2017年高考英语作文全国一卷答案(合集20篇)

I have a best friend, I can only use one word to describe her - thin. Her fingers can be like a bamboo, face on both sides of the narrow if sunken go in, let a person feel she has a cold and lonely, but her personality, on the contrary, she is a kind and brave man, she is my good friend -- small kaori.

One day, she took a walk through in the class, found that there are a lot of garbage on the ground, he picked up the broom swept up. After a while, a classmate came and said to her: "alas! Monitor to this extent, poor thing." He said with a smile: "everybody is responsible for keep the classroom environment health, I am the class monitor, it should be a good start. Even if Im not the monitor, I will do it."

In a short time, the whole class was her clean, I used to ask her: "dont you tired?" She did not cash out in front of me tired, but happy said: "in such a good learning in the classroom, again tired also worth it."

Her behavior and talk made me feel ashamed of myself, I can see so much waste in our class is not clean. Shes right, to do well every classmate, he must do. The composition

My friend is a very sensible monitor, let I touched her helpful phenomena, from here, I know that shes every move add beauty to the class, she let you felt happy because of her presence.

我有一个要好的朋友，我只可以用一个字来形容她——瘦。她的手指可像一枝竹子一样，脸狭两边好像凹了进去，让人觉得她有一种冷漠、孤独的样子，但她的性格恰恰相反，她是一个善良、勇敢的人，她就是我的好朋友——小薰。

有一天，她在班里走了走，发现地上有许多垃圾，便拿起扫把扫起来。过了一会儿，有一个同学走过来对她说：“唉!班长沦落到这种地步啊，真可怜。”他微笑着说：“保持课室环境卫生人人有责，我是这个班的班长，更应该带好头做起。就算我不是班长，我也会这样做。”

不一会儿，整个班被她打扫得干干净净，我过去问她：“你不累吗?”她在我面前没有变现出累的样子，而是开心的说：“能够在一个这样好的教室里学习，再累也值得。”

她的行为和说话让我感到惭愧，我看见我们班这么多垃圾也不清洁一下。她说得对，要每一个同学做好，自己必须做好。作文

我的朋友是一个非常懂事的班长，她乐于助人的现象让我感动，从这里我知道：她的一举一动都为班级增添美丽，她让大家因为她的存在而感到幸福。

逆向思维法是指为实现某一创新或解决某一因常规思路难以解决的问题，而采取反向思维寻求解决问题的方法。在做英语书面表达题时，我们亦可借鉴这种方法，从研究高考对书面表达的要求入手，以及阅卷者的感受，去迎合他们的要求，从而做到有的许矢，以求短时期内取得对书面表达的突破。

我们可以从高考作文的评分标准及阅卷的角度来审视一下对写作的要求，看看在他们的眼中优秀作文的共同点有哪些，哪些又是主要的失分点。通过研究高考书面表达卷评分标准，我们可清楚地发现，一篇高分书面表达必须具有以下特点：

内容要点齐全，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证;

准确性高，描述恰当，时态、人称符合文章要求，语法、句法准确无误，结构严谨，标点、格式、大小写亦能正确应用;

连贯性好，衔接语使用恰当，全文结构紧凑;

使用了一些较为复杂的词汇，句式，能体现出较强的语言运用能力;

开头、结尾富有特色不落俗套，给人耳目一新的感觉。

通过对高考评分标准的研究，我们可能发现高分作文有着共同的优点。我们在平时就要严格遵循书面表达的要求，认真训练，积极发现自己的问题并做出有针对性地改进。

My Favourite Great Book

My favourite great book is The Adventures ofTom Sawyer by Mark Twain.

Tom Sawyer is a lively and clever boy. Helives with his aunt Polly. His

aunt is strict with him, so he runs to an islandin the middle of the Mississippi

River with two friends, Huck and Joe. WithHuck, he goes looking for treasure;

with Becky, he gets lost in a cave. Andfinally Tom and Huck find a box of gold.

Tom is the hero of the story, butthere are other important characters. Becky is

pretty with fair hair. Huck isTom’s best friend, and Injun Joe is the bad man

ofthe story.

The theme of the story is to do with childrengrowing up and becoming more

serious.

有人说：人要在希望中生活，因为明天很美好。有人说：人要专注于现实，因为明天很渺茫。

路漫漫其修远兮，人生漫长，充满着无法预知的事件。谁也不知道明天会变成什么样，所以充实每个今天，把握好现实这是理性的人生选择。但倘使我们在人生旅途中要能信心百倍、勇往直前，特别当处于逆境之中，只有憧憬未来满怀希望，立足于现实，才有可能获得明天的美好。脚踏实地，着眼未来，才有可能活出人生的风采。

你无法改变过去，但你可以把握将来;你无法事事顺利，但你可以事事尽力。树立积极乐观的态度，努力奋发，人生将会变得更加精彩。灭国的屈辱，丧家的痛苦，偷生的无奈，使越王勾践的人生充满了挫折与坎坷，但他却对未来抱有希望。公元前498年吴王夫差攻破越都，勾践被迫屈膝投降，并随夫差至吴国，勾践给吴王夫差当马夫，甚至还给吴王尝粪便，受尽了屈辱。后来，勾践日日忍辱负重，不断等待时机，终于被赦返国。于是勾践每天卧薪尝胆，蛰伏数年终于练就了王者之剑，报了国仇家恨，成就了：“三千越甲可吞吴”的绝唱。

勾践对未来的希望，是他能复国的重要原因，他一直梦想着有朝一日能够复国;明天很美好是他坚持的理由，重视当下，脚踏实地，十年聚生，积蓄力量是他能复国的根本条件。

放眼现在，德国着名作曲家贝多芬，虽然双耳失聪忍受着病魔的煎熬，但仍然在钢琴旁顽强地创作，终于完成了伟大的《命运》交响曲，发出了“给我勇气，我将战胜自己”的豪迈呼声……

月亮落下了，你还有太阳，你是一片辽阔的天空，迟早会升起希望之星;果实落下了，你还有种子，你是一方肥沃的土地，迟早会收获成功。帆落下了，你也不应向风低头;昨天今天落下了，你还有明天;一个个希望落下了，你还有新的希望可以争取。

专注于现实，放眼未来，保持积极的人生态度，才能在人生的道路奋勇前行。

Pride goes before a fall 骄者必败

Fish in troubled waters 浑水摸鱼

Business is business 公事公办

The style is the man 文如其人

More haste，less speed 欲速则不达

Great minds think alike 英雄所见略同

Misfortunes never come alone 祸不单行

Hedges have eyes，walls have ears 隔篱有眼，隔墙有耳

Man proposes，God disposes. 谋事在人，成事在天

Beauty is in the eye of beholder 情人眼里出西施

Time and tide wait for no man 时不待我/岁月无情

A young idler，an old beggar 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲

A man should not bite the hand that feeds him 不要恩将仇报

Health is better than wealth 家有万贯财，不如一身健

Out of office，out of danger 无官一身轻

In time of peace prepare for war 居安当思危

The tongue cuts the throat 祸从口出/言多必失

Out of sight，out of mind /far from eye，far from heart 眼不见为净

All shall be well，Jack shall have Jill 有情人终成眷属

[高考英语语法:形同意合的谚语口译

by the time children enter school, they’ll have spent up to one-third of their waking hours in front of tv. the enormous influence of television is just beginning to be realized. while many parents take television as an electronic baby-sitter, they neglect the fact that television may be more harmful than it is beneficial to children.

those who encourage small children to watch television claim that many programs for children on tv are helpful to develop children’s interest and enrich their knowledge. they also argue that preoccupied with tv programs, children are prevented from doing mischief. although at a first glance these arguments sound true, the behavior of some children doesn’t seem to prove them.

in the first place, programs for children are not always beneficial to them. one science fiction serial keeps telling about some supernatural beings who can fly and always fight against evildoers. after watching several episodes, a small child was so enchanted that he imitated the heroes and “flew” from his room on the second floor. there are also reports of children running away from home to the mountains to practice martial art. these incidents are naturally credited with tv programs for children.

further, being preoccupied with tv programs is not a good way for avoiding mischief. in the days before tv, parents used to gather together with their children, telling stories or reading poems to them. the communication between parents and children was thus better, so it was easier for children to understand what was good conduct.those who approve of children’s watching tv neglect television’s bad effects on children. firstly, children are surrounded and bombarded by commercials for toys and foods. they are tempted into becoming consumers. they earnestly ask their parents to buy things which they do not really need. as a result, the parents are in a financial dilemma, and the children themselves always become victims of bad products because of false advertising.

another bad effect of television is that children are over-exposed to violence. they watch hours of murders, fights, and crimes every week, with no adult around to tell them that life is not like that most of the time. the effect of the heavy dose of violence is to suggest to children that violence is an ordinary way of life, and that shooting and cheating are ways to success.most serious of all, children who often watch tv are becoming passive. they just sit back and let things happen to them. children are inventive; they have the ability to imagine a whole world of their own. but what happens when their imagination is not needed, when tv does all the imagination for them? obviously, these children are not going to grow up as inventive and imaginative as their parents, for they have been robbed of creative impulses by television.

to sum up, children’s indulgence in television is harmful. the problem, nevertheless, is not one of prohibition. parents should supervise and guide their children’s watching tv instead of parking them in front of the tube, hoping it will act as a baby-sitter.

In present-day China, fast food is so popular, especially among children and teenagers, that it can be seen in every big and medium-sized city. It’s even difficult to think of any other single thing that represents the fast pace of modern society in the way that fast food does. Some people think it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. The trends of modern society seem to all point to one ultimate goal—saving time, and fast food well serves this purpose. In their opinions, its popularity is also attributed to the restaurants’ clean and cozy environment, excellent service, and guaranteed quality of food and drinks.

在当今的中国,快餐非常受欢迎,尤其是儿童和青少年，这在每一个大、中型城市中都可以看出来。很难想到除了快餐还有别的任何其他单一的事物能代表现代社会的快节奏。有些人认为快餐很方便而且为他们节约了很多时间。现代社会的潮流似乎都指向一个终极目标，那就是节约时间,快餐正好迎合了这个目标。他们认为快餐的流行也归因于餐厅干净、舒适的环境,优质的服务,有质量保证的食物和饮料。

However, others maintain that fast food is usually low in nutrition and can’t be regarded as a balanced diet. For example, doctors suggest that people, especially children, eat fast food as little as possible. Besides, although cooking at home is time-consuming and the following washing-up tiresome, it offers healthy and delicious meals your body needs and likes.

然而,另外一些人认为快餐通常是低营养、不能视为均衡饮食。例如，医生建议人们，特别是孩子，尽可能少吃快餐。此外,虽然在家里做饭是耗时的,而且洗碗也很无聊，但它给你的身体提供了所需并喜欢的健康、美味食物。

As far as I’m concerned, fast food is not my best choice. For one thing, I prefer traditional spicy Chinese food. For another, being engaged in the work all day, I may spend one or two hours to prepare my favorite dishes to ensure myself a nice rest. As a result, fast food is only a good choice when I am in a hurry and resort to it once in a while.

在我看来,快餐不是我最好的选择。首先,我喜欢传统的的中国菜。另一方面,从事一整天的工作,我可能会花一两个小时来准备我最喜欢的菜来确保自己得到很好的休息。因此,快餐仅仅是我匆忙和度假时的好选择。

书面表达一直在历年高考中占有很重要的地位，而且相对于其他题型，书面表达最容易在短期内有所突破。下面小编为大家整理了英语作文的突破技巧，欢迎大家阅读。

书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位(语言高级)，内容第二位(要点齐全)，结构第三位(文章分段)的原则，也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言，换句话说是亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以同学们在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。

亮点一共有四种：

一、高级词汇和语法;

二、修辞手法;

三、有效的连词;

四、名人名言或谚语。

首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法，以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。

肯定不如否定好

修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。例如想表达“邮递员天天准时到”，如果写成The postman comes on time every day，就不如变成双重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响，写成双重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude

towards life had not affected by the earthquake.应用类似的修辞会在高考中为同学们加分。

陈述不如倒装妙

在书面表达中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。

否定词开头

如果写出的句子中有否定词， 例如I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装，用否定词开头Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。其他的否定词，如not, seldom, hardly等开头后面的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。

地点状语开头

在很多年的高考书面表达中都有表达地点的句子，一个建筑位于什么位置，或什么地方有什么东西，都可以应用倒装。例如在2006年的全国卷中，图书馆位于学校的中央，Our library is in the center of our school.变成倒装就用地点状语开头：In the center of our school lies our library. 其他的例子，想表达河岸上有很多花:On the bank stand some flowers. 天空中繁星点点：In the sky hang little stars. 总之在想表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。

这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。例如In the center of our school lies our library，which is between the garden and the teaching building.

Only+介词短语

例如在2007年全国卷中，让外教帮你找个笔友，有一句可以表达成只有通过这种方式我才能提高英语，这句话可以写成Only in this way can I improve my English.其他的例子还有Only by taking exercises can we keep healthy.

形容词+as+主语+be动词

例如Young as I am, I can manage it; Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems. 2000年书面表达中：Badly injured as he was, he managed to take down the

car’s number. 还有其他的倒装结构，很高兴收到的你的来信：So glad am I to hear from you.在高考中要尽量使用一两个倒装。

主动不如被动巧

在近些年的阅卷中，发现考生在写作中很少使用被动语态，也许是受中文思维的影响，几乎整篇文章都使用主动语态。其实在英文中，被动语态的使用是很重要的。因为英语是一门客观的语言，而汉语是主观的语言，具体体现在英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态;英语中经常用物称或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整个文章句型丰富。

例如在2006年的高考中，很多学生在表达我们每次可以借五本书最多借十天时，都是用：We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成：At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days，分数会更高。

分词结构不能少

在前文提到，在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构，其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢?学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。

口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词;二看：看主语;三改：改分词。

If such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改，第一步，去掉连词if;第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格;第三步，改分词，is 变成分词是being，所以最后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。

如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构，例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, I’d like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, I’d like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于，因为，如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。

以上技巧有语文迷小编整理，看过后你真的学到了吗?

四年矣，生命的冠冕上鲜花与橄榄枝交错。

四年矣，强健的身躯中梦想随脉搏正搏动。

四年矣，力与美;血与肉。交织、奔突、翻飞、升华!

四年矣，冰雪交融，中国再度迎来倒计时。

四年矣，吾与子之所共愿——共迎冬季奥林匹克运动会。

奥运会是世界各国人民共同瞩目，喜爱，并可展示自我的体育盛会。而冬奥会作为不可或缺的一部分，同样绽放奥运五环之光彩。此次北京再度迎来奥运，举世瞩目，自然也将再度不负众望。

冬奥会源于1980年，四年一届，举办至今。以“更快、更高、更强”的精神和“友谊，团结，公平”的宗旨，用他的美一次次震慑世界，助跑历史。

冬奥之美，先于“仪式之美”，美在每一次冰与火的碰撞相遇：美在每一次圣火的相传。圣火相传不分昼夜，奔跑着的火源，是世界人民滚烫的一颗心;是引领人类飞跃的向导。冬奥会主场里熊熊燃烧的火炬台是奥运“仪式美”最好的体现。奥运的仪式美也在主办方每一次精心筹划的每一个细节中体现。在“五环”中，也在“每一种国旗”里。

北京能再次成为奥运会主办方，和上次出彩的细节表现，国力的强盛和近年来冰雪运动的突飞猛进密不可分：2008年时举办的第29届北京奥运会。竭尽全力为世界体现了“中国仪式美”，“奥运仪式美”!

北京奥运会的会徽中国印，以“舞动的北京张开双臂”的标志，迎接四方友人。像北京奥运会吉祥物福娃，糅合多种自然元素所创造的国风娃娃，贝、晶、欢、迎、妮：(北京欢迎你)。再如以“渊源共生，和谐共融”的祥云图案特制的火炬。甚至特制的“玉璧奖牌”，180万名志愿者北京，中国都在以绝对的细节和仪式迎接世界，尽显“奥运仪式美”。

冬奥之美，再则于“运动之美”。美在运动赛场上，一个又一个巨人的崛起，美在泪水和汗水，美在鲜花和掌声，美在每一曲不同的国歌。赛场上每一根汗毛的配合都在“十年磨一剑”的不言中。每一帧的记录画面都尽显人体美，肌理的阴影完美勾勒岀流畅的肌肉线条。臂膀紧实的肌肉，似起伏的山峦，分泌出的汗水成了河流，每一位运动健儿的眼里都亮着太阳般的自信光芒，内心却也如月亮一样沉稳冷静。这就是运动!

运动使小小的人体竟变幻出自然的神秘。运动使人类领悟了自然和生命之元，成了天地之灵：人与雪如影随形，融为一体，似草原上猎食的豹，刹那爆发;似灵巧敏捷的袋鼠，瞬间蓄力;似徜徉觅食的鱼，俶而远逝。生命在于运动，运动也在于生命，冬奥会记录了人类在冰雪领域一次次体能的突破，一次次刷新上限，使人体爆发出最大潜能，奥运使人类和自然有了无言的相通，显出一种神圣而美妙的奥运运动美。

冬奥，奥运之美，后终于“精神之美”，奥运会是富有人权人性的，正如残疾人奥林匹克运动会中同样的严谨和尊重，残奥会里的“轮椅篮球赛”中一名一名运动员在赛场上一次一次的爬起，诠释了奥运的不屈精神。冬奥滑雪赛道上对手摔倒，而自己果断返回扶起的事在奥运会上也屡见不鲜。对手之间的帮助使所有人悟出其中比荣誉更夺目的财富——奥运精神“友谊”。无论比赛的是否是自己的队伍，无论最终名次的好坏，经久不息的掌声和所有人绝对的鼓励也是世界人民团结的表现。

太多太多，使奥运会已然不只是奥运会，他是人类最纯净最美好的灵魂的结晶!奥运会是运动会，更是交谊会，是世界人民热爱和平的集中体现，也是让所有人都认识每一个国家，每一个人的世界大舞台。是一个国家向世界宣扬风采的机会，也是世界青年彼此了解的纽带，这正是奥运会的最高意义所在。也正是用美好品质，可贵精神所悉心浇灌出的“五环之花”，它的芳香能沉醉世界，她的美艳也能打动世界，这也正是奥运精神之美。

“我和你心连心，同住地球村。”“同一个世界，同一个梦想。”冬奥会，以其仪式之美、运动之美、精神之美，共奏生命之交响。在这次冬奥，梦想赛道已为世界铺好，冰雪消融，流淌心间。我们虽隔千江，却饮同水;虽阻万山，却望同月。在耿耿历史星河，世界人民心手相连，与自然同渊源共生。春秋四载，圣火再燃，白鸽几寄杳杳长思，奥运再赴四年之约!

导语：2016年高考越来越近了，你知道英语作文怎么写能拿到高分吗?下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

1.每天听英语听力如VOA、BBC，时间在30分钟内。逆向练习听力，效果最佳。

2.记牢单词表上的单词，一定要循环记忆，否则很快会忘掉。

3.单选主要考语法，词汇辨析，交际英语，动词短语等。

4.完型，阅读，改错每天做几篇，一定要坚持，断了一两天感觉就没了，时间不会很多，30分钟就够了(做题速度要严格要求)，一定要摆脱汉语、生词的束缚。

5.作文要有亮点，如字迹清晰，使用高级词汇，使用复杂句式(定语从句，名词性从句，倒装等)，可从平时训练中摘取学习，也可从范文中找。

6.针对不同地区的新题型加强训练。

7.拿着几次考试卷向老师咨询自己的薄弱环节。

历年真题：

【2013•辽宁卷】书面表达(满分25分)

—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

1. 写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一;

2. 家人团聚;

3. 赏月、吃月饼;

4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake

【参考范文】

The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。

【2013•江西卷】书面表达(满分25分)

星光中学(Xing Guang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：

1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);

2. 活动的过程;

3. 你对于这次活动的评论。

注意： 1. 词数120左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it。

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy。

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

【2013•四川卷】书面表达(共35分)

某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;

2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;

3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施

注意：

1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称

It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits。

【参考范文】

It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study。

I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop。

When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes。

【2013•全国新课标(卷II)】书面表达(25分)

假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)

2. 象征意义

3. 价格

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头已为你写好。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you

【2013•全国新课标(卷I)】书面表达(25分)

假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：

李明：高个子，戴眼镜

航班号：CA985

到达：8月6日上午11:30

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

[次页标题= 导航短标题=]

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before。

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket。

Looking forward to your reply。

Yours,

Li Hua

【2013•广东卷】Ⅲ写作 (共两节，满分40分)

第一节 基础写作(共1小题;满分15分)

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。

[写作内容] 写一篇关于移民[微博]火星的快讯

[写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容

第二节 读写任务(共1小题;满分25分)

阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文

To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend ,painting the house or digging the garden。

What is the reason, then? In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the Job they are doing .It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something !

Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized, No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs。

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：

(1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛;

(2) 假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何?

(3) 你对平凡工作者的看法。

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【参考范文】

第一节：基础写作：

It is reported that thirty volunteers to be sent to the Mars who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe by the year of 2015. The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the earth once they are immigrated to the Mars. What’s more, it is greatly important for them to try to keep a good relationship with other members. Experts strongly warned that the living conditions on the Mars are very hard, for not only the extremely cold climate would they meet with, but also loneliness and fear. On the contrary , the volunteers insist that they have got tired of the life on the earth, so greatly being eager to experience the unknown, mysterious life on the Mars; meanwhile, if the would be succeeded , they would get the honor to be heroes of human beings。

第二节：读写任务

In the passage, the author mainly stressed the importance of small and ordinary work, such as cleaning the street because of their essentiality for the organization of the society ,and thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly。

There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is more harder compared with any other jobs in the society. On one hand, they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are sill in the sweet sleeping dreams. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street no matter it is sun shines strongly or snow, wind heavily。

Nobody could imagine what an bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city. Wherever we go, there is rubbish. Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish. Even worse, if there were no change about that, diseases would spread at a very quick speed. Is there anything that can be worse than this!

From the above, I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job, such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, those who do those most insignificant jobs should get respected as much as those being engineers or doctors。

从历年高考写作题来看, 特别是基础写作, 要点都是一目了然的, 写什么, 对于考生来说不是问题, 问题是不知如何写。

实践证明, 只有写出正确地道的句子, 才有可能把文章写好。磨刀不误砍柴功, 写作需练基本功。你有了扎实的基本功, 不管是基础写作还是读写任务, 也不管考什么作文题, 你都能得高分。因此, 从某种意义上说, 我们不必刻意追求猜题押题, 而应脚踏实地地去练好基本功, 这才是高考高分的备考上策。

【基本句型特训】

这里的基本句型包括简单句的五个基本句型和there be句型。

所谓简单句就是由一个主语 (包括并列主语)和一个谓语 (包括并列谓语) 组成的句子, 即一个主谓关系的句子。

六个基本句型

典型例句

主+谓

He studies very hard.

主+谓+宾

We enjoy sports.

主+谓+间宾+直宾

Sports bring me happiness.

主+谓+宾+宾补

Exercise mades me healthy.

主+系+表

Exercise is very beneficial.

There be句型

There are three reasons why I like it.

特别提醒: 根据历年高考阅卷的情况, 考生写句子最易犯的错是: 不用be时却用了, 或者该用be时却没用。因此, 我们须注意:

1.英语句子通常要有谓语动词, 否则就不完整。如表达 “他很累”, 不能说He very tired.

而要说He is very tired. 因为tired是形容词, 句中无动词。切记: 当句子意思完整, 但句中没有动词时, 一定要加上be。

2. 当句中已有谓语动词时, 若不是进行时态或被动语态, 一定不要再用be。如表达 “他昨天来过这里”, 不能说He was came here yesterday. 而要说He came here yesterday.

[课堂练习]

用基本句型翻译下列各组句子, 然后合并成一篇通顺自然的5句话的短文。

●心中有梦:

单句翻译

1. David 7岁了。 (主系表)

2. 他有一个梦想。 (主谓宾)

3. 他想在天上飞。 (主谓宾)

4. 他做了一架纸飞机。 (主谓双宾)

5. 他完成了作业。 (主谓宾)

6. 他玩纸飞机。 (主谓)

7. 有一天, 天上有一架飞机在飞。 (there be句型)

8. 他的父亲鼓励他努力学习成为飞行员。 (主谓宾宾补)

9. 他非常努力地学习。 (主谓)

10. 十八年后他实现了他的梦想。 (主谓宾)

合并成文

______________________________________________________________________________________________

【标准答案】

1. David was seven years old.

2. He had a dream.

3. He wanted to fly in the sky.

4. He made himself a paper plane.

5. He finished homework.

6. He always played with the paper plane.

7. There was a plane flying in the sky.

8. His father encouraged him to study hard and be a pilot.

9. He worked very hard at his lessons.

10. He made his dream come true 18 years later.

合并成文: When David was seven years old, he dreamed of flying in the sky. Having finished his homework, he made himself a paper plane to play with. One day, there was a plane flying in the sky. His father

encouraged him to be a pilot in the future. It was by working hard that he made his dream come true eighteen years later.

假如你是李华，是一名高中生。随着科技的发展，iPad已成为中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐，阅读纯文本电子书，又可玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一封信，谈谈中学生使用iPad的情况。信的内容必须包括以下几点：

1、使用iPad对学习的好处：

2、对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响：

3、提出自己的建议并说明理由。

注意：开头已经给出，不计入总数。词数120字左右

Dear Editor,

Im a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think its a fashion to use them.

参考范文：

Dear Editor,

Im a senior high school student named Li Hua. Now many students have iPads and think its a fashion to use them. U sing an iPad, we can listen to music, download a lot of learning materials and read them on the screen. Apparently, its helpful to our study, especially to our English listening.

Some students, however, bring their iPads to the classroom and listen to music without earphones, which makes the teacher and other students greatly annoyed. Some of them even waste precious time in class playing video games.

In my opinion, as students, we should make good use of iPads to help achieve academic success. The classroom is a place for students to study, and thereforeconcentration is awfully needed for us to learn our lessons. Furthermore, the school should make a rule to guide the students to use iPads in a proper way. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

人生当中，总会面临许许多多的选择。这些选择，有些会让你左右为难，不知所措。可是这种感受只有在时间面前不得不做出这样的选择时才能让人体会到选择的艰难。

随着时间的推移，总会让我们一生当中重要的人离我们而去。于是，我想到了我人生中最重要的四个人。他们是爸爸，妈妈，朋友和宠物。

当然，时间总会让你做出这样的选择：四个人中，你要选择一个人离你而去，你会选择哪个人?我简单地想了想，爸爸妈妈朋友都是比较重要的人，宠物相对来说不那么重要。所以，我选择了宠物。

时间在飞快地流逝，转眼间，时间又让我们做出了这样的选择。这回我要好好思考一下了，爸爸妈妈是生我养我哺育我成长的人，而朋友是在我碰到困难给予我帮助的人，所以，我选择了离开朋友。

现在只剩爸爸妈妈了，我真的不希望时间再让我做出这样可怕的选择，恨不得让游戏立刻结束。

当然，时间是残酷的，他非要你去掉其中一人。

真的，我实在无法选择了。我是喝妈妈的乳汁长大的，而且妈妈带我那么辛苦，我一生都报答不了妈妈对我的恩情。爸爸是整个家的顶梁柱，撑起一个家。我一个也不能失去，我大声喊道：“快让这个残酷的游戏结束吧!”

一瞬间，这个游戏就结束了，因为这只是一个梦。

对，要珍惜身边每一个人，因为有这个人，只有唯一一个!

people always have the tendency to regard government pollcies as either gentle or tough. however, there is always eception. take the taes on birth for instance. it is really an incredible combination of both.

somebody argues that the taes on birth proclaim to the public what the government wants. thats true. but will the public take birth control without hesitation just because the government wants it? besides, we cant always count on taes to reverse peoples behavior. the doubled taes on wine and cigarettes over the past years dont discourage the consumption of them at all, not to mention other luuries. to a certain degree,drinking and smoking have become more attractive to people as a symbol of financial abilities. how can we epect things to work out better if we simply apply the similar kinds of taes on birth?with the taes on birth policy, the government seems to suggest to people that it is acceptable to have more children, as long as their families can afford the taes. thus new challenges to social equality were posed. rich people can enjoy larger families while poor people are supposed to have fewer children. the rights of giving more births seemed to be entitled to wealthy people under the taes policy.

besides, once a child is born, he should be guaranteed the very best his parents could offer. in poor families, wouldnt the children, who are taed be regarded as burdens by other family members because theyve imposed more economic pressures on their families? the ta also directly deprives his or her rights to grow up in a better economic condition while such deprivation to a child in a wealthy family doesnt have much influence at all.

the taes on birth policy is, after all, gentle to the rich and tough to the poor, especially to the taed children in poor families. thus, it is not worth so much recommendation.

“山羊过独木桥”比赛，通常是双方相遇时，一方拼尽全力将对方顶下，从而获胜。

然而这一次，双方队员相互抱住，采用合作的方式都渡过了独木桥。究竟该判哪方赢呢?观众、运动员和裁判开始了激烈争论。

在争论的背后，不禁引起了我的深思：这样的合作，选对时候了吗?

不得不谈，当今，合作充斥着整个世界。企业之间强强联台、互利共赢，能够创造出巨大的利润;朋友之间相互协作、相互帮助。能够克服各种困难;学习之间你中有我、我中有你，能够达到难以想象的目标。

但是，以上所述均具备一个条件，就是他们之问不用分出胜负。若到了赛场上，必须要有一个排名时，合作或许就不是那么恰当了，而要凭自己所能，绽放出光彩。

因此，合作应当选对时候。

合作应当选对时候。在2000年的雅典奥运会上，郭晶晶与伏明霞同是女子三米板的跳水运动员。那一年，郭晶晶只是一个新手，而伏明霞已经蝉联了两届奥运会的冠军。但是，两人都是那一年的夺冠热门人物。

两人没有合作一同训练与比赛，双方都想以各自的力量战胜对方，最终，伏明霞以微弱的优势摘下了跳水金牌。

是竞争成就了伏明霞的奥运三连冠，也激励丁郭晶晶在日后的比赛上拿下冠军的决心。试想，两人若是在比

赛中采取的合作的方式，那么结果可能就不是如此了。

合作应当选对时候。有一对好朋友，他们有一个共同的目标就是考入清华大学。为了这个共同的目标，两个好朋友都努力学习并相互帮助。你帮我复习功课，我帮你解决难题。就在双方这样坚持合作下，最终，都以骄人的成绩考入了清华大学。

可以说是合作成就了这一对好朋友。

合作，应当选对时候。在赛场上我们应极力绽放出自己的光彩，勇于拼搏。在日常学习生活中，应发扬合作的精神与伙伴共同奋斗共同努力，实现共赢。

Dear Mr. John,

How are things going with you in Beijing?

I am writing to show my thanks to you. You tutored me in my spoken English before you went to Beijing. With your help I made such rapid progress that I won the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city. My achievement is owed to your help. Thank you very much.

I have heard that you and your wife will pay a visit to my school. I am very glad at the news. In that case we can see each other again. I am looking forward to your coming. I am sending you a telescope as a small gift. I hope you will like it.

All the best.

Yours,

Liu Jie

亲爱的约翰先生：

您在北京过得怎么样?

我写信向您表达我的谢意。去北京前您辅导我的英语口语。在您的帮助下我很快取得进步，所以能在市里举办的英语口语比赛中取得第一名。我的成绩应该归功于您的帮助。非常感谢。

我听说您和您的夫人要来我们学校访问。听到这个消息我非常高兴。那样的话我们就又可以见面了。期盼着您的到来。我给您寄去一件小礼物“望远镜”。希望您喜欢。

万事如意。

您的朋友 刘杰

Dear Mr. John,

How are you getting on in Beijing?

I am writing to tell you a piece of good news. I am the champion of the Spoken English Competition held in the city. The success is owed to your help. Before you went to Beijing you spent much time on my spoken English so that I made great progress in it. As a result I got the first place in the competition. Thanks a lot.

I heard that you and your wife would visit my school. I am very happy and expect to see you soon. I am sending you a telescope as a small gift. I hope you will like it.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Liu Jie

亲爱的约翰先生：

您在北京过得怎么样?

我写信告诉您一个好消息。我在市里举办的英语口语比赛中取得第一名。我，的成功归功于您的帮助。您花了很长时间辅导我英语口语，我因此取得很大进步并且获得比赛的第一名。多谢。

我听说您和您的夫人要来我们学校访问。我非常高兴并期望很快见到您。我给您寄去一件小礼物“望远镜”。希望您喜欢。

一切顺利。

您的朋友 刘杰

​导语：要想写好英语作文，我们平时就得多练习，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1、Taking all thesefactors into consideration，we naturally reasonablycome to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论…

2、Hence/Therefore,we’d better come to the conclusion that smoking has a great influence on ourhealth. 因此，我们最好得出这样的结论…

3、There is nodoubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问，(跳槽)有优点也有缺点。

4、All in all, we cannot live withoutwater. But at the same time, we must try to find out new ways to cope withthe problems that would arise.

总之，我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。

5、It is high timethat we put an end to the (trend)。

该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。

6、It is time to take the adviceof …and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …该是采纳…的建议，并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

7、不用说…… It goes without saying that= It is obvious that …

例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that itpays to keep early hours.

8、……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.)to do / that … …

是重要的 It is important(for sb.) to do / that … ……

是适当的 It is proper(for sb.) to do / that ………

是紧急的 It is urgent(for sb.) to do / that …

例：It is proper for us to keep thepublic places clean.

It is proper that we(should)keep the public places clean.

我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

9、Best wishes to you and yours.衷心的祝福你及你的家人。

I’m looking forward to hearing from you. 期待你的回信。

还记得这句英文谚语"Never judge a book by its cover"吗 下面四幅图就描述了这样一个故事.假设你是第一幅图中左边的男孩,站在右边的是你的朋友Jack,你的妈妈一开始因为他的穿着打扮很不喜欢他,可是后来又发生了什么呢

请根据图画写一篇日记,并适当加以评论,发表自己的看法.

词数:100

Possible Version:

March 21th Sunday Sunny

My new friend Jack is a fashion follower who often wears strange clothes and long hair. But my mother drove him away from our flat at the first sight yesterday. She thought he was a bad person, although she didnt know him at all.

However, mom totally changed her mind this morning. When we were walking down the street near our home, we witnessed an accident. A boy was hit by a car when he was walking across the road with headphones. Many people saw it, but at first no one knew how to help. Then someone rushed forwards and covered the boy with his coat to keep warm. He looked after him well until the ambulance came. It was Jack! His calmness and seasoned first aid skills moved mom. She went and apolpgized to Jack for her former attitute, and told him that he was always welcome to our home.

That gives me a lesson. The appearance may reflect ones interest, but it isnt the symbol of ones quality. We should never judge a book with its cover.

可能版本：

三月二十一日星期日晴

我的新朋友杰克是一个时尚的追随者经常穿着奇怪的衣服，长长的头发。但是我妈妈昨天第一眼就把他从我们的公寓里赶走了。她认为他是个坏人，虽然她根本不认识他。

然而，今天早上妈妈完全改变了主意。当我们走在我们家附近的街道时，我们目睹了一场事故。一个男孩被一辆汽车撞在马路上时，戴着耳机。很多人看到它，但在第一，没有人知道如何帮助。然后有人冲了上去，用外套盖住了那个男孩，以保持温暖。他很好的照顾了他，直到救护车来了。这是杰克！他冷静和老练的急救技巧感动了妈妈。她为她以前对杰克的态度道歉，并告诉他，他总是欢迎我回家。

这给了我一个教训。外表可以反映一个人的兴趣，但这不是一个人素质的象征。我们决不应该用它的封面来判断一本书。

Dear Amy,

亲爱的艾米，

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

我是李华从中国新华中学。我很抱歉听到你有给你带来了巨大的痛苦，肺癌。但你应该意识到你是年轻的，有一个光明的前途。所以，站起来对抗疾病!我相信你会赢的。据悉，美国抗癌协会将捐出三美分每安慰信你收到。所以我要告诉你的情况，我所有的朋友，请他们给你写信。这样，你将为你被治愈，有足够的钱。希望你能很快好起来。

Yours,

你的，

Li Hua

李华

导语：忙绿的高考已经结束了，全国各地高考英语满分作文也相继出来了，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

范文：Dear Ms Jenkins,

I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考译文】

我是李华，我写信告诉你我的暑假计划，我也希望你帮我一个忙。

为了获得一些实际经验，我打算在一家外资公司做兼职工作。我已经完成了我的工作申请和个人简历。但这是我写的申请和个人简历的第一时间，我甚至不知道有什么要注意。所以，我写信给你，希望你能给我一些帮助。如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。

期待你的回复。我真的很感激。

The campus is like the flowers, the fragrance of the intoxicating, the smell of love. The schoolyard is like rain dew, nourish us, cultivate us; The campus is like a dream, that kind of beautiful, that kind of sweet. I love this garden campus.

"Beautify campus, green campus". Our campus has become green and beautiful. Flowers, small trees, patches of grass, flowerbeds, our campus is full of life and fresh.

"The air is fresh, clean and tidy environment, buildings, surrounded by green trees", who dont want to in such a clean, sanitary, healthy growth of the beautiful campus learning? But for various reasons, our campus environment is being undermined by the bad behavior of some students. Nowadays, in our beautiful campus, there are some uncivilized phenomena, some students randomly throw in the peel of paper, plastic bottles, melon seed shells and so on. Whenever naughty wind these waste, running here and there, tinkling like a child, helpless, we can only watch them on campus "dance", and even some classmates in the scribble on the white wall and the desk carved, and disorderly spit phlegm, and so on. All this, cannot match with our beautiful campus. See these phenomena, how would you feel? Does studying here make everyone happy?

In order to let us have the beautiful campus of green trees, clean environment and grass, please act quickly! Use your own hands to protect the beauty of the campus environment. Through radio, blackboard, speech competition, knowledge competition, the development theme class meeting, publicity of the importance of protecting our campus environment, the necessity, form "real small is my home, beautiful depends on everybody" good atmosphere; Start everyone from yourself and start with the little things around you. As the saying goes, "do not be small but do not be evil." Get into the habit of not littering, spitting, not scribbling, trampling on the lawn, moving, bending, and so on. Dear students, Let us join hands and work together to create a beautiful and tidy learning environment for ourselves. Isnt that bad?

I am convinced that the campus is beautiful, friendly, is a place where we learn to grow, we love the campus, love every inch of the campus, lets work together to protect the environment of the campus!