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初中英语写作常见错误及分析20篇

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初中写可爱的小狗英语

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Our familys puppy is called "yellow yellow". It is long with a long yellow hair; watery eyes still long with sweat more than the nose; tail hairy, like a long chicken scattered.

One time to see it cute? Haha! Or let me tell you! Once, I came home from school, happy to pick up my fathers cell phone, ready to "yellow" camera. I came to the kennel before the call to the "yellow ... ... yellow", it immediately fleeing out from the bushes, hurry to run in front of me, shaking the hairy big tail.

I looked, hurriedly squatted down, opened the phone. "Yellow yellow" in front of me back and forth a few steps to see me open the phone, turned down, his tongue spit it out, as if to say: "master. Shoot good ah!" I read, give it a shot A big head stickers, after the film, I got it in front of him to see just take a good photo. Looking at the phone in their own, "yellow" happy shaking his tail, as if to show off, said: "look at me, how handsome! Do you have me than handsome?

Another time, about 10 oclock or so, "yellow" to see a black and fat rat, brave and brave it rushed up, but unfortunately did not catch, it was run to the board, and this scene just I saw it, and I called "yellow yellow", it heard my call, quickly ran over, so when it came, I said: "Go and catch the mouse!" It seems to understand my words , Standing next to the board for a while, did not wait. So, it looked at me with a poor look, as if to say: "Lord ... Master, I ... did not catch the mouse, I ... ..."

"Well, do not catch it!" I said with a grin. The voice of the original, sad it has become a lively and lovely puppy, went to me, with my tongue on my feet, or biting the hairy big tail.

Ah! "Yellow", you really have been lovely puppy ah! I am proud of you.

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篇1:初中英语作文大全

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English is the international language. Many parents have realized the

importance of mastering English and they spend a lot of time and money to help

their children learn it well. But with the development of Chinese economy, a lot

of foreigners come to China to learn its culture and language, so we cant

ignore the importance of Chinese. I have recited a lot of old poems. It makes me

feel the charm of these classic poems. Every poem uses a different way to show

the history. I find the great joy in learning Chinese. Both English and Chinese

are future language, so we need to master them well.

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篇2:初中三年级学生英语

全文共 548 字

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Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father。 Different people like different kinds of gifts。

If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie。 I think your father will like it。 But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea。 When your father comes back from work, he can drink it。

No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day。 Don’t you think so?

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篇3:有关交流英语作文初中

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Once, I talked to the foreign people, he was staring at me all the time,

which made me feel not comfortable, so I chose to avoid his eyes and kept a

little distance from him. When I talked about this problem to my foreign

teacher, she told me that it was natural for them to look at you during

communication, which meant respect. While in China, people do the opposite

thing. They try to avoid eye-contact, because it is not eased to look at each

other. The different culture sometimes creates distance. The foreigners always

feel strange when they look at Chinese people’s eyes and every time when they

want to come closer to hear more clearly, Chinese people will walk away. So the

more we learn about the culture, the more we know about the world.

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篇4:初中英语满分

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With the development of technology, today, our life is facilitated with all

kinds information sources. We can read books on the Internet, which is much

convenient than buying the books in the stores. I like to read E-books, because

there are many advantages. First, I can save a lot of money. Downloading the

E-books is for free, I can find all kinds of free sources. It is good for

students because they can save the money. Second, I can save a lot of time. Some

books are not easy to be found in the bookstore, sometimes I need to go to

several shops. But if I search the Internet, then the information is in front of

me. How fast it is.

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篇5:高考写作的错误及规避技巧

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一、审题——若即若离

虽然近年来高考作文多以“话题作文”或是“新材料作文”出现,题目宽泛,不设审题障碍,但也并不是想写什么就写什么,想怎么写就怎么写,依然要在所给话题、材料范围内进行审题写作,不可抛开话题、另辟蹊径地“信马由缰”。否则,就会不着边际,偏离话题。比如高考作文题《必须跨过这道坎》,就应该牢牢抓住“必须”“跨”“坎”等“题眼”进行审题,还要重点关注、开掘出“坎”的引申义、比喻义。

规避:要加强审题训练,针对题目“辨字析词”,盯准“题眼”,尤其对于哲理性命题,涉及辩证关系的,更要深入分析题目的深刻内涵。审题越细、越准、越透,立意的思路就越宽、越深、越广。

二、入题——千呼万唤

高考作文因字数、时间的限制,不可能写得太多,但有相当多的考生往往出现“入题慢”的弊病,废话很多,以一当十的内容却千呼万唤不出来。引用原材料或可有可无的内容占去了很大的篇幅,重点部分无法展开。

规避:多看名家精短美文,为我所用,在“实战”中寻找不足,总结经验。

三、扣题——蜻蜓点水

有的考生写作文,从头到尾没有出现话题、话题的关键词或与话题相近的表述,犯了扣题不紧的错误,看不出是就所给特定“话题”或是“新材料作文”而写的文章,这样得分自然不会理想。

规避:在行文时牢记“考纲”中对作文扣题一项的具体要求,依照标准去做,回想老师的相关叮嘱及传授的方法。

四、立意——平庸病态

见解独到、构思新巧、主旨积极的文章无疑是任何人都梦寐以求的。可惜的是,在考场上有的学生为了追求所谓的标新立异,甚至写出了令人匪夷所思的文章。如有的学生在《假如记忆可以移植》中这样写:“我要把爱因斯坦的大脑移植过来,为自己发财致富……”由于思想格调不高,不符合高考作文“思想健康”的要求,降低了作文品位。

规避:树立正确的人生观、世界观、价值观,突破定向思维、线性思维,走向逆向思维、发散思维,视角独特,出人意料又在情理之中。

五、选材——陈旧苍白

有的学生作文材料陈旧苍白,缺乏厚重感。要么记叙一件事,有骨架没血肉;要么议论一个道理,观点+例子+结论,缺分析少论证;要么连例子都没有,翻来覆去,空谈漫议,写到哪儿算哪儿,凑够字数为原则。

规避:积累材料。一是在高三这段时间里继续收集鲜活的材料,并选记一些名言警句;二是把长期以来的“库存”分门别类筛选一下,选择出可供用于写作的精品材料列出提纲。

六、语言——艰涩难懂

有的考生喜欢使用缩写、英文单词、网络语言,其实这是要冒一定风险的。有的阅卷教师对这类语言很反感,就会对考生有害无利。高考大纲对于作文的要求是语言通顺、用词贴切,文句有表现力。因此,考生应当尽量用优美、有内涵的语言来表情达意,要用最规范、最传统的语言来写作,最好不用或少用网络语言。

规避:平时写作时尽量不使用网络语言或少数人才知道意思的语言。

七、形式——千篇一律

考场作文,事关重大,不仅内容要出彩,形式上也应该不拘一格,使内容与形式相得益彰,完美统一,方可获得高分。但教师在批改作文中却发现,形式创新的寥寥无几,多为千篇一律、似曾相识的“老面孔”,这应当引起注意,尤其是写作能力强的学生,不要因为形式的“不适宜”而失去了本不该丢的分。

规避:运用题记、后记、演讲稿、采访记录、日记体、书信体、小标题等新奇的形式来诠释思想,表达意旨。

八、文体——似是而非

有的学生写的文章好像属于“四不像”的文体,因而阅卷老师难以读懂、把握这样的文章,判分就有争议。所以,一般说来,文体还是明朗为好。

规避:就高考作文而言,最好多使用记叙文(夹叙夹议)、散文(记事、抒情)、议论文三种常见形式,少采用或不用诗歌、戏剧、文言等体裁。

九、结篇——虎头蛇尾

有的学生由于没有分配好答题时间,以致在写作文时所剩时间不够了,有的考生来不及结尾,结果或用一句话硬断,或点上一串省略号,或干脆空在那儿。无论哪一种情况,都会被视为未完篇处理。因为阅卷老师衡量一篇文章的好坏,首先是看文章的整体,虎头蛇尾的文章是要被扣分的。

规避:考生平时要训练自己在大约45~60分钟内能够写出一篇完整作文的能力,最后交上的作文无论如何都应该是一篇结构完整的作文。

十、卷面——乱涂乱改

现在是电脑阅卷,字迹模糊、扫描不清就会丢失信息,老师看得吃力无疑会影响分数。我们都有这样的感觉:书写工整、卷面整洁的作文使人赏心悦目,印象分立即增加;而字迹潦草、涂改得难以辨认的答卷,无形中就会多扣几分。高考作文如果接二连三地出现错别字,就会被认为语文基础太差,得分也会大打折扣。2008年高考作文对错别字要求更高,有的省已经规定每错一字扣一分,应予以特别重视。

规避:养成好的书写习惯,不会的字、词要查字典、词典。

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篇6:初中英语满分

全文共 624 字

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Im always working hard for a bright future. I imagine what my life in 20

years will be like.

In 20 years, I will play an important role in my family. I will take care

of my parents. Maybe I will be married and have a lovely child. In my free time,

I will get together with my good friends to talk about the past school life. We

can also do other things such as gardening and doing yoga. Whats more, I will

have a job and face new challenges. I think I will be a doctor and help

patients. Last but not least, maybe I will have a robot. It can help me a lot in

my daily life.

In a word, I hope my life in 20 years will be a better one!

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篇7::初中写秋雨的英语作文

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Yesterday s weather is really gratifying.

Early morning, I just got up, I heard "rumbling ... ..." thunder, I look out the window, the sky is as low as the hand can touch to touch.

Soon, a rain dripping up, like silk, like cattle hair. This is a timely rain, because a few days ago just experienced a dust storm, this rain enough to clean all the dust. thats nice!

Autumn is like a shy girl is the same as the earth father and son pouring thoughts.

This is like a rain of rain under a rain, a burst of pouring rain pouring down, and soon, the playground has become a vast ocean. Rainwater on the campus merged into a stream, they like an appointment like the same direction to catch, gradually in the playground low sink into a lake, the middle of the big puddle has become the central island of the lake. More interesting! Rain or keep the next, the rain dripping on the water cheerful dance.

The rain finally stopped, the rain was fine, the sun and the public can not wait to face from the gloomy dark clouds behind the girl jumped out. Suddenly, the sky is a bright and clean, like washed the same, the air is fresh and fresh, the distance of the scene also see more clearly. Especially the flowers, become particularly bright, and they winked to the people waving; that lovely little grass, green Yingying, who hung with emerald, swaying in the breeze, posing a fresh breath; In front of the tree that cover the old pine trees, just after the bath has become particularly spiritual, stretching the arm to welcome the sun father ... ...

Autumn rain, I love you, you will always be wiped out in my mind impetuous and arrogant.

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篇8:初中生中秋节英语作文范例

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the mid-autumn or moon festival is one rich in poetic(诗意的) significance. ancient legends(古代的传说) that became interwoven with this festival‘s celebration further contribute to the warm regard in which it has always been held by the chinese people. according to the lunar calendar(农历), the seventh, eighth, and ninth months constitute the autumn season. mid-autumn festival falls on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month, precisely in the middle of this season, when the heat of the summer has given way to cool autumn weather, marked by blue skies and gentle breezes. on this day the moon is at its greatest distance from the earth; at no other time is it so luminous. then, as the chinese say, “the moon is perfectly round.” in the villages the heavy work involved in the summer harvest has already been completed but the autumn harvest has not yet arrived.

the actual origins of the mid-autumn festival are still very unclear. the earliest records are from the time of the great han dynasty emperor wu di (156-87 b.c.), who initiated celebrations lasting three days, including banquets and “viewing the moon” evenings on the toad terrace. we know that people during the jin dynasty (265-420 a.d.) continued the custom of mid-autumn festival celebrations, and similar accounts have come down to us from the time of the tang dynasty. during the ming dynasty (1368-1644) houses and gardens were decorated with numerous lanterns and the sound of gongs and drums filled the air.(qiewo.com)

moon cakes came on sale shortly before festival time. in the past, one could get some cakes shaped like pagodas, others like a horse and rider, fish or animals. still others were decorated with the images of rabbits, flowers, or goddesses. there were a myriad of different fillings available: sugar, melon seeds, almonds, orange peel, sweetened cassia blossom, or bits of ham and preserved beef. the cakes are of the northern and southern styles, but the latter (also called guangdong-style) are the most popular and are available throughout the country.

the round shape of cakes just symbolizes not only the moon but also the unity of the family. therefore the mid-autumn festival is actually a day for family reunion.

[初中中秋节英语作文

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篇9:关于失败英语作文初中

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Failure exists in every stage for everybody. As students, I think the most

common failure would be failing in the exam. Yes, I have failed in the exam for

many times. It is very common, because on one can keep the name of

ever-victorious generals forever. But some students do not figure out this. When

they fail in the exam, they need a long time to recover, even have directly

negative effect on their inner heart. This is not the right way to deal with

this problem. We need to figure out the reason why we don’t do well in the exam.

And then correct it. Try our best to get better next time.

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篇10:初中英语作文之草莓

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Today, I saw a very delIcIous strawberry In Taobao network. My fIrst tIme wIth my own favourIte people to share. He lIkes It very much, but he has not eaten thIs kInd of strawberry. The flavor of the strawberry Is mIlk. He felt very strange. So he wanted to try the strawberry. And the prIce Is not expensIve, there are 5 yuan of red packet. I thInk It Is worth It. So , I am goIng to buy hIm a box of strawberrIes . A total of 5 pounds of strawberrIes . I thInk he must be very happy when he receIved It ! WIll feel very happy , very pleasant surprIse ! I thInk , to spend a lIttle money to gIve theIr favorIte people a surprIse, thIs Is a very good thIng. However, strawberrIes must be fInIshed as soon as possIble. 5 pounds of strawberrIes a total of about 100 , to see the sIze of strawberry and Its weIght. Strawberry Is a perIshable food, so It must be put In the refrIgerator. But In the refrIgerator can not be stored for a long tIme.

译文:今天,我在淘宝网看到很美味的草莓。我第一时间跟我自己最爱的人分享了。他很喜欢。可是他没有吃过这种草莓。这种草莓的味道是牛奶味的。他觉得这很奇怪。所以他想尝尝这种草莓。而且价格也不昂贵,还有5元的红包。我觉得很值得。所以,我打算给他买一箱的草莓。一共是5斤的草莓。我想他收到的时候一定会很开心吧。一定会感觉到很幸福,很惊喜吧!我觉得,花费一点点的钱就可以给自己最爱的人一个惊喜,这是很美好的事情。不过,草莓一定要尽快的吃完。5斤的草莓一共是100个左右,要看草莓的大小和它的重量。草莓是易腐蚀的食品,所以要放进冰箱里。但是在冰箱里的草莓也不能保存很长一段时间。

[初中英语作文之草莓

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篇11:我的家乡初中英语作文120字

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My Home Town

请你根据下面的提纲,以“我的家乡”为题,写一篇100—120字的短文。

提纲:

(1) 家乡的地理位置;

(2) 解放前的情况;

(3) 解放后的变化;

(4) 对家乡的感情。

My Home Town

My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.

But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.

In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.

I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.

[我的家乡初中英语作文120字

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篇12:有关公园的初中英语作文

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In haimen there is a park. it’s a big and beautiful park. it has two gates. they are the north gate and the west gate. many people park their bikes in front of the gates.

There is a shop at the north gate. when you go into the park through the north gate, you will find a large square on your right and you will see lots of trees and flowers around you. in the west of the park, there is a playground.

Sometimes some children fly kites on it and some people sit on the grass and chat. in the middle of the park, there is a lake. there are many boats on it. there is a hill in the east of the park.

The park is very beautiful. i love it very much. will you come to visit it some day?

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篇13:我的语文老师初中英语作文

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以 My Chinese Teacher 为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下: 1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。 2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。 3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。 My Chinese Teacher Of all the s

以My Chinese Teacher为标题写一篇字数为80-100之间的英语短文。提示内容如下:

1、孙老师今年36岁,中等身材。

2、她关心。热爱学生,工作认真负责。

3、她语文课讲得生动。有趣。

My Chinese Teacher

Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.

My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.

Ms Sun works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.

Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And were getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.

Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.

[我的语文老师初中英语作文

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篇14:厦门初中英语

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Xiamen is a major city on the southeast coast of the Peoples Republic of

China.It is administered as a sub-provincial city of Fujian province .

The local vernacular is Amoy,a dialect of Southern Min,also called

Hokkien.Amoy is widely used and understood across the southern region of Fujian

province as well as overseas.While it is widely spoken in and around Xiamen,the

Amoy dialect has no official status,and the official language of all government

business is Mandarin.

Xiamen and its surrounding countryside is known for its scenery and

tree-lined beaches.Gulangyu,also known as Piano Island,is a popular weekend

getaway with views of the city and features many Victorian-era style European

edifices.Xiamens Botanical Garden is a nature lovers paradise.The Buddhist

Nanputuo Temple,dating back to the Tang Dynasty,is a national treasure.Xiamen is

also famous for its history as a frontline in the Chinese Civil War with Taiwan

over Jinmen (also known as Jinmen or Quemoy) 50 years ago.One attraction for

tourists is to view Kinmen,a group of islands a few kilometres away and under

Taiwanese control,from Xiamen island.

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篇15:期待初中英语

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I used to receive gifts like a basketball, a swatch or a CD. But the gift

I’m looking forward to is a bicycle though I can’t ride it now. How I want to

learn it well so that I can ride anywhere I want to go! Every morning, it is my

father who always drives me to school in all kinds of weather. Especially in the

past few days, he has worked hard until midnight. If I ride my own bicycle to

school, he will be able to sleep a little longer and work a bit harder. I hope

my dream of owning a bicycle will be realized in the shortest possible time.

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篇16:初中三年级学生英语

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The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival comes in winter。 It is the most important traditional festival in China。

People usually go home to spend the festival with their family。 They have a big family get-together。 The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival。 They also visit their friends and relatives。

Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play。

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篇17:英语四级写作高分方法集锦

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【提要】英语四六级四级信息 : 20176月英语四级写作高分黄金句式【1】

▌列举法

列举法是四级写作中常用的方法,一般用first, second等一系列标志词引出原因或者可能的影响等。列举法常用的素材有:

引出列举

1. There may be a combination of factors which contribute to/are responsible for/can explain ______. 也许有一些因素造成/可以解释______。

2. There are probably three/many/several/a variety of reasons for this dramatic/significant increase/decline in ______.引起______显著增长/下降的原因有三个/许多/几个/很多。

3. Some reasons can explain this trend. 一些原因可以解释这一趋势。

4. Why ______ ?为什么______?

5. The causes of ______ are varied. They include______ , perhaps the main cause is ______. 造成______的原因有很多,包括______,主要原因可能是______。

6. The reason for this is not far to seek. 这一问题的原因不难发现。

7. It is no easy task to identify the reasons for this phenomenon which involves several complicated factors. 要找出这一现象的原因并非易事,因为它涉及若干复杂的因素。

8. There are numerous reasons why ______, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here. ______的原因有很多,这里我只想探讨其中几个最重要的原因。

9. There are many reasons responsible for this phenomenon, and the following are the typical ones. 导致这种现象的原因有很多,以下是其中比较有代表性的。

10. There are many reasons explaining this case. As for me, I regard the following as the typical ones. 有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而言,我认为以下原因比较典型。

11. A number of factors could account for/contribute to/lead to/result in the change of ______. 引起______变化的因素有很多。

分条列举

1. In the first place, ______. In the second place______ .首先,______。其次,______。

2. First,______ . Second, ______ . 首先,______。其次,______。

3. To begin with, ______. Secondly, ______. Last but not least, ______.首先,______。其次,______。最后但并不是最不重要的,______。

4. The first reason is that ______. The second one is ______. The third is ______. 第一个原因是______。第二个原因是______。第三个原因是______。

5. First of all, ______. Secondly,______ . Furthermore,______ .首先,______。其次,______。另外,______。

6. For one thing, ______. For another, ______.一方面,______。另一方面,______。

7. Firstly, ______. Secondly, ______. Thirdly, ______.首先,______。其次,______。再次,______。

8. Another reason why I disagree with the above statements is that I believe______.我不同意上述观点的另一个原因是我认为______。

▌对比法

对比法是指通过对比两种截然不同的观点来陈述其中的利弊,从而得出自己的结论。对比法常用的素材有:

1. The advantages gained in ______ outweigh/are much g

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篇18:初中英语作文:改变自己的生活方式

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I like stay late at night and stay in bed late next morning. Usually, I won’t go to the bed before one o’clock. When my clock alarms the next morning, I have to struggle for a long time to get up.

Most of the time, I feel tired before class is over.

So sometimes I can’t catch with my teacher, because I can’t focus my mind.

And I don’t like vegetable. Mostly I only eat meat. I am a little fat maybe because of that. I realize my life style is unhealthy. I need to change it. I can’t sleep so late in the evening and should eat more vegetable. If I change my life style, I can make my life more wonderful.

我喜欢晚睡,第二天早上又喜欢睡懒觉。通常,不到一点我是不会去睡觉的。第二天我的闹钟响的时候,我都要挣扎很久才起来。大部分时间,在下课前我就很累了。所以有时我都赶不上老师的进度,因为我无法专心。我还不喜欢吃蔬菜。我只吃肉。可能是因为这个原因我有点胖。我意识到我的生活方式是不健康的。我要去改变。我晚上不能睡太晚,而且要多吃蔬菜。如果我改变自己的生活方式,我的生活会更加精彩的。

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篇19:初中英语作文大全

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Recently, I saw an interested video that was shot by a young foreigner. He

played two roles-a Chinese mother and an American mother. He imitated the

reaction about how the mothers treated their children in education. It was so

obvious that Chinese mothers took care of their children all the time and they

would do all the things for them. While the American mothers focused on the

childrens independence. They would ask the kids to do housework and when they

grew up, they asked the kids to move out. Both parents showed different ways to

love their children and their love was equal, for every mother is a great

heroine.

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篇20:关于故宫的英语作文初中

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The imperial palace, also known as the Forbidden City, is the imperial

palace of the Ming and qing dynasties, which is the largest and most complete

ancient architectural complex in China. I especially want to know the

architecture of ancient palaces and the living environment of ancient

emperors.

One weekend in the golden autumn, the sun is shining and the autumn wind is

crisp. My mother and I went to visit the Palace Museum in the center of the

city. I was very happy.

Enter the gate of the Forbidden City, "wow! Its so big here!" I couldnt

help it. The mother said, "the most spectacular is still in the back!" We first

visited the architectural model of the imperial palace and its construction. I

know that the imperial palace covers an area of over 720,000 square meters, with

more than 9,000 rooms, all wooden structures, and all the wooden structures have

no nails. The palace is the blue and white stone base, the tall roof, the yellow

glazed tile, the pattern of the dragon everywhere, and decorated with the

brilliant color of the golden wall. I observed all the palaces, and found that

the palaces were lined up along the north-south axis, and spread out to the

sides, to the north and south, and to the right and left. I told mom, I found

mother listen to nod a smile, said: "the central axis not only in the Forbidden

City, and nanda YongDingMen, north to the drum tower, almost throughout the

whole city. Its magnificent, well-planned and spectacular.

We have been visiting the taihe temple from the imperial garden. What a

breathtaking view! In the Forbidden City, the most striking is the "three halls"

: the hall of supreme harmony, the hall of harmony, the hall of protection and

the temple. They are all built on the 8-meter-high base of the white jade, which

looks like the qiong yuyu in the myth. The first hall of supreme harmony was the

most magnificent building. People called it the "throne room". It was the place

where the emperor held the grand ceremony. It is 28 meters high, 63 meters, 35

meters north and south, and a large pillar with a diameter of 1 meter. Among

them, six large pillars, one meter in diameter around the throne, are flat

dragon pillars of leached gold. The throne is located at the base of the two

meters high in the temple, with the graceful crane and the top of the furnace,

followed by a carefully carved screen. The whole hall is decorated with golden

walls, which are both majestic and magnificent. The hall of neutralization was

the place where the emperor went to the hall of supreme harmony to take a rest

and exercise etiquette. Baohe and the temple are the place where the emperor

gives banquet to the king of the foreign land every New Year. This is just the

palace buildings, and house decoration is numerous, the rarities of the mother

said: "these treasures is only part of it, when Chiang kai-shek fled to Taiwan

carried away many treasure palace, there are some loss in a foreign country". I

feel sorry for the loss of these treasures. When will these lost treasures

return to the embrace of the motherland? I am looking forward to the reunion of

Taiwan and mainland as soon as possible.

The visit of the Forbidden City made me linger. The Palace Museum is an

unparalleled masterpiece. It is a miracle. Our five thousand years of Chinese

culture are profound and profound, and we should be proud and proud to have

built such a magnificent palace for the ancients. At the same time, we also have

the responsibility to protect these cultural relics from destruction, so that

the five thousand years of splendid civilization of the motherland will be

handed down.

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