淮安英语中考作文评分标准（精彩20篇）

桑德斯上校退休后拥有的所有财产只是一家靠在高速公路旁的小饭店。饭店虽小，但颇具特色，与众不同。可最受欢迎的、也是客人最爱吃的一道菜就是他发明烹制的香酥可口的炸鸡，仅此就给他带来了一笔可观的财富。多年来，他的客人一直对他烹制的炸鸡赞赏有加。可是令他万万没想到的是，由于高速公路改道别处，饭店的生意突然间也一落千丈，最后只好关门歇业。被逼无奈，桑德斯上校决定向其他饭店出售他制作炸鸡的配方，以换取微薄的回报。

在推销的过程中，没有一家饭店愿意购买他的配方，并且还不时地嘲笑他。一个人在任何年龄被人嘲笑都不是件令人愉快的事，更何况到了退休的年龄还被人嘲笑，这就更令人难以接受了。而这恰恰发生在了桑德斯上校身上。他不但被人嘲笑并且接连不断地被人拒绝，可见这些经历对他的影响有多么巨大。但他始终没有放弃，在没有找到买主之前，他开着车走遍了全国，吃住都在车上，就在被别人拒绝了1009次后，才有人终于同意采纳他的想法，购买他的配方。从此后他的连锁店遍布全世界;也被载入了商业史册。这就是肯德基的由来。

人们为了纪念这位桑德斯上校，就在所有的肯德基店前树立一尊他的塑像，以此作为肯德基的形象品牌。俗话说：“神枪手是一枪一枪打出来的!”缺乏坚持不懈的毅力或者认为自己不能得到自己想要的东西，这两者都是阻碍大多数人勇于改变的关键原因。如果你能够紧紧抓住自己的目标不放并坚持不懈，那么很快你就会超过大多数人。记住，是你掌握着自己的生活。如果你一心想达到一个目标，就一定会有办法取得成功。

导语：随着环境污染问题日益加剧，我们每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals. Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind. Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important elent of it. Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment.

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人与环境是和谐相处的,我们生存在地球上,人是自然之子,而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者,大家都知道,人类只有一个地球,地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞,如果我们把它损坏了,破坏了大自然的组织,等 于消灭人类。因此,环境要与社会公德联系起来,与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务。

1 The Chinese government pays great attention to environmental problems arising from China‘s population growth and economic development.

中国政府非常重视因人口增长和经济发展而出现的环境问题。

2 While developing its economy， China will handle properly the relationship among the population， natural resources and the environment.

中国在发展经济的同时，将处理好与人口、资源和环境的关系。

3 China relies on improving supervision， management and technological progress to promote environmental protection.

中国依靠强化监督管理和技术进步手段推动环境保护事业发展。

(注意：汉译英时的逻辑顺序)

4 Land， arable land in particular， should be used reasonably and economically. Strong measures will be taken to strengthen the building of the urban environmental infrastructure， regulate industrial structure and lay-out， shun the unpromising way of “pollution first， treatment afterwards”， and strengthen prevention and control of the pollution in major river valleys to ensure the security of the drinking water of the inhabitants.

合理和节约利用土地尤其是耕地资源，加强城市环境基础设施建设，规划产业结构和布局，避免“先污染后治理”的老路。加强流域污染防治，保证居民饮水安全。

(注意：这个句子比较长，首先要注意不要漏翻，再者要注意一些专有名词的译法，不要出现逻辑错误)

5 Measures should be taken to stop predatory development， and return to lakes， forests and grasslands what has been taken from them， vigorously plant trees and grass， treat soil erosion， prevent and control desertification， establish ecological agriculture， strengthen the protection of natural resources such as arable land， water， forest， grassland and biological species， and the conservation of bio-diversity.

改变掠夺性经营开发方式，有计划地退耕还湖、还林、还草，大力开展植树造林，治理水土流失，防止沙漠化，建立生态农业，加强耕地、水源、森林、草场、物种等自然资源和生物多样性保护。

(注意：这个句子比较长，要注意专业名词的翻法)

6 To economize on water， land， power， raw materials， grains and other resources.

节水、节地、节能、节材、节粮以及节约其他各种资源。

7 To endeavor to obtain high socio-economic benefits and a well-preserved environment with less investment and less consumption of resources.

努力做到投资少、消耗资源少，而经济社会效益高、环境保护好。

新的英语课程标准引发了一系列变化，首先加强了指导性和可操作性；其次体现语言学习的规律和渐进性；再次体现了弹性和选择；第四有的地方降低了难度；第五有的地方提高了要求。对教学模式和教师本人提出了新的挑战,同时也提供了新的发展空间。

一、教师是活动的指导者，学生是活动的主体

《英语课程标准》的基本理念中提到“让学生在教师指导下，通过感知、体验、实践、参与和合作探究等活动方式，实现任务的目标，感受成功。学生在学习过程中进行情感态度和学习策略的调整，以形成积极的学习态度，促进语言实际运用能力的提高。”

这就要求我们英语老师要掌握一定的课堂和课外教学艺术，开展集趣味、知识、娱乐、教育于一体的英语活动，能为学生提供尽可能多的语言实践机会。教师要用直观形象的形体语言，丰富多彩的表情，幽默风趣的语言表达，使学生在轻松、愉快、和谐的氛围中复习旧知，学习新知，提高学习信心。

教学中教师要根据教学目标，学生的需要和客观条件，创造性地探索有效的教学方法，要学会活用教法突破难点。我们可以鼓励学生大胆地模仿，带表情说句子。如“I am hungry.”（可以作饥饿状）；“I am thirty.”（可以作口渴状）。在教单词或句子时，我们老师可以带领学生做动作，甚至做夸张的动作或用夸张的朗读语调，孩子们特别喜欢。“big”两手张开画个大圈，“small”用两手指做个特别小的小圈，“strong”出示手臂，并鼓起肌肉，“thin”做一个瘦的动作。学完单词后，老师做出动作，学生就会说出这个单词。

二、多用评价语，真诚激励。

《英语课程标准》的基本理念中对评价案例进行了重新整合和调整，补充了大量的可操作性比较强的评价方式和方法，提到“英语教学中提倡过程性评价方式，把对学生的评价贯穿到平常的学习过程之中。注重培养和激发学生学习的积极性和自信心。”

因为每个学生，都渴望得到老师的重视和肯定，渴望得到激励和赞许。让每个学生都能享受到鼓励、温暖的阳光，这样无论哪种知识水平、能力、层次的学生都能获得心理上的满足，从而使学生有一种积极向上的源动力。所以教师的评价语应丰富多彩，真诚激励。下面的句子应该多说：Good! Great! Wonderful! You are clever! Don’t worry!

三、面向全体学生、尊重学生的自主选择

《英语课程标准》的教学建议中提到“尊重每个学生，建立融洽、民主的师生交流渠道。”平时学生如果主动帮我拿教具，我会向他致谢“Thank you”，若不小心撞到了学生，我会很抱歉地道声“Sorry”……虽然是点点滴滴的小事情小细节，但我希望从中带给学生“师生平等”的观念。

老师因为尊重学生而更关注他们的个性发展，学生因为受到老师的尊重会更乐意亲近老师，也就更加尊敬老师，这种心灵上的沟通和交流，一旦形成健康的双向互动，正面效应就会成倍增长，师生关系也会更加和谐地向前发展。

总之，新课程下的课堂教学，应是通过师生互动、学生之间的互动，共同发展的课堂。它既注重了知识的生成过程，又注重了学生的情感体验和能力的培养。因此，我们在教学中对教材的处理、教学过程的设计以及评价的方式都要以学生的发展为中心，以提高学生的全面发展为宗旨，这才是课改的最终目标。

[英语课程标准的基本理念读后感

中考英语作文评分标准一般分为三类：一等作文、二等作文和三等作文。为了让不同层次的学生在作文得分率上都能有所提高，现对各类作文进行分析，找出相应的得分秘诀。下面说说中考英语一等作文的写作方法。

一、中考英语一等作文的评分标准

内容完整，具体，丰富，包含所有要点，能够围绕内容适当发挥，语句流畅，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连续，层次分明，表达清楚，无语法错误，书写规范，标点正确，计满分。

二、中考英语一等作文的写作要求

(一)确保作文的完整性，关注评卷第一印象

考试的时候，要尽量留出充足的时间写作文。这样，我们才能有足够的时间去构思，打草稿。由于评卷是人工进行的，所以作文留给人的第一印象是很重要的，从以往经验看，第一印象至少占1分，那些卷面整洁，文字自然流畅，书写工整，标点符号正确的非常“吃香”，所以，大家平时就应该注意作文的“形象”，“仪表”一定要保证自己看卷面时觉得舒服，那么中考得高分就不是一句空话了。

不论做哪种题目，审题是最关键的，写好中考作文更是这样!要做到内容完整，我们首先要认真看好题目的要求，分析题目到底要我们写什么。比如要求我们用第三人称来写作，如果审题没有审好，用了第一人称，那么，作文一定得不到满分，说不定还是最差的。所以，要重视审题，按题目的具体要求进行构思。中考书面表达基本上都是提示性作文(包括看图作文)，因此要保证运用所有的提示要点，进行合理的发挥，为写下满分作文打好基础。

(二)打好草稿质量，全面留意扣主题

写好中考英语一等作文除了做到上面讲的内容之外，还要做到以下几点：

1. 要做到内容具体。中考提示性作文都有具体的内容和要求，写作时只要按规定将作文写出来，得分就不难，但是要想得满分，必须做到围绕内容适当发挥，并且要突出文章的主题，体现实际的中心思想。

2. 要做到语句流畅。这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的学习过程中，注意一些常用句式的表达方法。要尽量使用自己最熟悉的词语和句型，要尽量避免汉语式的表达方式。要注意句子之间的连贯性，不仅仅从语法上，更主要的是从句意上，把握句子的连贯性。

3. 要做到层次分明。写文章不都是一个段落，一个模式，要根据文章的具体需要，来确定文章究竟用几个段落，作文要讲究层次分明，突出主题。

4. 要按规定的词数书写。中考提示作文都有具体的词数要求，写作时要注意数一数所用的单词数量，词数过多或过少都会丢分。

5. 最后要注意检查。写完作文不是没事可做，最后一步就是细心检查，这很关键。检查时要从题目要求开始，到具体内容无误结束。保证词语，句型的运用正确，标点运用得当等等，都是重点检查的项目，直到在一定的时间之内完成好作文，不留遗憾为止。

1．习惯是养成的；

2．好习惯是福气；

3．坏习惯必须克服。

[写作导航]习惯不论好坏都是后天形成的，一旦形成，就很难改变；好习惯是祝福，许多成功人士都承认守时、早起、诚实和毅力等是早期形成的；坏习惯如粗鲁、懒惰、说谎、偷盗和诽谤等恶习是我们应努力避免的。

[范文]

Habits, whether good or bad, are generally acquired. When a person does a certain thing once and again, he is impelled by some unseen force to do the same thing repeatedly; thus a habit is formed. Once a habit is formed, it is difficult, and sometimes impossible, to shake it off. It is therefore very important that we should take great care in the formation of habits. Some bad habits formed in childhood may remain lifetime. Older persons also form bad habits, and in some cases they are ruined by these bad habits.

There are good habits which, when formed in early life, are great blessings. Many successful people declare that they owe much of their success and prosperity to the formation of such good habits as punctuality, honesty, and perseverance in early life.

Such habits as rudeness, laziness, stealing and slandering are bad habits. If we want to be useful to society, we ought to keep away from ail these vices, and strive to acquire those habits that are proven to be good for ourselves and others.

一、开头句型选择

1、关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ 。Some people suggest that____。

2、俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______。 Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.

3、现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today， ____， which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First， ____ Second，____。 What makes things worse is that______。

4、现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______。 Many people like ______because ______。 Besides，______。

5、任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6、关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them，_____。

7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious.

8、……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9、……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢?

According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______while. Obviously，______，but why?

11、Recently， the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.

最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。

12、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。

13、Nowadays，(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

如今，(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。

14、With the development of science and technology， more and more people believe that…

随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…

二、中间过渡篇

引出不同观点：

1、People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… 。 However， others believe that…。

人们对…的观点因人而异。有些人认为…。。 然而其他人却认为...

2、People may have different opinions on…

人们对…可能会有不同的见解。

3、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.

人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。

4、There are different opinions among people as to…

关于…。 人们的观点大不相同。

5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure)。

对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。

6、A lot of people seem to think that…

很多人似乎认为…

7、It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…

人们一般认为…

8、Many people insist that…

很多人坚持认为…( 励

9. 宾语从句：我认为，…… / 我认为……不 I think / I dont think that …

我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …

例：He doesnt think I should stop him joining the club.他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。

10. Since + 主语+ 过去式， 主语 + 现在完成式。

例：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中，他就一直很用功。

11. how 引导的感叹句

例：那至少可以证明你很诚实。At least it will prove how honest you are. 8. 状语从句

A)如果你不……，你就会…… If you dont …， youll …

例：If you dont keep working hard, youll lose the chance. 如果你不坚持努力工作，你就会失去这次机会。

B) 如此 ……，以至于…… so … that …

例：At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up. 当时，我非常伤心，最后都想放弃了。

三、结尾句型

1、Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论…

2、Taking into account all these factors， we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…

考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论…

3、Hence/Therefore， we’d better come to the conclusion that…

因此，我们最好得出这样的结论…

4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。

5、All in all， we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之，我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。

6、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)。

该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。

7、It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳…的建议，并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

8、不用说…… It goes without saying that = It is obvious that …

例：不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

9、……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that … ……

是重要的 It is important(for sb.) to do / that … ……

是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that … ……

是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …

例：It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

It is proper that we (should)keep the public places clean. 我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

导语：正如我们所知道的，安全是我们生活中最重要的东西。所以，我们应该尽力确保我们的安全。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

建设平安校园是我们每个人的责任与义务。作为一名学生，我们更应该珍惜自己的生命，更应该注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，并担任校学生会主席，请你就安全问题，向全校学生发出倡议，写一封安全倡议书。

内容提示：(1)不带管制刀具到学校;(2)不私自下河洗澡;(3)不打架;(4)上学放学的途中应该注意安全;(5)遇紧急情况，立即报告警察或老师。

参考词汇：管制刀具：restricted knives or things;洗澡：have a bath;打架：fight;紧急情况：emergency;交通安全：pay attention to the traffic。

写作要求：(1)用词恰当，要点全面，层次清晰，书写规范。(2)可适当发挥，80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(3)严禁出现自己的真实姓名和学校等相关信息。

★ 范文

Dear students,

As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.

We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents’ permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.

In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.

Yours,

Li Hua

【汉语翻译】

亲爱的同学们，

正如我们所知道的，安全是我们生活中最重要的东西。所以，我们应该尽力确保我们的安全。

我们不能带限制的刀子或东西到我们的学校，因为这些东西可能会导致严重的问题。未经父母允许，不得在江河或池塘内洗澡。我们应该友好地对待别人，所以强烈禁止打架。在上学或回家的路上，一定要注意交通。此外，如果我们遇到紧急情况，我们必须向警察或我们的老师求助。

总之，这些安全规则可以使我们生活在和平。

你的好朋友，

李华

1、Taking all these factors into consideration， we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论…

2、Taking into account all these factors， we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…

考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论…

3、Hence/Therefore， we’d better come to the conclusion that…

因此，我们最好得出这样的结论…

4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问，跳槽有优点也有缺点。

5、All in all， we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之，我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。

6、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)。

该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。

7、It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳…的建议，并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

Olympic Games is the biggest event for the players, because it holds every four years. I remembered that my father watched the games at midnight many years ago, and I did not understand why he was so crazy about it. Now I watched the game with him and I started to appreciate the charm of sports. No matter what the result is, standing in the biggest stage and competing with the greatest rivals make the players feel proud. They chase to be higher, stronger and faster and these are the spirit of Olympic Games. When the audience see the players break the record and challenge human being’s limitation, how excited it is.

奥运会对于运动员来说是最大的大事，因为它每四年才举行一次。我记得我的父亲很多年前在午夜看奥运会，我不明白他为什么那么的疯狂。现在我和他一起看了比赛，我开始体会到体育的魅力。不管结果怎么样，站在最大的舞台与最伟大的对手竞赛使运动员们感到骄傲。他们追求更高、更强、更快，这也是奥运会的精神。当观众看到运动员们打破记录，挑战局限性时，是多么的令人兴奋啊。

一、六分：

对事件的复杂性的分析清楚有力;熟练驾驭有效写作的要素。

a)就某事件展开分析和阐述自己观点时摆出有洞察力的原因或有说服力的事例。

b)结构清晰。

c)对于语言有很好的掌握。

d)文章完全符合标准书面英语规范，但可能会有小错误。

二、五分：

对事件的复杂性有充分的分析;很好地掌握了有效写作的要素。

a)阐述观点时能运用恰当有力的理由/或事例。

b)结构较清晰。

c)对于语言有良好的掌握。

三、四分：

对事件的复杂性有一定的分析;对写作的要素有一定的掌握。

a)阐述观点时能举出与事件相关的理由/或事例。

b)结构基本合理。

c)对于语言有一定的掌握，但句法缺乏多样性。

[gmat作文考试的具体评分标准

The desire for good health is universal. In our competitive society it is important to maintain good health.

On the one hand, people with good health can do work with full confidence and their progress in work in turn contributes to their health and happiness.

On the other hand, a sick person is usually not interested in everything around him and therefore he loses many opportunities to become successful.

There are many ways to keep it. First, those who are always on the go from morning till night should find time to relax because too much stress will affect their health. Second, enough time should be left for sleep because that will help one become rested and refreshed.

Finally, regular physical exercises benefit one‘s health a lot. So one should always keep in mind that a certain amount of exercise is not a waste of time.As for me, I like playing tennis in the morning. I also attach much

【预测题目】

假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。

提示词语：listen to，mother’s love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile

写作要求：

语句通顺，书写工整;

可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;

词数在60-80左右。

Dear Han Mei，

I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me," Be careful while crossing the street.”“Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school?” And so on. I’m annoyed(烦恼). What shall I do?

Alice

【参考范文】

Dear Alice，

As a teenager,I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.

Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it’s not a good way, but it shows your mother’s love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother’s，you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about. If your mother doesn’t take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile.

I hope what I say here can help you a lot.

Yours

Han Mei

【参考译文】

亲爱的爱丽丝，

作为一个少年，我遇到了和你一样的问题。但现在我可以更好地与我的母亲。这里有一些想法给你。

你妈妈说话多，因为她在乎你。也许这不是一个好方法，但它显示了你母亲的爱。所以我认为你应该听她的。如果你的意见和你母亲的不同，你可以和她交流，告诉她你在想什么。如果你的妈妈不接受你的建议，保持沉默，给她一个微笑。

我希望我在这里说的能帮到你很多。

你的好朋友，

韩梅

Directions： You are allowed 40 minutes to write an essay no less than 150 words on the following topic.

1.some emphasize book knowledge

2.others stress practical experience

3.which one is more important？ Give your reasons to illustrate your opinion.

范文：

Which is more important in life， knowledge from the books you read， or personal experience you gain in reality？ The answer may vary from person to person. The young， educated may emphasize the former， and the old may stress the later. But in my opinion， they are of the same importance.

Experience is priceless. How to become an efficient secretary？ How to prepare for your first child to come into the world？ There is so much experience we need in careers， in life and even in academic studies. It helps one deal with the problems with ease and confidence. Especially activities and to accumulate experience of different kinds is more crucial.

Experience， however， is limited in terms of time and space. For one thing， it is impossible for anyone to experience all the important events and meet all the famous people. For another， as the speed with which skills are obsolete and new problems crop up is unprecedented because of the fast development of society， experience is far less adequate. Depending too much on it only leads to narrow-mindedness and prejudice.

One way to compensate for it is to read books. Books of various kinds can bring us almost unlimited additional experience. From books you can not only trace back to the wisdom of our antecedents， but keep up with the latest developments of science and technology. To be sure， it＇s secondhand experience. But it is the ideal supplement to our own limited experience. Few of us can travel around the world， or live long beyond one hundred years， but all of us can live many lives by reading books.

Both book knowledge and personal experience are essential. While experience makes one more resourceful， book knowledge makes one more learned.

[中考英语作文Knowledge or Experience知识或经验

初中生活马上就要结束了，你有什么感想呢?下面是语文迷为大家整理提供的毕业感想的作文，希望对你有帮助。

初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。

提示词语： three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry

How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I’ve learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.

环保是一个热点话题，下面语文迷网整理提供了关于环保的英语写作素材，希望对你有帮助。

环保的英语名言

1、 Dont litter the floor.不随地扔垃圾。

2、 Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.许多国家制定了法律来保护大气、森林和海洋资源，制止环境污染。

3、 Please keep off the grass.不要践踏草坪。

4、 It’s our duty to save water节约水是我们每个人的责任。

5、 Safety First.安全第一。

6、 Earth is our home, you rely on green.地球是我家，绿化靠大家。

7、 Environmental problems directly affect the quality of peoples lives.环境问题直接影响人们的生活质量。

8、 Lets do our best to make it more beautiful.让我们尽力让它更美丽。

9、 If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.如果我们不节约水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪。

10、 Handle with Care.小心轻放。

11、 No climbing.禁止攀爬。

12、 Save the earth, Our Only Home.保护地球，我们唯一的家。

13、 As we know , water is very important to man.我们知道，水对人类来说是非常的重要。

14、 Most environmental litigation involves disputes with governmental agencies.许多环保诉讼都涉及与政府机构的争端。

15、 Do not throw rubbish onto the ground. Do not waste water. Use both sides of paper when you write. Stop using plastic bags for shopping. Make classrooms less noisy.不要在地上扔垃圾。不要浪费水。当你写字时要在纸的两面都要写。停止使用塑料袋去购物。减少教室里德吵闹声。

16、 The most important question in the world today is pollution.当今世界最重要的话题就是污染问题。

17、 No one can live without water or air.没有人能离开水和空气生存。

18、 We should stop factories from producing harmful gases.我们应该阻止工厂生产有害气体。

19、 Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。

20、 Without the shade from trees, Earth would get too hot to live on.没有了树荫，地球将会变得太热而不能生存。

21、 We need to protect Earth because it is our home.我们需要保护地球因为它是我们的家。

22、 Discharge pipes directly take pollutants away from the plant into the river.排泄管道直接将污染物从工厂排入河流。

23、 Please shut the door after you.出入请关门。

24、 We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future为了将来我们的生活过得更好、更加健康我们应该种更多的树。

环保的词汇

21世纪议程：Agenda 21世界环境日(6月5日)：World Environment Day (June 5th each year)

世界环境日主题：World Environment Day Themes冰川消融，后果堪忧!(2007年)Melting Ice–a Hot Topic!

莫使旱地变荒漠!(2006年)Deserts and Desertification–Dont Desert Drylands!

营造绿色城市，呵护地球家园!(2005年)Green Cities – Plan for the Planet!

海洋存亡，匹夫有责!(2004年)Wanted! Seas and Oceans – Dead or Alive!

水——二十亿人生命之所系!(2003年)Water - Two Billion People are Dying for It!

让地球充满生机!(2002年)Give Earth a Chance!

世间万物，生命之网!(2001年)Connect with the World Wide Web of life!

环境千年-行动起来吧!(2000年)The Environment Millennium - Time to Act!

拯救地球就是拯救未来!(1999年)Our Earth - Our Future - Just Save It!

为了地球上的生命-拯救我们的海洋!(1998年) For Life on Earth - Save Our Seas!

为了地球上的生命!(1997)For Life on Earth我们的地球、居住地、家园：(1996)Our Earth， Our Habitat， Our Home国际生物多样性日(12月29日)：International Biodiversity Day (29 December)

世界水日(3月22日)：World Water Day (22 March)

世界气象日(3月23日)：World Meteorological Day (23 March)

世界海洋日(6月8日)：World Oceans Day (8 June)

植树节(3月12日)：Arbor Day (12 March)

英语写作是中考学生的一个盲点，缺乏对英语写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢?下面是YJBYS网作文频道为大家整理的英语写作指导。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、习作点评

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that，so，little by little，when，so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，became interested in，come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily，great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins，and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

1 the best season 最好的季节

Summer is the great season for all sports in the open air. It is the season for baseball which is often called the national sport because of its popularity. I usually watch television and read the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the newspaper reports about the baseball results of the little leagues.

During the summer I like to go to the beach often because it is very close to my home in the village. I usually go there bur in the summer vacation to relax after many months in school in the city. I feel very comfortable with the familiar quiet of the villagers.

夏天是户外运动最好的季节。这是个打棒球季节，通常被国家体育称为受欢迎程度的季节。我通常看电视和读有关棒球比赛结果的报纸报道。

在夏天，我喜欢经常去海滩，因为它离我家很近。我通常在暑假去城市放松。我觉得熟悉的村民的平静让我很舒服。

2 Summer Camp 夏令营

July 20,20xx

I went to summer camp on vacation. On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. The water was warm and we had great fun. Then the next day, we went to the mountains. There were many trees and I really enjoyed them. On the last day, we had a great party. We sang and danced happily. We didn’t want to leave the friends and the teachers. I hope I can go to summer camp again next year.

我去夏令营度假。第一天，我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天，所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的，我们玩得很开心。然后第二天，我们去了山区。有许多树木，我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天，我们有一个盛大的派对。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开朋友和老师。我希望明年我可以再次去夏令营。

3 Unforgettable summer vacation 难忘的暑假

I think this summer over a very meaningful day,in addition to the study of computers outside,also tried a new aerobic exercise -YOGA,I love this sport, so I learned an optimistic face life,but also to correct my bad shape,for my future learning and life will be very helpful,I love YOGA,with the hope more people will join me to try this new movement.

今年暑假过得非常有意义

我觉得今年暑假过的非常有意义，每天除了学习计算机以外还尝试了新的有氧运动-YOGA，我非常热爱这项运动，它让我学会了乐观的面对生活，还纠正了我的不良体形，对我今后的学习及生活都有很大的帮助，我爱YOGA，希望有更多的人和我一起尝试这项新的运动。初中英语作文难忘的暑假

4 visitng 参观

Ladies and gentlemen,

Welcome to Heyuan, now let me introduce our city — Heyuan to you. Heyuan is a city with a long history. It is in the northeast of Guangdong and 198 kilometres away from Guangzhou. It has a population of 3,240,000.

There are many places of interest in Heyuan, such as Sujiawei Wanlu Lake and so on. Wanlu Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating, go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can go and visit Heyuan Museum. There you can see a lot of dinosaur egg fossils.

I hope you can enjoy yourselves in Heyuan.

Thank you.

女士们,先生们,

欢迎来到河源市,现在让我向你介绍我们的城市——河源市。河源市是一个有着悠久历史的城市。在广东的东北部,离广州198公里。它有3240000人口。

在河源市有许多名胜,如Sujiawei，万绿湖等等。万绿湖是一个美丽的地方。水是干净的,没有污染。有各种各样的鱼。你可以去划船,钓鱼,野餐。这真的是一个好地方可以度过你的假期。此外,你可以去参观河源市博物馆。在那里你可以看到很多恐龙蛋化石。

我希望你能在河源市玩得愉快。

谢谢你们！

5 My Summer Vacation 我的暑假

This is my summer vacation. I intend to finish the operation. Then, take a look at Chinas famous novel. Look at some day. Of course, also want to play with the computer, watch TV. Early every morning to get up and running to run, do other sports. But it is conducive to our body! But one thing should not be forgotten. must help parents do the housework! My holiday arrangements like? something good? give suggestions?

这就是我的暑假。我打算完成作业。然后，看中国的著名小说。看书看一些日子。当然，也要玩电脑，看电视。每天早上早早起床跑步，做其他运动。这有利于我们的身体！但有一件事不应该被忘记。必须帮助父母做家务！我的假期安排呢？好的东西？给点建议？

6 I enjoy the rain 我喜欢下雨

That was a morning in the early of June. I took a bus to my school in the suburb which was surrounded by rice paddies and ponds. The sky was gray with the gloomy clouds congregating gradually along the far eastern horizon. "There must be a heavy rain soon." I spoke to myself.

When I hurried into the classroom, the sky, gray before, was shrouded now by black clouds, darken to twilight, I felt quite stuffy, while it was quite calm, without wind. I saw the leaves of trees and grass static, which seem to await something tohappen. Several minutes later, I saw the lightening split the clouds and heard the thunders following. Suddenly, the curtain of rain fell and the wind blew. soon the grass flattened under the wind and the rain. With the rain forming like a fog, the sky became bright. I took several deep breathes. I felt comfortable.

The heavy rain lasted three hours and stopped when the class was over. The air was so fresh and the sky was so clear. I felt like a new man myself.

那是6月初的一天早上，我乘汽车去郊区的学校上课，学校四周是稻田和鱼塘。天空是灰色的，在遥远的东方地平线上有阴云在慢慢汇聚。我心想：“要下大雨了。”

当我匆忙走进教室时，原本灰色的天空已被黑云笼罩，像黄昏。我感到气闷，而周围一切都很静，没有任何声音，没有风。我看到树叶和草一动不动，像等着什么事情发生。几分钟之后，我看到闪电撕开云层，听到随之而来的雷声。突然，大雨倾盆，风也起了。草在风雨中倒伏。随着雨下成了雾状，天空开始放亮，我深吸了几口气，舒服多了。

大雨下了三个小时，下课的时间停了，空气那么新鲜，天气那么晴朗，我感觉像换了一个人似的。

Low carbon environmental protection starts from me In order to further the implementation of green education plan, improving our school teachers and students practice ability of green environmental protection, promote green development in our school, the school and group in the school moral education carried out to learn from the German schoolchildren diary of green environmental protection initiatives, and organize the children learn German elementary students environmental protection consciousness, strengthen the understanding of the green environmental protection.

Each grade has conducted a diversity of activities: one, two, three grade children completed a small environmental protection knowledge test, for all our children to understand the importance of low carbon, environmental protection; Four, grade six carried out to learn from the German schoolchildren diary of green environmental protection of the essay competition; Fifth grade was carried out to learn from the German schoolchildren diary of green environmental protection in order to "green, environmental protection" as the theme of creative copies out the newspaper.

This activity to further strengthen the consciousness formation of the students in our school environmental education, innovative the way students habits to develop education. In each child long growth formed the scenery along the road!

低碳环保从我做起 为了深入实施绿色教育计划，提升我校师生的绿色环保实践能力，促进我校绿色发展，学校德育办和大队部在全校开展了向《德国小学生的绿色环保日记》学习的倡议，并组织孩子们认真学习德国小学生的环保意识，增强做好绿色环保的认识。

各年级开展了丰富多彩的活动：其中一、二、三年级的孩子们完成了环保小知识的测验，让我们所有的孩子都了解了低碳、环保的重要性;四、六年级开展了向《德国小学生的绿色环保日记》学习的征文比赛;五年级开展了向《德国小学生的绿色环保日记》学习的以“绿色，环保”为主题的创意手抄报活动。

本次活动进一步加强了我校学生环保意识的养成教育，创新了学生行为习惯养成教育的方法。在每一个孩子漫漫成长的道路上形成了一道风景!

[适用话题]“财富”“我有一个梦”“慈善”“奉献”等。

Money Everything?(金钱就是一切吗?)

At present some people think that money is everything. They say that you can do everything if you have money. You can live in a beautiful house, keep a luxurious ear and have all sorts of delicious food.

I dont think so. Indeed, money can buy a lot of things we need. But there are many, many wonderful things in the world that cannot be bough/; with money.

For example, knowledge cannot be bought with money. One cannot be rich in knowledge unless he studies hard. Time cannot be bought with money, either. Who can buy even a second with money?

There are still many other things that cannot be bought with money: health,life, happiness,friendship, love and so on. Just think, if a person hasnt these things at all, is the money still useful?

Now, do you think money is everything?

金钱就是一切吗?

近来，有些人认为钱就是一切，他们说，要是有了钱，你就可以做任何事情，你可以住舒适的房子，坐豪华的轿车，吃可口的饭菜，

我不这么认为。的确，钱可以买到我们需要的许多东西，但是，世界上还有许多美丽的东西用钱是买不到的。

例如，知识是买不来的，一个人要想获得丰富的知识，只有通过艰苦的学习。时间用钱也是

Guyu twenty-four solar term of the sixth year solar term, as the sun reaches 30 degrees for the rain, "rain from the valley". "The filial piety" Qi Wei - aid God said: "after fifteen days Qingming, Guyu Chen refers to the Big Dipper, as, in March, said Yu Sheng hundred valley water is clean."

由于谷雨节气后降雨增多，空气中的湿度逐渐加大，此时我们在养生中应遵遁自然节气的变化，针对其气候特点进行调养。谷雨节气后是神经痛的发病期，如肋间神经痛、坐骨神经痛、三叉神经痛等。同时由于天气转温，人们的室外活动增加，北方地区的桃花、杏花等开放;杨絮、柳絮四处飞扬，过敏体质的朋友应注意防止花粉症及过敏性鼻炎、过敏性哮喘等。在饮食上应减少高蛋白质、高热量食物的摄入。

Because after Guyu solar term rainfall, air humidity gradually increased, so we should change followed the natural solar term in health, nursed back to health according to the climate characteristics. Guyu solar term is the incidence of neuralgia, sciatica, such as intercostal neuralgia, trigeminal neuralgia. At the same time, because of the weather turns warm, peoples outdoor activities increased, the northern region of the peach blossom, apricot blossom is open; Yang Xu catkins, flying around, atopy friend should pay attention to prevent allergy and allergic rhinitis, allergic asthma. In the diet should reduce the intake of high protein, high calorie foods.

春季，肝木旺盛，脾衰弱，谷雨前后15天及清明的最后3天中，脾处于旺盛时期。脾的旺盛会使胃强健起来，从而使消化功能处于旺盛的状态，消化功能旺盛有利于营养的吸收，因此这时正是补身的大好时机。但是补要适当，不宜过，此时进补不能像冬天那样，应适当食用一些补血益气功效的食物。这样不仅可以提高体质，还可为安度盛夏打下基础。谷雨前后还适宜食用一些能够缓解精神压力和调节情绪的食物。多吃一些含B族维生素较多的食物对改善抑郁症有明显的效果。

In the spring, liver wood exuberant, spleen weakness, Guyu before and after 3 days 15 days and the last in the spleen, in a strong period. Spleen stomach the strong will be strong, so that the digestive function in a strong state, strong digestive function is conducive to the absorption of nutrients, so it is a good time to make up the body. But the compensation should be appropriate, should not be too, this time not as winter tonic, should be appropriate to eat some blood and Qi foods. It can not only improve the physique, but also lay the foundation for their summer. Guyu before and after eating some also suitable to relieve mental stress and emotional regulation of food. Eat some more food containing vitamin B has a significant effect on improving the depression.