myhobby小学英语作文（实用20篇）

We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum?

我们明天要去科学博物馆。在博物馆有一个古物展览。你知道我们要怎么去科学博物馆吗？

The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the science museum.

科学博物馆在人民公园旁边。它离我们的学校并不远。因此我们可以步行去那里。从我们学校向西直走，接着在邮局左转，步行大约5分钟，然后在红绿灯右转。你可以发现右边是人民公园。直走，你会看到科学博物馆。

My schoool life is busy and fantastic.

First, we have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. We have to get to school before 7:30 because we have a morning class.

Second, I like my school life because teachers and my classmates are friendly and helpful. We also have lots of after-school activies.

Third, our school environment is very beautiful, the teachers all can make their lesson interesting and instructive. So I like my school life very much.

我的学校生活是忙碌的，神奇的。首先，我们有四节课在上午和下午三。我们到学校7:30之前因为我们早上有课。其次，我喜欢我的学校生活，因为老师和我的同学都很友好，乐于助人。我们也有很多的课外活动。第三、我们的学校环境很漂亮，老师们都能使自己的课有趣又有启发性。所以我非常喜欢我的学校生活。

12 May 2006

Dear Sir,

I am a December 2003 graduate from the University of San Francisco (USF) with a bachelors degree in International Business. As part of my career planning, I am very interested in supplementing my international business education with a basic knowledge of the Chinese language. This I hope will help me enter into business commerce with business organizations partnering with Chinas economic development.

I already have information from BLCU and hope to study there for at least one full year starting with this summers program continuing through the fall and spring semester 2006. Can your office advise me if such scholarships might be available to me?

I have been studying Chinese for one year now. I am not sure what level I belong to. I was told that there will be an HSK test in our university in September. I am planning to attend the test. But I dont know if the result of the test is recognized by your university. If so, can it be a help for me to apply for the scholarship?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Tom Jolly

Today is the annual national holiday, is a happy day.

I and my father and mother go to the zoo to play. We entered the park, we saw where the sea of people, like a long queue, more like a happy ocean.

Animal in the zoo is so much! There are cute little bunny, there are bulky gorillas, and that beautiful peacock. There are mandarin ducks in the water play, I throw food to them, they immediately ran over to snatch, really too cute. The most interesting is the monkeys of the iron gate, where they jump and jump, there is a group of macaques in the grab bottle! As long as some people take the bottle to tease them to play, they are very flexible to come to grab. Some naughty little children handed them Coke, they are not polite, took a big mouth to drink up. This is really a group of naughty and smart monkeys!

Go all the way, from time to time the birds flew over my head, twitter, as if to welcome us to come. The river fish in the free to swim, so comfortable, how I hope that they can become a fish, and they can play with them. Today is a good day, I really want to sing, the motherland I love you!

今天是一年一度的国庆节，是个令人开心的日子。

我和爸爸妈妈去动物园玩。我们进了园，就看见那里人山人海，就像是一条长龙，更像是一片欢乐的海洋。

动物园里的动物可真多呀!有可爱的小兔子，有笨重的大猩猩，还有那美丽的孔雀。远处有鸳鸯在水中嬉戏，我扔了食物给它们，它们就立刻跑过来抢食，真是太可爱了。最有趣的就是铁门边的那些猴子，它们在那里跳来跳去，还有一群猕猴在抢瓶子呢!只要有人拿瓶子逗它们玩，它们就很灵活地过来抢。有些顽皮的小孩子递给它们可乐，它们毫不客气，接过就大口大口地喝了起来。这真是一群淘气又聪明的猴子呀!

一路走去，不时有鸟儿在我头上飞过，叽叽喳喳的，好像在欢迎我们的到来。河中鱼儿在自由自在地游着，那么惬意，我多么希望自己也能变成一条鱼儿，可以和它们一起嬉戏。今天真是个好日子，我好想放声歌唱，祖国祖国我爱您!

The joys and sorrows of the past is no longer so important, because the New Year is coming. Today is New Years eve, no matter go to where, can feel thick sweet atmosphere.

The Spring Festival is a family day, are all my relatives were in a hurry, to grandmas house to the two old man happy New Year. Todays meal but the extravaganza! Good wine good dishes all have, what is what. While watching the Spring Festival gala, taste the delicious food, and my grandpa told us the past some of the things worth remembering. The atmosphere of family reunion, of course, and your feeling is the same. Women to pick up the table the rest out firecrackers. We held a family dinner back to home. Is divided into two group, a group of playing poker, draw another group of play. His grandpa but lucky hands, to what he wants, our money one points to grandparents pockets. Just a moment of kung fu, those whom we have lost money, but in the end all to us again.

I preached to loudly said to the adults who are not allowed to sleep, today one sleep is a big lazy pig. But it didnt take long to grasp to fall asleep, you fell asleep, just promise at all. The most unfortunately missed the tasty delicious meal of dumplings.

过去的喜怒哀乐不再那么重要了，因为新的一年即将到来。今天是除夕夜，不管走到哪儿，都可以感觉到浓浓的温馨的气氛。

春节是合家欢乐的一天，之所以我的亲戚们也都匆匆来到奶奶家里，给二位老人家拜个年。今天的饭菜可是豪门盛宴阿!好酒好菜全都有，要啥就有啥。一边收看春节晚会，一边品尝着美味佳肴，还有我的爷爷讲给我们听过去的值得记住的一些事情。这种合家团圆的气氛当然和您的感受是一样的。女人们收拾饭桌其他的都出去方鞭炮。回到家里我们举行了家宴。分成两批，一批是玩扑克，另一批玩画图。爷爷的手可是幸运手阿，他要什么就来什么，我们的钱一分一分的往爷爷奶奶的裤兜里近。就一会儿的功夫，我们这些败将的钱输光了，但最后又全分给我们了。

我口口声声地大声地向大人们说今天谁都不许睡，谁睡谁就是大懒猪。可没过多久把握给睡着了，就进入了梦乡，把刚才的诺言望的一干二净。最可惜的是错过了好吃好吃得的年夜饭———饺子。

22 October 2004

Dear Sir,

I would like to apply for the post of Works Manager, which was advertised in The Guardian of I2 October 2004. I feel that my qualifications and experience are ideally suited for the position.

I was born in 1968, and I went to school from 1973 to 1988. In 1987 I took the General Certificate of Education, and I got good grades in Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry. After leaving school, I attended the Orient Technical College, where I first studied Fiber Technology and Color Chemistry; later I studied other subjects related to textile manufacture, and in 1991 I obtained the Diploma in Textiles.

After completing my studies, I joined the Top Clothing Company where I worked until 1996. In that year I moved to Prior Productions, who was pleased with my work, and as a result, in 1998, I was promoted to Assistant Works Manager there.

I enjoy my work, and I am prepared to work hard. Moreover, I am sure that Prior Productions would give me an excellent reference. I therefore feel that my application deserves your serious consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Mary Ma

我爱中国菜 I Love Chinese Food

Chinese food is famous all around the world. A lot of foreigners speak

highly of the delicious food when they come to this big country. For me， I like

spicy food， so hot pot is my favorite. I can eat what I like and put the food in

the spicy soup. The hotness makes me feel so cool. No matter where I go， Chinese

food is always my favorite.

中国菜闻名全世界，有很多外国人来到这个大国以后都会赞扬美味的食物。对我来说，我喜欢辣的食物，所以火锅是我的最爱。我可以把我喜欢吃的食物放进辣汤里就可以吃到自己喜欢的食物

了，辣味让我觉得太酷了。无论我去哪里，中国菜永远是我的最爱。

My hometown is in yumen, although the scenery there is less wuyi mountain scenery is beautiful, but in my heart, my hometown is the most beautiful. In this seven-day holiday, dad took me to their day and night miss hometown - yumen. When you get there, the first thing you see is that comes from the green apple, like small red lanterns hung on past green pagoda. Next to the trees and colorful flowers, if you go to my hometown at this moment, you will be intoxicated in the sea of the flowers, let you deep love on her. However, more let I admire is a stream. Because it is afraid of difficulties and obstacles along the way, has been into the rough sea, it is its ultimate goal. I think: we should learn from the brook, meet with difficulties, cant bow to it, and have to overcome the difficulties.

My hometown and the endless wheat fields. In the autumn, the wind blows catcher flapping, like a golden sea.

In winter, the dance of snowflakes swirl of fall from the sky, the earth a piece of white, as if to the world of fairy tales. From a distance, the distance a few snow-capped mountains, the qilian mountains. There are four seasons mountain of dont snow all the year round. At the foot of the mountain have a vast prairie, and cattle and sheep were grazing in the grasslands, cattle and sheep with ger around, still lived inside the hospitable host!

Ah! My hometown is beautiful! I love my hometown.

我的家乡在玉门，那里的风景虽然比不上武夷山的风景美，但是在我心里，我的家乡是最美的。就在这七天长假里，爸爸带我去了自已日夜想念的家乡--玉门。到了那里，你首先看到的是那绿油油的树上结的苹果，好像一个个红红的灯笼挂在一座座绿色的宝塔上。这些树的旁边还有五颜六色的花朵，如果这时你到我的家乡去，你会陶醉在这个花的海洋里，让你深深的喜欢上她。不过，更让我敬佩的是小溪了。因为它一路上不畏艰难险阻，一直流入波涛汹涌的大海，这就是它最终的目标。我想：我们应该要向小溪学习，遇到困难，不能向它低头，而要克服困难才行。

我的家乡还有一望无际的麦田。到了秋季，风一吹麦田随风飘动，就像到了一片金色的海洋。

到了冬天，那翩翩起舞的雪花从天空中纷纷扬扬的落下来，大地白茫茫的一片，仿佛来到了童话世界一般。远远望去，远处有几座雪山，那就是祁连山。山上有四季不化的终年积雪。山脚下有辽阔的大草原，草原上还有牛羊在吃着草，牛羊的四周有蒙古包，里面还住着热情好客的主人呢!

啊!我的家乡太美了!我爱我的家乡。

Yesterday is my six-year-old birthday. It is important to me as I can go to

primary school after my birthday. It means that I grow up. I got up very early

at that day. My mother just smiled at me and said nothing. I felt a little down.

But I recovered with excited soon and then I went out to play. Everything in my

eyes is so beautiful. When I got home about five o’clock, my mother gave me a

surprise. She prepared a party for me and invited all my friends. She also gave

a lovely schoolbag to me as my birthday present. I’m so happy that day.

My father likes fishing。 He always goes fishing with his friends in Autumn。

One day， he took me to fish， too。 In autumn， fish have grown up。 It is the best season to fish。 First， we chose a good place。 Then my father helped me put an earthworm onto the fishhook。 Afterwards， I threw the fishhook into the river。 I waited for a long time。 Suddenly， I saw the float sink。 I was very happy。 I pulled it out of the water but I only saw half of the earthworm。 The fish played a trick on me。 I was very angry。 But my father said to me， “it takes time。 You need to be more patient。” I tried again。 A few minutes later， I caught a big fish and I showed it to my father。 My father praised me， “what a good angler you are！”

我爸爸喜欢钓鱼。他总是和他的朋友们在秋天去钓鱼。

一天，他带我去钓鱼，太。在秋天，鱼长大了。这是最好的季节鱼。首先，我们选择了一个好地方。然后爸爸帮我把鱼钩上的蚯蚓。后来，我把鱼钩到河里。我等待了很长一段时间。突然，我看到了浮沉。我很高兴。我把它从水里拔了出来，但我只看见了一半的蚯蚓。那条鱼在我身上起了个圈套。我很生气。但我父亲对我说：“这需要时间。你需要有更多的耐心。”。几分钟后，我钓到一条大鱼，我把它拿给我爸爸看。我父亲表扬了我，“什么是一个好的钓鱼者你！“

My first teacher is called qiu-ling zhang, just entered preschool, I what all dont understand, is teacher zhang from one, two, three began to teach me to do, and lead me to learn to write his own name. She not only taught me knowledge, but also in the life of meticulous care.

When I in grade three, I heard my first teacher is married, however would not be in our school teaching. Go after, I never see a teacher, but I will remember her forever, she is a core value and amiable teacher very much.

12 March 2006

Dear Sir,

I am highly disappointed in the proposed 2004-05 budget cuts to educa1ion. Taking away basic aid status and slashing our school budgets is a recipe for educational disaster in our school. The future lies with our children. They must have access to high quality educa1ion.

My husband and I have worked hard to be able to live in a school district that provides high quality education for our children. Cutting funding in districts like ours will have a negative impact on property values.

The school that my daughter attends is hardly wha1 I would describe as a "rich" school. Parents are asked to pay for books for all the classes, science supplies and for their students to participate in the performing arts among other items. If our school is to remain a world leader in technological development, cutting our school funds is the worst possible choice to make.

Education funds should not be diverted away from education.

Yours faithfully,

Tom Williams

What a fine day today !I’m very happy in this fine day . Beaucse today I don’t have to do my homework and I can play with my good friends .There is lots of snow now ,so we make a sonw man .That’s really intersting .We play with snow to about 6:30 .Of couse I must go home now. What a fan day ! 译文：多么好的天气阿!在这样的好天气里我非常高兴，因为今天我不用写作业，并且可以和朋友们出去玩。这里现在有很多雪，所以我们堆了一个雪人。那真的很有趣。我们玩雪，一直到晚上6：30。当然现在我必须回家了。 多么有趣的一天啊!

last term we had a sports meeting . It has last for a day. I think it’s funny, just like a game.

First is running. And the other part is jumping. The meeting is very exciting. I watched the running match, but I didn’t watch the jumping match. What a pity!

Ha-ha, I ran with my classmate then. Because I want to cheer them on. But always they ran faster than me long. So I had to try my best to catch them up. It’s a hard work, I think.

The match is very fierce. The players are powerful. Who is the best? We guess. All of us hope the winner is our class. Finally, the best will get congratulations. And others also will get comfort and support.

Oh, I am forget something. Before the match beginning, it is warmth and fragrance doubled and redoubled, all of the pupil and teacher will give ther best wishes to the players in their class and also the other classes. They are kind people. And the match is the best way to make people happier, stronger, and also make them become more friendly.

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Everyone has his own day, sometimes happy, sometimes sad. My day is sad.

Today is my birthday, but I how also not happy, because my father is leaving, going out to work, I got up early in the morning, after the meal, dad wanted to go, Im going to get dad, dad said: "at home, dont you send me." Sister cry to send father, father had to let us to send to send.

To the station, my father bought a ticket, ready to get on the car, dad said to me: "tingting, you want to listen to your mother at home, when you grow up, you should take good care of the body, take good care of your sister." Dad say that finish, and on the car, I watched the father figure, my eyes blurred. Dad, dad, you want to come back soon! I will take good care of myself and my sister!

I recalled the father he once took me to the spring outing, I will not be able to play with my father, cant fly kites together, cant see me to get a good grades together, the smile on your face, I will not be able to hear your words to comfort me, dad, come back soon!

I a person walking in the fields, the day very blue very blue, I seemed to understand, leave the pain of loved ones. How great love kiss, I stand on the field, loudly say: "dad, Ill wait for you to come back."

每个人都有自己的一天，有时快乐，有时忧愁。我的一天是悲伤的。

今天是我的生日，可我怎么也高兴不起来，因为爸爸要走了，要出去打工了，早上我早早的起了床，吃完饭，爸爸要走了，我要送爸爸，爸爸说：“你在家，不去送我了就行。”妹妹哭着要送爸爸，爸爸只好让我们去送送。

到了车站，爸爸买了车票，准备上车了，爸爸对我说：“婷婷，你在家要听妈妈的话，你长大了，要照顾好身体，照顾好你妹妹。”爸爸说完，就上了车，我看着爸爸离去的身影，我的眼睛模糊了。爸，爸，你要早点回来!我会照顾好我自己和妹妹的!

我回忆起了爸爸他曾今带我去春游，我将不能和爸爸一起玩耍，不能一起放飞筝了，不能一起看我取得一个好成绩，你脸上的笑容了，我将不能听到你安慰我的话语了，爸，早点回来!

我一个人漫步在田野，天好蓝好蓝，我似乎明白了，离开亲人的痛苦。情亲多么伟大，我站在田野上，大声的说：“爸，我会等你回来的。”

Let me tell you what I will be when I grow up. I think languages are the most important tools of communication among people. Each country＇s languages, which are different, are interesting. So I want to be a translator. Since I was a child, I have learned many kinds of languages. I like to make friends with people from other countries. If I can speak a lot of languages, I will have a lot of friends. I don＇t think being a translator is very easy. It must be very hard. But I want to try! So I＇m studying English now. I want to be a translator in Japan. It＇s my dream and I believe I can do it.

Christmas is very important for a foreigner, it is equally important for Chinese people, today is Christmas Eve, is the first day of Christmas.

On Christmas Eve, Santa Claus is ready to gift this year, in the day but to send oh! I was just about to send mom a big apple, after school, I quickly came to a store, "boss, have a Christmas fruit?" I loudly of say, the boss looked at me and shook his head, ah! Not so soon, alas! I had to go home crestfallen, mother see me frown, said: "whats wrong?" I like sewed the mouth not to tell the truth, I turned her eyes a brainwave, then find ways to make Christmas fruit, see I like listen to the who command to lay down their bags, hide in the room not to come out, first of all, I first took a red and big apple for the main body, with my favorite ribbons to decorate the tree, suddenly a princess appeared in front of me gorgeous dresses, translucent jade bracelet, blue glass slipper, ah! How beautiful, use my card made into the shape of a Christmas tree, the above also write a words: "mom, I love you, you are the most beautiful in the world of the mother, mother Christmas to you soon!" Succeeded, I quickly ran to mom, mom was shocked, she shed a drop of tears, the tears are sweet.

The second day of Christmas morning, I received a gift, I know this is from the mother, but I still like a child, when I came to school, my drawer is filled with CARDS, mother and I am very touched, the card is the card are He Yu, only written on a card, I was very angry, because he and I played a joke on.

Christmas, someone make fun of others makes me very moved, anyhow I wish you all a merry Christmas!

圣诞节对于外国人来说非常重要，对于中国人来说也同样重要，今天就是平安夜，也是圣诞节的第一天。

平安夜到来了，圣诞老人正在准备着今年的礼物，在这一天里可是要送苹果的哦!我正准备送妈妈一个大苹果，放学后我赶忙来到小卖部，“老板，有没有圣诞果?”我大声的说，老板看了看我，摇了摇头，啊!这么快就没有了，唉!我只好垂头丧气的回家了，妈妈见我皱起眉头，便说：“怎么了?”我像针缝了嘴似的没说出真相，我转了转眼睛灵机一动，便想出法子来做圣诞果，只见我像听了谁的命令似的放下书包，躲进屋子里不出来，首先，我先拿来一个又红又大的苹果来做主体，再用我那最喜欢的彩带来装饰它，顿时一位公主出现在我面前华丽的服装，透亮的玉镯、蓝色的水晶鞋，啊!多么漂亮，用我的卡纸做成了一个圣诞树的形状，上面还写上了一句话：“妈妈，我爱你，您是世界上最漂亮的妈妈，妈妈祝你圣诞快了!”成功了，我急忙跑去送给妈妈，妈妈惊呆了，她流下了一滴眼泪，这滴眼泪很甜。

圣诞节的第二天早晨，我收到了礼物，我明知道这是妈妈送的，但我却依旧像个小孩子，当我来到学校时，我的抽屉里堆满了贺卡，和妈妈一样我非常感动，贺卡就是贺卡上面都是一些贺语，只有一张贺卡上写的，我非常生气，因为他和我开了一个玩笑。

圣诞节正是如此，有人开玩笑，也有人令我非常感动，总之祝大家圣诞节快乐!

My birthday party

Today is fools day and its also my birthday. My name is Sam. Im 11 years old. In my birthday party, Mother usually buys some interesting books for me and my father usually buys a pair of beautiful shoes for me. I love my gifts.

My friends are coming. The boys and girls are enjoying my birthday party. Theyre laughing and playing games. Now, Theyre eating sandwiches, cakes and fish. Theyre drinking apple juice and orange juice too. My birthday cake is very big. There are 11 candles on it. They say: happy birthday to Sam! Hip, Hip, Hurry! Hip, Hip, hurry!

Oh, what a nice birthday party!

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

In the year of the festival, my favorite is the Spring Festival.

Each to the twelfth lunar month twenty-three, everyone began to prepare for the special purchases for the Spring Festival street, huge crowds of people, an inattentive may in the sea to find the Northwest southeast.

Its a really lively new years Eve. Night every household had to wear new clothes, the door was attached to the red antithetical couplet, on New Years Eve, every family lights all night, firecrackers and continue to work outside people unless they have to rush back to cannot but, from thousands of miles to eat reunion dinner. One family sit together to chat, watch the Spring Festival Gala, the time in the laughter quietly slipped away, "Dong" "boom" "boom" "boom" clock, 12, everybody went to bed, lively atmosphere suddenly become quiet, everyone enter sweet dreams.

In addition, in addition to a couple days, we are going to relatives and friends home with relatives pay New Years call, not only can eat a lot of delicious food, can also receive gift money, this is the part I love, gift money can not only buy Stationery, can also go to buy toys, hand you always wanted ornaments, pendants and so on......

The Lantern Festival is listed, and a climax to the Spring Festival, the lunar January fifteen, everywhere decorated, very prosperous. In the evening, I had a few small partners and slipped into the street. Ah! Its the ocean of the light. There are many lights, the peacock lights, the lotus lights, the tiger lights... It is so beautiful! At this moment, I seem to have entered a colorful world of fairy tales.

In the blink of an eye, it was nineteen on the first month. The students should go to school, the adults went to work, and everything returned to the past calm.

I have a beautiful school.

In the spring,the weather become warmer and warmer.And the trees become green.Some birds are singing on the trees.The flowers are open.Some butterflies are fly over the flowers.In the fall,the weather is windy.The leaves of trees like butterflies are in the sky.

What a beautiful school is!I like my school.