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暑假作文英语初一带翻译(合集20篇)

导语:有一句歌词这么唱:“虽不曾听见黄河壮,澎湃汹涌在梦里!”虽然我没到过黄河边,但只要我一听到由光未然作词冼星海作曲的>,就仿佛身临其境!那歌声惊天地、泣鬼神,它唱出了黄河那雄伟壮丽的场面,声震天地!以下是小编为大家收集的几篇题为我心中的黄河作文。供大家参考阅读。希望喜欢。

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英语日记大年初一干什么

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Lunar New Years day morning, I and grandfather father they go to new years.

Many people on the road, some family dozens of people to the new year. Adults and children are wearing new clothes, a cheerful and said to each other "Happy New year".

To the elders at home, just the door loudly say: "Happy New year! To give you a pay New Years call!" The elders affectionately gave me the gift money and sugar. I took it and said: "thank you!"

Im really glad! And adults go to the new year!

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篇1:封信英语翻译

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It is important to know our good and bad points because this knowledge will

help us to improve ourself. We should examine ourselves and learn who we

are.

对于我们来说,正确地认识自身的优缺点是很重要的,因为这个认识有助于我们自身的提高。我们应该检查自己并学着(认识)我们是谁。

Above all, we should recognize our strengths and weaknesses. For example, I

am healthy and fit, so I can work hard. Im also optimistic, humble and polite.

These are my strengths. However, I also have weaknesses. For one thing, Im

stubborn and a little impatient. Im sometimes lazy as well and can spent a

whole day just watching TV and eating junk food. Im not ashamed to admit these

bad pints. Knowing what they are lets me focus on improving myself.

首先,我们应该认识自己的优点和缺点。举个例子来说,我是个身体健康的人,所以我可以很努力的工作。我也是一个乐观、谦逊和有礼貌的人。这些是我的优点。可是,我也有缺点。首先,我是一个倔强和有点没有耐心的人。有时候我也很懒惰的,(我)可以花整天的时间看电视和吃垃圾食品。我没有对允许这些缺点(出现)而感到羞愧。了解这些优缺点使我(的注意力)聚焦在提高自身方面。

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篇2:初一英语作文Anunforgettablefriend

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A friend who is a police in Guangzhou got married yesterday.He once helped me get out of a very sticky situation without asking for any demand. I am sorry that I couldnt give my congratuation to him in pern his big day. Two years ago, a stuffy summer evening I was robbed when walking on the street with my another female friend after we left a hair salon.

Two guys riding on a motorcycle behind us rushed onto the sidewalk and pulled my purse away. I fell down on the hard concrete ground and the mortorcycle was hitting by a electricity pole.They quickly shifted the direction and zipped away. We were so appalled and black-out that we forgot to dial 110.I called my friend, the police, for help with tears in my eyes. Ten minutes later, he showed up and send me to a hospital nearby. The young resident took little care of my spot where I got hurt. Misfortunes never come alone.Three days later, it became so inflaming and swollen because of the heat of summer that I couldnt walk. I vented my anger and anxiety everywhere I could and decided to change another better hospital.In order to avoid making further and worse problem then and future, I decided to let a specific doctor to diagose it. It was a bolt out of the blue to learn that I needed a surgery, whereas it was incredible to undertake a surgery without any local or gerenal anesthesia. I extremely suffered from it. It was him who held my hand tightly without any hesitation during the whole process and it was him who took me back and forth to hospital to do the daily checks. There were no sufficient words expressing my thanks for him.It took me a month back to the normal track until the Mid-Autumn day.My friend availed himself of the benefit from his job to offset the 70% of the total costs. However, what the quite unhappy thing was a hard-to-miss and hard-to-fade mark on my right leg.

[初一英语作文 An unforgettable friend

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篇3:我的暑假九年级英语作文

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我的暑假(My Summer Vacation)

Summer time is the besttime of the year.There is no school for months I get to do what I want.With no tests no homework,Im as free as a bird.

I do many things during the summer vacation.I relax by reading books watching TV.I also hang out with my friends travel with my family.However,I dont play in summer.I take advantage of the free time to learn more.For example,last summer I learned to swim.This summer I might study computers or English.This summer vacation I got a part-time job in a snack bar. At the beginning, I couldnt do well at all often made mistakes. I was very low-spirited,father mother encouraged me a lot. So I began to try my best. Gradually, I could do a very good job. I felt very excited when I received my pay for the first time. I already made up my mind to find another part-time job in this winter vacation. I believe I can do better next time.

Summer vacation flies by fast,so its important to do as as you can.

作文点拨:

1、There be 句型

2、as free as a bird 像小鸟一样 as...as 像...一样

3、hang out 闲逛

4、take advantage of 利用

We should take advantage of our free time.

我们应该利用好我们的闲暇时间。

5、part-time job 打工

6、 try my best 尽最大努力

I try my best to learn English.

我尽最大努力学习英语

7、make up ones mind 下决心,打定主意

It is early days yet to make up ones mind.

要下决心现在还为时过早。

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篇4:暑假英语优秀日记

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暑假英语日记第一篇:

Today is the first day that we start our summer camp. Everybody is amazed at the foreign teacher. They have white skin, yellow hair, blue eyes……But no one is very beautiful or handsome.

Foreigners are very tall or fat. I don’t like them. White skin with them is a little ugly. All day around I found that two thirds of the day time I was sleepy. I think tomorrow will be better.

暑假英语日记第2篇:

Today is sunny day, the sunshine is very nice. I am very happy, because I meet some new classmates, chinese teachers and an Englsih teacher. They are really friendly to me. In the morning we go to meeting room to atten the opening ceremony of the summer camp. There are so many people in it. Then I have a test. In fact, I really can’t stand it. In the afternoon, we meet English teacher. He is really tall and thin. He is funny and friendly. The lesson is very interesting. We like him. Then we meet Maria Zhang. She can speak English very well. She teachs them about genesis and sing an English song. They are so great.

Ho, I’m free and I’m happy!

暑假英语日记第三篇:

Full of excitement

The English summer camp begins today.We were all excited today.

When we got on the bus in the morning,our guide miss Guo reminded us to take care of ourseues.She also asked us to introduce ourselves and after that,we got known with each other.

How time flies!After only on hour,we got to Zhejiang University.The university is pretty,beautiful and large.The Teaching buildings and student’s building are very new.I couldn’t wait to go into the student’s building.The condition of the flat is good.The air conditioner is prepared for us.The headteacher has a strong mind,no matter how hot it was,he still helped us to solve the problems.

In the afternoon,we had our first class.Mrs Zheng asked us 10 questions,and we answered them.

After having dinner,my friend and I went to the supermarket to buy some fruit.

How happy the day we had today!

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篇5:英语初一

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Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the

beautiful city of Rizhao.

Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject

is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I

believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.

I also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im

kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good

friends!

OK. This is me .A sunny girl.

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篇6:初一下册英语

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In recent years our life is becoming better andbetter. But our environment

is becoming worse and worse. It’s very bad for ourlife. Now many people have

air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off )waste gas. More and more

trees are being cut down. There are so much sand onthe earth (leaving only sand

) . We often see factories pour waste into riversor lakes. Water in the river is

quite dirty. We haven’t enough clean water todrink in cities. Now we are in

danger. It’s very necessary and important toprotect the environment well. I

think if everyone tries his best to protect theenvironment, the world will

become much more beautiful , and our life will bebetter and better .

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篇7:作文初一英语

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Computers are changing our life. You can do a lot of things with a

computer. Such as, you can use a computer to write articles, watch video CDs,

play games and do office work. But the most important use of a computer is to

join the Internet. By joining a computer to Internet, we can get the latest

information in all fields. We don’t need to leave home to borrow books from a

library or to do shopping in a supermarket.

Computers help us live a more convenient life. With the development of

computers, the word is becoming a large family.

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篇8:MyCat初一优秀英语作文

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I have a white cat. it is a present from my mother on my birthday. it’s very beautiful. i call it mimi.

mimi is very naughty. she likes to play with me. she often runs here and there and likes running after something. mimi’s favourite game is playing with balls, ropes and stones. i love it very much. sometimes, mimi is very gentle. she likes to wash her face and doesn’t play with me. after lunch, mimi often lies on the sofa to sleep. when i go home, mimi often jumps onto my knees. i like to give a bath to mimi.

oh, my baby the cat brings me much happiness. we are good friends. i love mimi.

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篇9:初一我的梦想英语作文

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My dream is to go to Hong Kong. As you know, Hong Kong is an important trade and financial centre in the world. It was once a British colony and on July lst, 1997 it smoothly came back to the motherland.

I like traveling. To make my dream come true I must study hard. If my dream comes ture, I am sure to enjoy myself to the fullest. I will see a lot of places of interest and buy a lot of delicious food for my parents. This is my dream.

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篇10:我的周末英语作文及翻译

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Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest. For example, people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.

Everyone spends weekends in his own way. Within two days, some people can relax themselves by listening to music, reading novels, or watching films. Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball, wimming or dancing. Different people have different relaxations.

I often spend weekends with my family or my friends. Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends. Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge. I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision. An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends. Weekends are always enjoyable for me.

周末的人意味着他们可以有两天的休息好。例如,人们可以走出去,享受自己或亲友与对方交谈,或观看有趣的录像带与全家人聚在一起。每个人都度过周末在他自己的方式。两天之内,有些人可以通过听音乐,看小说,或看电影放松一下自己。其他人或许是打篮球,游泳或者舞蹈更加活跃。不同的人有不同的放松方式。我经常花周末与我的家人和我的朋友们。有时我父母带我参观他们的老朋友。有时候我去图书馆学习或借一些书,获得很多知识。我也去看看各种展览,开阔了我的视野。游览到海边或山区度假胜地是我最喜欢的消费周末的方式。周末总是愉快的我。

[我的周末英语作文及翻译

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篇11:初二寒假英语日记带翻译

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I made a decision today. Becuase I often lose my confidence, I decide tell myself ‘go’ in front of mirror after getting up every day. I believe this will make me confident. Thus, I can do things I want bravely. Now, I will say, ‘Keep going’.

今天,我做了一个决定,有的时候我会不自信。所以我要每天早上起床后对着镜子说一遍加油。因为我认为那样会使我变得自信。那样,我就可以大胆的去做一些我想要做却会紧张的事。现在,我要说一句:加油!

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篇12:新中国成立70周年英语作文及翻译

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National Day is our countrys mothers birthday. On this day, we all Chinese people are happy. On this day, we should live in harmony with the people of our country in order to repay the kindness we have in our country.

On this day, the whole nation has a holiday. Although some people are too busy to work for the motherlands mother to celebrate, but I still believe that they are in different places, in their hearts, is still a deep love of the motherland. They will also be in the hearts of the hearts of the love of the motherland.

A lot of people are wondering: Why study hard? I can definitely tell them that the students have to study hard to repay our country. Mother of the motherland for our selfless dedication, we should not return her?

National Day, people will hold a lot of parties. Most of the party is the great motherland, the mother of the title, which is also the contribution of the people who write the arts to china!

Although there is no mid autumn festival. Spring Festival is so popular, but it also said we are all the children of the Yellow Emperor patriotism.

Look at the mother of the motherland prosperity, people live and work in peace Chinese!

国庆节是我国一年一度祖国妈妈的生日。在这天,我们全中国人民都兴高采烈。在这天,我们全国人民更应该和睦相处,以报答我们对祖国的养育之恩。

在这天,全国人民都放假了。尽管有些人们因工作的确太忙而不能为祖国妈妈庆祝了,但我依旧相信身存异地的他们,在心中,依旧是深深地爱这祖国妈妈的。他们同样会以心中的满腔热血表示对祖国的敬爱。

很多人们疑惑不解:为什么要好好学习呢?我可以肯定地告诉他们,学生们好好学习是要报答我们的祖国。祖国妈妈为我们无私奉献,难道我们不应该回报她吗?

国庆节这天,人们会举办许多晚会。晚会大多是以伟大的祖国妈妈为题的,这也是那写艺人们对祖国所做的贡献啊!

国庆节虽然没有中秋节。春节那么热闹,但它更表示的是我们炎黄子孙的爱国之心。

望祖国妈妈繁荣兴盛,望中国人民安居乐业!

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篇13:英语封信带翻译

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Fall is the third season of a year . There are three months in fall : July

, August and september . The weather in fall is cool , Sometimes it’s windy . I

can wear my jackets and jeans . I often fly kites and go hiking with my good

friends. And there are many fruits in fall , Just like : apples , bananas ,

oranges…… And the Mid Autuain Festival is in fall , too . So I like fall very

much.

秋天是一年中的第三个季节,秋天有三个月:七月,八月,九月。秋季天气凉爽,有时会刮风。我可以穿外套和牛仔裤,我经常去放风筝和我的好朋友去远足。而且秋天有很多水果,像:苹果,香蕉,橘子……同时中秋节也是在秋天。所以,我很喜欢秋天。

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篇14:我的暑假生活600字初一作文

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七月一日,引颈期盼的暑假终于开始了!妈妈说:“虽然不必到学校上课,但每天还是要准时起床,并且要保持学习及运动。”

爸爸帮我安排参加“桌球夏令营”,每天早上两个小时的课程,除了基本的体能训练外,正手一百下、反手一百下、一正一反一百下及切球,都是每天固定的“功课”。练习结束后,我最喜欢和同学来场比赛,只要能打赢“魔王”,就能享受当“魔王”的滋味。所以,在球桌前,我决不会“敬老尊贤”,更不会“放水”。

前几天,无意间被我发现放在书柜角落的一个空竹,我就要求妈妈让我试试。刚开始,空竹放到绳子上都有些困难,好不容易完成第一步骤;接着我想让空竹转快一点,就使劲地拉扯绳子。没想到,双手动得非常激烈,但铃却只会缓慢的转动。不一会儿,我已扯得满头大汗、双手发酸。后来,经过杰奇哥哥详细的解说后,我开始慢慢练习。当我看到空竹在绳上快速转动时,我忍不住心中的兴奋:“我成功了!爸爸、妈妈快来看,我真的成功了!”之后,杰奇哥哥还大方的传授几项绝招:翻筋斗、蚂蚁上树及蜘蛛结网等,让我看得目不转睛、大呼过瘾。

暑假中还有一个重头戏,就是回爷爷奶奶家探亲。爷爷的山上有一座鱼池,里头养着数百条的鱼,可别小看它们,因为山泉水的关系,让它们的肉质特别鲜甜。我和堂哥人手一支钓竿,而且必须遵照爷爷的指示:大于二十公分的才放进水桶,其余的放回水池;过了两、三小时,我们带了六条鱼开开心心的回家了。

暑假,少了繁重的课业和写不完的考卷;我在家人的陪伴下,度过一段充实又快乐的时光。

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篇15:英语月考初一作文

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上次,我的英语月考成绩低得可怜,因为我没复习阅读的部分。所以这次我决定一雪前耻。考试的前几天,我每天回到家,就打开书,不断的重复阅读那几段要考的故事,希望可以有好成绩。

终于等到了考试的这一天,我的神经不停的抽搐着,不时的绷着,我留了一身冷汗,看着老师发着考卷,我吞了口口水,看着考卷传了下来,我颤抖着双手,拿着考卷,笔拿了起来,那枝笔似乎比平常来得要重,我用那只沉重的笔,开始了这场令人神经紧绷的考试。

每写完一大题,我的情绪就越紧张,因为那阅读的部分在我写完一大题,就会离我越近。危机逼近,我的皮随着也紧了起来。我在心里不断的念念有词:“要来啦!要来啦!它要来啦!”但是当我望向时钟,心里疑惑着:“怪了!过了这么久,考卷也即将要写完了,怎么还不见噩梦来袭呢?”

“叮─当─叮─咚”,洪亮的钟声刚好响起,我即时写完了!但是我的天敌却始终没有出现,难道说这次月考没有“阅读”这一大题?看来我真是白紧张了!不过,往好的方面想,这次的考试简单多了,也就是说,拿满分的机率很高。我放下了心中的大石,心想着:“这就是塞翁失马,焉知非福”吧!

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篇16:我的朋友英语作文以及翻译

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I have a friend. Her name is Candy. She is twelve year old. She has black and short hair. She has a little mouth, two big eyes. She is so cute. Her mom and dad love her. She has a happy family. Her friends like her too, So she’s happy every day.

She is a student of Yi Zong Fu Xiao. She is in Class Four Grade Six. She studies very hard. English is her favourite subject. She likes to speak English. She can speak English very well now. She always says “Learn by doing.” So she thinks speaking is very important in learning English.

We are very busy studying when we are in school. But on the weekend, we are free. We often do homework together on Saturdays. After that, we can watch TV at home. Sometimes, we play games. We have the same hobbies. She likes riding bikes and watching TV and so do I. Her favourite sport is swimming. She’s very good at it. She often teaches me how to swim in summer.

I like her very much. I am lucky to be her friend.

我有一个朋友。她的名字是糖果。她是十二岁。她有黑色的短头发。她有一个小嘴巴,两只大眼睛。她是如此的可爱。她的妈妈和爸爸爱她。她有一个幸福的家庭。她的朋友们也喜欢她,所以她快乐每一天。

她是一个医宗附小学生。她是六年级四班。她学习很努力。英语是她最喜欢的科目。她喜欢说英语。她英语讲得很好了。她总是说“做中学”。所以她认为说话是非常重要的学习英语。

我们都很忙,当我们在学校学习。但在周末,我们是自由的。我们常常一起做家庭作业,星期六。在那之后,我们可以在家看电视。有时,我们玩游戏。我们有相同的爱好。她喜欢骑自行车和看电视等,也是她最喜欢的运动是游泳。她很擅长。她经常教我如何在夏天游泳。

我非常喜欢她。我很幸运能成为她的朋友。

[我的朋友英语作文以及翻译

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篇17:我的暑假生活600字初一作文

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妈妈又要我学乐器了,这回是吉他。

对于吉他,我的印象还不错,不过在我的记忆里,好像也就能想到《我为歌狂》中叶峰、楚天歌抱着电吉他弹的样子,可没想到我要学的不是那种酷酷小小的电吉他,而是那种充满古典感,笨重的木吉他,不过听说弹这个是在为弹电吉他做准备,我也就认了。

老实说,目前只是感兴趣而已,真正能不能坚持还是个问题,就像上个暑假学古筝,那不是我自己的意愿,但开始也是心甘情愿地弹,后来就是半强迫了,再后来就是强迫也不起效果,我想尽办法逃课。

老妈开始让我学是为了让我静心,古筝据说好像也是有这个能力,可是对我好像无效,弹那个东西,我开始心还是很静的,可弹到最后就越来越烦,手上的劲也渐渐加大,速度也会变快,好几次琴马都被我弹歪了甚至弹掉了,本来是非常悠扬的音乐,可是到最后却被我弹成了“战台风”类型,充满了火药味。

还有就是我对古筝曲一点感觉都没有,当别人都好像很沉醉其中的时候,我最多也只是一脸木然地弹,手指机械地动,丝毫感觉不出有什么,你说吧一个人坐在那里什么也不想手指按照特定的规律动,和愣坐好像没有什么根本上的区别吧!

还有就是我不喜欢中国的乐器,总觉得中国的乐器声音柔得有些太有气无力,就算少数清脆的就像笛子,也总觉得脆得很虚伪,而且每一种乐器好像都只能弹那一种调调,听着就觉得烦。

倒不是我崇洋媚外什么的,恐怕是我音乐基础太差,体会不到中国古典音乐的好处吧!

不管怎么样,现在总是接触西洋乐器了,希望能坚持下去吧!

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篇18:封信英语翻译

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Smoking And Health

Today smoking is a widespread habit ali over the world. Not only the old,

the youth, but also middle school students have been engaged in smoking. Many of

them think that smoking is a smart symbol.

However, smoking is harmful to one’s ,health. It contributes a lot of lung

cancer, from which many people have died in the past years. It can also cause

many other diseases. In a word, if you smoke, you do have a much greater chance

of losing your health. Furthermore, scientific research shows that smoking is

not only harmful to smokers themselves, but also a threat to public health,

especially to women and children. Therefore, many countries have made laws

forbidding smokers to smoke m public places such as cinemas, stations,

hospitals, and so on Giveup smoking! If you don’t smoke, don’t start. Give

upsmoking for the sake of your health, for the sake of your family, and for the

sake of the whole world.

吸烟与健康

现在,吸烟是一个世界范围的习惯,不仅老年人、青年人吸烟,就连中学生也加入到这个行列中来,他们中的许多人认为吸烟是一种潇洒的象征。

然而,吸烟对人的健康是有害的,它会引起肺癌,在刚刚过去的几年中;许多人因此而丧命,还可能引发其他的疾病。总之,如果你吸烟的话,你就很可能失去拥有健康的机会,更进一步说,科学研究显示,吸烟不仅危害吸烟者本人,而且对公共健康来说,也是一个凶兆,尤其是对妇女和孩子。因此,许多国家都制定了不准在公共场合吸烟的法规,例如:电影院,车站,医院等地。

戒烟吧,如果你还未染上,请不要开始;戒烟吧,为了你的健康,为了你的家庭的健康,为了整个世界的健康。

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篇19:2024年初一年级400字的暑假英语作文:Motherslove

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Mothers love

All the people often say:"mothers love is the greatestin the world!"Yes,mothers love is very great.We mother give us very too much love.But a big number of us. dont know our mother give us too much love.Mothers are very tired .We dont know make her to rest.Mothers are thirsty.We dont know give they a cup of tea.When we beacome to father or mother.We know our parents give us much love .So,at this moment.We mut reture a good grades to our parents.

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篇20:初一暑假作文:补课生涯

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今天一大早,妈妈就对我说:“下午要去城关补作文,你去准备准备吧!”我一听,脸上立刻由晴转阴,心想:既然这是暑假,为何还要去补课呢?我的心里极不开心,真盼望下午不要到来。

一眨眼,时间就过去了。一点半左右,接我们去老师家的车子来了。妈妈叫我可以上车了。但是上了车后,我的脑海里一直想象这那位王老师长什么样?严厉吗?她的教学方法与杨老师的教学方法与众不同吗?带着这一连串的小问号,不知不觉地车子就到达了我们的目的地。

到达后,我们向楼梯冲去。一进门,就看见一位和蔼可亲的妇女站在眼前,这是不是那位王老师呢?正当我充满好奇时,后面的阿姨叫了一声:“王老师。”这下我才恍然大悟,哦,这就是王老师呀!她中等身材,黄黄的卷发,挺挺的鼻梁上架着一副眼镜。身着一件白白的小背心,下面穿着一条蓝色的牛仔裙,腰上配着一条皮带,显得十分大方利落。王老师热情地把我们迎进屋里。

进去后,王老师切西瓜给我们吃,一人一块后,还多出来,王老师把西瓜再次热情地捧给我们。吃完后,王老师把东西收拾完,便给我们每人一张白纸。这时,我心想:这张白纸发下来是干嘛的啊?难道要玩游戏?听了王老师的解释后,这才知道是让我们来写片段用的。之后,老师还教了我们写片段的好方法,便让我们动手开始写起来。写完了,王老师让我们读出来还给我们做了点评,指出我们的缺点。就这样,几个来回,不一会儿,就写了四个片段了。这时我才明白,其实写作文也不是那么的难,也是挺有趣的,只要你在平时善于观察,努力,就会知道写作也是一种快乐。

这就是我补课生涯的开始,挺有趣的吧!

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