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小学英语作文我的宠物【最新20篇】

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忙碌的一天小学英语

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Hello! My name is Catherine. I’m ten. I’m a girl. I’m from LuGu Foreign Language Primary school.

I’m very busy! I get up at seven o’clock and eat breakfast at eight o’clock. It’s eight ten. It’ time to go to school. I have lunch at twelve o’clock. It’s five twenty. It’s time to go home.

My friend Jessica says:Catherine, school is over. Let’s go home. Ok?

"OK".I say.

I’m busy today. But I’m very happy.

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篇1:小学英语日记

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我的一天

I got up early this morning. I cleaned my room. I opened the window and

aired the room. I picked up the paper and swept the floor. Then I made the

bed.

我今天很早起床。打扫了房间。我开窗通了风。我捡了地上的纸,扫了地。然后我整理了床铺。

I played computer games. We had lunch at 12:00. We had fish for lunch.

我玩了电脑游戏。我们在12点的时候吃了午饭。我们吃了鱼。

After lunch we went to the park. In the evening I did my homework. We had

delicious food for supper.

午饭后,我们去了公园。傍晚的时候我做了作业。我们晚饭吃了美味。

I was very happy today.

我今天过的很愉快。

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篇2:假期有趣的事小学生英语

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Today is mothers birthday, but I didnt know what to by for her.A watch was a good present, but it was too expensive for me to buy.Flowers were not so expensive, but they would die soon.A birthday cake was too sweet and mother didnt like it.

今天是妈妈的生日,可是我还不知道给她买些什么。手表是挺好的礼物,可是太贵了,我买不起。花倒是不贵,可是很快就枯萎了。生日蛋糕太甜,妈妈不喜欢吃。

Then father thought a good idea.He said, "Why dont we make a wonderful dinner for her?That will show our love for her!" Oh, that was good.Love is the most expensive present in the world.

后来爸爸相处个好主意。他说,“为什么我们不做一顿美味的晚餐呢!那会显示出我们对她的爱!”啊,太好了。爱是世界上最昂贵的礼物。

I will never forget the smile on mothers face when we were having supper together.

我将永远忘不了我们共聚晚餐时妈妈脸上的笑容。

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篇3:小学英语实习日记

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2.28星期二晴

今天是实习授课的第二天,我早早地准备好今天讲课的内容,但真的要上课时,我心里却不免有点紧张,因为昨天是我第一次上讲台用自己的方式去向学生传授知识啊!今天在上新课之前,我必须先要把昨天的内容

简单复习一下,这可正是对我教的好坏一个全面的检验......上课了,我表面上镇定自如地走上了讲台。一些常规的课堂程序之后,我开始了课堂复习步骤,出乎意料的是学生们反应迅速,对答如流。说真心话,看到这我心里真的感到无比喜悦。

晚上回到家,想起白天上课的情景,我感慨颇多,我想我真正体味到了劳动并享受着劳动后的成果的愉悦了。当然,在物欲横流的现代社会,这个观念也许会显得有些陈旧和俗套,但它却有着与生俱来的独特的古朴、风韵和精华。我们不能将快乐简单地理解为物质利益的获得和某种非精神意味的享受,快乐与否在于我们自身、我们的付出和我们的感受。由此我想到现在的学习,很长的一段时间,我都因没有进入理想的学府而怨天尤人,失却快乐。其实不断的学习便是一种快乐,奋进着永不放弃,需要不断体验快乐来支撑。不久的将来,我会成为一名人民教师,我会辛勤地工作,用心地去教书育人,我相信我一定能在平凡、艰苦中感受到欣慰和快乐。

3.3星期五小雨

今天是我实习的最后一天。因为课程安排在上午一、二两节,所以我得起早,偏偏天公不作美,下着小雨,清晨躺在床上的我真的不想起床,看看表,哎呀!快六点了,再不起来就会迟到了,可是由于昨晚备课到很晚加上心里一直惦记着今天要起早。所以整夜没睡好,夜里醒了好几次,真不想起床啊......然而想到那些学生们,我自问我有理由迟到吗?最后我终于没有给我的实习留下什么遗憾,事后我却想了许多,也明白了由立志到实现目标非常关键的一点就在于坚持。坚持对于我们来说都是再熟悉不过的字眼,可是真正把握住它的人却凤毛麟角,坚持需要毅力,需要对目标价值的深切期望和正确估价,有时甚至需要人格力量来支撑。事情的成功有时往往便在于我们能否坚持那关键的一步,走过去,前面就可能是另一番海阔天空,而习惯了坚持,久而久之,这一信念范畴的东西便会逐渐地融入我们的个性之中,成为一种素养,一种道德,现在的我们马上面临毕业,就要踏入社会了,或许一些人会认为到了现在我们可以不再努力,毕业后找份工作,那便是一生了。如果这样的话,那么我们就永远失去了成就某种事业的机会。事实上作为师范专业的学生,我们更应该树立正确的劳动观念和道德意识。为人师表,认真而严肃的从事自己所热爱的事业,愉快而充实的度过我们平凡的一生。、

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篇4:介绍舞蹈英语作文80字小学

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I like dancing very much. I learn to dance from four years old. Until now,

there are already nine years. I take part in many activities, because I think I

want to perform in front of people. I have a good dance teacher. She dances very

well. She is strict with me. Once I make mistakes, she points it out directly. I

learn a lot from her. Now, we are good friends. She always encourages me. I

think dance is good to me. I make many dancing friends. And it’s good way to

build my body.

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篇5:春天小学英语作文

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Spring festival Spring festival is coming春节到了. we are very happy我们都很高兴,because we can play a few fireworks因为我们可以放很多鞭炮. the parente will buy new clothes for us父母亲给我们买新衣服, and prapare many goods for Spring festival和准备了好多的年货. we visit grandparents and friends我们去拜访爷爷奶奶姥爷姥姥和朋友们 .we get some money,and we call it yasuiqian我们得到一些钱,我们叫它压岁钱. when we get the yasuiqian, we are vey happy当我们得到压岁钱的时候,我们很高兴.we like Spring festival very much我们很喜欢春节.

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篇6:小学生夏令营作文500字:英语村暑假夏令营

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一向幼稚的我,一直以为外教是非常严肃,非常凶的那种,一副死气沉沉的样子,还会随手拿着木棒,哪个学生不乖,一棍子打下去,听不见任何声音。这使我心里颇不宁静。要是有的问题我答不出那该怎么办呢?

因为我的英语成绩不怎么样,所以妈妈要我去参加“英语村暑假夏令营”让我提高英语水平。可是自从我见到外教后,我感觉,外教不但不凶,不坏。而且脸上表情丰富。嘴里说出来的话自然是幽默风趣。让我不得不佩服他们。

外教的课分种:正经课,做活动。

正经课:

就是正常上课,一般,他们都会教我们课本里的东西,什么方位介词:on in under next to in front of ……有时候他们觉得上课改上的内容都上完了,但是还有时间,他们决不像中国教师那样让我们自己休息。而是教我们其他的单词。这样一来,即能不浪费我们的时间,而且还能丰富我们的英语,一举两得。

做活动:

英语暑假夏令营还特别安排了一个外教活动课,就是跳跳绳只类的活动。有一次的活动是跳长绳很过长绳。我们大家都不会,英语老师先来,因为她很肥,所以跑过去,扑,摔了一跤。但是,她一点不计较,而且很开心,让我们也来。很好玩的。

上了2个星期,我已经深深地感受到了外国教师的魅力,他们的幽默风趣诙谐,他们使我学会了标准的发音英语,也让我开朗了许多。

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篇7:关于节日的小学英语

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China has many traditional festivals among the year. But I like Mid-Autumn Festival the most. It means harvest, because it is celebrated in the harvest season. And it is the time for famers to express their thanks for harvest. In addtion, it’s the day for reunion. Some people call it Tuanyuanjie. The people work or study far away from home will come back to get-together with their families. They will eat a big meal and mooncake at that time. I hate parting but love reunion. So Mid-Autumn Day is my favorite festival.

一年之中中国有很多传统节日。我最喜欢的是中秋节。那意味着收获,因为它是在收获的季节里面庆祝的。那也是让农民们感激收获的时候。 此外,它也是团圆的日子。有人把它称为团圆节。在远方工作或学习的人都会回来与家人团聚。他们会在那个时候一起吃一顿丰盛的晚餐和月饼。我讨厌离别,喜欢团圆。所以我最喜欢的节日是中秋节。

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篇8:小学二年级的英语作文

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那是我第一次过圣诞节,朋友带我去参加圣诞舞会,在舞会上我们跳舞、唱圣诞歌,我也认识了一些其他朋友,我们相互交换礼物并互道祝福,我过得很愉快。

That was the first time that I celebated Christmas Day。 My friend aksed me to take part in Christmas party. At the party we danced and celebrated with carols. I knew some new friends. We exchanged gifts and said best wishes to each other. I had a pleasant time.

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篇9:关于我的小学生活英语作文

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My School Day

I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. After a quick breakfast, I go to school in my mothers car. It takes us more than half an hour to get there.

We have four hour classes in the morning. I have luch at my grandparents, because their home is nearer to my school.

After two classes in the afternoon, school is over. Then we clean our classroom.

I get home at about half past five. We have dinner at seven. After dinner I do my homework. If I finish my homesork early, I can watch TV for half an hour. I go to bed at half past nine or ten.

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篇10:,小学生写我的妈妈英语作文

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I have a loving mom. Here, I use the "language camera" to take her photo it!

She has a pair of big eyes, double eyelids. Slightly tilted under the nose there is a harsh mouth, not tall. Mothers hand is very rough, because my father travel on the outside, housework done by the mother. Such as: cleaning, washing clothes, etc., her hand how will not become rough? However, the hands of rough it does not matter, when her hands gently stroked me asleep, the same will bring me warm, let me Gradually into sleep.

Usually my mother is very concerned about my learning method. No matter how busy, my homework she will seriously check, I will not do the subject she will patiently teach me. If the homework is sloppy, she often reminds me that it is more careful to me. She comfort me: "In fact, you are very good, get rid of this problem, even more well." Listen to my mother, I secretly determined, we must correct this careless bad habits. Summer vacation, my mother know that I study very tired, took me to travel, growth knowledge, I have learned a lot of knowledge outside.

Because I love my mother, so I know my mother, my mother is so meticulous care about me, I have a good mother for me and feel proud.

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篇11:以新学期为话题的小学英语作文

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The summer holidayis end and the new term begins. In the new term, I am a student of grade six. Itsthe last year in primary school. In order to have a good ending, I must workharder. So my scores can be better. Besides, I want to spend more time with myclassmates and friends. We have been very good these years. Maybe we cant beclassmates in the future. But, I am still happy that its the last year inprimary school and I am going to junior school.

暑假结束了,新的学期一开始了。新学期我就是一名六年级的学生了。这是小学的最后一年。为了有一个好的结果,我必须更加努力,这样我的分数才会更高。除此之外,我想花更多的时间和同学朋友一起。这些年我们一直很好。也许将来我们不能够成为同班同学,但是我仍然很高兴这是小学的最后一年了,我就要上初中了。

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篇12:小学英语

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Almost every child will complain about their parents sometimes. It is

natural, because when people stay together for a long time, they will start to

have argument. But ignore about the unhappy time, our parents love us all the

time. No matter what happen to us, they will stand by our sides. We should be

grateful to them and try to understand them.

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篇13:感恩父母英语小学

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Be Grateful to Our Parents

Since we were born, many people help us a lot. We should be grateful to their kindness. But the ones we should show our greatest appreciation are our parents. From the first day we appear in their lives, they give us all their love and care, but never expect anything in return. As long as they are there, we do not feel any difficulties, because they are always in front of our shelter, preventing us from difficulties and danger. In order to make our lives better, learn better, they do everything they can to create the best conditions for us, but ignore their own needs. Therefore, we need to cherish parents’ love and repay their upbringing. We should treat them as they treat us.

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篇14:小学生关于假期的英语作文

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Regardless of vacation for a few days, I must be with my family, only together with my family on holiday, is the true happiness.

Ill keep the spirit of the foot, to relax, and violin lessons to finish my homework, I hope to have a holiday, dont heart also worry about the homework, play, will be completely relaxed, no psychological pressure, can play very much.

Then my family and I came to Japan by plane, the first stop is Disneyland, I decided to overcome my timid, all the rides to play, no matter how dangerous, I try to be brave.

Then we came to Hokkaido, live in a home stay facility full of cherry blossoms, put down the luggage, after thoroughly the comfortable spa, to sleep with a sweet smile.

Before returning home, we visited the farm, drink the fresh milk, bought countless souvenirs, Im going to back to my good friends, also show: by the way, let everybody envy my holiday.

Can you guess how? I will leave two days holiday, have a good at home doing nothing, have a good sleep, eat and sleep well, this holiday, is the most perfect period on the painting.

不管有几天的假期,我都一定要跟我的家人在一起,只有跟家人在一起的度假,才是真正的快乐。

我会先养足的精神,先放松自己,把功课和小提琴的功课都先完成,我希望放假的时候,不要心里面还担心这些功课,要玩,就要彻底放松,没有心理压力,才能玩得尽兴。

接着我们全家就搭飞机来到日本,第一站是迪士尼乐园,我决定要克服自己的胆小,所有的游乐设施都要玩,不管多么惊险,我都要勇敢的试试看。

然后我们来到北海道,住进一家开满樱花的民宿,放下行李后,好好的泡了舒服的温泉,带着甜蜜的微笑进入梦乡。

回国以前,我们参观了牧场,啜饮最新鲜的牛奶,买了数不清的纪念品,我打算带回来送给我的好朋友们,顺便也炫耀一下,让大家羡慕我的假期。

你猜怎的?我会留两天的假期,好好在家什么事也不做,好好补眠,好好的吃吃睡睡,这样的假期,才算是画上最完美的句点了。

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篇15:感恩父母英语小学

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Thanksgiving Day, first of all I would like to thank the students I raised my father and mother, and then thanks to teach me to train my teacher.

Today, I would like to thank my extracurricular chess teacher, when I was eight years old, I first met in 2005, "61" children game, get encouragement, since then set my chess determination, So that I fell in love with Go. I will Baili teacher as a teacher, in his careful teaching, I gradually learned to "eat, layout, ending ... ..." by a chess blind "layman" into a strength of the amateur 4 small players, in the Repeatedly won several competitions. I remember the best results are the citys race and the sixth session of the eighth championship, the provinces "Linchuan Evening News Cup" second, the International Shanghai Invitational sixth, these hard-won results are Is the teachers hard education of the credit, how can I forget your education grace it?

In the future I will use practical action to thank you for my training, the ancients said: one day for the division, life for the father, dripping grace, when Yongquan phase newspaper. The results can only represent the past, I have to study hard, so that their chess does not continue to improve, humbly learn from chess, sum up experience, get rid of their shortcomings, learn someone elses superb chess and others, the future better To return to my mentor. Never let mentor disappointed.

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篇16:小学生介绍自己的英语作文

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My name is * *, 12 years old this year, I in shandong province boxing lakeside town village "bian village elementary school reading, I ah, the little girl is a warm and cheerful confident sunshine, normally its not a hobby, but in the evening, I began to see some documents, which is not the eyes.

I have some advantages, also some disadvantages. Ill tell you about my strengths! Advantage 1: I am very popular among the students, why? Because I often classmates laugh ah. Advantage 2: I like reading very much. Advantages 3: I finished writing homework at home, I which also dont go, just as documents in bed, someone ask me to play, I go out to play occasionally. Good, the advantages are had said. The talk about weakness! Disadvantages 1: Im lazy, mom told me to do what I dont do it. Defect 2: one to play with my legs hurt. Drawbacks 3: every examination should not be in the wrong is wrong, every time I got 90 points, never take an examination of 100 minutes... When I play, like crazy, no wonder every time I was hurt when I come back! Once my classmate - mud LuYing cried, I asked what happened to her, she dont say, I just want to have an idea, as a result, she laughed. I can comfort people, also can get people cry.

I am a warm and cheerful, sunshine confident girls.

我叫**,今年12岁了,我在山东省博兴县湖滨镇寨卞村小学五年级读书,我呀,是一个热情开朗阳光自信的小女生,平时没什么爱好,不过一到了晚上,我就开始看一些作文书,导致现在眼睛不好。

我有些优点,也有些缺点。我先给你说说我的优点吧!优点1:我很受同学们的喜爱,为什呢?是因为我经常都同学笑呀。优点2:我非常喜欢看书。优点3:我在家里写完了作业,我哪也不去,就在床上看作文书,别人找我玩,我偶尔出去玩一下。好了,优点都说完了。该说说缺点了!缺点1:我很懒,妈妈叫我做什么我都不去做。缺点2:一去玩我就腿摔伤。缺点3:每次考试不该错的却错,害得我每次都考90多分,从不考100分……我玩的时候像疯了一样,怪不得我每一次回来的时候都有伤啊!有一次我的同学—泥鲁莹哭了,我问她怎么了,她不说,我就想了一个办法,结果她哈哈大笑。我能安慰人,也能把别人惹哭了。

我是一个热情开朗,阳光自信的小女生。

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篇17:小学六年级英语一封信

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Dear Sue,

I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.

We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?

How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.

All the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

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篇18:写一封信小学英语

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Dear Mary,

Thanks for your last letter. Im so glad that you have been able (at last! ) to arrange a holiday in Australia. As I fear I wont be able to meet you at the airport when you arrive, nor will I be able to be home until later in the afternoon, so here are some instructions and suggestions.

There is a bus from the airport to the city. It is much cheaper than a cab. Take the bus to the city and ask to get off at Town Hall railway station.

To get to my place in the eastern suburbs you have three options. You can either take a cab, a bus or the train. I suggest you take the train, since the airport bus will leave you right at the station. Get off at Cliff Station. From there you can either walk to my place (about ten minutes) or take a taxi. Probably you should take a taxi as you will have luggage.

When you arrive at my flat, ring the intercom for Flat 2. My friend Lillian will be at home and she will open the front door for you and let you into my flat.

Presumably you will be tired and want to sleep. But if you feel like some exercise after that long flight, you could stroll down to Cooper Park, which is only ten minutes away ? you can see it from the window.

Cheers and looking forward to seeing you.

Yours sincerely,

Annie

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篇19:小学生英语记叙文的写作方法

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一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文,是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有:故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类:以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动,而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素,即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂,所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要,安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件,因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动,也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体,即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓,可以增强文章的真实感,有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制,更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称,还是采用第二人称,都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意:句式尽量要多变,不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头,否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错,但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子,使文章略显单调乏昧,给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中,记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目,不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件,又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考,这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来,对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题,明确主题,选准素材,罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score,tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time, I thought of death, of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent,and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样,你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩,并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想,作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容,这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性,还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成,不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底,又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”,但由于时间有限,结果草草收尾,甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文, 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平,表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇,要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上,四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如,表示“重视”的词汇有stress,emphasize等,但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成,前者就平淡,后者表达意思很生动,更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配,长短句交替使用,会增强文章的节奏感,使描写更生动,给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如:

(1) 名词化手段:用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分,然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分,以达到合并句子的目的。如:

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段:根据语义关系,可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等,如:

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner,hot and tired,was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚,卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟,进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”,而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构,而是留心细枝末节。

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篇20:小学英语作文动物

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Here is a small zoo. I like the tiger,although they are very ugly,but very imposing. Also has the national treasure panda,they are a little shy,does not dare to look at us. Who are those? they are elephants,you look at they to be huge,also has a point to be interesting. I do not like the lion,they compare the tiger clown,is also unimposing.

This is the small zoo.

3.Recently, three owls appeared suddenly on our campus. They made me think of my pet from childhood. When I was little, we had an owl at home. It was small, gray, and had two big eyes. We liked it very much. Every time I went home, it greeted me by making “goo-goo” sounds. We always played with it and talked to it. It would blink its eyes just like it understood what we were saying. It was like my best friend. But when the weather became colder, we forgot to keep it warm, and it died. It made us sad for a long time, and it also taught me how important it is to take care of animals.

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