英语求职信作文结尾写作指导【20篇】

Two years ago, my mother sent me to learn ballet. At that time, I was so

unhappy about her choice, because I just wanted to play. But now, when someone

asks me what my talent is, I can be very proud to tell them I can dance. My

mother makes the good choice for me. I learn a special skill.

许多同学都想把作文写得好一点，但总觉得学好作文不容易，有什么办法使作文的水平提高快一些呢?许多文章写得好的人都有这样一点经验：写作文要三“多”。

首先是：多阅读。就是要大量地广泛地阅读。阅读愈多愈广、愈认真，就愈有助于写作能力的提高。阅读可以开阔眼界，扩大知识面，阅读可以增加自己的知识和丰富自己的材料仓库。多阅读可以使我们学习如何选材立意、布局谋篇、选词炼句和不同的表现方法。汉代杨雄说：“能读千赋则善赋。”唐代大诗人杜甫曾说：“读书破万卷，下笔如有神。”清代大小说家蒲松龄在《聊斋志异·阿宝》曾说：“书痴者文必工。”意思说，沉迷阅读的人他的文章必定会写得好。《唐诗三百首》的编者也曾说：“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟。”我们阅读犹如蚕吃桑叶，蚕不吃桑叶，就吐不出丝，人不阅读，也写不好作文。博读广览对于丰富写作题材也是极有帮助的。俄国作家高尔基说：“我觉得，当书本给我讲到闻所未闻、见所未见的物、感情、思想和态度的时候，似乎是每一本书都在我面前打开了一扇窗户，让我到一个不可思议的新世界。”读得多了，积累必然丰富，思想也就开阔。有些学生作文语言枯燥、词汇贫乏，初看似乎是语法修辞的毛病，实际上是读得太少，腹中空空是一个重要的原因。

第二个是：多观察。多观察是很有好处的，一是可以培养自己认识外界事物的能力;二是可以积累许许多多真实的写作素材。有经验的猎手，看一看地上的脚印，他就能推测出是什么野兽;老中医看一看病人的脸与舌，他就能大体知道你的病情。这是什么原因?因为他们在长期观察中积累了许多经验，已经找出了规律。我们与作文也一样，要细致观察，才能看到看清看懂外界的事物，这样写起作文既有具体又能真实生动。比如唐代诗人王维写过一首《出至塞上》的诗，诗中有“大漠孤烟直，长河落日圆”两句。后来有些读者认为用“直”字描写“孤烟”似不真实。如《红楼梦》中香菱说：“想烟如何直，日自然是圆的。这‘直’字似无理，‘圆’字似太欲。”宋陆佃《埤雅》中说：“古之烽火用狼粪，取其烟直而聚，虽风吹之不斜。”赵殿臣注解说：“边外多回风，其风迅急，袅烟沙而直上，亲见其景者，始知直字之佳。”可见这诗句中用“直”字是王维细致观察边塞生活得来的真实的奇观异景。我们平时要留心观察，如观察人时，应观察人物的行为、对话、外貌等方面的特点;观察物时，要观察它的形状、颜、质地、构造和用途等方面的特点。大作家巴金说：“不管熟悉或者不熟悉的，我开始写小说以来就不曾停止观察人……我养成了观察人的习惯。”我们若也能养成观察人的习惯就好了。

第三个是：多动笔。我刚才说了多观察。我们会发现每个人的外表、性格、思想等都是不相同的。我们要把观察到的及时记到笔记本里，也可以说写点观察日记吧。勤练多写，刻苦实践，这可以说是学好作文的诀窍之一。犹如学游泳，不多下水游泳是学不起来的，学作文也要多动笔，才能笔下生辉。如蒲松龄，就是多动笔的典型。他“每峨冠博带，日游于田野间，遇乡人则扯之谈鬼为乐。乡人谈甫终，而先生已下笔如风，记载一悉矣。”乡人刚刚讲好，他已很快地把故事全记在本子上了。俄国作家果戈理也是多动笔的人，他会把所见所闻一一记入随身带的笔记本里。甚至到菜馆里吃饭，他也会急忙把菜单抄到笔记本里。后来那张菜单就被用到他写的小说里了。所以你能不怕苦不怕烦，能多动笔，经常写点，日积月累，你的笔头就“灵活”起来。同学们，你们若能保持一股热情，努力做到多阅读、多观察、多动笔，你们的作文水平就会在不知不觉中提高起来。

i have many cousins. i like stella best. she is a pretty girl. she likes

eating cucumbers , eggplants, cabbages… she doesn’t like eating eggs and milk.

so she is very short.

stella is an excellent student . she is the monitor of her class. she likes

studying and she studies very hard. so she is always the top student in her

class.in this summer holiday , i spent a very happy time with her in sichuan . i

often miss her very much.

i like my cousin best!

There was once a little boy called Nick that wanted to help everyone in

order to save money for the new automatic toy review.

After a few months of research, he had finally discovered that there was

going to be a big storm and the whole town was going flood. He decided that

today is the day he gets the automatic toy reviewer. After a few minutes he

drove his automatic train car which has many buttons outside; it was just right

for the flood began to flow all around the town.

The news reporter station was just about to report the news when suddenly a

strange noise came from just around the corner, what was it? Was it an automatic

train to save them; that was in it? And what harm could it to themselves. They

stood still until always the sound came bigger and louder every second the time

passes; at last the automatic train car appeared and in sat a little boy who was

Nick.

Everybody knew that Nick couldn’t harm them with the train car, but it was

true; Nick was not going to harm but instead is going to save the whole town,

everybody began to cheer. Some of the townspeople even came near to help Nick;

for they didn’t want to be drowned either.

When the flood was gone, the storm stopped, and the townspeople were all

saved. They thanked Nick. But Nick still didn’t see any people giving him money

as a “thank you.” All they did was telling the news reporter and reported Nick

on the news. Everybody enjoyed it except Nick, for what he wanted was the

automatic toy reviewer.

After the news was finished they ran to Nick’s house, Nick didn’t want to

answer fro he thought of what they were going to say. It was already dawn which

was almost time for watching TV. Everybody begged Nick to let them in. Nick

decided just for this once.

When he opened the door he found people standing outside the door with

purses in their pockets and smiles on their faces. Nick knew that they were not

here to give him money to but eh automatic toy reviewer; but it wasn’t true,

what the people did was to hand out their personal purses to Nick. Nick knew at

once that he barked up the wrong tree about the townspeople; all he really

wanted to the automatic toy reviewer; he received their purses and at last

bought the automatic toy reviewer. That train car which Nick drove out to save

the other people; this was his only one invention.

Dear Mr. President,

My name is __, a sophomore majoring in International Trade. Having

learned and lived on campus for nearly two years, I have found university life

most exciting and instructive.

What happens around me every day has left a deep impression on me, but what

strikes me most is the canteen service on campus, so that for some time I have

had the keen desire to write to you, sharing with you my positive comments on

and negative feelings about it. On the one hand, we are happy to see that the

canteen staff has been sparing no efforts to guarantee food quality. As a

result, we are relieved from the anxiety that some food might be dirty, stale

and inedible. We also feel contented with the service provided by the canteen,

enjoying food in a homely atmosphere. On the other hand, improvements should be

made for the simple reason that prices for dishes are unreasonably high, and

that the canteen is not spacious enough and too noisy at times.

Therefore, to improve the overall service of the canteen the strengths

should be encouraged, while the weaknesses ought to be overcome by lowering

prices and expanding the canteen if possible.

Yours,

____

尊敬的校长:

我叫__，是国际贸易专业的大二学生,经历了将近两年的校园生活,我感觉大学生活非常令人兴奋。

周围每天所发生的一切都让我印象深刻,但是学校食堂的服务却很难让人满意。因此有好几次我都很想给你写信,与你分享好的评论和不好的感受。一方面,食堂不遗余力的`保证饭菜质量很让人欣慰,这样我们不用担心某些事物不干净,不新鲜,不宜食。对于食堂的服务我们也感到满意,学校为我们创造了家一样的氛围。另一方面,显而易见饭菜的价格太高,食堂不够宽敞,有时会很吵,这些都是需要改进的地方。

因此,应当加大力度改善食堂的整体服务,通过降低价格和扩大食堂来克服缺点。

尊敬您的____

最近几年的中考英语当中，很多省市已经摆脱了单一作文模式，采用一大一小两个作文相结合的模式。例如，去年辽宁沈阳中考英语作文就是一个小作文，应用文-写假条，加上一个大作文，汉语提示作文构成。今年，北京中考英语作文也将是两个，一个看图作文在加上一个提示作文构成。这一讲，我们先来学习一下看图作文的写法。

看图作文要求考生按照所给图画，通过合理的联想将一组画面的内容正确地表达出来。看图作文与其他类型作文的不同之处在于，它除了要求考生有英语语言表达能力，还要求考生有观察能力、分析能力和想象能力。

写好看图作文应注意的事项1、结合文字提示，正确理解图意。一般情况下，看图作文在提供图画的同时也附带有简要的文字提示，我们可以利用文字提示去正确地理解图意，得到要点。切忌孤立地看图而忽视文字提示。

写作从图画的细节出发。所谓细节，就是指图画中的人物、事件、地点、环境、时间、动作等。依据图画细节，就可以把图画的内容用英语具体而生动地表达出来了。

(三)例题分析(例题)

同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形?请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。

要求：

⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。

⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确;

⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。

参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n.

气体 gas n. 污染 pollution n.

THE POLLUTIONS

① One third of the worlds people dont have enough clean water.

② More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

③ People are disturbed quite often by kinds of noises.

④ Every person in our city makes about 1.8 kilos of rubbish every day.

这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：

1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。

2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。

3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。

4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误。

下面是两个例文，大家可以参考一下。

One possible version:

The environment is becoming worse and worse. There are many kinds of pollution I worry about. The most serious two are water pollution and air pollution, because people cant live healthily with dirty water and polluted air, nor can animals. More and more diseases are caused by polluted air.

I think factories should not pour dirty water into the river directly or produce more waste gas. Wed better go on foot or by like instead of by car, because more cars mean more waste gas. We should make our world more and more beautiful.

Another possible version:

The first fact I worry about is noise pollution. People cant sleep well if there is too much noise. Thats why so many people prefer to live in the countryside rather than live in the noisy city. I suggest all the factories and cars shouldnt make terrible noises. If they make terrible noise that isnt allowed, they will be fined, and we can also produce the cars which cant make terrible noise.

The other pollution is rubbish pollution. If everyone makes so much rubbish, one day we may live in a world filled with rubbish. Some people throw the waste paper about. I suggest rubbish should be put into different kinds of dustbins or paper bags.

下面，我们来看看这道题的评分标准。一般来说，各地的评分标准都和下面的这个标准差不多。这个最高的标准，实际上也就是我们写作的目标。

评分标准：

1. 内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分;

2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分;

3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分;

4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。

看图作文不可小视。希望大家掌握答好这种题型的要点，并积累词汇。

Hi Miss Liu(男的用Mr)

I am writing to express my sorry for the breaking of an appointment. We

were agreed that I will go to your office to discuss my homework on ten oclock

Monday morning, but I was busy with something else which is important for me. I

am so sorry for did not inform you about it.

Best regards

I am so grateful about the things I have, such as the love from my parents

and my friends. They always stand by my side when I have troubles. So I can grow

up as a strong and positive girl. Some children take what they own as the

certain thing, but I think we should be grateful to life and return something to

those who love us.

Some people often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things the

world.However,I have my reservations.In my submission,reading is more valuable

than anything else.It’s well known that book is the quintessence of human

wisdom.Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.

Sometimes our daily life can start to feel dull, dry or depressing — I know

it, you know it, we all know it. At times like this, I like to dive into a good

fiction book for a much-needed escape into another world, where I can forget

about whatever problems are stressing me out. Whether you want to travel to the

land of the Hobbits, a galaxy far away or a tropical destination in a steamy

romance novel is up to you. You’ll come back refreshed after your mini-vacation

to a fresh and exciting place in the world of words.

Books are our friends. They introduce us different kinds of knowledge. They

lead us down the road to success.

Books are our teachers. They teach us troth, science, literature, and

philosophy of life. Besides, they increase our knowledge, enlarge our

experience,strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do

without them.

Books tell us what is good and what is evil. And only books can tell the

good from the bad.

Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students.

Reading introduced me to concepts like mindful eating, relaxation

exercises, and the importance of loving yourself. If I didn’t read, I wouldn’t

even be aware of these ideas, which have defined my entire coaching philosophy.

If you don’t read, you could be missing out on intriguing ideas that would

likewise re-define your personal purpose or business philosophy.

As is well known, books teach us to learn life, truth, science and many

other useful things. They increase our knowledge, broaden our minds and

strengthen our character. In other words, they are our good teachers and wise

friends. This is the reason why our parents always encourage us to read more

books.

Reading is a good thing, but we must pay great attention to the choice of

books. It is true that we can derive benefits from good books. However, bad

books will do us more harm than good.

However, in current days,many of us spend most of the leisure time in

playing games or surfing the internet,instead of reading. its a pity to find it

less and less our students are interesting in reading,or have formed a habit of

reading.So,in order to revive reading,this beneficial activity,wed better take

action right now.lets read together,learn together and grow !

One is never too old to learn.No matter at what time we realize the

importance of reading,we can enjoy it during the rest of our life and finally we

will see that it is rewarding to do so.

Hello, everyone, my name is Yang she, this year Im nine years old, from

changzhi city XiangYuanXian, hope everyone support me a lot.

Every year on June 27 is my birthday, but before it is my birthday is June

26. Why say June 26 birthday? Because it is also in June 26 birthday of my

grandpa, so they add up to a day. Why how into June 27 birthday this year?

Because my grandpa just turned 60 to the life, so I no birthday on June 26. We

go home to my grandpa and my grandpas birthday.

The next day, my aunt, uncle and my dopted mother dry dad, grandma and

grandpa dad mom dad, aunt, etc... Have come to my birthday, I feel good my

birthday party.

Dear Mr. Cousins,

Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for

some advice on how to form a band. I, together with two boys and two girls in

different classes in our school, want to form a band. We are all fond of pop

music and modern dance.

I’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different

styles to start with. And is it enough to practise only at weekends? How can we

get more chances to perform? We’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name

for our band. Looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Today, my mother has something to do, so she needs to meet her friends. I

make a promise that I will clean the house when she returns. But I become lazy

soon. I start to play computer games and forget my promise. When I remember, I

start my work quickly. I feel so bad to almost let my mother down. Luckily, I

finish my job and my mother feels happy.

How time flies! It has been a few years since I left high school, but I

still remember you in my heart, because you’re the best teacher in my mind. It’s

not only because you taught me knowledge, but also you taught me how to study. I

have really benefitted a lot from you. So I would like to express my great

thanks to you, and share my life in college with you.

Now I’m studying in Hunan First Normal College, which is Chairman Mao’s

former school. I major in English, because I find it so fun and interesting. As

far as I’m concerned, our English Department is the best department in our

college. The teachers in our department are knowledgeable, experienced, and

warm-hearted. And my classmates are nice, friendly and helpful. Thus, I have a

good atmosphere to study. When I have difficulties in study, I always ask my

teachers for help or discuss with my classmates. Through their help, I have made

great progress in my English study.

College life is much different ...

______

__公司：

您好!衷心的感谢您在百忙之中翻阅我的这份材料，并祝愿贵单位事业欣欣向荣，蒸蒸日上!

我叫___

将来真正能在本职工作上做出成绩，为母校争光。我以“严”字当头，“厚德”当先，首先我注重个人品德的提升，注重诚信做人，我时刻注意学习党的先进思想，密切关注党的动态，是学校的学生代表和团员学生代表;在学习上勤奋严谨，刻苦钻研，力求深刻理解，认真掌握了人力资源管理各个板块的专业知识，并考取了“国家高级人力管理师三级证书”;另外，我注重拓宽自己的知识面，对课外知识也有比较广泛的涉猎;同时，为了全面提升个人素质，我积极参加各种课余活动和科技学术创新比赛，除了获得了很多的奖励外，这些经历使更我认识到团结合作、知识创新的重要性，也学到了很多社交方面的知识，增加了阅历，相信这对我今后投身社会将起重要作用。我还注重参加各种实践活动，不但参加了很多的兼职，还到了很多企业去实习，从现实中提升自己的素质。

大学四年，最令我自豪是的：在家庭贫困无法供我读书的情况下，我通过参加勤工俭学和兼职活动赚取学杂费和生活费，出色完成了学业，完成人生的蜕变，例如连续两年获得“广东商学院自强之星”和“全国自强之星提名奖”(全校仅我一人)，这是对我“艰苦奋斗，自强不息”的肯定，对未来，我也有了明确的职业生涯规划，曾经参加全国性和广东省的大学生职业规划大赛，获得“职业规划之星”就是见证，我也自己创办了大学生职业生涯规划网获得学校学生学习创新网站项目比赛的一等奖，为构建学校的大学生职业生涯规划平台作出了很大的贡献，受到学校领导的一致好评。大学四年，也使我形成了“思维敏捷、阳光干练、自信乐观、积极上进、富有团队精神和创新精神、为人真诚、吃苦耐劳、善于沟通协调、责任心强、具备良好的心理素质”的个性特点。老师及朋友对我的评价是“身心健康酷爱运动;坚强自信志愿成才;热情大方不拘小节;坦诚有礼不失风度;勤奋爱学悟性颇高;心直口快不伤大雅;乐观向上心态健康;兴趣广泛但非平庸;声音悦耳善于沟通;诚实可靠责任心强”。现在，我以满腔的热情，准备投身到现实社会这个大熔炉中，虽然存在很多艰难困苦，但我坚信，大学生活给我的精神财富能够使我战胜它们。“长风破浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”，希望贵公司能给我一个发展的平台，我会好好珍惜它，并全力以赴，为实现自己的人生价值而奋斗，为贵公司的发展贡献我的力量!

此致

敬礼!

___

20__年__月__日

Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing to share my ideas about our English class. Now, our main material in the class is the textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can get some other resources, such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We can learn the basic knowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other materials. In addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which will be useful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from learning and develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours,

Bella

Our art teacher is not too young and not too old .He has black hair two big

and black eyes， a small nose and a big mouth .Look， he is wearing a blue and

white jacket ，a blue hat ，brown pants and a pair of old shoes. He is very funny.

He is a good art teacher. We all like him.

My Darling McGeorge

You said that things seemed clearer when they were written down. Well, here

with a very boring letter in which I will try to put everything down so that you

may read and re-read it at a horror at your folly in getting involved with

me.

Deep breath. To begin with ,I love you. With a depth and passion and I have

felt for no one else in this life. And if it is astonishes you, it astonished me

as well. Not, I hasten to say, because you are not worth loving. Far from it.

Its just that, first of all,I swore I would not get involved with another

woman. Secondly, I have never had such a feeling before and it is almost

frightening. Thirdly, I would never have thought it possible that another human

being could occupy my waking and sleeping thoughts to the exclusion of almost

everything else. Fourthly, I never thought that even if one was in love one

could get so completely besotted with another person so that a minute away from

them felt like a thousand years. Fifthly, I never hoped,aspired, dreamed that

one can find everything one wanted in one person.

I was not such an idiot as to believe this was possible. Yet in you I have

found everything I want: youre beautiful, gay, giving, gentle, idiotically and

deliciously feminine, sexy, wonderfully intelligent and wonderfully silly as

well. I want nothing else in this life than to be with you, to listen and watch

you, your beautiful voice, your beauty, to argue with you, to laugh with you, to

show you things, to share things with you, to explore your magnificent mind, to

explore your wonderful body, to help you, protect you, serve you ,and...bash you

on the head when I think you are wrong...

Not to put too fine a point on it, I consider that I am the only man

outside mythology to have found crock of gold at the rainbows end. But, having

said all that, let us consider things in details. Dont let this become public,

but, well...I have one or two faults. Minor ones,I hasten to say. For example I

am inclined to be overbearing. I do it for the best possible motives, all

tyrants say that, but I do tend, without thinking, to treat people underfoot.

You must tell me when Im doing it to you, my sweet, because it can be a very

bad thing in a marriage.

Right, the second blemish. This actually is not so much a blemish of

character as a blemish of circumstance. Darling, I want you to be you on your

own right, and I will do everything I can to help you in this. But you must take

into consideration that I am also me in my own right. And that I have a head

start on you. What Im trying to say is that you must not feel offended if you

are sometimes treated simply as my wife. Always remember that what you lose on

the swings you gain on the roundabouts. But i am an established ‘creature’ in

the world, and so on occasions you will have to live in my shadow. Nothing gives

me less pressure than this. But it is a fact of life that has to be faced.

Third, a very important and nasty, blemish. Jealousy. I dont think you

know what jealousy is, thank god, in the real sense of the word. I know that you

have felt jealousy over Lincolns wife and child, but this is what I call normal

jealousy, and this to my regret, is not what Ive got. What I have got is a

black monster and any goodness that I have in my make-up. It is really a Jekyll

and Hyde situation... my Hyde is stronger than my good sense and defeats me,

hard though I try. As I told you, I have always known that this lurks within me,

but I could control it, and my monster slumbered and nothing happened to awake

it. Then I met you and I felt my monster stir and become half-awake when you

told me of Lincoln and others you have known, would you like to end with your

letter my monster came out of its lair, black, irrational, bigoted, stupid,

evil, malevolent. You never know how terribly corrosive jealousy is; It is a

physical pain as though you have swallowed acid or red hot coals. It is the most

terrible of feelings. But you cant help it at least I cant and god knows Ive

tried. I dont want any ex-boyfriends sitting in church when I marry you. On our

wedding day I want nothing but happiness both for you and me, but I know I wont

be happy if there is a church full of your ex-conquests. When I marry you I will

have no past, only a future. I dont want to drag my past into our future and I

dont want you to do it, either. Remember I am jealous of you because I love

you. You are never jealous of something you dont care about.

Okay enough about jealousy. Now let me tell you something. I have seen a

thousand sunsets and sunrises, in a thousand sunsets and sunrises on land where

it floods forest mountains with honey-coloured light, at sea where it rises and

sets like a blood orange in a multi-coloured nest of cloud, slipping in and out

of the vast ocean. I have seen thousand moons. Harvest moon is like gold coins,

winter moons as white as ice chips, new moons like baby swans feathers. I have

seen seas as smooth as if painted, coloured like shot silk or blues as a

kingfisher or transparent as glass or black and crumpled with foam, moving

ponderously and murderously. I have felt winds straight from the south pole,

bleak and wailing like a lost child; Winds as tender and warm as a lovers

breath; Winds that carried the astringent smell of salt and the death of

seaweeds; Winds during the moist rich smell of a forest floor, the smell of a

million flowers. Fierce winds that churned and moved the sea like yeast, or

winds that made the waters lap at the shore like a kitten. Ive known silence:

the cold, earthy silence at the bottom of a newly dug well; The implacable stony

silence of a deep cave; The hot, drugged midday silence when everything is

everything is hypnotized and still moved into silence by the eye of the sun. The

silence when great music ends. Ive heard that summer cicadas cry so that the

sound seems stitched into your bones. Ive heard a tree frogs in an

orchestration as complicated as Bach singing in a forest lit by a million

emerald fireflies. Ive heard the Keas calling over the grey glaciers that

groaned to themselves like old people as they inched. Their way to the sea. Ive

heard the hoarse street vendor cries of the mating Fur seals as they sang to

their sleek golden wives, the crisp staccato admonishment of the rattlesnake,

make the cobweb squeak of the Bat and the belling roar of the red deer knee-deep

in purple heather. Ive heard wolves baying at a winters moon, read howlers

making the forest vibrate with their roaring cries. Ive heard the squeak, purr

and grunt of a hundred multi-coloured reef fishes. I’ve seen hamming birds

flashing like opals round a tree of scarlets blooms, humming like a top. I have

seen flying fish skittering like quicksilver across the blue waves, drawing

silver lines on the surface with their tails. Ive seen Spoonbills flying home

to roost like a scarlet banner crossed the sky. Ive seen Whales, black as tar,

cushioned on a cornflower blue sea,creating a Versailles of fountain with their

breath. I have watched butterflies emerge and sit, trembling, while the sun

irons their wings smooth. I watch tigers, like flames, mating in the long grass.

I have been dive -bombed by an angry Raven, black and glossy as the Devils

hoof. Ive lain in water warm as milk, soft as silk, while around me played a

host of Dolphins. I have met a thousand animals and see a thousand wonderful

things.

All this I did without you. This was my loss. All this I want to do with

you. This will be my gain. All this I would gladly have forgone for the sake of

one minute of your company, for your love, your voice, your eyes, hair, lips,

body, and above all for your sweet, ever surprising mind which is an enchanting

quarry, in which it is my privilege to delve.

Gerald Durrell

In the Northern Street of Paris, there sat an old man with white hair and a

stick. He was blind, and nobody wanted to help him. One day a noble man came to

this street and saw the old man with blind eyes, he asked, “Excuse me, don’t you

bother? But, I just want to ask how much did you get today this morning?” “Oh! I

didn’t get anything!” cried the old man in a sad tune, and then the noble man

realized that next to the old man was a cardboard paper, and on were the word,

“I can’t see anything!” and also realized that the people who passed this place

will just look at the paper, smiled; and went away to do their own things. Since

this man was a noble man, he knew what to do to make everybody happy.

And so he took all the money he had in him which was $12, and placed it in

a bowl near him; and then he took out his pen which he had in his hand all

along, and wrote the some words in front of the words that are already on; and

these were the words, “The spring has come, but;” these words, and then went

away. In the evening, the noble man came visiting this place again, he saw the

old man sitting down as usual and asked him, “Well how much did you get this

afternoon then?”

The old man smiled, “Noble man, I don’t know what you did but the people

that gave me money this afternoon were so many that even god couldn’t count

them!” and then the noble looked at the bowl with money and stroked his beard

while he smiled.

“The spring has come, but I can’t see anything!” these words could be so

much use, it might produce that the noble man in this story has technology,

which made the poor blind man happy.

Although this noble man which we are talking about helped the old man, but

he also remembered what the other people did. People asked him many other

questions, and the noble man of course answered them all. Some of the people in

town that didn’t want to help the blinded old man were locked up in jail for

their cruelty instead of kindness.

The moral of this story is, when you see somebody that is in need, go and

help them and you will feel better in the end.

Today， I played a game of legend in school. The first student in each group

went to the front desk to read the words on the paper. One group had 20

students， the first one in our group， whispered to the next one that we were

going to raise the flag together， but the ninth one heard that we were going to

kill chickens together， so she gave it to us. The last one said we were going to

kill chickens together， and the last one said aloud that we were going to kill

chickens together. We all laughed loudly. Haha， it was so funny. He upgraded us

together and said that the game of killing chickens together was so funny. I

must share it with my parents when I go home. I play this little game with them.

I also want to tell my parents that joke. My parents must say its too

funny.

每年的英语中考都有写作这一考查的内容，所以同学们要重视写作的方法，消除畏惧心理，排除心理障碍。纵观近几年中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面简单介绍一下中考英语写作六个要素：审题清，要点明，列提纲，全文顺，无病句，打草稿。

一、审题要清

看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、要点明确

要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐一罗列出。

三、列出提纲

为写作做好准备。根据文章要点短文的中心思想将主要句型、关键词语记下，形成提纲。

四、写顺全文

写短文时要做到五个方面：

1.避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。

2.多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或独立主格结构等较复杂的句型。

3.注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。语态、时态要准确无误;主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致;注意冠词用法，例如：It takes Tom half an hour to go to school by bus.中的an不能写成a;注意拼写，例如：fourteen，forty，ninth等不要写成forteen，fourty，nineth等;注意标点符号和大小写。

4.描写人物时，要生动具体，可以选择使用下列词汇，例如：外形：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，pretty等;颜色：red,yel-low，blue，white，green，brown，black等;心情：glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interest-ed等;情感：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等。

5.上下文要连贯。同学们应把写好的句子，根据故事情节，事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间)，使用一些表示并列、递进等过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：并列关系：and,as well as,or…;转折关系：but,yet,how-ever…;时间关系：when,while,after,before,then,after that…;因果关系：so，there-fore，asaresult…;目的：in order to，in order that，so as to,so that…;列举：for example ,such as…;总结性：in general,in all,in a word,generally speaking…

五、没有病句

中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)看字数是否达到要求，看有无遗漏要点。

(2)看文体格式是否正确规范。

(3)看有无语法或用词上的错误。

(4)看单词拼写、字母大小写是否有错，标点符号有无遗漏或用错等等。

(5)注意时态、语态、人称是否上下文一致。

六、先打草稿

考试中，书面表达应做到先打草稿，写完后多读几遍，检查是否有误，然后再抄到试卷上，注意字迹要工整，不涂、不画、不勾不抹，避免不必要的扣分。

Dear Mary,

I have been living in Beijing for some time now and I find it very

interesting here.

There are so many similarities between Beijing and London. They are both

the capital of the country and are both very important cities. Both places have

huge populations. They are both the economical, political and cultural center.

They both have many historical and cultrual

I also found many differences in the two cities. In London we drive on the

left side of the road, while in Beijing they drive on the right side. Most

people in London go to work via public transportation, here in Beijing most

people rides bycicles. In London the weather is always cloudy, here in Beijing

most the the time it‘s sunny. And in London most student don‘t spend their time

efficiently, but here in Beijing many people speak English cause they study

hard.

Regards,

Peter