关于老师的英语作文50个单词精彩20篇

初一的第一节英语课，门口进来一位中等个子，长头发的女青年。上下一打量，20岁左右，个头小于等于1米6。这大概就是我们的英语老师吧!此人发话了：“丑话说在前面，我脾气不好!”一句话着实把我们全班都镇住了。第一印象：凶!

可是时间久了却发现，实际上并不是她自己说的那样，也不是我们以为的那样。

她教英语，时不时地用上几句“现代用语”。虽然平常我们也经常说，但是从一个老师嘴里说出来，难免会有些稀奇，距离感一下子就消失了，亲切感一下子就增进了!比如她反复要强调的东西，她会说：“都强调了10遍了”，这还没什么，到后来演变成100遍、N遍;最后递进到N+1遍。她给我们的第一印象便彻底被抹杀掉了。

上晚自习的时候，她会给我们自由，写作业、看书都行，不像数学老师一进来就讲题，语文老师抱着书就要听写。她每次都会读一些连语文老师都不会读的哲理的、感人的文章，有时还会读笑话，即使是不好笑的，她自己也会乐成一团。

有一次英语晚自习，打了铃之后班里仍是像炸了锅一样热闹，吵架的、打架的、嬉笑的、K歌的，应有尽有，无所不有。我正奇怪英语老师为什么还没来，此人就出现在教室门口了。班里顿时鸦雀无声。一同来的，还有班主任。班主任留下了“站一晚上”的“圣旨”后扬长而去。我们在下面悔得肠子都青了，同时也深感不服。这就是自讨苦吃吧，我想。

正想着，忽然发现英语老师也站在讲台上。过了一会儿，她说：“其实今天的事我也有责任。我来晚了。可是大家真的很乱，从四个班走过来，最乱的就是咱们班了……我也陪你们站，大家谁都别坐了，好吗?”她严肃的表情上找不到任何的虚伪，我们都为之感动，就差鼓掌了。结果那个晚上，她真的一边站着一边看书，根本没坐下过。我们谁也没好意思偷懒，就凭她那晚的那番话和行为，我们愿意站十个晚上来奉还。

教过我的英语老师甚至是所有老师中，她的确是教得最好且最能拉近与学生之间距离的一个。翻开我们的英语作业本，你会发现，每个人的本上每天都会有一个大大的英文：加油!

One morning before class, when I was running into the classroom, I knocked over the ink bottle on the teachers desk, and the red ink spilt ① on the desk. I was sure I would be scolded by the teacher. Just at that moment the bell rang and I went to my seat.

Stand up! our monitor said loudly. I stood up and my legs were trembling.

Who knocked over the ink bottle? Miss Ye, the teacher, asked. I kept silent. Many eyes were fixed upon me. Miss Ye walked to me and asked in a low voice,Did you do it?

No, no, I didnt, I said hurriedly②. My face turned red at once. I didnt know why I had told a lie.

OK, I believe you. She patted me on the head and then began teaching.

I felt very sorry. I knew I was wrong. So I went to see Miss Ye in the afternoon.

Im sorry, Miss Ye, I said. This morning I told a lie.

I saw the whole thing through the window when I was outside the classroom, she said. But I didnt scold you. I knew you would come to tell me the truth because I believe you are an honest girl.

I dropped my head without saying a word.

Im happy that you have come, she continued. You havent made me disappointed.

When I heard these words, tears filled my eyes.

[一位宽容的老师英语作文

My English teather is Miss Du ，her English name is Sally ，She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

She often reads books and English. Her hobby is reading books. Her teaching skills are diverse. In class, she usually uses games and posters. She works hard for us. When other teachers rest, she still keeps working and working。

In the class, she is our good teacher，And after class, she is our good friend. she loves us so much, and she is strict with us, So we study English happily and make progress quickly.

This is my English teacher. Our class mates all like her very much.We are really grateful for what she has done for us. We want to say thank you to her!

[我的老师英语作文200字

Three grade, and we have an English class, teaches us English is a female teacher, she xing4 pan, we call her pan. Pan grow very beautiful, she is slim, her eyes are large, eyelash long, like comb furl hairstyle. One day in English class, pan with her gentle and pleasant sound tell stories in English, led us to read English words, we soon learned to pan, teacher like us, revealing the happy smiling face. That day, many of our classmates have a to do amiss, pan it carefully to teach us, teach again and again, never see her hair far and has never seen her appear impatient. Pan with her gentle and friendly voice asked: "can?" That sounds like a mother, like a warm breeze of our hearts, let me really moved! Again and again the pronunciation errors, dont have standard pronunciation, English teacher still use soft voice teach us. I like our English teacher -- pan teacher!

The teacher is human soul engineer, they feed a another young seedlings, cultivate a batch of another batch of talent. Under their care, we grow up healthy, lively. In so many teacher, what impressed me most was his, two years ahead of us, taught language teacher - mao-de wang teacher.

Teacher wang oval face with a pair of little also not small eyes; In the dark, dark hair, is also a big mouth, it is this is just a big mouth, gave us the knowledge, gave us happy.

In class, the teacher will use mouth, brilliantly interpretation of the text, let you hear and see, will let you in body and mind, wont consider other has nothing to do with learning. Thus, in the exam, you will get unexpected results.

Remember a test, we had a bad, were down in the dumps the classmates,. The teacher to adjust our depressed mood, he put his hands together, said with a sigh: "amitabha, good indeed, good indeed." The whole class laughed, some students asked the teacher: "teacher wang, are you a" monk "?" The teacher replied: "yes!" At this time, the radio and put a song, wang teachers also along with the music sang "lattice, thats..." Students have also taken to give the teacher a rhythm, at this moment, the bell rang, the teacher wang sing a way: "thats, everybodys time for class." Ha, ha, ha... Teacher wang not only adjust the depressed mood, we also brought joy.

This is my teacher wang. We are happy, wang also follow happy; We are not happy, miss wang is always trying to make us happy.

老师——是人类灵魂的工程师，他们哺育了一颗又一颗稚嫩的幼苗，培养了一批又一批的人才。在他们的精心呵护之下，我们健康、活泼的成长。在那么多的老师中，给我印象最深的却是他——教了我们快两年的语文老师——王茂德老师。

王老师椭圆的脸上镶嵌着一双不大也不小的眼睛;黑黑的头发，不大也不小的嘴巴，正是这张不大也不小的嘴巴，给了我们知识，给了我们快乐。

在课堂上，老师会用嘴巴绘声绘色地讲解课文，让你听得如醉如痴，身临其境，会让你投入身心，不会顾及别的与学习无关的事。这样，在考试时，你定会取得意想不到的成绩。

记得一次考试，我们考得很差，同学们个个垂头丧气，打不起精神。老师为了调节我们苦闷的心情，他把两只手合在一起，叹了一口气说：“阿弥陀佛，善哉，善哉。”全班同学哈哈大笑，有的同学问老师：“王老师，你是‘和尚’吗?”老师回答：“是啊!”这时，广播放了一首歌，王老师也随着音乐唱了起来“格的，格的，格的格的……”同学们也拍着手给老师打节奏，这时，上课铃响了，王老师唱道：“格的，格的，大家上课了。”哈，哈，哈……王老师不仅调节了我们苦闷的心情，还给我们带来了快乐。

这就是我的王老师。我们快乐时，王老师也跟着快乐;我们不快乐时，王老师总是想办法让我们快乐。

我们班最近出了个隐形侠，她可不是身边的同学，而是我们的英语老师，不只是是我这样认为，而是大家公认的。

上课铃响后，学校里安静了许多，可我们的教室却还像开生日会一样热闹。不过这种快乐并不长久，因为“隐形侠”要来了。她躲过了我们班有名的大嘴巴和三个侦察兵，从后门默默走进来，拿出手机，照了一张全景图，听着手机的拍照声，我们才察觉到她的出现，但为时已晚。

她虽然一言不发，但她满是严肃的脸，连老虎见了都要怕她三分。

她开口了，张口说到：“英语书抄三遍。”雷声般大的嗓门，连整个教学楼都带回声的。说完就从前门走出，过了5分钟，再次放松的我们又开始低声说话。没想到她又从后门进来，说道：“再加一遍！”这次整个班级都安静了一节课，老师再走时，之前热闹的我们，早就已经鸦雀无声了，因为害怕有第五遍。

哎，谁让她是隐形侠呢！而且她可从来都是说到做到。

这就是我们班的“隐形侠”，你们班有这么厉害的老师吗？

Dear don: Hello!

Unknowingly, I came to class 3 of grade 2014 for more than a year. In one

year, I have known many children who have studied with me. As an excellent head

teacher, your careful care and tireless teaching are deeply imprinted in my

mind. For us, you would rather become a candle, burn yourself, and light our

bright future.

The growth of small trees is inseparable from rain and the care of the

gardener; the beautiful fragrance of flowers is inseparable from the soil and

the company of bees; our growth is inseparable from the teachers teaching. Mr.

Tang, every little bit of this year, I will never forget it!

In life, you are always so meticulous. In class, as long as there is a

classmate who is not comfortable, you will send him to the health care room.

When you come back, you will always ask "how is it? Is it better?" Lunch, you

also let all students eat meat, let us eat with health. These two points alone

are enough to show our love for us. In learning, you have always taught us

carefully. Every time you learn a word, you always ask us to read and memorize

hair step by step, and explain the meaning repeatedly. If we do something wrong,

you usually teach us as sternly as that, but I know that behind this sternness

lies the tenderness of a loving mother.

Mr. Tang, it is you who have cultivated countless national pillars with

your own sweat and youth, but you are so unknown. Finally, I want to say to you

loudly: "thank you, teacher!"

她天生就一副孩子的模样，像一棵树的叶子总多于枝干那样，她带些婴儿肥，给人的印象总是胖嘟嘟，呆萌呆萌的。她的大鼻子立在一片空地上，骄傲得像即将登上王位的皇子，毫不客气地占领了她五分之一甚至更多的光洁之地。而这位皇子明显是威严不足，即便是他如何警告威胁，她那野心勃勃的“大臣”——嘴巴，总是费劲了心思要在这片肥沃的土地上多占一席之地。于是在他们的明争暗斗之下，那些战争留下的伤痕——皱纹，悄然爬上了原本年轻活力的脸庞。

尽管岁月如此残酷无情，她骨子里那种充满激情和积极向上的心态却毫不服输。她像冬天刚过的第一缕春风，到哪儿，哪就从一片荒凉变成春暖花开。马尾辫的甩劲犹如河边的细柳在舒展身姿；嘴角似有若无的笑意犹如燕子报春的亲切问候。主角的光环在她周身闪耀，阳光的柔和温暖包围了她，像儿时童话中改变了灰姑娘一切的天使一般，她的一颦一笑，一举一动都牵动着我们的心，将我们心中的千年冰山融化。于是光是她的存在，就让我们心中感到温暖，对未来充满了希望。

她那盈着璀璨星光的双眼，像海上卷起的旋涡，让人不能自拔地陷入其中，却又比旋涡要温柔许多。或许该将她的明眸比作一汪春水，因风荡起层层清波，一圈一圈扩散开，丝丝柔情蔓延开来，缠上心头，论谁都抵不住这样的柔情攻势，心甘情愿地沉浸在这奇妙的世界。

突然，这个美妙的世界在一刹那刮起了狂风，下起了暴雨，这样的暴风雨充满了警告意味，让人不寒而栗。利剑出鞘！看到这种眼神的人们只有这样的感想。他们当然来不及详想这眼光带给他们的感受，在这锋利目光的审视下，只让人觉得自己像犯了什么错。于是一边承受着像万年冰雪般的目光，一边努力地回想，近来是否有些事做得不妥，近期有没有“慢性自杀”？定是要将最近所干的事在脑子里过了个遍，确定没干什么不该干的，才略有底气，与那目光来个空中厮杀。然而才一秒钟，那点好不容易集齐的勇气便散得一干二净。怎么办呢？能怎么办？低头盯脚尖呗！再将那细碎小事在脑子里转个圈，确认再确认，确认再确认，却再也没有对视的勇气。

就在这时，凉彻心扉的感觉消失不见了，取而代之的是一种温暖的，慈母般的目光。她收敛了尖锐，用阳光将你围起，一道彩虹在天光下架着，绚丽的光芒充斥着整个世界。这一刻，眼前俨然又是那个柔情似水的春天。清脆的鸟鸣好似在安抚你方才的不安，微风轻拂后背，微动，是干燥的味道，幸福的味道。

这就是她，我们的英语老师，丹丹汤。她是一盏明灯，一叶方舟，一潭绿水。她无声地来，悄然带来了她身后的整个世界。而这样的她，也必然缺少一样东西，那就是属于她自己的轻松时光。

黄晓澄

我们班有人喜欢讲课生动的语文老师，有人喜欢表情严肃的数学老师。而我最喜欢的是和蔼可亲的英语老师——冼老师。

冼老师有一双会说话的眼睛。每当我拿作业上去办公室时，我在门口报告，说：“老师们好。”冼老师就会对着我笑。当我把作业放好给老师，走到办公室门口说：“老师们再见。”冼老师又会再次对我笑。虽然冼老师没有说话，但是我看到老师的眼睛似乎在对我说：“你好呀，进来吧。”“再见。”这温暖的表情，每次都让我心里很舒服。

有一次，冼老师叫我们写第一单元的作文，我想来想去都不知道可以怎样写。我抬起头看了看周围的同学们，他们个个都如有神助，奋笔疾书，而我却什么都没写。

冼老师见到我什么都没有写就走过来，指导我写作业。冼老师给我分析了题目，并理清写作思路，我一下子茅塞顿开，下笔如有神，很快就把作文写完了。我拿着我的作文去给冼老师改。冼老师改完之后对我说：“你以后上课要认真听课，不能开小差，知道吗？看认真听讲后作文写得多棒！”我惭愧地低下了头，说：“知道了，冼老师。”我本以为老师会批评我没有认真听讲，没想到冼老师不但没有骂我，还耐心指导我，我真的很感谢冼老师。

冼老师，您是辛苦的园丁，为我们修枝，剪叶，让我们开放得更美丽。冼老师，请您相信，我一定用好的成绩来报答您！

我的英语老师唯一的爱好就是跳江南styl，他喜欢笑，讲起课来很随意，讲着课随便都可以插入5分钟的笑话，或者不经意间就和同学们聊起天来，所以他整个人看起来很随和，同学们都喜欢他的课，因为在他的课堂上总是乱七八糟的。

我也不例外，我特别喜欢上英语课，当然喜欢英语课的另外一个原因是我的英语成绩还不错。有一天上英语晚自习的时候，英语老师组织同学们考试，先交完试卷的同学们可以自己干自己的事情，他要求同学们不要说话就行，于是我拿出一张纸，在上边画上两只小猪，用英语在旁边标注着英文两只小猪的对话，写完后我居然大胆的在纸上边用铅笔标注着英语老师的名字。当我拿着自己的杰作开心的给同桌看时，居然被我那小气的同桌给告发了。

我知道自己闯了祸，像一个犯了错的罪人一样顿时立在自己的座位旁边不敢出声。还好老师给我面子，没当着全班同学的面数落我，让我和同桌跟着他去办公室谈，他让我写份检讨拿给他，可当我第二他拿给他检讨的时候他看也没看一眼，告诉我说下不为例，果真是宰相肚里能撑船，多么随和的一个人，他大人不记，我这个小人自然就好过了。

or every student, meeting a good teacher is very important, it will change their lives. I am so lucky that I met a good teacher and she opened the new chapter of my life. I will never forget the things she taught me.

对于每一个学生来说, 遇到一个好老师是非常重要的,它将改变他们的生活。我很幸运,我遇到了一个好老师,她打开了我人生的新篇章。我永远不会忘记她教给我的东西。

When I was in high school, I felt so bored about the English class, because I did not understand it. Miss Li was my English teacher, she found my attitude to her class. One day, when the class was over, she asked me to her office. She did not blame me for sleeping in her class, instead, she smiled and asked me the opinion about her class. I said her class was a little  boring and I thought she would be angry. Miss Li smiled and agreed with me. She asked me to give some opinion. I was so surprised that she was so kind. Miss Li improved her class and I became very active.

当我在高中的时候,对于英语课,我感到很无聊，因为我听不懂。李老师是我的英语老师,她发现我对她课的态度。有一天,在下课的时候,她叫我去她的办公室。她没有怪我在她的课上睡觉,相反,她笑了笑,问我对她课的意见。我说她的课有点无聊,我以为她会生气。李老师笑着赞同我。她叫我给一些意见。我很惊讶,她是如此的友善。李老师改善她的课,我变得非常活跃。

Though I enter  the college, I will never forget Miss Li’s class and the things she taught me. She respects me and makes me important. I am so thankful to her.

虽然我进入了大学,我将永远不会忘记李老师的课和她教给我的东西。她尊重我,让我变得重要。我很感谢她。

Dear Ms Zhang,

I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you. You are the very person who gave me a hand when necessary.

One month ago, with the College Entrance Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirits, being afraid of letting my parents down because of my average academic performance. When I was at a loss and on the point of giving up, as my headteacher, you asked me to go to your office. Instead of blaming me, you comforted me and discussed with me the reasons for my failing in the exam. More unforgettably, you managed to help me with my study and always inspired me from time to time. Gradually, I learned how to adjust to myself and stayed calm in the College Entrance Examination.

Ms Zhang, I’m more than grateful for what you have done for me, from which I’ve got to know it is never too late to get back when there is still hope. Wish you happiness and good health.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

New semester has come a new teacher, thin and long face with a broad-brimmed glasses frame, laughed, and a bright red lips up become warped, moment, back to the serious look, this is my math teacher, miss zhao.

Whenever the class, he always come first "prologue" : read the topic, and requirements. Followed by plain, there is no passion to ask: "have faith?" There is no doubt that we must answer "yes". In class, each persons actions to escape his sharp eyes, however, as long as one finds that someone has to do little affectations, or whispering has nothing to do with mathematics, he immediately walked over to the students, to carry the paper, "pa", on the students table, will continue to have a class, the classmate reluctantly shook his head, pulled out a pen and write down his home telephone number on the paper, waiting for the fate of any...

Once, the hot weather, the classroom "shout shout" fan, a classmate said: "somehow, other classes, the classroom as a stove, have math, like in the snow, cold I get goose bumps!" Next to a classmate echoed: "yes, yes, I also feel this way!" I smiled and said: "you also too exaggeration! Miss zhao really have so much magic?" "May, might!" Never know who is 1.

Tender and loving seen too many female teacher, to such a distinctive male teacher, is also very unforgettable.

新学期，来了一位新老师，瘦瘦长长的脸上架着一副宽边眼镜，笑起来，鲜红的嘴唇往上一翘，瞬间，又回到那严肃的模样，这就是我的数学老师——赵老师。

每当上课，他总先来段“开场白”：先读题目，再说要求。紧接着平平淡淡、毫无激情地问一句：“有信心吗?”毫无疑问，我们肯定回答“有”。上课中，每一个人的所作所为都逃不过他犀利的眼睛，只要一眼发现有人做小动作，或者窃窃私语与数学无关的事，他便立刻走到那位同学跟前，把随身携带的纸，“啪”，放在那位同学的桌上，便继续上课，那位同学无可奈何地摇摇头，拿出笔，在纸上写上自己家的电话号码，等待不测的命运……

一次，天气闷热，教室里的风扇“呼呼呼”地转个不停，一位同学说：“不知怎么回事，上其他课，教室像火炉，上数学课，却像在下雪，‘冷’得我起鸡皮疙瘩!”旁边一位同学附和着：“对，对，我也有这种感觉!”我笑着说：“你们也太夸张了吧!赵老师真有这么大的魔力吗?”“可能，可能!”不知是谁插了一句。

见过太多温柔可亲的女老师，来了这样一位与众不同的男老师，也很难忘哟。

我最欣赏的一位老师，当然就是英语老师了。她叫谢伟丽，她很漂亮，在生活各方面都很简朴。当然，在工作更是呕心沥血，辛勤劳碌了。我特别欣赏她。

别人都说老师是校园的辛勤园丁，每天把我们的“小毛病”都“剪”掉，“修剪”我们；像一支小小的蜡烛，虽然您的光薄弱，但您已经尽心尽力的去照亮学生，温暖我们，自己却一点一点的熄灭；春雨，染绿了世界，而自己却无声地消失在泥土之中；有如从朔风凛冽的户外来到冬日雪夜的炉边；而我要说：”您就像我们迷失方向的指路牌，像正在下雨中您为我们撑得一把伞，更像那早上刚刚升起的太阳，为我们服务，为我们照亮前方，更为我们”点迷指津“。

记得有一次，您的喉咙疼，生病了。但并没有在困难退缩，而是微笑面对困难。正是因为这一次，我尊敬您了；正是因为这一行动，我喜欢您了。也正是这一机会，让我更加了解您，欣赏您了。您为了给我们上课，而熄灭自己，难道这不是坚强的精神吗？在学校里，教室里，您永远都挂着那甜蜜的微笑，我们好像到了一个美好的”糖果世界“甜甜蜜蜜，温暖人心。

老师，是您教会我们知识，教会我们勤学好问，更教会我们要：敏而好学，不耻下问。您说过：”其实，世界上没有“笨同学”，只有“懒同学”，只要你努力，奋斗，就一定会成功。在批评面前，不要害怕，不要气馁，更不要自卑，因为”失败是成功之母“。每个人的人生都不是一帆风顺的。在人生中，坎坷是不可缺少的。如果是一帆风顺的，那么你的人生是不完整的。”

有一道彩虹，不出现在雨后，也不出现在天空，它常出现在我心中，鞭策着我堂堂正正地做人，忘不了您和风细雨般的话语，荡涤了我心灵上的尘泥；忘不了您浩荡东风般的叮咛，鼓起我前进的勇气。老师，感谢您用自己的生命之光，照亮了我人生的旅途。

Dear MrYang,

How is everything going! Tomorrw is Teachers’ Day.I would like to express my sincerely wishes to you. You taught me English inthe primary school. That is the time to lay our foundation. And you help me laymy interest on English, which make me feel learn English easily in middleschool. I’m very appreciated that. Thank you very much. If it is convenient foryou, I would like to visit you this National Day. Happy Teachers’ Day again.

Best wishes,

Lucy

As the gratuation is driving near,I feel more grateful for you.In the past team,you teach me a lot.Your encouragement really help me make progress.

Last term,I have some problems in my learning English,you give me advise and help me solve the problem patiently.That really moved me.

I think youre almost perfrct except to be a little serious.If you could have more smile in the class.that would be better.

All in all,thanks for all the help you give me in the past team. ,Best wishes

Dear Mr Fu,

This is my first letter to you. Its a thank-you letter!

Thank you for what? Thank you for teaching me and helping me.

When I am in trouble, is your warm hand to help me, not when I want to give

up when you use your words to support me, I sincerely thank you! Thank you very

much!

In the coming Christmas, I would like to express my deep thanks to you

again!

I wish you good health and good luck in everything!

Your students

亲爱的复老师

这是我给你写的第一制封信，是一封感谢信!

感谢什么呢?感谢你对我的教导，对我的帮助。

在我困难的时候，是你伸出温暖的手帮助我了我，没当我想放弃的时候是您用您的话语支持了我，我衷心的谢谢您!谢谢!

在圣诞节到来之际，我再次向你表达我深深的谢意!

祝您是身体健康，万事如意!

您的学生

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

微风轻轻地吹着这个有着美丽落日的黄昏，叶儿反射着金黄的光在轻轻摇曳，而我走在这个有着美丽师妹的校园。在这个美丽黄昏，会想起点什么呢，呵呵，我想起了你，我最美丽的英语老师。

遇到你是在我在外实习 回来的那个学期，你穿着粉红色的裙子走在那个有着美丽小花的校园，我与你相对而走，平时特别害羞的我那时居然破天荒的叫了声老师好，还说了句：老师你真美!呵呵，现在想起不禁佩服当年的勇气。在我得知你就是我的英语老师的时候，我可高兴了，为此我还努力学习了一下英语。

成熟，美丽，温柔，稳重，善良，细心，……。你有着女人所需要的一切优点，令年少的我着迷。那天，为了你，我翻遍了英语的杂志，终于找到了一句我想对你说的话，我把它抄到了我的作业本上，交了给你。那句话，我至今不忘：The most beautiful English teach，I’m only hungry for your love，这是我唯一可以用英语表达的一句话。

时间 在不知觉中飞逝，我已离开了你两年了，在这个校园，我也遇到很多很美的 女孩 ，可惜，她们都不肯为我展一个花开般的笑容，老师，我该怎么办呢?很想很想你，想再见到你。其实，我最想的是完成当年没完成的一个心愿，轻轻地吻一下你。

老师，如果我立刻跑回去，你会让我吻一下你吗?呵呵，你是否还是只对我轻轻微笑一下?其实，我只要你那倾国倾城的微笑。

我最美丽的英语老师，想你了，在这个美丽的黄昏。

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An ideal teacher

Different people have different opinions with regard to an ideal teacher. For me,a teacher who is humorous ,considerate and knowledgeable will be the most perfect one.

As you know, many subjects are very boring, and if the teacher is the one with sense of humor, you will be enegetic in his class and bear what you learned in mind.A considerate teacher must be the most popular one with students. For example, when you are sleepy in his class, he will not criticize you but say something that you can go to the dorm to sleep and about the lesson, i will help you after the class.If the teacher is knowledgeble,you can really benefit a lot from him, and it will be very helpful for shaping yourself.

In short, a teacher should be the one who you really can learn something from and can make you want to learn.

[我心目中理想的老师的英语作文

在我们班里有一个优秀的老师，他工作细心认真，从不粗心大意。

虽然这学期上对我们很严格，但是她也有能让我们快乐的学习方式。这些都是我们班的英语成绩大大提高，而她就是我们班的英语老师——田老师。 现在我们上英语课已经不会有不专心的学生了。但是，过去有，而且有好多“热爱祖国语言人士”根本就不学英语。现在这些“人士”，根本就不敢在英语课上“热爱祖国语言”了。如果人士们要一意孤行，那是要付出代价的。 上课的铃声一响，英语老师的神情就与平常时判若两人，她的眼神马上就变成了利剑。老师如炬的目光像探照灯一样，扫视着每一个角落。同学们的小动作在这样的目光里无处遁形。如某处有风吹草动，英语老师会用犀利的目光紧紧的盯着。随后，一声霹雳似的批评，会让分心的同学认真起来。接着，那倒霉的孩子就会乖乖的捧着课本，站到讲台前。更重要的是下课以后，那倒霉的孩子还要忍受英语老师长篇的思想教育。 几个回合的较量，我们班级里的所有抱有某种幻想的顽皮男都--败下阵来。过去曾耀武扬威的风云人物在英语课上统统变成了温顺的绵羊。虽然他们在背地里有过种种密谋，但是一到了英语老师的面前立刻就变成了乖孩子。 如今，田老师已经成为了我们学习生活中不可或缺的人物，就是在教授让我们受益匪浅。她每天都有认真的工作态度，详细的工作计划，优秀的工作能力。

这就是我们的英语老师——田老师。