英语求职信作文结尾写作指导（实用20篇）

英语写作是中考学生的一个盲点，缺乏对英语写作的专门训练和反思，老师的工作量大，造成作文讲评大多数时候只谈现象，因此学生学得也不具体、不深入，忽略写作技能的提高，甚至误认为只要句子结构正确，无单词拼写错误就应该得满分。同学们应该走出对英语写作认识上的误区。那么怎样才能写出一篇优秀作文，而在中考中获取高分呢?下面是YJBYS网作文频道为大家整理的英语写作指导。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、习作点评

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that，so，little by little，when，so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，became interested in，come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago，some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish，such as plastic bags，fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees，picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily，great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins，and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

There was once a little girl named Mary that wanted a phone so badly that

her parents couldn’t help bearing her crying and got her a phone with purple

dots and a little smiley face on it.

So life went on as usual until one day. when she was walking down town, she

saw a house, filled with decorations. She knew at once that this house was

having a party for somebody. Perhaps they were celebrating a birthday, or Happy

Anniversary… Mary really wanted to enter the party, so she begged them to let

her in and have a great time. They promised to let her in as long as she could

do what they asked.

And that request was to make bread for the poor and buy milk for them to

drink. That sounded like an easy request to grant, so she used her phone to call

her dad to get some bread and milk for the poor. But there was a problem, “No

phones allowed!” cried the owner of the house standing out. He held onto Mary’s

phone and pulled it out of her hand. He deleted her phone numbers and message

box, and then he took the batteries out, in case she had some other plans.

“There, now you couldn’t use your phone anymore,” and the owner went

inside. So poor Mary used her pocket money which was for a new dress for the

school party, to buy bread and milk for the poor; she was very sad, and went

back and said that she had finished her work.

“Where is your proof?” asked the owner again, “I-I didn’t know you wanted

me to give you proof?” “Well then you are out,” and he closed the door

tightly.

Today, my mother and I went to the supermarket.

I saw a lot of items and food. I saw some of the delicious, like in the

past, but my mother to buy eggs, I do not think that in the past, otherwise it

will get lost. After a while, my mother has bought things.

So next time myself ...... delicious!

1、重视增加阅读量是提高英语写作的途径之一

目前，考生在进行大量阅读的同时，应注重所读材料的文章结构以及连接词的运用(ontheotherhand，however，furthermore)、作者的表达方式(词汇、习惯用语和典型句子的使用)、作者是如何进行叙述和议论的。

2、在教师的指导下，平时应勤写多练

练习写作应从基本功抓起。在中译英翻译训练过程中，加强积累适量的词汇、词组和增加各种类型句子的运用。把握好各种句型和词汇的搭配，并从各类题材和体裁着手，多阅读好的范文。然后模仿写作，作文写好之后，一般都要修改。

第一遍收笔后，先看一看结构，然后从字词上推敲，使文章“充实”起来。更重要的是经老师修改过的作文一定要仔细地看一至两遍，然后再认真地抄写一遍，收获将会很大。

3、英文写作“四步走”

由于时间限制，考试时必须在所限定的时间内完成英语作文。英语作文步骤如下：

（1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。

（2)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。

（3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。

（4)写完后一定要再细看一遍。

Dear Zhang,

I am really sorry to tell you that I was unable to attend your birthday

party yesterday evening. That is owing to the fact that my old friends visited

my house without telling me the exact time. I had to entertain those friends

with my passion in the entire evening,and I will continue to entertain them in

the following two days.

I really regret that I havent go to celebrate your birthday personally and

had missed a wonderful chance to enjoy myself with our kind colleages. I have

prepared a pretty gift to you yesterday and will send to you this afternoon to

show my best birthday wishes. Besides, I trust that you will understand me.

Best wishes,

yours sincerely,

Tom

Dear Mary,

I have been living in Beijing for some time now and I find it very

interesting here.

There are so many similarities between Beijing and London. They are both

the capital of the country and are both very important cities. Both places have

huge populations. They are both the economical, political and cultural center.

They both have many historical and cultrual

I also found many differences in the two cities. In London we drive on the

left side of the road, while in Beijing they drive on the right side. Most

people in London go to work via public transportation, here in Beijing most

people rides bycicles. In London the weather is always cloudy, here in Beijing

most the the time it‘s sunny. And in London most student don‘t spend their time

efficiently, but here in Beijing many people speak English cause they study

hard.

Regards,

Peter

Dear Ms. Fu,

亲爱的付老师，

I would like you to know that I appreciate the help and support you gave to

me when I was in junior high school. I enjoyed being taught by you immensely.

You are an excellent teacher and inspired me to continue learning with an open

and positive mind.

我想让您知道我非常感激在我上初中的时候你给予的帮助和支持。我非常喜欢你做我的老师。你是一个优秀的教师，鼓励我以开放和积极的态度继续学习。

I would like to convey my heartfelt gratitude to you for teaching me what

is responsibility. You helped me how to find the best place for myself and look

for the personal values. I remember you gave me a book as a present of the

Spring Festival. You are the first teacher who gave me a present which I was

moved for a long time.

我衷心的感谢你教会了我什么是责任。你帮我找到最适合自己的位置并和个人价值。我记得你曾给我一本书作为春节的礼物。你是第一个给我礼物的老师，这让我感动了很久。

I would further say that you gave me so good memories that I wish I could

go back to that time again. It was you who encouraged me to overcome obstacles.

It was you who cared about my emotions. I appreciate all you have done for me,

which meant so much to me. I hope that this letter brings my best wishes to you

and I once again thank you for giving me those precious memories of my life,

which I shall cherish forever.

我还想说你给了我这么美好的回忆，我希望我能再次回到那个时候。是你鼓励我克服困难。是你关心我的情绪。我很感激你为我所做的一切，这对我来说是很重要的。我希望这封信能给你带去我最好的祝福，我再次感谢你给我的生活带来那些珍贵的回忆，我会永远珍惜它的。

Sincerely yours,

Yang

杨

We know different places has different things in the world. In our town has

the best surpermarket,it has the cheapest things and the servy is the best.Many

people always go to there,this helps surpermarket to gets better and better.And

there is the best clothes and store——Wan jia fu,it has the most beautiful

clothes and shoes,i think the boss are very good,and how about you?

It is important to know our good and bad points because this knowledge will

help us to improve ourself. We should examine ourselves and learn who we

are.

对于我们来说，正确地认识自身的优缺点是很重要的，因为这个认识有助于我们自身的提高。我们应该检查自己并学着(认识)我们是谁。

Above all, we should recognize our strengths and weaknesses. For example, I

am healthy and fit, so I can work hard. Im also optimistic, humble and polite.

These are my strengths. However, I also have weaknesses. For one thing, Im

stubborn and a little impatient. Im sometimes lazy as well and can spent a

whole day just watching TV and eating junk food. Im not ashamed to admit these

bad pints. Knowing what they are lets me focus on improving myself.

首先，我们应该认识自己的优点和缺点。举个例子来说，我是个身体健康的人，所以我可以很努力的工作。我也是一个乐观、谦逊和有礼貌的人。这些是我的优点。可是，我也有缺点。首先，我是一个倔强和有点没有耐心的人。有时候我也很懒惰的，(我)可以花整天的时间看电视和吃垃圾食品。我没有对允许这些缺点(出现)而感到羞愧。了解这些优缺点使我(的注意力)聚焦在提高自身方面。

My best friend is WangMing. He is 12 years-old.He always play jokes

with me.I like to stay with him.It is because he can help me all the time. When

I find him say that I am sad or happy,he always listen to me and he is very kind

to me.He is very clever.He always help with my homeworks.If I have a worry and

dont know how to do he could help me.He can be a friend with

everyone

【参考翻译】

我最好的朋友是王明。他是12岁。他总是与我玩笑。我喜欢和他呆在一起。那是因为他能帮助我。当我发现他说我悲伤或快乐,他总是听我的,他对我很好。他是非常聪明的。他总是帮助我的家庭作业。如果我有一个担心,不知道如何去做,他可以帮助我。他可以和大家做朋友。

Hi!I am a happy and quiet girl.I am from Chin.I am twelve years old,I am a

pupil,I am in Class Three Gread Four.I many good friends.I like many pet,the

peacock panda rabbit and bird,they are lovely.I am tall ,I have around

face,these are big eyes small mouth small nose on my face.I have a black long

hair.I like eatting apple banana eggpiant chicken and...I like music sing run

pinting...I often saying: book is my good frieng,I like it!Whate am I?Yes,my

name is Lv Enhui.

Do you like me?

Dear Mother,

Hello, mum, I am writing you a letter the day before New Years Day. Today, I want to talk to you about what I want to say.

Mom, Ive given you a lot of trouble in the past six years, and today Im going to tell you about 13 years of growing up. I know, in my small time, I must let you worry a lot of heart, you hand a urine ground to pull me up, I know you are very not easy, in my school time, you take care of me meticulously, in the learning process, If I have what difficult place, you always encourage me around me. When I make a mistake, you just call me a few words, but not to hit me. I also know that you are the best mom in the world. Maybe a lot of people have said this, but everyone says it from the heart.

Since last time, my foot injured, you are very worried, every day to send me to school, but also at night to pick me up, in the process of injury, you remind me every day to apply medicine, but also timely take me to the hospital. I have what requirements, you always satisfied with me, I like a "applause princess", you have been holding me in the heart, you always say "you have what wish, I will be satisfied with you, and you, you can study in return for me? This sentence is always echoed in my mind, and I feel very sorry that I did not give you a return in my study.

Sometimes I spend money recklessly, do not listen to your words, always do something harmful to myself, I really regret not to listen to your words, and sometimes, under your education, I also learned a lot of knowledge. Im so proud to have you as a wonderful mother. I have added a lot of troubles to your growth in the past, I am very sorry. In the future growth process, I believe in myself, I believe I will be brave to move forward. Im here today to say "thank you".

Mom, I love you, thank you for taking care of me these years.

Hello! My name is Mingming. I am a pupil. I like speaking English very

much. I go to school five days every week. Every day I go to school on foot.

Because my school is not near my home. I like my school. There are about 3500

students and 54 teachers in my school. And I study in Grade 4. There are 45

students in my class. My English teacher is tall and handsome . I love him very

much. Welcome to my school. You must be very happy.

你好!我的名字叫明明。我是一个小学生。我非常喜欢说英语。我每周要去学校五天。我每天步行去上学。因为我的学校不是在我家附近。我喜欢我的学校。在我的学校里大约有3500名学生和54老师。我在四年级学习。在我的班级里有45个学生。我的英语老师又高又帅。我非常喜欢他。欢迎来到我的学校。你一定很开心。

Today, when I go home after school, a cat follows me as I near my home. It

is very small and it has white hair. When I look at her for the first time, my

heart is melting. What a lovely cat. I want to take her home, but I couldn’t,

because she needs to come back to her mother. Finally, a boy comes to find her

and takes her home.

Dear principal: Hello!

Recently, you have been emphasizing safety education at morning meetings.

Various forms of education let us know the importance of safety, and let us know

some methods of self-protection. I keep these in mind. However, you seem to have

missed some details in your speech. Here I will give you some tips.

Last Thursday morning, there was a get out of class ending. A third-grade

classmate went downstairs to go to the toilet because the toilet on the third

floor was broken. He fell to the ground due to slippage. So I suggest that the

principal you should buy some non-slip carpets and spread them on the ground

when it rains to reduce unnecessary damage and make our campus more beautiful

and safer.

Maybe my proposal is naive, or it may not be realized for a while. As long

as it can be resolved in time, our campus will become more beautiful, and we

will grow happier.

Sincerely,

Your student:

敬爱的校长：您好!

最近，您一直在晨会上强调安全教育，形式多样的教育让我们知道安全的重要性，又让我们懂得一些自我保护的方法，这些我都牢记在心。可是您讲话时似乎漏了一些细节，在此我给您提一些小建议。

上星期四的早上，有一节下课，一个三年级的同学因为三楼的厕所坏了，所以下楼上厕所。他由于地面滑而摔倒在地上。所以我提议校长您应当买一些防滑的地毯，在下雨天的时候把这些地毯铺在地上，减少不必要的伤害，让我们的校园更加美丽和安全。

也许我的提议很幼稚，也可能一时实现不了。只要能及时解决，我们的校园就会变得更加美丽，我们会更加快乐成长。

此致

敬礼!

你的学生：

Dear Professor Smith,

I am Li Hua, chair of the Students’ Union of Xinhua Middle School. Our

school will have the Second Culture Festival next weekend and I am writing to

invite you to give us a lecture about the cultural differences

betweenAmericaandChina, which will begin at 9 o’clock and end at 11 o’clock on

Nov. 28th in Classroom 201 of the third teaching building.

As an expert in international culture, you must have a good knowledge of

the cultural differences betweenAmericaandChina, so we hope you could help us

increase our knowledge and clear some cultural confusion.

Could you please contact us in advance at Englishtec@163.com if you could

come to our culture festival? We are looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Lihua

When I grow up, Im going to do what I want to do. Im going to move

somewhere interesting. Paris sounds like a city that I could that enjoy. There

are lots of art exhibitions there. I want to be an artist . So how am I going to

do it? First, Imgoing to find a part-time job for a year or tow and save some

money. Then Im going to be a student at an art school in Paris.

Yesterday night, I made a dream. Dream of a talking dog it says: "are you

primary school?" I say: "yes!" "Can you help me to put on the volcano bag off?"

It said: "ok, you come to me." Bounded, flew into the volcano, my back

schoolbag, look down, wow! So high! The following is really beautiful! I was

flattered to appreciate beauty, at this time, the ear spread "get up, going to

be late." Mothers voice. Oh! The original is a dream!

Today， I played a game of legend in school. The first student in each group

went to the front desk to read the words on the paper. One group had 20

students， the first one in our group， whispered to the next one that we were

going to raise the flag together， but the ninth one heard that we were going to

kill chickens together， so she gave it to us. The last one said we were going to

kill chickens together， and the last one said aloud that we were going to kill

chickens together. We all laughed loudly. Haha， it was so funny. He upgraded us

together and said that the game of killing chickens together was so funny. I

must share it with my parents when I go home. I play this little game with them.

I also want to tell my parents that joke. My parents must say its too

funny.

After you come back from guilin to play， in order to let me have a full，

and happy summer vacation， I made a plan.

In the aspect of learning in the first place. Because I read too much time，

so in the summer vacation I want to read some books more， ensure to read 1 hours

a day， and to "engagement" and the book. Every day recite an ancient even， to

write a diary， practice calligraphy for 20 minutes. In order to let my English

improved， I will read English for 15 minutes. On the basis of doing these， at

the end of the holidays in order to I learn more easily， Im ready to prepare

the grade five major courses.

Secondly in other ways. I want to go out to travel more， hope I can in the

second classroom and learn some knowledge not learn in school. I also want to go

to learn swimming， visiting relatives and friends. In addition to these， I will

stick to my special skill learning， such as the erhu enough to practice every

day 1 hour， Latin dance for distinction， painting teacher assigned homework，

etc.

To do well， of course， the health is the most important， so in order to

complete my plan， I want to insist to take exercise every day， or cycling， or

swimming， or walking.

Since the plan， must be completed on schedule， if not completed on

schedule， is white. So I must seriously to complete his plan， not

perfunctory.

There was once a little girl named Jerry that lived with her mother in a

small cottage in the forest, they were very poor, and could only afford to eat

bread. “Oh no!” cried Jerry’s mother one noon, “We ran out of bread, and it is

almost time for supper!” “Do we have any eggs left?” asked Jerry, “No, none;”

said her mother very worried.

“Don’t worry mother,” said Jerry suddenly, “I shall go and get some in the

market.” Then she ran off through the forest to the market with her basket.

Along the way, she was quite tired, and so rested upon some big rocks. It

gradually became late and Jerry decided to go and buy the bread, but suddenly a

wolf cried out behind her; “Please, please help me!” cried the wolf, “I have a

problem that nobody wants to help!” then he held out his paw to Jerry, there was

a thorn stuck to his paw. “Is this a trick?” asked Jerry, “Because wolves like

to eat people.”

“Oh no,” answered the wolf, “We do not eat people now, we only want to eat

some bread with mustard on top;” then he cried again. Jerry quickly knelt down

and removed the thorn from the wolf’s paw; “Oh thank you! Thank you!” shouted

the wolf joyfully, “I shall never forget your kindness!” then the wolf returned

to his home. Jerry walked to the market to buy healthy fresh bread, and then she

ran off home with a full basket of it.

On the way, she was still tired; and so she stayed at the same place and

the same time. As she was about to go, some greedy wolves blocked her way; they

had water in their mouths and said, “Give us the bread!” said a wolf, “Where are

the mustard?” asked a second wolf, “Just give it to us!” shouted the third wolf.

Jerry had no choice, as she was about to give the fresh bread away to the wolf,

the wolf that she had saved before rushed out and said, “Leave her alone!” he

growled, “That girl saved me before, and so leave her alone!” he shouted

again.

The other wolves had no choice but to obey, they walked away. Jerry thanked

her new friend the wolf, and the wolf said that he was supposed to do that in

return. And so to show Jerry’s respect for him, she gave him half the bread, and

returned home immediately to tell her mother about it.

They had some bread that evening, and Jerry’s mother including Jerry

herself all became good friends with the wolf; the wolf also had plenty of

bread, and moved his home close to Jerry.

The moral of this story was, if you help others and they will help you, you

help them again then friends you’ll become. It will be a peaceful life if

friendship is all around us; and that would be great for an important

lesson.