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“慈母手中线,游子身上衣。临行密密缝,意恐迟迟归。谁言寸草心,报得三春晖。”对母亲的恩情,我们惟有以爱和孝敬来回报。为此开学吧为同学们整理推荐了一些关于my home小学英语作文优秀作文,欢迎查阅,希望你们喜欢。
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1000小学生英语作文可爱的小白兔
全文共 839 字
+ 加入清单I have a small white rabbit, its name is white, it is very cute. White body is white, two ears are vertical, a pair of big eyes like two big rubies, beard with the cat exactly the same, the tail like a small hair ball, very cute.
Usually, the white rabbit likes to eat vegetables and radish. Once, I would like to help white to change the usual things to eat, to see what will be white reaction, so I put a piece of fresh pork into the cage, who knows the small smell heard, and then turned to jump As if to say: "I hate eating meat, I like to eat vegetables." I have no way, had to take away the pork, and I quietly put the vegetables, this time, white as before, big mouth Eat up, very happy, squeaky, as if to say: "little master, you are so good, know that I like to eat vegetables.
I like this little rabbit, he brought me a lot of fun.
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篇1:小学生关于手机的英语作文
全文共 1990 字
+ 加入清单As the development of modern technology, Smartphone has become quite popular all over the world with its outstanding functions. People can use phones to surf the Internet, update their personal micro blog, and upload their latest pictures at any place, anytime. It seems that smart phones have already become an indispensable part in peoples daily lives. However, some people are indulging in smart phones, which already have side-effect on their normal life.
Some people, especially teenagers, are easily fall for Smartphone for these reasons. First of all, nowadays, people are under great pressure, while cell phone provides a platform for people to relax themselves. By playing mini-games, vocal chatting with friends, watching movies and listening to music, people can easily forget their problems temporary. Second, there are always something new on the phone. It is can be interesting, mysterious and various. So people are eager to turn on their phones, want to know what is happening around them. When people spend too much time on the phones, they dont have enough chance to communicate with their friends or parents. Their attentions have been drawn away by the virtual world. Lack of good self-control, they are fragile to the smart phone addiction, while they supposed to focus on their study and work.
I think people should take smart phone addiction seriously. Quitting addiction needs time and patience. People should turn off their phones, go outside and communicate with others face to face. Do more exercise and form optimistic attitude towards life!
随着当代科技的迅速发展,智能手机以其卓越的功能风靡全球。人们可以在任何时间、任何地点用它来上网,更新个人微博,上传自己的最新照片。看起来智能手机已经成为人们生活中不可缺的一部分了。然而,有些人过渡沉迷于智能手机,以至于影响了正常生活。
一些人,特别是青少年,极容易被智能手机吸引。原因有这些:首先,当今社会人们压力很大,智能手机提供了一个给人们放松的平台。通过玩小游戏,与朋友语音聊天,看电影听音乐,人们很容易暂时忘记他们的烦恼。其二,手机上总有新鲜事。有趣的、神秘的、种类繁多的信息吸引着大家打开手机,去了解周围到底发生了什么。当人们花了太多的时间在手机上时,就没有足够的机会去与朋友父母聊天沟通。他们的注意力已被虚拟世界所吸引。缺乏好的自控能力,他们在手机成瘾面前弱不禁风。他们理应集中精力在学习和工作上的。
我认为人们应重视把智能手机成瘾症。戒掉它需要时间和耐心。人们应该关掉手机,走出家门与他人面对面的沟通交流。多做运动,培养乐观积极的心态!
篇2:感恩父母英语小学
全文共 1588 字
+ 加入清单Some people know how hard, some people know how to honor, some people know how to respect, know how to cherish. I know a different kind of friendship - thanksgiving. When I was toddler, my parents were leaning on the side; when my life was rugged. Is the parents to help me through the ups and downs; when I study the pressure when the parents gave me a cup of hot tea; when I was bullied, the parents for me to fight injustice ... ... parents paid so much for us, do not we Should you learn to be grateful?
I remember once, school sooner or later, I said to my mother: "Mom, why do not you call me to get up early? I should be late!" I complained. "Well, you hurry, Ill wait for you downstairs." Mother said, while walking out the door. I dawdle to finish the teeth, casually grilled a few mouthfuls of rice, dressed, rushed to the downstairs. Mom has long been waiting downstairs. Breath of the north wind, I was shivering coldly. Mother took his big coat and put it on. Im still talking about it: "You are so late to call me up, will be late, late criticized!" Mom opened the car faster. Cold wind "wind" from my ear blowing, scraping my ear sore. Im late.
Back home, my father said more, "your mother because the morning too little wear, cold cold, is resting, you do not argue to him." Tears like a broken line of pearls, fell down. All this is because of me, all because of love! I went to the mothers bed, guilty to say "mother, sorry".
Is that experience, let me understand the love of parents. Let me learn a more care, less complain. More than a Thanksgiving, less a bit disgusted!
篇3:小学Mother's-day母亲节英语作文
全文共 281 字
+ 加入清单母亲节是五月的第二个星期日。今年母亲节那天,我为母亲买了一件毛衣和一束鲜花作为礼物,感谢母亲为我付出的辛苦。母亲收到礼物后,非常高兴。
Mother'sDaycomes on the second Sunday in May each year. On that day this year, I bought a sweater and some flowers for my mother to thank her for her hard work for me. Receiving my gift, my mother was very happy.
篇4:我幸福家庭小学英语作文
全文共 324 字
+ 加入清单I have a happy family. There are three people in my family, my father, mother and me. My father is a businessman. He is always busy with his work and he often goes to business trips. But when he is free, he stays with us. My mother is a worker. She works hard, too. She works hard to take care of our home. I love my parents
篇5:小学生英语日记
全文共 394 字
+ 加入清单Saturday, my grandma made dumplings, one of the dumplings like obedient little ducks swimming in the bowl. My in the mind have a little not to eat them. But the smell of fragrance and let me greedy slobber, I eat up tit-bit. But I eat dumplings, the heart have a kind of feeling can not tell. 译文:星期六我奶奶家包饺子了,一个个的饺子像听话的小鸭子在碗里游来游去。我心里有点不忍心吃他们了。可是那扑鼻而来的香味又让我馋得流口水,我就大口大口地吃了起来。可是我吃完饺子,心里有一种说不出来的感觉。
篇6:小学三年级英语
全文共 753 字
+ 加入清单This is our house.Its nice and big!Its a warm world. All family are live in it. Ha!This is my parents room.Its big.My father is sit on the this chair.My mother is sleep on this bed. This is my room.It`s big,too.Its names "Ann park" beacause it`s very lovely and interisting.This is my desk.Everyday I do homework here.This is my bed.Its pink beacause pink is my favourite couler. This is our sitting room.Its tidy.It has a table,four chairs,a TV,a mat and a flower.We often sing songs here and watch TV here. This is our book room.Its big but small than the sitting room.It has many many wonderful books.We are read books and newspapers here. This is our bathroom .Its big.We take baths,wash faces and brush teeth here.
Our house!Our warm world!I love U!
篇7:小学一年级英语作文:保护环境
全文共 634 字
+ 加入清单Our environment is getting worse and worse now. People throw their garbage here and there. Factories make more and more dirty water that has polluted the rivers and lakes. What should we do?
We must find ways to stop pollution. Waste water must be cleaned before it is poured into the river. People shouldn‘t throw away rubbish here and there. We should pick up the garbage around us. We‘d better plant more trees.
I‘m sure if we take care of our environment, our world will be more beautiful!
现在我们的环境越来越糟。人们把他们的垃圾这里和那里。工厂使越来越多的脏水污染了河流和湖泊。我们应该做些什么呢?
我们必须找到方法来制止污染。废水必须清洁之前倒进河里。人们不应该到处扔垃圾。我们应该捡起身边的垃圾。我们最好种植更多的树木。
我相信如果我们照顾我们的环境,我们的世界将会更美丽!
篇8:关于理想英语作文小学
全文共 601 字
+ 加入清单When I was in school, my teacher asked me what I want to be in the future,
I had no idea at the time, because I didn’t think about the question before, now
I have my dream, I have figured out what I want to be in the future, I want to
be a teacher. This is my future ideal career, being a teacher not only fulfills
myself, I also can implant my knowledge to my students. When I look at my
teachers, I adore them so much, they learn so much knowledge, they can help us
learn better, whenever we have questions, they can answer us immediately. I want
to be one of them when I grow up, so I must study hard now.
篇9:小学英语作文我的家乡
全文共 1886 字
+ 加入清单Having a good nights sleep at grandmas house is definitely the best time to get up in the morning. I opened my sleep mengs eyes, big had a stretch, casual to took a glance outside the window, but I felt very comfortable: see, the green fields like wool blankets, seem very soft. There are dozens of muddy paths in the field, separated by large peanut leaves.
There are several apricot trees along the edge of the field, and the yellow apricot trees are full of trees. The morning dew sticks to the apricot, which makes it look lovely and inviting. From time to time, a few fat sparrows were coming, and standing in the trees, chirping and whispering to each other; Or one or two big black birds, "woah, wow," and fly to the distance; Because of several nearby streams and ponds, also often have egrets pass by, so they are flapping wing of the white clean, gracefully and rest a while in the field, or fly directly to the side of the stream of fish to eat.
What a beautiful view! I kicked my slippers and walked slowly up to the field. The smell of incense came to me, I was intoxicated, I can not help holding a side of the MM and JJ, dancing. We whirled around in the field like a tornado, and the mud was whirling around and we were surrounded by mud...
In the afternoon, I first saw the sunset glow. Oh, that was a masterpiece of nature! The exotic glow of the glow of the earth, the cunning cloud, stole the suns gold gauze, triumphantly rode in the wind driven carriage, into the sunset clouds to show off their charm. The bright sunset clouds, like the red rose with crystal clear dew, open with enthusiasm; Like a girls bashful face, full of blush; Like a girls clothes, light and floating... It has red, yellow and purple colors, and sometimes it is a lovely red scarf, and sometimes it is a red mane horse with sprinted feet.
Beautiful home, beautiful green field, I - love - you.
篇10:小学二年级环保英语作文带翻译
全文共 1304 字
+ 加入清单Nowadays,with more and more serious problem such as the global increasing temperture,the melting ice and the rising sea-levering,people are recognizing the important of developing the low-carbon economic now.
There are many ways we can do to reach the loe-carbon economic.Fristly,discovering others fuels which is more clean and more green to instead of the using of carbon.Secondly, we should have the save-energy conscious and do something which we can make,for instance,using the bus ranther than car when you go out,re-use the thing that can be recycle used,reducing the use of plastic bags.Last but not least,we should plant more trees or other greenplants,in which way we can not only improve the environment,but also can make our home more beauty.
In my opnion, the most important thing to reach the low-carbon economic is everyone must try their best do what they can do for it.Once everyone have the sence of low-carbon economic and have the action by themselves ,it will be earlier to reach it.
如今,随着越来越多的严重的问题,如全球温度上升,冰川融化和sea-levering上升,人们认识到发展低碳经济的重要了。
有很多方法我们可以达到loe-carbon经济。第一,发现其他燃料,更清洁和更绿色,而不是使用的碳。其次,我们应该有燃油节能意识,我们可以做些什么,例如,使用公共汽车跑其他非汽车当你出去时,重复使用可以循环使用的东西,减少塑料袋的使用。最后但并非最不重要,我们应该种植更多的树木或其他绿色植物,在其中我们不仅可以改善环境,但也会使我们的家园更美丽。
在我因为,达到低碳经济的最重要的事情是每个人都必须尽自己最大的做他们能做的事。一旦每个人都有低碳经济和有行动的意义上,它将早些时候到达。
篇11:我的英语老师小学生作文
全文共 324 字
+ 加入清单我的英语老师是个女教老师。她的眼睛大大的,耳朵有点小,鼻子呢微微向上翘,鼻梁上还架着一幅眼镜,大大的嘴巴。她的身材不是很胖,显得很匀称。
她对我们的学习要求很严格,每天布置的作业还要让家长签字,签字完了还要让家长用印章印,没签字的同学要罚站。检查作业时老师点到那个单词,谁要是会读,谁就可以坐下,要是不会读,就要站十分钟。有的时候,要是时间来不及了,老师会随便抽组检查,抽到那个组,就看那个组的作业。
有一次,我的英语作业忘记签字了,检查作业的时候,老师正好抽到了我们组,我害怕极了,心都快提到了噪子眼儿。可是老师快要抽到我的时候,却停了,老师没有看我的作业。好险哪儿!下一回可不能在出现这样的事情了。
我们的英语老师虽然很严格,不过我们还是很喜欢她的。
篇12:小学三年级英语作文:感激
全文共 623 字
+ 加入清单导语:学会感激,你就会少一分烦恼,多一分释然;少一分忧愁,多一分欢笑;少一分抱怨,多一分感恩;少一分孤独,多一分友爱;少一分斤斤计较,多一分潇洒自若。 下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文,欢迎阅读与借鉴,谢谢!
One Sunday afternoon when I was learning to ride my bike, I fell down and hurt my arms badly. As soon as my parents heard this, they took me to the hospital at once. During my stay in bed, they took good care of me and cheered me up. Meanwhile, they helped me with my lessons. With their help, I caught up with my classmates. Now Ill try my best to study well to repay my parents.
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一个星期天的下午,我正学着骑自行车时,我摔倒了,胳膊伤得很厉害。父母一听说,就立刻把我送到医院。在我卧床养伤期间,他们静心照顾我,让我高兴起来。与此同时,他们还帮我学习。在他们的帮助下,我赶上了我的同学,现在我尽我最大的努力来学习好用以报达我的父母。
篇13:假期有趣的事小学生英语
全文共 417 字
+ 加入清单Today, as I have nothing to do, my father decides to take me to the gym. There are people playing all kinds of sports. I see my father play badminton and he teaches me how to play. It is so easy for me to learn, after a while, I can play with my father. I fall in love with this sport, I will play it on the weekend.
今天,当我无事可做的时候, 爸爸决定带我去健身房。人们在玩各种各样的运动。我看到我的父亲在打羽毛球,他教我怎么玩。这对我来说很容易学习,过了一会后,我可以和父亲一起打。我爱上了这项运动,我会在周末去玩。
篇14:关于秋天英语作文小学
全文共 870 字
+ 加入清单It gradually turns cool. The sunlight is no longer so strong and the
cicadas have stopped crying. The hot summer went by at last. The favorite season
in the year is coming.
Everywhere we can see the scene of bumper crops: on the fields is golden
rice,on the trees are ripe fruits. The farmers faces are full of smiles. They
are now expecting a good harvest through a summers hard work.
The autumn evening is especially beautiful. When the setting sun goes
slowly down to the west, the sky over the mountains is covered with red rays of
evening sunlight, which shines upon the blue sky and floating clouds, just as
the maple leaves fall onto the sky.
It is getting cool at dusk. The wind blows, the moonlight shines on the
ground,the frogs croak and insects chirp in the fields. Such a situation will
make you forget all the unhappy things in the daytime.
I love the beautiful season.
篇15:小学英语自我介绍的
全文共 895 字
+ 加入清单My name is Simon. Im 24 years old now. Im from Changsha University. I
major in English, because I have the gift for language study.
In my opinion, English is well-known all around the world. If I can speak
excellent English, I could travel to everywhere in the world without language
barriers. Now I can speak English like an American. Most of my classmates always
envy my oral English.
I like traveling very much. Through traveling, I can widen my perspective
and know more about our world. Now I have been to so many cities, such as
Guangzhou, Zhuhai, and Zhongshan. These cities are nice, clean and modern.
I think Im easy-going and hard-working. When Im at work, I always try my
best to do everything well. I never let others do anything that I can do, and I
never put off todays work to tomorrow. When you have difficulties, I’m eager to
give you a hand if Im able to. I hope I can be your best friend.
篇16:小学四年级英语作文myhobbies
全文共 1839 字
+ 加入清单I have lots of hobbies, among them, my favorite hobby is playing computer.
Play computer in fact there are many benefits, not only gives me much help in the study, but also in life also gave me a lot of help. You see: no problem can be find on a computer; In recent days the weather conditions can see on the computer; You can order things on the computer, cheap and convenient; You can watch TV on the computer, watching a movie; Can also be on the computer games... Is there anyway.
Remember one night, I was in a language the basic training, stumped by a question and she ran and asked my father: "dad, this topic in the flesh in the text said what mean?" After dad thought for a long time said: "this is not very clear to me, you still to look at the computer!" Then I thought to myself: this topic how so difficult? Even give up my dad. "And then, I will go online to find, as a result, let me check the best answer," flesh "is" the human body. In this way, my problem is solved.
In addition, I also like playing computer games, so, after I finish my homework every day, I can play for a while, but I have to remind everybody is, playing computer games, but dont be hidden, it can only be as a relaxation after the completion of a job, playing on the computer at the same time should pay attention to: protect good vision; Computer disease prevention...
This is my hobby?? Play computer.
我有许许多多的爱好,其中,我最喜欢的爱好是玩电脑。
玩电脑其实有许多的好处,不仅在学习上给了我很多帮助,而且在生活当中也给我很多帮助。你瞧:不会的问题可以在电脑上查找;最近几天的天气情况可以在电脑上查看;可以在电脑上订购物品,既便宜也省事;可以在电脑上看电视、看电影;还可以在电脑上打游戏……反正是举不胜举。
记得有一天晚上,我在做语文《基础训练》时,被一道题目给难倒了,就跑去问爸爸:“爸爸,这个题目里的‘血肉’在课文中表示什么意思?”爸爸想了很久之后说:“这我也不是很清楚,你还是去查看一下电脑吧!”当时我心里想:这题目怎么这么难啊?居然都把我老爸给难倒了。”然后,我就上网去查找,结果让我查到了最佳答案,“血肉”表示的是“人的身躯”。这样一来,我的问题就迎刃而解了。
另外,我还喜欢玩电脑游戏,所以,每天我做完作业之后,我可以小玩一会儿,不过,我得提醒大家的是,玩电脑游戏时,可千万不能上隐,那只能是作为在作业完成之后的一种放松,同时玩电脑时要注意:保护好视力;预防电脑病……
这就是我的爱好??玩电脑。
篇17:小学英语日记
全文共 455 字
+ 加入清单我的一天
I got up early this morning. I cleaned my room. I opened the window and
aired the room. I picked up the paper and swept the floor. Then I made the
bed.
我今天很早起床。打扫了房间。我开窗通了风。我捡了地上的纸,扫了地。然后我整理了床铺。
I played computer games. We had lunch at 12:00. We had fish for lunch.
我玩了电脑游戏。我们在12点的时候吃了午饭。我们吃了鱼。
After lunch we went to the park. In the evening I did my homework. We had
delicious food for supper.
午饭后,我们去了公园。傍晚的时候我做了作业。我们晚饭吃了美味。
I was very happy today.
我今天过的很愉快。
篇18:我的特征小学英语作文
全文共 595 字
+ 加入清单Let me tell you what I will be when I grow up. I think languages are the most important tools of communication among people. Each country's languages, which are different, are interesting. So I want to be a translator. Since I was a child, I have learned many kinds of languages. I like to make friends with people from other countries. If I can speak a lot of languages, I will have a lot of friends. I don't think being a translator is very easy. It must be very hard. But I want to try! So I'm studying English now. I want to be a translator in Japan. It's my dream and I believe I can do it.
篇19:我幸福家庭小学英语作文
全文共 636 字
+ 加入清单My family lives in Hsi-hu. there are four people in my family. they are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is tall and thin. He is a handsome man. He has big eyes. His hair is straight. He likes to watch TV and movies and read books. My mother works in an office. She cooks very well. She likes to read books, too. She is short and thin. My sister is a student. She is an independent girl. She is very graceful. I am a student, too. But I study in a junior high school. I go to school every weekend. I like to play dodge ball and listen to music very much. much. I like my family because each family member helps me a lot.
篇20:小学生英语记叙文的写作方法
全文共 3276 字
+ 加入清单一.概念
记叙文也称叙述文,是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有:故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类:以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述;后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动,而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。
二.六大要素
记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素,即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。
由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂,所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要,安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。
记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容,使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构,即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点,然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。
三.时态
记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件,因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动,也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。
四.人称
记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体,即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓,可以增强文章的真实感,有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程;第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制,更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。
无论采用第一人称,还是采用第二人称,都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一致性。注意:句式尽量要多变,不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头,否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence of the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers.
这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错,但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子,使文章略显单调乏昧,给读者的印象大打折扣。
五.措辞与表达
在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中,记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性;而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目,不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件,又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考,这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来,对能否取得高分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。
六.记叙文写作技巧
1. 仔细审题,明确主题,选准素材,罗列提纲。
2. 写好第一段
最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。
我们来看这样一段文章的开头:
The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score,tears streamed down my face. I fell into my bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time, I thought of death, of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasn’t it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace. He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent,and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house.
怎么样,你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩,并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢?
3. 结构要清晰
下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想,作文的框架、主题和脉络是最重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容,这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性,还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成,不会有凑字数的烦恼。
4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词
如first、second、moreover、for one thing…for another、on the one hand…on the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底,又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。
5. 文章不要写得太长
有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”,但由于时间有限,结果草草收尾,甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文, 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平,表述出所规定的内容就可以了。
6. 要多用四级词汇,要使句式多样化
没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障(基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ;作文想达到11分以上,四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如,表示“重视”的词汇有stress,emphasize等,但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意;disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成,前者就平淡,后者表达意思很生动,更能引起阅卷老师的注意。
简单句和复合句合理搭配,长短句交替使用,会增强文章的节奏感,使描写更生动,给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如:
(1) 名词化手段:用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分,然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分,以达到合并句子的目的。如:
We were very much surprised. Mary refused the invitation.
We were very much surprised at/by Mary’s refusal of the invitation.
(2) 定语化手段:根据语义关系,可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等,如:
The winnerwas in no mood for speeches. The winner was hot and tired.
Thewinner,hot and tired,was in no mood for speeches.(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚,卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的2—3分钟,进行修改检查。
检查的内容不是“大处着眼”,而是“小处着手”;不是考虑作文的框架结构,而是留心细枝末节。