英语写人的作文初二(经典20篇)

下面是由小编整理的高分英语作文技巧，欢迎阅读。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上中考[微博]英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。

第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。

第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，whatsmore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

Two years ago, I like to eat instant noodles very much, the instant noodles smell so delicious, because there are tasty flavor in it. When my mother was not at home, I would buy the instant noodles, as the time went by, I found my skin became bad and I would not like to eat rice. I felt so bad, my mother told me that I should not eat so much instant noodles, they contained no vitamins and also frustrated my appetite. I realized my problem and started to stay away from instant noodles, then my appetite became good and I wanted to eat rice again. Instant noodles are junk food, wed better eat it less.

两年以前，我很喜欢吃泡面，泡面闻起来很香，因为有美味的调料在里面。当我妈妈不在家的时候，我会买泡面吃，随着时间的流逝，我发现我的皮肤变得不好，我也不怎么喜欢吃米饭。我感到糟糕极了，我的妈妈告诉我我不应该吃那么多的泡面，这些没有营养，也让我胃口不好。我意识到了我的问题，开始不吃泡面，我的胃口变好了，也有食欲吃米饭。泡面是垃圾食品，我们最好少吃。

开学了，我惊奇地发现数学老师换了，仔细询问，原来徐老师调到扬州。这时，我的心象刀扎般，毕竟徐老师已经和我们相处整整五年了，可以说徐老师是看着我们长大的。上学期散学式，我们还议论希望徐老师陪我们走过小学。

在徐老师眼中，我们班中每个孩子都是平等的，没有谁笨。每次家长找徐老师了解情况，我们都不必担心，因为徐老师只说我们的优点。虽然徐老师很多时候因为我们的调皮而发火，可是她这是为我们好，事后，她不是照样地给我们上课，并没有对我们放弃。徐老师也有害羞的一面，每次她看到家长时，脸都会胀得通红，就好像做错事似的。

突然，我回想起上学期散学式时，徐老师是那么的沉默，看我们的时候，连眼圈都红了，可是，我们却没有察觉，这分明是徐老师要调走的迹象啊。徐老师就这样说也没和我们说一声就走了，她可知道我们是多么伤心啊，虽然我们相处了五年了，可是连一张照片也没拍过，哪知道徐老师很多年后会记住我们的名字和面容吗?据冯老师说，徐老师没有给他留下我们任何资料。我猜徐老师是舍不得我们，才把我们的资料拿去作为纪念，而爸爸却说，学校不放徐老师走，徐老师是赌钱走的，但是我希望我的想法是对的。

其实，徐老师也不容易，她的丈夫在扬州任教，徐老师不但要无微不至地关心我们，还要照顾她的儿子，一天忙下来后还要备课。几次徐老师都想调到扬州，可都为我们留了下来，这次她终于下了决心，到扬州去工作。

我会永远记住徐老师的，我想她也会记住我们的!而且会在遥远的扬州给我美好的祝福。我会带着她的祝福在求学的道路上更上一层楼。我也祝愿徐老师永远快乐幸福!

Ann is one of my friends. She is my classmate. She always dress in blue. I don’t known whether is because of her that my favorite color is blue. She is cute and naive. Our teachers always praise her in front of the class for her excellent study and great personality. I like stay with her. So does she. She likes drawing pictures. To be a painter in the future is her dream. I know she will realize her dream on day.

安是我其中一个朋友。她是我的同学。她总是穿蓝色的衣服。我不知道是否是因为她，我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色。她很可爱也很单纯。我们老师总是在全班面前表扬她，因为他优异的学习和良好的性格。我喜欢和她待在一起。她也喜欢和我待在一起。她喜欢画画。她的梦想是将来成为一个画家。我知道总有一天她可以实现她的梦想。

My mother has a pair of small eyes, smiling and narrowing into a seam. She

had a small cherry mouth under her straight nose. My mothers hair is a little

different - its curly, and shes joked that she doesnt need a perm.

My mother likes cooking. When mum is free, she will cook delicious meals

for my brother and me. There are her best fried dumplings, spicy dry pot

bullfrogs and crispy fried chicken legs. My brother says they are better than

KFC chicken legs.

Mother is very kind. Every time we meet beggars in the street, my mother

will give them change and teach me to be helpful.

I love my mother.

I have a good friend, we met each other when I was five years old. She is

my neighbor and the first time I saw her, she smiled at me. It was her smile

that made me feel she was a nice person to get along with. Indeed, she was a

reliable friend. When I was in trouble, she would be the first person to give me

a hand. Once I lost my key, when she heard, she tried hard to help me remember

where I lost it. I am so lucky to have her as my friend. It is hard to meet

someone who can make you feel safe and she is the one. She is the angel in my

life.

When I see the cartoon, I like to watch the cat machine very much, he has a time machine, he always helps his friend to fine something with time machine. The cartoon makes me think of what would I do if I have a time machine. If I have a time machine, the first thing I want to do is go back to the time when I play with my friend, he now moves to another place, I never say goodbye to him, I want to make it up and say goodbye to him. The second thing is I want to go back to the time when I shout at my mother, I regret about this all the time, I wish I had a chance to say sorry at that time. Now I have to face the truth that I will never have time machine, I should cherish the time and thing I own now, be nice to my mother.

当我看卡通片的时候，我很喜欢看机器猫，他有一台时光机，他总是用时光机来帮助他的朋友找到一些东西。这个卡通片让我想到了如果我也有一台时光机，我会做什么。如果我有一台时光机，第一件事做的就是回到我和朋友玩耍的时光，他现在已经搬到另外一个地方了，我没有和他道别，我想要补偿并道别。第二件事就是我想回到我反驳母亲的时光，我总是为此感到悔恨，我希望我那个时候有机会道别。现在我必须得面对现实，我不会拥有时光机，我应该珍惜现在是时间和所拥有的东西，对母亲友好。

Every year the summer vacation, my life is very different, than at school life more interesting, more rich, more meaningful.

After the summer vacation, my life became interesting. Its hot in summer, and friends to go to swimming pool swimming is the happiest thing in my summer vacation.

Every afternoon 1 point, about on a few good friends, take swimming equipment, take some pocket money, to 95 troops in the swimming pool to swim. Plunge into the water, the sun wilting, we immediately restore the vitality, we are happy, like a fish swim in the water.

We can do some games in shallow water, can be in the water, a water fight, spark white spray also seems to be infected by our happy atmosphere, playfully.

This is my summer vacation life.

每年到了暑假，我的生活就大不一样了，比在学校的学习生活更加有趣、更加充实、更加有意义。

放暑假以后，我的生活开始变得有趣。夏日天气炎热，和朋友去游泳馆游泳是我暑假中最快乐的事。

每到午后1点，约上几个要好的朋友，带好游泳装备，带点零花钱，去95部队的游泳馆游泳。一头扎下水，被太阳晒萎蔫的我们，立刻恢复了勃勃生机，我们快乐得像鱼儿一样，在水里遨游。

我们可以在浅水区做一些游戏，可以在水里打水仗，四溅的白色水花似乎也被我们的快乐气氛感染了，顽皮地活蹦乱跳。

这就是我的暑假生活。

I am a student of xiao No.2 primary school. Im in class 1, class 3. Come

to me!

My eyes are big, my nose is small, my mouth is small, but I love to say

that my face is still a little white. My height is 1.40 meters, my legs are

long, my body is short, and my weight is 75 Jin. Its an athletes physique!

I love sports and like playing badminton. Run, play football.

I am a sensible, civilized, polite, filial parents respect elders! But I

also have shortcomings. Im careless and careless. Sometimes when you write a

question without seeing it clearly, you often write a wrong or missed question.

Sometimes writing is not serious enough. I will correct it in the future. I help

my grandma do some housework at home. I take my grandpa to carry things when I

go out. I also like reading extracurricular books and sharing the truth and

feelings of reading with my dad.

This is me. Come to me and make friends with me.

dear henry,

i’m glad to receive your letter. it’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation after the college entrance examination.

first of all, a good rest is needed because i do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. of course, i’ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. i’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. they’ve done so much for me, you know. if possible, i’ll take part in some social activities so that i can know more about the society.

best wishes!

li hua

Everybody needs themotivationto move on, so no matter what kind of difficulties they meet, they can see the hope and stick to the targets. I have set up small targets for myself, so I can make progress step by step. For example, when I jog on the playground for 800 meters, I will finish every 100 meters as the small target, so I can finish my task easily. If I think about 800 meters at first, I will lose my motivation and give up quickly. Motivation is like the light in the dark, leading us to reach our destination. Find our aim and set up the small plans. We can make it anyway.

每个人都需要前进的动力，这样无论他们遇到什么样的困难，都可以看到希望，并坚持以达到目标。我为自己设立了小目标，这样就可以一步一步地取得进步。比如当我在操场上跑800米时，我会把每次的100米当做小目标，这样我就可以很轻易地完成我的任务。如果我一开始就想着800米，就会失去动力，迅速放弃。动力就像是黑暗中的光，引导着我们到达目的地。找到我们的目标和设立小的计划，就总能成功。

My name is Xiaoming and I like traveling very much. Last summar, I went to the Great Wall with my family.

It was fine that day. We went there by bus early in the morning. When we got there, there were many other visitors there. When my family and I went onto the Great Wall, we saw beautiful scenery(风景). We all were amazed(惊讶的) by how beautiful it was. We took quite a few photos there.

We had a good time there. The time flew by, and soon we had to go back. I was tired after traveling, but I really enjoyed visiting the Great Wall!

说起来真是莫名奇妙，我一个平淡无奇的小女生，咋就摊上这么一个死党啊!说起她，正常人的反应是一个字“呆”两个字“无语”我再送你三个字“快点跑”!她和我同名不同姓人称老娜，天生一副友善的面庞，原来的飘然长发在一夕间被无情抛弃，现在嘛，一张到了一定程度，但比起以前的长发及腰，总略显稀少。下巴上哟一道两厘米的疤痕，一副饱经沧桑的样子，不知欺骗了多少的善男信女，不过一和她玩海了，她就一定凶像必露啦，到时，你可惨喽!

我叫她老娜，(请允许我有一点私心，谁让她一直说我老来着，这算一份小小的回礼吧)“老娜”虽和她的原名有一定的关系，但也不至于一下就猜出来，保护一下她的微不足道的隐私权嘛，实际上，对我而言，她不仅是我的死党了，我们是好友，姐妹，还是“同居”一年的闺中密友，更重要的是，论辈分，老衲要叫我一声姑，这一点，她也认，当然，那是和我借钱的时候。不过没关系谁让我俩关系铁哪，再说了，尊老爱幼嘛，谁怕谁啊!

她的疤嘛，说起来好有一定的历史收藏价值，用她的话来说，就是为飙车事业的前辈做出了血的贡献，无语，不过，后来我才知道，此飙车非彼飙车，飙的是自行车，居然还是我的!更倒霉的是，她在对着伤口沉思两天之后，竟还没忘了给我这个罪魁祸首的主人送上一点小小的惩罚：让我每天骑单车送她上学，我不要啊，她好重的!值得庆幸的是他还没把我的自行车拆了，最哦他的精神损失费!

嘻嘻，说了这么多不该说的，再不说点他的优点是不是有点不够朋友啊?可不是我吹，其实老娜算得上一个很好的女孩，她很仗义，她是以前我唯一的朋友，她好像永远都站在我这边，她陪我玩，陪我说话，聊心事，唱歌给我听，她不会让人欺负我，她会为了我和老师反驳，这些是别人不知道的，但我俩心里都明白对方的心里早已容下了彼此，虽然，同学们有时会看到我俩闹翻了，吵得面红耳赤，争论不休，不用为我们担心，更不用八卦到问为什么，因为一节课的时间，足以把所有的愤恨消磨掉，我们又会和好如初，像没事人似的。

俗话说，汉子也有温柔的一面，何况是个女孩子呐!不过她的温柔娇媚只用在她可爱的小妹的身上，要知道，在家，她是个标准贤妻良母形象看那架势，一我与她死党多年的经验来看，她定然是母爱泛滥，但有谁会想到他平时的放肆那，老天不公啊，凭什么给她双重性格，居然还反差巨大，没天理啊!

我永远珍惜这个朋哟，一定，好了，话不多说，不过作为死党的我，怎忍心竟她漂亮的名字不见天日那，爆个料吧，她姓王，有王有娜，这凤尾嘛，自己去找吧，不准泄密哦!

老娜，我最好的死党，永生的难忘与牵挂。

[初二写人的作文3篇

导语：小时候的我们都喜欢吃糖，可是糖吃多了，我们的牙齿就不好了，我们要保护好我们的牙齿，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

My mother always tells me not to eat too much candy, but I just couldn’t control myself. Once, I felt my teeth hurt and did not feel like eating. My mother took me to see the dentist and I was so afraid. The doctor used his machine to fix my teeth, I was terrified and cried. Since then, I realize the importance of taking care of my teeth. So I do not eat the candy too often. I will wash my teeth before I sleep, what’s more, the ice food and the sour food will be rejected by me. My friends envy me for having the white teeth, for I look so healthy and beautiful.

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我的妈妈总是告诉我不要吃太多的糖果,但我就是无法控制自己。有一次,我的牙齿很疼,不想吃东西。妈妈带我去看牙医,我很害怕。医生用他的机器修理我的牙齿,我吓坏了,哭了。从那时起,我意识到保护牙齿的重要性。所以我经常不吃糖果。在我睡觉之前我要刷牙,而且,我不吃冰的食物和酸的食物。我的朋友羡慕我有洁白的牙齿,因为我看起来很健康又美丽。

I have a nice grandfather. He is eighty years old. Although he is eighty years old, his body is still in good condition. He likes to listen to Beijing Opera. He often goes to do exercise, so many people ask him about Opera. He has a nice wife that is my grandmother. Grandfather is a good husband, and also is my good grandfather. His favorite color is red, because he thinks red stands for joyousness. I love my grandfather forever.

我有一个好爷爷，他八十岁了。虽然他已经八十岁了，但是他的身体很好。他喜欢听京剧，他经常去锻炼，所以很多人会去问他些这方面的东西。他有一个好妻子，就是我的奶奶。他是个好丈夫，也是我的好爷爷。他最喜欢的颜色是红色，因为他觉得红色代表喜庆。我永远爱我的爷爷。

Miss zhao is my Chinese teacher of grade one to grade four, also is our teacher in charge. About 35, 6 years old, she has a pair of jiongjiongweishen eyes, every time when we have the classmate, miss zhao eyes flashing the light of joy, high stand of bridge of the nose on a pair of glasses, when son wear when son dont wear, wear like a doctor, dont wear like a mother.

Her to go to Chinese classes lively and interesting, artful, our these restless "little monkey". Remember once said "the Prometheus stealing fire," miss zhao dont know where to find a similar "torch" props, also let the class ACTS as a "Prometheus" take "torch" to "human", but also let us ask why the "Prometheus" took "torch" to "human"? We learned in the process of interaction of the text, is very impressive and interesting.

Remember once, my classmates and I play fell and broke his knee. Miss zhao, like they treat their children very carefully to help me clean the wound, coated with medicine, carefully looked at miss zhao that full of love and anxious eyes, my knees are on painkillers, much pain relief. At another time, because I have a fever off class, miss zhao use of noon rest time, help me with my homework, let me in a timely manner on the "catch" the pace of the students.

Miss zhao in the mind is very wide, the greatest tolerance under each "trouble" in our class. But, however, though normally miss zhao affectionate to us, once but when we make mistakes, zhao teachers would become very strict, first arch eyebrows wrinkled his thin, started a "why? How?" "Bombardment", and then bent up fine eyebrow, earnestly to reasonable, say you completely convinced.

This is what we all love miss zhao, she like a mother care for us, with love in eyes of strict supervision, we use persuasive reason we; She is so kind to us, we cant afford not to a genuine love and respect; Love persuasive, never tired, my dear miss zhao, you are our good friends, is my idea of a good teacher.

赵老师是我一年级到四年级的语文老师，也是我们的班主任。她大约35、6岁，有着一双炯炯有神的眼睛，每当我们有同学获奖时，赵老师眼睛里总会闪烁着喜悦的光芒，高挺的鼻梁上架着一副眼镜，时儿戴时儿不戴，戴上时像一位博士，不戴时像一位母亲。

她上的语文课生动有趣、妙语连珠，把我们这些不安份的“小猴子”都吸引住了。记得有一次讲《普罗米修斯盗火》，赵老师不知从那里找来了一个类似“火把”的道具，还让班上的同学充当“普罗米修斯”把“火把”带到“人间”，而且还让我们询问那位“普罗米修斯”为什么要把“火把”带到“人间”?在互动的过程中我们学习了课文，印象非常深刻而且有趣。

记得有一次，我和同学玩耍时摔了一跤，摔破了膝盖。赵老师像对待自己的小孩一样，非常认真地帮我清洗了伤口，仔细地涂上了药，望着赵老师那充满爱和焦急的眼神，我的膝盖仿佛是上了止疼药一样，疼痛缓解了许多。还有一次，因为我发烧掉了一堂课，赵老师就利用中午休息的时间，帮我补习功课，让我及时“赶”上了同学们的步伐。

赵老师的胸怀十分宽大，大的能包容下我们班上每个“淘气包”。不过可是，别看赵老师平时对我们亲热有加，一旦但当我们犯错误的时候，赵老师就会变得非常严厉，先是皱起那双细细的地柳眉，先开始一番“为什么?怎么样?”的“狂轰滥炸”，然后弯起细眉，苦口婆心地讲道理，说得大家心悦诚服。

这就是我们大家都很喜欢的赵老师，她象母亲一样用爱呵护着我们，用严厉的目光监督着我们，用循循善诱的道理说服我们;她对我们是那么的和蔼可亲，使我们不能不对她发自内心的热爱和尊重;爱循循善诱、不厌其烦，亲爱的赵老师，您是我们大家的好朋友，更是我心目中的好老师。

Today is my shopping day.I wanted to buy some delicious food.there were many kinds of food.I wanted to eat more vegetables and more fruits.I wanted to eat apples in order to lose weight.I liked eating bananas,straw berries,pears and watermelons,I wanted to buy some books,I thought they can help me study not long after my holidays,I wanted to buy a pair of golves for myself because my golves were lost.And I bought some CDs.

With the improvement of people’s material conditions, people have higher demands for living quality. People wish to be in good health and to have good living habits. How shall we do?

First, keep going to bed and getting up early every clay. Then do some exercises in the open air to breathe the fresh air in the morning, so we will have a pleasant mood in a day.

Then have balanced food to ensure our health. Eat more vegetables.

Being calm and good-natured is most important for our health. Hope you will be happy forever.

随着人民物质条件的提高,人们对生活质量有了更高的要求。人们希望在健康和良好的生活习惯。我们应怎样做呢?

首先,每天应上床睡觉和起床早。然后做一些锻炼在户外呼吸早晨新鲜的空气,所以我们一天会有一个愉快的心情。

然后有平衡的膳食来保证我们的健康。多吃蔬菜。

除此外,心平气和对我们的健康是最重要的。希望你永远快乐。

My grandmother lived in the village dock, grandma is not tall nor short, she has a round face, some body fat, has gray hair, teeth down only five or six teeth, my grandma is very love to laugh, cheerful personality, is a courteous and accessible person.

Grandma is more than and 60 years old this year, do things very seriously, do not open her grandmother are so old age, but she wrote the word can be good, and neat, and beautiful, often praised by others.

My grandmother is a warm-hearted person, love to care about others, especially for me, every time I go home, always said: "my daughter, come back, and grow taller"! Hurried to the house, gave me a lot of love to eat food, this time I can be happy, thought: grandma is too good to me, I will certainly be good filial piety grandmother.

Every time I come home, I have to give grandma a painting, grandmothers assessment of me every time is very high: "painting every time, awesome!" Let me the most happy is: grandma every picture is well preserved, home to the guests, grandma took my picture and let them appreciate, hear the guests praise, she was very happy, that laugh is not close the mouth.

This is my grandmother, is not great, my grandmother has many advantages, I will tell you later.

My English teacher is a woman of medium-height. She is in her thirties. She always has a smile on her face and a kind word for her students. As she is also a little plump, she gives people the impression that she is a patient, responsible and easygoing teacher. This picture of my teacher is true. She devotes herself to the cause of education. She prepares and organizes her lessons so well that we are fully attentive in her class. After class she often gives lessons to the students who have been absent from school because of illness. With her help we have become more and more interested in our English study. Whenever we have problems we will turn to her for help. As a matter of fact, she is more an intimate friend to us than a respected teacher. We have learnt a great deal from her devotion to her work, her conscientiousness in teaching, and her readiness to help others.

Time like running water, quietly walked around us. Yes, time flies like an arrow, the sun is like a boat, glance left and right of the summer vacation has finally arrived, I like a caged bird fly freely outside. We is the master of the summer vacation in this summer vacation, we can relax.

But as for me, we cant get nothing in this summer vacation, every day to travel. Our parents will make sure that our classes, on this day that, mom and dad to take us in the scorching sun of summer. Of course we cant live up to the expectations of my parents and teachers, make this summer have a full and happy. Give yourself "come on" in the summer vacation.

The beginning of the summer vacation, I booked a summer vacation plan: every morning at 7 a.m. start, every day for three days in the summer vacation homework assignments, and then review the phonetic symbol, listening to the phonetic symbol, the phonetic symbol, and then write an English composition, finally back idioms, idioms. But also want to review what we have learnt before, as the saying goes: consider ".

Lets have a good this summer, full, happy.

时光像流水一样，在我们身边悄然走过。是的，光阴似箭，日月如梭，左顾右盼的暑假终于到了，我像关在笼子里的鸟在外面自由自在地飞翔。在这个暑假里我们是暑假的主人，我们可以放松自己。

而我呢，我们不可能在这个暑假里一无所获，每天游山玩水。我们的家长保证会让我们上补习班，每天上这上那，爸爸妈妈在这骄阳似火的夏天送我们。当然我们不能辜负老师和爸爸妈妈的期望，让这个暑假过得又充实又愉快。在暑假里给自己“加油”。

暑假的一开始，我就订了暑假计划：每天早上7点30分开始做，每天做三天《暑假作业本》里的作业，接着复习音标，听音标，默音标，再写一篇英语作文，最后背成语，默成语。不过也要复习复习以前学过的内容，俗话说的好：温故而知新”嘛。

让我们这个暑假过得美好,充实，愉快吧。