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954初中英语作文写作技巧精选
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+ 加入清单要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确,这一句足矣。
第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first,second,third,finally等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition,whatsmore,moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word,all inall(表示总结的)。转折:but,yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
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篇1:初中英语满分
全文共 654 字
+ 加入清单When winter comes, the topic of haze will never be ignored. When it comes,
many pictures will be showed. People make fun of these pictures and they
actually laugh at themselves, living with these poison air. Even in the daytime,
people can’t see their faces beyond 10 meters. Many schools choose to stop the
class and let the students stay at home. It is obvious that haze is a great
threat to people’s health. This new type of destruction is the result of
polluted environment. Businessmen chase for the profit and take the cost of
polluting the environment. Now their offspring have to suffer from it. It is
never too late to do something to protect our earth.
篇2:厦门初中英语
全文共 1007 字
+ 加入清单Xiamen is Chinas first four special economic zones,it is
Taiwanese,southern Jiangxi,southern Hunan to the east to the sea,the Pacific Rim
will be developed into an international harbor.
"City at sea,the sea in the city," Xiamen is a graceful charm of the "Sea
Garden." Island,reef,rock,temple,flowers,wood backed each other,the hometown of
overseas Chinese customs,practices Fujian and Taiwan,coastal cuisine,exotic
blend of construction,year-round spring weather is more of the charm of the sea
icing on the cake.Beautiful scenery and pleasant weather,it can be said here is
the best environment for cities.Surrounded by sea water,broad sandy beaches,warm
sunshine,as a good ecological environment,Xiamens clean air,a habitat for
hundreds of thousands of egrets,Xiamen has formed a unique natural
landscape,since ancient times,Xiamen Egret is one of the major habitats,so
Xiamen Also known as "Lu Dao"; in addition to the beautiful natural
scenery,Xiamens urban environment is also very clean,is well-known tourist
city.
篇3:初中英语作文:初中生活
全文共 792 字
+ 加入清单Before I entered the middle school, I felt so worried about the life in middle school, because my cousin told me that I would have to compete with so many excellent students.
Now I get used to the life, I learn many subjects from Monday to Friday.
Though I always meet the difficulties in learning the new knowledge, I get help from my teachers and classmates.
I am not afraid of the middle school life again, I am so excited to learn new things every day.
In the future days, I will meet many challenges, I believe I can get over them. Life in middle school has happiness and sorrow, they fulfill my life.
在我进入初中以前,我很担忧初中的生活,因为我的表姐告诉我我将要和很多优秀的学生进行竞争。如今我适应了初中生活,我从周一到周五学习很多科目。虽然我总是在学习新知识时遇到困难,但是我得到了老师和同学的帮助。我不再害怕初中生活了,我对于每天学到新知识感到兴奋。在将来的日子里,我将会遇到很多困难,我相信我能克服他们。初中的生活有快乐也有忧伤,它们充实了我的生活。
[初中英语作文:初中生活
篇4:初中英语作文及翻译:保护环境
全文共 956 字
+ 加入清单Protecting the Environment
In the last several decades, our earth has been extremely polluted, such as air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution and so on. In recent years, the extreme weather becomes more and more frequent. Winter gets colder and summer becomes hotter and it rains more frequently. All of these warn us that protecting the environment is a serious and emergent event. As our general people, we should build proper lifestyle. We should pay attention to water and light saving. When we go out, we should firstly choose the public transportation. The most important is that we must realize that we can do a lot of things to protect our environment. Its our duty to make our home better. Let’s change from ourselves.
在过去的几十年里,我们的地球已经极度污染,比如大气污染,水污染以及噪音污染等等。近几年,极地气候越来越频繁。冬天越来越暖,夏天越来越热,还经常下雨。所有的这些都警示我们保护环境是一件严肃紧迫的事。作为普通老百姓,我们应该形成合适的生活方式。我们应该注意节约水电。出门的时候我们应该首选公共交通。最重要的是我们必须意识到我们可以做很多事情来保护我们的环境。使我们的家园变得更美好是我们的责任。让我们从自己开始改变。
篇5:初中英语满分
全文共 791 字
+ 加入清单With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping
online。 It has become a fashion in our daily life。 Some of us students also join
the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can
buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors。 You can avoid getting
tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time。 When
shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are
generally lower.
Every coin has two sides。 Its disadvantages are obvious, too.On the one
hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on
the Internet。 On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods
that are not badly needed.That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
篇6:初中英语日记
全文共 310 字
+ 加入清单20XX.X.X 晴
I watched television late last night so I woke up late. My mother asked me to go to the market to buy some eggs for her. When I played with a little dog on the street, I dropped the eggs on the ground. They were all broken. My mother was very angry with me when I went home. I am very unhappy to-day.
篇7:初中英语优秀作文:我的学校
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+ 加入清单My school
I am Alice. I am a student of No.1 Middle School. I study in Class Two Grade Seven.
There is a map of our school on the wall. The playground is in the middle of the school. On the left of the playground, there is a library. I like reading very much, so I often read books in the library. There is a teaching building behind the library. We study in that building. My classroom is on the second floor in that building. The teachers offices are in that building, too. Where is the sport hall? Oh, its on the right of the teaching building. I have P.E class in the sport hall. Thecanteenis in front of the sport hall. We have lunch and dinner in the canteen. In the school, I feel very happy!
This is my school. Its a big and nice place. I like my school very much. What about your school?
作文翻译:
我的学校
我是爱丽丝。我是一中的一名学生。我在七年级二班。
墙上有一张我们学校的地图。操场在学校的中间。操场左边是图书馆。我非常喜欢阅读,所以我经常在图书馆里看书。图书馆后面有一座教学楼。我们在那栋楼里面学习。我的教室在二楼。教师办公室也是在那栋楼。体育馆在哪里呢?噢,在教学楼的右边。我在体育馆上体育课。食堂在体育馆的前面。我们在食堂吃午饭和晚饭。在学校,我觉得很开心!
这是我的学校。是一个又大又漂亮的地方。我非常喜欢我的学校。你的学校是怎么样的呢?
篇8:初中生英语
全文共 771 字
+ 加入清单Christmas is also known as Christmas, translated as "Christ mass", western
traditional festival, every year in December 25th. Mass is a kind of church
service. Christmas is a religious festival, because regard it as to celebrate
the birth of Jesus, named "christmas".
Most of the Catholic Church will be first in the 24, Christmas Eve, i.e.,
the early morning of December 25 at midnight mass, and some Christian will be
held caroling and on December 25 to celebrate Christmas; Christian another
branch of Orthodox Christmas celebration in the annual January 7.
Christmas is a public holiday in the western world and in many other
regions, such as Hongkong, Macao, Malaysia, and Singapore in Asia. The Bible
actually did not record the date of birth of Jesus, Christmas is a public.
篇9:放松英语作文初中
全文共 1100 字
+ 加入清单What does it mean to relax?Despite hearing this term thousands of times
during the course of our lives, very few people have deeply considered what it’s
really about.
When you ask people (which I have done many times) what it means to relax,
most will answer in a way that suggests that relaxing is something you plan to
do lateryou do it on vacation, in a hammock, when you retire, or when you get
everything else done. This implies, of course, that most other times should be
spent nervous, agitated, rushed, and frenzied. Very few actually come out and
say so, but this is the obvious implication.Could this explain why so many of us
operate as if life were one great big emergency?
It is useful to think of relaxation as a quality of heart that you can
access on a regular basis rather than something reserved for some later time.
You can relax now. It’s helpful to remember that relaxed people can still be
superachievers and, in fact, that relaxation and creativity go hand in hand.When
I’m feeling uptight, for example, I don’t even try to write. But when I feel
relaxed, my writing flows quickly and easily.
篇10:初中英语满分
全文共 860 字
+ 加入清单Boys and girls ,
Today I’ll talk about our English club . Our English club was set up two
months ago . Now we have members of 25 . We meet once a week on Saturday
afternoon. So far we have conducted a variety of activities on English learning
, such as watching English films , holding a Christmas party and getting
together with foreign students .
Last week we held an English story-telling competition . We required that
the entries be original and interesting and be presented in English within five
minutes . Every member took an active part in the activity . Two foreign English
teachers were invited to act as judges . At last Li Ping won the first place .
Many members said the activity benefited them in many ways . Not only did it
improve their spoken English ,but also it brought them much fun . They hope many
such activities can be held .
That’s all. Thank you.
篇11:初中英语作文大全
全文共 473 字
+ 加入清单Last March, my mother told my father and me that my grandfather would come
in April. We were very happy because my grandfather was an interesting old man
and he had not visited us since he went to Hong Kong.
On April 1 my father and I bought a lot of food from the supermarket and
bought a big bunch of flowers home. Then we did some cleaning at home. At night
when we were waiting for my grandfather, the bell rang and in came my mother.
She smiled to us and said "April fools"!
篇12:初中英语日记
全文共 321 字
+ 加入清单20XX.X.X 晴
Mom bought me a pair of skating shoes at my fifth birthday. From then on, I developed the hobby of skating. It not only makes me stronger and stronger, but also helps me know many truths of life. I know that it is normal to fall, and if only you can get on your feet again and keep on moving, you are very good!
篇13::初中写秋雨的英语作文
全文共 1533 字
+ 加入清单Autumn came, the autumn girl jumped and jumped, happy to throw a long hair to come! Her hair thrown where, where is a harvest scene.
Autumn rain come! Datong farmer uncle laughed Yan, their hard to grow vegetables, fruit will be harvested! Rain passionate poured farmers uncles vegetables, fruit, sweet rain to moisten them, the fields The vegetables were greener; the fruits of the trees were more fragrant; the peasants were more happy.
The young men and girls in the big cities are standing in the rain to enjoy the rain drift. Like soybeans, playing on people who are itchy, cool; like nectar, fall in peoples mouth sweet, slippery. Some people let go voice shouting: ah! Really cool! Finally survive the hot summer! Is not it!
The children are happier, they are holding a colorful umbrella, like a cluster of colorful mushrooms in the woods. Standing in the distance, that "mushroom" like a long rainbow. And that naughty children wearing rain boots hard to step on the water, from time to time splashing from the high water. And some children take advantage of others walking in the tree, the hard to shake the tree, so that the rain on the tree like a broad bean hit the passers-by. They can be really naughty it!
They are moisturizing the flowers and trees that will wither, and pull them back from the edge of death, and their leaves are slowly stretched to make them fresh. Back to the green they exposed a smile, nodded in the rain, as if to say, thank you! Thank you!
Watching them happy look, I am also happy from ear to ear!
篇14:初中英语作文:星期天
全文共 644 字
+ 加入清单星期天(Sunday)
Today is Sunday, I and father and mother, the grandfather grandmother, grandfather paternal grandmother arrives the park to play together.
In the park person may really many!
We bid good-bye among the park.I go to the ice skating, the daddy and mother ride the skiff to swim the park, the grandfather grandmother and grandfather paternal grandmother go to the square to sing the Guangdong tune, to play the primal chaos separately, dance and take a walk.
Today, is most joyful one day! I love Sunday!
星期天
今天是星期天,我和爸爸妈妈、外公外婆、爷爷奶奶一起到公园去玩。
公园里的人可真多啊!
我们到了公园就各找自己的爱好了。我去溜冰,爸爸和妈妈去乘坐小艇游遍公园,外公外婆和爷爷奶奶分别去广场唱粤曲、耍太极、跳舞和散步。
今天,是最快乐的一天!我爱星期天!
篇15:很棒的一天初中暑假英语日记
全文共 474 字
+ 加入清单July 26th Tuesday Sunny
In the morning, we see a new friend. Although I don’t know his name, I meet him. And I think this boy looks like Edison. He is handsome. Later we make up some short plays and my group also show our play. Our story talks about a magician helping some fishes. And we got No.1.
In the afternoon, we play a game. It is so much fun!
Although the class is still boring, I think, in our life, we still can find some happiness!
Nice mood! Nice weather! Nice day!
篇16:初中英语作文:我爱学习英语
全文共 1521 字
+ 加入清单Dear teacher and classmates:
I am very glad to make a speech here in this class again! This time, Id like to talk something about English.
I love English. English language is now used everywhere in the world. It has become the most common language on Internet and for international trade. Learning English makes me confident and brings me great pleasure.
When I was seven, my mother sent me to an English school. At there, I played games and sang English songs with other children . Then I discovered the beauty of the language, and began my colorful dream in the English world.
Everyday, I read English following the tapes. Sometimes, I watch English cartoons.
On the weekend, I often go to the English corner. By talking with different people there, I have made more and more friends as well as improved my oral English.
I hope I can travel around the world someday. I want to go to America to visit Washington Monument, because the president Washington is my idol. Of course, I want to go to London too, because England is where English language developed. If I can ride my bike in Cambridge university, I will be very happy.
I hope I can speak English with everyone in the world. Ill introduce China to them, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and Anshan.
I know, Rome was not built in a day. I believe that after continuous hard study, one day I can speak English very well.
If you want to be loved, you should learn to love and be lovable. So I believe as I love English everyday , it will love me too.
篇17:初中英语作文大全之自我介绍
全文共 567 字
+ 加入清单在一个新的环境中自我介绍,是将我们更好地展现在大家面前的一种方法。
根据以下要点提示写一篇60-80词的短文。
1、在学校学习汉语、英语、数学、历史和一些其他学科;
2、我学习很努力,最喜欢的学科是英语,经常找机会练习英语;
3、现在中国已经加入世贸组织wto,并且2008年奥运会将在北京举行,英语正变得越来越重要;
4、我将更加努力学习英语,将来为祖国作贡献。
I study Chinese、English、maths and History and some other subject at school.I study hard. My favorite subject is English.I often find chance to practice English.China has joined WTO and Beijing will host the 2008 Olympics,English is more and more important .I will study hard and be dedicate to my homeland.
同学们有没有准备好自己的自我介绍呢?这可是一个很好的表现的机会哦!
初中英语写作范文:保护眼睛
眼睛对我们很重要,同学们一定要很好的保护自己的眼睛哦。
篇18:关于故宫的英语作文初中
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+ 加入清单The Palace Museum is located on city center in Peking.China is existing
biggest, most integrity of thou building cluster.It is been one of five greatest
temples in the world by the fame.
The Palace Museum start to set up in A.D.1406, the Palace Museum have the
size courtyard more than 90s and the house contain 980 and add up to 8704.the
Palace Museum surroundings surround 12 meters in height, long the Palace Museum
wall of 3400 meters, form is one rectangular city defense, there is 52 meter
wide moat outside the wall surround, formation a fortress of severe barracks.The
Palace Museum has 4 doors, center door Wu door, east door Donghua door, west
door Xihua door, north door Shengwu door.
篇19:初中英语日记之日记
全文共 432 字
+ 加入清单Today is the first day I stay at Zhejiang University.I’m happy and excited.In the morning,I got up early.I felt fresh.After washed my face and brushed my teeth,I had delicious food for breakfast.I made some friends.They are friendly.In our bedroom,Xu Chao is our bedroom rules,I hope everyone has a good trip at Zhejiang University!At night,I’m a little tired,but relaxing,too.I think tomorrow will be fine,too!I look forword to it.
篇20:我的朋友初中英语Myfriend
全文共 420 字
+ 加入清单I have a lot of friends but Toshi is my best friend.He is a boy. Both of us are good at English, so we often have a chat in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground. He runs so fast that I can not catch up with him. He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He loves popular songs and also classical music.