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5792024中考英语作文范文:loseweight
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+ 加入清单假设你是《21世纪中学生英语报》“heart to heart”专栏的编辑.下面是你收到的一位中学生的来信.请你根据他来信的内容写一封回信.针对他的问题。
Dear Xiaowei,
Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere. So I don’t think you have much to worry about. Here are my suggestions. Eating late at night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you.
Also, when you are free, you’d better do more exercise. Running is great. You don’t like running alone, but what about running with your friends? Or you can do some team sports like basketball. I’m sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight. I hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies. “Believe myself, and I will win.” It’s really important for us when we meet difficulties. Don’t lose heart; I’m sure you will succeed one day.
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篇1:英语期中考试优秀的作文展示
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+ 加入清单英语期中考试优秀作文:Hw t sta health(4篇)
If u want t sta health,u shuld eat re fruit and vegetables.If u want t eep health,u shuldnt eat t uch fried fd.We ust chage ur bad habits.And u shuld have enugh exercise ever da.I thin in this wa,we can eep health.
——孙xx
Health is ver iprtant t us.We shuld be health.If u want t be health,u shuld have enugh exercise,eat health fd and have a gd tietable.I used t watch a lt f TV ever da.But nw I dnt wacth uch TV an lnger.I exercise regularl.S,thats wh I ver health.
——王xx
Ever peple want t eep healeh.But a lt f peple are unhealth because the dnt have a gd diet and the dnt have enugh sleep.If u want t sta health,u shuld nt eat t uch fried fd.u shuld eat se vegetables instead.And u shuld g t bed earl and get up earl.The st iprtant ting is t exercise rugularl.But I dnt have enugh exercise,s I shuld exercise ever da.In this wa,I can sta health.
——毛xx
We shuld sta health.Staing health is iprtant.But hw can we sta health?If we want t sta health,we shuld eat a lt f fruit and vegetables.If we want t sta health,we shuld drin enugh water ever da.If we want t sta health,dnt frget exercise.We shuld exercise regularl ever da.In fact,we can sta health in an different was.Fruit,vegetables,water and enugh exercise are useful t help us t sta health.We als shuld have gd habits.I used t eat a lt f sweets.But nw I dnt eat t an sweets an lnger.Nw I health and teeth are health,t.S if u have bad habits,u shuld change bad habits quicl.If u want t sta health,it will be iprtant t change bad habits.Lets sta health,shall we?
——朱xx
篇2:中考英语作文:Let’s Do Sports350字
全文共 406 字
+ 加入清单I think it’s very important for everyone to do sports. I like sports because they’re not only good for my health but also good for my study. My favorite sport is swimming. Whenever I am free, I will have a swim with my friends in the swimming pool. After swimming,I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more,Ican put more energy into my study. SoLet’s do sports,and we will become stronger and stronger.
篇3:中考英语myfriend
全文共 579 字
+ 加入清单My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well . He gets on well with us . Everyone in our class likes him .
篇4:2024中考英语作文万能句子汇总
全文共 2186 字
+ 加入清单一、常用谚语
1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩?
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难朋友才是真朋友?
3. A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半?
4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成?
5. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马?
6. Easier said than done. 说起来容易,做起来难?
7. Easy come, easy go. 来得快,去得快?
8. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺点?
9. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母?
10. Look before you leap. 三思而后行?
11. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上无难事,只怕有心人?
12. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若无友,就如同生命中没有太阳?
13. All things are difficult before they are easy. 万事开头难?
14. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨绸缪?
15. As you sow, so shall you reap. 种瓜得瓜,种豆得豆?
16. I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort. 成功要靠三件事才能赢得:努力,努力,再努力?
17. Don’t put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 有事莫推明天?
18. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧?
19. Bad news has wings. 好事不出门,坏事传千里?
20. Honesty is the best policy. 做人以诚信为本?
21. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 你必须相信自己,这是成功的关键?
22. Don’t judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人?
二、常用过渡语
23. 表起始的过渡语:first of all, to begin with, in my opinion, according to, so far, as far as等?
24. 表时间的过渡语:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, finally等?
25. 表空间的过渡语:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of… on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等?
26. 表因果的过渡语:for, because of, one reason is that… another reason is that…, thus, so, as a result (of)等?
27. 表转折的过渡语:but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, unlike, although, otherwise,nevertheless, in spite of, after all等?
28. 表列举的过渡语:for example, such as, that is, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等?
29. 表推进的过渡语:what’s more, on one hand… on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only…but also…, besides, furthermore, moreover等?
30. 表总结的过渡语:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, on the whole等?
篇5:北京奥运一名志愿者中考英语作文
全文共 1095 字
+ 加入清单小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者:他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友……在交谈中,小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明,并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴,他甜蜜地笑了……
请你根据设定的梦境并加以想象,写一段 80 词左右的短文。开始语和结束语均已给出(不计入总词数)。
内容要求:
( 1 )帮助外国朋友;( 2 )与外国朋友交谈;( 3 )感谢小明;( 4 )小明很高兴。
词汇参考: try ( do ) one's best , find ( that ), heavy ( lost ), carry ( show , take ), taxi ( car , bike ), on the way , talk with ( about )
Xiao Ming had a dream (梦) last night . In the dream , he volunteered to serve (志愿列队) the Beijing Olympics .
Xiao Ming had a dream last night . In the dream , he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olym pics . He tried his best to help the foreign friends from different countries . When he found a foreign friend worried in the street , he went up to him and asked him what was the matter . The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack , and he forgot the way to the Sun Hotel . Then Xiao Ming stopped a taxi and took him to the Sun Hotel . Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing . Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought Xiao Ming's English was very good . Xiao Ming was very happy . He smiled and smiled , then he woke up .
篇6:2024年11月11日天猫网络购物狂欢节活动策划分析
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+ 加入清单有消息显示,从11月1日开始,有近2000万热情的消费者将心仪商品收藏或添加到购物车,就等着11日刷新支付。以下是小编带来的双十一活动方案,希望对你有帮助。
比如说,我们现在要做一份活动策划方案,在接下来的双十一投入几个专展,或者上一个聚划算。那么目标明确了,接下来该怎么办?说白了,就是一整套流程走下来,那么什么算是活动策划的一整套流程,下面,我就在这里大致的介绍下:
第一,选款。也就是说,用哪个商品去上活动?在选款的时候,要充分考虑到如果活动上去了,它的销量会怎样,这一步算是活动评估,因为你总不能拿店里面一个销量都没有的产品去上活动吧,即便你想上,淘宝也不答应。所以,一般情况下,上活动的产品,都是本店销售最火爆的产品,毕竟,销售最好的,说明用户接受度高,从本质上来讲,是在说明市场的反应情况。
第二,活动价格计算。淘宝上活动,人家总是要求打折的,你大致算下,如果淘宝小二答应了,你可以上活动,但前提是打5折,那你那时候就要计算了,如果打5折再包邮,会不会亏本,亏多少,如果不亏,我可以赚多少?大部分情况下,你家的商品要上活动,在价格方面,被淘小二挤出来的水分是非常多的,也就是说,人家见多识广,看着图片就差不多能估摸出你产品的成本价,所以小二同志会死命的压价。正是因为小二同志有此嗜好,所以,活动商品的最初定价还是相当重要的。你对活动产品的价格安排也就显得非常重要。
第三,店内营销策划。好歹上一次活动,总不能浪费了这个流量,那么是不是还要在店里面做一系列的营销策划,诸如满就送、搭配套餐等等,这一点的目的是为了提高客单价。虽然这一点对客户来讲,有点不大情愿,为什么,因为凡是通过活动来购买的,基本上都是奔着活动产品来的。但是,这里有一个问题,顾客不买,不代表不能没有。
第四,调货。既然要上活动了,总要备货备在这,总不能说卖完了再去进,那会就已经晚了。
第五,活动上线后的客服管理。搞过活动的同学应该清楚,比较好的活动上线了,那会你的客服工作就非常重要,你总不能一直跟客户神聊吧,你这么一神聊,要么让其他客户走人,要么客户收到货后在评价中说你几句,你要知道,他说的话可是展示出来的,这总不大好。而且,即便你想神聊,也没这个机会,你那电脑一直弹对话,你自己也扛不住吧。从我搞活动的情况来看,好活动开始,电脑基本上就卡死了,所以,提前写好自动回复很重要。在这个自动回复里面,你要把能想到的都写上去,不要怕文字长。关键是,尽可能的回复客户的疑问。
第六,发货。根据活动大小,提前准备一些货总要先打好包,这个很重要,不然,如果客户一多,你发货速度慢,就会影响到店铺的评分,所以,这一点务必清楚。
第七,售后处理。发货之后,客户陆续就收到货了,这时候,麻烦也就来了,各种各样的评论都有,比如遭遇差评怎么办?该如何解决,这些都是要考虑到的问题。
以上是一个活动策划最简单也是必须要考虑到的内容,而且,这个只是流程,作为活动策划者还必须给这些环节,每个环节里面安排一个人员来负责,在何时何地做什么样的工作,出现问题之后的内部协商机制是什么等等。
总之,如果是策划案,必须注意一点,流程要完整,还必须将该策划案落实到执行层。你要进入到情境中,因为是你策划的,你需要什么样的资源来配合你,在活动中会有什么样的情况发生,你如何解决和避免等等都要说清楚,至少要有所防范,如此,便是一个简单的策划案了。
篇7:中考英语作文范:上海的变化
全文共 774 字
+ 加入清单Changes in Shanghai
1 300年前的上海
2 上海的今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)
3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)
参考作文
Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.
300年前,上海只是个小镇,只有几千人居住在这里,其中很多人是渔民和农民。
Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.
今天,上海已变成一座国际大都市,并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。
Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.
上海已经取得了2010年世博会的举办权,我相信上海的环境会越来越好,并且越来越美丽。
点评:虽然2010年世博会已经结束,但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈,除了上海,像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。
篇8:2024中考英语作文话题预测:健康
全文共 1140 字
+ 加入清单导语:健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
健康的身体是我们成就一切事物的根本,没有健康,什么都无从谈起。
【预测题目】
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示:健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
【参考范文】
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health.Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
If we can do all above, we can live a healthy life.
【参考译文】
我认为健康的习惯对我们很重要。
我们都想健康。首先,我们应该在晚上得到充足的睡眠。我们可以早睡早起。熬夜对我们的健康有害。第二,我们必须吃正确的食物。我们应该多吃水果和蔬菜,少吃肉。我们应该喝大量的水。我们应该有健康的饮食习惯。第三,我们应该做更多的锻炼,以建立我们的身体,最后,我们应该洗手饭前和刷牙,每天两次。如果我们感觉不舒服,我们应该马上去看医生。
如果我们能做到以上所有,我们就能过上健康的生活。
篇9:有关网络危害英语
全文共 1259 字
+ 加入清单When I first set my eyes on a father and his daughter, I heard the father ask about his daughters school life. To my surprise, the girl told his father to read her blog so that he can get what he wants.
Now, the Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has influenced us a lot, especially on our interpersonal communication.
For one thing, the Internet makes the interpersonal communication more convenient. We can contact with each other no matter when and where. The Internet makes full use of time and space. What’s more, we can also share our daily life and knowledge through QQ, MSN, and blog with others. For another thing, the Internet speeds up our interpersonal communication. We can save time to do our work. However, the Internet also brings about many problems, such as safety problems, cheating and so on. Many people spend too much time on the Internet, and they dont have time to interact with person in real life, which result in the absence of ability in communication in reality.
It has both advantages and disadvantages to interact through the Internet. We can get to the problem in our work and study. Last but not lest, we have to talk with people and develop our ability to communicate in reality.
篇10:购物的英语作文
全文共 406 字
+ 加入清单Every time I shop are on weekends, and my friends to go. We will to a large supermarket or a mall go. We are all the normal point of snacks, or buy clothes. Now shopping convenience, and in the supermarket are the brush with a credit card. Now it has become popular online shopping, and more convenient. I love bargain shopping, less time, people is not easy to do business unless he is blind asking price.
篇11:网上购物英语
全文共 930 字
+ 加入清单In the current society, with the rapid development of the Internet,
shopping on the internet has been a fashion especially among the youngsters.
Online shopping has made our daily life become more convenient and feel
comfortable. In the first place, shopping on the Internet can save much time so
they would be able to concentrate more time and energy on their academic study.
In the second place, the Internet has provided kinds of goods to consumers, and
we can save much money through online shopping.
However, every coin has two sides, online shopping also has shortcomings.
We maybe buy some fake products online because of lacking of the face to face
communication with sellers. What’s more, the delivery will increase the risk of
items’ damage.
Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former, because shopping on
the internet has become more and more important to us in our daily life. We
should follow the footsteps of the times.
篇12:关于高二英语作文:网络语言InternetLanguage
全文共 1040 字
+ 加入清单The language develops as the media become various, many years ago, people used the language that was very formal, because most oral language was always the same as the paper language. But as the time by, people started to use computer, they shared the information, at the same time, many new language was created. The Internet language is in favor by people, they like to use it, because it is fashionable and very appropriate to express what they mean. I like to use the Internet language, it is so new and fun, what’s more, it is convenient, like I can use the shorten words instead of the long words. The problem of the Internet language is that it is very informal, it can’t be written in the paper, it will changes as the time goes by. In my opinion, we can use the Internet language in informal occasions.
语言的发展伴随着多媒体的多样化,很多年以前,人们使用正式的语言,因为大部分口语和书面语言差不多。但是随着时间的流逝,人们开始使用电脑,他们分享信息,同时,很多新的语言被创造出来。网络语言为人们所喜爱,他们也乐意使用,因为这很时尚,也能恰当地表达人们的意思。我喜欢使用网络语言,那很新鲜和有趣,而且,也很方便,比如我可以使用短的词来代替长的词。网络语言的问题在于非常不正式,不能书面书写,网络语言也会随着时间而改变。在我看来,我们可以在非正式场合使用网络语言。
篇13:篇深圳市中考英语作文
全文共 796 字
+ 加入清单Olympic Games is the biggest event for the players, because it holds every four years. I remembered that my father watched the games at midnight many years ago, and I did not understand why he was so crazy about it. Now I watched the game with him and I started to appreciate the charm of sports. No matter what the result is, standing in the biggest stage and competing with the greatest rivals make the players feel proud. They chase to be higher, stronger and faster and these are the spirit of Olympic Games. When the audience see the players break the record and challenge human being’s limitation, how excited it is.
奥运会对于运动员来说是最大的大事,因为它每四年才举行一次。我记得我的父亲很多年前在午夜看奥运会,我不明白他为什么那么的疯狂。现在我和他一起看了比赛,我开始体会到体育的魅力。不管结果怎么样,站在最大的舞台与最伟大的对手竞赛使运动员们感到骄傲。他们追求更高、更强、更快,这也是奥运会的精神。当观众看到运动员们打破记录,挑战局限性时,是多么的令人兴奋啊。
篇14:中考英语作文:网上交友500字
全文共 602 字
+ 加入清单Should students make friends online? Some people say yes. Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting on line, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely, and even get help for their foreign language studies.
Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends online is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated online.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
篇15:关于2024中考英语作文素材:母亲节的由来
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+ 加入清单母亲节起源于美国。1906年5月9日,美国费城的安娜·贾薇丝的母亲不幸去世,她悲痛万分。在次年母亲逝世周年忌日,安娜小姐组织了追思母亲的活动,并鼓励他人也以类似方式来表达对各自慈母的感激之情。此后,她到处游说并向社会各界呼吁,号召设立母亲节。她的呼吁获得热烈响应。1913年5月10日,美国参众两院通过决议案,由威尔逊总统签署公告,决定每年5月的第二个星期日为母亲节。这一举措引起世界各国纷纷仿效,至1948年安娜谢世时,已有43个国家设立了母亲节。
Mothers Day originated in the United States. In May 9, 1906, American Philadelphia Anna Jia Wei silks mother died, her grief. In the next year Mothers death anniversary, miss Anna mother organized a memorial service, and encourage others to express their gratitude to the mother in a similar manner. Since then, her lobbying and appeal to all walks of life, calls for the establishment of mothers day. Her appeal to get a warm response. In May 10, 1913, American house and Senate passed a resolution, signed by President Wilson announcement, decided each year the second Sunday in May as mothers day. The move by all the countries in the world have to follow, to 1948 xieshishi Anna, 43 countries have established the mothers day.
母亲节在我国最早是港澳台地区有此节日。改革开放后,母亲节也为内地所接受。广东省于1988年开始,杭州等城市于1989年开始,都由各级妇联组织母亲节的庆祝活动,并把评选"好母亲"作为节日的内容之一。
Mothers day in China is the first Hong Kong and Macao have this festival. After the reform and opening up, mothers Day is also accepted for the mainland. Guangdong Province, beginning in 1988, Hangzhou city began in 1989, the womens federations at all levels have mothers Day celebration, and the selection "good mother" as part of the festival.
在母亲节许多人将康乃馨赠给母亲,这是源于1934年5月美国首次发行母亲节纪念邮票。邮票上一位慈祥的母亲,双手放在膝上,欣喜地看着前面的花瓶中一束鲜艳美丽的康乃馨。随着邮票的传播,在许多人的心目中把母亲节与康乃馨联系起来,康乃馨便成了象征母爱之花,受到人们的敬重。康乃馨与母亲节便联系在一起了。人们把思念母亲、孝敬母亲的感情,寄托于康乃馨上,康乃馨也成为了赠送母亲不可缺少的珍贵礼品。
On Mothers Day carnations to the mothers for many people, this is from 1934 May America issued the first mothers Day commemorative stamps. Stamp a kind mother, hands on knees, delighted to see the vase in front of a bunch of bright beautiful carnations. With the spread of the stamps, linked the mothers Day carnations in many peoples minds, carnations became the symbol of motherly love flowers, respected by people. Mothers Day carnations and he relates in together. People miss mother, your mothers feelings, hopes in the carnation, carnations has become the indispensable precious gifts mother gifts.
篇16:英语作文网络购物利与弊
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+ 加入清单Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. Some people think shopping online is very convenient. However, others don’t believe goods online and they afraid of being cheated.
In my opinions, shopping online is better. First, it can help us save much time. We don’t need spend much time in the street to look for the goods . Second, we can compare some goods and their prices at home. When the prices are listed ,we can buy Besides, we can pay for our goods after we get them. Don’t you think it’s a good way to go shopping?
篇17:大学英语作文没有网络我们会怎样
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+ 加入清单As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colorful and convenientlife. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting
relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.
As far as I am concerned, I don’t approve of uestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”
篇18:浙江中考满分英语作文:MyEnglishLearning
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+ 加入清单Ellen看到大家都对自己的未来充满期待,感到特别高兴。为了鼓励大家学好英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请 根据以下问题和答案的提示并结合你的实际情况,以"My English Learning"为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题,并且不能出现你的真实姓名、校名和县名等。提示:
When did you start learning English? (in … /…years ago)
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day…)
What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar…)
What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well? (watch English movies, sing English songs…)
English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
篇19:中考英语作文万能模板:十字结构
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+ 加入清单教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮你拿到一等文。
问:“哪十字?”
“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点!”
结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be? him one day!
要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。
逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。
亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。
只要把这十个字都搞定了,那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定!
篇20:网络购物
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+ 加入清单随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比如*****网,京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢请写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。
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We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these
days。 Some students think its very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet。 The shops on Internet ,for example taobao。com, 360buy。com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like。 Whats more, we neednt to wait in a queue。
However, some students disagreed with them。 We cant see the things while we are shopping。 So we are not sure whether they are good or not。。 Besides, we cant enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends。