元宵节英语作文高三【推荐20篇】

Open happy heart just after the Spring Festival, is celebrated the Lantern Festival. Today is Friday, our school has carried out a happy celebration of this days activity.

In the morning, I was carrying a bag as usual went to the school, at the entrance of the building, he saw a big, red lanterns hanging above. Oh! He reminded us - today school to carry out activities that celebrate yuanxiao, we began to decorate the classroom, with a few big lantern, the back of the classroom also put the tiger stickers, ribbon and decorating, doors with pepper and finally to the activities such as in the beginning, this activity has two contents. We started an activity, that is each team about information on the Lantern Festival, hear teams, I learned a lot of knowledge, and its interesting, our team play, although I wont go up, but I also cheer for them in my mind, our team finished, start comparison, although our turnout came in third place, I also feel proud for our team. The next activity content is guess riddles, the students are sitting in my position, look at riddles, playing on the projection screen play everyone is scrambling to raise hand vies to answer first, right and prizes! But I always fall on somebody else, I just want to come out, was the other students guess.

Happy anniversary yuanxiao activity over in laughter.

开开心心的春节刚过，就迎来了热闹的元宵节。今天是星期五，我们学校开展了开开心心庆元宵的活动。

早晨，我还是像平常一样背着书包来到了学校，教学楼门口，，就看见上面挂着一个很大很红的灯笼。哦!他提醒我们—今天学校要开展庆元宵的活动，我们就开始布置教室了，挂着几只很大的灯笼，教室后面还贴着老虎的贴纸，门上贴着小辣椒和彩带，张灯结彩，终于等到了活动开始的时候，这次活动有两个内容。我们开始等一个活动，那就是个各小队说说有关元宵节的资料，听到各个小队的介绍，我学到了许多知识，又很有趣，我们小队上场了，我虽然没有上去，但是我也在心里为他们加油，我们小队讲完了，开始评比，虽然我们的投票率排在第三，我也为我们小队感到光荣。下一个活动内容是猜灯谜，同学们都坐在自己的位置上，看着打在投影屏幕上打出的灯谜，大家都争先恐后的举手抢答，答对了还有奖品呢!可是我总是落在人家，我刚想出来，就被其他同学抢猜了。

开开心心庆元宵活动在欢声笑语中结束。

Yesterday is the lantern festival, can be noisy! according to the traditional chinese folk, the day of the magnificent on brand night, people points up lights all light, to show celebration. go out the moon, burning lamp burning, happy event put lantern riddle quiz, were yuanxiao, have a family reunion, the backdrop of the festival, feel happy.

At 7:00 in the evening, i just have a meal, the sky sounded the zhalei general noise, and bam! bam! bam! each a barrage of put up the fireworks! i hurried stop chopsticks, rushed out of dining room and father, brother ran upstairs to watch the fireworks to! because my home in this area are of high buildings! i stand on top of the panoramic view of all the scenery! fireworks rose! some like a blooming chrysanthemums! some like the dancing like fireflies, some like a snow mountain blasted general! the most beautiful to a few big fireworks, is likely the volcanic eruption, purples, green, yellow, a mountain even a mountain out! like a meteor scattered, lined with black night, gorgeous and dazzing! the dark of night as a bright

Read other peoples fireworks, my brother and i also put their fireworks take out to put! i took out chongtianbao, lit, like a meteor shot out, trailing behind a long tail! colorful! brother took out the christmas tree, sent out a powerful sparks! color various kind! like a fountain, moving short, when light dark! sparks from the day and drop, like countless pearls hung in the sky! like heaven fell in the milky way. shine! still put yuhua is like fairy scattering flower, fell from the sky, and sometimes flower heart still open little, such as flower general. theres like ufo flash in the past, speed eyes cant keep up, some like a gyroscope general crazy rotating............. in the night

Finally put out the fireworks, about the quiet down, and to see this beautiful fireworks, reminds me of the xin qijis jade case yuan xi, he found in the thousands of degrees, suddenly look back, that person but in, fire dim. yuan xiao party is over, but the happiness and laughter, a long time to curl up in our window...

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Looking forward to, look forward to, look forward to the stars, looking forward to the moon, the annual Lantern Festival, eventually came in the evening, the family after dinner, I took mother and fathers hand, clamouring for mom and dad took me out to see lanterns.

Came to the pedestrian street, here was the lantern ocean, looked up and there are lifelike monkey lamp, small and exquisite rabbit lamp, looks very fierce tiger lamp... It is vivid, very spectacular.

Suddenly, I dont know whats wrong, your feet do not seem to work, follow the crowd, we are living have to squeeze into the pipeline. On the second floor, we saw a group of people around together excitedly, as if in riddles, and riddles but my specialty skills, why not let me show my bad? I took mom dads hand and squeezed into the crowd, also immersed in the happiness of riddles.

Im taking it from the above a, title is: once a heart can be lasting. (guess a word) ha ha, guess the riddle is my specialty talents. I think "a" and "denier" may be a word, read it carefully, and saw the word "heart", think "heart" can be written as "忄" ah, so, the answer to this question I want to come out, this word is "constant" word, with perseverance can last. Sure enough that I expected, so the answer is "constant".

Time is the past, like is playing much, look at the time, god, at nine o clock, we reluctantly left, however, through our efforts, and won many prizes!

Looked up at the sky, the moon is so bright, it seems smile to us, and together we revel in the joy of the holiday.

盼啊，盼啊，盼星星，盼月亮，终于盼来了一年一度的元宵节，晚上，全家吃完晚饭，我便拉着爸爸妈妈的手，嚷着要爸爸妈妈带我出去看花灯。

来到步行街，这儿简直成了灯笼的海洋，抬头一看，有活灵活现的猴灯，小巧玲珑的兔灯，看起来无比凶猛的虎灯……简直是栩栩如生，无比壮观。

忽然，我不知怎么了，自己的脚似乎不听使唤，跟着人群，我们被活生生得挤进了步步高。上了二楼，我们看见一群人兴奋地围在一块儿，仿佛在猜谜语，猜谜语可是我的拿手绝活，为什么不让我显现我的厉害呢?我拉着妈妈爸爸的手，挤进了人群中，也沉浸在猜谜语的快乐中。

我从上面取下一支，题目是：一旦有心便能持久。(猜一个字)哈哈，猜字谜可更是我的拿手绝活。我想“一”和“旦”或许可以组成一个字，仔细阅读一番，看见“心”字的时候，想“心”可以写成“忄”啊，所以，这题的答案我便想出来了，这个字就是“恒”字，有了恒心便可以持久。果然不出我的所料，答案果然是“恒”字。

时间流水般的过去了，正玩儿的起劲的时候，看看时间，天呐，九点啦，我们依依不舍的离开了，不过，经过我们的努力，还是赢了不少奖品呢!

抬头看着天上，月亮好亮啊，它仿佛在向我们微笑，和我们一起陶醉在节日的欢乐中。

Speak of the Lantern Festival everybody will think that a bowl of a bowl of steaming hot dumplings. In fact, the Lantern Festival for Chinese people have a different meaning, everyone should know the Lantern Festival is the first festival after the Spring Festival.

In general, after the Spring Festival, some people before the fifteenth day of the first is about to go out to work from home. And when they did not come out from the lively atmosphere of the Chinese New Year, a year did not see that they dont give up for the Spring Festival comes. The family is also more difficult to give up. And the arrival of the Lantern Festival is the first time after they went to different works of the festival, and this kind of festive atmosphere is both their final nostalgia for the Spring Festival. Also be the power that they work for a year. Because the meaning of the Lantern Festival is the first full moon of the year. A full moon means reunion in China. So the meaning of the Lantern Festival is different.

But the Lantern Festival is also a convincing is "edge of festival". Probably feel very not easy to meet all the year round to separate, just like that. Very not easy predestination and so no. Section is "edge".

But no matter what kind of account, as one of Chinas traditional festivals, each people have the obligation to commemorate and inheritance.

说起元宵节想必大家就想到那一碗碗热气腾腾的汤圆了吧。其实元宵节对于中国人来说有不一的意义，大家都应该知道元宵节是春节过后第一个节日。

一般来说，春节过后一些人根本等不到正月十五就要离家出门打工了。而他们此时并没有从过年的热闹气氛中走出来，一年的未见使他们对春节来临不舍。对家人也更加难以割舍。而元宵节的到来是他们到了异地工作后的第一次的节日，而这种节日的气氛既是他们对春节最后的留恋。也是他们工作一年的动力。因为元宵节的含义就是一年的第一个满月。满月在中国意味着团圆。所以元宵节的意义不同。

但是元宵节还有一种说服是“缘消节”。大概是觉得一年到头好不容易见一次面就这样要分开。好不容易的缘分就这样没有。就是“缘消节”吧。

但是不管那一种说法，作为中国的传统节日之一，每个人都有去纪念和传承的义务。

Zhang Ying is my good friend. She’s in Class1, Grade4 in Tianjiao Primary

School. She’s a model student. She’s smart and she’s helpful, too. She often

helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at Chinese, math,

English, arts and crafts, music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes

painting and drawing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her

parents. Oh yeah, she likes fishing, too. But she doesn’t like playing

basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best friend

of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each

other.

元宵节是中国传统节日，在这一天里，有吃汤圆、猜灯谜、耍花灯等习俗。

盼星星盼月亮，总算盼来了这一天。

下午一进教室，我就看见老师已经把教室打扮得漂漂亮亮、红红火火。黑板顶端，横贯一条波浪形的绿色彩带，彩带上，挂着橙红绿三个气球。黑板中央的电脑屏上，一片火红色紧紧围绕着“元宵”二字。每扇窗上均飘荡着几只彩色的气球。三条长长的红绳连着教室的两面墙，绳上整齐地挂着各色彩纸，纸片上印有不同的各种各样的谜面。环顾教室，一片喜庆祥和的节日气氛。

今天的重要节目是猜灯谜，只见同学们有的兴致勃勃，有的抓耳挠腮，有的垂头丧气，有的高作文/谈阔论，有的沉思不语。我转悠着：“超级好牙刷，打一成语。”默读了数遍，苦苦想了又想，没有头绪，放弃吧。我继续往下浏览着，突然，我看到这样一个谜面：“非洲姑娘，打一牙膏品牌。”这不是黑妹牙膏吗?但想想又觉得不妥，犹豫间，我又扫兴地回到座位。时间如梭，同学们陆续猜中了谜语，我却一无所获，心里有些失落。朋友安慰我别伤心，下面还有更有趣的游戏。听了朋友的话，我又开心起来。

接下来，还有8人传气球等游戏。快乐的时光总是很短暂，放学时间到了，大家却意犹未尽，迟迟不愿离开教室。

真是快乐的一天啊，多希望每天都这样开心无忧，幸福相伴。

Today is the Lantern Festival, my grandfather took me to the Ocean Park, he

said: "Ocean Park, there are many fish", then unable to buy a ticket and went

in.

Grandpa and I started a dolphin show that take the door, we are at the

dolphin show place and my grandfather chose a place to sit down, dolphin show

started in the first place is to let the dolphins jump up, and then throw a

small hoop to go in the water, with the beginning of a wonderful! Uncle have a

jump into the water and the dolphin show, uncle dolphins swim with the top of

the head with his feet, and uncle special fast, uncle came to like

skateboarding, on the back of the dolphin when uncle dolphins and put him on the

top, the audience all applaud for them, show is over I went out and grandpa. Out

grandpa and I saw a couple of milk to eat only fish, so I just bought a bottle

for fish, once a big fish to the dropped the bottle mouth down into the water, I

went to pick it up quickly.

I also found there yellow snakes, lobster, shell, dinosaur bones, the great

white whale, jellyfish, turtle, octopus, polar bear, arctic Wolf, penguins, sea

snakes, grass carp,... I also see! Time the bell rang at noon I and grandpa to

go, I really want to see for a while.

今天是元宵节，爷爷带我去了海洋公园他说：“海洋公园有许多的鱼类”，然后无门就买票进去了。

我和爷爷一进门海豚表演就开始了，我们到了海豚表演处就和爷爷选了一个位置坐下来了，海豚表演开始了首先是让海豚跳上来，然后就是把一个小小呼啦圈扔到水里面去，精彩的开始啦!有一位叔叔跳到水里和海豚表演，叔叔游泳的的时候海豚用头顶着他的脚，于是叔叔游得特别的快，过来的时候叔叔才在海豚的背上和滑板一样，叔叔上来的时候海豚又把他顶上来了，观众全为他们鼓掌，表演结束了我就和爷爷出去了。出去的时候我和爷爷看见了好几只吃奶的鱼，所以我就买了一个奶瓶给鱼味，有一次一只大鱼来了把奶瓶叼下去掉到了水里，我赶快就把它捡起来了。

我在那里还发现了黄蛇、龙虾、贝壳、恐龙骨、大白鲸、水母、海龟、章鱼、北极熊、北极狼、企鹅、海蛇、草鱼、……，真还看呀!中午时间的铃响了我和爷爷要走了，我真想再看一会儿。

元宵佳节到，家家闹元宵，吃汤圆团团圆，提着灯笼到处跑。对了!今天就是元宵节!元宵吃汤圆，所以，自然就要包汤圆了!

“哦!我的作业提前做完了!”我重重地吁了一口气，长长的伸了一个懒腰，连忙兴奋地跑到厨房里，迫不急待的要将这个好消息告诉妈妈。

走进厨房，只见妈妈全副武装，两手白白地，沾满了面粉，案板上还放着面团，正忙碌着呢!面团在妈妈手里不停地来回翻动着，不一会儿，一个个汤圆活灵活现。汤圆顺服的听从着指挥，颇有些大将的风度呢!

“看来包汤圆也不是很难吗!”看到妈妈那熟练的动作，我的手痒痒了，也想试试包汤圆的滋味。

于是，我顺手拿起面团，班门弄斧——假充内行地学着妈妈的样子包起来。

我捏一小团用糯米做成的面团，轻轻地搓成圆形，搓完以后，上面干巴巴的，我像妈妈一样沾了点水在上面。然后又用大拇指从中间扎在一个洞，再把馅儿放进去，把边抳起来，现在万事俱备——只欠东风了——搓。我开始把汤圆放在手心里，边用力搓边压，结果用力过了，馅儿好像灾民逃难似的，一手都是;又因为压太大力了，把面团的水份全吸光了。

”我还降服不了一个小小的面团?”我不服气地狠狠地挥了挥手中的“不成样儿”的汤圆。

站在一旁的妈妈“扑哧”一声笑了：“傻瓜，做汤圆也要讲究方法的。”妈妈边说边拿过我手中的面团示范起来：“搓的时候不能太用力，轻轻地搓，手臂要自然放松。”

“原来做汤圆还有这么多的学问啊!”我不好意思地吐了吐舌头。

“当然了!不仅仅是做汤圆，无论做什么事，都得讲究方法，只有这样，才能把事做好的!”

听了妈妈的话，我又一次地拿起了面团……

晚上，吃着自己做的汤圆，我感觉格外好吃……

According to legend, the spring and autumn period and the time of day, ChuZhao over the Yangtze river, wang see something floating on the river, and he lives recovered, a carefully look is a kind of white red can eat. In order to find out what it is, the king of ChuZhao Confucius went for advice. Confucius saw this after something floating on the water, said: "if this thing called duckweed fruit, who got it, suggests that the individual will be to revive the country." ChuZhao the king ordered the fifteenth day of a year, every household will boil the white inside the red lantern eat outside.

To one thousand people are still eating yuanxiao, to show people yearning for relatives. When the Lantern Festival, our family get together in my grandma together, chatting, such as father and mother cook the rice glue ball well, my cousin and cousin together hold up competing to eat the sweet and fragrant slippery tender after yuanxiao. Everyone again fanfare together watch TV, eat sugar, you joy.

Listen to grandma said, original yuanxiao is just put the brown sugar, white sugar and bean paste and so on ordinary materials. Now has been in use for some good black sesame seed, chocolate, fruit, etc. Its everything. Yuanxiao now compared to the original yuanxiao taste better, with higher nutritional value.

I particularly like our Chinese traditional festivals. Can eat the food not only, still can let me door reunion together, happily spent a happy holiday.

相传，春秋时节的一天，楚昭王路过长江，看到江面上有漂浮着的东西，便命人打捞上来，仔细一看是一种外白内红可以吃的东西。为了弄清楚它究竟是什么，楚昭王便前去请教孔子。孔子看见这种飘在水上的东西之后，说：“这个东西名叫浮萍果，谁要是得到了它，就表明着个人将要复兴国家。”楚昭王便下令每年的正月十五，每家每户都要煮这种外白内红的元宵吃。

千百年来人们都还在吃着元宵，以表示人们对亲人的思念。每当过元宵节的时侯，我们一家人聚在姥姥一起聊天，等爸爸和妈妈把元宵煮好了的时侯，我和表弟表妹一起拥上去争着吃那又香又甜很滑嫩的元宵后。大家又热热闹闹地聚在一起看电视，吃糖，大家欢乐无比。

听姥姥说，原来的元宵仅是放了红糖，白糖和豆沙等普通的原料。现在已经用了一些上好的黑芝麻，巧克力，水果等。真是应有尽有。现在的元宵和原来的元宵相比味道更好、营养价值更高了。

我特别喜欢我们中国的传统节日。不仅可以吃到美食，还可以让我门团圆在一起，开开心心地渡过一个欢乐的节日。

Does Mobile Phone Distract Study?

Today, with the development of technology, people own all kinds of electronic products, mobile phone is very popular, almost everyone has a mobile phone at hand, we even can say that we can’t live without mobile phone. As the phone has become so popular, students are also obsessed about it, high school students use cell phone without letting teachers know it, the reason that the teachers ban them to use mobile phone is that the phone will distract students from study. I agree with teachers, as a student, I know exactly how the phone affects me in the class. I always want to check my phone, seeing if there is message. I can’t focus on my study, all my mind thinking is to check on the phone. I am not saying we should not use mobile phone, I advise that it is better use it when we are not studying.

今天，随着科技的发展，人们拥有各种各样的电子产品，手机很流行，几乎每个人手头上都有一部手机，我们甚至可以说我们不能没有手机。手机如此的流行，学生 自然也为此着迷，高中生瞒着老师使用手机，老师禁止他们使用手机的原因在于手机会让学生学习上分心。我同意老师的看法，作为一名学生，我很清楚地知道手机 如何在课上影响我。我总是想要看看手机上是否有信息。我不能集中学习，脑子想的都是检查手机。我不是说我们不应该使用手机，我建议我们最好在不学习的时候 用。

The Qingming (Pure Brightness) Festival is one of the 24 solar terms in China, falling on April 4-6 each year. After the festival, the temperature will rise up and rainfall increase. It is the high time for spring plowing and sowing. In the past, the Qingming Festival was called “Arbor Day”, but since 1979, “Arbor Day” was settled on March 12 according to the Gregorian calendar.

清明节是我国24节气之一，在每年农历的4月4-6之间。清明过后，气温逐渐上升，雨水也增多，这是春耕播种的好时机。在过去，清明节也被称作植树节，后来从1979年后，植树节被定在公历的5月12日。

But the Qingming Festival is not only a solar term to guide farm work, it is more a festival of commemoration. It sees a combination of sadness and happiness. This is the most important day of sacrifice. Both the Han and minority ethnic groups at this time offer sacrifices to their ancestors and sweep the tombs of the diseased. On each Qingming Festival, all cemeteries are crowded with people who come to sweep tombs and offer sacrifices, but the customs have been greatly simplified today. After slightly sweeping the tombs, people offer food, flowers, then burn incense and ghost money. In short, it’s a time to cherish the memory of our ancestors and show our respect to them. Also, it’s a time for family gathering.

清明节不仅是指引人们开始农活的节气，也是举行祭祀最重要的节日，纪念悲伤和喜悦的日子。汉族和少数民族为祖先奉上祭品，为逝者扫墓。清明这天，墓园都是来祭祖扫墓的人，只是祭奠形式都有所简化。清扫墓地后，人们会奉上食物，鲜花，然后烧香烧纸钱。总之，清明是怀念与死去的家人的记忆，表示尊重的一天。同样，也是家人团聚的一天。

书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句，使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

Lunar month is the Lantern Festival on the 15th, is Chinas traditional festival, has been around for hundreds of years of history, so opened celebrate the Lantern Festival activities around.

In my hometown in the Lantern Festival is a special grand festival. Every corner of the village are decorating, every (jg) words written hang the red lanterns, village council also prepared programs such as: English songs to sing the English song, fireworks, play firecrackers and so on, prepare for the Lantern Festival tourism master, waiting for the arrival of the Lantern Festival.

I make a brief introduction of our master team, swimming master team is made up of two classes of English song each exhibition talent team, many children with flags, drums, carrying a lantern, eight adults master golden body big car, and age and family of master behind. Just like the appearance of the ancient emperor Tours, or swim to where there is firecrackers, fireworks and so on.

The Lantern Festival that day, the villagers do back at home and abroad, and celebrate yuanxiao. Also is one of the most busy days in our village, also is my most happy day.

农历一月十五日是元宵节，是我国的传统节日，流传了上百年的历史，所以各地办起了欢庆元宵节的活动。

在我的家乡里元宵节也是一个特别隆重的节日。村里的每一个角落都张灯结彩，每户都挂上写着(詹)字的红灯笼，村理事会还准备了节目如：英歌队唱英歌，放烟花，打鞭炮等等，为元宵节游老爷做好准备工作，等待元宵节的到来。

我简单介绍一下我们我们游老爷的队伍，游老爷的队伍是由两班英歌队各展才艺，许多小孩拿着彩旗，打着锣鼓，提着灯笼，八位大人老爷金身大轿，还有七八十岁的族老爷跟在后面。真像古代皇帝出巡的样子，还是游到哪里，那里就有鞭炮，烟花等等。

元宵节那一天，海内外的村民都会干回来，庆祝元宵。也是我们村里最热闹的一天，也是我最快乐的一天。

每个人都要懂得感恩，学会感恩。感恩父母，感恩父母给予我们的一切，在人生的道路上，是谁给了你生命，是谁教会你做人的道理，又是谁在你失败的时候给予你鼓励……当然是你的父母，是他们给予了你无穷的爱。

One should know how to Thanksgiving, the Institute of Thanksgiving. Thanksgiving parents, Thanksgiving parents give everything we have, on the road of life, who gave you life, who is to teach you the truth in life, it is you who give when you fail to encourage...... Of course, your parents, is that they give you endless love.

他们想高山之巅的晨曦，照亮了昏暗的大地;他们像雨后的彩虹，温暖着每个人的心;他们想蔚蓝的天空，人红了整个人间!他们是多么伟大啊，不但给予了我们生命还给了我们无穷的爱，给了我们一个生存的余地。

They want to the top of the mountain in the morning, lit up the dark earth; they like the rainbow after the rain, warm the heart of each person; they want to the blue sky, red throughout the world! How great they are ah, not only gives us life, gave us the infinite love, give us a room for survival.

啊!父亲母亲，你们真伟大，用你们的心血染红了整片蓝天，用你们的爱心描绘了整个天地!

Ah! Father, mother, you are great, your blood dyed the whole sky, with your love to describe the whole world!

感恩，这个词我们要时时刻刻铭记在心，感恩父母给我们的一切，滴水之恩应当涌泉相报，即使报答不完，但感恩这个词一定要时时刻刻铭记在心间。

The word of gratitude, we should always bear in mind, Thanksgiving parents give us everything, even should Tu Yongquan, repay, but Thanksgiving is the word we must always bear in mind.

父亲，母亲，感谢你们对我的帮助，我此时此刻只想对你们说句谢谢你，我亲爱的爸爸妈妈，我爱你们，感谢你对我的爱，那份独一无二的爱感谢你们，爸爸妈妈。

Father, mother, thank you very much for your help, I now just want to say to you, my dear father and mother, I love you, thank you for my love, that the one and only love thank you, mom and dad.

每个人都要学会感恩，懂得感恩，只有这样，世界才会更加美好!

Everyone should learn to be grateful, grateful, only in this way, the world will be more beautiful!

Nobody knows what time is like,for we cannot see it,nor can we touch it.Time is abstract,which we can only imagine in our mind.

But we do know that time passes very quickly. Some students,however,do not know the value of time,nor do they know how to make the best use of it,for they waste it in going to films,playing games and doing other useless things.Why do we go to school early in the morning? Why do trains run so fast? Why do most people prefer taking buses instead of walking? The answer is very simple: we wish to save time because time is precious.

Today we are living in the twentieth century. We know that time is life.When a person dies,his time has ended.Since life is short,we must devote our time and energy to our studies so that we may be able to serve our country and the people. But since time is invisible,we often neglect it. Lazinss. is the thief of time,for lasiness not only brings us a lot of harm,it also brings us failure. If it is necessary for us to do some work today,let us do it today and not leave it until tomorrow. Remember that time is more valuable than money.

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谁也不知道时间是什么样子，因为我们既看不见它，也摸不着它。时间是抽象的东西，我们只能凭脑子去想像它。

但是我们的确知道时间流逝得很快。然而，有些学生却不知道时间的价值，也不知道如何充分利用时间，他们把时间浪费在看电影、玩游戏和其他一些无聊的事情上。我们为什么一大早要去上学呢?火车为什么跑得那么快?为什么大多数人愿乘汽车而不愿步行办事呢?答案非常简单：我们想节约时间，因为时间非常宝贵。

如今我们生活在20世纪，我们知道时间就是生命。当一个人去世的时候，他所有的时间便用完了。既然生命短暂，我们必须把时间和精力用于学习，以便为祖国和人民服务；但由于时间是看不见的，我们经常忽视它。懒惰是时间的盗贼，它不但给我们带来许多危害，也会使我们失败。如果今天我们有什么要做的工作，让我们就把它做完，不要拖到明天。记住时间比金钱更宝贵。

Everyone has pressure, as long as you have things done or to heart, the pressure will go unnoticed in the attachment in the mans body, cause all sorts of "symptoms", for example: cant sleep, reduce appetite, or in a bad mood... And so on.

My pressure is not home after finish homework cant write, often busy to midnight; Dads pressure is accounting work done; Mothers pressure because he was a career woman, a candle burning at both ends and worry cant give attention to both family and work is good, and her sisters pressure is myopic degree increased very fast, it is difficult to control.

Pressure are not necessarily bad, there are also some is good. The rules in our class, for example: not diligent student didnt change class will not be able to finish homework, because of the pressure, a heartbreaker for these people, finally they decided to change my homework finished, also get real learning, no longer look for excuses to slack off. So the pressure is often motivates us go forward.

Large and small pressure exists in our life, we should be appropriate to adjust the mood, the pressure into power, so as to let the life become more colorful.

人人都有压力，只要有事情做不完或想不开时，压力就会神不知鬼不觉的附着在那个人的身上，引起各种“症状”，例如：睡不着觉、食欲降低或心情不好……等。

我的压力是补习回家后功课写不完，常常忙到三更半夜;爸爸的压力是会计工作做不完;妈妈的压力是因为他身为职业妇女，一只蜡烛两头烧，担心家庭跟工作没办法兼顾好，而姐姐的压力是近视的度数增加的非常快，很难控制。

压力不一定都是坏的，也有一些是好的。以我们班上的规定为例：不用功的学生没改完作业就不能下课，因为这个压力，让这些人伤透了脑筋，最后他们终于决定把作业改完，也获得真正的学习，不再找借口偷懒。所以压力常常会督促着我们勇往直前。

大大小小的压力存在我们的生活当中，我们应该适当的调适心情，把压力化为助力，这样才能让生活变得多采多姿。

Everyone has his own dream, and each are not identical. My dream is to be a glorious peoples teacher, use white chalk to impart knowledge, to take care of students with broad mind.

I am the students and teacher in the study, but in life I is of concern to their friends.

I in to the students in the class, must be combined with the content of the textbook, told them one after another interesting story, to fill the whole classroom with laughter. Next class, I will be on time class is over, let the students make full use of the recess this precious ten minutes, to play, go to bask in the sun, let them in a more full spirit to meet the next class.

After class, I rarely few homework, get the kids to recall the knowledge that the day will be ready to go out to play. Let them play in learning, play high school.

I also want to lead the students to observe the secrets of nature in nature: watching ants and how to communication between the ants; See how insects crawling; Take a look what the grass can blossom, which cant... Let the students into life, understand the nature.

In order to this dream, I must study hard, do a admirable good teacher in the future.

每个人都有自己的梦想，而且各不相同。我的梦想是当一名光荣的人民教师，用洁白的粉笔来传授知识，用博大的胸怀来关爱学生。

在学习上我是学生们的严师，但在生活上我却是无微不至地关心他们的大朋友。

我在给同学们上课时，一定结合课本的内容，向他们讲述一个又一个生动有趣的故事，让欢笑声充满整个教室。下课时，我一定会按时下课，让学生们充分利用课间这宝贵的十分钟，去玩玩，去晒晒太阳，让他们以更饱满的精神去迎接下一堂课。

课后，我会布置很少很少的作业，让孩子们回忆当天学过的知识就可以出去玩了。让他们在学中玩，玩中学。

我还要带领同学们到大自然中观察自然界的奥秘：看蚂蚁与蚂蚁之间怎样交流;看昆虫们怎样爬行;再看一看哪些小草能开花，哪些不能……让同学们走入生活，了解自然。

为了这个梦想，我一定要好好学习，将来做一名令人敬佩的好老师。

每到过年，我最开心的事情莫过于可以放鞭炮。今年新年还没到的时候，我就早早计划好了，今年我要争取多玩几个品种，多买一些，跟小朋友一起玩。

Each to have the Spring Festival, I the most happy thing is to set off firecrackers. When the new year has not arrived yet, I got a good plan, this year I want to play a few varieties, buy more, playing with my friends.

但是，跟今年新年脚步一起走来的还有可恶的雾霾天气，每天看着天气预报里显示的绍兴的空气质量指数，PM2。5指数甚至突破了400大关，不少老人小孩因为坏空气生病了，这么差的空气质量，我该怎么办呢?

However, along with the pace of the new year as well as hateful haze weather, every day at the weather forecast in Shaoxings air quality index, PM2. Even the 5 index broke the 400 mark, a lot of old people and children because of the bad air sick, so poor air quality, how should I do?

我来，我想，我可以从小事做起，从我做起。虽然烟花很美丽，但是燃放会破坏我们的空气质量，那样我们又要戴口罩出门了。

I come, I want to, I can start from the minor matter, begin from me. Although the fireworks is very beautiful, but the discharge will damage our air quality, so we have to wear a mask to go out.

于是，今年过年，我坚决关注了自己的小手，虽然少了烟花的炫丽，但是呼吸着洁净的空气，我还是很开心。

So, this year I have the Spring Festival, strongly concerned with his own hands, although less dazzling fireworks, but breathe clean air, I was very happy.

Two year ago, Chinese biggest TV Channel played an interview which brought great response to the audience.

The interview is about a journalist asked a worker that if he felt happy, the worker didnt react what the question is, he answered that he his name is not happy. The interview became hot, everyone was taking about it, "Are you happy" has become a greeting when people meet, they made fun of it. The reason why the interview becomes so popular is that people lack of sense of happiness today, they find a way to make fun of happiness. As the development of technology, people live in a fast-pace lifestyle, the pressure from work is so heavy that people focus too much on work, they dont have time to relax, many people bring the work issues to home, keeping busy all the time.

We should find the balance between work and family life, try to enjoy life.

两年以前，中国最大的电视频道播放了一条采访片子，引起了观众的巨大反应。

采访是关于一位记者问一位农民工“你幸福吗?”，农民工没反应过来，他说他不叫幸福。这条采访片子很热门，大家都在谈论，“你幸福吗”成为了人们见面时的问候语，成为了一个玩笑。这条采访片子红的原因在于人们对幸福感的缺失， 他们找到了开玩笑的方式。随着科技的发展，人们生活节奏变得很快，工作的压力太大以至于工作投入过多，他们没有时间去放松，很多人把工作事情带回家，一直 工作。

我们应该找到工作和家庭生活的平衡点，多享受生活。

Dear Sales Manager,

亲爱的销售经理，

This letter is a complaint concerning the actions of one of your salespersons. On Tuesday, May 5, 2012, around 2 P.m.., I went to your store to look for a T-shirt. When I asked a salesperson, Ms. Wang for help in finding my size, she informed me that she was busy and I would have to find one myself. I explained that the reason why I came to her was that I couldn’t find one. She then said in a rude tone that if I couldn’t find one, it meant that the store didn’t have it, and that I needed to look somewhere else.

这封信是关于你的一个销售人员的起诉。上星期二，2012年5月5日，下午2点左右。，我去你店里找一件T恤。当我问一个业务员，王女士在找我的尺寸的帮助，她告诉我，她很忙，我会找到一个自己。我解释了我为什么来到她的理由是我找不到。然后她说粗鲁的声音，如果我找不到人，这意味着商店没有它，和我需要到别处看看。

I felt that Ms Wang was rude. I hope that you will look into the matter: I shop frequently at your store and I look forward to a more pleasurable shopping experience next time.

我觉得，王女士很粗鲁。我希望你会调查此事：我经常在你的店店我期待一个更愉快的购物经验，下一次。