给小偷的一封信10篇 写给某某的信英文精彩20篇

At Christmas time, I will always bless my classmates who have walked through fifty difficult steps with me. This year I will use this composition as a special gift to express my deep blessing to him.

The past always keeps me fresh. The student is very tall. He always looks serious, but he always smiles on his face when he helps others. We have always been a very good playing partner. Remember, thats my Christmas day in grade two. Its a bit slippery on the ground under the drizzle. When we took turns shooting, I sprained my feet after landing, but I couldnt even stand up. After he saw it, he put down the ball immediately, gently lifted me up, and slowly helped me into the teaching building. From his eyes, I could see a bit of worry. I knew he was worried about whether I could walk up to the four floor classroom.

There are fifty steps to go up to the four floor classroom, because our speed is very slow, so that we just walked to the two floor, and the bell rang. I asked him to go quickly, but he said, "after I leave, how do you get there? Id like to stay. " Looking at his solemn expression, listening to his firm words and feeling his powerful arm, suddenly a warm current came to his heart, and the pain seemed to ease a lot. With his support, one step and one stop, we strolled fifty steps hard. These fifty steps left me with the love of my classmates. This is the special Christmas gift that I got that year!

I switched to school in XX, but I can never forget the story of that Christmas. This years Christmas is coming. Today is drizzle. Im here to bless him and I together to a good middle school, and hope we can play basketball happily together.

I have a classmate. His name is Li Ye. He has a fat figure and his eyes are round. Li Ye is a diligent student, he listen to the teacher carefully and actively raised their hands to speak, the teacher assignments he did very seriously, "homework seriously honor roll" he "is" the most times (homework carefully in a "positive" one pen).

Remember once the teacher arranged the language homework to let us go home to write. But the quality of our homework is too bad, only Li Ye and the other students do it well. Li Yes homework is a word worker, and even the teacher takes Li Yes homework to the students. Mathematics and English homework are also very serious. Mathematics and English often have to be conscientious and neat because of his homework. So he has many "positive" in "serious honor list".

Li ye not only works conscientiously and neatly, listens to lectures in class, raises his hand to speak, but also loves labor. His teacher makes him the leader of sweeping the floor on Monday. When Li Ye sweeps the floor, he not only urges his classmates to sweep the floor quickly, but also sweeps himself carefully. Thats why theres a lot of garbage on Monday, and it can be done quickly. During the course, teachers often help their teachers get their homework to go down, so that the teacher and the students are very fond of it.

Because Li Ye studied so seriously, he won the two prize in Mathematics Olympiad competition of grade four and grade five Chinese reading and writing contest. He was selected in this years English Olympic competition, hoping he can do well in the competition. In addition, he was elected the ten best young children this year, will be awarded in 61, after the vote, Li Ye was elected squad leader.

Li ye not only works seriously, but also loves labor to help the teacher. He is a good example of our study!

During the summer holidays， my fahter and I visited Beijing. On the second day after we got to Beijing， the guide took us to climb the Great Wall. On that day， it was sunny. It took us forty minutes to reach the foot of the Great Wall. It was for the first time that I saw the Great Wall. Oh， how grand and magnificent it is!

I couldn‘t wait to climb upward， taking my father‘s hand. How many people climbing the Great Wall are! My father and I took photos among the crowd as we climbed. After half an hour. I felt a little tired. My fahter encouraged me in the words， "Teng Teng， do you know that you are not a man if you fail to reach the Great Wall? Come on!" Hearing that， I refreshed myself and tried my best to climb up. In the end， I reached the Hero Slope. I felt very happy and proud， standing on the Hero Slope. I felt myself to be a real man now.

译文：《爬长城》

放暑假了，爸爸带我到北京区游玩。到北京的第二天，导游就带我们去爬长城。那天，阳光灿烂。我们坐了大约四十分钟的车来到长城脚下。我第一次看到长城。啊!多么雄伟，多么壮观。

我迫不及待地拉着爸爸往上爬。爬长城的人可真多啊!我和爸爸挤在人群中，一边爬，一边拍照。爬了半个小时，我感到有点累了。爸爸鼓励我说：“腾腾，你知道吗?不到长城非好汉。你可要加油啊!”听了爸爸的话，我打起精神，拼命地往上爬。最后，我终于爬到了好汉坡。站在好汉坡上，我感到无比的高兴和自豪!我感觉自己也成了一个好汉!

[爬长城英文日记作文

As more and more students graduated from universities and colleges, youth employment is becoming a problem in our society. Nowadays, many young people are having a hard time finding jobs. They often faced the "No experience, no job - no job, no experience" dilemma.

To solve the problem of youth employment, I think the government should take some measures to help college students who are finding their jobs. The government should work with the employers and organizations, such as fund them to help those students obtain career information, develop skills, find good jobs and stay employed. In addition, the employers should provide opportunities for students to get their first work experiences and develop their skills and potentials. Whats more, the employers should also provide assistance for those who face barriers to employment and help them to get and keep a job.

因为我天天在家偷偷摸摸的，所以爸爸和妈妈说我是家里的“小偷”。你看，我今天又开始“偷”东西了。

爸爸妈妈在睡午觉，我想偷手机过把瘾。我轻轻推开房门，轻手轻脚走到妈妈的床头，准备拿走放在床头的手机。妈妈突然翻了个身，我以为妈妈醒了，赶紧趴在地上，滚到了床底下，吃了一嘴的灰。

过了一会儿，我确定妈妈没有醒来，蜗牛般地从床底下爬出来。爬出门后我站起来才发现自己衣服和裤子也沾满了灰。不过“偷”到了心仪已久的手机，也顾不得脏，拍几下衣服玩起了游戏。

妈妈醒来后，发现手机不翼而飞，径直跑进我的房间，把我抓了个“现行”。妈妈气冲冲一把夺过手机，提起我就是一顿“竹笋炒肉”。

上次的“竹笋炒肉”让我苦不堪言，但想吃糖的想法让我又忘记了痛苦。趁爸爸妈妈不在家，我偷偷跑进爸爸妈妈的房间搜刮糖果。我拉开抽屉，把里面的东西翻了个底朝天，找到了一盒巧克力。我钻进衣柜搜寻着每件衣服的口袋，在妈妈的上衣里找到了2块阿尔卑斯。我爬到床底下，找到了三个遗漏的果冻……我满载而归，逃回房间独自享用。

对零食情有独钟的我，又干起了“偷”活。一次，妈妈买回来一盒牛肉粒，我和妹妹平分“秋色”。我的那一份“秋色”很快吃完了，而妹妹那一份还留了好多。看到妹妹的牛肉粒，我起了“坏”心眼。

晚上，我趁妹妹睡觉了，偷偷从妹妹的盒子里倒了一半回我的盒子里。妹妹醒来后，发现少了牛肉粒，我说肯定是“老鼠”偷吃了，妹妹还真相信了。

小“偷”成大盗，我决定“金盆洗手”，不再做小“偷”，而做一个堂堂正正的“男子汉”了!

Dear customers

hello everyone!

First of all, on behalf of all colleagues of _ Co., Ltd., we would like to

eXtend our sincere greetings and heartfelt wishes to our distinguished

customers!

With the support of friends from all walks of life, especially from

customers, our company has made great achievements in 20_ and continues the

development trend of e-commerce. We have withstood the competitive pressure

brought about by the instability of e-commerce and the fluctuation of a large

number of online shopping malls, and achieved fruitful results; the new shopping

mall 20_ has been revamped and launched. Taobao flagship store is also in

preparation, and is eXpected to go online by the end of this year.

The products needed by customers have always been in short supply.

Sometimes the eXtended delivery cycle has brought inconvenience or trouble to

customers. Here, I would like to eXpress my deep apology.

It is gratifying that the e-commerce Department has entered the sprint

stage, and the company will continue to strengthen investment in advertising

technology, and its factories will continue to introduce new production

lines,

Under the premise of ensuring the quality, we should strengthen the

production of products

At that time, the bottleneck of production capacity restriction will break

through at one stroke, the needs of customers will be met in time, and we will

deliver satisfactory answers for customers.

Its a great honor for us to cooperate with our distinguished customers. We

sincerely appreciate your support and cooperation. You cooperate with us in

market development to achieve mutual benefit and win-win results. We have

established a good relationship of common development with you, which will be

consolidated and strengthened under the careful maintenance and cultivation of

both sides. Your success and brilliance have brought about the development and

growth of our enterprise.

Make 100% efforts, let the customer 100% satisfaction, this is our business

purpose. The times and society are constantly progressing, and our products and

services should also keep pace with the times. We sincerely look forward to your

esteemed customers to put forward higher requirements for our products and

services, so that our enterprises can provide you with better products and

services.

On the occasion of the launch, on behalf of me and our enterprise, I would

like to eXpress my heartfelt thanks and respect to the respected customers once

again!

I sincerely wish the respected customers great success and prosperity!

在祝福别人生日的时候朋友为了赶时髦,显得洋气,很多情况下都会选择用英文来替代中文，下面为大家分享了生日的英文寄语，一起来看看吧！

1、Happy birthday to a wonderful person!

——祝一位极帅的人生日快乐！

2、Happy birthday. I hope today treats you well.

——生日快乐，祝你今天过得愉快！

3、Congratulations and warmest wishes for your birthday and every day.

——祝你生日快乐，天天快乐！

4、Here comes today with special pride in all the achievements you have made. May your dearest wishes through all the years in store come true, and make you happier than you have ever been before.

——愿你宿愿得偿，快乐幸福更胜以往。

5、Wishing you a wonderful day and a year filled with happiness！

——祝你生日妙不可言，整年沉浸在幸福里！

6、May you enjoy to the fullest the joy of today. Wishing that your special day be a winner all the way!

——敬贺诞辰！愿这一切充满欢乐、成功！

7、May every special happiness fill this day for you and may the year bring all the best things you are looking forward to.

——愿你享尽今日之欢乐，祝你的生日百事顺心！

8、Congratulations on your birthday. May the coming year be filled with happiness and success.

——愿你的生日特别快乐，愿新的一年中心想事成！

9、May your life brighter as each birthday comes and goes. The nicest kind of birthday that could be wishes for you.

——愿你每个生日都使生命更加亮丽，祝生日无比美好、快乐！

10、Many happy returns of this special day. All our best wishes go to you on your birthday.

——祝你生日快乐，给你我们所有的祝福！

11、May your birthday be a celebration of the life. Wish you all happiness, health and prosperity with many returns of the day.

——愿你的生日是对生命的歌颂，祝健康快乐，事业蒸蒸日上。

12、Hope your birthday is like you——special.A Happy Birthday!

——希望你的生日像你一样——不同寻常。生日快乐！

13、May your birthday bring lots of joy in the year you have begun. Accept my wishes for many happy returns on your birthday.

——愿你的生日带给你无限快乐的一年，请接受我的生日祝福！

14、Warmest wishes that your birthday holds nothing but the best. The finest things in life today and every day!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，愿生日中最美好的一切属于你！

15、In hon our of your moving out of the twenties, we are giving you a marvelous birthday party.

——为庆祝你跨越二十岁，我们准备了一个盛大的生日宴会。

16、The kindest friend there could ever be is the kind of friend you are to me.Happy Birthday!

——世上如有诤友， 那就是像你对我那样关怀的朋友。祝你生日快乐！

17、Its time to celebrate your birthday. Happy birthday to an attractive and intellectual girl.

——是庆祝你生日的时候了，祝福美丽、聪颖的你生日快乐！

18、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

19、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

20、Wishing you a birthday that is among your very best. I hope that all the years ahead will be as happy as you have been in the past.

——祝你度过一个最美好的生日，希望你未来的日子与以往一样快乐！

21、Happy birthday. May gladness fill your every hour on this special day.

——生日快乐！愿这特殊的日子里，你的每时每刻都充满欢乐。

22、We hope that you enjoy this special day and your birthday grows happier by the minute!

——我们祝你欢庆这一天，愿你生日的快乐与分俱增！

23、My heartiest birthday greetings to you, a feeling much warmer than anybody can know. Best wishes for everything your heart desire in the year.

——我诚挚的生日祝福，情深意重，祝你在未来的一年里，心想事成！

24、Wishing you a happy birthday! May the best and loving things be some of the joy your birthday brings.

——祝你生日快乐！愿生日带给你的欢乐中蕴涵着一切美好！

25、It is not everyday you have a birthday, so hope you have a wonderful one. May it be followed by days and weeks and months and years of happiness for you!

——不是每天都能过生日，希望你今天生日快乐，愿你年年岁岁幸福永伴！

26、Have a great day, for today is your birthday and a wonderful event. Wish you happiness unfolding like the petal of a rose.

——生日之际，祝你度过妙不可言的一天，愿你的幸福如绽放的玫瑰般芬芳！

27、Each birthday is a milestone we touch along lifes way. May your birthday be happy in more ways than one.

——每个生日都是我们人生之旅的一个里程碑，愿你的生日百事顺意。

28、Warm wishes on your birthday. I send along my love and affection for you as well as a small gift. Take care!

——热烈祝贺你的生日，捎给你我对你的爱，也寄去一件小礼物，多保重！

29、A gift of love for your birthday, which is a warm wish from my heart. Happiness for your birthday and always.

——送上一份生日礼物，它是我内心深处的是生日祝福，祝你生日快乐，岁岁平安！

30、I want to be one of the first who say ”Happy birthday to you“。 May everything it take to make a very happy and successful year!

——希望我是第一个向你道”生日快乐“的朋友，愿这一年中快乐、成功！

31、Let me join all your other friends in wishing you a happy birthday. Today specially belongs to you. Take this chance to enjoy yourself in everything you do.

——让我与你的朋友们一道共庆你生日快乐，今天属于你，祝你欢欢喜喜！

32、My birthday wishes to you are the warmest. May all the plans you are making work out just right for you and may life always bring the best things your way.

——热烈祝贺你的生辰！愿你的计划都能实现、愿你的生活永远美丽！

33、May each hour be happy one on this special day. May the day ahead be more than happy, too, as all your dreams and plans work out just right for you.

——祝你在这特殊的日子里，时时刻刻都充满快乐，祝你来日多福，捷报频传！

34、A little birthday wish just to let know how much I care about you. May you seek all the best that the world has to give. May you never stop learning for as long as you live.

——小小的生日祝福。略表我的心愿。愿你的追求孜孜不倦，愿你永远学而不厌。

35、A wish for your wonderful birthday that brings a world of bright and lovely things to remember each day through the year.

——生日来临，带给你无数的快乐日子，一年中天天都会想起，生日的快乐、温馨。

36、Allow me to congratulate you with all my best wishes upon your having reached your sixtieth birthday. May you live a long, healthy and joyful life.

——在您六十大寿之际，请允许我向你表示最衷心的祝福，祝你健康、长寿、生活愉快！

37、I want to tell you on this special day that Im very glad time hasnt changed our friendship any. Hoping your birthday is great.

——在这特殊的日子里，我想说我真高兴，时光没有改变我们的友谊，祝你生日其乐无穷。

38、Birthday comes and birthday goes each year, and this leaves the happy memories for ever. May this special day brightens each hour like sunshine that cheers every flower.

——年年生日来而复去，留下永久的快乐回忆。愿今天的每时每刻都充满明媚，似阳光普照鲜花绽放！

39、Wish you a whole world of happiness now that your birthday is here. May your memories today be warm ones. May your dreams today be dear. May your joy last through the year.

——愿你的生日充满无穷的快乐，愿你今天的回忆温馨，愿你今天的梦想甜美，愿你这一年称心如意！

40、Every day is birthday time when thinking of you, and I shall keep one sublime hoping your many dreams come true.

——每当想到你我好似天天都在过生日，可我特别珍视其中的一天，祝愿你在这天美梦都能实现。

41、Affectionate birthday greetings. Birthday means a new beginning and a new chance to take hold on life.

——在你生日之际，向你致以亲切的祝贺。生日意味着一个新的开端，意味着重新把握生活的机会。

42、My special wish may bring you health, luck and happiness each minute! Hope it really proves to be the nicest birthday you have spent.

——给你我特别的祝福，愿它每分每秒都带给你健康、好运和幸福。希望这是你度过的最美好的生日！

43、I sincerely feel a grateful interest in each return of this happy anniversary. Send you a birthday card and the accompanying gift is a token of my best wishes for your success and happiness.

——每到你的生日，我都十分快乐。送上一张生日卡和一件礼物，略表心意。祝事业成功、生活幸福！

44、Be happy, be cheerful. Its time to celebrate. My friend was born today. Hope your course is charted for lots of luck all the year through.

——祝你幸福，愿你快乐，庆祝今天你来到这个世上。在生命航程新的一年中，愿幸运时时与你相伴！

45、Looking back across the years, we come to realize that it takes many birthdays to make us kind and wise. Growing older only means the spirit grows serene. Happy birthday!

——回首以往，我们渐渐认识到，是这些众多的生日使我们宽厚仁爱，更增智慧，年龄的增长使心境愈趋宁静。祝生日快乐！

46、Wishing you a wonderful birthday. You make this world a nicer place just by being so kindhearted. May this day that is all your own hold happiness for you and the years to come be filled with all the best things, too.

——祝你生日快乐，你的善良使这个世界变得更加美好，愿这完全属于你的一天带给你快乐，愿未来的日子锦上添花！

47、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

48、Among the friends we make in life, there are only one or two who can be called ”a special friend“and thats how I think of you.You show the warmth of your friendship in so many different ways,Thats why I hope your birthday is the happiest of days.

——在我们结交的朋友中，只有一、二人堪称”知已“。我正是这样看你。你事无巨细都表现出温馨的友谊，为此我祝你生日幸福无比。

49、My greetings come with affection for the nicest kind of birthday that could be wished for you. When this day comes to an end and you lie down to rest, may the peace of a golden dream be filled with happiness.

——我的祝福捎来我对你的爱，愿你的生日过得称心如意，当一天过去，你躺下享受安宁，愿幸福。弥漫你恬静的金色梦境。

50、Permit me to congratulate you on reaching another of these anniversary landmarks today. May each day be as happy as your birthday. Have a wonderful birthday!

——祝贺你抵达了生命的又一个里程碑，愿你每天都象过生日一样充满喜悦。祝你生日无比快乐。

20 June 2006

Dear Mr. Seaton，

Thank you very much for taking me with you on that splendid outing to London. It was the first time that I had seen the Tower or any of the other famous sights. If Id gone alone, I couldnt have seen nearly as much, because I wouldnt have known my way about.

The weather was splendid on that day, which I thought was rare. I still remember some people told me that in Britain there was weather and no climate. During the same day, it might snow in the morning, rain at noon, shine in the afternoon and be windy before the night falls. So I think I was lucky.

I think the river trip was the best thing of all. London really came alive for me as we saw it from the Thames during that wonderful journey down to Greenwich. It was all tremendously exciting - a day that I shall never forget.

Thank you for giving me such a great birthday treat.

Yours sincerely,

Linda Chen

Dear Ms. Fu,

亲爱的付老师，

I would like you to know that I appreciate the help and support you gave to

me when I was in junior high school. I enjoyed being taught by you immensely.

You are an excellent teacher and inspired me to continue learning with an open

and positive mind.

我想让您知道我非常感激在我上初中的时候你给予的帮助和支持。我非常喜欢你做我的老师。你是一个优秀的教师，鼓励我以开放和积极的态度继续学习。

I would like to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for teaching me what

is responsibility. You helped me how to find the best place for myself and look

for the personal values. I remember you gave me a book as a present of the

Spring Festival. You are the first teacher who gave me a present which I was

moved for a long time.

我衷心的感谢你教会了我什么是责任。你帮我找到最适合自己的位置并和个人价值。我记得你曾给我一本书作为春节的礼物。你是第一个给我礼物的老师，这让我感动了很久。

I would further say that you gave me so good memories that I wish I could

go back to that time again. It was you who encouraged me to overcome obstacles.

It was you who cared about my emotions. I appreciate all you have done for me,

which meant so much to me. I hope that this letter brings my best wishes to you

and I once again thank you for giving me those precious memories of my life,

which I shall cherish forever.

我还想说你给了我这么美好的回忆，我希望我能再次回到那个时候。是你鼓励我克服困难。是你关心我的情绪。我很感激你为我所做的一切，这对我来说是很重要的。我希望这封信能给你带去我最好的祝福，我再次感谢你给我的生活带来那些珍贵的回忆，我会永远珍惜它的。

Sincerely yours,

Yang

杨

My name is XXX， is set in Shanghai xx in the language school， is now Chinas Shanghai world expo exhibition center 201x professional docent.

Came to the exhibition center already has a years time， once I am also a demonstration center volunteers， actually I have been as a volunteer herself. Volunteers there is sense of responsibility， has the sense of mission; Thanked， selfless dedication. Work， although some people would say， also get the same salary each month， do more and less alike. But， for the audience to introduce more， every day looking at them look forward to the expos eyes， I can understand this is not a boring thing.

Very honored to be the first anniversary of the opening in the center of the display， I earned for the narrator gold medal. Received in the past year as the kingdom of the Netherlands ministry of economic affairs minister， minister of the ministry of culture of the republic of Mali and nanjing military region is chief heads and yangzhou municipal party committee secretary of the VIP， leadership， etc. But left the deepest impression is of a blind girl， I will let her on her hands every exhibit touch， she is in the heart. When talking about the story of Helen Keller， I clearly see the persistence and light in her eyes... I think this is what I work value.

In work， I also have some disadvantages， such as too impetuous. Once， in the course of the interpretation of a live audience too much or dont follow the order， and easily excited， sometimes even impact on the quality. Therefore I was a good reflection， strive for patience， careful， enthusiastic， in the work， only in this way they can better the expo.

Next year， now my biggest wish is to have a good job in the expo park service， participate in the event， whether as a volunteer or to the identity of the staff. Believe that the 201X on October 31， the evening， China announced to the world that we held a successful， splendid and unforgettable world expo， and I can proudly say: 201X， I am the part of a successful， splendid and unforgettable!

每年都有很多考生问老师，怎么提高写作？除了阅读，考研英语中占分值最大的就是写作。对于各位考研学子，大家无论学习阅读还是写作，首先要弄清楚一个问题，什么叫做好句子？

好句子绝不仅仅是把主谓宾或者主系表堆砌在一起。好句子具有一些特点。如果同学们能够把握这些特点，那么相信大家一定能够提升作文句式的表达。下面英语老师跟大家分享一下好句子的特点。

特点一：整体性

句子的整体性：即能表达单独的、完整的思想。

Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.

【分析】这个句子表达了两层思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一个小镇 2. grew up to be a musician.长大成为了音乐家。这个句子应该分成两句来写。除此之外，还需要增加一些信息来连接两层思想。

【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.

特点二：连贯性

句子的连贯性：即能清晰地连接句子的各个部分，没有虚假的平行结构，没有指代不请的代词，没有不清晰的句内关系。

Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

【分析】这个句子从语法来讲是正确的，但是句内关系不清楚，到底谁进入了教室？

【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, "good morning!"

Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.

【分析】这个句子的连贯性较差，可以利用平行结构来体现连贯性。

【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.

特点三：准确性

句子的准确性指句子内部没有不准确的，不必要的词。

Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.

【分析】这个句子感觉有故意写长之嫌，需要精简。

【提升】He returned in early August.

特点四：重点突出

好的句子应该重点突出，词的选择，词的重复都有助于句子的重点突出。

Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

【分析】这个句子比较平淡，可以修改一下动词。

【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, "dont move!"

特点五：语法正确，句式多变

句式多变指句子长短结合。如果全篇都是复杂的长难句，文章读起来会晦涩难懂，并且有挑衅阅卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感觉有侮辱阅卷人之感。

Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.

【分析】这个句子不仅仅存在语法问题，另外还有完整性，准确性问题。

【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.

如果同学们在写句子的时候，注意以上五点，相信大家一定能够写出正确，完整，准确的英文句子。

"Castaway" read three times, I am on this level, no matter what the movie does not look three times, not what to write. I share these views, only people who have seen the film.

No wonder at the beginning of the intersection and the manor wings to take a shot, and later know that they affect the grams under different circumstances will make what kind of life decision.

Mrs. Pedersen: all right. See you Thursday". Its time to meet again, but four years later!

No Cha Ke, first heard from a time ruthless dominate us "let us begin to gradually realize he is a FedEx staff, because of work, all flying, receive mail, mail classification, mail delivery, supervision of staff, these things make him a must to deal with time, to race with time. "The appalling, relentless taskmaster tries to put us out of business, we have only so much time......." this is a very clear and powerful.

People work hard. Hes a great worker.

Although the work is heavy, but Richard has the confidence and ability to organize it well. At the same time, he didnt spend much time in other life, so he met his fiancee Kylie, and his date was pushed to the point where he couldnt push any more. Even for Kellys new years Eve gifts, there was no way to wait until that day. I guess that might be a wedding ring, and thats what Kylie should have guessed, or how excited she was when she saw this gift, and she said, "Im so nervous". Although he was busy, he knew how to care for his friends. When he learned that his friend Stans lover, Marie, was sick, he said enthusiastically, "I heard that there was a doctor in Atlanta... I went to find the phone number."". Never forget to chuck his fiancee Kylie sent more care, three gifts carefully prepared for her Christmas as evidenced by: Kylie in Phnom Penh notebook to write their chemical papers; pagers -- wherever they are, how far, can let each other to hear each others voices; - in the words of Kylie when I wash the towel, will think of you. So Kylie is in love with chuck. When chuck saw Kylie gave his Christmas gifts when said: "I love this paper... I love this box...", for work in the FedEx staff, he deserves praise only two kinds of packaging, or love, as long as we send a gift on even the packaging will be beautiful, or is indeed very beautiful, see Kylies heart of love. Look at whats inside, a pocket watch, a pocket watch left by grandpa, a picture of Kylies favorite, and then, when he flies around, he carries his watch and carries Kylies sincere love. "I kept it on Memphis time - Kylie time". No need to explain, everyone can feel the chic of their love, love of comfort!

Chuck is full of life in such a tense, busy and happy, love love and be loved in the world, his passion into work, look forward to working with Kylie and married happy happy tomorrow.

The weather is unpredictable, people have good and bad fortune, the old words have to be talking about people, the fact is such a kind of. Maybe you hope for your life is not very high, perhaps you dont complain about your life is where misfortune, maybe you just have a job every day, something to eat in peace had nothing to do, but not the fate, not because you require a small setback will give you less. There is no sign in the case of chuck riding in a plane crash, in the middle of the night, the South Pacific, all personnel on board on... "...! A part of accident" is life, when it comes, also cannot hide. Ha ha, go to blame who, useless. Some people say that "God is in close to you when the door all dont forget to leave you a window", the aircraft heavy sea, by the pressure of breaking the silo top is not God left a window Chahar grams, if yes, where is the window of the other crew members? Well, I pause here for the fate of fair comment, chuck to accept the fact that only he survived, but also to face alone do not know the end of the island to survive.

Write help signals on the beach, try to pull away, expect the bow to pass the boat suddenly appear, slowly check grams disappointed. Every day, only merciless waves come to the island and recede, but do not swallow, the sea, you simply together with Rick to the island to drown it!

There is only one chuck, a buoy, a watch, a volleyball, a storage little flashlight, he will be here, on this island, away from the hustle and bustle of life in the past, can not imagine living conditions alone without life expectations, even the rest of my life! Yes, he thought of poor Dutch act, deprived him of his right to choose a rope to the end of your life. Perhaps he was desperate, or perhaps numb, but Kylie in the pocket watch was still smiling at the head of the man, who was smiling at the top of his head. "Well, Im still alive, and I still need to eat."."

《荒岛余生》看了三遍，就我这水平，不管什么电影不看三遍，写不出啥观后感来。我这些浅见，仅供看过此片的人分享。

怪不得一开始会给那个十字路口还有庄园里的翅膀来个镜头，后来方知它们都影响着察克在不同境遇下会做出什么样的人生决定。

彼得森太太：“好，星期四见”。是又见面了，不过是四年以后!

未见察克其人，先闻其声，从一句“时间无情的支配着我们”开始让我们逐渐认识到了他是一位联邦快递人员，因工作关系，一天到晚飞来飞去，接收邮件，分类邮件，送递邮件，督导员工，种种这些事情让他必须和时间打交道，跟时间赛跑。“在那令人心惊，无情的监工试图令我们失业之前，我们只有这么多时间.......”这是一句多么明确而有力的催人努力工作的话。他是一位挺棒的工作者。

虽然工作紧张繁重，不过察克有信心和能力来有条理的很好完成它。同时他在其他生活上就没有了太多的时间，以至于和未婚妻凯莉见面，约会都推到不能再推的地步。甚至对凯利准备的除夕礼物都没有办法等到那天给她。我猜那可能是求婚戒指，凯莉也应该是这样猜的吧，不然在她看到这份礼物时怎么会带有那么兴奋的表情说：“我好紧张”。尽管察克很忙，但他懂得关心朋友，当得知朋友史丹的爱人玛丽患病时察克就热情的说“我听说在亚特兰大有个医生.......我去找电话号码”。察克也从未忘记给自己的未婚妻凯莉送去更多关怀，圣诞节为她精心准备的三样礼物就足可见证：金边笔记本——凯莉可以在上面写上自己的化学论文;传呼机——不管他们身在何方，距离多远，都可以让彼此听到对方的声音;毛巾——用凯莉的话说，当我洗脸的时候就会想起你。那么凯莉也是深爱着察克的，当察克看到凯莉送给他的圣诞礼物时说：“我喜欢这包装纸......我喜欢这盒子”，对于在联邦快递工作的人员来说，值得他夸奖的包装只有两种解释，要么爱屋及乌，只要凯立送的礼物就连包装也会感到漂亮，要么就是确实很精美，看得出凯莉的爱之用心。再看里面是什么，一颗怀表，爷爷留下的怀表，镶上察克最喜欢的凯莉照片，以后察克再飞来飞去的时候，一边怀揣着怀表，一边怀揣着凯莉真挚的爱。“我让它保持在孟菲斯时间上——凯莉时间”。不用多解释，谁都能感受到他们这份爱的别致，爱的惬意!

察克就是生活在这么一个紧张而又充实，忙碌而又快乐，爱其所爱的人而又被人爱着的世界里，他热情的投入工作中，又欣喜的期待与凯莉完婚的美好明天。

天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福，这句话不得不老被人说起，事实就是这么个样。或许你对自己的人生寄望并不很高，或许你并没有抱怨自己的生活有哪里的不幸，或许你只想着每天有活干，有东西吃，平平安安就别无所求了，可是不是，命运不因你的要求有多小就会给你的挫折少。在没有多余征兆的情况下，察克所乘飞机失事，深夜里，南太平洋上，机上所有人员命在旦夕......!“意外”也是人生中的一部分，当它来临时，躲也躲不掉。呵呵，去埋怨谁吗，没用。有人说“上帝在向你关闭所有门的时候不忘给你留下一扇窗”，飞机沉海后，被水压冲破的仓顶是不是上帝留给察克的一扇窗呢，如果是，那么其他机组人员的那扇窗在哪里?好了，我在此暂停对命运公平的议论，察克要接受的事实就是只有他活下来了，而且要面对独自一个人不知终期的孤岛求生。

在沙滩上写求救信号，试图划水离开，期盼哪艏顺过的航船突然出现，慢慢的察克失望了。每日只有无情的海浪向着小岛涌来又退去，却不吞噬，大海呀，你就干脆连同察克一起把这小岛给淹没吧!

这儿只有察克一人，一个救生圈，一颗怀表，一只排球，一个蓄电不多的手电筒，他要在这里，这个荒岛上，离开往日生活的喧嚣，在无法想象的生存条件下，独自度过没有预期的生命历程，甚至是余生!是的，他想过要自杀，粗劣的绳子剥夺了他选折如何结束自己生命的权利。或许他已经绝望了，也或许麻木了，然而怀表里的凯莉依然对着察克在微笑，头顶落下的椰子正中察克头上，“好吧，我还活着，我还需要吃的。”

I have a lovely dog. Its name is YoYo. I like it very much. It has two big ears， two big and bright eyes. Its hair is brown. It has come to my home for a year. It has become a part of my family. It has its own house， but it likes to sleep under my bed， play in my house. I like talking to it， because its a friend worth of trusting. I would like to share my happy things with it. When I am sad， talking to it makes me feel good. I am happy to have such a lovely friend.

我有一只可爱的小狗，它的名字叫悠悠，我很喜欢它.它有两只大耳朵，两只明亮的大眼睛.它的毛是棕色的.它来我家已经有一年了.它成为了我家的一部分.它有自己的房子，但是它喜欢睡在我的床底下，在我的房间玩.我很喜欢和它聊天，因为我觉得它是一个值得信赖的朋友.我喜欢和它分享开心的事.当我难过的时候，和它聊天使我感觉舒服.我很高兴有这样一个可爱的朋友.

Dear Sir,

I am a December 2003 graduate from the University of San Francisco (USF)

with a bachelors degree in International Business. As part of my career

planning, I am very interested in supplementing my international business

education with a basic knowledge of the Chinese language. This I hope will help

me enter into business commerce with business organizations partnering with

Chinas economic development.

I already have information from BLCU and hope to study there for at least

one full year starting with this summers program continuing through the fall

and spring semester 2006. Can your office advise me if such scholarships might

be available to me?

I have been studying Chinese for one year now. I am not sure what level I

belong to. I was told that there will be an HSK test in our university in

September. I am planning to attend the test. But I dont know if the result of

the test is recognized by your university. If so, can it be a help for me to

apply for the scholarship?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Tom Jolly

五、请假条请假条要说明请假的原因和请假的期限。Sick leave 病假

例文：

例子2

Dear Sir or Madam:

Dear Mr Li/Miss Li/Mrs Li,

I beg to apply for two days’ leave/a week’s leave/7 days’ leave of absence （请假） from the 7th to 8th of this week. Because I was ill, I want to return/go home to see the doctor.

To support my application, I herewith/enclose the sick leave certificate.

? I should be very much obliged if you will grant me my application. As regards the lesson to be missed during my absence, I will do my best to make them up as soon as I get back from leave.

Yours respectfully,

Li Min

例子3：

Dear Ms Wang,

I beg to apply for seven days’ leave /one week’s leave of absence from the 4th to 10th of this month. Because my father is seriously ill now, so I want to return home to see him.

To support my application, I enclose the fax my sister sent. Yours respectfully, Li Fei

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题目：Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文：

People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past.

There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. Property prices are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families. This means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care.

However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. We also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world.

In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.

[现代社会的人是不是更独立英文作文

work at home ,a special computer ,instead of

robot , confortable What people s Life In the Future Will Be

In the future, people will work at home since robots(机器人)will do most of the work instead people. Even those have to go to important work only need to stay at home in front of a special computer which can control the work far in the factories. All in all(总之),people will lead a comfortable life in the near future

[同学讨论未来的生活英文小作文

Moving old freight car came, those who stop in my home is downstair. A few blue, dirty old freight car is stopping shipshapely, father is directing a worker to move furniture and goods. Our old building is too old, was forced to take away. At that time, I just am controlled 6 years old, at the back of see a few workers put one pile empty cabinet, empty shelf into old freight car, my heart thinks: Really amused, can play hide feline cat ah! I look around all around: Ground of father without a stop is being directed, bead brandish is aspersing the sweat with big beans; Mom has baled the dress that leave terribly defeatedly. Nobody notices me, I am stepping on a piece of small table, climbed the jian hou mian of van, get into an ordinary little cupboard, had closed the door, foolish the ground is laughing. Passed a little while, listen to a worker to say only: Be installed, go.the rear cover door of van was shut, I am foolish still foolish is the jian hou mian that the ground crouchs in van what kind of outside the illusion. Passed a little while again, air is heated up again frowzily again, I opened cupboard door, see only all around inky, outside faint the sound that transmits father motherhello, where is her person? how can I know? Be you look at?... just began, I still feel especially amused, laugh persistently, but do not have with a bit activity sultrily more and more as airy outside, Wow wow!I cried. Later, one moves a thing slow when the worker is opening lid, just mereleasecome out, see sky and father mother, I just arrive cheerfully to take candy at the same time again.

[关于童年趣事的英文作文

On Christmas morning, the children wake up very early. Some even turn on the light at two oclock, and most of them are awake by six oclock, and the young ones play while the dinner is prepared. At about one oclock in the afternoon, the Christmas dinner is brought in. The turkey or chicken is quickly eaten. Children search in their Christmas pudding for new coins which are hidden in it. The rest of the day is full of games and eating until the happiest of all Christmas holidays comes to an end.

It is known to all that today the environment has been badly polluted.

Though many action have been taken to protect our environment, it still has a

long way to go. Two years ago, I went to middle school, and the first moment I

saw the environment, I found that trees were very small, and many workers were

busy planting trees. Now, when I looked around our school, the trees were taller

than people and they grew so fast. People always talk about planting trees but

less of them can take action. If they plant trees immediately, then there would

be more green scenery. Protecting the environment is not just words. We should

take action right now.