小学英语演讲与口才20篇

1. No rose without a thorn.

没有不带刺的玫瑰。

2. Practice makes perfect.

熟能生巧。

3. Actions speak louder than words.

事实胜于雄辩。

4. An apple a day, keep the doctor away.

每日一苹果，医生远离我。

5. No one can do everything, but everyone can do something.

没有人可以做任何事，但是每个人可以做一些事。

6. Character------It’s what you do when nobody’s looking

品质——就是当你在无人看着时的所为。

7. Reading a book is like opening a window to life.

读一本书，像对生活开了一扇窗。

8. A good book is a light to your soul.

一本好书，照亮心灵。

9. Respect yourself Respect others Respect your school

尊重自己 尊重他人 尊重学校

10. It is better to be faithful than famous.

守信用胜过有名气。

11. No cross, no crown.

不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹。

12. No garden without its weeds.

没有不长草的园子。

13. No living man all things can.

世上没有万事通。

14. No man can do two things at once.

一心不可二用。

15. No smoke without fire.

无风不起浪。

16. No man is wise at all times.

聪明一世，糊涂一时。

17. No news is good news.

没有消息就是好消息。

18. No sweet without sweat.

先苦后甜。

19. No pains, no gains.

没有付出就没有收获。

20. No pleasure without pain.

没有苦就没有乐。

The classmates, teacher wang, hello!

My name is ungho, 9 years old this year, height 1.36 meters, weight 30 kg and in grade three.

I am a lively and cheerful boy, I like sports, running, high jump, long jump, play a ball game are my strengths, and I also took part in the taekwondo training, is now red stripe, coach often praised me very well, Im very proud.

I also like to learn, not only book knowledge to master the good, and often read some books, fairy tales, classic, social science, celebrity stories, historical stories. I especially like weapon books, aircraft, tanks, guns I like it very much. Im going to good good study, invented a super plane in the future, to defend the motherland.

I also like painting, music, sachs is well.

I was industrious child, at home to help my mother do housework, I also recently learned Fried eggs.

I also love to play with classmates, all together, I am very happy, who have difficulty I are willing to help. Everybody praised me is a sensible boy.

同学们、王老师，你们好!

我的名字是成浩，今年9岁，身高1.36米，体重30公斤，上三年级了。

我是一个活泼开朗的男孩，我喜欢运动，跑步，跳高，跳远，打球都是我的长项，而且我还参加了跆拳道培训，现在已经红带了，教练经常夸我打的好，我自己也很骄傲。

我也喜欢学习，不仅书本知识掌握的好，而且经常看一些课外书，童话故事，古典名著，社会科学，名人故事，历史故事。我特别喜欢兵器方面的书，飞机，坦克，冲锋枪我都非常喜欢。我准备好好学习，将来发明一架超级飞机，来保卫祖国。

我还喜欢画画，音乐，萨克斯也吹得不错。

我还是勤劳的孩子，在家里帮妈妈做家务，我最近还学会了煎鸡蛋。

我还特别喜欢和同学们一起玩，大家在一起，我特别开心，谁有困难我都愿意帮助。大家都夸我是一个懂事的好孩子。

I like autumn leaves.

Walking in the mountains, I jumped down to running in the woods, this is the world of leaves. The leaves of trees turn yellow. The leaves of trees dancing in the air. Fly ah fly ah, take away the heat in the summer, the autumn is cool and refreshing, also brought the harvest season. I love autumn the leaves of trees.

I continue to go forward, a leaf falling from my eyes, so I am curious to catch it. Leaf is the size of a slap, veins many, I dont see what it is the leaves of the tree, had to smell the smell. An apple scent rushed into the nose and Im sure this is apple leaves. I looked up. Filled with the thirsty mouth the apples on the tree. So I made a poem: "apple is sweet and sweet, hard in it."

I love autumn, I love the autumn leaves.

我喜欢秋天的叶子。

走在山中，我又蹦又跳地在树林里跑着，这真是树叶的世界。梧桐树的叶子变黄了。梧桐树的叶子在空中翩翩起舞。飞啊飞啊，带走了夏天的炎热，带来了秋天的凉爽和清凉，还带来了丰收的季节。我爱秋天梧桐树的叶子。

我继续向前走着，一片树叶从我的眼前落下，于是，我好奇地把它接住。叶子只有巴掌那么大，叶脉很多，我看不出它是什么树的叶子，只好嗅了嗅。一股苹果清香冲进鼻子里，我敢肯定这是苹果的叶子。我抬头一看。树上结满了渴口的苹果。于是我造了一句诗来：“苹果甜又甜，辛苦在其中。”

我爱秋天，我更爱秋天的叶子。

There is a person, she is like the sun in the family, forever care of my tree "seedlings", she is - my mother.

Mother has a round face, inlaid with a pair of watery eyes. This pair of big eyes seem to speak, whenever I took Miyoshi students certificate, my mother will reveal the joy of eyes, smiling at me, I read the mothers eyes said: do well, to continue to work hard. Whenever I do the subject careless, made a mistake, my mother frowned, her eyes seemed to say: what should be careful, every job is like a small test.

Mother is particularly concerned about my study and life. I participated in the mental arithmetic, Go, etiquette and other games, my mother will support me, accompany me, encourage me. Win, she will say: "Do not be proud, not after the game will be smooth sailing." Lost, she would say: "Do not be happy, win or lose is commonplace, there are opportunities." Every time I was sick, my mother Particularly anxious, and quickly give me medicine, afraid of my illness more and more serious. Every summer, my mother will take me out to travel, increase my knowledge.

This is my mother, I love my dear mother.

On Saturday, I went to my grandparents house to play, entered my grandpa said to me: "home to a puppy." I ran quickly excitedly to the kennel.

This little guy is sleeping, I to control his feeling excited, could not help but to touch it by hand, but who knows, the puppy vigilance is so high, my hands touched it hair, it is all of a sudden I woke up to now. It eyes, big carefully look at me, as if to say: "who are you? How do I havent seen you?" I see, oh! Big round eyes, a small nose, cherry small mouth, not fat or thin face, and a pair of big ears and a air shook tail. In the summer it will lick up scattered cooling, is really a handsome boy!

After dinner, I also want to see this little one to eat, then took a piece of meat on the ground, I thought to myself, so delicious it must be very like it. But to his surprise, its just to smell the smell, and go to the side. I think, if it is afraid of being seen just refused to eat. Then, I hid behind the door, secretly observe it. Sure enough, little guys walking slowly in the past, and look at the then eat it with relish. It ate a piece of meat, I then from behind the door to come out and play with it. I threw a ball out of the distance, said to it: "help me to pick up the ball back!" It seemed to understand my words, kicking ran in the past, with his mouth put the ball has been sent to my side, and in this way, we are happy to play up.

My dog is so cute!

星期六，我去爷爷奶奶家玩，一进门爷爷就跟我说：“家里来了一只小狗。”我赶紧兴奋地往狗窝跑去。

这个小家伙正在睡大觉，我控制不住自己激动的心情，忍不住用手摸了它一下，可谁知，小狗的警惕性那么高，我的手刚碰到它的毛，它就一下子被我给惊醒了。它把眼睛睁得大大的，仔细地看着我，仿佛在说：“你是谁呀?我怎么没看见过你呢?”我一看，哟!圆溜溜的大眼睛，小小的鼻子，樱桃形的小嘴，不胖不瘦的脸蛋，还有一对神气的大耳朵和一条摇个不停的尾巴。夏天的时候它会把舌头舔出来散散热，真是一只帅气的小家伙呀!

吃完饭后，我也想去看看这小家伙吃东西的样子，便拿了一块肉放在地上，我心想：这样美味它一定很喜欢吧。但出乎意料的是，它只是去嗅了嗅，又走到了一边。我想，是不是它怕被人看到才不肯吃呢。于是，我就躲在了门背后，偷偷地观察它的动静。果然，小家伙慢慢地走了过去，四面看了一下便津津有味地吃了起来。看它吃完了一块肉，我便从门后走出来和它一起玩了起来。我把一个球扔到了远处，对它说：“帮我去把球捡回来!”它仿佛听懂了我的话，飞快地跑过去用脚踢，用嘴顶把那个球一直送到了我的身边，就这样，我们高兴地玩了起来。

我的小狗实在是太可爱了!

The holiday I like most is to visit Guilin with my parents .Because Guilin is one of the most attractive tourism places in China.Guilin is famous for Li River and Elephant Trunk Hill.They are the symbols of Guilin.People can enjoy the landscape on the bamboo raft and meanwhile talk to the Guilinese.People can learn a lot about the Ethnic Minorities culture there.There are also many delicious local food Guilin,such as Guilin rice noodles,Flowerbridge chilli paste.I really want to try them by my own month with my parents again .I cant wait to go there .I will go there when I have next holiday.

我最喜爱的假期是那次和我父母一起去桂林旅游.桂林中国最迷人的旅游胜地之一.桂林最有名的地方莫过于丽江和象鼻山,人们可以在竹筏上欣赏当地的景致,还可以在和桂林当地人的交谈中了解很多关于那里的少数民族文化.当地还有很多可口的饮食,诸如桂林米粉和桂林花桥辣椒酱.我真的好想和我父母一起再去那里品尝一下,我几乎快等不及了,当我下一次放假的时候我一定要和我和父母再去那里.

Graduated from middle school in 1917, zhou enlai, with the help of the classmates and teachers, to raise the cost of study abroad in Japan a. Performance of zhou enlai is a love reading, love of learning! Because of zhou enlai aspire to read at an early age, the first generation of prime minister!

The text about zhou enlai boyhood in foreign concessions witnessed the Chinese people by foreigner bullying in the concession, the Chinese onlookers dare to anger cant speak. Immediately, zhou enlai, comprehend the meaning of the weak, and determined to study for the revitalization of the Chinese.

A 12 years old children should have such ambition and mind! Won the plaudits of wei principal: "hurrah! Is the rise of the Chinese! Aspirants when effect Zhou Sheng!" His patriotism, how strong!

"Young strong a country is strong, young rich national wealth." Let us set big dreams since childhood, study hard, do a useful pillars just for the motherland!

1917年，周恩来中学毕业，在同学和老师的帮助下，筹到一笔日本留学的经费。表现了周恩来是一个爱读书，爱学习的人!因为周恩来从小就立志读书，现任第一代总理!

本篇课文讲的就是周恩来少年时代在外国租界里目睹了中国人在租界里受洋人欺负，围观的中国人都敢怒不敢言。顿时，周恩来感悟到中华不振的含义，从而立志要为振兴中华而读书。

一个十二岁的孩子竟然有如此抱负和胸怀!博得了魏校长的喝彩：“好哇!为中华之崛起!有志者当效周生啊!”他的爱国心，多么强烈啊!

“少年强则国强，少年富则国富。”让我们从小立下远大的理想，刻苦学习，做一名对祖国有用的栋梁之才!

I am glad that winter holiday is coming,I have set for itself a vacation plan,First of all I would like to seriously work to complete holiday.Then read some interesting books;Then adhere to a daily physical exercise.Last I necessary to help my parents do some housework,because they are very busy and they have to work very late.

This is my winter vacation plan

Animals are our humans good friends, ask you to protect them! Dont beat them with stones, sticks, they are flesh and blood hurts, will cry, their mom and dad will love dearly. Small animals made great contribution to the earths ecological balance for us, therefore, we hereby issue the following to the citys children initiative:

A small animal, dont hit, dont catch small animals.

Second, much care for small animals, send injured animals homeless shelter.

Three, to the whole society widely publicized the significance of protect small animals.

Fourth, study the life of small animals, learn to protect small animals.

The children! Let us heart to heart, hand in hand, jointly contribute to protect small animals!

小动物是我们人类的好朋友，请求大家好好保护它们吧!不要用石头、棍子打伤它们，它们有血有肉会痛的，会哭泣的，它们的爸爸妈妈会心疼的。小动物们为我们地球的生态平衡做出了巨大贡献，因此，我们特向全市小朋友们发出以下倡议：

一、不要打小动物，不要捕捉小动物。

二、多照顾小动物，把无家可归受伤的小动物送到收容所。

三、向全社会广泛宣传保护小动物的重要意义。

四、认真学习小动物的生活习性，学会保护小动物的知识。

小朋友们!让我们心连心、手拉手，共同为保护小动物事业做出贡献吧!

22 October 2004

Dear Sir,

I would like to apply for the post of Works Manager, which was advertised in The Guardian of I2 October 2004. I feel that my qualifications and experience are ideally suited for the position.

I was born in 1968, and I went to school from 1973 to 1988. In 1987 I took the General Certificate of Education, and I got good grades in Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry. After leaving school, I attended the Orient Technical College, where I first studied Fiber Technology and Color Chemistry; later I studied other subjects related to textile manufacture, and in 1991 I obtained the Diploma in Textiles.

After completing my studies, I joined the Top Clothing Company where I worked until 1996. In that year I moved to Prior Productions, who was pleased with my work, and as a result, in 1998, I was promoted to Assistant Works Manager there.

I enjoy my work, and I am prepared to work hard. Moreover, I am sure that Prior Productions would give me an excellent reference. I therefore feel that my application deserves your serious consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Mary Ma

i have a beautiful school.

in the spring,the weather become warmer and warmer.and the trees become green.some birds are singing on the trees.the flowers are open.some butterflies are fly over the flowers.in the fall,the weather is windy.the leaves of trees like butterflies are in the sky.

I am Cendy. I am in Nanhai Experimental Primary School. I am in Class 9, Grade 3. I am tall and thin. I live in Dali. I have many good friends. I often play with them.

I have many hobbies, riding a bike, drawing pictures and reading books. But I like to read books the best. Because of reading books is good for my study. I also like riding bikes. Because of it does a lot of good to my body.

What’s your hobby? Can you tell me?

the longing summer vacation is approaching, it is the best part of the school year for me. i cannot let the holidays elapse (逝去) meaninglessly, my vacation should be a phase (时期、阶段) of harvest. the events in my plan should give me a sense of infinite potential.

the following plan may reveal the intensity of my desire to travel, work and study in this vacation. in the first few days i want to climb mount hua shan with several friends to refresh ourselves. then i tend to visit relatives, senior school teachers and former classmates(老同学). besides, to find out the best ways to cultivate my abilities, i will find a part time job and conduct some social investigation.

in short, i want to do interesting things in the summer vacation. whatever i do, the goal is the same: to get necessary experience, acquire knowledge and broaden my horizons. though the six week vacation will pass away at lightning speed, its influence is bound to last long.

There is only good mother, I was no exception. Mom has a white face, a pair of round eyes, a black head of hair. Mothers love is selfless dedication.

Mother every year in the winter are to weave a beautiful new sweater to me, let me have a warm winter. Mother to work every day, off work back to knit a sweater for me. You said: "what is this?" Is a mothers love.

When I was 4 years old a small lump grew on the arm, my mother took me to a hospital checking, the doctor said: "to do surgery." After much cogitation mom and dad agreed. Mother day and night after the operation finished watching I hardly slept a wink all night. You said: "what is this?" Is a mothers love. A mothers love reminds me of a mothers love poem "the wanderer". All the dribs and drabs, together, this is a mothers love.

世上只有妈妈好，我也不例外。妈妈有一张白白的脸，一双圆溜溜眼睛，一头乌黑的长发。妈妈的爱是无私奉献的。

妈妈每一年一到冬天都要给我织一件漂漂亮亮的新毛衣，让我过一个温暖的冬天。妈妈每天还要上班，下了班回来还要给我织毛衣。你们说：“这是什么”?是母爱。

在我4岁的时候手臂上长了一个小硬块，妈妈就带我去医院检查，医生说：“要做手术。”妈妈和爸爸经过再三考虑答应了。在手术做完之后妈妈一天一夜的守着我整夜没合眼。你们说：“这是什么?”是母爱。母爱让我想起了一首母爱的诗《游子吟》。所有的点点滴滴，汇聚起来，这就是母爱。

1. 眼见为实.

seeing is believing.

2. 人生短暂，学艺无穷。

Art is long, life is short.

3. 三思而后行.

Look before you leap.

4. 有其父，必有其子。

Like father,like son.

5. 再晚也不算迟。

Better late than never.

6. 条条大路通罗马。

All roads lead to Rome.

7. 并非闪光的都是金子。

All that glitters is not gold.

8. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。

As you sow,so shall you reap.

9. 物以类聚。

Birds of a feather flock together.

10. 不劳无获。

No pain,no gain.

11. 入乡随俗，

When in Rome,do as the Romans do.

12. 那恰是我所喜欢的。

Its my cup of tea.

13. 一日一苹果，医生远离我。

An apple a day keeps the doctor away.

14. 患难见真情。

A friend in need is a friend indeed.

15. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

A young idler; an old beggar.

16. 熟能生巧。

Practice makes perfect.

17. 一分耕耘，一分收获。

No sweet without sweat.

18. 时间就是金钱。

Time is money.

19. 欲速则不达。

Haste makes waste.

20. 说起来容易做起来难。

Easier said than done.

21. 人各有所好。

Every man has his taste.

22. 物极必反。

Extremes meet.

23. 活到老学到老。

Live and learn.

24. 事出必有因。

Nothing comes of nothing.

25. 光荣之路常坎坷。

The path to glory is always rugged.

26. 失败是成功之母。

Failure is the mother of success.

27. 江山易改，本性难移。

A leopard can not change his spots.

28. 好心有好报。

Good mind,good find.

29. 得饶人处且饶人。

Forgive others whenever you can.

30. 爱乌及乌。

Love me ,love my dog.

Zhang Ying is my good frind. Shs in Class1, Grad4 of Tianjiao Primary School. Shs a modl studnt. Shs clvr and shs hlpful, too. Sh oftn hlps tachrs and young studnts at school. Sh is good at Chins, maths, nglish, arts and crafts, music and so on. Sh has a lot of hobbis. Sh liks painting and drawing. And sh liks listning to music, having picnics with hr parnts. Oh yah, sh liks fishing, too. But sh dosnt lik playing basktball, football, tabl tnnis or vollyball. Zhang Ying is th bst frind of min. I lik playing with hr. W always work togthr and hlp ach othr.

[小学生英语优秀日记

My mother buys me a lot of clothes, among these clothes, I like the sweater which is knitted by my mother best. My mother is good at knitting sweater, she knits the sweater for me in the winter, I feel so warm when I put on it. I am so thankful to my mother, for she taking care of me all the time, I will return her love when I grow up.

我的妈妈给我买了很多的衣服，在这些衣服当中，我最喜欢妈妈给我织的那件毛衣。我的妈妈很擅长织毛衣，她在冬天给我织了那件毛衣，当我穿上那件毛衣的时候，会感觉到很暖和。我很感激我的妈妈，她一直在照顾着我，等我长大了，我要回报她的爱。

一.概念

记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。

二.六大要素

记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。

由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。

记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。

三.时态

记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。

四.人称

记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。

无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.

这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。

五.措辞与表达

在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。

六.记叙文写作技巧

1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。

2. 写好第一段

最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。

我们来看这样一段文章的开头:

The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.

怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?

3. 结构要清晰

下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。

4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词

如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。

5. 文章不要写得太长

有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。

6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化

没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。

简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如：

(1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如：

We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.

We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.

(2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如：

The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.

Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟，进行修改检查。

检查的内容不是“大处着眼”，而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。

My father is long with a pair of bright eyes, high nose, wearing a pair of thick glasses, laughing very cute, like a rubber doll. However, the raw gas is very terrible. I remember one time, I would not play the piano, my father gave me a teachers shelf, his eyes staring round, fingertips almost to my nose, and said angrily: "You in the end is playing, or Do not play? "Looks like only ready to eat sheep wolf.

My dad is a teacher, he loves to learn. Every morning, after eating breakfast, began to read English. He usually did not work against the computer, that is, reading, but also wrote a lot of books.

Dad usually likes to tell me jokes, often amused me laughing. Do not know when he gave his students class, will not this?

Dad went to exercise every afternoon, sometimes running, sometimes skating, sometimes at home doing sit-ups, and sometimes as my sports equipment, lifted it!

I love my dad, no matter what I am, I will not change my father.

I have a happy family, in this family, the love of the parents and the objects of love, make my life be filled with joy and warmth, all day long I have lived in this atmosphere of love.

In this home I like to eat meat, vegetables is not how to love to eat. For that mom and dad said I many times, but I think meat is delicious, have a dad to let me eat food deliberately and I rob food to eat, mum was fired one of my favorite celery fry meat, mother put the food in front of me, I kept carrying meat to eat, very delicious! Dad came to the table, put the dishes in the middle of the table, I quickly pull the food bowl, dad to pull the food bowl and the past, and so the two of us pull to go, I was angry, put down the chopsticks to walk, see dad is eaten all the food, I am helping in anger, picked up the chopsticks quickly grab, whether its meat or food into my mouth, I dont know why the celery is delicious, from then on I began to eat green vegetables, I know dad with rob method put off the bad habit of I dont eat green vegetables, dad do everything is good for me.

Family just like our trees, I live in a happy home, mom and dad like branches lived happily let me, Im like a leaf. I want to study well, better to put the family construction, also is I want to be a beautiful leaf, to put the tree dressed up beautifully and.

我有一个幸福的家，在这个家里，父母之爱，一草一木之爱，使我的生活时时充满着欢快与温馨，我整天就生活在这爱的气氛里。

在这个家里我很喜欢吃肉，青菜就不怎么爱吃。就因为这个爸爸妈妈不知说过我多少次，可是我就是觉得肉好吃，有一次爸爸为了让我吃菜故意和我抢菜吃，那天妈妈炒了一个我最爱吃的芹菜炒肉，妈妈把菜放在我面前，我不停地挑着肉片吃，真香啊!爸爸来到桌子旁，将菜放在桌子中间，我急忙把菜碗拉过来，爸爸把菜碗又拉了过去，我们俩就这样拉来拉去，我生气了，放下筷子走了，眼看爸爸快要把菜全都吃完了，我就顾不上赌气了，拿起筷子快抢，不管是肉还是菜都进了我的嘴了，不知为什么芹菜也蛮好吃的，从那以后我就开始吃青菜了，我知道爸爸用抢的方法治掉了我不吃青菜的坏毛病，爸爸做的一切都是为我好。

家庭就像我们的大树，我生活在幸福的家里，爸爸妈妈就像树枝让我快乐地生活着，我就像一片叶子。我要好好学习，要把这个家庭建设的更好，也就是我要做一片美的叶子，要把大树装扮得漂漂亮亮。

Im a happy girl.My english name is kitty.are you happy? Im very happy.I have a good friend.Her name is cheng xin ting.She has a pair of big eyes. I like her.

I like english.My birthday is in november. Im a good girl.Im ten years old.Im in class seven grade four. My teachers name is yao hui feng. She is a good teacher!i like her.

What color do you like? I like pink and perple. I want a rabbit for my birthday. I like to eat hambuger. I like to go to shool.

I have a good mother. I have a good father.

Oh, no! Im hugry! "mumy! Im hugry!"

good bye!

我是一个快乐的女孩。我的英文名字是kitty。你快乐吗?我很高兴。我有一个好朋友。她的名字叫成新亭。她有一双大眼睛。我喜欢她。

我喜欢英语。我的生日在十一月。我是一个很好的女孩。我十岁。我在四年级七班。我的老师的名字是姚惠丰。她是个好老师!我喜欢她。

你喜欢什么颜色?我喜欢粉红色和紫色。我生日的时候想要一只兔子。我喜欢吃汉堡。我喜欢去上学。

我有一个好妈妈。我有一个好爸爸。

哦，不!我饿了!”妈妈!我饿了!”

再见!