2020高一英语考试作文（经典20篇）

As the winter vacation is drawing near, I have a plan about my vacation. Im going to do what I want to do. Im going to study harder in order to get good grades in the following term. After finishing all my homework, Im going to enjoy myself in the sea of knowledge. Reading must be a good idea. Im going to keep fit at the same time. Ill get up eary in the morning everyday and play sports. I really love sports. Besides that, Eating a balanced diet is also good for my health. Im going to help my mom and dad with the housework as well in the vacation.Ill learn to cook. As for travelling, Im planning to go to Hainan. But whether going there or not will be decided on the weather.During the vacation,Im going to visit my friends,I really miss them. So you seeThe Winter Holiday I like the winter holiday very much. Though its very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival. I can watch cartoon every day. I neednt go to school frepuently. Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside. With the festival coming,

随着寒假的临近，我有我的假期计划。我要做我想做的事。我要努力学习以取得好成绩在下列术语。我所有的家庭作业完成后，我要去享受自己在知识的海洋。阅读必须是一个好主意。我要保持适合在同一时间。我会在每天早上做运动。我真的很喜欢运动。此外，均衡的饮食也很好对我的健康。我要帮爸爸妈妈做家务在度假。我马上学会做饭。至于旅行，我打算去海南。但不管去那里，或不将取决于天气。在假期中，我要去看望我的朋友，我真的很想念他们。所以你看，寒假我非常喜欢寒假。虽然它很短，我可以享受春节。我可以天天看动画片。我不需要去学校。有时我可以和朋友到外面去玩。随着节日的到来，

I can play all the time. I can play video game with my brother. I am good at playing PC game. So I often beats my brother. Then more and more relative came to my home. We had dinner together. Its so lively that Iam very happy. But I still have to do my homework. During the holiday,I learned a lot. I love the winter holiday.

我可以玩所有的时间。我可以和哥哥一起玩游戏。我擅长打电脑游戏。所以我一直赢。然后越来越多的亲戚来我家。我们一起吃晚餐。这是如此生动，我很高兴。但我仍然要做我的家庭作业。假日期间，我学到了很多。我喜欢冬天的节日。

一轮考试结束了，成绩在意料之中，有点不理想，有一些就应能考的很好的学生，也没有考好，思其原因，也找不到合理的解释，所以我让学生自我反思总结找出原因和不足之处，以下是几个有代表性的几个学生的总结。

魏洁说：“一轮考试的试卷的分数下来，我很吃惊，但我细细想起来，也并不是没有道理。这些天，我并不是没有认真学，只是这些天来，我没有深入其中，没有真正的领悟，以致于考试成绩如此的差，让我心中自责的很。但是我想说的是对于英语我会尽自我最大的努力，不为别的就为自我，为了自我的水平，为了自我的付出，做最好的自我。

邵云说：“透过这次英语一模考试，我觉得主要失分在有关单词及时态的把握方面，是基础知识没有掌握好的原因，一些单词明明白是什么，却不会写，一些选取粗心大意也错了，各方面因素结合起来以致英语成绩不理想。

王玉霞说：“本次考试，由于自我粗心大意和对课本知识掌握的不牢固，一些不就应错的题却错了，而作文失分最不就应，我没有按其要求写作，写离题了，导致作文分数太低，影响成绩。在今后的复习过程中，课本资料就应更加牢固

岁月匆匆，许多往事的回忆都随着时光流逝而消失，唯有那次英语考试的事，我至今仍记忆犹新。 那天，爸爸送我去考场。在车上，我的心已经砰砰的跳了。我低着头努力想把复习内容多记下一些，可脑子里一片模糊。我暗暗祈祷时间慢点走，最好能倒流，把昨天玩游戏的时间补回去。但时间老人偏偏和我作对，平时那个半个多小时的路一下子就“走”完了。到了考场我看见许多中学生他们有的戴着耳机在听音乐，有的手拿书本嘴里念念有词……见此场景，我的怀里像揣着一只小兔子，心跳得更快了：我是小学生，能比得上他们吗?

正在胡思乱想时，突然“叮铃铃-----“考场铃声响了我的心开始狂跳，似乎要跃出胸膛。我忐忑不安的走进考场，看见一位和蔼可亲的女老师正在对着我微笑，我不禁松了一口气，可我抬头又眇见了一位板着脸的男老师，顿时感到手心里湿漉漉的。答题终于开始了，先是几道容易的题，我搓了搓笔杆心想简单!可一看下面的题目一道比一道难，，我想到的都是模凌两可的答案，怎么办?这时爸爸的话回荡在我耳边：镇静，相信自己!我细细梳理头绪，选择正确答案…。.在答最后一道题作图题时，根据文章我在纸上点了许多个小点连起来，竟然成了一个丑八怪，我一看不禁笑了起来，可一下子又紧张的不得了，心想：这道题做对了没?如果做错了就糟糕了。看着考生们一个个交了卷，我也磨磨蹭蹭的把卷子交了上去，偷偷的看老师打分，真是紧张死了可就是看不见。 等了一会成绩出来了，很紧张的我不敢去拿。爸爸对我说：“不要紧，下次努力!”我这才仰制住心跳去拿成绩单。我一看，我竟然通过了考试，我惊讶的跳了起来，可心仍不停的“余震”着，心想：真是侥幸呀!

世界上一切的事物都有着这样或那样的联系。联系是普遍的，社会生活中许多人许多事都与我们息息相关，只是有时这些联系不明显，所以我们很难发现，但只要你细心去留意，用心去聆听，你会发现无穷的远方，无数的人们都与我们有关。

和我有关——道德。在上一年，有一个令人叹息的新闻，小悦悦事件的公开，那些见死不救的人遭到批判，可怜的小悦悦，年纪少少，路上被两辆车相继碾过。当她在路旁奄奄一息的时候，那经过的几十个路人无一出手相救，有到老妇人的出现，才把小悦悦抱到路边，但因伤的太重而去世了。归根到底，那十几个人的冷漠行为都与我有关，如果不是社会生的人制造出一些骗取人同情的行为，那就不会引起一些人的思想变化。都怕给自己惹上不必要的麻烦，如果我们每个人都发扬诚实、无私的精神，那就不会造成像小悦悦受伤后无人相救的现象，只有人人有道德，才会使人间不再冷漠，道德和我有关。

和我有关——诚信。在小悦悦之前的三聚氰胺事件。使上千名婴儿失去生命。中国知名奶业伊利有限公司，为了获取更多的利益，在牛奶中加入过多的三聚氰胺，导致大部分儿童死亡。为了利益而违背了诚信。这些事与我们存在着联系，那些商家被利益而蒙蔽了双眼，做出损人利己的事。如果社会中每一个人都以诚信为美德，以诚信感来每一个人，那就不会发生这些违背诚信的事。所以作为社会的一份子，诚信和我有关。

和我有关——环境。现代人都不太讲究卫生，乱扔垃圾，随地吐痰这些事显而易见。在香港，这些行为都会遭到罚款。所以香港人特别讲究卫生，但是在这些小城市，无人管理，太讲究的人都被视为怪人。所以环境遭到一定破坏。这和我有关。如果我大力宣传环保行为，呼吁人们爱护环境，就会得到更多人加入环境保护的行列，所以，环境保护和我有关。

细心观察，世上很多事都与我有关。作为社会的一份子，都与社会上的事有关，虽然联系很少，但把每个人的联系都积聚起来，就会变得无限大，道德、诚信、环境……都和我有关。

Everyone has their own childhood, and most people are full of happy childhood, my childhood is full of happiness.

Remember it was happened in when I was five years old. Once, my father took me to play in the cultural center "jumping bed". When you get there, my father said to me let me play, he is going to read a book. May be I play of very happy, forget what dad said. I play tired, want to go home. But all over the whole square not find him. Just as I was downhearted, suddenly found that, in the square in the prize. I can not help of curiosity, so he went over. See a sister said: "as long as the stage can prize!" I went on stage to sing an English song "one, tow, three..." The elder sister I sent a sun umbrella. I carried an umbrella, go home happily. Can dad read a book, but cant find me. It worried him, almost cry. I returned home, mother hurriedly dad a call, dad just come home, see Im enrons sitting on the sofa, he breathed a sigh of relief.

Now, as long as a see the sun umbrella hanging on the wall, I will think of it, think of my happy childhood.

每个人都有自己的童年，而大多数人的童年都是充满快乐的，我的童年也充满了快乐。

记得那是发生在在我五岁时的事情。有一次，爸爸带我去文化中心玩“跳跳床”。到了那里，爸爸对我说让我先玩，他要去看书。可能是我玩的太高兴了，竟然忘记了爸爸说的话。我玩累了，想回家。可跑遍了整个广场都没找到他。正当我无精打采的时候，突然发现，广场上在发奖品。我禁不住好奇心的驱使，于是便走了过去。只见一个姐姐说：“只要上台表演就可以的奖品哦!”我便上台唱了一首英语歌“one，tow，three……”那个姐姐就个我发了一把太阳伞。我举着伞，高高兴兴的回家啦。可爸爸看完书，却找不到我了。这可把他急坏了，差点哭出来。我回了家，妈妈赶紧个爸爸打了个电话，爸爸这才赶回来，看到我正安然无事的坐在沙发上，他才松了一口气。

现在，只要一看到挂在墙上的那把太阳伞，我就会想起这件事，想起我快乐的童年。

初中生活转眼间已经过去近两个月的时间，学得不亦乐乎的我们，迎来了第三次英语考试。经历了几次失败的我，仍以满怀信心的态度迎接了这次考试。

“叮铃铃……”，一声清脆的上课铃声响起。等了许久，不见老师走进教室，于是音乐委员孙雅欣起了一首《小情歌》，我们在一片歌声中等待着老师的到来。随着一句“写下，我时间和轻琴声交错的城堡。”，这一首歌就算唱完了，老师也出现在了教室门口。只见$2老师手握一沓卷子，神情庄重地走上了讲台，双手撑在桌子上，宣布：“这节课考英语。”说罢，她粉红的脸上露出一丝微笑，我们知道那是对我们的鼓励，可仅仅是简单的鼓励吗?不，我想不是的，那更是对我们必胜的信心。

时间很紧，仅有一节课，听力又要浪费不少的时间，我和熊瑞林这些急性子自然不会放松。握起笔杆，本来悠闲的心在这时突然紧张起来。环视四周：有的人怕时间不够而奋笔疾书，有的人怕书写不好而轻描慢写;有的人因题目简单而早早做完，有的人因不会做题而乱抓纸团;有的人紧握笔杆从容地答题，有的人东借尺子西借橡皮。$2老师没有为此苦恼，而是欣慰的笑了笑，因为她知道，让有人作弊和人很乱比起来，当然是后者更让人人心舒畅。我从容地握起了笔杆，猛然开始飞速答题，与三分钟前的闲谈形成了鲜明的对比，钟上秒针的抖动还不及我笔尖的一小半儿速度快，填上了几个“A”、“B”、“C”，写上了几个“That”和“This”,一张英语试卷就完成了。匆匆扫视了几眼，无聊至极的我便

翻开数学书，打开作业本，开始悠闲地做起数学作业，猛啃那绝对值·····数学还剩一点儿，听力又开始了。该快不快，该慢不慢的不说，报之前还按门铃。我拜托，磁带大哥，这是让你报听力，可没有让你挨家挨户拜年啊!况且，离新年还远呢!我不耐烦的听着磁带，做着听力，就在最后一道题时，慢吞吞的它一反常态，像吃了火药一样，我们还没反应过来就报完了，第二遍也一样，它以迅雷不及掩耳之势完成了自己的使命，可我们班内呢?一片鬼哭狼嚎，想时光倒转，再听几遍，可现实就是这么残酷，就在这时，该死的下课铃响了起来，顿时一片哀求。

考罢，我问到了自己的分数：118!全班最高!结果老师又加一句：别的班有120的，我想唱的“我得意的笑”，却变成了“只要你考得比我好，我就受不了”，带着一点哀叹，这场考试算是过去了。

Since the financial crisis swept the world, the global economy has sunk into a severe recession. It’s hard to get through a day without hearing or reading news about the devastating effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt, millions of employees are laid off, high-return investment bubbles burst, and huge sums of loans can never be retrieved. Its impact on our daily life can be felt in all walks of life。

College students inevitably fall victim to this pervasive slump as well. On top of that, internships and job vacancies are reduced to the minimum as companies keep shrinking. New graduates find themselves hard to get a job, not to speak of a satisfactory one. What comes next? Poor students will be hard-pressed if they find student loans unavailable any more. As a result, some even cannot afford to continue their studies. Lastly, more students are probably out there anxiously looking for part-time jobs now that they have to help cover their expenses in this gloomy economy. Their innocence and eagerness might be taken advantage of by some malicious businesspeople, or even criminal gang。

In response to these threats, we students must act promptly and wisely. Since we definitely will be facing a competitive job market, it’s crucial that we submit high quality resumes. Therefore, we must commit more to our professional studies. Even do better, master more relevant job skills as a double security. Furthermore, apply for scholarships and grants, as these are still available and we don’t have to pay them back. As for the safety issues, trust our instinct – there’s no free lunch in this world. Anything that promises quick returns without much work is a sure trap. Stay alert and protect ourselves。

Now, the new semester has begun for more than one week. I gradually adapt

to my new life in senior school. In senior school, my biggest feeling is busy,

for I have classes all the day and teachers leave us a lot of homework. In the

morning, I have two periods for morning reading, Chinese and English, beginning

from 7:00. After that, I have four periods in the morning and four other in the

afternoon. There are many more subjects than in middle school, Chinese, math,

English, physics, chemistry, history and so on. Sometimes, I am afraid of seeing

so many textbooks in my desk. In addition, the contents are much more difficult

than before. Math and physics are the most difficult ones for me. No matter how

hard I work, I still can’t do well in them, which makes me frustrated.

Therefore, in the new beginning, I must change my learning strategies to make my

work more effective. All in all, my new life in new school is good and rich,

though it’s busy.

From this incident，we can see that there are still more things to be done。

Firstly，the government needs everything possible to ensure the quality of

products，particularly the safety of food as this concerns everyones

life.Secondly，as for the producers，it is very important for them to be morally

honest. They should never try to pursue profit or economic growth at the expense

of health and life of people. Thirdly，we consumers must attach importance to the

things we eat and develop an awareness of how to protect our legal rights if

cheated。 Only in this way will we be able to build a more secure and harmonious

society.

To tell you the truth，I don t like the Spring Festival at all. When I was young I liked it very much，because I could had something tasty to eat during the Spring Festival，and I could enjoy very wonderful TV programmes，too，I also could had much free time during which I could did something I liked to do. I don t like it now， there are many reasons.

Firstly，I can t have a good time during the Festival. Every New Year s Eve something unpleasant often happens. Once I quarreled with my second brother.

Secondly，I can t relax myself during the Festival. I have to do many things，watch so many TV programmes， meet so many people，all these things make me very tired.

Thirdly，spending one Spring Festival means that I become one year older，I don t like to be old. I want to live longer and be young all the time. Readers， what is your opinions about the Spring Festival?Please tell us，we can share our opinions. Thanks for reading! Goodbye.

[高一英语作文我的春节

高一英语作文 我的考试经验

My Experience In Examination

In my opinion, examinations are one of the important activities in school life. I have gone through all sorts of examinations since my primary school. I have tasted the flavor of happiness and sadness.

Before examinations I always have a hard time and dont know what to do.During examinations I feel nervous and sometimes my mind becomes blank Only after examinations does the world seem to be bright again and am I brimming with vigor. We often complain that our teachers make trouble for us on purpose. But it is not true. The fact is that examinations are just a way to-help us do better in our study.( 110 words)

[高中英语参考作文: 我的考试经验

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic "Tire Life on Internet". You should write in no less than 100 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below:

1.21世纪是网络的时代;

2.网络生活多姿多彩;

3.网络生活是我们生活的一部分。

The Life on Internet 21st century is a century of Internet. With the development of science and techdology, moreand more people, old and young, begin to "surf the net" to look for information or to entertainthemselves with on-line games.

lnternet is a colorful world. Here you can look for whatever information you want; you canbrowse the latest news at home and abroad; you can chat with friends, do your shopping, watchmovies, play games, send e-mails and so on. You can do almost everything in this variable world.In the 21st century, people have been and will be more accustomed to Internet. Interact makesthe world smaller, and with it the whole world seems to be just a click away. It is part of our life.

[成人英语三级考试作文

今天是一个大热天，也是我英语培训班的最后一天，今天我们要进行一场关于音标的最终考试。

奶奶带着我向学校走去，地上很烫，还冒着热气。可一到教室，一瞬间就凉快了许多。我找了一个坐位坐了下来，整理好东西，上交作业，开始复习。所谓复习其实就是想到啥看啥，只不过是把书摊在桌上，然后翻过来覆过去，如同看杂志一样随意。

马上上课了，也就代表考试开始了。第一题，听写48个国际音标，可以说是最难的一题，不仅要按照顺序来写，还要写正确，而且分类也要正确，更何况好多音标的发音，乍一听就像是一样。不过“好心”的老师，给了我们再听一遍这48个音标的机会，我也总算写出了这些音标。

但好戏还在后头呢，可谓关键“人物”总是最后关头才出场，这可不是关键人物吗？给我们扣分的关键人物啊。第二题是看单词写音标，还是有些难度的，主要还是因为掌握得还不够稳固。

“还有15分钟。”老师说道。大家一听，啥？只剩15分钟啦。我赶忙奋笔疾书，把没做完的题赶紧做完。没多久，老师便说：“考试结束，所有人把卷子交上来。”大家又是开心又是着急，开心是因为考完试老师答应我们看一会儿电视，着急是一些没做完的人估计分数就不怎么好看了。

我们在教室里边看电视边等老师，过了大约半个多小时，老师总算把试卷批好了。她走进教室，将试卷发给我们，许多同学都不敢相信这是自己做出来的试卷，而我也只得了86。5分，可我没有想到的是，我竟然是全班第一。哎！我真想不通这么低的分数，居然能得全班第一。没啥好得意的，还得多花时间学音标。

We had English final exam yesterday. I feelvery sad now because I think I didn’t do well in the exam. Firstly, just amoment ago I realized that my composition in the exam stayed from the point,because I misunderstood the meaning of Green Campus. I thought Green Campus isonly the color of the campus. So I totally got away from the point. Inaddition, time was not enough for me. Eventually, I wrote some answers on theanswer sheet without thinking. Thus I’m afraid I can’t pass the exam. I am nowvery anxious.

我们昨天英语期末考试。我感到很伤心，因为我觉得我没把试考好。首先，不久前我才发现我把作文写离题了，因为我把绿色校园的意思理解错了。我以为绿色校园是指校园的颜色。所以我离题了。此外，时间对我来说也是不够的。最终，有些题目我都没看就直接写答案上去了。所以我怕我会考试不及格。我现在很担心。

"Try and try until you succeed." This saying shows the importance of perseverance. I have found through experience that only through hard work can we succeed.Many people have failed in their work or studies, precisely because they had no perseverance. Life, in general, as in many things we do, has never been easy. No one promised us what it would be.

So, if we want to succeed in life, we must be brave to win. This is the standard that differentiates people who succeed in life and those who dont.

Computers started to become popular with big companies in the 1960s.

Computer

You’ve probably known about computers your whole life. But computers have not really been around for very long. Computers started to become popular with big companies in the 1960s. Computers didn’t become widespread in homes and schools until the 1980s.

HOW DO PEOPLE USE COMPUTERS?

People use computers in many ways. Stores use computers to keep track of products and check you out at the cash register. Banks use computers to send money all over the world.

Computers help teachers keep track of lessons and grades. They help students do research and learn. Computers let you hook up to networks (many computers hooked together). They let you hook up to a worldwide network called the Internet.

Scientists use computers to solve research problems. Engineers use computers to make cars, trucks, and airplanes. Architects use computers to design houses and other buildings. The police use computers to track down criminals. The military uses computers to make and read coded messages.

Orginate in America in the Mothers Festival.May 9,1906, American

consumingcity Jia-Wei the mother misfortune of silk dies , her grief

extremely.AvoidJapan in annual mother death anniversary, Miss An Na organizes

catch up thecampaign of Sai mother, encourage other person to also express the

gratitude forown loving mother with similar way.

Hereafter, she convinces people everywhere and establishes the

MothersFestival to the appeal of all sectors of society and call.Her appeal gets

warmresponse.

Through draft resolution, on May 10,1913, American Senate and House

ofRepresentatives signs by president Wilson second that announces and decides

eachyears May for Sunday, is the Mothers Festival.

This measure arouses world countries, is imitated one after another,install

to 1948 Na pass away , 43 countries have established the MothersFestival.

Speaking of reading, thats and I have a deep love! In reading, I learned a lot of knowledge, understand a lot of truth. I have benefited a lot from!

When I was a child, no matter I like it or not, my mother always told me before you go to bed a bedtime story ", and "reading" with me. Gradually, I will love the book, Ive always wanted to own to read a book.

Slowly, I have reached the age of the kindergarten. This time, I began to try to read some picture books, at this time, I understand a lot of sense from the picture books, learned a lot of knowledge. Also, my mother gave me booked child illustrated, I always look fondle admiringly. Once, I was watching the childrens illustrated, mother cried, I eat dinner, but I did not even hear listen to, continue to see their childrens illustrated, after a while, mother cant wait, came over and asked me to eat, I just dream again wake up, go to the dinner table.

Pretty soon, I was in primary school, my mother is in the post office gave me a book "we love science", "small Copernicus", "scientific inquiry" and other books, also borrowed a lot of books in the library, also bought me a lot of good books online! For me, I also often habitually study good books in the home, soon, I will put a lot of books to drill through, during this period, I have mastered a lot of knowledge, such as the nature of the book: I know the growth of the tree is to start from the top, paper, up to seven times, the candles in the water also can burn, friction in the application of life, etc.; The history books: let me know the history of five thousand years of Chinese civilization, know the four great inventions in ancient China, and know a lot of celebrity anecdotes, know the "water can carry the boat, also swallows" profound truth; Read literature books: let me understand a lot of human reason, be kind, be love, be grateful, be tolerant to others, to persevere, be brave.

Because a lot of reading, but also let me learn better. Math, I can quickly understand the question, seize the key points, clever problem solving; Do Chinese reading questions, because of the large amount of reading, I rarely lose points on it. Composition is my strengths, my composition is often happy, as my class! When writing blog, because of large amount of reading, writing articles is often recommended.

Now, I have become a veritable little bookworm, reading, nature will grow with me.

说起阅读，那可是和我有着很深的缘分呢!在阅读中，我学到了很多知识，懂得了很多道理。使我受益匪浅!

小时候，不管我喜欢不喜欢，妈妈总会在睡觉前给我讲一个“睡前故事”，还和我一起“读书”。渐渐的，我就喜欢上了书本，一直想自己去看书。

慢慢地，我已经到了上幼儿园的年龄了。这个时候，我开始尝试着去读一些绘本了，这个时候的我，从绘本中明白了很多道理，懂了很多知识。而且，妈妈还给我订了《幼儿画报》，我看起来总是爱不释手。有一次，我正在看《幼儿画报》，妈妈大声喊我吃饭，我却连听都没听见，继续看自己的《幼儿画报》，过了一会儿，妈妈等不及了，走过来让我去吃饭，我这才梦如初醒般的，走到了饭桌上。

很快，我上小学了，妈妈就在邮局给我订了《我们爱科学》、《小哥白尼》、《科学探索》等书，也在图书馆里借了很多书，还在网上给我买了很多好书!我呢，也经常习惯性地钻研家里的好书，很快，我就把很多书都钻了个透，在这期间，我掌握了大量的知识，比如看科普类的书：我知道了树是由顶端开始生长的、纸张最多可以折七次、蜡烛在水里也可以燃烧、摩擦力在生活中的应用等;看历史方面的书：让我知道了中华五千年的文明历史、知道了我国古代的四大发明、知道了很多的名人趣事、知道了“水可载舟，亦可覆舟”的深刻道理;看文学方面的书：让我懂得了很多做人的道理、做人要善良、要有爱心、要懂得感恩、对他人要宽容、做事要持之以恒、要勇敢等。

因为大量的阅读，还让我的学习更优秀。做数学题时，我能很快的读懂题意，抓住关键点，巧妙解题;做语文的阅读题时，由于阅读量大，我很少在这上面失分。作文就更是我的强项，我的作文常被作为班里范文呢!在写博客的时候，因为阅读量大，写出的文章时常被推荐。

现在，我已经成为了一只名副其实的小书虫，阅读呢，自然将伴着我成长。

Mid-autumn Day is more or less like Spring Festival. It falls on the 15th

day of the 8th lunar month. Its an important day for our Chinese, because its

a family reunion day.

On that day, there will be a big family dinner. Everyone who works outside

will go back home for the union. And they also eat moon cakes, which are the

special food for this festival. There are various kinds of moon cakes. They are

so delicious that everyone enjoys them very much.

In the evening, the moon is so bright and round, so people always prepare

some fruits and moon cakes and put them under the moon so as to pray for the

health and security all the year round. It seems that everyone is so happy.

书面表达历来是英语教学中一个难点，要想在限定的时间内写出一篇质量上乘的文章，非一日之功。纵观几年来的高考书面表达，我们可以看出，高考英语写作越来越重视情景的设置，要求考生总结自己的感受和见解，给出自己的观点。书面表达又是全面衡量学生英语综合水平的一种测试形式，因此，我们不得不重视。

第一步，写作的内容，要求做到两点— 内容完整、相关。这两点只要考生不粗心，基本都能做到。比如陕西考区的题目，要求写暑假的安排，是一篇正反观点类的议论文。必须注意题目的要求，第一要提出讨论话题，Recently there has been a heated discussion about what the students should do during the summer vacation.(这是一个经典的模版开篇句型)。第二要写出一方面的观点，然后是另一方面的观点，最后提出自己的看法，根据要求缺一不可，否则就会被扣掉相应的分数，这就是完整。再比如，2005年广东考区的成语寓言故事，不仅要描写整个守株待兔的过程，还应该根据要求点名寓意，否则也是不完整，这点只要在课堂上强调，学生是很容易做到的。所谓相关，也就是不要过多出现文中没有的信息，不能过分发挥，一般学生犯此类错误的较少。

第二步，写作中的语法。在阅卷中，一般三个小的语法错误会被扣掉一分，一个大的语法错误(关于谓语的错误)会被扣掉一分。所以，学生应该尽量避免犯语法错误。我在课堂中会强调，对于语法基础薄弱的同学，除了加强自己的语法功底外，就是去背诵我给出的50个最高频用到的句法结构。这些结构不仅正确，而且一定是高考中的有效得分点，即使语法偏弱，记住这些句子然后在考试中使用也能避免学生自己造句中的语法错误，一举两得。比如，倒装句在考试中就很少有同学主动启用，但是一旦正确启用就会收到意想不到的效果，所以我会给出四组倒装句，然后让学生加强运用和练习。这些句子包括：

1、Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection, can we solve the problem of pollution.

2、So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.

3、Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam.

4、By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smocking.

第三步，连接词的运用，使文章连贯、流畅。我把这些词分为8类，叫做“畅词”，往往学生由于中西方语言的差异，会忽视这一点，所以在授课中会通过大量的练习巩固和加强学生的印象。而且不仅要写，还写出高水平的畅词，因为高考是选拔性考试，要做到“人无我有,人有我优”。比如，“首先”这个表示次序的畅词，一般同学一定想到的是firstly 或者first of all。可是我建议学生启用to begin with, 或者initially (这个是建议水平较好的启用)。“然而”，绝大部分启用but, however，我建议学生采用on the contrary 或者oppositely。

第四步，也是整个课程的核心部分，要强化“复杂、高级”两个概念。为什么是核心呢?因为学生在这一部分没有正确的认识，在平时的学习中老师也没有有意识灌输和训练总结。大部分学生以为只要写出来、写正确就可以拿到高分，其实80-120个单词包括大概10个句子，如果全部是简单的词汇和句型没有办法达到最高档作文的要求。因此，我们强调高级的词汇和高级复杂的句型，不是说全部必须高级，而是必须出现一些才能符合高考作文大纲的要求。在这一步中，我总结的“高分词汇选择原则”、“简单句到复杂句的瞬间转换”、“高分句子写作策略”以及“钻石得分50句”，通过这些理论和实践结合的讲解，学生会感觉成绩的快速提升，效果明显。

Today is my birthday and Im so excited about it.In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said,Today is my birthday,dont forget it!At school,I got many gifts and cards for my classmates and had a lot of fun.But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.

When it was time to leave school I couldnt wait to go home.When I open the door,there wasnt anybody in the house.There was only a note that said,Coming home late tonight,mum and dad.I try to call them but there was no answer.I was so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be!I was so sad that I couldnt eat anything.I just did my homework and waited for them.

And then,things changed completely.It was about time for dinner,my mother called and told me to go to the restanrant near our house.When I got there I couldnt believed my eyes.Everybody was there:my parents,my relatives,my friends and even my classmates.There was so many gifts and a big cake.What a surprising birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever.