英语高一议论文作文(汇编20篇)

Oct,1 of every year is our National Day.Today is Oct 1st,2012 and is also our National Day.It is a important festival in china.The Fve-- Star Flag is flying high in the sky of the Tiananmen Square. And we can have a eight-- days holiday.During the holiday,people can go to some places for visiting.We get together with our familes ,and we can relax at home .We are vey happy! I hope everyone will spend a happy holiday.

Chinese Food

Chinese food is famous all over the world, if you ask a foreigner how about Chinese food, they will be full of praise。

中国的美食在全世界都是出名的，一提到中国食物，他们都会赞不绝口。

When we see the movie, Chinese food is praised by the people. Recently, there is a famous movie called A Bite of China, the movie is popular, it introduces Chinese food from different places. The audience is attracted by the delicious food, they never thought Chinese food would be so various. Now the second part of the movie has been made out, more and more Chinese traditional food has been introduced. After appreciating the movie, I begin to learn more about Chinese food, I want to have taste of them. I am so proud of our food, when we talk about it to foreign friends, we can feel their favor of our food. The food is part of our culture, they should be inherited.高中英语作文

当我们看到电影时，中国的食物广泛受到人们的赞扬。最近，有一部很出名的电影叫《舌尖上的中国》，电影很受欢迎，介绍了来自中国不同地方的食物。观众受到了这些美味的食物吸引，他们从来没想到中国的食物可以有这么多的种类。现在电影的第二部分也已经上映，介绍了越来越多的中国传统美食。欣赏了电影以后，我开始学着了解更多中国的美食，我想要尝一尝。我为我们国家的食物感到自豪，当我们和外国朋友讨论中国食物时，我们能感觉到他们对我们食物的喜爱。这些食物是我们文化的一部分，应该要传承下来。

一、议论文写作三要素

议论文主要包括三要素：论点、论据和论证方法。论点必须正确。论据是为说明论点服务的，既要可靠又要充分，事实胜于雄辩，是最好的论据。论据也可以是人们公认的真理，经过实践考验的哲理。论证的方法多种多样，常用的方法有：

1. 归纳法

从分析典型，即分析个别事物入手，找出事物的共同特点，然后得出结论。

2. 推理法

从一般原理出发，对个别事物进行说明、分析，而后得出结论。

3. 对照法

对所有事实、方面进行对照，然后加以分析，得出结论。

4. 驳论法

先列出错误的观点，然后加以逐条批驳，最后阐明自己的观点。

二、议论文的特点

议论文的结构一般有引子、正文和结论句三部分。一般在引子部分提出论点，即文章的主题，在正文部分摆出有利的事实，对论点进行严密的论证，最后根据前面的论证得出结论。

三、议论文的写法

要写好议论文，必须注意以下几点：

1. 确定论点

论点通常在文章的第一段提出。

2. 要有足够的论据，可以列举生活的实例

3. 论证要有严密的逻辑性

所有事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论连接起来。

4. 层次要清楚

5. 态度诚恳、友好，因为议论文重在说理，以理服人

议论文在写作手法上以议论为主，但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。议论中的说明常为议论的开展创造条件，或是议论的补充;议论文中的叙述和描写应是为论点提供依据的因此，叙述应该是概括的，描写应该是简要的。

6. 论据要充分

欲证明自己的观点必须有充分的证据。作者可以列举事实、展示数据、提供事例、借助常识或利用亲身经历。

议论文尽管有多种写法，但中学生的英语作文都有提示，因此，论点、论据一般都是确定的，我们首先应准确找出论点、论据及其间的相互关系，也即是要找出要点;然后考虑如何组织材料，也即是论证的方式，短文的写法;还应考虑文章的时态、语态等。议论文常用一般现在时，但述说过去的事实时，可用过去时态;预测将来时，要用将来时态;也经常使用被动语态;有时假设一种虚拟情况时，还需要用上虚拟语气。在考虑了短文的写法、时态、语态等后，可根据行文的需要，使用恰当的连接词，按适当的顺序将写好的句子组合成短文。

I have a dream , but I darent say my dream is.....

Now I dare say : My dream is that Ill be admited to Qinghua

University.when I was a child, I had heard the highest school Qinghua. The words

often drives my heart. I keep it away for eleven years . However, I am almost

make it come true, because Im not good at studying subjects, my math ,my

English, my Chinese and my mixtrue subjects are not good. So, when I come to

classroom I often sit there and became sad. I think I have worked hard for two

years in the Siner School. But ,all of things arent change quickly. Where is my

seed and where is my gains, but it may be the time . Now, I have been in the

Senior three, and Ill face the case of going to university. Although the case

is so terrible , I have nothing to treat it. I often cry with the reason that

why I am always in trouble. but as the increcs of age , I know that cry is no

use , so I became studying. So, when I came into the Senior Three, I have been

felling myself to change mind to it is that studying is an important thing. If

you want to be good at it , you must finish the studying quickly and correctly

in a sure time, and the most important is that you must know the book well and

understand every rule and after that you may do some practice to improve your

testing cile .At last you must review them ,because the peoples brain is

limited , and it will make you forget all of you have studied it .

At last you must keep a good health and have a good felling. Look, this is

a true senior three student.

Qinghua, please open your door, Im running to you now.

当我第一次见张老师时，她给我的是一副严肃的面孔，我的心里很不安，做什么都是小心翼翼的。生怕做错了什么。后来我们和张老师相处的时间久了，我才知道张老师其实是一个和谒可亲，平易近人的好老师。她关心着每一位同学，给我们支持和鼓励，平时张老师总是细心的教导我们，犯了错误，她把我们叫到办公室严肃的跟我们讲道理，在考试前，张老师又总是会三番两次的提醒我们要细心的做题、检查。因为我的粗心大意，张老师经常找我谈心，让我信心十足的去答题。老师是您诲了我从学习中品尝乐趣，在乐趣中吸取知识。

When I first met Mr. Zhang, she gave me a serious face, my heart is very uncomfortable, what is with great care. Afraid of doing something wrong. Then we and Zhang live a long time, I know that Mr. Zhang is in fact a kind and amiable amiable and easy of approach, a good teacher. She care about each student, to give our support and encouragement, usually Zhang always careful to teach us, made a mistake, she called our office serious to tell us the truth, before the exam, Mr. Zhang will always remind us over and over again careful to do, check. Because I be negligent, Zhang often find my heart, let me full of confidence to the answer. The teacher is teaching me you taste the fun from learning, learning in fun.

老师啊!你那么辛苦，像一根蜡烛，慢慢地燃烧着自己。直到把自己的知识全部交给我们，她才放下心来。这时让我想到一首歌，《每当我走过老师的窗前》“静静的深夜群星在闪耀，老师的窗前彻夜明亮……”

The teacher! You work so hard, like a candle, burning themselves slowly. To put their knowledge to give us all, she will lay down their hearts. This reminds me of a song, "every time I pass the window of teacher" "silent night the stars shining in the night bright window, the teacher......"

张老师啊!这几年您一直辛苦的照顾我们，在这里我要对您说：“老师，您辛苦了!”，祝您教师节快乐。

Zhang ah! These past few years youve been hard to take care of us, here I want to say: "teacher, you have worked hard!" , wish you a happy Teachers day.

The Spring Festival is very important to Chinese people. In the past，people could not often have meat，rice or other delicious food. They could only eat these during the Spring festival. So every year they hoped that the Spring Festival would come soon. Now， although people‘s life is much better，and we can eat the delicious foods everyday. People still like the festival. Because most people can have a long holiday，and we are free to go on a trip or visit our friends or have parties with our family. In the evenings，we can have a big meal in the restaurant or stay at home with family and watch the TV programs.

I like the Spring Festival very much. How wonderful the Spring Festival is！

The National Day is coming. Fred and Jeff are friends. They want to take a trip together.

国庆节快要来临了，弗雷德和杰夫是朋友，他们想一起去旅行。

J: Hi, Fred. The National Day is coming and well have a seven-day holiday. What will you do?

J：嗨，弗雷德，国庆节快到了，我们有七天假期，你想做什么?

F: I want to go outside Shanghai this time. How about taking a trip?

F：我想去上海以外走走，去旅行怎么样?

J: That sounds great! Where do you want to go?

J：听起来很不错!你想去哪儿呢?

F: I have no ideas. Just somewhere with fresher air and fewer people.

F：我也不知道，就想找个空气清新点儿，人少的地方。

J: What about Guangzhou? If you agree, Ill go with you.

J：广州怎么样?如果你愿意，咱俩儿一块儿去。

F: Really? Are you kidding?

F：你说真的?没开玩笑吧?

J: No, I am serious. I want to go there, too.

J：没有，我是认真的，我真的很想去那儿。

F: OK! Lets call the travel agency and find more information.

F：好吧，那我们打电话给旅行社问问，多收集点儿信息。

每次翻看报纸、新闻，经常都能看见好人好事。总觉得，这些“英雄”离自己“遥远”。看看身边，都是人来人往，擦肩而过，几乎没有人做过令我“铭记于心”的事。可傍晚爸爸的一个故事，却让我改变了想法。

晚饭时我正在为怎么找雷锋的事例发愁，这时爸爸回来了，给我讲了一个他身边的“英雄”。

爸爸的学生，我叫他钟老师，长得黑黑瘦瘦的，平时也不太啃声。爸爸说，暑假的一天傍晚，钟老师骑自行车回家，要路过一跳小河。快到家时，听到河边有人在喊“救命”，钟老师顺着声音的方向看去，只见河里有个人在挣扎。因为是傍晚，附近没什么人，只有钟老师一个人。当时他什么也没想，就把自行车往一边一扔，便飞地跑了过去。发现河里的人离岸边还不远，就赶紧把手伸过去，奋力地抓紧他的手，使劲儿地把他往岸上拉，由于钟老师长得瘦，差点儿都被带下水了。终于把河里的人拉了上来，原来是个十几岁的孩子。孩子上来后，钟老师还关心地问他有没有受伤，也许是被吓到了，这个孩子什么也没说就一声不吭地走了。钟老师这才去推起车回家。

听完后，我的脑海中不禁浮起了一个瘦弱的身影趴在河边在奋力地救人的情景。没想到平时那有点儿“闷”，连说话都会脸红的钟老师，在关键的时刻竟然会那么地奋不顾身。

爸爸说，钟老师的这个举动没有人看到，他也是在一次偶然的聊谈中和爸爸说起的。爸爸问他，做了好事没有被感谢，没有报道，是不是不舒服呢。没想到钟老师说，其实也没什么，挽救了别人的生命，平时自己想想也会很开心。原来，在我身边竟然有这么一位默默无闻的“英雄”。我想，那个被救起的孩子以后想起这件事，心里应该会感到温暖的，也许他会因此多去帮助他人的。只要人人都能互相帮助，快乐，便会不请自来，这便是“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”吧。

雷锋精神，很简单，只要你尽自己的力，伸出援助之手，或是一个微不足道的动作，有时候，仅仅是对一个沮丧的人露出微笑，也能让对方感到温暖，能使很多的人得到方便、快乐甚至是拯救。

大家的帮助就像阳光，即使在阴冷的雨天也会让让彼此的心里阳光灿烂，让我们感到别样的温暖。希望每个人都能成为这别样的一道阳光，那样天天都会是晴空万里的。

Grateful mother, it is hard, she endured the October be pregnant is looking forward to I will be in the room. As my first sound loud cry, the mother began to day after day, year after year endless sacrifice, for I worry, complaint or regret, care and parenting, I carefully. Let me live in happy happy environment, let me free to healthy growth.

Grateful mother, is she taught me to learn to be, is she taught me how to communicate with partners communicate with each other, is she taught me to help and love from person to person. Is the most profound in my memory on one occasion, my mother and I go home together, home cousin are playing a game model of the toys, I also very want to play a gun up, but my cousin take back, I was punched in the past, my cousin also dont get back to me, so we played together. When my mother saw hurriedly pulled me aside to. Because I am the only child in the home at ordinary times, everybody affectionately to me, this let me formed the character of swashbuckling would not agree. Wanted to mom this time will call my cousin to give me play the toy, but mother didnt do that, but pulled me aside to me to apologize to my cousin. At first I hated cousin very much in the heart, which will easily agree? Mother looked at will comfort me and patiently enlighten me, give me about the story of "jung let pear". After listening to the story, I also recognize the fault, and apologize to my cousin to apologize. Since then my Cousins and I are very friendly to get along, never quarrel with each other. Mothers teachings in my young mind leave deep memory, in my own life to learn to be nice, tolerance, apologize to each other.

Grateful mother, is she gave me the most unselfish love, she is always worried about my food, clothing, shelter, line. Thank for a mother for giving me the concern of dribs and drabs. The ancients cloud: "dripping of grace, when animals are reported". Ancient huang-xiang temperature had seats, carp lying ice... The story of 24 filial piety. This is Chinas mule Meng Peijie touched story. But now there is something in my gratitude for the mother of way, also dont finish. From now, I want to help my mother share housework more at ordinary times, reduce the mothers work, study hard work more at ordinary times, in order to reduce the worry about mother. Give mother some greetings, as she poured tea water, wipe the sweat back rubs.

All in all, to thank for a mother for too much too much, I remember meng jiao has become a "the wanderer", "the loving mother hand line, wandering onto clothing. Departure thick seam, meaning fear of delay. Who made the heart-inch grass, at a three chunhui." Now I also send the poem to my mother, to express my gratitude to my mother.

感恩母亲，是她忍着十月怀胎的艰苦，期待着我将临人间。随着我的第一声洪亮的啼哭，母亲就开始日复一日，年复一年无休止地为我操心、操劳，无怨无悔，细心地呵护着、养育着我。让我生活在欢乐幸福的环境中，让我无忧无虑地健康成长。

感恩母亲，是她教会我学会做人，是她教会我如何去与伙伴们相互沟通交流，是她教会我人与人之间要互助互爱。在我记忆最深刻的是有一次，我和妈妈一起回老家，老家的表哥正在玩一个游戏模型玩具，我见了也很想玩就一把抢了过来，可表哥又抢了回去，我便一拳打过去，表哥也不让回打了我，于是我们便打了起来。这时妈妈见了急忙把我拉到一边去。平时因我是家中独生子，大家都对我疼爱有加，这让我养成了霸气十足不肯服输的个性。本想妈妈这回会叫表哥把玩具让给我玩，可是妈妈却没那样做，而是把我拉到一边要我向表哥道歉。起初我心中非常恨表哥，哪肯轻易服输呢?妈妈见状就不断安慰我并耐心地启迪我，给我讲起了“孔融让梨”的故事。听了这个故事后我也认识到了自已的错，便向表哥道歉认错。从那以后我跟表哥之间都非常友好地相处，再也没吵架过。母亲的教诲在我幼小的心灵留下深刻的记忆，使我在自己的生活中学会友善待人、互相宽容、互相歉让。

感恩母亲，是她把最无私的爱给了我，是她时时刻刻牵挂着我的衣、食、住、行。感谢母亲给予我的点点滴滴的关心。古人云：“滴水之恩，当涌泉相报”。古有黄香温席、卧冰求鲤……二十四孝的故事。今有感动中国孝女孟佩杰的故事。可如今的我对母亲的感恩有千言万语也道不尽，诉不完。从今起，我平时要多帮妈妈分担家务，减少母亲的操劳，平时多努力学习功课，以减少母亲的操心。多给母亲一些问候，为她倒茶端水，擦汗捶背。

总之，要感谢母亲的事太多太多了，我记起孟郊曾作过一首《游子吟》，“慈母手中线，游子身上衣。临行密密缝，意恐迟迟归。谁言寸草心，报得三春晖。”如今我也把这首诗送给我的母亲，以表达我对母亲的感恩之情。

It was the third day of our winter holiday. Today, there are many business in my mother’s netpany. So my mother told me to help my uncle who is the manager of my mother’s netpany. I sat in my mother’s office and help her answer the telephone.

While I was free, I was writing my homework. Although I also have a lot of time to do my homework, I still do it. Because in my mother’s office, I had nothing to do. If I did nothing, I was wasting my time and my life. I can’t do the foolish thing. We should take good use of our time.

光之精灵彩衣斑斓，赤橙黄绿青蓝紫。那是阳春赋予它的骄傲，七月赋予它的成熟，花瓣上的露珠衬托着整个世界的美，我将它抖在手心，一会儿便没了，只留下一些深刻的追思与回忆。

是的，时间就是这样，光阴似箭，转眼我是一名高一的学生了，对于高一，我即充满期待又充满畏惧。

高一了，我知道自己不能再像弟弟那样玩了，我只能“两耳不闻天下事，一心只读圣贤书。”

高一了，我也明白了自己不能时时刻刻松下劲，我只能“衣带渐宽终不悔，为伊消得人憔悴。”来获取自己的目标。

高一了，我也成熟了不少，也了解到“只有吃得苦中苦，长大方为人上人。”的感觉。

高一了，我知道自己可能会遇到很多困难，我我会一直相信“天生我材必有用，千金散去还复来”。

高一了，我不会再为了“有心栽花花不开，”而烦恼了，因为有可能会“无心插柳柳成荫”;我不会为了“山重水复疑无路”而悲伤，因为有可能会“柳暗花明又一村”；我不会为了“众里寻他千百度”而灰心，因为有可能会“那人却在灯火阑珊处”。

高一了，时间真的会像河中水，只能流去不流回，我只有过好每一天，我才能完成我的梦想。

记得，曾经有人这样说过：路在哪里？路在自己脚下，走什么样的路，全靠你自己怎么走。

我也是，我的高一之路已铺向我，在高一路上，我并不奢求充满鲜花和掌声，我只是期望我在路上能走好每一步！踏踏实实过好每一天，让我的高一在充实的日子中度过，我相信，只要我能走好这条路，我的未来便不是梦！

This is my room. It is very attractive. It is the pink. Looked! That is the baby kingdom! Lovable Tidy Xiong He the beautiful banana plant is beckoning compared to the baby to you! In the baby kingdom also has the toy car, the toy puppy! My small bed is the pink, the bed sheet is also rusting the rose tweed. Above the bed is a leaf of window. Every morning, the sunlight can shine through from the window. Computer on desk. On the desk also has the desk lamp and the notebook. Clothes in closet. In the closet is also hanging some small decorations.

This is my room, what kind of? Attractive?

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.

Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.

对人有益的动物有很多，例如有蜻蜓、青蛙等等。

There are a lot of useful animal, such as dragonflies, frogs and so on.

我们先说蜻蜓吧，它是益虫，它对人的益处可多了。它生活在小池子旁边，捕捉害虫。有些人，捉蜻蜓，捕蜻蜓，捉住后到处卖。我们应给立一个保护蜻蜓法，如果他们再敢捉蜻蜓，捕蜻蜓，就是知法犯法，交给警察叔叔处理。

We first dragonflies, it is good, it can be more benefit to the people. It lives in the small pool, to catch pests. Some people, to catch dragonflies, catching dragonflies, caught after selling everywhere. We should give up a dragonfly, if they dare to catch dragonflies, catching dragonflies, is to break the law, to the police uncle treatment.

青蛙也不例外，它也是捕捉害虫的能手，不过，它生活在庄稼附近的池子旁边，有时候，它也到庄稼地，旁边捕捉害虫，人们都称它保护庄稼的好帮手。有的小朋友，到池子旁边，捕捉青蛙，回家后，吃青蛙。我们应该在池子旁边树一个牌子，上面写着“保护青蛙，人人有责”，这样就不会有人捕捉青蛙了。

The frog is no exception, and it is also catch insects but it lives in crops near the pool, sometimes, it is also next to catch insects to crops, crop protection, people call it a good helper. Some children, into the pool, catching frogs, after coming home, eat a frog. We should be in the pool next to the tree a sign that read "protect the frog, is everybodys responsibility", so no one will catch frogs.

如果没有这些有益动物，害虫就会增多。这样，连农药和灭害灵都不行了。我们应给共同保护动物。

If none of these beneficial animal pests will increase. So, I can not even spirit pesticides and pest. We should to protect the animal together.

Environment Protection

Nowadays, peoples life has changed a lot with the development of modern technology and economy, which has put lots of negative effects on the environment.

Why this? Because, firstly, some factories are pouring wastes into rivers, lakes, seas and so forth; secondly, because of human activities, agreat number of plants and animals are losing their lives; thirdly, using modern machines and chemicals is bad for the environment. Besides these, there are a lot of human activities which have done or are doing harm to our surroundings.

For this, I think, first, our government should make drastic measures to regulate human activities; second, we human beings should take pains-taking work to stop ourselves destroying the environment and try our best to protect our living space more.

[高一英语期末考试作文

July 6 20**

It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free.Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In winter holidays, I want to have full sleepand eat good food in order to replenish myself. Last but not the least, I will have a good rest.

这是第一天，我们的暑假。我们大家都非常高兴。为什么?因为我们有一个月的事我们都爱做的事。我们很空闲.虽然我们有一些功课。但是，我们可以完成他们的若干天。其余的时间我们可以好好利用。我的上帝!我们已经很疲惫后很难学习。在冬季假期，我希望能有充分的很好吃的食物，以补充自己。最后但并非最不重要，我会好好休息。

July 9 20**

It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.

这是我们第二天的暑假。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多时间做我喜欢。我的父母都在中山。所以，我独自生活，但我并不感到孤独。但是，我没有做什么特别。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天，我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫。现在是吃晚饭。我必须去!我非常渴望。

July 10 20**

I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.

我计划花费我暑假体育今年。打篮球是我最喜欢的，所以我的一些同学和我将组建一个小团队，一起打篮球。有时，我们可能有一些其他的比赛队伍和我喜欢的感觉，当我们赢了这场比赛。

July 14 20**

Today I found time was a cruel thing. Whatever man is, time always goes on. It won’t stay to wait for somebody. You can’t use anything to exchange time. Time is also a fair thing. Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation, time won’t leave them more. Today I found I hadn’t enoughh time. Although I have more than a-month holiday, but I found I had a lot of things to do. I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to complete the homework as soon as I have time.

今天，我发现时间是一个残忍的事情。无论男人，总是对的时间。它不会留下来等待某人。您不能使用任何交流时间。时间也是一个公平的事情。虽然你有很多钱，或者您享有很高的声誉，时间不会离开他们更多。今天，我发现我已经没有足够的时间。虽然我已经超过一个月假期，但我发现我有很多事情要做。我有很多功课要做，我必须完成的功课只要我有时间。

July 16 20**

I have rested for 10 days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt uncomfortable. I was ill because of the hot weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me.At last, I was ill.

我已经休息了10天。在这些日子里，我觉得很无聊。我不知道做什么。虽然我有很多事情要做，我觉得不舒服。我生病是因为炎热的天气。我累了，困，也没有力量。我的父母担心我的健康。事实上，这并不重要。我总是在房间空调打开了它在低温。因此，当我走了出去，高温不给我.在最后，我被虐待。

July 16 20**

It was sunny today. I was excited. I got up at a quarter to seven. I made a appointment to meet at nine o’clock. After I had my breakfast, I went to the Wanjia Market . It was hot outside. When I arrived, my friends didn’t arrive. I waited for him in front of the KFC’s door. I haven’t seen them for a year. And in a year, we didn’t come into contact with others frequently. About ten minutes left, my friends arrived one by one. After we greeted,we went to play basketball in Liwan Gymnasium. The match last for tow hours.Oh!I fill very happy today!

这是今天阳光明媚。我很兴奋。我得到了在六时四十五分。我的任命，以满足九点钟。之后，我有我的早餐，我去了万家市场。这是热外面。当我到达，我的朋友们并没有达成。我等待着他前面的肯德基的大门。我还没有看到他们为一年。并在一年内，我们没有接触到其他人频繁。约10分钟离开，我的朋友们来到一个又一个。在我们迎接，我们去打球荔湾体育馆。这场比赛最后的拖车小时.Oh ，我非常高兴今天填补!

July 19 20**

Yesterday we played happily, but there were only ten people. I remembered last year there were twenty-two people at all. I heard some my friends had gone abroad. They went abroad to study. Maybe I couldn’t see them in the future. I think next year we won’t make a party. Next year is a very important year. We all will prepare the new term’s new subject.I know, it is the most important for us now.

昨天，我们高兴地发挥，但只有10人。我记得去年有22人在所有。我听到一些我的朋友已经出国。他们去国外学习。也许我没有看到他们的未来。我想明年我们将不作党。明年是一个非常重要的一年。我们都将编制新的任期的新课程.我知道，这是最重要的是，我们现在。

July 18 20**

It is very hot and wet today and is called sauna weather.

During my mom did the cooking in the kitchen, I saw her head was sweaty.I told her I could help her and she accepted.

After cooking,we were all sweaty .However, mum and I all felt happy. She said I was growing up and became her good assistant.

这是非常炎热和潮湿的今天，被称为桑拿天气。

在我妈妈没有做饭的厨房，我看到她的头部很漂亮.我告诉她，我可以帮助她，她接受。

经过烹饪，我们都汗流浃背。然而，妈妈和我都感到高兴。她说，我的成长过程，并成为她的好助手。

July 19 20**

I think my teacher got out of bedon the wtong side this afternoon as she hasn’t cries.i went to office saw the boys unhappy.Because the students got their teacher’s goat became they didn’t do their homework..I think this is my teacher unhappy’s cause. Today, I saw a boy ,he played the handset.But didn’t saw the walls so he Rnocked we laugh up our sleeve at he knocked ,but he hurt his norse in the accident, and he was laying it on thick about how painful it was .

It’s also a happy day, isn’t it ?

我想我的老师走出bedon的错误方向今天下午，她就一直没有哭.我到办公室看到男孩不高兴.因为学生得到老师的山羊成为他们没有做功课..我认为这是我的老师不愉快的事业。今天，我看到了一个男孩，他发挥了handset.但是没有看到这样的墙壁，他使我们笑了我们套在他撞倒，但他伤了挪威在这起事故，他就铺设厚如何痛苦这是。

这也是一个快乐的日子，是不是?

20**, July 20

I went to summer camp on vacation. On the first day, we went to a beautiful beach. It was a sunny and hot day, so we went swimming. The water was warm and we had great fun. Then the next day, we went to the mountains. There were many trees and I really enjoyed them. On the last day, we had a great party. We sang and danced happily. We didn’t want to leave(离开) the friends and the teachers. I hope I can go to summer camp again next year.

我去夏令营度假。第一天，我们去了美丽的海滩。这是一个阳光和炎热的一天，所以我们去游泳。水是温暖的，我们有很大的乐趣。然后第二天，我们去了山区。有许多树木，我非常喜欢他们。在最后一天，我们有一个伟大的党。我们高兴地载歌载舞。我们不想离开(离开)的朋友和老师。我希望我可以去夏令营明年再次。

20**,July 21

I had a good time last weekend. On Sunday morning, I stayed at home and did my homework. The homework wasn’t difficult. After that, I played volleyball with my friends. It was tired, but very exciting. In the afternoon, I cooked dinner for my parents. It was a little difficult, I think. After dinner, I went to swim in the river. I can swim very well. I had a relaxing weekend.

我有一个很好的时间上周末。星期天早上，我留在家里和我的家庭作业。作业并不困难。在此之后，我打排球我的朋友。这是很累，但非常兴奋。下午，我煮晚餐我的父母。这是一个什么困难，我想。晚餐后，我去游泳，在河里。我可以游得很好。我有一个轻松的周末。

I am in primary school now, and I like my campus so much. The first time I

walk in the school, I am attracted by its beautiful scenery. There are so many

green trees and colorful flowers around. The environment here is so lively. So

many students do the sports in the playground. The comfortable environment makes

me study in good mood.

一、阅读下文，结合以前所学写作理论，从思路框架的设置、事例的选用与表述、文法三方面，探讨该文的成功的原因以及议论文制胜的要素。

学 会 欣 赏

因为懂得欣赏，我们才能领悟到美丽世界的种种奇观;因为懂得欣赏，我们才能发现人生的诸多坎坷，其实也是美妙的乐章;因为懂得欣赏，我们才能在被玫瑰刺伤手指后依然高兴而不心伤。

陶潜欣赏“采菊东篱下，悠然见南山”的洒脱，不为五斗米折腰，生活悠闲自在;李白欣赏“安能摧眉折腰事权贵，使我不得开心颜”的豪放，放鹿青崖，享受到了大自然无限风光的美好。秦桧沉迷权欲，害死岳飞，落得被后人唾骂的下场;成克杰欣赏名利，贪污受贿，结果枉送了卿卿性命。同样是欣赏，会欣赏，欣赏正确的就快乐健康，而不会欣赏或欣赏不正确的就没有好下场。

生活中常常有人抱怨自己缺憾多，不能像别人一样拥有成功的喜悦。其实，每个人都会有缺陷，就象被上帝咬过的苹果，有的人缺陷比较大，正是因为上帝特别喜欢他的芬芳。因此，我们不必在乎命运的安排，只要把握生命，就能扼住命运的喉咙，主宰自己的命运。正如缺陷，只要我们学会欣赏，我们就不会沮丧，因为我们正是那上帝特别喜爱的苹果。

学会欣赏，就是在找不到辉煌的终点时，依然能欣赏到起点的期盼;学会欣赏，就是在达不到生命的顶峰时，仍然能感受到攀登的激情。学会欣赏，就是不沉沦于昨日的失败和挫折，而是从失败的阴影中走出一条成功之路;学会欣赏就是在错过花季后，还能从缤纷落英里感受到果实的甘甜。

“人有悲欢离合，月有阴晴圆缺，此事古难全。”那就带着你善于欣赏的眼睛走吧，你会发现苍凉的在地下，有古莲的胚芽;浩瀚的沙漠里，有燎原的绿洲。

(一) 本文的思路框架：

(二)事例的选用与表述：

(三)文法

二、阅读下文，与前文就立意方面进行比较，区别其不同之处。

学会欣赏自己的学生

老杜

有人不解，我体态肥胖却毫不在意，我坦然，我学会了欣赏自己;有人惊异，我面对无奈却依然微笑，我释然，我学会了欣赏生活;有人羡慕，我与学生亲密融洽，我欣然，我学会了欣赏自己的学生。

一个故事震撼了我的心灵，改变了我的教育观：林清玄曾经报道了一个小偷作案手法非常细腻。在文章的最后，他情不自禁地感叹：“像心思如此细密、手法那么灵巧、风格这样独特的小偷，又是那么斯文有气质，如果不做小偷，做任何一行都会有成就的吧?”没想到，这句话却影响了一个青年的一生。他脱胎换骨，重新做人。如今，已经是台湾几家羊肉店的大老板了!在一次邂逅中，这位老板诚挚地对林清玄说：“林先生写的那篇特稿，打破了我生活的盲点，使我想，为什么除了做小偷，我没有想过做正事呢?”

如果没有林清玄当年对小偷的“欣赏”和期盼，恐怕也就没有他今天的事业和成就。不难看出，欣赏对人生多么重要啊!

小偷尚且能因“欣赏”而改过而成功，你们为什么不能因欣赏而奋发呢?

其实，你们每一个都渴望得到老师的欣赏，老师的欣赏对你们的影响很大，有时甚至会影响一生!做一个老师，首先要学会欣赏!

不会欣赏，自然发现你们缺点点点：没有集体荣誉感，没有团结的精神，没有劳动观念，对老师过分挑剔，对自己要求过松，骄傲自满，自私自利。结果是我挑剔你们，你们挑剔我，工作没法打开。但如果换一个角度去看自己的学生，就会发现你们优点多多：勤奋、积极、向上，在学习上不甘落后于人，有远大的理想，个个都想争第一。老师如果抓住这些“亮点”，欣赏这些“亮点”，与学生相处，融融其乐，就不再难求。老师应该学会欣赏!

欣赏是一种信任和肯定。对学生来说，没有什么东西比老师的赏识更值得自豪的了。你们在日记中这样对我说：“能得到老师的赏识是最值得自豪的，我只有在你写给我的话中，才能真切地感受到你对我的关注。”老师的欣赏，就是对学生的信任和肯定，而这正是学生工作和学习的最大动力!

欣赏是一种激励和引导。我喜欢与你们随意漫谈，我喜欢称赞你们的优点，因为我知道，老师一点点的欣赏，对老师来说轻而易举，对你们却会有很大的激励和引导作用!你们能够一扫过去的迷茫，快乐求知，健康成人，就是我学会欣赏的有力明证。

欣赏是一种理解与沟通。在我欣赏你们的同时，肯定也教会了你们去欣赏别人。人与人能互相欣赏，还有什么不能沟通呢?师生之间能互相欣赏，还有什么不能理解的呢?

学会欣赏吧，欣赏是一种美德。

本文立意的独特之处是什么?你如何也能做到这一点?

结束语：

实际上，大自然神奇而美妙，人生充满快乐和希望。大千世界的人和物，需要我们用真情去欣赏。

可以学会欣赏大自然, 欢歌鸣叫的鸟儿, 粲然怒放的花儿，无语凝重的远山, 来去匆促的河流，空旷与落寞的戈壁, 令人怦然心跳悬崖。

可以学会欣赏人类几千来的人文艺术, 满怀崇敬地去欣赏一幅画，一首歌，一行字，一幢建筑物。

更重要的是学会欣赏人自身, 因为欣赏是人与人之间的一种理解和沟通, 也包含了信任和肯定, 欣赏是一种激励和引导, 可以使人扬长避短, 更健康的成长和进步. 其实社会上的每一个人都渴望别人的欣赏, 同样每一个人也应该学会去欣赏别人, 学会欣赏是一种爱, 人与人之间在互相欣赏之中, 世界才能充满爱!

分类法

看到比较抽象的论题，笼统地谈，议论就很难展开。这时候我们可以考虑将所要讨论的事物分一分类。

比如对“友谊”一词，我们并不陌生，但难以深层论述。这时，我们可将不同类型的友谊分一分类，这样就可打开思路。

友谊，按不同时代，可以分成“伯牙摔琴”、“桃园结义”式的反映封建伦理道德的友谊;“基督——博爱”式的资本主义社会中的友谊;以马克思和恩格斯为典范的无产阶级的革命友谊。

按不同的目的，可以分成为了一个人或几个人的利益而建立的友谊，为了阶级、国家、民族的利益而产生的友谊。

按不同的性质，可以分成在共同的奋斗中，互相深刻了解建立起来的友谊;在一起吃喝玩乐中，互相吹吹拍拍建立起来的“友谊”。

按不同的内容，又可以分成，在你工作遭受挫折时给你帮助，生活遇到烦恼时给你安抚的友谊;在你一帆风顺时给你捧场，在你自鸣得意时为你叫好的“友谊”;“患难相共、生死相托”的友谊;“利则相攘(偷窃)、患则相倾(坑害)”的“友谊”;君子之间“淡淡如水”的友谊;小人之间“甘言如饴”的“友谊”……

有了分类，可供议论的内容一下子变得丰富多了。分类，不仅打开了你的思路，而且使你看到了问题的深入。由此看出，分类法是从各个不同角度来认识事物的性质，把那些抽象的论题具体化的一种方法。

Winter vacation, many happy thing happened, a lot of interesting things happened, many unforgettable things have happened... I today is a thought-provoking thing.

That day, the weather is very cold, snow flied in the sky, spread a thick layer of snow on the ground like a blanket, the whole white world, my mother and I enjoyed very high, ready to go out to play through the snow. Walk to cross the street at the junction, I saw a large group of people in the onlookers, hurried and ran in the past, want to have a look at exactly what happened.

Turned out to be a grandpa in the street selling cabbage. To see him so big of age, still struggling to pick the two baskets of green cabbage to sell, good poor yo! I saw on the cabbage still covered with a layer of white snow! He picked the cabbage, were three uncle know industrial and commercial bureau or the urban management bureau is found, yelling at him, also push and bump, ordered him to leave at once, dont sell food anywhere, it affects the traffic order.

I turned to mother said: "why are they so mean to the old man? Dont they themselves will not old?" Mother didnt answer my question, just let out a sigh, we went away. On the way, Im ripping mad.

"Why cant you give a little love, the in the mind a little more tolerant, more loving? If everyone a little more love, the society will be even more full of warm, isnt it?

寒假里，发生过许多愉快的事，也发生过许多有趣的事，还发生过许多难忘的事……我今天讲述的是一件令人深思的事情。

那天，天气很冷，空中飘着鹅毛大雪，地上像是铺了一层厚厚的雪毯，整个一片雪白的世界，我和妈妈却兴致很高，准备上街去踏雪游玩。走到十字街路口处，我看见有一大群人在围观，就急忙跑过去，想看看究竟是发生了什么事情。

原来是一位老爷爷在街口卖白菜。看他那么大的年纪了，还艰难地挑着两筐绿油油的白菜卖，好可怜哟!我看见白菜上还覆盖着一层白雪呢!他挑着白菜，被三位不知是工商局还是城管局的叔叔发现了，大声吼他，还又推又撞，命令他马上离开，不要随地乱卖菜，这样影响了交通秩序。

我转过身对妈妈说：“他们为什么要对老人这么凶?难道他们自己就不会老?”妈妈没有正面回答我的问题，只是叹了口气，我们就走了。路上，我的心情久久不能平静。

”为什么大家不能都献出一点爱，心里多一些宽容，多一些爱心呢?如果人人都多一些爱心的话，这个社会不是会更加充满温馨吗?

Last weekend, our class had a public benefit activity.

In fact, we went to nursing homes to recite English and Chinese texts and sing songs for them for the old ladies and men. A few days before, we read a text about the loneliness of the people in the nursing homes. So we are volunteering to hold this volunteer labor. We have prepared our own part at for a week. On Saturday afternoon, we brought our performance there and showed them one by one.

The old were laughed happily, so did we. It’s so good to have such an activity.

上个周末，我们班进行了一场公益活动。

事实上，我们去了养老院给那儿的老爷爷老奶奶朗诵英文和中文文章、唱歌。前几天，我们看了一个关于老人们在养老院的孤独的文章。所以我们主动举行这次公益活动。我们准备自己的角色准备了一个星期。上周六下午，我们一样接一样地向他们展示我们的表演。

老爷爷老奶奶们都开心地笑了，我们也很开心。像这样的活动真是太好了。

新的生活显得忙碌而充实，住校的日子自是比不上家里，却也能在我的心里留下浓墨重彩的一笔。晨光熹微的清晨，我踏着露水和着鸟声去操场，去食堂，去上课，我热爱这样的生活并满心期盼。夜幕似水的黑夜，下了晚自习，我又走在操场回到宿舍，把一天的思绪理清存档。没有电视没有网络对我来说是一种尝试和考验，人生的道路上何尝不是这样呢

我结识了新的朋友和老师，但仍从他们身上看到了从前的影子。我努力地让自己沉浸在新的生活中并强迫自己做一段冗长华美的梦，可我无法阻止自己不去怀念过去的所有知己和良师。一路有他们相助，我才得以站在那里，理解更深层次的教育，也结识新的益友。我从来没有和他们道别，他们维系了我的成长，对我的人生亦充满了期盼。或许我正带着他们的梦想继续前行，驶向崭新发亮的远方。

人对未知的一切总是持有无比浓厚的好奇心，我们私下叽叽喳喳地八卦着老师的性格，校长的年龄，同学的喜好，又或是聊聊娱乐新闻。三个月前我也在聊这些，三个月后面前的脸孔悉数变化，谈论的资料却一成不变。我不禁唏嘘感叹光阴的匆匆仍是带不走某些东西的罢。

我对离家的日子着实感到有些不适应，但从小“既来之则安之”的性格让我消除陌生感，欣然理解。我明白人不可能永远待在一个环境，应对新的生活和世界，努力适应才是明智之举。

我怀着对“面朝大海，春暖花开”这般生活的期盼，去理解此刻新的生活，并且憧憬未来新的每一天。