高考英语作文及翻译参考（汇集20篇）

【构思点拨】本题属于题目、提纲式作文，给出的要点虽然不多，但要求考生根据生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功来源于凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作这个道理。因此要注意结合自己的经历，谈出自己对此的感受即可。

俗话说：早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作。

【参考范文】

the early bird will catch worms

an old saying "the early bird will catch worms" reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.

for example, the chinese athletes excellent performance in xx olympic winter games in vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. if they don t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they cant compete with others and get more medals.

another case in point is my learning experience. i was good at english, but i couldnt pass the exam, for i wasnt prepared well before the examination. i had many things to solve at that time. as i met the complex things, i was at a loss. the reason was that i had no plan and involved in many things and didnt study more hard, so i failed.

in short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.

Today the crime rate in cities of our country is rising. Many citizens

often complain about the thefts and robberies that have taken palce in the areas

they live in and appeal to the governments at all levels to take effective

measures to reduce the crime rate.

如今犯罪发生率在我国众多城市呈现出上升趋势。许多公民常常抱怨在他们生活的地方，偷窃和抢劫常发生。他们希望各级政府能采取有效措施来减少犯罪发生率。

Faced with criminals, some people are so frightened that they shamelessly

give up the fight and other people turn a blind eye to them. However, some

people are brave enough, to risk their lives to fight the criminals.Their

fearless actions prevented the criminals from doing evils, saved the victims,

and protected the public properties.

面对罪犯，好些人因为过于害怕而无耻地放弃了斗争，和其他人一样，睁一只眼闭一只眼。可是，还是有些人有足够的勇气与罪犯斗争。他们无惧罪犯的行动阻止了犯罪分子做邪恶的事情，拯救了受害者并保护了公共财产。

To reduce the crime rate, we all the people should receive a law education.

Criminals must be severely punished. Meanwhile we should set up a foundation to

reward those who fight criminals. It is also important to call on people to

learn from those heroes and encourage more people to stand up to crime.

为了降低犯罪率，我们所有人都应该接受法制教育。罪犯必须受到严惩。同时，我们应该建立一个基金来奖励勇于与犯罪分子斗争的人。号召人们向英雄学习并鼓励更多的人抵抗犯罪也是一件非常重要的事情。

Today is the Mid Autumn Festival, the street has a thick festive atmosphere. There are many varieties of moon cakes in the supermarket! People choose their favorite flavor.

At night, the sky fireworks four. There are a lot of lamp of heaven, like a shining star. The moon hid in the clouds like a shy girl. The whole family was sitting on the balcony looking forward to the moon to come out and have a snack......

Come on the moon! Today is your holiday!

今天是中秋节，街上有浓浓的节日气氛。超市里的月饼品种真多呀!人们在挑选自己喜欢的口味。

晚上，天空中礼花四起。天上有很多许愿灯，就象一颗颗闪闪发光的星星。月亮躲在乌云中就象害羞的小姑娘。我们全家人坐在阳台上盼着月亮快点出来吃点心……

月亮快来吧!今天可是你的节日噢!

August 15 is one of the most important festivals of the Chinese nation -- the Mid-Autumn festival. On that day, people ate moon cakes, the moon, some places and lanterns, very lively.

The reason for the Mid-Autumn festival is that August is the second month of the autumn, the ancient time is called midautumn, because it is in the autumn and the middle of August, the folk are called Mid-Autumn festival.

On the eve of the Mid-Autumn festival, relatives and friends give gifts to each other, because moon cakes symbolize reunion. The styles of mooncakes are also full of beautiful fruit, such as pineapple, red dates, orange, and my favorite ice moon cakes...

On the day of the Mid-Autumn festival, people bought all kinds of things except moon cakes. Most of them were eaten. In the evening, the family ate reunion dinner, looking forward to the dark sky, hoping the moon would come out earlier.

At night, the moon came out, like a large disk. At this time, the family moved the tables and chairs and tea sets to the balcony, and all kinds of mooncakes were taken together. They looked at the moon, and remembered their loved ones who could not go home. Some people raise a cup in the moonlight, the hope is good; Fireworks rise and bloom in the night sky!

The Mid-Autumn festival is a joyous occasion for our family. It is a time for us to miss our loved ones. It is an indelible day.

导语：众人拾柴火焰高，团队的力量是强大的，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的有关团队的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

As teamwork is increasingly important in modern society，everyone should train his ability to cooperate with others.

Todays society is no longer a self-sufficient one，but one in which all the people depend on each other for existence.Only for existence，not to mention the pursuit and obtainment of happiness，one cant do without the ability to work harmoniously with others.In the highly developed society today，one can almost accomplish nothing without joint efforts.Every loaf of bread，every article of clothes，every house or apartment，every means of transportation is the product of cooperative efforts.We play with other children in kindergartens;we study with our classmates at schools;and we will work with our fellow workers or colleagues in factories or companies. What we have got through teamwork is not only self-improvement，personal success but also the satisfaction at both our devotion to common causes and the sense of collective honor.

To meet the needs of both personal improvement and the sophisticated society，we should learn to cooperate with each other and adjust to each other.Only in this way can we achieve successes and satisfy ourselves as well as the society.

【参考译文】

在现代社会中团队精神越来越重要，每个人都应该培养自己与他人合作的能力。

当今社会不再是自给自足的，所有的人都是互相依存。只为了生存，更不用说追求与获得幸福就这样了，人不能缺乏与他人和谐相处的能力。在今天高度发达的社会，没有共同努力一个人几乎是一事无成。每一块面包，每一件衣服，每一个房子或公寓，各种交通运输工具都是团队努力的结果。我们在幼儿园与其他小孩一起玩;我们在学校和我们的同学一起学习;我们将与我们的伙伴或在工厂或公司的同事一起工作。通过团队合作我们得到了什么，不仅是自我完善，个人成功，而且也有共同目标的的贡献和集体荣誉感的满足。

为了同时满足个人完善和复杂的社会需求，我们应该学会互相合作和互相适应。只有这样我们才能获得成功，满足自己和社会。

Finally, we arrived in Guilin. After breakfast, we went to River Li. We

listened to the guide and enjoyed the views on boat. But I found the water in

River Li is dirty, many people washed clothes there. I feel angry and the trip

became boring and exhausting.

今天终于到了桂林，我们吃过早饭后就出发去漓江。坐上了船后，我们听着导游的讲解，观赏着风景。可是我发现漓江的水很脏，有很多人在那里洗衣服。我很气愤。在接下来的旅途中很无聊我也很疲惫。

My mother was my first teacher. All the memories of my childhood are in one way or another connected with mother. I can still remember clearly the days when she told me stories, played games with me and taught me simple maths.

Mother has some good qualities. As a primary school teacher, she is kind to all her students. And she love her work.I have seen her working at her desk late at night when I wake up many times. She is a responsible teacher. As her daughter I also learn a lot from her. She is indeed a good mother.

I love my mother. And I want to be a person like my mother.

我的妈妈是我的第一位老师。我童年所有的记忆都或多或少跟我的妈妈有联系。我仍然还记得她给我讲故事，跟我做游戏,教我做简单的数学题的那些日子。

妈妈有许多优秀的品质，作为一名小学教师，妈妈对所有的学生都非常好的，她热爱本职工作。有好多次，当我深夜睡觉几次醒来，还见她在书桌旁工作，她是一个负责任的老师。作为她的女儿，我从她身上也学到了许多。实际上，她也是一位称职的母亲。

我爱我的妈妈，我希望自己也能成为一个像她那样的人。

大家肯定从出生到现在应该都经历过很多的事情吧!有一些事情是倒霉的，有一些事情是幸运的，有一些事情是难忘的。下面小编给大家带来难忘的一件事英语作文，希望对你有帮助。 难忘的一件事英语作文1

There are many things in life,then a smile for the teacher,I feel very proud.It is a writing competition the sixth grade next semester,I won the two prize

Remember that time I very want to join in the game,the Chinese teacher to inform youthe game news,I first signed up,want to cherish this opportunity.But every class onlyallows two students to participate in,my composition level is on the level of our class,even I myself dont expect.The day the teacher told me to go to the office,"the report!" "Please come in." Chinese teacher said slowly:"you sign up to participate in the essay contest,you have what idea?" "I." I make an ambiguous statement to say a word.The Chinese teacher relieved smile,said:"never mind,have what idea to say.The competition you are the first one to sign up,oneself at that time is how to think?"See the teacher a reassuring smile,I finally plucked up the courage to breath to say:"I wrote a composition in the class is not the best,but I want to seize this opportunity,also can exercise my composition level.I want to have a try." The Chinese teacher is asmile,picked up a piece of paper from the table handed to me:"this is I make the playlist,you see it first." My hands and took the piece of paper has a name was."I!" I could not help but exclaim aloud.The Chinese teacher smiled and nodded."I would choose you because of your courage.And your writing skills but also good." Chinese teacher always looked at me and smiled."You can,go home to prepare yourself properly,we have classes on you!" Chinese teacher said saw me out of the office,however,my heart a long time can not be calm.

The contest I overachieving,unexpectedly won a prize two."Awesome!" The teacherthat brief language and blooming smile,makes me very proud.This game let me really understand,everyone is not trivial,even ordinary people,there will be others appreciate attention.It will be my successful book,the source of happiness. 难忘的一件事英语作文2

My aunt went to Nanning to see me yesterday. I was very happy. She arrived on friday niht. On Saturday, we went to the zoo, which has many interesting things. There are lovely delphis, sealions, special birds, acrobatic show, and so on. However, the most excited thing is the Roller Coaster, which is the thing that I dream to play but dont dear. Having hesitated for a long time, I decided to play once. In fact,I wasnt too afraid to play it. When we went out the zoo, it was already six o’clock. It was our dinner time. After dinner,I had to go back to school. It’s a wonderful day! 难忘的一件事英语作文3

Among all the unforgettable experiences in my life when I’ am looking back on those beautiful old days with fulfillment , there’s one thing that I’ am proud of most. Whenever thinking of it, I would find myself happier and more confident than ever.

It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was still a teenager. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that all the old women’s sons and daughters were far away from her, making their lives in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her in the village. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly.

I gathered my friends, and organized them to visit there old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that tears fell down.

Caring for those around us and passing our happiness to others are what I have learnt that day. I made it, and I feel really proud of myself that gave comfort to those who needed most. 难忘的一件事英语作文4

Today is Monday. I got up at 6:30 a.m.. Then I washed my face and ate breakfast. Milk, bread, egg and porridge are my favorites. My mother always getsup early and cooks for me. This morning, I drank a cup of milk and ate bread and an egg.After breakfast, I went to school at 7:00.School started at 7:50 and I usually get there at 7:30. I had English, history, math and geography in the morning. I liked English very much, because my English teacher is very nice.After school in the morning, I went home at 11:30. Then I ate lunch and then had a short rest.I went to school at 14:00.In the afternoon, I had four classes: music, biology, and two periods ofChinese. I liked Chinese, too, because Chinese is our national language and its very beautiful.After school, I went home for dinner. After dinner,I spent half and an hour inmy homework. Then I watched TV and played computer games.

四年级英语作文：My Best Friend

I have a best friend.

She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.

She favorite season is summer,because it‘s hot ,she can eat ice- cream.She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs.

Who‘s she? She is my best friend ---Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name,too---Angle.

译：

我有个个最好的朋友。

她有着长长的黑色直发，大大的黑眼睛和一个小鼻子。她很瘦，对人非常和蔼，她也很可爱。她的英语和语文非常好。她学习十分认真。

她最喜欢的季节是夏季，因为夏天很热，她能吃冰淇凌。她喜欢弹琴，读书和唱歌。

她是谁?她就是我最好的朋友——孙梦琪。她还有一个很好听的英文名——Angle.(安琪儿)

[My Best Friend四年级英语作文及翻译

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an

entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think t hat an

entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a

place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either a t

home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it

will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will

take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be

accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be

used for paying the gardeners in the par k and buying some other kinds of

flowers and trees.

With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be

used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

Yours truly,

Li Hua

阅读下面的文字，用英语写一篇120-150词的短文。

今年，教育部直属师范大学将招收一批免费师范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教十年以上。你愿意成为一名免费师范生吗?请陈述理由。

范文：

Recently I learned From the newspaper that normal universities belonging to the Education Department would recruit some students free. As a return, the students must serve as a primary school teacher for at least 10years in his hometown. I feel that is a good news for me and I will contact the universities to get enrolld.

最近我从报纸上得知，正规大学属于教育系，会招收一些学生自由。作为回报，学生必须为至少10年在家乡的小学老师。我觉得这是一个好消息给我，我会联系大学得到enrolld。

First of all, ads a farmers child, my familys living condition is not so good, I can hardly afford the high tuition of regular universities. I am so happy to get this chance to become a college student and coninue my study.

首先，广告一个农民的孩子，我的家庭的生活条件不那么好，我几乎不能负担普通大学的高学费。我很高兴能得到这样的机会成为一名大学生，继续我的学习。

Secondly, serving as a teacher is my dream since I was a child. I was brought up in a mountain village. Many of my little friends got poor education and they had to get to work as a teenager. If I become a teacher, I will devote myself to give them better education.

第二，作为一名教师，我的梦想是因为我是一个孩子。我是在一个山村长大的。我的很多小朋友都受了教育，他们不得不去做一个十几岁的孩子。如果我成为一名教师，我将致力于给他们更好的教育。

Lastly, our country is in great need of teachers, especially in rural areas. After I graduate, I will return to my hometown and serve as a good teacher.

最后，我国的教师尤其是在农村地区，尤其是在农村地区，尤其是在农村地区。我毕业后，我将回到我的家乡，作为一个好老师。

了解校园外边的世界 To learn about the world outside the campus.

Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus

了解校园外的世界

Apart from acquiring book knowledge, university students should also A have social knowledge. Without social awareness they can not be useful talents qualified fur social needs. Therefore, it is necessary fur them to know society. To acquire social knowledge, students should get close to society. There are many ways for students to approach society, but generally they can be listed as follows. First, they can conduct a survey of society in summer or winter holidays by going to the factory or the countryside. Besides, they can do part-time work in society. Most important of all, they can know the world outside the campus through mass media such as newspaper, TV, broadcast and even Internet. As to me, I consider it most convenient and effhctive to know society by watching TV. I also find it beneficial to do part-time work because through the work I get in touch with people from all walks of life.

除了获得书本知识外，大学生还应该具备社会知识。没有社会意识，他们就不可能成为有资格的毛皮社会需求的有用人才。因此，有必要把他们了解社会。为了获得社会知识，学生应该贴近社会。学生对社会的方法有很多，但一般都可以被列出如下。首先，他们可以进行一项调查，在夏季或冬季假期到工厂或农村。此外，他们还可以在社会做兼职工作。最重要的是，他们可以通过大众媒体如报纸、电视、广播、甚至网络来了解校园以外的世界。至于我，我认为这是最方便和effhctive知道通过看电视的社会。我也觉得做兼职工作是有益的，因为通过工作我与来自各行各业的人接触。

高三的你不要幻想一飞冲天，这是不属于高三学生的奢侈幻境。超越的意义在于你的今天比昨天多懂一些，多稳定一些，也多收获一些。我们多去实践那些"一些"，而不是等待一股脑地迅速拔节。当小步的超越成为习惯，你会发现，你离第一天开始学会超越，已经"一飞冲天"了很长一段距离。

高三时的我成绩很好，被老师们当做"重点培养"的对象。而我呢，学习也比较轻松，很少熬夜。在别人眼中，我总是轻松地学习，轻松地生活，也轻松地取得好成绩。他们都说我的好成绩来源于脑筋聪明。每次听到这些，我总是笑笑。

高三第一次大考结束，我以优异的成绩得到了很多人的瞩目。高三年级开总结大会，给学生鼓劲加油。班主任叫我给大家谈谈学习经验，我乐意地答应了，因为我想要借这个机会谈谈大家认为我的好成绩来自于脑筋聪明的说法。

我是从刘墉的一本书谈起的--《超越自己，肯定自己，创造自己》。这本书中并没说大道理也没用华丽的词藻，但朴实的句子却深深印在了心里。在书的前半部分，有刘墉写给儿子的46封书信。每一封都是一个启迪，一份智慧!刘墉说："超越的意义在于你在超越别人之前，先得超越自己;在超越自己时，无谓的追求数量是虚假的超越，有意义的超越才能每天累加，变成大的飞跃。"

我继续说："很多同学认为我的好成绩是因为我资质好，聪明。其实我们都一样，我只是清楚地认定每天我要超越什么--今天弄懂昨天做错的那道数学题，今天争取完形填空比昨天少错一个超越不是单纯在数量上铺天盖地地做题，而是实实在在一步步地拾级而上。同一个类型的题目，会了，做一百道一样的也不会错;不会的，一题也不会对。那么何不抓紧我们宝贵的时间，用在超越那些小小的但珍贵重要的部分呢。

"仔细想想自己的学习，每天的努力和付出达到了想要的效果吗?有一位同学曾这样跟我抱怨，每天课间休息的时间自己认真地背英语单词，而且从不偷懒。如今天背50个，明天就在前一天的基础上背100个，以此类推。但考试时遇到自己读过的单词还是不知道什么意思。我就问他，每天你背单词，真正记住了意思吗?或是具体语境下怎样运用?他摇摇头说只是觉得每天读很多单词非常有成就感。

"我们总是把进步、超越诸如此类的词汇和很大的数量挂上钩，总想一口吃个大胖子，就像刚刚提到的那位同学。其实跨越这个词本身很朴素，它只要求我们每天进步一点点就行。何不像刘墉所说，有意义的超越才是真正的超越。我们总忽略那些微小的进步，觉得它们没有身着华服，不耀眼，没有那些大的进步来得突然，来得惊艳。可是，我们等了很久都没有等到大进步惊艳地驾到时，这就说明了自己存在的问题。其实我们不是不懂得努力，不懂得超越，而是付出的形式有误，回报才会迟迟不来。"

成长感悟：用放大镜般的心境看待每天跨越的一个小步，这种超越一定会变得很伟岸，很扎实。

青春，是生命中明媚的春日，万紫千红，生机勃发。走在青春路上，我们沐浴阳光，肩负重任，追逐梦想。只愿绽放人生最绚丽的花朵;只愿告别黯淡，让青春闪光!

青春的年轮写满珍惜。正如叶圣陶先生所言：“少年时期的放浪是晚年的汇票，人生的悲痛莫过于辜负青春。”如果说青春是娇嫩欲滴的可爱花朵，那么时光会让她在岁月中凋零。人们常常感叹时光是贼，但感叹之际，时光已经偷走我们关乎青春的梦想和选择。面对青春，我们只有珍惜时光，把握当下，才能让青春大放光彩。

青春的肩头承担重任。李大钊先生说：“为世界进文明，为人类造幸福，以青年之我，创建青春之家庭，青春之国家，青春之民族，青春之人类，青春之地球，青春之宇宙，资以乐其无涯之生。”勇于承担必定会为闪光的青春赢得桂冠。我们不会忘记梁启超先生的“少年强则国强”，我们不会忘记鲁迅先生的“无尽的远方，无数的人们，都和我有关”，我们不会忘记青年周恩来的“为中华之崛起而读书”。正是他们对国家对民族的勇于担当让他们的青春熠熠生辉!

我们肩负着民族复兴的历史使命，中国梦的美好蓝图要靠我们绘制。我们不是“叛逆的一代”，不是“懒惰的一代”。我们当中有无数直面困境勇于担当的楷模。乐观少年孟佩杰照顾瘫痪养母十余年;钢琴师刘伟用双脚写下“相信未来”;英勇无畏的解放军战士和甘于奉献的志愿者在汶川、玉树和鲁甸震后废墟上抢险救灾重建家园，他们的力量托起震不垮的希望。我们年轻，却有承担重任的勇气和力量!

青春的路上洒满奋斗的汗水。即使前方布满荆棘，即使前方坎坷不平，也要脚踏实地，勇敢趟过。难忘电影《归来》中那个倔强的芭蕾女孩，她的眼神写满了自信，舞步中充盈着坚定。芭蕾女孩的扮演者张慧雯用不俗的表现向所有人证明了她的实力。我们为她的非凡表现而喝彩，更为她的顽强拼搏而喝彩。日日夜夜高强度培训，衣衫被汗水浸透了无数遍，轻盈的舞步绽放出青春的异彩!

而无论如何，总有人离经叛道。他们以为青春的美好只在于拥有一个至高的起点。恣意妄为，妄自尊大;无视规则，践踏底线，伤害他人。他们就是一些行为失范的“官二代”和“富二代”。电影《霸王别姬》里有一句经典台词：“人，得自个儿成全自个儿。”而很多“官二代”和“富二代”却任由自己堕落，把“成全”当作随心所欲，他们的青春早已黯淡无光。

我们已为高考出发，仰望理想的峰巅，青春的心热血沸腾。我们一步一个脚印，正坚定地攀登。青春的汗水在闪耀，希望的种子在播撒。不管山顶的那朵朵祥云是否为我而缭绕，我都要以今何在的一句话在此自勉——这个天地，我来过，我奋战过，我深爱过，我不在乎结局。

优待且珍视生命赐予我们的青春吧。哪怕是野火焚烧，哪怕是冰霜覆盖，依然矢志不渝。以勇于担当之心，踏上奋斗之途，永不停歇。奋力拼搏，愿让青春闪光!

在新概念三册中，对比论证的方法反复被运用到，至少出现了五次，分别在篇章L12，L23，L38，L41 和L54的第一段出现。如果对这五篇文章中的对比论证段落仔细研读，会发现这些段落有着几乎完全一样的结构，有规律可循，所以对比论证方法应该是三册学习中不可忽略的一个部分。

这里我们就拿第12课为例。对比论证出现在了第一段。作者在第一段开门见山提出了论点：Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island（我们许多人对于荒岛生活有一种不切实际的想法）。之后作者讲了两种截然相反的想法：一种想法是imagine it to be a sort of paradise（认为荒岛是天堂）；另一种想法是Life on a desert island is wretched（荒岛生活很可怕）。最后一句话是个总结句。作者正是通过两种呈对比的想法来论证“人们对荒岛生活有不切实际的想法”这一观点。需要读者关注的是，在两种成对立的想法之间作者用了一句非常漂亮的过渡句：The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. （另一种想法恰恰相反）。于是，一个结构清晰严谨、论述有理有力的段落跃然纸上。

读罢上述五篇文章的第一段，不难发现它们都是由两种相反的观点组成，而在相反的观点中间，作者都运用过渡句，这里对对比论证的过度表达稍作总结：

The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. (L12)

on the other hand (L23)

but (L38)

…be only part of the picture. (L41)

however (L54)

了解了对比论证之后，我们不妨思考下如何运用这种手法，毕竟学以致用才是我们的最终目的。如果针对当前的英语高考作文题，我们完全可以让它在我们的考场上发挥作用。这里以上海2004年和2005年的英语高考作文题为例，看看这一新概念三册中反复出现的手法如何作为应试技巧运用到考试中。

2005上海英语高考作文题：

古人云：“天生我材必有用”(There must be a use for my talent.)。通过描述你生活中的一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。

写作文首先要做的是审题，这个题目要求你在写文章时做到两点：你的观点是支持“天生我才必有用”；用你生活事例论证。如何引出自己的观点呢？我们可以运用对比手法，可以先就题中话题先找到两个对立观点，然后再抛出自己的观点。值得一提的是，考官在批阅一片作文时首先会注意考生是否偏题。那我们如何避免偏题呢？一个很好的方法就是在开头就告诉改卷老师你扣题了。比如笔者写下如下一段作为作文首段：

People have formed an unrealistic picture of their talents. Some imagine themselves to be unconquerably intelligent. On the opposite, others tend to consider themselves a drop in the ocean, powerless and useless. There is an element of truth in both ideas, but I am convinced that there must be a use to out talent, as it can be proved by my own experience.

先写人们对自己的天赋形成了不切实际的看法，然后写两种极端的看法：一种是认为自己绝顶聪明，另一种是自己如沧海一粟，微小无用。在这两个相反的观点之间有了on the opposite来过渡。这正是运用了对比论证的手法，但是别忘了上述的两点考题要求。在列举了两种相反的观点之后就可以抛出自己的观点：I am convinced that there must be a use to out talent.而后自然用过一个as it can be proved by my own experience的句子过渡到以下的事例对这一观点进行论证。如此一写，完全不用担心是否扣题的问题，因为在这一文章首段告诉了考官自己的观点，并且通过一个过渡句说明下文内容是起到论证作用的事例。当然不要忘记这里是通过对比的手法来引出自己的观点的。

上述高考题属于比较严肃的话题，如果遇到的话题涉及生活事件呢？下面再列举另一种风格的高考作文题。

2004上海英语高考作文题

老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决定并谈谈想法。

我们首先还是要捉摸清楚考题的要点：你的决心；你的想法。负责班级墙报貌似是个小话题，但是我们完全可以运用上对比论证的手法。比如在写自己的决心时，不妨先写一般人对这样一个老师指派的任务是何种态度，而后引出自己的决心。而在写一般人的态度时完全可以用上对比的手法。比如笔者写下如下一段作为作文首段：

People show different attitude when appointed to be in charge of wall newspaper. Those who regard the task as a great burden would decline it while those who long to serve their fellow students would accept it with great pleasure. As for me, it is a golden opportunity to practice myself, so when the challenge comes, I will accept it.

可以先用一句话总起人们会有不同的态度，而后写两个呈对比的观点：一种是认为这是个负担因而拒绝承担；另一种是渴望为民服务因而欣然接受。中间运用的过度是while，这样可以将呈对比的做法浓缩在一个句子里，句子结构的复杂性提升。然后通过as for me来表达自己的态度，也就是我的部分决心。

当然，不要忽略作文题中的另一个非常重要的要求，即该作文是以日记形式出现，所以不妨将将这一比较正式的段落放在文中而非文首。

这里暂以两个高考作文题为例，运用上新概念三册中的对比论证手法，希望可以给大家一些启发，帮助大家真正地将这一结构手法活学活用。

难忘的回忆

Last summer holiday, I learned to swim. It was very unforgettable and interesting. I went to the swimming pool with my father. He taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of diving in the water. And I felt uncomfortable in the water. But father said it doesn’t matter and he would protect me. Then I began to swim, but I couldn’t swim forward at all. It made me upset. Then father told me how to move, how to stretch out my hands and legs. Slowly, I could move a little. In fact, it was not that easy. I learned it for almost half a month. I was excited when father told me I made it.

这篇内容是关于回忆的初中英语作文，讲述的是暑假去学游泳，我和爸爸去游泳池，他叫我怎么游的故事。

还记得这句英文谚语"Never judge a book by its cover"吗 下面四幅图就描述了这样一个故事.假设你是第一幅图中左边的男孩,站在右边的是你的朋友Jack,你的妈妈一开始因为他的穿着打扮很不喜欢他,可是后来又发生了什么呢

请根据图画写一篇日记,并适当加以评论,发表自己的看法.

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Possible Version:

March 21th Sunday Sunny

My new friend Jack is a fashion follower who often wears strange clothes and long hair. But my mother drove him away from our flat at the first sight yesterday. She thought he was a bad person, although she didnt know him at all.

However, mom totally changed her mind this morning. When we were walking down the street near our home, we witnessed an accident. A boy was hit by a car when he was walking across the road with headphones. Many people saw it, but at first no one knew how to help. Then someone rushed forwards and covered the boy with his coat to keep warm. He looked after him well until the ambulance came. It was Jack! His calmness and seasoned first aid skills moved mom. She went and apolpgized to Jack for her former attitute, and told him that he was always welcome to our home.

That gives me a lesson. The appearance may reflect ones interest, but it isnt the symbol of ones quality. We should never judge a book with its cover.

可能版本：

三月二十一日星期日晴

我的新朋友杰克是一个时尚的追随者经常穿着奇怪的衣服，长长的头发。但是我妈妈昨天第一眼就把他从我们的公寓里赶走了。她认为他是个坏人，虽然她根本不认识他。

然而，今天早上妈妈完全改变了主意。当我们走在我们家附近的街道时，我们目睹了一场事故。一个男孩被一辆汽车撞在马路上时，戴着耳机。很多人看到它，但在第一，没有人知道如何帮助。然后有人冲了上去，用外套盖住了那个男孩，以保持温暖。他很好的照顾了他，直到救护车来了。这是杰克！他冷静和老练的急救技巧感动了妈妈。她为她以前对杰克的态度道歉，并告诉他，他总是欢迎我回家。

这给了我一个教训。外表可以反映一个人的兴趣，但这不是一个人素质的象征。我们决不应该用它的封面来判断一本书。

Everyone is good, I should be more obedient, I like green, blue in my heart is a symbol of freedom, happiness and loveliness. I wont be furious when Im angry, but I just face it.

Remember again, my deskmate clashed with another classmate, my deskmate fell in my bag, my bag is pressed by him, I was very angry, picked up his pen to fling caution to the winds and threw all of a sudden, pencil, pen, ruler of the fly.

Look at it! I can lose my temper in some times, but most of the time will be very obedient. Are you willing to be my friend?

my favourite pop star is zhou huajian. i like him not only because he is very handsome, but also his songs are very beautiful.

on october 18, he gave a performance in tianjin. about 2500 fans went to the stadium to see him. almost all of them were students. some of them were even from beijing, the capital city of china ,which is about 200 kilometres from tianjin. i really wanted to watch the performance,but unfortunately,i didnt get a ticket. so i watched him on tv.zhou is one of the most popular stars in china. he is living in hong kong. his family is very happy. he has a good wife and three lovely children. he liked playing football when he was a university student. however, he has no time to play football now.

i hope he will be happy all his life, for he is loved by all of us.

Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题)has been in the limelight

andhas aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major argumentsthat can

be made for____(讨论话题)For one thing，________can bring

____to________(优点一)Foranother，it is widely hold that peopleusually ____when

_________________(优点二) But we must not lose sightof the fact that there are also

drawbacks to___________(缺点)For instance，it can bring

__________to_________(举例说明)Inaddition，many people find

it_______(形容词)to_______________(第二个缺点) When asked to __________，I tend to

________. This isbecause I

______(原因一)Furthermore，______________(原因二)Finally，______________(原因三)

导语：好的开头能使文章生色,激发读者阅读的兴趣;好的结尾,能增强表达效果,使读者思索、回味文章的思想内容。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.

在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。

同样句型包括：It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb. to do sth.

2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.

你工作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。

(1)The+比较级..., the+比较级...

(2)比较级+and+比较级(The world is getting smaller and smaller.)

3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界会变得更加美好。

类似的句型还有：If necessary…, they can…

4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them every day.

记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。

5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic

我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。

6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.

人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。

7. I had a great first impression of American people.

我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。

8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.

我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。

9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.

随着现代科技的迅速发展，互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。

10. You should read as many books as you possibly can.

大家应该尽可能的多读书。

11. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.

由于实施了改革开放政策，中国变得更加繁荣了。

12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy.

我们都需要呼吸清新的空气，我们都需要饮用洁净的水，我们都需要绿地来享受。

13. Let’s work together to make our world a better place.

让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。

14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and productive things.

我们应该充分利用好时间去做有用的、富有成效的事。

15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.

我们应该养成一个好习惯，明智地利用时间。

16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month?

我的确想知道的是，他是否会在下个月出国?

17. Television is harmful to developing minds.

电视不利于开发心智。

18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized

孩子们都有很大的潜能，而父母却没有意识到这一点。

19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.

在过去的10年里，我们学校发生了巨大的变化。

20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.

那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。

21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quite half way.

这份工作太辛苦，差点使我半途而废。

(1)直接使用：so… that…

The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.

这份工作太辛苦、太无聊，而且没完没了，这使我非常累，差点半途而废。

(2)能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有：

(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)

22. The Red Star Television Factory, which produces TV sets of quality, was set up in the 1980’s.

生产高品质电视的红星电视机厂，始建于1980年。

23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.

我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室，对老师和同学都同样开放。

24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company.

我感觉我会是你们公司所需要的人。

25. The number of workers and engineers has risen(更高级词汇：increased) to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graduates.

工人和工程师的数量已超过了2000人，而且他们有80%都是大学学历。

26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.

在校园内，学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。

27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.

现今，在农村地区还有很多孩子失学。我认为原因之一就是他们的家庭太贫困，而无法供应他们上学。

28. People should pay more attention to the education of children because they will play a very significant /(important) part/(role) in the future of our country.

人们应该增加对儿童教育的重视，因为他们会在祖国的未来扮演重要的角色。

29. In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky.

到2008年，我们会看到北京像花园一样，有着更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。

30. How nice to hear from you again.

能再次收到你的来信真是太好了。

31. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

敬盼早日回复。

I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time.

我期待与你早日相见。

32. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.

如果你有什么问题和请求只管跟我说。

33. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.

不管你将来做什么，英语都是最重要的。

34. Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有什么比接受教育更重要的事了。

35. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.

毫无疑问，玩电子游戏正在成为影响学生学习的最大问题。

36. Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem.

显然，早该采取一些积极的措施来解决问题。

写作高手使用的高难度表达：

I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.

我建议有关部门采取一些有效措施改善现状。

37. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

38. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

39. Smoking has a great influence on our health.

吸烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

40. As a proverb says, /( As is well known to us,) storms make trees take deeper roots.

有句名言说道：风暴使树木深深扎根。

41. It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.

很荣幸给你介绍我的一位好朋友，刘翔。

42. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.

出于英语教师世家的她，对英语有着特别的兴趣。

描写人物性格的高级得分词汇如下：

diligent 勤奋的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的

modest谦虚的 optimistic乐观的 talkative健谈的enthusiastic热情的

43. I have fully realized that English is essential to my future.

我充分认识到英语对我的未来是多么的重要。

44. I suppose electronic dictionaries are convenient, but Iead to laziness!

我觉得电子字典很方便，但会使人们变懒。

45. In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.

总之，出国留学的优点要大于它的缺点。

46. Now, I think it is really successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means.

现在，我想这真是一次成功的经历，并且我完全理解了劳动的意义。

47. From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.

通过这次的地震，我认识到了群众的力量是无穷的。

高级名言谚语活学活用。

解释：“群众的力量是无穷的”这句名言是我们自己造的，极具威力，然后再安在毛主席的头上，更显力量。最后为了增加真实性加上时间和地点，使判卷老师误以为真，根本不敢怀疑。于是，心想：“这个句子太棒了，我都没听说过!”

造句：In 1951 Chairman Mao said in Nan Jing that the power of the mass is endless.

48. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide.

如果你有空闲时间我的家乡做客，我会非常乐意做你的导游。

49. Nowadays, both teachers and parents worry a great deal about the student’s using the Internet.

如今，老师和家长都对学生上网现象极为担心。

50. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.

对于该问题的看法因人而异。

51. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.

我们被赋予新的机会和面临着新的挑战。

52. Thank you for your consideration.

感谢你的体谅。

53. I really appreciate what you’ve done for my family and me.

我衷心感谢你为我和我家人所做的一切。

We should be very grateful if you help our children with their English study.

如果你帮助我们小孩学英语，我们将感激不尽。

54. We will never forget the happy days we spent together.

我们永远都不会忘记在一起度过的日子。

55. Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.

很多人开始意识到锻炼的重要性了。

56. The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct.12th, starting at 3:30p.m.

报告将在10月12日3：30在报告厅举行。

57. Students should know how to take advantage of their time.

学生应该知道如何利用他们的时间。

58. I got sick and tired of doing the routine work day after day.

我厌倦了日复一日地做一些例行公事。

59. Conquering English is not different from conquering a great mountain; both of them require determination, courage, and perseverance.

征服英语不亚于征服一座高山，都需要决心，勇气和毅力。

60. I’m disappointed in the performance of our team at the sports meeting.

我对我们队在运动会上的表现感到失望。

61. I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.

到目前为止，我对我们取得的成绩很是满意。

更多表示“决心”的高级句型：

I’m determined to…

I have made up my mind to complete the task.

62. The city is located on the banks of the Long River.

这个城市位于长江畔。

63. I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

两星期前收到了你的来信，我真是太高兴了。

64. I’m writing to request more information about the day tour to London.

我写信是为了了解更多去伦敦旅行的信息。

65. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

最近，我们班展了开一场讨论，是关于中学生是否有必要带手机去上学。

66. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.

我不知道你是否方便多告诉我一些有关旅行的事。

67. It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.

可以肯定，如果开车的人少一些，空气污染就一定会减少。

68. I personally feel that teacher is the most important profession in the world.

我个人认为教师是世界上最重要的职业。

69. We can’t imagine what the world is going to be without purified water.

我们无法想象没有纯净的水，这个世界会变成生么样子。

70. I was walking east along Park Road, when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

当我沿着公园路往东走的时候，有一个老人在街的另一边从公园里走出来。

71. In the big city, there are more schools and hospitals are available for its people.

在大城市，有更多的学校和医院供人们使用。

72. Some people think that we should read extensively.

有一些人认为，我们应该有选择性地阅读。

73.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish you studies abroad.

在我看来，你结束留学后应该回国。

74. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old.

另一个原因，我认为你回国可以更方便地照顾你日渐年迈的父母。

75. Classes in our school usually finish at four in the afternoon.

我们学校通常下午四点下课。

76. I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend tomorrow’s lecture on American history.

我很抱歉，明天我不能参加那场关于美国历史的演讲。

77. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.

花在教育锻炼上的时间是25分钟，只有12分钟的时间用来做家务。

78. Maybe you forgot you spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.

你可能忘了昨天下午你花钱买了其他东西。

79. Good habits are the crosscut to success.

好习惯是成功的捷径。

80. I was deeply moved by the young boy, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.

那个年轻的小男孩深深地感动着我，因为我相信雷锋一直活在我们的心中。

81. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.

很多新的楼房建了起来，路也都拓宽了。

82. It is more than ten months since we last met.

从我们上次见面到现在已经有十个多月了。

83. It’s very nice of you to help me with my lessons every day.

每天帮助我复习功课，你真是太好了。

84. Nothing can live without air and water.

没有空气和水，任何东西都不能生存。

85. I prefer to live in the country rather than live in the city.

我宁愿住在农村，而不愿住在城市。

86. People must be stopped from throwing dirty things into the river.

应阻止人们往河里扔脏东西。

87. Peter sets aside some money every month so that he can buy a new car.

彼得每月留出一点钱以便购买一辆新汽车。

88. Linda didn’t go to bed until midnight so that she could finish reading the book.

为了看完这本书，琳达直到午夜才睡。

89. Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health.

早睡早起有益于健康。

90. More and more people are aware that it is important to obey the traffic rules.

越来越多的人意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。

91. Mrs. Brown is an Australian woman teacher with fair hair and blue eyes, who has been to many places of China.

布朗女士是一个澳大利亚的老师，她有一头金黄色的头发和一双蓝色的眼睛，她去过中国的各个地方。

92. On Sunday, May 18, we will visit Beijing, which has a history of 400 years.

5月8日，星期天，我们将会参观拥有400多年悠长历史的北京。

93. I think students should balance well between work and study.

我认为学生应该平衡好工作和学习两方面。

94. Friendship is one of the most precious emotions in our life.

在我们的生命中，友谊其中的一种非常珍贵的感情。

95. It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)

不言而喻，青春一去不复返。

96. Last but not least, it will definitely benefit the citizens.

最后而又很重要的一点，它必定给市民带来福利。

97. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention.

随着日益迅速的经济发展，更多的问题受到我们的关注。

98. The preservation of forests has aroused people’s wide concern

保护森林引发人们的广泛关注.

99. As far as I’m concerned, I am in favor of the opinion that…

就我而言,我赞同…的观点

100. Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations.

不仅仅是为了我们，更是为了我们的后代，政府和普通市民应该联合起来，使这个世界变成更美好的家园。

在情感与认知之间架起一杆理性的天平!——题记

作为万物之灵的人类，在漫长的历史长河中，以丰富的主观情感以及对客观世界的认知构筑起纷繁复杂的社会体系。情感为人与人之间心灵的交融架设自由的桥梁，它以亲情、友情、爱情……维系着整个社会;认知则为人与客观的事或物之间的理解与探知铺就了通途!情感与认知之间，本就是相对独立的，对等的。然而实际上，冲动的感情和不明智的主观认识往往驾驭着人类的言行，替代了客观的认知，使得理性的天平倾斜了!

寓言中的富人在面对失窃的事实时，对同样作出劝诫的儿子与邻家的老人，抱持着完全不同的两种态度。原因何在感情上亲疏之别左右了他对客观事实的评价!

诚然，正是由于有了人类之间曼妙的情感，全社会乃至全世界才不至于陷入一种盲目的、机械性的单调之中就如同电影《摩登时代》和《城市之光》中描绘的那样，人的言行似乎在工业革命的浪潮中变得毫无生气，如同机器人一般。缺乏感情的社会是僵硬的，是脆弱的。然而这并不意味着仅仅凭借情感就可以主导全世界，就可以来评判事物认知的正误深浅这还需要客观的评价标准，诸如法律、法规等等而这些则又需要认知与进一步的探索。否则，理性的天平就难以使得整个世界在一种相对稳定的状态之下继续发展。

历史的教训，足以使我们对此有更为清醒的认识!太平天国的洪秀全，领导农民起义，开创了反帝反封建的创举，却由于统治者洪秀全的独断专行，任人唯亲，大肆提拔同宗族的亲信，封王封侯，排挤同属统治阶层中非其宗族的开国元勋、元老，诸如石达开、杨秀清、韦昌辉……导致苦心经营的大好山河断送人手，石达开愤然率天国精锐出走天京，韦昌辉滥杀无辜酿成震惊中外的"天京事变"?…¨是当时农民阶级中深厚的封建宗族思想，占据了洪秀全的心智，以所谓的"亲情"葬送了太平天国以及千百年来农民斗争的血泪结晶!

用理性的思维来衡量感情与认知，在主观与客观之间寻求一个和谐的统一，不失为正确处理人际关系、人事关系的手段!

俗语说得好:帮理不帮亲!先人为我们积淀了深厚的历史，今人又将以理性的天平衡量情感与认知，打造更为美好的明天。