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傲慢与偏见英语观后感带翻译(优秀20篇)

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Can Money Buy Happiness?

Can money buy happiness? Different people have different opinions. Some

think yes, while others hold the opposite.

It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and

live a life of comfort and security. However, it is equally true that lack of

money causes great distress. It is a common view that "money is the root of all

evil." The pursuit of money drives many people to cheat and steal. In some

places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt

societies where everybody is miserable.

So, money does not necessarily mean happiness. It all depends on how it is

used. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to

happiness l Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible

if it is employed sensibly.

金钱能买来幸福吗?

金钱能买来幸福吗?不同的人有不同的回答。有的人认为能,有的人则持相反的意见。

诚然一个人如果有足够的钱可以买到他想要的所有物品,过上舒适稳定的生活。然而,同样缺钱往往引起巨大的忧伤。人们常常认为“金钱是万恶之源”,对金钱的追求驱使许多人去骗去偷。在某些地方,没有钱买不到的东西,导致社会的腐化堕落。

所以,金钱并不一定就意味着幸福。这取决于怎样使用金钱,如果我们诚明智地使用金钱,它将是幸福的基石。尽管金钱买不到幸福,但它可以使幸福成为可能。

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I have a grandpa, he is nearly 70 years old, it sounds old for him, but in his heart, he is really young. Two years ago, when I was in summer holiday, I went back to hometown and visited him. When I used my cellphone, my grandpa could say out which brand it belonged to, he also told me the advantage and disadvantage of my cellphone. I was so surprised, my grandpa said since I went to school, he had nothing to do, so he became interested in the digital products. He is familiar with all kinds of digital products, he is so cool to me. My grandpa is so lovely, he is so fashionable, he is never old.

我有一个爷爷,他将近70岁了,这听起来有点老,但是在他的心里,他很年轻。两年前,当我在放暑假,我回到家乡,看望爷爷。当我用手机的时候,我的爷爷能说出手机属于哪个品牌,他也告诉我手机的优点和缺点。我很吃惊,爷爷说打从我上学起,他就没有事情做,所以他就会数字产品很感兴趣。他熟悉各种各样的数字产品,对我来说他真酷。爷爷是如此的可爱,很时尚,他永远都不老。

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We had English final exam yesterday. I feelvery sad now because I think I didn’t do well in the exam. Firstly, just amoment ago I realized that my composition in the exam stayed from the point,because I misunderstood the meaning of Green Campus. I thought Green Campus isonly the color of the campus. So I totally got away from the point. Inaddition, time was not enough for me. Eventually, I wrote some answers on theanswer sheet without thinking. Thus I’m afraid I can’t pass the exam. I am nowvery anxious.

我们昨天英语期末考试。我感到很伤心,因为我觉得我没把试考好。首先,不久前我才发现我把作文写离题了,因为我把绿色校园的意思理解错了。我以为绿色校园是指校园的颜色。所以我离题了。此外,时间对我来说也是不够的。最终,有些题目我都没看就直接写答案上去了。所以我怕我会考试不及格。我现在很担心。

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篇3:我的朋友英语作文和翻译

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在学校我有一个朋友。她是个女孩,她叫王旭,她1 3岁。我也13岁。我们在同一个班。她英语比我学得好,因此她经常帮我学英语。我也帮助她学习。

我们是好朋友。

I have a friend at school. She is a girl. Her name is Wang Xu. She is thirteen. Im thirteen, too. We are in the same class.She studies English better than I,so she often helps me with my English . I help her with study,too.

We are good friends.

我有一个非常好的朋友。她叫胡丽丽。她今年14岁。她有一双漂亮的大眼睛,短头发。她又高又壮,但不胖。她对人非常友善。

她喜欢做运动,比如打网球、羽毛球和踢足球。她有许多爱好,她喜欢听音乐、读书、画画、唱歌和跳舞。有时我们在校内说英语;有时我们在校外玩羽毛球。我们经常在星期六或星期日去游泳或去钓鱼。我们上学时,她非常刻苦地学习功课。

在下午,我和我的朋友胡丽丽在操场上玩游戏。我们总是玩得十分开心!

她永远是我的好朋友!

I have a very good friend. Her name is Hu Lili. Shes fourteen years old. She has big beautiful eyes,and short hair. She is tall and strong, but not fat. Shes very kind to people.

She likes doing sports,such as tennis, badminton and soccer. She has many hobbies:listening,reading,drawing,singing and dancing. Sometimes we speak English in our school. Sometimes we play badminton out of the school. We often go swimming or go fishing on Saturdays or on Sundays. When we are at school, she studies very hard at our lessons.

In the afternoon I play games on the playground with my friend Hu Lili. We always have a good time!

She is my best friend forever!

[我的朋友英语作文和翻译

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篇4:女生自我介绍英语翻译

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My name is Zheng, 9 years old this year, is a small girl, almost 1.4 meters tall, is a medium height, some yellow skin, is a native of Chinese. I was fat, on the big, round face, with two big eyes like grapes, the nose collapsed, and the mouth was small.

My personality is: considerate caring, generous, gentle personality perfectionism, rich imagination, sometimes very lively, with strong tolerance, sensitive love fantasy, not too confident, but dont be sentimental, reject, thought of two minds, very complex. But these are the students comments on me. I think my biggest problem is the love of two minds, take the last math exam for example: I had the score 100 points, because I be negligent, so a path of two minds, wrong, I will deduct 1 points, only 99 points, but I was careless, I think: anyway, I not like the 2 grade exam Eighty-nine points, on the line, I also got 10 points!

This is me. Do you think Im cute?

我叫郑好,今年9岁了,是个小女孩,身高差不多1.4米,是个中等个子,皮肤有些黄,是个地道的中国人。我胖胖的,在那又大又圆的脸上,镶着两颗葡萄似的大眼睛,鼻子是塌塌的,嘴巴小小的。

我的性格特征是:善解人意有同情心,很慷慨,完美主义,想象力丰富,个性温和也有时会很活泼,具超强的包容力,敏感爱幻想,不太有自信,不多愁但善感,三心二意,不善拒绝,思想很复杂。但这些都是同学们对我的评价。我觉得我最大的毛病就是爱三心二意,就拿上次数学考试来说吧:本来我该得满分100分的,就是因为我粗心大意,三心二意,错了那么一小道题,就扣了我1分,只得了99分,可我还是满不在乎的,我想:反正我没像2年级考试时得89分,就行了,我还进步了10分呢!

这就是我了,大家觉得我可爱吗?

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篇5:暑假英语日记带翻译

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⒈Today, I saw a roadside beggar. He is a middle-aged man, only two arms, and no legs. His arms come the hard ground prowling, also holding the hand of a begging bowl. Really pathetic, I can not help giving him 10 yuan. If we sacrificed our love, the world will be brighter.

今天,我在路边看到了一个乞丐.他是一个中年男子,只有两只胳膊,双腿都没有了.他用胳膊撑着地面艰难地潜行,手中还拿着一个乞讨用的碗.真的很可怜,我不由自主地给了他十块钱.如果我们多献出我们的爱情,世界将更美好。

⒉Today was the vacation last day, I reorganized own went to school with the thing in the home, this vacation might be really quick, made me extremely not to give up, tomorrow also will be the new semester 今天是假期的最后一天了,我在家里整理好自己上学用的东西,这个假期过的可真快呀,令我十分不舍得,明天又是新的一个学期了!!

⒊I live very happily today! In the morning, it is very fine! Then I climb the mountain with family, the air on the mountain is very fresh, the flowers plants and trees on the mountain all seem extremely beautiful. Coming back home in the evening, family and I sat and watched TV together, we are returning and eating the fruit while chatting, the whole family is happy and harmonious!

今天我过得非常开心!早上,天气非常好!于是我和家人一起去登山,山上的空气非常清新,山上的花草树木都显得格外美丽。晚上回到家,我与家人坐在一起看电视,我们还一边聊天一边吃着水果,全家其乐融融!

⒋No sooner had the witer vacation begun than I returned to my native town. Of course I must make good use of it;.In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines. In the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river. At night I watched television with my family. hardly had the clock on the wall struck ten when I went to bed.

寒假刚一开始,我就回故乡了。自然我须好好利用它。 早晨我复习功课并阅读报纸或杂志。下午我和朋友打球,或去河中钓鱼。晚上我就和家人看看电视。墙上的钟刚敲十下,我就去睡觉了。

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篇6:端午节的英语小学作文带翻译

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Fifth lunar month is the Dragon Boat Festival, also called DuanYangJie, afternoon day festival, may festival, ai festival, terminal five, ChongWu, midday, summer day. Although the name is different, but all around the custom of the peoples holiday is the same. The Dragon Boat Festival is Chinas two thousand years old customs, on this day, every family hanging mo_a calamus, dragon boat racing, eating zongzi, drink realgar wine, swim all ills, sweet bursa.

Today is the Dragon Boat Festival, you know the origin of the Dragon Boat Festival? ! I dont know! Let me tell you! Do you remember the patriotic general chu qu yuan? I to say him!

Qu yuan is the warring states period abroad, very learned. He beside the king a few to image is his country rich and strong. Treacherous court official, listen to the words, bad king king chu qu yuan _iaoZhi e_ile. In e_ile, qu yuan heard that chu capital held by the enemy, and the people suffer, very indignation. Falls on this day, he came to the miluo river edge, with a stone, in order to jump jumped into the miluo river. Abroad people hear that cast jiang qu yuan was very sad. They rowed steadily to salvage qu yuan, with tears in their eyes, also threw rice dumplings into the river feed the fish, hope that the fish dont harm the body of qu yuan. This is may duanyang the origin of zongzi.

The Dragon Boat Festival has a lot of interesting activities. Columns such as dragon boat racing, hanging sachet, sachet, cinnabar, realgar, _iang, outsourcing to wire cloth, fragrance 4 e_cessive, again the five-color silk string into a rope buckle, for all kinds of different shape, form a series, variety, and e_quisite. Have the habit of hanging mo_a leaf, calamus.

There were so many activity in the Dragon Boat Festival!

农历五月初五为端午节,又称端阳节、午日节、五月节、艾节、端五、重午、午日、夏节。虽然名称不同,但各地人民过节的习俗是相同的。端午节是我国二千多年的旧习俗,每到这一天,家家户户挂艾叶菖蒲,赛龙舟,吃粽子,饮雄黄酒,游百病,佩香囊。

今天是端午节,大家知道端午节的来历吗?!不知道吧!那就让我来告诉你们吧!你们还记得楚国那位爱国大将屈原吗?我来说一说他吧!

屈原是战国时期出国人,很有学问。他在楚王身边做官,以形象是自己的国家富强起来。昏君楚王却听信奸臣的话,把屈原削职流放。在流放中,屈原听说楚国的都城被敌人占领,百姓遭难,悲愤极了。五月初五这一天,他来到汨罗江边,怀抱一块石头,以纵身跳入汨罗江中。出国的百姓听到屈原投江的消息,都十分悲痛。他们含着泪划着船赶来打捞屈原,还把粽子扔到江里喂鱼,希望鱼儿不要伤害屈原的身体。这就是五月端阳包粽子的来历。

端午节还有许多有趣的活动。列如赛龙舟,挂香囊,香囊内有朱砂、雄黄、香药,外包以丝布,清香四溢,再以五色丝线弦扣成索,作各种不同形状,结成一串,形形色色,玲珑夺目。还有挂艾叶、菖蒲的习惯。

端午节的活动可真多啊!

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篇7:英语日记带翻译

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Today was sunny and i was in a good mood.Tired of studying and a bustle of

city life,I came to ecology park to enjoy the gorgeous scenery and get relaxed

in the afternoon。

when I arrived at the park ,the first thing came into my sight were the

thick green trees,therefore,the air was fresh,in addition, i could clearly see a

path skirting along the pond。laying on the lawn which was decorated by a various

of followers and seeing the blue sky,I felt at ease because all I wanted was

some peace and quiet。All thing formed a beautiful landscape, and you couldnt

imagine how romantic they were!

However,with the time passing so quickly,The day(不是sun) was dying in the

west. So i had to go back home! I would never forget such a memorable

experience, which was really beyond description!

今天阳光普照,我的心情也很好,厌倦了学习和城市的繁忙景象,我在下午来到了生态公园去享着美丽的风景,来得到放松。

当我来到公园时,首先进入我视线是浓绿的树木,因此,这空气新鲜,除此之外,我可以清楚地看到沿池塘边蜿蜒的小路。躺在有各种花儿点缀的草坪上,看着蓝色的天空,我感到十分惬意,因为我想要的就是是一些和平和宁静,所有的一切都形成了一道亮丽的风景线,你无法想象他们是多么浪漫!

然而,随着时间的快速流逝,日薄西山。所以我不得不回家了!我永远不会忘记这样一个难忘的经历,这是真的无法用言语来形容!

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篇8:傲慢与偏见读书笔记

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说道《傲慢偏见》这本书,我早已被它的题目所吸引,我的脑海闪过一个念头:傲慢与偏见,不错嘛!应该挺好看吧。看完后果然没有令我失望,使我明白了一些为人处世的方法与技巧:不要太相信第一次的直觉,有些人,要长久相处才能真正彼此了解。

小说主要写了伊丽莎白和达西的爱情波折,也次写了简与宾利的爱情。我觉得这部小说最主要的是折射出当时英国绅士们的狂妄自大,及对那些爱攀权势的人的强烈讽刺。像班纳特太太这种唯利是图的人,总想着将自己的女儿嫁给有钱人,她是当时腐败贵族的一个鲜明代表。伊丽莎白自尊、简朴、不追求奢侈的富贵令我佩服。

达西虽然开始时待人很傲慢无礼,但他在多次向伊丽莎白求爱失败后能反省自己,变得热心助人,令伊丽莎白另眼相看,在得知丽迪雅随身负累累赌债的威翰私奔了,伊丽莎本以为达西会瞧不起自己,想不到达西不仅替威翰还清赌债,还给了他一笔巨款,让他与丽迪雅完婚,最终对伊丽莎白的求婚成功了。达西知错能改、热心助人的性格是十分值得我们学习的。

事实上,在我们生活中,也存在许多傲慢与偏见的例子:富人对穷人的歧视与穷人对富人的偏见、知识人才对文盲的鄙视与文盲的愤愤不平、人与人之间的妒忌成恨。其实,我们每个人都是平等的,有钱的应努力去为这社会贡献,而不是高高在上目中无人,没钱的也不必自卑,应该去追求知识致富,不卑不亢、落落大方,这样的社会,利你利我利大家,何乐而不为呢?

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篇9:低碳经济英语作文带翻译

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"Low-carbon life" (low carbonlife), is refers to life work and rest when try your best to reduce the energy consumption, thereby reducing carbon, especially carbon dioxide emissions, thus reducing the pollution of the atmosphere, slow ecological deteriorating, mainly from energy-saving solar terms and recovery of three links to change life details.

As the Chinese civilization and polite, courteous is to respect the rights of their own lives and at the same time, we also want to respect other peoples life rights against infringement. Lets start from the trivial details, pay attention to energy saving, water saving, fuel-efficient, throttle, make low-carbon living a life attitude and philosophy of life. Set your strength, together to protect the earth mother.

Protecting environment starts from me, starts from the minor matter, starts from the campus, let us all to a low carbon life make the campus more beautiful!

“低碳生活”(low-carbonlife),就是指生活作息时所耗用的能量要尽力减少,从而减低碳,特别是二氧化碳的排放量,从而减少对大气的污染,减缓生态恶化,主要是从节电节气和回收三个环节来改变生活细节。

作为文明有礼的中国人,有礼就是要我们在尊重自己生活权利的同时,也要尊重别人的生活权利不受侵害。让我们从细节小事做起,注意节电、节水、节油、节气,使低碳生活成为一种生活态度和生活理念。集合大家的力量,共同保护地球母亲。

保护环境从我做起,从小事做起,从校园做起,让我们都来低碳生活让校园更美丽!

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篇10:mymother英语作文带翻译

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I have a good mother, mother love me, I love my mother.

My mother more than 30 years old, short, round face has a pair of bright big eyes, small mouth, a small nose, a smile... Ha ha, I want to let my mother has a pair of small dimples, but she didnt, but smile still look good.

I have a good mother, because she is very concerned about my study. Since the first grade, my study became a mothers care. Come home from school every day, the mother of control is the first thing I remember homework carefully check, if there is leakage problem, she would let me fill in time; If there are any errors, she would explain for me and help me to correct them. My position is not correct to hold pen, mother sat by my side, see me stroke at a writing, if not correct, mother gave me immediately correct, until I correct.

I have a good mother, because she is very concerned about the growth of the I. Holidays, mother took me to go swimming. The pool, I how also learn cant, mom worried, do demonstration for me. She breaststroke, freestyle, swim very fast. I really envy, against the mother shouted: "mom, teach me." Then I slowly learned how to swim, mother happy to touch my head and said: "good exercise to tall."

This is my mother, a care for my mother. I want to study well, return my mothers love for me.

我有一个好妈妈,妈妈爱我,我爱妈妈。

我的妈妈三十多岁,个头不高,圆圆的脸上有一双明亮的大眼睛,小嘴巴,小鼻子,一笑……呵呵,我想让妈妈有一对小酒窝,可她没有,但是笑起来还是很好看。

我有一个好妈妈,因为她很关心我的学习。自从上了一年级,我的学习就成了妈妈最牵挂的事。每天放学回家,妈妈第一件事就是对照我的记作业本认真检查,如果有漏题,她一定会让我及时补上;如果有错误,她一定会为我讲解,帮助我改正。我的握笔姿势不正确,妈妈就坐在我身边,看我一笔一划地书写,如果不端正了,妈妈马上给我纠正,直到我正确。

我有一个好妈妈,因为她很关心我的成长。假日里,妈妈带我去游泳。泳池里,我怎么也学不会,妈妈着急了,为我做示范。她一会儿蛙泳,一会儿自由泳,游得可快了。我真是羡慕,对着妈妈喊:“妈妈,教教我。”后来我慢慢学会了游泳,妈妈高兴地摸着我的头说:“锻炼好身体,才能长得高。”

这就是我的妈妈,一个关心爱护我的好妈妈。我要好好学习,回报妈妈对我的爱。

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篇11:关于父亲节的英语作文带翻译

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Flowers are a wonderful gift of nature. Everyone likes them. Flowers portray love, happiness, joy and all the other positive emotions. Since time immemorial flowers have been an integral part of every celebration and festival.

But there has been a misconception. Flowers are mainly associated with feminine gender. It is forgotten that men to have a soft side to them. Gift your father a bouquet of flowers on Father's Day and he surely will be overjoyed. Flowers, especially architectural and bold like tropical flowers, which are masculine, long lasting, tall and sturdy like the fathers usually are, can be

given. White and Red Rose are known to be the official flowers of Father's Day. People wear a white rose to honor a father who has deceased and a red rose for a father who is living.

花是大自然最美妙的礼物。每个人都喜欢它们。花象征着爱,幸福,欢乐以及所有积极的情感。而那些古老悠久的花已经成为所有仪式和节日中最主要的部分。

但现在人们对花产生了一个误解。大多数时候人们把花与女性联系在一起。人们忘记了男性对花也有温情的一面。在父亲节给你的父亲送上一束鲜花,他保证会欣喜若狂的,尤其是具有建筑风格的,大胆而狂野的热带花朵,它们具有男性的特质,生命力持久,高大而强健,和父亲 的角色往往很相似。白玫瑰和红玫瑰是公认的父亲节节花。白玫瑰象征纪念已故的家严,而红玫瑰象征着赞美健康尚在的父亲。

男人喜欢明快,炙热,大胆以及斗志高昂的颜色,像是黄色,橙色,紫色和红色。他们布置花的时候绝大多数情况下 会与他们有组织的,善于计算的头脑保持一致。他们还喜欢自然的,富有现代感的,时尚新潮的花束。只要他心中有谱,他可能会选择玫瑰,雏菊或其它充满异域风 情的花朵。鲜艳生动的红玫瑰与黄色的雏菊深受大多数男人的喜爱,从而也成为父亲节最理想的鲜花礼物。

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篇12:自我介绍英语含翻译

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My name is Yin Zhaoyi. Im nine years old. Im from Hengyang, Hunan. I love writing and reading.

I was a lively and cheerful girl, face, round eyes, long eyebrows, high nose, black hair, big mouth, short stature, long limbs.

Today is Sunday. I asked my mother if I could go to the library to read books. My mother said yes, I went straight to the library happily, and there were very few people in the library. I picked up a book and looked up. An hour passed, and two hours passed. Until 6 oclock in the evening, I found it was 6, and I ran home at full speed.

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篇13:关于新年的英语作文带翻译

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In the New Year! In the New Year! In anticipation of finally to the New Year! Really very happy!

New Year is coming, I hurriedly call father to buy food. After a while, my father came back, my father bought a tofu and, loach, and other meat and vegetable dish. I curiously asked my father: and tofu loach how to cook? Loach drill tofu bai. Dad said and smiling. Im more curious, ask: loach drill bean curd how to cook? First pour the water into the pot, wait for water to boil, put the loach and tofu in a pot, loach cant stand hot drilling in the bean curd. Loach drill tofu cooked, just like that. My father said. Oh. I said. Really hope to hurry to eat strange food - loach drill tofu. Family reunion dinner finally give me hope. A large table delicacies really make me dazzled! The first to the food I picked up the chopsticks is that strange dish - loach drill tofu. A mouth hearts alacrity, thought, is the more strange the more delicious? Really dont understand. I picked up a coke to mom: I wish you a smile, work smoothly. Took up a coke to grandma: healthy, happy every day.

Earphones yeah yeah! New Year is too funny, but just once a year, but I will cherish!

新年到了!新年到了!期盼已久的新年终于到喽!真是好高兴呀!

新年到了,我连忙叫爸爸去买菜。过了一会儿,爸爸回来了,爸爸买了豆腐和、泥鳅和别的荤素菜。我好奇地问爸爸:豆腐和泥鳅怎么煮呢?泥鳅钻豆腐呗。爸爸笑眯眯地说。我更好奇了,问:泥鳅钻豆腐又怎么煮呢?先把水倒进锅里,等水烧开了,把泥鳅和豆腐放进锅里,泥鳅受不了热就会钻进豆腐里。就这样泥鳅钻豆腐就煮好了。爸爸说。哦。我说。真希望快一点吃到奇怪的菜——泥鳅钻豆腐。年夜饭终于给我盼来了。一大桌美味佳肴真让我眼花缭乱呀!我拿起筷子夹的第一到菜就是那道奇怪的菜——泥鳅钻豆腐。一放在嘴里心里就美滋滋的,心想:难道越奇怪的菜就越好吃吗?真是搞不懂。我拿起一杯可乐敬妈妈:祝您笑口常开、工作顺利。又拿起一杯可乐敬奶奶:身体健康、天天开心。

耶耶耶耶耶!新年太好玩了,可惜一年就一次,不过我会好好珍惜的!

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篇14:忠犬八公英语观后感

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The story is rearranged by a real story. Hatchi is an unusual dog which belongs to akita. The real Hatchi, the dog in this story, was born in Odatr Japan in 1923. As soon as his master Dr. Eisabour Uero, a professor at Tokyo University, died in May 1925. Hatchi returned to the Shibuya train station the next day after professor died and for the next nine years to wait, until Hatchi himself died.

In the movie Hatchi crossed an ocean and thousands of miles of transportation by train, and then he met Parker (the main actor) in a snowy day. Because it was snowing and the dog, Hatchi, was lost. Parker took Hatchi back to his home, and then kept it. Parker treated it very well and so did Hatchi. When Hatchi had grown up, he fetched parker to work everyday.

All these years they played together, bathed together, slept together and Parker gave Hatchi full-body massage everyday. They just look like a couple. Parker looks happy because Hatchi is happy, and Hatchi’s happy due to Parker being happy. But Hatchi never fetched ball for anyone even Parker, so he went to his Japanese friend, Ken, for help. Ken told Parker that the akita will never get the ball unless there are some special reasons. However, Parker didn’t notice what Ken told him. In the morning of last day of Parker’s life, Hatchi felt that something bad would happen to Parker, and it tried his best to stop Parker going to work, and Hatchi fetched ball for Parker to tell him to stop. But it was pity that Parker only paid all his attention to Hatchi’s first fetching and ignored the special reasons of fetching. He said “Come on boy, I have to go to work or I’ll be late. See you at 5. Stay! Go home! Go on.” Finally, the old professor, Parker, hadn’t come back as he said, and he will never come back. He broke the engagement he made with Hatchi. He left everybody on the earth up to heaven. As the old professor’s friends and relatives nobody could accepted the fact that Parker has dead. As the result, professor’s wife, Kate, escaped all the staff which will let she recall the memories about Parker, so she sold the house where they used to live and was away from the small town. Meanwhile she sent Hatchi to her daughter, but Hatchi always ran out of her house, and try its best to back to station, because Hatchi and professor had a deal to meet each other. He’s so firmly persisted on the engagement that Parker’s daughter, Andy, had to gave up and let it go. While, have you ever noticed the detail that how unwilling Hatchi was when it left professor, because Hatchi can’t apart with Andy, too. But he missed Parker too much, he had to Andy and his warm home.

Then Hatchi spent ten years waiting for his master, his only friend coming back. Ten years time, maybe it is just one-tenth of a human life, but for a dog that means its whole life. During those years Hatchi hadn’t exact place to live, just come and go to the train station everyday at the same place and time.

Have you even considered why Hatchi spent all his life just for waiting? After a long time consideration, I find the answer in the end. The only reason is that Hatchi have nothing but his master. The happiest time of Hatchi is the time with Parker; the most enjoyable time of Hatchi is the time fetching Parker to work.

Just one year after Parker’s death, Ken came to the station and had a look at Hatchi. He felt as sorrow as Hatchi. He tried his best to persuade Hatchi to leave because Parker’s never coming back. But he didn’t succeed, and said “If Hatchiko wants to wait, then Hatchiko should wait. You want to wait for him, didn’t you? Then, you most have a long life.”

Then ten years past, Hatchi became a dirty and rather old guy. Over these years, everything had changed but Hatchi’s endless waiting and loyalty had never changed. One day Parker’s wife backed to the small town and saw Hatchi was still stand there waiting. She cried and said “You, old thing, you are still waiting, let me wait for the next train together with you please.” Hearing these tough words and seeing the loyal dog I cried sadly.

This is Hatchi’s whole life. He almost spent all his life only doing one thing—waiting for its only friend Parker, waiting to complete the uncompleted engagement.

Hatchi’s story showed how great the power of loyalty and love is with all his life. He tell us what the real loyalty and true love is. Because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi spent all his life waiting; because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi sacrisficed all his youth just for waiting; because of the real loyalty and true love Hatchi abandon the warm house of Parker’s daughter. I think that is the real loyalty, the ture love. However, in our human life, how many of us can be as loyalty as an animal; how many person can be loyal to another one for even ten years? I think nobody can.

In the end of the film Parker’s grandson asked Kate “Where did grandpa found Hatchi?” She answered “I suppose that Hatchi happened to found your grandpa.” I believe that as soon as Parker and Hatchi happened to meet, Hatchi had already found its own destination, and then the loyalty and love was built.

Loyalty isn’t mean to be that I love you and it won’t change in the next ten thousand years; loyalty isn’t mean to be that I will wait for you for the rest of my life; loyalty isn’t mean to be that I love you beyond myself. However, loyalty is a sense of responsibility; loyalty is a sense of selfness, loyalty is a sense of concern.

The word “loyalty” is consisting of 7 letters, and I think each letter stand for different meanings:

L —— Life

O —— Obligation

Y —— Yes

A —— Attention

L —— Love

T —— Total

Y —— You

Actually, to be loyal to someone is easy is easy to say, but hard to do. To be loyal, you should never forget anyone that you loved.

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篇15:短篇英语日记带翻译

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My dog will be dead. She is very old. We have kept her for ten years. Now

her hairs are falling. And she always lies on the ground. She can’t see very

clearly. She eats a little. She becomes thin. She was very strong before. She is

still guarding my family. She is one of my family member. Now we are all uneasy

because she will die. I think you may know my thinking. Even if it is a dog, you

can’t forget it. So these days, we feet her the best food.

我的狗死了。她是很老了。我们已经把她十年。现在她的头发正在下降。她永远是在地面上。她不能看得很清楚。她吃一点。她变细。她很坚强。她还是守护我的家人。她是我的一个家庭成员。现在,我们都感到不安,因为她会死。我想你可能知道我的想法。即使它是一只狗,你不能忘记它。因此,这些天,我们脚,她最好的食物

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篇16:英语自我介绍含翻译

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I have a bright character and a wide range of hobbies. During his study, I actively participated in various activities and organized some campus activities. Positive and positive, responsible for work certification, motivated, diligent in learning, continuous progress, like to face challenges with high difficulty, improve their abilities and comprehensive qualities. I am a person with a great sense of time. I can do everything positively and conscientiously. I am not afraid of hardship or fear of fatigue. I am not afraid of setbacks. I am honest with others. I am good at communication and coordination. I have strong organizational skills and teamwork spirit. I hope your company can give me a platform for learning and training, I will take a good grasp of it!

本人性格开朗,爱好广泛,在学习期间积极参加各种活动,多次组织一些校园活动。积极向上且对待工作认证负责,有上进心,勤于学习能不断进步,喜欢向高难度挑战,提升自身的能力与综合素质。我是一个很有时间观念的人,能积极认真做好每件事,不怕辛苦不怕累,更不怕挫折,待人真诚,善于沟通、协调,有较强的组织能力与团队精神。希望贵公司能给我一个学习和锻炼的平台,我会好好把握!

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篇17:英语封信带翻译

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My fathers name is ____. He has an English name, Jack. He is thirty-eight years old. My father is a worker. Heworks in a factory. He has two big eyes and two big ears. He has short hair. My father is very thin. He is only fifty kilograms. He likes learning English very much. He learns English everyday. My father likes watching TV. His favorite television channel is CCTV-10, because he can learn a lot English from the program Outlook English at that channel.

English is my fathers good friend. I am my father?s friend, too.

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我的父亲叫__。他有一个英文名字,杰克。他今年38岁,是一个工人。他工作在一个工厂。他有两个大眼睛和两个大耳朵。他有短的头发。我的父亲是非常瘦。他只有50公斤。他非常喜欢学习英语。他每天都学英语。我的父亲喜欢看电视。他最喜欢的电视频道是CCTV-10,因为他可以学到很多英语的项目前景的英语频道。

英语是我父亲的好朋友。我也是我父亲的好朋友。

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篇18:志愿者精神英语作文带翻译

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Because I saw in the library before recruiting poster "volunteers". So today, I went to the childrens library in zhejiang do volunteer.

I go to fill in the form, my number is "894", fill in after I went to the teacher to report for duty. Find a teacher, because the teacher is too busy, no time to teach me how to do volunteer. Then, I have to self-study, behind the teacher see her how to do it. Fortunately, there are two also to do volunteers big brother is willing to teach me how to do it.

I made the first "work" is arranging the others also - book. The books in the library are all labeled, the color of the book are posted it on the top of the label. Big brother tell me: put the label of orange and clear at the beginning of the letter is I into a class; The blue into category; Put the red into category; Divides the orange and colorless beginning of letter is not I kind of...... is not very good at the beginning, I also very slow. Gradually, I faster and faster, practice makes perfect right away.

In the afternoon, I went to the "work" on the second floor, my main task is to arrange the books on the shelf. Ill arrange the books on the bookshelf neatly by hand, after a while, the books on the shelf immediately turned and tidy. But often people to borrow and return books, and we will keep finishing.

Today, I took part in volunteer activities. Volunteer activities let us "send person rose, the hand have lingering fragrance", free service for others. Lets action, and contribute a little bit!

因为我之前看到了图书馆中招募“志愿者”的海报。于是今天,我就去了浙江少年儿童图书馆做了志愿者。

我先去填了表格,我的编号是“894”,填好之后我就去找老师报到了。找到老师后,因为老师太忙,没有时间教我怎么做志愿者。于是,我就只好自学了——跟在老师后面看她怎么做。幸好,有两个也来做志愿者的大哥哥愿意教我怎么做。

我做的第一个“工作”是——整理别人还的书。图书馆里的书是全部贴有标签的,这本书的颜色都贴在了标签的上方。大哥哥告诉我:要把标号橙色和无色的开头字母是I的分成一类;把蓝色的分成一类;把红色的分成一类;把橙色和无色开头字母不是I的分成一类······我一开始还不是很熟练,速度还很慢。渐渐的,我的速度越来越快,马上就熟能生巧了。

下午,我就去二楼“工作”了,我的主要任务就是整理书架上的书。我先用手把书架上的书整齐地摆好,过了一会儿,书架上的书就马上变整齐了。但是经常有人来借和还书,于是我们就要不停地整理。

今天,我参加了志愿者的活动。志愿者的活动就让我们“赠人玫瑰,手有余香”,无偿为别人服务。让我们行动起来,贡献出自己小小的一份力量吧!

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篇19:英语小作文带翻译

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How to keep healthy What is the most important thing in the worldI think it is health. You can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. But if our health was taken away, we would surely die. That is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and exercise regularly. In order to eat healthily, I usually avoid eating food high in fat, like French fries or cookies. I also eat little meat. I eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins. Taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. Regular exercise is an important part of keeping me healthy. What ' s more, I think friends are an important part of one ' s health. Many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who don ' t. I always feel better when I am with friends than when I am alone. When I am with my friends, I always laugh. Laughing is also an important part of health. I like to laugh with my friends. By eating properly and exercising regularly, I can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. By spending time with my friends, I can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. I think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy. 如何保持健康 什么是世界上最重要的事情吗我认为这是健康的。 你可以拿走我们的钱、房子、汽车,甚至我们的衣服,我们可以生存。但是如果我们 的健康被带走了,我们肯定会死。这就是为什么我们总是尽量吃以健康的方式和定期锻 炼。 为了能吃得健康,我通常避免吃高脂肪的食物,比如炸薯条或甜点。我也很少吃肉。 我会吃很多的蔬菜和新鲜水果充足的维生素。 每天做运动有助于我们建立一个强壮的身体。规律的运动的一个重要组成部分,我 们保持身体健康。 更重要的是,我认为朋友是一个重要的部分人的健康。许多研究表明,人们用广泛的 社会交往更少生病比那些没有。我总是感觉更好,当我和朋友在一起比当我独自一人。 当我与朋友一起时,我总是笑。笑也是健康的重要组成部分。我喜欢和朋友一起大笑。 正确的饮食和有规律的锻炼,我就能让我的身体在一个适当的体重和保持健康。花 时间和我的朋友,我可以让我的大脑以及我的身体快乐。这些事情听起来容易做,但没有 多少人可以管理它们。我认为一个坚强的意志是非常必要的,如果我们想要保持健康。 Sunset In order to see the sunset , I got everything ready before 5in the afternoon . Then I went to the East Hill . At that time , the sun was already in the west but it was still shining . Its light was so bright that I couldnt even open my eyes . When I arrived at the East Hill , the light became a bit yellow . After a short while , it was completely golden , then red . The sun nearly set . It was like a big

red ball . The cloud around it was also painted red . Little by little the cloud coveredmore and more of the sun . At last it disappeared behind the cloud . It was dark and I hurried back . 日落 为了看日落,我把一切都准备好了在下午 5 点前。然后我去了东山。 那时,太阳已经在西方了但是它仍然在照耀着。它的光是如此强烈,以至于我甚至无 法睁开眼睛。当我来到东山的时候,阳光已经变得有点黄。一会儿以后,它完全变成了金 黄,然后变成红色。太阳近设置。这就像一个大大的红色的火球。它周围的云也被涂成 了红色。渐渐地,云彩遮盖越来越多的太阳。最后它消失在云。这是黑了,我快步跑回了 家 A trip to the zoo Today is Sunday. Its sunny today . I go to the zoo with my mother. I can see many animals . There are tigers ,lions ,pandas ,snakes and many more. Look ! The pandas are over there . Theyre from China . Look at the baby panda ! Its climbing trees. How cute it is ! I love pandas. Next, we go to see the lions .The lions are so strong . Their mouths are too big. The tigers ae next to them. They are from Asia. They are yellow. At last,we go to see the monkeys . Some are climbing moutains , some are eating bananas . THey re so much fun ! I see many animals at the zoo and I m so happy today! 去动物园 今天是星期天。今天天气晴朗。我去和我妈妈去了动物园。我可以看到很多动物。 有老虎、狮子、熊猫、蛇和许多更多。看!大熊猫们在那里。他们来自中国。看那个婴 儿熊猫!这是爬树。多可爱啊!我喜欢熊猫。 接下来,我们去看狮子。狮子是如此强大。他们的嘴太大。老虎 ae 旁边。他们都 来自亚洲。他们是黄色的。最后,我们去看猴子。有些是攀登山峰,一些人吃香蕉。他们 都太好玩了! 我看到很多动物在动物园里,我太高兴了! love my family love my family,because I have a happy family. My father is an English teacher.His name is Jacky.He is thirty-eight.He likes playing basketball.What’s my mother jopIs she a teacherYes,you’re right!My mother is very kind and nice,she is thirty-seven.My mother is always laborious work.I love my parents! On Staurday and Sunday,I often go to the library and play the piano,My father go to play basketball.Sometimes,we watch TV and listen to music at home. I love my family.Because I’m very happy to live with my parents together! 我的家庭 我爱我的家庭,因为我有一个快乐的家庭.我的爸爸是一名英语教师,他的名字叫 Jacky.他今年 38 岁.他非常喜欢打篮球.我的 妈妈是赶什么呢她是一名教师吗是的.你说对了!我的妈妈是一个很亲切、友善的人, 她今年 37 岁.我妈妈总是勤劳的干活.我爱我的父母. 在星期六和星期天里,我经常去图书馆和弹钢琴.我爸爸去打篮球.有时侯,我们都在 家看电视和听音乐. 我爱我家.因为我

和爸爸妈妈一起生活得很开心! Computre games Computer games is a hot topic nowadays. Some people hold that it is bad. And others hold that it is good. In my view, whether good or bad is determined by the players. If one plays computer game properly in his spare time, computer games can be an excellent source of joy. For example, something impossible in your real life can be realized in the computer games. You can pilot a space craft and travel in the universe. Every coin has two sides. If one plays computer game excessivly, it may affects his eyesight and study. the computer games itself is only a tool like knife. If we use it properly, it can pare apples. But if we use it to attack others. It immediatly becomes an lethal weapon. 电脑游戏是一个热门话题如今。一些人认为它是坏的。其他人则认为这是好的。 在我看来,无论好坏是由球员。 如果一个人玩电脑游戏正确地在业余时间,电脑游戏可以快乐的一个很好来源。例 如,不太可能在生活中你可以意识到计算机中 游戏。你可以驾驶宇宙飞船和宇宙中旅行。每个硬币都有两面。如果一个人玩电 脑游戏,那可能会影响他的视力和学习。 电脑游戏本身只是一种工具像刀一样。如果我们正确的使用它,它可以削去苹果皮。 但是如果我们用它攻击别人。它马上就会成为致命的武器。 My friend I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it. He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made GREat proGREss. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future. 我有很多朋友。其中一个是我的同班同学马华。他是一个共青团员和最好的一个 学生在我的类。他很喜欢英语,并且擅长它。他经常练习大声朗读英语。所以他的发音 很好。他总是乐于帮助别人。在他的帮助下,我取得了很大的进步。我已下定决心要赶 上他,加入联盟在不久的将来。 My holiday-我的假期 Summer holiday has already come. How happy am I!The favorite thing I wanna do is traveling. I joined an outdoor club and went to the seaside in Zhejiang province with other members. On July 20, we started our journey at 21:00 in the evening. I was so sleepy that I fell asleep in the bus. Suddenly someone was pushing me. I opened my eyes and a beautiful sea was right there. What a beautiful place! We swam in the sea and played beach volleyball. The wind, the sunshine, the blue sky and the happy boys and girls formed a wonderful picture! At noon, we cooked seafood like crabs, shrimps, seashells and so on. They are all so delicious. My mouth is now watering again. I will never forget such interesting expirence. 暑假已经到来。我是多么幸福! 我想做的最喜欢的事情是

旅游。我加入了一个户外俱乐部和去海边在浙江和其他 的成员。7 月 20 日,我们开始了我们的旅程在晚上 21:00。我太瞌睡了,我在公共汽车上 睡着了。 突然有人推我。我打开我的眼睛和一个美丽的海洋就在身旁。多么美丽的地方 !我 们在海里游泳和打沙滩排球。风、阳光、蓝天和快乐的男孩和女孩形成一幅精美的图 片!中午,我们煮熟的海鲜像螃蟹、虾、贝壳等等。它们都是那么美味。 我的嘴是现在又流泪了。我 永远不会忘记这有趣的经验。 How did you spend your summer vacation I had a busy and interesting summer vacation. I did my homework every day so I finished doing my homework ten days before the new term. I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day. I sometimes went movies and went to the parks with my friends. I surfed the internet, read books and watched TV every evening. I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework, too. I helped my parents clean the room and cook meals. The most important was that my parents and I went to Hannan Island and spent a week there. 我有一个忙碌而有趣的暑假。每天我做作业的时候,所以我做完我的作业前十天,新 学期。我也打打网球和篮球每天和我的朋友们。有时我去看电影,去了公园与我的朋友。 我上网,读书和看电视,每天晚上。我访问祖父母和帮助他们做家务 ,太。我帮助我的父 母打扫房间和做饭。最重要的是,我的父母和我去 Hannan 岛,在那里度过了一个星期。 Hello, everyone. My name is Kelly. I am friendly and honest.I am good at English and maths. I like surfing the internet,playing computer games, watching TV and traveling. I also like playing table tennis and I am good at it ,too. I often play table tennis with my friends on weekends. And I want to be a famous table tennis player when I grow up. What I like most is to see the seagulls flying freely in the sky so I often go to the sea in summer. My favourite colour is white because I think white is symbolize purity. 大家好 我的名字叫 KELLY .我很友好、诚实。我擅长英语和数学。 我爱上网、 玩电脑网络游戏、看电视 和旅游。我也喜欢打乒乓球。我经常和朋友们在周末打乒乓 球,长大了我想当一个乒乓球运动员。最喜欢在海边看着海鸥自由自在的飞翔,因此 在夏天我经常去海边。白色是我的最爱。因为我觉得白色是纯洁的象征。 My mother is a good mother.She is 158 cm tall.

She help me on life .I very grateful to her.Last weekend,she had stomachache. After take some medcizine,she feel better.I very happy.The day is first holiday.Our mothers sad,we dont happy.They happy,we happy too.We must grateful to them.They are very hard. Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention

to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love. I don't think we should regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life. What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers. This way, all of us can lead a happier lives 我的妈妈是一位好母亲。 她是 158 厘米高。她帮助我的生活。我非常感谢她。上个周末 ,她胃疼。花一些 medcizine 后,她感觉更好。我非常高兴。这一天是第一个假期。我们的母亲难过,我们 不开心。他们很幸福,我们很高兴。我们必须感谢他们。他们是非常困难的。 金钱的确很重要,但钱不能买到一切。一个吝啬鬼可能认为“金钱万能”,但如果你 只给你注意到赚钱时,你可能会失去很多东西,比如健康、友谊和爱。我认为我们不应该 认为金钱是一切。钱只是一个工具,可以帮助我们解决问题或使我们过上舒适的生活。 我们应该做的是合理使用它,而不是变成了守财奴。这种方式,我们都能领导一个快乐的 生活

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My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

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