，remember “Believe in yourself，and you will win.”

相信自己，当我在做物理习题时，你会赢得一个晚上，我遇到了一个困难的问题。四十分钟过去了，我仍然不能工作。答案是在这本书的最后几页。我多么想看到答案！但是老师告诉我们做我们的家庭作业！我的姐姐在高二。然后她想帮我。但我拒绝。我学习了笔记，一遍又一遍的读我的课本。最后，从一个例子，我的老师给我们，我解决了这个问题！我多么幸福！现在的朋友，记住“相信自己，你会赢”。

[:面对困难高三英语作文中英对译

I value friendship In complex life, there are two points to keep in mind: to eat for survival, and soul need friendship. Friendship is like colorful candy, always is permeated with in the heart. Friend can encourage you to overcome difficulties, and can bring light to your life. Sometimes, you have to be with your friends, say thank you, thank you for they have been in the accompany you. There are some people who abandoned his friend for money and power. So completely wrong! You should know: money and power to a temporary, and the true friendship is a lifetime. I hope this sentence, become everyones creed! For me, no friends, no everything to me! Once upon a time, I have a very injury is rare. Friends in my side support me, give me compassion, encourage and true love, I slowly happy. That makes me realize, how much I happiness and luck! Without a friend, in my opinion, the one who is, wont be happy, not in adversity does not recognize friends. I will always cherish it from the bottom and the friends friendship.

我珍视的友谊在复杂的生命中, 有两点要牢记:为生存需要吃饭, 而心灵需要友谊。友谊像七彩糖果，总是洋溢在人心。 朋友能鼓励你战胜困难，而且能给你的生活带来光明。有时，你必须要对你的朋友们，说句谢谢,感谢他们一直在那陪伴着你。 有一些人为了金钱和权力而抛弃自己的朋友。那样完全错了!你应当知道：金钱和权力至暂时的，而真正的友谊是一辈子的。我希望这句话，成为每一个人的信条!对于我而言，没有朋友，就没有我的一切! 曾几何时，我很有一段很受伤的很少见。朋友们在我的身边支持我，传递给我同情，鼓励和真爱，我渐渐的高兴起来。那些使我意识到，我是多么的幸福和幸运! 在我看来，没有朋友的人不会幸福，不处逆境不能识别朋友。我会从心底一直珍惜和朋友的友谊。

In the cartoon, we can see that a teather feels rather puzzled about what his pupil writes in the assignment, because he hasnt got any idea of some phrases his pupil used in it. Seeing the teacher’s bewilderment, the pupil seems rather proud. He says to himself: “How does it come about that his teacher doesn’t understand prevailing network slangs.”

The cartoon presents a disturbing phenomenon in our society: the prevalence of coined network phrases among teenagers. According to a survey, eighty-five percent of teenagers use coined network phrases in their text messages and e-mails on a daily basis. What’s worse, seventy percent of teenagers have been using network abbreviation in their school work. Though some network languages have come into our vocabulary, the majority of network languages are coined and not commonly used, and some even shallow andd vulgar in content. Educators are much worried that these coined languages will exert a negative effect on the teenagers both in their growth and in their study of the Chinese language.

In my opinion, we should adopt an objective attitude towards the emergence of network language. On the one hand, network language has enriched our language, especially our oral language, making it more colorful. On the other hand, network language has a negative impact on our traditional language. Many network words and phrases are ridiculous in meaning and not standardized in formation, which will severely affect teenagers in their language study. Therefore, some necessary  measures should be taken to ensure a healthy development of network language.

在这幅漫画中,我们可以看到,一个老师感觉而困惑关于他的学生写作业,因为他没有任何想法的一些短语中使用他的学生。看到老师的困惑,瞳孔似乎相当自豪。他对自己说:“它是怎样发生的,他的老师不懂流行的网络语言。”

这幅漫画展示了一个令人不安的现象在我们的社会:青少年创造了网络用语的流行。一项调查显示,百分之八十五青少年的使用创造了网络短语在手机短信和电子邮件日常生活中。更糟糕的是,百分之七十的青少年使用网络缩写在他们的学校工作。尽管有些网络语言已经进入我们的词汇,大多数的网络语言是创造,而不是常用的,还有一些甚至在内容肤浅和庸俗。教育者要担心这些创造的语言会对青少年造成的负面影响在他们的成长和学习中国的语言。

在我看来,我们应该采取客观的态度对待网络语言的出现。一方面,网络语言丰富了我们的语言,特别是我们的口头语言,使其更丰富多彩。另一方面,网络语言对传统语言有一个负面影响。许多网络词汇和短语是荒谬的意义而不是标准化的形成,这将严重影响青少年在他们的语言学习。因此,一些必要的应采取措施确保网络语言的健康发展。

书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句，使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

I’m going to the sun on my holiday.I will go there by a spaceship.I will take a big blue spaceship.

Then I’ll pilot the spaceship to the sun.The sun is very hot.So I put on the super-shirt.In the morning,I will have some sun burger for my breakfast.

At eight o’clock,I will play with my friends there.They are super dog and super girl.Super dog is white and black.Super girl is very clever.Super girl and super dog like to play with me.So I play with them for forty minutes.Then I do my homework in my little red room on a small blue table.After my home work,I will have my lunch.I will eat sun salad.I will make some red toy bear to the sun babies.I will have red juice,red fish and red rice.All the things are red.Then I need a lot of water on the sun because the sun is too hot.So I will walk to the spaceship.I’ll pilot the spaceship to the earth.

This is a good holiday on the sun.

Last summer vacation，my family and I went to Qingdao by train。There wasalways sunshine and fresh air，which made us so comfortable。We went to theseaside，the sea was as blue as the sky，and bathing in the sunshine on the beach，was really an enjoyable thing。

I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with mylittle sister。

There we bought many interesting souvenirs，I was planing to sendthem to my friends。We ate many tings there，such as fish，prawn，and so on。They arevery delicious。Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel，and the price was not soexpensive。

I like Qingdao very much，and if I got a chance，I hope to come hereagain，it is such a beautiful and interesting place。

The National Day,is a important festival in China.We will fly five Stars flag in the first day in Tiananmen Square.And we also sing national anthem,too!And we can have a seven days.We are stay with our family in these days.We can relax at home and doing our homework or study!

National Day is coming,and we can have a eight-day.My family are going to Hainan.Its a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week.We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.Were visiting Tianya Haijiao,Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think well have a good time there.

译文：国庆节是一个很重要的中国传统节日.我们要在天安门广场上升国旗,唱国歌.我们有七天的假期!我们可以和自己的家人呆在一起,也可以在家休息、写作业、学习！

国庆节来了,我有八天的假期.我们一家去海南.那是一个美丽的海滨城市.我们在那里待上一个星期.我们去沙滩,还在海里游泳.我们游览“天涯海角”,菀泉河还有别的许多好地方.我想我们在那里会玩得很开心。

My favorite person is my mom, she fuck broken heart for my growth. She up very early every morning to cook for me, also send me to school, very hard, I must repay my mother.

Remember once, my mother and I to the set to buy vegetables, and we bought lots of food, my mother bought my special love to eat the food. As to go back home, my mother suddenly say good pain, the original mother accidentally put foot sprain, I hurried to hold the mother go. We walked for a long time, the weather suddenly turned into a cloudy day, it looks like its going to rain, but we are far away from home, so I helped mother to under the roof, I hurried home to fetch the umbrellas, under the rain when I come back up. I open the umbrella for her mother, holding the mother walked slowly home.

Due to the mothers foot sprain, mother every day to me, every night to give mother wash feet. I want to be a filial mothers boy.

我最爱的人就是我的妈，她为了我的成长操碎了心。她每天早晨很早就起来给我做饭，还要送我去上学，非常辛苦，我一定要报答我的妈妈。

记得有一次，我和妈妈到集上去买菜，我们买了许许多多的菜，妈妈买的都是我特别爱吃的菜。正当要回家的时候，妈妈突然说好疼，原来妈妈一不小心把脚扭伤了，我急忙扶着妈妈走。我们走了一段时间，突然天气变成了阴天，看样子要下雨，可是我们离家还很远，于是，我把妈妈扶到了屋檐底下，我急忙跑回家去拿雨伞，等我回来的时候雨就下了起来。我给妈妈撑开雨伞，扶着妈妈慢慢地走回了家。

由于妈妈的脚扭伤了，我每天给妈妈做好吃的，还每天晚上给妈妈洗脚。我要做一个孝顺妈妈的好孩子。