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+ 加入清单My name is XXX.And Im 13 years old.My hobbies are singing,dancing and
drawing pictures.And Im a sanguine person.My favourite stars are Shu Chang and JJ Lam.I like playing computer game and reading classic
in the rest.Im studying at Xiao Shi Zhong Xin school.
My name is Liu yang. I`m a thirteen-year-old boy. I`m a student of Class Four, Grade Seven in the No.3 middle school from Luo yang . My study is well. I`m tall and strong.
I`m a diligent boy. I study hard at all my lessons. My dream is to be a knowledgeable man. I know it`s very hard. The way is very long. But I will try my best to do it well. And I belive myself. I have many hobies. They are reading, running, swimming, playing, basketball, climbing and playing table tennis. Everyday I all need some time to reading. On Saturdays I play basketball or play table tennis with my friends.
In my free time, sometimes I help my mother with housework or do what I want to do. I have a colorful life!
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篇1:初一英语读物读后感:老人与海
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+ 加入清单The story created a classic tough guy image. Tells the story of Santiago Cuba old man in the boundless sea fish caught eight days, but in the eighth day of the story, he caught a big marlin in the open sea, the old man in fighting with the marlin hand slashed, but he never give up, finally around three days later, will it uniform.
However, Santiago is not good luck, because he after uniform marlin, a grey whale sharks can smell the flavor of the marlin, he swam down to Santiagos fishing boat, ready to eat the marlin, so injured Santiago was at grey whale sharks and picked up the spear, when the moment of the assassination of grey whale sharks, have bite a piece of fish meat, grey whale shark defeated, but as a result of marlin tail meat is bitten off, so much more blood flow, it will let more sharks smell marlin, to marlin. Later, again there are two sharks come, really narrow scalloped hammerhead, shovelnose, but were Santiago uniforms, can be on the way back to Hong Kong, Santiago and ran into a large group of sharks, at this time of Santiago was exhausted, but Santiago also forcibly hold himself with the shark fight, even though he went the full, but in the end the big marlin was eaten, the old man back to the port of big marlin only a skeleton.
So I understand the life road twists and turns, long and full of challenge, but as long as our unremitting efforts, no matter the result is failure or success, is worth people respect.
故事塑造了一个经典的硬汉形象。讲述了古巴的桑提亚哥老人在茫茫的大海钓了8天的鱼都一无所获,然而在故事的第8天,他在远海中钓到了一条巨大的马林鱼,老人虽然在与马林鱼的搏斗中手被割破,但他始终没有放弃,最后在周旋了三天后,将它制服。
然而,桑提亚哥的运气并不好,因为他在制服马林鱼后,一条灰鲸鲨就闻到了马林鱼的味道,便游到了桑提亚哥的渔船旁,准备吃掉马林鱼,于是,受伤的桑提亚哥便又拿起了鱼叉朝灰鲸鲨刺去,当灰鲸鲨被刺的一瞬间,已经咬下了一块鱼尾上的肉,灰鲸鲨被打败了,但由于马林鱼的尾巴上的肉被咬掉了,所以血就流得更加多了,这便让更多鲨鱼闻到马林鱼的气味,过来吃马林鱼。之后,真的又有两条鲨鱼来了,分别是窄头双髻鲨、铲鲨,但都被桑提亚哥制服了,可在回港的路上,桑提亚哥又碰见了一大群鲨鱼,这时的桑提亚哥已是筋疲力竭,但桑提亚哥还强行地撑着自己与鲨鱼搏斗,虽然他使出了全力,但最后大马林鱼还是被吃掉了,老人回港时大马林鱼只剩下一副骨架了。
由此我明白了人生的道路曲折、漫长、充满了挑战,但是只要我们坚持不懈努力过,不管结果是失败还是成功,都是值得人们尊敬的。
篇2:祖国的变化初一英语作文_初一年级英语作文500字
全文共 436 字
+ 加入清单Great changes have taken place in China. Many new buildings have been built in cities, towns and villages.
The more cars we have, the more crowed the roads are. So the roads become wider and wider. Many overpasseshave been built in big cities. Chinese people’s life is much better than ever before. We have Tv sets, washing machines, fridges, even computers, cars etc.
We’ll study harder and make our countrry stronger and more beautiful.
篇3:有关压力英语初一
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+ 加入清单In modern society, pressure is ubiquitous. As students, we have to endure
the pressure from examination, from homework and from our parents’
expectations.As workers, people are faced with the pressure from deadline, from
difficulties and from finance and so on. Here I would like to give some
suggestions about relieving pressure.
First of all, to confide to others is an efficient way for relieving
pressure. When we feel so anxious and worried that we cannot continue to work or
study, go to talk with our friends or family members and we will get some relief
and feel better. Second, to do some exercises is another way to relieve
pressure. If we are under pressure for a long time, doing some exercises can
make us refreshed and regain power to continue our task. Finally, another common
way for women to relieve pressure is to cry. The effect of crying is the similar
as the effect of confiding to others. After crying, we would find that we are
relaxed and then we have spirit to fight against difficulties again.
In a word, there are many ways to relieve our pressure. But the most
important point is that if we cannot solve the problem at once, we need to call
off our attention from the pressure we are faced with to other things. Only in
this way we would not be entangled with the pressure for a long time.
篇4:初一英语作文爱护动物
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+ 加入清单June 23rd Sunday Sunny
It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. When a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. At once I went up to him and said without thinking,Dont do that. Its bad for it. If you really love them, take good care of them. His face turned red and answered he wouldnt do that again.
6月23日星期日睛
今天是个风和日丽的好天,我和同学贺松去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱,大家都非常喜欢它们。一只熊挥动着胳膊向人们要吃的,一个游客就投进去了什么东西。我想都没想就走过去说:不要那样做。你的做法对它们没好处。如果真的喜欢它们,就应该爱护它们。他的脸红了,并且回答说他不会再那么做了。
篇5:初一英语作文:RiverPollution
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+ 加入清单Chinese people are now face to a serious problem--pollution. And this problem is a little bit different from others--the goverment can not solve it by themselves. We need everyone to protect our environment. But we also know that it is very hard to call everyone to join us to protect the environment. But it seems that they have found the way to let everybody know it. In a report, Anhui Daily called on residents to help protect the river against pollution. I am so glad about it. And i believe that somewhere the pollution must stop.
篇6:初一英语作文带翻译myhobby
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+ 加入清单My hobby is very broad. What to read, listen to music, I like it. But my favorite, favorite, that is - look at a map.
I love to see the map, it seems to have become a part of my life. Hanging on the wall of my house, and a map of China and a map of the world. Every day I looking at that is made up of dots, lines, symbols of the world, drunk I do not know return often, it is ecstasy than reading a book. Because I love to see the map, so I know many geographical knowledge, such as what is the biggest desert in the world, where is the capital city of Canada...... Even read the cousin of sun yat-sen university also kua I understand more!
I love the map simply love to mad. At ordinary times, I always keen to find a map to see. Some is a pile of waste paper to others, I always go up and see if it is a map. Even I also regularly to see when cleaning, result the classmates all day with strange eyes looked at me, I very bitter. But because of my efforts, my home there are now several zhang from real estate newspaper clippings on the map. On one occasion, I saw a piece of paper in the class, there is a map on it. A map! I was excited and cried. The students looked at me with strange eyes again: in order to map, even the life all dont you? Perhaps really well. I want to.
Map has brought us benefits, also brought me trouble. But anyway, maps, I love you graffiti.
我的爱好很广泛。什么看书啦,听音乐啦,我都喜欢。可是我最喜欢的,也就是最喜欢的,那就是-看地图。
我爱看地图,它似乎已成了我生命的一部分。在我家的墙上,挂着一幅中国地图和一幅世界地图。每天我都看着那由点、线、符号组成的世界,经常‘‘沉醉不知归路’’,简直比看书还入迷。正因为我爱看地图,所以我懂得许多地理知识,比如世界上最大的沙漠是什么啦,加拿大的首都在哪里啦……连读中山大学的表哥也夸我懂的多呢!
我爱地图简直爱到了发狂的程度。平时,我总是乐此不疲地寻找地图来看。一些在别人看来是一堆垃圾的废纸,我总是凑上去看看是不是地图。就连打扫卫生时我也习惯性地去看,结果同学们一整天都用怪怪的目光看着我,害得我好苦。不过正因为我的努力,我家现在已经有好几张从《房地产报》上剪下来的地图了。有一次,我在班里看到了一张报纸,上面有一幅地图。地图!当时我就激动得大叫起来。同学们又用怪怪的目光看着我:为了地图,你连命都不要了?或许真的这样吧。我想。
地图给我带来了好处,也给我带来了麻烦。但不管怎样说,地图,我爱你没商量。
篇7:我的学校生活初一英语作文
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+ 加入清单Hi! Im Ma Cheng Long a students of Gread 7.
At school my classmates and teachers are kind to me.My shool life is very interesting.I like it very much.
Class beging at 8 oclock a.m. I have four class in themorning and I have four class in the afterroom. I study Chinese English mathP.E.geogarphy and some other sudjests. Im good at Enlish very much so I like English best.I also like P.E.and math. But I dont like grogarphy at all. BecauseI think its a little difficult and boring. what do you think?
After schoolI often play besketball with my classmates on the playground. Its my favorite outdoor activity. Sometimes I play soccer with my classmates. Sometimes I draw pictures with my friends.
Do you think my school life is very interesting? What about your school life? Can you tell me something about it?
篇8:以广场为话题的初一英语作文
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+ 加入清单There is a big square near my house. People like to get together there and have the long chat. My grandma likes to go there when she has the time. Especially at night, after finishing dinner, my grandma will go to dance with her friends in the square. Sometimes I will go with her, seeing my grandma dance and join her group.
我家附近有一个大广场。人们喜欢聚在那里,长时间的聊天。我奶奶一有时间就喜欢去那里。特别是在夜晚,吃完晚餐后,我奶奶会和她的朋友们一起去广场上跳舞。有时我会和她一起去,我看着奶奶跳舞,也会加入她的团队。
篇9:初一英语作文:Mysweethome
全文共 552 字
+ 加入清单Most people has a sweet home,so have I.I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.
I can remember clear.Once I came back home late because my teacher didn't want me leave until I finished my work.At that time,the weather became colder and the wind became stronger.I was so hungry and cold at that time!I felt I can't take it any more,so I ran to my home quickly.When I got my home,I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!
That's why I love my sweet home,Don't you think so ?
篇10:我的朋友初一英语
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+ 加入清单My Friend
Hello!What’s your favourite friend Yu Ling is my favourite friend. She is a beautiful girl. She smiles friendly. I think it’s her smile that makes her beauty. We live in the same city, so that we always stay together, no matter going to classroom or having dinners. She likes salad and beef for lunch. She likes chicken and rice for dinner.I love my friend. We have healthy food. .Yu Ling likes sharing interesting things with others. Such as, she likes telling us her funny stories of her childhood . She always tells me that I should be more extroverted and learn to talk to others. Under the influence of her, I communicate with others more frequently and I find that it feels so great. I am so grateful that I can have such a good friend. 你好!你最好的朋友是谁?玉陵是我最喜欢的朋友。她是一个漂亮的女孩。她微笑着很友好。 我认为这是她的微笑使她的美丽。我们住在同一个城市,所以我们总是在一起,无论去教室或吃饭的时候。她午餐喜欢吃沙拉和牛肉。她晚餐喜欢吃鸡肉和米饭。我喜欢我的朋友。我们吃健康的食物。玉陵喜欢和别人分享有趣的东西。例如,她喜欢告诉我们她的有趣的故事,她的童年。 她总是告诉我,我应该更外向,学会和别人说话。影响下的她,我和别人交流越来越频繁,我觉得她总是告诉我,我应该更外向,学会和别人说话。在她的影响下,我和别人交流越来越频繁,我觉得真是太棒了。我真的很感激我能有这样的一个好朋友。
篇11:初一优秀的英语作文及翻译
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+ 加入清单An Accident
One sunny afternoon, when I was merrily riding home, I heard "Help! Help!". I rode to the riverside and found a boy of about five in the river struggling. I jumped into the water, swam to the boy and dragged him to the river bank. the boy said he was trying to catch a fish near the river bank and carelessly fell into the water. I asked him where his home was and sent him home. "Thank you very much!" the boys parents said, when I left his home. Though I got home late that afternoon, I was very happy.
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篇12:作文初一英语
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+ 加入清单Computers are changing our life. You can do a lot of things with a
computer. Such as, you can use a computer to write articles, watch video CDs,
play games and do office work. But the most important use of a computer is to
join the Internet. By joining a computer to Internet, we can get the latest
information in all fields. We don’t need to leave home to borrow books from a
library or to do shopping in a supermarket.
Computers help us live a more convenient life. With the development of
computers, the word is becoming a large family.
篇13:初一年级英语作文:My lovely sister
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+ 加入清单My sister is a lovely girl. She has a nice English Name, “Elsa”. She is very clever and pretty. She is eight years old so she is old enough to go to school. This year, she tells me that she is a student now.
One day, my aunt took her to my home. My aunt had something important to do and had no time to look after her, so she told me to take care of her. First, I played with her for a short time. I thought the game was boring, so I taught her some polite words, such as hello, please, sorry… She listened carefully. Suddenly, there was a person knocking on the door. Elsa went to the door to open it. Afterwards, she was polite to say, “Please come in.”
Do you think she is lovely and clever? I think you will say, “Yes, I do.”
篇14:初一英语作文:MySchool
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+ 加入清单my school is at haimen town. it is very big and beautiful. there are forty-three classes in it. when you come to our school, you can see the modern teaching building.
our teachers work and do practice in it. behind the building, there are two classroom buildings and a school library. in the library there are thousands and thousands of books. after class you can borrow the books you want and also you can read them in the reading room at any time.
beside our classroom, there is a big playground. at about 4:30 p.m. every day, many students play football, basketball and some of them play tennis. all the playground is alive.
our school is a model school in jiangsu. i like my school very much.
篇15:初一英语作文教学
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+ 加入清单初一英语作文如何教好呢,老师们有何看法?下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧!
写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径,培养学生初步的写作的能力,是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来,中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态,尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中,不少学生只能写出寥寥数语,而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见,学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中,我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文,但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的,甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题,成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析,力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在,结合教学实践,探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。
七年的初中英语教学下来,留给我无穷的思考与困惑:不管在什么样的测试中,只要谈到英语写作,很多学生都感到头痛?即使有部分学生能动笔写写,其中的语法错误也是随处可见,写作要点不明确,语句不通顺,语言、词汇档次低,语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作,让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手,在他们看来:翻译又是个问题,或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在?是平时的教学没有到位,存在写作教学走过场?重视不够?还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料?困惑,苦思、冥想!多方寻缘由。究其原因,我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来,我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式:教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导,像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式,从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之,还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作,甚至产生“写作恐惧症”,进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果!现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。
一、读中不忘写,在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。
“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作,在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的,而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章,才正是学生们学习写作的好时机,阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器,毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例,更是我们教写作的法宝。因此,在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候,尤其是文中含有经典语句时,我都给学生设定四个目标:第一,理解作者写作的用意,即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二,弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证,包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三,学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量,积累词汇,同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四,收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果
因此,我认为:写作教学完全应该,而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领,没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴?所以“读中教”是我的第一步,之后,在感性的基础上,我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法,这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。
二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导,适时地开展“写中教”。
所谓“写中教”,就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导,通常我从三个方面入手:首先,概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文(书信、日记、通知、说明书等)的形式为多见。然后,概括其形式特点。近年来,初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高,要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语,建立联想,创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达,比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语,写出语法正确的六至八句话,或者一篇字数在60-100字的短文,充分地运用自己所学的知识,完整、准确地表达所需求的意思,考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上,初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件,诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等,考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。
根据以上文体、形式、题材特点,我要求学生在看图写话时,掌握好以下一个要领:
1、看图说话书面表达题要领
首先,认真审题,弄清画意,把握中心。一般来说,写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段,但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的,这一点务必要准确把握,只有具体、透彻的理解画意,方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容,分析表达重点,看图题若也有语言提示,那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语,那就更加重要了,因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意,而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料,然后表达出图画内容。但应注意,无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语,因此,必须紧扣画面暗示的内容,再结合提示语的补充,酌情填补一些关键词语。
其次,运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容,形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点:
(1)确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语?是否需要用第三人称单数?这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语,或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。
(2)注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词?名词是否可数?前面是否需用冠词?词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式?特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用?这些在平时演练时,都需要“斤斤计较”,养成习惯。
(3)句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达,能用简单句尽量用简单句。
(4)书写规范、准确。
(5)反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构,是主系表还是主谓宾,注意时态是否完整等等。
2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领
在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时,对学生要求更高,写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级(下)和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领:
(1)、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示,分析出文章的重点,弄清文章的格式,确定写什么内容,以免离题;
(2)、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点,此时切记不可逐句翻译,题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上,采用扩写的方式,根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写,可以由词到句,再有句到段,最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。
(3)、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中,尽力做到语言规范、准确,文字通顺。
(4)、在抓住重点,不偏离主题的前提下,合理想象,拓展思路;
(5)、用好介词和连词,使文章简练、纹理通顺,尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达,避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型;
(6)、最后,正确把握文中的时态和语态,仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。
三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导,积极开展“改中教”。
我的最后一步是走“错误路线”,即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时,我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来,这些东西常常是学生们的通病,虽说使我苦恼,但经验告诉我,其实这也是一种资源,颇有利用价值,而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢!与此同时,我们也要善于发现学生的优点,适时不忘鼓励教学的开展,从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读,从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。
对于大多数学生容易犯的错误,我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上,然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑,但笑过之后,错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了,这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛,又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外,我让每个学生准备一个纠错本,将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正,以避免重复出错,使文章中的病句逐渐减少。
以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例,原文如下:
Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the government take any measures to carry it , it isnt working well in it.
There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.
If we all do that,we will have healthy and happy.
从整体看,本文错误较多,汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的,
于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析:
1、本文首先缺一个主题,从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题,作者应根据题目要求拟定题目,再进行写作!譬如:我们可以拟定为:HOW TO SAVE OUR MOTHER等。
2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误,The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕,应该是“worse and worse".在提出问题时,最好创设一定的语言情景,逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例,我们完全可以以这样导入:With the development of economy ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.
3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry it 。意思没有表达清楚,让人看了费解,其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为:take some measures to keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it doesnt work well.
4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象,比如“sach as ”应为"such as".
5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为:第一句最好这样表达:not to use paper or use less paper to protect trees and because the trees can keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.
5、标点符号用得不够恰当,如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些:If we go to a short distance,we can walk or by bike.
6、在最后一段发起倡议时,最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力!文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。
除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式,我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫,是指背诵名篇佳作;收集各种话题,布置学生在假期或周末练笔,提倡“一周一文";传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训,只要持之以恒,我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想,而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。
结束语
路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化,需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的:宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中,学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法,给予赞扬,使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会,鼓励学生勇于尝试,并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中,教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制,充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性,这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现,从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。
篇16:初一下册英语作文大全
全文共 386 字
+ 加入清单to me ,the most interesting subject is english.but i find studying english
is very difficult.so if you ask which subject is the most difficult to me.my
answer will be english.now i am a student,everyday i have more than one english
classes,i like studying it very much and i hope i can study it very well,so i
can talk with foreigners and know the foreign countries things,it is very
useful.
篇17:最新我的梦想初一英语作文
全文共 1074 字
+ 加入清单My DreamEveryone has a lot of dreams. Some people want to be rich, dreaming of becoming millionaires overnight. Others want to be famous, dreaming of suddenly jumping to great fame. I have a lot of dreams,too.
When I was a young girl, I dreamed of becoming a scientist like Hua Luogen in future.However, I knew very well that I could not succeed without painstaking efforts. So I studied hard in the middle school and college in order to attain my goal.After graduating from college, I found a job as a teacher.Although I was very busy with teaching, I never gave up my goal. I read a lot of books to get more knowledge. I made experiments to practise and apply what I had learnt from the books. Sometimes, I was so deeply indulged in my research that I forgot my meals and time.
Now I have made great progress. Several of my research papers have been published. The methods proposed in my papers have been proven to be valuable for the solution of some problems. I am very happy.The ladder of becoming a scientist is still far ahead, but I have climbed the first rung anyway.
篇18:初一下册英语
全文共 530 字
+ 加入清单As we know , English has become an internationallanguage. It is more
popular than any other language inChina. English is widely spoken inthe world
and it is the most useful language around the world . But how tolearn it well
?
The best way is to use it all the time . If we cantalk in English , think
in English we can learn it well . At school , we shouldlearn to hear , speak,
read and write carefully . We should spend enough timein practicing English . If
we keep on working hard at English , we will be ableto be good at it one day
.
篇19:有关坚持英语初一
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+ 加入清单Almost all people work hard for success, but not all people can success.
Many people ask how to make success. I think the answer is persistence. The way
to success is full of failure and difficulty. People should never give up when
meet them. If you give up, you can’t be successful. No matter how hard it is,
persistence must be there.
篇20:作文初一英语
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+ 加入清单There is an English saying.It says,"Early to bed, early to rise, makes a
man healthy, wealthy and wise." Have you ever heard it before?It means that we
should go to bed early and get up early.If we do,we shall be healthy.People must
have enough time to sleep.We should sleep for 8 hours every day.So we must do
our homework quickly and go to bed before 10 p.m.Proverbs can always give us
some enlightenment.To know some proverbs is good for us.