关于介绍朋友的英语作文汇编三篇 作文带翻译【通用20篇】

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m very happy to be here with all of you. Thank you for giving me such a great opportunity to present myself.

Well, may name is 马可(此处可替换), and you can call me Michael if you like. I am from Hangzhou, China. It is a wonderful tourist city. If you have a chance to visit my hometown, I will be glad to show you around.

Well, today I’m here to fight for a chance to work in your company. You know, to be a part of you is a dream that has taken roots in my heart, because your company has a very good reputation, and I heard you offer great conditions for the right person. So that’s why I’m here.

Finally, I sincerely hope my dream could come true. And I will prove myself to be a valuable asset to your company. Thank you.

Today, as the development of the medical, people can slow down their aging. As for the celebrities, they use the developed technology to keep young, seeing their unchangeable faces in the screen for so many years, the audience also want to imitate the celebrity, they believe that by using the developed technology, they can keep young all the time. While in my opinion, the way to keep young is to hold a young heart, some people look young outside, but in their hearts, they are old enough and refuse to keep pace with the time. While for another group, even they have wrinkles, they are curious about all the things and are willing to change. My grandpa is old, but he knows all the fashionable things, sometimes I have to ask him for the new things. The young heart is the way to keep young forever.

今天，随着医疗的发展，人们能够延缓衰老。对于名人来讲，他们使用高科技来保持年轻，看到他们常年在屏幕上保持不变的容颜，观众也想要模仿名人，他们相信通过使用高科技就能一直保持年轻。然而在我看来，保持年轻的方法就是拥有一颗年轻的心，一些人表面看起来年轻，但是在他们的心里，他们足够的老，并且拒绝去与时俱进。对于另外一些人来讲，虽然他们有皱纹，但是他们对一切都保持好奇，并且愿意去改变。我的爷爷年纪大，但是他对一切时尚的东西都了如指掌，有时候我不得不问他关于新的事物。年轻的心是永葆青春的方法。

My Friend

My friend’s name is Lily. She is my deskmate. She has long hair, black eyes and a beautiful looking. She is not too tall or too short. It is well-known that she is kind and nice, because she always help other people. Of course, she helps me a lot. She is good at study, especially in 初中政治 English. Because she lives near my home, we often go to school and go home together. We also do homework and play together. We are good friends forever.

[我的朋友中英语作文

Good morning， teachers.

I am very glad to be here for this interview. First let me introduce myself. My name is XX, 25 years old. I come from Weifang, a beautiful city of Shandong Province. I graduated from commercial College in July，2001 and major in finance. Then, I was a teacher in X. When I was a senior school student, I am interested in thought and began to read a certain classic work of Marxism, especially I finished reading "the florilegium of Mao ZeDong". From then on, I have dabbled in more and more theoretical works` and accumulated great interests in theory study， especially in Marxism.

I have a dream, a dream of my study. I wish devote my whole life and energy into the development of the Marxism. If I have the opportunity to study in abc University, Ill dabble in as much as document about the specialty as possible. If it is possible, I want to get the primary accomplishment in my major, at least, a stable basis.

Personally, for todays China, the first task to the development of Marxism is a process of construction. Thats to say, we should understand Marxism mostly from the aspect of construction and development of social society. Only when our socialistic country has a more rapid and balance development than the capitalistic, we can enhance the attractiveness and persuasion of Marxism eventually.

Grace is one of my classmates. She is not good at study, though she usually works very hard. Maybe she just doesn’t find the learning method suitable for her. In my mind, she is clever. Thongh she is not good at study, she is popular in our class. In all people’s mind, she is kind and optimistic. Treating everyone as friend, she has no enemy. As she doesn’t study well, it is hard to avoid feeling sad. However, everytime she just feels sad for a while and then recovers for the first one. Sometimes it is her who comforts us for not for not doing well in the exam. Look, she is so cute!

格瑞斯是我的一个同学。她学习不好，虽然她平时非常努力学习。也许她只是没有找到适合自己的学习方法而已。在我眼里，她是很聪明的。虽然她学习不好，但她在班里人缘很好。在所有人的眼里，她是友好，乐观的。她对待每个人都像朋友一样，所以她没有敌人。因为学习不好，难免会感到悲伤。但是，每次她都只是难过一会，就第一个恢复了。有时候还是她安慰我们这些因为考试不好而难过的人。看，她是如此的可爱!

I got up early this morning。 After breakfast I went to the beach near my home with my friends。 We went there by bike。 As soon as we got there， we played with the sand and walked on the beach。 We also went boating。It was really fantastic。 In the afternoon I went to the library and read books there。 I also helped my parents make dinner。 After dinner I washed the dishes。 In the evening I did my homework。 Then I surfed the internet。 I had a busy and interesting day。翻译：我这天起床早。吃完早饭后我和朋友们去了我家附近的海滩。我们骑自行车去的。我们一到那里就玩沙子，在海滩走。我们也划船。很棒。下午我去图书馆看书。我也帮忙我的父母做晚饭。饭后我洗碗。晚上我做作业，然后上网。我这天很忙也过得很愉快

My hometown is in Gansu Lixian, there are many mountains.

In the distance, the mountains look like a green planet surrounded by forests. The stone on the mountain dressed the mountain as a world of stone.

The trees grow more luxuriantly in summer and dress up as green cashmere. The mountain terraces like people walking the steps, also like the mountains in Grandpa smile.

The mountain became a yellow world in autumn, and the fruits and crops were ripe, and the mountain was like a magician, constantly changing crops and fruits for human beings.

In winter the mountains covered with a white dress, like an angel, in the fog, the mountains like a bottomless mountain, no matter how you cant see the mountain bottom.

This is the mountain of my hometown all the year round, I love it.

My mother is a teacher .She is not tall and a little fat .She has big eyes and long hair .

She loves me very much,but she is very strict to me, she requires me to develop good study habits especially in study .

Once I finished my homework ,but I did not check my homework because I wanted to play .

My mother checked my homework and fond many mistakes .

So she scolded me and let me corrected it . My mother love me very much ,but She is hard to me .I love my mother .

She is the most beautiful and best mother for me.

A Good Friend of Mine-一位好朋友

迈克是我的好朋友。每当我需要帮助时，他就来到我身边。一天放学了，我不得不留下来跟3组的同学一起打扫卫生。但3组的其他人都在外边玩，他们谁都不想回来。于是迈克就过来帮我扫地。真是，患难朋友才是真正的朋友。

Mike is my good friend。 Any time I need help， he will come to me。 One day after school， I had to stay and clean the classroom with Group Three。 But they were still playing outside without any sign to go back。 So Mike came and helped me clean the floor。 A friend in need is a friend indeed。

A Good Friend of Mine

[一位好朋友英语作文

Everyone needs a friend, because we are not the only one in the world. We

need someone to talk to and share our happiness and sorrow. Last night, I saw a

movie, the protagonist’s friend asked him what was a friend, and he gave the

answer that a friend was someone you can talk about your secret and you would

share food with. It is a child’s opinion, and it is simple and real. A friend is

someone who we can trust, we don’t have to hide ourselves and just who we are.

We will feel comfortable with them. When we are in trouble, we will think of

them and they will come to help.

There are many festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival

most.Not only because it’s the biggest festival in the year, but also because

it’s a new beginning that brings hope to people and it’s time for family

gathering.Before the festival, people come home no matter where they

are.Usually, we have a big dinner on the New Year’s Eve. And then families sit

together and share their lives or planes.Some will play games or hang out to

have some fun.

On the New Year’s Day, people get up early and say good words to anyone

they meet.Children can get lucky money from relatives.In the following days, we

will visit relative’s home and bring New Year’s wishes to them.In short, it’s a

time for family gathering and all of us enjoy it.

在我国，一年有很多节日，在这些节日中，我最喜欢春节。这不仅因为它是一年中最大的节日，更因为它是新一年的开始，给人们带来新的希望，也因为它是亲朋好友团聚的时刻。不管身在何方，人们总会在春节前回到家里准备过节。

通常，我们会在除夕夜吃一顿丰盛的晚餐，之后家人团座一起，分享一年以来的生活以及新年计划。有的人则会玩游戏或者出去玩。大年初一，人们通常会早起，会与见到的人说吉祥话。孩子们会得到压岁钱。在接下来的几天里，人们会带上新年祝福互相串门拜年。总之，春节是一个欢聚一堂、供人享乐的日子。

I have a good friend named Cheng, He is a humorous and cheerful person. He

is tall and fat. He has a chubby round face and a pair of black and blue glasses

on the bridge of his short nose. The little eyes narrowed into a slit when

laughing. He also has a loud voice and a eloquent mouth. He sometimes pretends

to be serious, like a little adult.

We often read, study and play games together. What makes me most happy is

playing Taekwondo. Qiye taught me Taekwondo. I worshipped him as my teacher. He

first taught me the basic attack Zha Ma Bu. At first, I learned from him, put

my feet apart, stretched my arms straight, and said with a smile, "this is a

standing horse step"! I squatted down. He frowned like a coach and said

seriously, "this is a squatting horse step!"! I quickly stood up again. He

pointed happily and said, "yes, thats the position. Hold it for ten minutes."

But this half squat is so difficult that I cant hold on for a minute. He saw me

lazy, standing there with my waist crossed, complaining while angry. Looking at

his little adult appearance, I couldnt help falling to the ground laughing and

stammering: Master... Stop talking. "There are so many jokes because of a horse

step.

This is our friendship.

我有一个好朋友，叫程__，他是个即幽默又开朗的人,他个子高偏胖，有一张胖乎乎的圆脸，不高的鼻梁上架着一副黑蓝相间的眼镜。小小的眼睛笑起来眯成一条缝。他还有一副洪亮的好嗓子和一张能说会道的嘴。他有时候装正经，像个小大人

。

我们常在一起看书、学习、做游戏。最让我开心的是玩跆拳道游戏，祺烨教我跆拳道，我拜他为师，他先教我基本攻‘扎马步’。开始，我学着他的动作摆好‘扎马步’姿势两脚分开，双手臂伸直，他微笑地说："这是站马步"!我就蹲下去了儿，他像个教练似的皱着眉头严肃地说："你这是蹲马步"!我赶紧又站起来点儿，他高兴地指着说："对，就是这个姿势，保持十分钟。"可这个半蹲动作好难，我一分钟也坚持不住。他看我偷懒，叉着腰站在那里一边生气一边发牢骚，看着他这副小大人的样子，我忍不住倒在地上捧腹大笑，结结巴巴地说：师傅……你别再讲了。"就因为一个扎马步闹出了那么多笑话。

这就是我们之间的友谊。

I have a good friend。 She is a girl。 And she is pretty。 She is very good at

English! And her English grades are very well!

My good friend is a student of HengFu Road Middle School in class five

junior one。 She is 13 years old。 She is 1 years older than me。 And she has two

beautiful eyes。 She has a cherry mouth and a little nose。 She loves to smile。

And her smile is very beautiful。

Do you know her hobby? Let me tell you! Her favourite sport is badminton。

She enjoys doing housework and playing puter games。 So her mother loves her very

much。 And all of her family love her， too。

I am very happy to be her friends!!

我有一个好朋友。她是一个女孩。她很漂亮。她英语非常好!她的英语成绩也很好!

我的好朋友是恒福路中学初一五班的一名学生。她13岁。她比我大1岁。她有两只美丽的眼睛。她有一张樱桃色的嘴和一个小鼻子。她喜欢微笑。她的微笑非常美丽

你知道她的爱好吗?让我告诉你!她最喜欢的运动是羽毛球。她喜欢做家务和玩电脑游戏。所以她的母亲非常爱她。她的家人也都爱她

我很高兴成为她的朋友!

我的朋友他爱打羽毛球乒乓球等。我们上学的时候一块儿去上学，放学的时候一块儿走，作业也是在一起完成。他不会的问题就问我，我不会的也问他。就这样我们成了形影不离的好朋友好同学好伙伴。

他的个子很高，头发不长，眉毛非常浓密。她的眼睛黑黑的，黑的就像那黑珍珠一样。他每一天都会很快乐的度过，他也是一个乐于助人、热爱劳动的好孩子。(原创作文 )

但是我们也有闹矛盾的时候，事情是这样的：那天在学校的时候老师让我们练一下用毛笔写字。一开始老师先发给每个同学一支毛笔，然后拿出墨水儿，开始写字了。我认认真真的写着字，写完一张时想让老师看一看，刚一离开凳子正好与我的朋友相撞，当时他手上还拿着一瓶墨水儿正好被我撞上了。墨水儿洒在了他的身上，也撒了我一身。当时我手上拿着的那张作品也被染黑了，我顿时勃然大怒对他大声说道：“你怎么回事儿，使我白写了这么多的字。”然后他也着急了，最后我俩被叫到了办公室老师问清事情的原因，老师听后生气的说：“你们不是最要好的朋友吗，怎么就因为这么点小事就互相伤害到你们的友谊了呢。”说完就让我们两个回去再想一下，晚上我找到了他，诚恳的对他说：“对不起，今天我不应该对你大吵。这件事情是我做错了，请你原谅。”我的好朋友听后也笑着说：“我原谅你了，这件事我也有错。以后咱们还能做好朋友吗？”“那必须的！”我爽快的答应了他。

从此我们两个玩的更好了，关键是我们明白了好朋友之间应该相互理解不能因为一点小事就闹矛盾。这就是我和我的好朋友之间的一点小事。

My name is XXX, i wish to be your member one day, your english club is fomous for your amazing english. and i know your club also help people to learn english. do you hear the saying: never too old to learn? it means a person should learn knowlege till he /she is old . i have a warm heart to learn english since i touch it . please , let me be one of helpful members in your club. i am happy to hear from you.

it was a sun day of the summer holiday. the weather was hot. my little brother and i decided to go to the resrvoir to swim by bike. it took us half an hour when we got there, many people were swimming. the we dived into the water……

about an hour later, suddenly somebody called: “help! help!” we were surprised to see a boy struggling in the deep water. as quickly as possible. we swam towards him and pulled him to the shore. he lost his consciousness. we sent him to the nearest hospital at once luckily, he was saved.

in the end, we were worn out, but felt happy. that day was meaningful. we did a good deed!

This afternoon, we play a game called ‘Family Tree’. This game is very

interesting. I’m very interested in it. Our teacher’s family is very large. She

has many brothers and sisters. But I am unlucky, I has only a sister and I

without brothers. But I think I have the best parents in the world. They are

very friendly to me. I live in a good family. My grand parents loves me, too.

When they buy meat, they will give the best parts of the meat to me.

When I was a child, I can’t undertand them. I want to have bread. My grand

father took a bike to Qu Tang. Because in our village there is no ‘bread house’.

Qu Tang is far from our village. Now I grow up. I understand them when I think

of this things. I will cry I can’t use words to say I love them.

I love my family!

今天下午，我们玩了一个游戏叫做“家谱”，这个游戏很有趣。我觉得非常有趣。我们老师的家是非常庞大的，她有兄弟组妹。但我是不幸的，我仅有一个妹妹并没有弟弟。但我觉得我有全世界最好的父母。他们对我非常好，我有一个好的的家庭，我的父母也很爱我，当他们买肉，他们会把最好的给我吃。

当我还很小的时候，我不理解他们。我想要吃面包，我的伟大的父亲骑车去Qu Tang.因为在我们乡村这里没有面包房。qu

tang离我们村庄很远，现在我长大了，我明白了他们为我为我想要的事，我感到愧疚，无法用言语表达我爱他们。

我爱我的家人。

Next week I would like to go to Kaifeng and parents。 Kaifeng has many great

snacks， such as steamed buns， sesame seed Gaul。 Kaifeng also on the famous

Qingming River Park， I think it has to be very beautiful。 My parents will be

opened to see my uncle and live in his house one night。

翻译：下周我要和我的父母去开封。开封有许多十分棒的小吃，比如小笼包子、高卢烧饼。开封还有著名的清明上河园，我想那必须十分的漂亮。我和我的父母将会在开封见到我的叔叔，并住在他家一晚。

今天是一年一度的除夕。中国人的传统习俗一般都是在这天晚上只吃饺子，我家却年年做“年夜大餐”。看，今年的年夜饭多么丰盛呀！

Today is the annual New Years Eve. The traditional Chinese custom is usually only to eat dumplings on this night, but my family is doing &ldquo every year; the big meal ” Look, what a great meal this year!

下午四点多，我们全家便开始忙碌的工作起来。第一种食物当然还是饺子，它毕竟是传统食物，给它个排老一的机会。和面、拌馅、包饺子我们分工细致，这饺子香不香可就在这和面、拌馅上。馅儿拌好了吃起来香，面和好了薄皮大馅儿更是让人舍不得放嘴呀。当然这包饺子也很重要哟！如果包的不美观谁都不爱吃哟，所以包饺子也是一门学问滴。爸妈把面、馅儿都准备好了，该我大显身手了。我左手捏一个，右手拿一个 ，一会儿，一个个小贝壳似的饺子就呈现在我眼前。第一道工序做完，该到下一步了——做满汉全席。

More than four in the afternoon, our family began to work in a busy way. The first kind of food, of course, is a dumpling. Its a traditional food after all, giving it an opportunity to get older. With the noodles, the stuffing and the dumplings, we have a fine division of labor. The dumplings are not fragrant on the noodles and the stuffing. The stuffing mix good tastes fragrant, a large stuffing thin surface and good people are more reluctant to put his mouth. Of course, this bag of dumplings is also very important! If the package is not beautiful, everyone does not love to eat, so it is also a school of learning. The parents in the face, with all ready, I the display skills to the full. I pinched one in my left hand and one in the right hand. In a moment, a small shell like dumpling was present in my eyes. Finish the first step, the next step of — — do manhanquanxi.

妈妈准备了近十几种菜———鸡鸭鱼肉样样齐全，还有各种青菜。快看，我家的烹饪大师——“李大厨”（本人的妈妈）来了。只见她右手拿着炒锅，左手拿着勺子，走进了厨房。先炒蒜苔，后炒木耳，最后炒银耳。顿时，厨房里传出噼噼啪啪的爆炒声，同时也飘散出了炒菜了清香。屋外也想起了噼里啪啦的鞭炮声，空气里弥漫上了火药的气息。屋里屋外这热闹的景象混合在一起，真有一番过年的景象。妈妈把各种各样的肉变着花样做出各种各样的菜。我还给这些凉菜、热菜分别取了好听的名字：百花争艳、芙蓉水上漂、莲子鸡汤、水果沙拉……光听这些名字你肯定也早就口水流了三千尺吧！

Mother prepared more than a dozen kinds of vegetables — — — chicken and duck fish meat samples complete, and all kinds of green vegetables. Look, my master culinary master — — “ chef Lee ” (my mother) come. She saw her right hand with a frying pan, a spoon in her left hand, and she walked into the kitchen. First fried garlic, stir fry after, finally fried tremella. Suddenly heard the sound of crackling, stir in the kitchen, but also have a cooking fragrance. The house was also reminded of the crackling sound of firecrackers, the air was the smell of gunpowder. The bustling scene outside the house was mixed, and there was a real picture of the new year. Mama made all kinds of dishes by changing all kinds of meat. I returned to the cold and hot dishes are a good name: floating on the water, a hundred flowers contend in beauty and the lotus lotus seed soup, Fresh Fruit Salad … … listen to these names you must also have three thousand feet of it flow slobber!

终于等到了开饭，一盘盘色香味俱全、香喷喷的饭菜端上桌来，我看得眼花缭乱。开饭喽！我狼吞虎咽的把这美味佳肴直往嘴里塞，吃了一个圆溜溜的小肚子。妈妈把果汁和红酒拿出来，倒在高脚杯里。这是我们每年必备的一个节目———新年祝愿（每年的年夜饭前我们都要把自己认为最好的祝愿送给家人）。今年还是我第一个上场，我端起酒杯祝愿爸爸和妈妈———寿比南山，笑口常开，工作顺利。爸爸妈妈也把他们的祝愿送给了我，祝我身体健康天天好心情。然后我们端起酒杯，“干杯”！我们的家真是一个温馨和睦的家庭，我爱我家。

Wait until the last dinner, a few color aroma and taste, delicious food on the table, I see dazzling. Dinner! I wolfed down the food it straight into his mouth, eat a round belly. Mom take out the fruit juice and wine, pour in the goblet. This is our annual program — — — new years greetings. We must give our best wishes to our families before the annual meal. This is my first play, I wish mom and Dad took up his glass of — — — longevity, happiness, work smoothly. Mom and dad gave me their wishes, and I wish me good health every day. Then we put up a glass, “ ”! Our home is really a warm and harmonious family, and I love my family.

我家不仅年夜大餐丰盛，家庭也那么幸福，我既为有一个会做美食的的妈妈感到骄傲，也为有一个美满的家庭感到骄傲。

My family is not only a big meal, but also a happy family. I am proud of having a mother who can cook delicious food, and I am proud of having a happy family.

Different countries have different customs and different ways to celebrate festival. In our China, we have a variety of festivals, of which celebrating way is different. For example, we will eat mooncake in Mid-autumn Festival and have dragon boat races in the Dragon Boat Festival and eat zongzi. But in some extend, we celebrate all the festivals in the same way. Every family will have a big meal with their family. It is a time for family gathering. No matter what kind of celebrating way for a festival, it is the time to enjoy life.

不同的国家有不同的风俗习惯和不同的节日庆祝方式。在我们中国，我们有各种各样的节日，而庆祝它们的方式是不一样的。例如，我们会在中秋节吃月饼、在端午节赛龙舟、吃粽子。但从某种程度上说，我们都是以同样的方式来庆祝所有的节日。每家每户都会和家人一起吃大餐。这是属于家庭相聚的时间。无论用什么样的方式来庆祝，这都是享受生活的时刻。

My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

我父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节，他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们，和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语： 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清晰，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化，使文章更耐读。