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579中考英语阅卷老师揭秘满分作文是如何炼成的
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+ 加入清单中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流,对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。
一、中考英语写作的概述
你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?
归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。
英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。
中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。
二、中考英语写作的评分标准
1、老师拿到的标准
写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?
评分标准:
(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。
(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。
(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。
(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。
(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。
2、老师想看到的标准
语言(8分):
词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;
句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!
内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。
结构(4分):
语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;
内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;
句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;
亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。
三、扣分
内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。
字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。
中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。
但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。
当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。
所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。
语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;
标点错误:每4个扣0.5。
四、加分
作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。
“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。
据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。
因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。
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+ 加入清单Along with the time development accessing the net already turned the extremely universal matter. No matter is adult or the child so long as mentioning the computer all think of internet. But accessing the internet is advantageous but also has shortcoming.
I knew very many people access the net mainly is for playing games which is very bad for the study. Therefore some people believed the elementary and middle school students lack the self-control.
Butthere are many people approving to accessing internet why? Because internet can provide to the people very helps. First the network looks like a library we can look up very many materials easilyand it is quicker than the speed of consulting books; Next we may read a richer news on-line; In addition accessing the net also has other functions for example E-mail telephoning on the net and so on.
Actually accessing the net has its profit and the shortcoming place. We use it to open to expand the field of vision the study knowledge but must certainly grasp the discretion.随着时间的发展,接入网已经变成了极为普遍的问题。不管是大人还是孩子,只要一提电脑,都想到互联网。但是,上网是有利的,但也有缺点。
网络的好与坏高中英语作文 我知道很多人上网,主要是玩游戏,这对学习是很不好的。因此,有人认为,中小学生缺乏自我控制能力。
但是,有许多人赞成上网,为什么呢?因为互联网可以为人们提供很有帮助。首先,网络就像一个图书馆,我们可以看到很多材料很容易,而且比查阅书籍速度快;其次,我们可以读到更丰富的新闻在线;此外,上网还有其它作用,例如,电子邮件,网上通电话等等。
其实,上网有它的盈利和缺点的地方。我们用它来开阔视野,拓展视野,学习知识,但一定要把握自由裁量权。
篇2:热门中考英语作文:拯救地球
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+ 加入清单导语:地球妈妈在流泪,我们人类做了太多伤害它的事情,让我们一起来拯救它吧!下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment
It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.
So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights and turning off the lights when we leave;Do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.
Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!
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让我们做些事情来拯救我们的环境
这是最近报道,一些河流和湖泊已经干涸的中国南方地区。许多鱼死了。河流和湖泊的底部变成了草地。由于天气不好,水变得越来越少了。
所以每个人都应该做些事情来拯救我们的环境。首先,我们应该节约每一滴水,如使用后关闭水龙头和回收水。例如,我们可以用我们用过的水给植物浇水和打扫休息室。第二,我们应该节约能源,比如我们离开时少开灯和关灯;多走路,多骑车,少开车等等。第三,我们应该要求政府控制工厂的污染。
让我们从一切行动来拯救我们的环境。不要让我们的眼泪成为世界上最后一滴水!
篇3:玩网络游戏的利弊
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+ 加入清单我个人认为,小学生玩网络游戏的利与弊不在于游戏,在于同学们的自控能力。有的同学自控能力不好,导致对自己的身心有影响。
记得在某天,一位自控能力不好的大学生,因受网络游戏的影响,去学网络游戏的一些危险动作,最后从23楼跳下来而不幸身亡。还有一次,一位学生的自控能力挺好的,可是他玩网络游戏入了迷,导致神志不清,拿刀割脉,最后抢救无效而身亡。这一件件触目惊心的案子,让大家都有一些恐惧,可是这些案子却一件件地发生,所以是弊大。不过,万幸的是,有一个学生玩网络游戏本已误入歧途,可是,他改过了,写了一张:离开网络游戏,网络游戏害死人。的纸条放在鼠标下面,然后他就没动过电脑,为此,他的父母很开心。
一个个同学因为玩网络游戏而身亡,我们要会恐惧,不要误入歧途,所以我希望大家要控制好自己的人生断送在网络游戏上。一定要控制好自己!
篇4:一次难忘的英语期中考试
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+ 加入清单这周的星期三,在这个阴云密布的早晨,进行了让人紧张而又难忘的英语期中考试。
早读课时,我认真地阅读着英语书,生怕漏掉了什么,使得没能考到好成绩,不过,当时并不是很紧张。就在这时,我听到了让老师领卷子的广播,心里默默地想:放松,放松,我可以考好的,为什么要紧张呢?虽然,我竭力地安慰着自己,可是紧张的感觉,却油然而生。突然,四(3)班的老师走了进来,原来,她就是我们这次的监考老师。开始放听力的录音了,声音震耳欲聋,有一道题目没能听清,结果就蒙了一个答案,心里暗暗地想:惨了,这个题目没听清,如果蒙的答案是错的,岂不是要拖累自己了?后面的笔试部分我觉得很简单,于是就没有认真检查。
第二天,报成绩时,我的心“扑通扑通”地跳着,脑神经简直绷到了极点。虽然得到了一个不错的成绩:98.5,但是那依然不是我心目中理想的成绩。果然,我没听清楚的那道听力题不出所料错了和一个单词少了复数形式的“S”。顿生悔意,如果我当时检查一遍或许就只会错一道题了。
这次考试,因为我粗心和对题目的轻视而犯下的错误,铭刻在我的脑海里,从今以后我不能再让自己重蹈覆辙,要认认真真地做好每一件事。
篇5:中考英语作文:Mybirthday
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+ 加入清单My birthday is on .i celebrate it every year with my family and my friends.every year,i hold a little birthday party and invite my friends over. we chat and play a lot of games together. the best part of it is that i love the birthday cake and the gifts i get from my parents and my friends. i also get some money on my birthday.i can buy what i want with the money. i have GREat fun on my birthdays. but on the other hand, i also understand that i am 1 year older after each birthday. and that means i should be more responsible for myself and i should also my self-aware. i should understand more things and be less ignorant!fianlly, i should be thankful for my parents,i know they have done their best in raising me up.
My birtiday is on XXX. I always have both happy and sad feelings on my birthday. Why I am happy? I have group of friends that come over to celebrate with me. And they give me birthday presents, sometimes the gifts surprised me very much. Also, I can feel how much my family loves me because my parents always make a birthday cake for me. They do not go to buy one, but make one themselves. I feel so happy about that. However, I understand my mother was the one who suffered the most pain on the date I came to the world. I feel so sorry for my mother for what she had suffered. But I promise her, I will take good care of her when I have that ability.
篇6:中考英语作文答题技巧
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+ 加入清单提高中考写作水平,需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧,两者缺一不可。
正确无误的造句能力
这得从初中一开始就抓起,首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练,做到有效积累,扩大视野,灵活运用。
如:如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的“说”?我们就可以写出许多:say some thing gladly(merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently)
还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词,生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。
扩词有:play football——play foot ball in the play ground——play football in the play ground with my friends——play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames,play the piano…等,后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。
又如:a friend——my friend——my close friend——my close friend named Mary.以此类推,我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love life.——The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了避免句型的重复,我们还可以转换不同的句型,来表达同一内容。如:The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy pocket.——The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket.——The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket.
这样训练写句的方法,可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文,然后逐字翻译的不良习惯,从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。
在平时的学习中,我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇,设计一些中译英句子,虽然对初中学生有一定的难度,但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构,巩固所学词汇,做到活学活用,为中考作文作好铺垫。
在《牛津》7B开始,我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景,设计了许多中译英,如:
1.尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了,他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although…)
2.你与其他同学不同,你总是喜欢独自一人呆在家里。(be different from)
3.去天目山参观是一件很开心的事。(It’sfun…)
4.我有个建议,把我们旧的书报杂志送给班级阅览角,这样同学们就会有更多的书可以分享。(suggestion)
5.在暴风雨中,我们最好不放风筝,因为它可能让我们触电。(because,get a electric shock)
6.新的隧道将把上海和崇明岛连接起来。(linkup…with)
7.这位驾驶员从这次事故中吸取了教训。(learn a lesson)
8.我们赢了这场比赛,他们看上去很失望。(win,look)
9.你们校运会准备工作进展如何?(get on with…)
10.我们盼望着2008年的北京奥运会.(look forward to)有了扎实的组词、造句能力,要写好一篇中考作文,就如同裁缝做服装准备好了上等的面料,如果学生对中考中可能出现的各种文体的格式,一般行文规律能了解掌握,那么中考作文定能获得满意的成绩。
篇7:网络安全英语作文怎么写
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+ 加入清单The Chinese economy will continue its steady development in the tuture
this optimistic prediction was based on continuity and stability of macro-economic policy, coming benefits of World TradeOrganization entry, strengthening of tertiary industry, and expected profits from growth markets including housing, travel andculture.
other factors driving steady growth of the economy in the long run include globalization of the economy, urbanization, the combination of industrialization with development of the information industry, and the growing
篇8:中考英语作文范文春节见闻
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+ 加入清单Things Happened in Spring Festival Today, I went shopping with my parents, grandparents, aunts, uncles, and cousins. It was a rare
occasion because we hardly only get together few times in a year as a big family. On the way to the shopping mall, we watched the lion dance. Overall, we had an unforgettable day.
篇9:网络安全英语作文
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+ 加入清单The humn beings are stepping into the information society. The information industry develops very rapidly, so do the hackers, trick-playing teens, exploring children, fraudsters, and serious
wite-collar criminals. Thus, information security becomes an impending important issue.
In case of information breach, the victimsgovernment department, an organization, or an institution, or a company will inevitably suffer great or small loss. Government may be threated with national security. Companies may lose opportunities to develop new projects. And the publics and users will be damaged.
Then how to deal with this issueTechnology is only a partial solution to information security. Whats more important is that organizations and companies should promote the awareness on information security to its staff. However, since no system can ever be 100 percent secure, a
prevention-only approach to information security mangaement is not enough. Companies and organizations should adopt a dual approach to information security management by combining prevention and detection techniques.
篇10:网络的利弊作文素材
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+ 加入清单上网在现实生活中是不可少的,它已成为人们生活的一部分。网络有弊也有利,就让我来说说。
在利方面
一:可以开阔视野。也可以充实大脑。
二:可以对外交流,学生的一个被人经常被人提及的缺点就是缺乏自信心,通过上网可以克服障碍。
三:可以促进青少年个性发展。可以减少功课压力。和网友谈谈自己的心事。
四:可以锻炼文笔,就会很有成就感。
五:可以掌握新教育的动态,网上试卷应有尽有,学生就可以任意选择。老师也可以了解新的教学方法。
在弊方面理由有三。
一:网络只是一个虚拟世界,网络存在许多陷阱。比如一些不健康网站,中学生的把持不是很好,只会危害自己。
二:网络充满攻击性,漫骂,说谎。我们可以随心所欲说自己的话,毫不负责任!根本不考虑别人的感受,这是不道德的。
三:根据法律规定,未满18岁少年不可进入网吧!
每一个新事物的出现总会伴随种种担心,从20年代的电影到后来的流行音乐电子游戏。担心的焦点不外乎暴力,色情,颓废等。好处与坏处只是一线之隔。往往“失之毫厘,差之千里。”上网亦是如此。跨越了利的界限便是弊。
作为学生,我是赞成自己上网的。我们不仅需要缓解学习压力,更需要源源不断的补充粮食。不可否认,我们当中大多数人上网是为了更好的学习。从这个意义上讲,网络是利大于弊的。
网络是虚幻的,是进步的。上网的利于弊,终于在于你自己。
篇11:关于期中考试的英语作文
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+ 加入清单英语是世界上最流行的语言,也是所有语言中使用最广泛的语言,学好英语有利于我们对外交流。下面是小编带来的是关于期中考试的英语作文,希望对您有帮助。
Today, I feel very unnatural when I go to bed together. No wonder! Mom and dad kept telling them that the air around them seemed to be frozen together.
After breakfast, our classmates went upstairs to do the preparatory work. The first two classes to test Chinese, I excitedly took out the pencil box, take out the Chinese book, began the last review. I havent had such a big exam for a long time, and Im nervous! I have learned Chinese books do not have to worry about basic questions, can recite fluently from memory, the key lies in reading, my level is not very good. Writing is OK, maybe get a full score.
Suddenly, the bell rang, and the faces of the students were so ugly that I got serious. My father always told me, "dont giggle in exams, it will distract your attention."." This is a very common examination, parents are stirred in disorderly fashion not tense, and are not calm down! The teacher rolled it, I got the first volume and looked back, huh?! Thats easy! I was secretly happy. But I still clear my throat, ready to jump into the "sea" to travel, explore. I also believe that peace is an important point, so that it can be static thought; seriously is also very important, the so-called "nothing is unachievable, as long as seriously, what things can be solved; also must be careful, careful person, who will love you!
I finally wrote my name, class, and started thinking about every question! The first question seems like I started doing it from grade one. Its a piece of cake! After second volumes, I suddenly realized that it was so hard and difficult to read. I read three times and didnt come up with the answer! Oh!
Finally, its time to roll in, and Ill have to take a good look at the next door! I think.
"Ding ding." The bell rings again, and I have to start doing some boring questions again.
After several I have done very well, that is, to the last one - English, and I am stumped.
Was that right? Whats this again?! Listening to a very vague English word, I really dont know what to choose is the correct answer, ah! Another door is doomed! What a bad luck!
Then I want to treat bad places I have seriously, for the future to test out koko!
今天,我一起床,就感觉十分不自然。怪不得呢!爸爸妈妈不停地叮嘱,周围的空气好像都凝固在一起——要期中考试了。
吃完早饭,我们班同学陆续上楼做准备工作。前两节课要考语文,我激动地拿出铅笔盒,取出语文书开始最后的复习。很久没有举行这样大型考试了,我不免有些紧张!语文书我已背得滚瓜烂熟,不用操心基础题,关键就在于阅读题,我的水平不是很好。作文倒是还可以,说不定能得个满分。
突然,上课铃响了,同学们的表情十分难看,我也严肃了起来。爸爸总是告诉我:“考试不要嘻嘻哈哈,这样会分散注意力。”这本是很普通的一个考试,都被家长们搅得糊里糊涂,不紧张的人,都冷静不下来!老师发卷了,我拿到第一卷后一看,咦!好简单呀!我心中暗暗高兴。可我还是清了清嗓子,准备跳入“题海”中去遨游、探索。我还认为平静是重要点,这样才可以静心想;认真也很重要,所谓“天下无难事,只怕有心人”,只要认真,什么事都可解决;还必须具备细心,细心的人,谁都会喜欢呀!
我终于写好姓名、班级,开始思考每一题啦!第一题好像是我从一年级就开始做的啦,简直是小菜一碟!一直做到第二卷,我突然发现,阅读题好难好难,我读了近三遍都没想出答案,算了,凑合凑合编一个吧!唉!
终于到收卷的时候了,下一门我一定得好好考!我想。
“叮叮叮。”铃声又响了,我只得又开始做那一些无聊的题目。
之后几门我都考得挺好,就是到了最后一门——英语,又把我难住了。
刚才是不是啊?这个又是什么呀!听着一个个极其模糊的英语单词,我真不知道选什么才是正确答案,啊!又一门要完蛋了!真倒霉!
以后我要认真对待我掌握的不好的地方,争取以后科科考满分!
篇12:2024年中考英语作文模板:减肥问题
全文共 836 字
+ 加入清单假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。
Dear Xiaowei,
Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So Idon’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating lateat night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are goodfor you. Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running isgreat. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends?Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will bewilling to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losingweight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’sreally important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sureyou will succeed one day.
Good luck.
Editor
篇13:中考英语作文节约能源篇
全文共 1006 字
+ 加入清单导语:节约能源是每个公民的责任和义务,那么作为中学生,我们该如如何节能呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
提示:1.步行或骑自行车去上学;最好不坐公交车或私家车;
2. 使用节能灯,少开灯,离开时记住关灯。
3. 节约用水,注意随手关好水龙头
4. 节约用纸,随身携带手帕。
5. 要有回收利用废品的意识。
提示词:private car 私家车 energy-saving light 节能灯handkerchief 手帕
要求:1. 要包括以上所有要点,要做到行文流畅、脉络清晰
2. 词数为80-100.
It’s our duty to save energy. As middle school students, what should we do to save energy?Firstly, we can walk or ride a bike to school. We’d better not take the bus or the private car. Secondly, we should use energy--saving lights when you leave the room. Thirdly, we should save water. Don’t forget to turn off the water tap after using it. Fourthly, we also need to save paper. It’s a good idea to bring a handkerchief with us. Fifthly, we should learn to recycle waste things such as cans, paper and bottles.
In a word, we should try our best to save energy.
【参考译文】
节约能源是我们的职责。作为中学生,我们应该做些什么来节约能源?首先,我们可以步行或骑自行车上学。我们最好不要乘公共汽车或私家车。其次,我们应该使用节能灯当你离开房间。第三,我们应该节约用水。使用后别忘了关水龙头。第四,我们还需要节省纸张。带上手帕是个好主意。第五,我们应该学会回收废物,如易拉罐、纸张和瓶子。
总之,我们应该尽最大努力节约能源。
篇14:英语高考作文真题该不该参加网络投票
全文共 609 字
+ 加入清单高考英语之关键词大揭秘 从供给侧结构改革到万众创新,从大山的相声到阿喀琉斯之踵,从对一代拳王阿里的名言直引到向莎士比亚经典的致敬,今年的高考英语(江苏卷)可是吸足了考生的眼球。 关键词揭秘之阿喀琉斯之踵(Achilles Heel) 上世纪九十年代的那部《特洛伊》,还是一枚小鲜肉的布拉德·皮特主演的就是阿喀琉斯。传说刚出生的时候,他母亲特意提溜着他的脚踵将他放在冥河之中浸泡,从而打造了他的刀枪不入之身。而唯一没有浸到冥河水的脚踵,也就成为了这位英雄的唯一弱点。 关键词揭秘之拳王阿里( Muhammad Ali) 今年考卷上阿里的那句话,让人震撼“Champions arent made in gyms. Champions are made from something they have deep inside them. A desire, a dream, a vision.”(冠军不是诞生在体育馆里,而是来自人的内心。成就冠军的是渴望、是梦想,是愿景!) 关键词揭秘之莎翁( William Shakespeare) 今年的书面表达问了考生一个让人纠结的问题:面对微信上铺天盖地的“最萌宝宝”、“最美小学生”投票,你是投还是不投。“To vote or not to vote”就是对莎翁悲剧《哈姆雷特》中经典名言“To be or not to be”的致敬。
篇15:网络的利弊议论文
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+ 加入清单谈起网络,不少人都要开始眉飞色舞,津津乐道了。但说真的,网络对你而言真的是受益终生的精神食粮吗?
对某些人而言,当然是。他们从小学开始便接触了各种软件、网游、单机游戏,甚至在个位数的年纪已经冲上了排行榜,开始发家致富。
在学校不善言辞,胆小懦弱的他们,“回归”了网络的虚拟生活便开始解放“天性”。一张嘴开始口若悬河,一双手在键盘和鼠标前交换自如。谁能想象到在课堂上畏畏缩缩的他们还能有如此放肆自我的时刻呢?
网络改变了他们,改变了二十一世纪的一切。表面上网络方便,快捷了我们的生活,但在我看来,网络的弊端是我们更应该思考的地方。
网络使人们的距离越来越远。
很多人也许要开始有疑问了,网络不是让人们更亲近吗?何来的距离呢?在交友软件越来越受欢迎的二十一世纪,人们即使相距着大海洲际,一个电话也能解相思之愁。在遥远的古代,李白用一句“举头望明月,低头思故乡”的千古绝唱,道出了多少游子的浪漫乡愁。
而现在,没有人再去空发思乡之愁,也没有人喜欢每天打电话互相寒暄,更多的人是低着头刷手机,忙着回微信中别人群发的信息。甚至逢年过节,一桌丰富的菜都无人问津,对面而坐的两人互发作节日快乐。
网络使人们与社会脱节。
网络刚刚兴起的那年,我八岁,第一次看到爸爸的HTC智能手机的时候,我异常兴奋。一块黑色的“砖头”竟然能玩俄罗斯方块!不仅如此,它还能看电视节目、查资料、购物、给生活带来了许多新鲜感。
可后来,我渐渐发现自己在家宅了很长时间,没有出门购物,没有去图书馆看书,没有定时守在电视前看最爱的节目。这一切都被淘宝电子书,视频软件所替代,出门的时间越来越少,抱着手机的时间越来越多。
这一切都是网络造成的。
那难道网络就真的一无是处了吗?当然不是,网络在提供一些方便的同时,也在挑战着人类的极限。网络越来越发达,世界越来越智能,这一切在几千年以前,怕是诸葛亮和吴用也算不到吧。
人类以不可名状的速度发展,未来会是怎样我们不得而知。但我相信在不远的将来,网络会越来越完善,为人类造福!
篇16:网上购物英语
全文共 987 字
+ 加入清单With the development of the e-commerce, more and more people intent to do
the shopping online. There are many advantages of online shopping, yet there are
some disadvantages too.
On the one hand, the online shopping are very convenient. Unlike the
physical stores, there is no limit of time for you to do the shopping online.
And you can find anything in the online store, some of which you may hardly buy
at the local. And also, the price is relatively transparent, you can choose the
affordable one to buy.
On the other hand, since the goods are only presented by the pictures and
descriptions, it is hard to tell its reality, so you might have bought something
you don’t like, or even the fake one. Of course you can ask for the after
service, but it will increase your cost of the time. And the advertisements on
the online shops may make you spend much more money on online shopping without
being conscious.
Anyway, the online shopping makes the shopping easier, but please do it
with rationality.
篇17:网络的利弊英语范文译文
全文共 322 字
+ 加入清单如今,人们就网络对我们生活的影响展开了广泛的讨论,利弊分析英文。确实,网络就是一个利弊兼有的东西。
总的来说,大家普遍认为网络有如下两个主要优势。第一,网络让我们便捷地得到我们在生活、学习和娱乐中所需要的一些必要的信息和素材。第二,网络大大提高了我们日常生活的效率,比如购物和交流,为我们节省了很多的时间,精力和金钱。
当然,正如俗话说得好,每一个事物都有两面,网络也不例外。网络的弊端也是非常明显的。首先,我们从网络使用中享受到的舒服和方便让我们变得更加懒惰,进而对网络产生了太多的依赖。另外,网络也滋生了社会中的骗子,给他们提供了良好的生存土壤。
总之,我们应该尽力发挥网络的“利”,同时尽量去减少网络的“弊”。这样一来,我们就能更好地利用网络。
篇18:关于网络的英语作文TheInternetinourlife
全文共 1622 字
+ 加入清单Internet plays a very important role in everybodys life, It has made a huge difference in the world, But the Internet has some advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, The World Wide Web contains huge amount of information. It is extensive, relatively easy to access, And provides virtually unlimited information. If we need some information, We can acquire information online. The Web provides us an excellent resource to gain knowledge, From this way we can gain current information we need it now.
Online education is very important in our life, It can gives us excellent sources of information, saves our time, money and it is extremely convenient. In addition, we also can exchange thoughts, opinions and information with our classmates without leaving our house. Sometimes, If we feels very stressed and depressed, We can listen to songs, In order to have a well-balanced life.
But the Internet also has some harmful. Somebody indulges in the network games. They standing in the internet bar day and night ,At the end they leaves uncultivated the studies.
Overall, Internet has become an inseparable part of our life. Only when we can make it serve our needs. Can we benefit most from it. So, please use the Internet in a proper way.
互联网起着非常重要的作用在每个人的生活中,这世界上有了巨大的改变,但是互联网有一些优点和缺点。
首先,万维网包含大量的信息。这是广泛的,相对容易访问,并提供几乎无限的信息。如果我们需要一些信息,我们可以在网上获取信息。网络给我们提供了一个很好的资源来获得知识,这样我们可以获得当前信息我们现在需要它。
网络教育是非常重要的在我们的生活中,它可以为我们提供了很好的信息来源,可以节省我们的时间、金钱和非常方便。此外,我们还可以交流思想,观点和信息与我们的同学不离开我们的房子。有时,如果我们感觉非常紧张和沮丧,我们可以听听歌,为了有一个平衡的生活。
但是互联网也有一些有害的。有人沉溺于网络游戏。他们日夜站在网吧,最后他们离开荒废的研究。
总的来说,互联网已经成为我们生活不可分割的一部分。只有当我们可以满足我们的需求。我们可以从中受益最多。所以,请使用互联网在一个适当的方式。
篇19:中考英语-作文范文:HealthyEating
全文共 791 字
+ 加入清单健康饮食关系到青少年的身心健康成长。请根据以下提供的内容和提示词,以”Healthy Eating”为题写一篇作文.
提示:
1.健康饮食的重要性(important, energy);
2.良好的饮食习惯(keep a balanced diet); 3.健康饮食的益处(make…..stong)
Healthy eating is important for us in our daily life. Food can give us energy and help us build up our body. What and how should we eat to be healthier? First, we should have enough clean food each meal. Second, it’s important to keep a balanced diet. Different kinds of food provide us different nutrition we need every day. Third, we should have a regular meal. In this way, we’ll be strong and healthy, and we’ll do well in our study.
3、根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词,英文提示词供选用)
有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看法和建议。
参考词汇:not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
篇20:以互联网利弊为话题的英语作文
全文共 1667 字
+ 加入清单导语:互联网成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,同时它也是一把双刃剑,需要我们正确对待,下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的互联网利弊作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
Nowadays, Internet is becoming very popular in all walks of life. On the one hand, statistics show that the number of people who apply to have access to Internet doubles every six months. On the other hand, Internet is employed in business, government agencies, and educational sections.
Internet brings us a both advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are as the following. Firstly, we can communicate with our friends more rapidly and quickly. Secondly, Internet brings us fun. For example, many websites open chatrooms where we can talk with different people and make new friends. Finally, many businessmen are taking so|called E|business seriously on the net.
The Internet also has its disadvantages, just as a coin has two sides. In the first place, some people may linger too long on the net while neglecting their work or study. In the second place, some columns on the net may have a negative influence on the youth electronic commerce.
In my opinion, Internet becomes an integral part of our lives, but it is certainly not everything. Living in the 21st century, we need to make good use of the new tool-Internet, but it is just a tool, not life itself. We should not depend on it too much, nor should we ignore it deliberately.
【参考译文】
如今,互联网正变得非常流行,各行各业。一方面,统计数字显示,申请上网的人数每六个月增加一倍。另一方面,互联网被用于商业、政府机构和教育部门。
互联网给我们带来了优点和缺点。其优点如下。首先,我们可以更快更迅速地与朋友交流。其次,互联网给我们带来乐趣。例如,许多网站打开的聊天室里我们可以与不同的人交谈,交新的朋友。最后,许多商人都在这么|称|业务严重的网。
互联网也有它的缺点,就像硬币有两面一样。首先,有些人在网上逗留太久而忽视了工作或学习。第二,网上的一些栏目可能对青少年电子商务产生负面影响。
在我看来,互联网成为我们生活中不可或缺的一部分,但它不是一切。生活在第二十一世纪,我们需要好好利用互联网的新工具,但它只是一种工具,而不是生活本身。我们不应该过分依赖它,也不应该故意忽视它。