高考英语作文评分标准细则评分标准是什么通用20篇

英文写作中常用的句子有哪些?下面来看看小编为大家整理的内容吧。

Never think yourself above business.勿自视过高;不要眼高手低;永远不要认为自己是大才小用。

Life is measured by thought and action, not by time. 衡量生命的尺度是思想和行为，而不是时间。

It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。

It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

He that thinks his business below him will always be above his business.自命大才小用，往往眼高手低。

Business may be troublesome,but idleness is pernicious.事业虽扰人，懒惰害更大。

We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯。

We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。

Time tries truth.时间检验真理。

Time past cannot be called back again.光阴一去不复返。

Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.违反交通规则的人应该受到处罚。

There is no one but longs to go to college.人们都希望上大学。

The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。

The great use of life is to spend it for something that overlasts it.生命的最大用处是将它用于能比生命更长久的事物上。

Taking exercise is closely related to health.做运动与健康息息相关。

Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃作运动。

常用短语：

1. 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides。(不推荐用。。。) No gardenwithout weeds。

2. 对…观点因人而异 Views on …vary from person to person。

3. 重视 attach great importance to…

4. 社会地位 social status

5. 把时间和精力放在…上 focus time and energy on…

6. 扩大知识面 expand one’s scopeof knowledge

7. 身心两方面 both physically and mentally

8. 有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to…

9. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal

10. 可以取代 “think”的词 believe, claim, hold the opinion/beliefthat

11. 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relievestress/ burden

12. 优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth。

13. 与…比较 compared with…/ in comparison with

14. 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

15. 支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in favor of theformer/latteropinion

16. 有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the followingreasons/evidence

17. 在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

18. 理论和实践相结合 integratetheory with practice

19. …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of…

20. 日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition

21. 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

22. 长远利益. interest in the long run

23. …有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantagesanddisadvantages

24. 扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorableconditions andavoidunfavorable ones

25. 取其精髓，去其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs。

26. 对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

27. 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information

28. 跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreastwiththe latest development of …

29. 采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth。

30. …的健康发展 the healthy development of …

31. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary。

32. 代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of 大写)

33. 经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water

34. 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities

35. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress

36. 毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…

37. 增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutualunderstanding

38. 充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of

39. 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure

40. 保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity ofoursociety

41. 更多地强调 put more emphasis on…

42. 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society

43. 实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true

44. 主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:

45. 首先 First， Firstly， In the first place, To begin with

46. 其次 Second, Secondly, In the second place

47. 再次 Besides，In addition, Additionally,Moreover,Furthermore

48. 最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly,

49. 总而言之 All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word,

一.开头用语：

良好的开端等于成功的一半.在写作文时，通常以最简单也最常用的方式---开门见山法。也就是说, 直截了当地提出你对这个问题的看法或要求，点出文章的中心思想。

1.议论论文：

A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages.

B. Compared to/ In comparison with letters, e-mails are more convenient.

C. When it comes to computers, some people think they have brought us a lot of convenience. However,...

D. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city and in the countryside.

E. As is known to all/ As we all know, computers have played an important role/part in our daily life.

F. Why do you go to university? Different people have different points of view.

2. 书信：

A. I am writing to you to apply for admission to your university as a visiting scholar.

B. I read an advertisement in today’s China Daily and I apply for the job...

C. Thank you for your letter of May 5.D. How happy I am to receive your letter of January 9.

E. How nice to hear from you again.

3. 口头通知或介绍情况：

A. Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please. I have an announcement to make.

B. Attention, please. I have something important to tell you.

C. Mr. Green, Welcome to our school. To begin with, let me introduce Mr. Wang to you.

4. 演讲稿：

A. Ladies and gentlemen, I feel very much honored to have a chance here to make a speech on the subject -- A Balance Diet and Health.

B. Good morning everyone! Allow me, first of all, on behalf of all present here, to extend our warm welcome and cordial greeting to our distinguished guest.

二.并列用语：

as well as, not only…but (also), including,

A. Not only do computers play an important part in science and technology, but also play an informative role in our daily life.

B. All of us, including the teachers / the teachers included, will attend the lecture.

C. He speaks French as well as English.=He speaks English, and French as well.=He speaks not only English but also French.

D. E-mail, as well as telephones, is playing an important part in daily communication.

三.对比用语：

on one hand ,on the other hand, on the contrary/contrary to ..., though, for one thing ;for another, nevertheless

A. I know the Internet can only be used at home or in the office, but on the other hand, it is becoming more and more popular for much information as well as clear and vivid pictures.

B. It is hard work; I enjoy it though.

C. Contrary to what I had originally thought, the trip turned out to be fun.

四. 递进用语：

even, besides, what’s more, as for, so…that…, worse still, moreover, furthermore; but for, in addition, to make matters worse

A. The house is too small for a family of four, and furthermore/besides/what’s more/moreover /in addition/worse still , it is in a bad location.

五. 例证用语：

in one’s opinion, that is to say, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact, in fact, namely

A. As a matter of fact, advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.

B. There is one more topic to discuss, namely/that is ( to say ), the question of education.

六. 时序用语：

first/firstly, meanwhile, before long, ever since, while, at the same time

in the meantime, shortly after, nowadays,

A. They will be here soon. Meanwhile, let’s have coffee.

B. Firstly, let me deal with the most important difficulty.

七. 强调用语：

especially, indeed, at least, at the most, What in the world/on earth.. , not at all ,

A. Noise is unpleasant, especially when you are trying to sleep.

B What in the world/on earth are you doing?

八. 因果用语：

thanks to, because, as a result, because of/as a result of , without, with the help of..., owe ...to...

A. The company has a successful year, thanks mainly to the improvement in export sales.

B. As a result, many of us succeeded in passing the College Entrance Examinations.

九. 总结用语：

in short; briefly/ in brief ; generally speaking, in a word, as you know, as is known to all

A. Generally speaking, sending an e-mail is more convenient than sending letters.

B. In short, measures must be taken to prevent the environment being polluted.

常用句型

(一)段首句

1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to……Some people suggest that ……

2. 俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying……Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.

3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, …… which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ……Second,……What makes things worse is that…….

4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。

Nowadays，it is common to ……. Many people like …… because …… Besides，……

5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and …… is not an exception，it has both advantages

and disadvantages.

6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为(说)……，在他们看来，……

People’s opinions about …… vary from person to person. Some people say that ……To them,……

7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem …… which is becoming more and more serious.

8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

……has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

……has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢?

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that……while. Obviously，……but why?

(二)中间段落句

1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of……t the same time，they say……

2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的是……。

But I dont think it is a very good way to solve …….For example，……Worst of all，…….

3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，(也是)非常重要的。首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……

……is necessary and important to our countrys development and construction. First，……Whats more, ……Most important of all,……

4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can……

5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方面……，另一方面，

Confronted with……we should take a series of effective measures to…….

For one thing，For another，

6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定会……。

It is high time that something was done about it. For example. ……In addition.……All these measures will certainly…….

7. 为什么……?第一个原因是……;第二个原因是……;第三个原因是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……

Why…… The first reason is that ……The second reason is ……The third is…….For all this, the main cause of ……use to …….

8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ……also has its own disadvantages, such as ……

9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ……is more advantageous.

10. 完全同意……这种观点(陈述)，主要理由如下：

I fully agree with the statement that ……because…….

(三)结尾句

1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为……

As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ……

2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来……。

In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ……Only in this way can ……in the future.

3. 但是，……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。例如，……，而……。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于(喜欢)……

But ……and……have heir own advantages. For example, …… while……

Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to……

4. 就我个人而言，我相信……，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为……

Personally, I believe that…… Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because……

5. 随着社会的发展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自己的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。

With the development of society, ……So its urgent and necessary to ……If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better.

6. 至于我(对我来说，就我而言)，我认为……更合理。只有这样，我们才能……

For my part, I think it reasonable to…… Only in this way can you……

7. 对我来说，我认为有必要……。原因如下：第一，……; 第二，……;最后……但同样重要的是……

In my opinion, I think it necessary to……The reasons are as follows. First ……second …… Last but not least,……

8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现……。

It is difficult to say whether ……is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of…….however, from a personal point of view find……

9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论……

From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that……

10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是……

If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is

常用句型：

开头：

When it comes to ..., some think ...

There is a public debate today that ...

A is a commen way of ..., but is it a wise one?

Recentaly the problem has been brought into focus.

提出观点：

Now there is a growing awareness that...

It is time we explore the truth of ...

Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.

进一步提出观点：

... but that is only part of the history.

Another equally important aspect is ...

A is but one of the many effects. Another is ... Besides, other reasons are...

提出假想例子的方式：

Suppose that...

Just imagine what would be like if...

It is reasonable to expect...

It is not surprising that...

举普通例子：

For example(instance),...

... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)

A good case in point is...

A particular example for this is...

引用：

One of the greatest early writers said ...

"Knowledge is power", such is the remard of ...

"......". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).

"......". How often we hear such words like there.

讲故事

(先说故事主体)，this story is not rare.

..., such delimma we often meet in daily life.

..., the story still has a realistic significance.

提出原因：

There are many reasons for ...

Why .... , for one thing,...

The answer to this problem involves many factors.

Any discussion about this problem would inevitably involves ...

The first reason can be obiviously seen.

Most people would agree that...

Some people may neglect that in fact ...

Others suggest that...

Part of the explanation is ...

进行对比：

The advantages for A for outweigh the disadvantages of...

Although A enjoys a distinct advantage ...

Indeed , A carries much weight than B when sth is concerned.

A maybe ... , but it suffers from the disadvantage that...

承上启下：

To understand the truth of ..., it is also important to see...

A study of ... will make this point clear

让步：

Certainly, B has its own advantages, such as...

I do not deny that A has its own merits.

结尾：

From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw

the conclusion that ...

In summary, it is wiser ...

In short...

环境保护

随着中国经济的发展，环境问题也越来越突出。保护环境，成了我们重要的职责。如果我们再让状况如此下去的话，留给我们后代的恐怕就不是一个健康的地球了。这给我们敲响了一个警钟，那就是要尽快实施环境保护的一些措施。最近，很多问题越来越明显的出此刻公众的眼中。食品安全问题、酸雨问题、水资源缺乏问题、气候问题，all of all，归根结底都是环境的问题。社会的发展就应成为环境保护的基石，我们就应用不断产生的新技术来保护环境。同时，环境的保护就应成为社会发展的一个重要的部分。综上所述，我认为环境的保护就应从两个方面来实施。On the one hand， 相应的法律就应被制定by政府。On the other hand， 环保意识就应在公众中间进行广泛的宣传。我相信如果我们始终把环保问题放在发展的第一位，我们的社会将更快更健康的发展。

As the developing of Chinese economy， the problem of protecting environment is being more and more important。 It is a crucial responsibility for us。 If we let this situation go as it is， it would be almost not a health earth for our offspring。 It sounds an alarm to us that we should execute the steps of protecting environment quickly。 Recently， a large number of problems appeared obviously， the security of food， the acid rain， the lack of water， the worse weather， all of all， it is the problem of environment in the final analysis。 The development of society should be the basic of protecting environment， we ought to protect environment by newer technology。 Meanwhile， the protecting environment should play an important role in the development of society。 Accordingly， I argue that we should protect environment in two aspects。 On the one hand， the related laws should be established by government。 On the other hand， the consciousness of protecting environment ought to be publicized in public。 I have an unshakable believe that if we put the problem of protecting environment be the first place， our society would have been developing fast and healthily。

雅思作文

剑桥雅思作文评分标准：

Task Response

Coherence and Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

雅思的4Gates就是其评分标准，分别为“内容”，“逻辑结构”，“语法的准确使用和范围”以及“词汇量”四个标准。

实际案例

根据下面的全面修改案例，读者可以清楚的看到一篇5.5分的雅思范文是如何在修改之前蜕变成为高分作品。

Cambridge 8 – Test 2

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?

Has this become a positive or negative development?

原文：

Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.

Yes, the technology has changed the people’s interaction in very enhanced manner. Earlier people use to wait and try to find easy way to contact their friends or relatives leaving far. In past there was no quick technology to contact or to establish any communication between one person to another person. The drawback with past communication systems was that it were very slow and were time taking process such as telegrams, letter etc. People used to afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their love ones due to insecure medium of communication. When it comes to professional level, the privacy and accuracy should be maintain but, to that time there were no secure communications.

Now the things have changed around, people from far distance contact their loves one in an easy and quick ways which improves the interaction level between two person. Quality the level of the interaction between people to people, has improved because the people are equipped with high-tec technology which enhances the communication. There are many many medium which are available now such as internet, called cards etc.

The technology has provided the mobility faster which help people to talk or to interact at any time anywhere in the world.

People can contact their friend or relatives any time they want. It has become so easier and feriendly to be in touch with your feriends, relatives even with the unknown people.

原文翻译：

今天，由于科技的发展人们相互交流的方式也发生了改变。

是的。技术改善了人们的交流方式。以前人们总是期待找到方便的方法联系居住在异地的亲朋好友。以前没有高效的技术帮助人们沟通交流。以往的通讯系统的问题是速度慢，费时间，比如：电报和信件等。在过去，人们不敢给爱人写一些私密的事情因为担心通信不够安全。专业的通信技术应该是安全的、准确的，但是在当时根本没有安全的通信可言。

现在，这些事情已经改变了，住在远处的人们利用一种高效的方式联系他们的爱人。这些方式改善了人们之间的交流方式。因为人们使用了改善交流的高科技，所以他们交流的方式已经得到改善。现在有了很多这类媒体，比如：国际互联网、语音卡等。

这些技术提供了更快的移动性，帮助人们在任何时间、世界上的任何地方与他人沟通。

现在人们能够在任何时间联系亲朋好友。和朋友、家人以及陌生人的沟通变得更容易了。

（注：上述的习作存在语法错误和表达错误，因此对应的翻译也有一定出入。）

Sample Answer:

This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

这是一位考生写的5.5分作文。下面是考官的评语。

The topic introduction has been copied from the task and is deducted from the word count. This leaves the answer underlength at 236 words, so the candidate loses marks for this.

文章的开篇是从标题中抄来的，所以不能算字数。剩下的只有236个字，考生因此失分。

This answer addresses both questions, but the first is not well covered in terms of how actual relationships have changed. Nevertheless, there is a clear opinion that the effects have been positive and relationships have improved, with some relevant ideas to support this. There is a general progression to the argument, with some effective use of time markers and linkers. There is also some repetition, however. Paragraphing is not always logical, and ideas are not always well linked. A range of vocabulary that is relevant to the topic is used, including some precise and natural expressions. There are quite a lot of mistakes in word form, word choice or spelling, but these do not usually reduce understanding. A variety of sentence type is used, but not always accurately. Errors in grammar and punctuation are distracting at times, but only rarely cause problems for the reader.

修改后：

Nowadays,.(It is true that technology has shifted people’s communicative ways. 利用It is true that的句式突出后面的事件；Change和shift是同义词替换；the way people interact和communicative way是同义词替换。这样的改变可以避免引用标题中的原词。)

（拒绝非正式的使用方法。）The technology has changed the people’s interaction in very enhanced manner. Earlier people used（前后时态必须一致。）to wait and try to find easy ways（名词单复数）to contact their friends or relatives leaving far. In the past, there was no （词汇使用不当，应该改成effective）technology to contact others or to establish any communication between two people. And（重要的连接词，表示本句和上一句共同解释为什么“人们一直在期待找到更有效的通讯方式。”）the drawback ofthe past communication systems was that they （指代不清，这里指代的是communication systems）were too （表示“太”。）slow and were time-consuming （表示“费时”）, including （这是应该使用分词形式，表示对主句的communication ways的具体描述。）the telegrams, the letter etc. Not only that,（这里需要连接词）people used to be afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their loved ones because of （because of 强调“外部原因”；due to 强调“根据”）information security （根据上下文理解，此处应该表达的是“信息安全”）of communication. (They worried their letters might be stolen or read by some strangers.这里可以继续描述人们的担心。)

However，（上文主要讨论过去的情况，而接下来将讨论现在的改变）now the things have changed around.（必须避免使用“，”连接两个句子。正确的处理方法是，要么采用断句的方法，要么添加连词。）People in a long distance contact their lovesd one in (effective and efficient) ways, which improve（主谓一致，which代替ways。）the interaction level between two persons. Quality （用词重复）of the interaction between people and people（主谓之间不能添加“，”。）has been improved（这里使用被动是因为沟通质量的提升是因为技术的发展。）because they are equipped with high-techdevices which enhances their communication. There are many（重复）mediummediaavailable such as internet, called cards etc.So the technology has provided better mobility , which help people to talk or keep in touch with each other at any time anywhere in the world.（不应该单独成段，应该和上一段结合在一起。）（本句应该被删除，因为没有提出任何新的观点，并且与上文的句子非常重复。）

还记得这句英文谚语"Never judge a book by its cover"吗 下面四幅图就描述了这样一个故事.假设你是第一幅图中左边的男孩,站在右边的是你的朋友Jack,你的妈妈一开始因为他的穿着打扮很不喜欢他,可是后来又发生了什么呢

请根据图画写一篇日记,并适当加以评论,发表自己的看法.

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Possible Version:

March 21th Sunday Sunny

My new friend Jack is a fashion follower who often wears strange clothes and long hair. But my mother drove him away from our flat at the first sight yesterday. She thought he was a bad person, although she didnt know him at all.

However, mom totally changed her mind this morning. When we were walking down the street near our home, we witnessed an accident. A boy was hit by a car when he was walking across the road with headphones. Many people saw it, but at first no one knew how to help. Then someone rushed forwards and covered the boy with his coat to keep warm. He looked after him well until the ambulance came. It was Jack! His calmness and seasoned first aid skills moved mom. She went and apolpgized to Jack for her former attitute, and told him that he was always welcome to our home.

That gives me a lesson. The appearance may reflect ones interest, but it isnt the symbol of ones quality. We should never judge a book with its cover.

可能版本：

三月二十一日星期日晴

我的新朋友杰克是一个时尚的追随者经常穿着奇怪的衣服，长长的头发。但是我妈妈昨天第一眼就把他从我们的公寓里赶走了。她认为他是个坏人，虽然她根本不认识他。

然而，今天早上妈妈完全改变了主意。当我们走在我们家附近的街道时，我们目睹了一场事故。一个男孩被一辆汽车撞在马路上时，戴着耳机。很多人看到它，但在第一，没有人知道如何帮助。然后有人冲了上去，用外套盖住了那个男孩，以保持温暖。他很好的照顾了他，直到救护车来了。这是杰克！他冷静和老练的急救技巧感动了妈妈。她为她以前对杰克的态度道歉，并告诉他，他总是欢迎我回家。

这给了我一个教训。外表可以反映一个人的兴趣，但这不是一个人素质的象征。我们决不应该用它的封面来判断一本书。

(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1.有一些人认为...

2.另一些人认为...

3.我的看法...

The topic of ①-(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-----理由二). Moreover, ④-------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥--(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦--(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨----(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

(2)给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①(观点一). For example, they think ②-(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-----(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-(反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥--(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

导语：好的开头能使文章生色,激发读者阅读的兴趣;好的结尾,能增强表达效果,使读者思索、回味文章的思想内容。下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.

在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。

同样句型包括：It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible)for sb. to do sth.

2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.

你工作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。

(1)The+比较级..., the+比较级...

(2)比较级+and+比较级(The world is getting smaller and smaller.)

3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界会变得更加美好。

类似的句型还有：If necessary…, they can…

4. The best way to remember new words is to practice them every day.

记忆新单词最好的方法是每天操练这些单词。

5. The atmosphere in my family is fantastic

我的家庭气氛温馨和睦。

6. The reason why people choose to live in the city is that the life is more convenient and colorful.

人们为什么选择生活在城市的原因是因为城市的生活更方便、更多彩。

7. I had a great first impression of American people.

我对美国人民有了很好的第一印象。

8. We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem.

我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。

9. With the rapid development of modern technology, the Internet has become a necessary part of our daily life and work.

随着现代科技的迅速发展，互联网已经成为生活和工作中必不可少的一部分。

10. You should read as many books as you possibly can.

大家应该尽可能的多读书。

11. China is becoming more and more prosperous because of the reform and “opening up” policy.

由于实施了改革开放政策，中国变得更加繁荣了。

12. We all need clean air to breathe; we all need clean water to drink; we all need green places to enjoy.

我们都需要呼吸清新的空气，我们都需要饮用洁净的水，我们都需要绿地来享受。

13. Let’s work together to make our world a better place.

让我们一起努力把世界变得更加美好。

14. We should make full use of our time to do useful and productive things.

我们应该充分利用好时间去做有用的、富有成效的事。

15. We should get into the good habit of using our time wisely.

我们应该养成一个好习惯，明智地利用时间。

16. What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month?

我的确想知道的是，他是否会在下个月出国?

17. Television is harmful to developing minds.

电视不利于开发心智。

18. Children usually have far more potential than their parents had realized

孩子们都有很大的潜能，而父母却没有意识到这一点。

19. In the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in our school.

在过去的10年里，我们学校发生了巨大的变化。

20. People who spend more time with their families are usually healthier and happier.

那些花更多时间和家人在一起的人通常会更健康更幸福。

21. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quite half way.

这份工作太辛苦，差点使我半途而废。

(1)直接使用：so… that…

The job was hard, boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.

这份工作太辛苦、太无聊，而且没完没了，这使我非常累，差点半途而废。

(2)能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有：

(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)

22. The Red Star Television Factory, which produces TV sets of quality, was set up in the 1980’s.

生产高品质电视的红星电视机厂，始建于1980年。

23. The E-reading room, where we can send e-mails to all parts of the world, is open to both teachers and students.

我们可以向世界每个地方发电子邮件的电子阅览室，对老师和同学都同样开放。

24. I feel I will be fit for the job needed in your company.

我感觉我会是你们公司所需要的人。

25. The number of workers and engineers has risen(更高级词汇：increased) to over 2000, and 80% of them are college graduates.

工人和工程师的数量已超过了2000人，而且他们有80%都是大学学历。

26. There is an increasing tendency that students own their mobile phones on campus.

在校园内，学生拥有手机的趋势在不断增长。

27. Now in the rural areas, there are many children out of school. I think one of reasons is that their families are too poor to afford their schooling.

现今，在农村地区还有很多孩子失学。我认为原因之一就是他们的家庭太贫困，而无法供应他们上学。

28. People should pay more attention to the education of children because they will play a very significant /(important) part/(role) in the future of our country.

人们应该增加对儿童教育的重视，因为他们会在祖国的未来扮演重要的角色。

29. In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky.

到2008年，我们会看到北京像花园一样，有着更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。

30. How nice to hear from you again.

能再次收到你的来信真是太好了。

31. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.

敬盼早日回复。

I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time.

我期待与你早日相见。

32. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know.

如果你有什么问题和请求只管跟我说。

33. No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important.

不管你将来做什么，英语都是最重要的。

34. Nothing is more important than to receive education.

没有什么比接受教育更重要的事了。

35. There is no doubt that playing video game is going to be their biggest problem for students to affect study.

毫无疑问，玩电子游戏正在成为影响学生学习的最大问题。

36. Obviously, it is high/(about) time that we took some effective measures to solve the problem.

显然，早该采取一些积极的措施来解决问题。

写作高手使用的高难度表达：

I suggest the department concerned taking some effective measures to improve the present situation.

我建议有关部门采取一些有效措施改善现状。

37. Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.

自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

38. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。

39. Smoking has a great influence on our health.

吸烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

40. As a proverb says, /( As is well known to us,) storms make trees take deeper roots.

有句名言说道：风暴使树木深深扎根。

41. It is a great honor for me to introduce to you one of my very best friend, Liu Xiang.

很荣幸给你介绍我的一位好朋友，刘翔。

42. Coming from a family of English teachers, she always had a particular interest in English.

出于英语教师世家的她，对英语有着特别的兴趣。

描写人物性格的高级得分词汇如下：

diligent 勤奋的 energetic精力充沛的 humorous幽默的 attractive有吸引力的

modest谦虚的 optimistic乐观的 talkative健谈的enthusiastic热情的

43. I have fully realized that English is essential to my future.

我充分认识到英语对我的未来是多么的重要。

44. I suppose electronic dictionaries are convenient, but Iead to laziness!

我觉得电子字典很方便，但会使人们变懒。

45. In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages.

总之，出国留学的优点要大于它的缺点。

46. Now, I think it is really successful experience, and I totally understand what labor means.

现在，我想这真是一次成功的经历，并且我完全理解了劳动的意义。

47. From this earthquake, I realized that the power of the mass is endless.

通过这次的地震，我认识到了群众的力量是无穷的。

高级名言谚语活学活用。

解释：“群众的力量是无穷的”这句名言是我们自己造的，极具威力，然后再安在毛主席的头上，更显力量。最后为了增加真实性加上时间和地点，使判卷老师误以为真，根本不敢怀疑。于是，心想：“这个句子太棒了，我都没听说过!”

造句：In 1951 Chairman Mao said in Nan Jing that the power of the mass is endless.

48. If you have spare time to visit my hometown, I’d be more than happy to be your guide.

如果你有空闲时间我的家乡做客，我会非常乐意做你的导游。

49. Nowadays, both teachers and parents worry a great deal about the student’s using the Internet.

如今，老师和家长都对学生上网现象极为担心。

50. Views on the issue in question vary from person to person.

对于该问题的看法因人而异。

51. We are blessed with new opportunities and faced with new challenges.

我们被赋予新的机会和面临着新的挑战。

52. Thank you for your consideration.

感谢你的体谅。

53. I really appreciate what you’ve done for my family and me.

我衷心感谢你为我和我家人所做的一切。

We should be very grateful if you help our children with their English study.

如果你帮助我们小孩学英语，我们将感激不尽。

54. We will never forget the happy days we spent together.

我们永远都不会忘记在一起度过的日子。

55. Many people are becoming aware of the importance of exercising.

很多人开始意识到锻炼的重要性了。

56. The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct.12th, starting at 3:30p.m.

报告将在10月12日3：30在报告厅举行。

57. Students should know how to take advantage of their time.

学生应该知道如何利用他们的时间。

58. I got sick and tired of doing the routine work day after day.

我厌倦了日复一日地做一些例行公事。

59. Conquering English is not different from conquering a great mountain; both of them require determination, courage, and perseverance.

征服英语不亚于征服一座高山，都需要决心，勇气和毅力。

60. I’m disappointed in the performance of our team at the sports meeting.

我对我们队在运动会上的表现感到失望。

61. I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far.

到目前为止，我对我们取得的成绩很是满意。

更多表示“决心”的高级句型：

I’m determined to…

I have made up my mind to complete the task.

62. The city is located on the banks of the Long River.

这个城市位于长江畔。

63. I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago.

两星期前收到了你的来信，我真是太高兴了。

64. I’m writing to request more information about the day tour to London.

我写信是为了了解更多去伦敦旅行的信息。

65. Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

最近，我们班展了开一场讨论，是关于中学生是否有必要带手机去上学。

66. I wonder if you could tell me more about the trip.

我不知道你是否方便多告诉我一些有关旅行的事。

67. It is certain that if there are fewer people driving, there will be less air pollution.

可以肯定，如果开车的人少一些，空气污染就一定会减少。

68. I personally feel that teacher is the most important profession in the world.

我个人认为教师是世界上最重要的职业。

69. We can’t imagine what the world is going to be without purified water.

我们无法想象没有纯净的水，这个世界会变成生么样子。

70. I was walking east along Park Road, when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.

当我沿着公园路往东走的时候，有一个老人在街的另一边从公园里走出来。

71. In the big city, there are more schools and hospitals are available for its people.

在大城市，有更多的学校和医院供人们使用。

72. Some people think that we should read extensively.

有一些人认为，我们应该有选择性地阅读。

73.In my opinion, you should come back after you finish you studies abroad.

在我看来，你结束留学后应该回国。

74. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after you parents as they are getting old.

另一个原因，我认为你回国可以更方便地照顾你日渐年迈的父母。

75. Classes in our school usually finish at four in the afternoon.

我们学校通常下午四点下课。

76. I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend tomorrow’s lecture on American history.

我很抱歉，明天我不能参加那场关于美国历史的演讲。

77. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.

花在教育锻炼上的时间是25分钟，只有12分钟的时间用来做家务。

78. Maybe you forgot you spent the money on something else yesterday afternoon.

你可能忘了昨天下午你花钱买了其他东西。

79. Good habits are the crosscut to success.

好习惯是成功的捷径。

80. I was deeply moved by the young boy, because I know Lei Feng is still living in our hearts.

那个年轻的小男孩深深地感动着我，因为我相信雷锋一直活在我们的心中。

81. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.

很多新的楼房建了起来，路也都拓宽了。

82. It is more than ten months since we last met.

从我们上次见面到现在已经有十个多月了。

83. It’s very nice of you to help me with my lessons every day.

每天帮助我复习功课，你真是太好了。

84. Nothing can live without air and water.

没有空气和水，任何东西都不能生存。

85. I prefer to live in the country rather than live in the city.

我宁愿住在农村，而不愿住在城市。

86. People must be stopped from throwing dirty things into the river.

应阻止人们往河里扔脏东西。

87. Peter sets aside some money every month so that he can buy a new car.

彼得每月留出一点钱以便购买一辆新汽车。

88. Linda didn’t go to bed until midnight so that she could finish reading the book.

为了看完这本书，琳达直到午夜才睡。

89. Early to bed and early to rise does good to your health.

早睡早起有益于健康。

90. More and more people are aware that it is important to obey the traffic rules.

越来越多的人意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。

91. Mrs. Brown is an Australian woman teacher with fair hair and blue eyes, who has been to many places of China.

布朗女士是一个澳大利亚的老师，她有一头金黄色的头发和一双蓝色的眼睛，她去过中国的各个地方。

92. On Sunday, May 18, we will visit Beijing, which has a history of 400 years.

5月8日，星期天，我们将会参观拥有400多年悠长历史的北京。

93. I think students should balance well between work and study.

我认为学生应该平衡好工作和学习两方面。

94. Friendship is one of the most precious emotions in our life.

在我们的生命中，友谊其中的一种非常珍贵的感情。

95. It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)

不言而喻，青春一去不复返。

96. Last but not least, it will definitely benefit the citizens.

最后而又很重要的一点，它必定给市民带来福利。

97. With the increasingly rapid economic growth, more problems are brought to our attention.

随着日益迅速的经济发展，更多的问题受到我们的关注。

98. The preservation of forests has aroused people’s wide concern

保护森林引发人们的广泛关注.

99. As far as I’m concerned, I am in favor of the opinion that…

就我而言,我赞同…的观点

100. Both governments and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for future generations.

不仅仅是为了我们，更是为了我们的后代，政府和普通市民应该联合起来，使这个世界变成更美好的家园。

Today is your day to relax and let us take care of you. Happy Mothers Day.

今天是您休息的日子，让我们来照顾您。母亲节快乐。

We will try to make this your best Mothers Day ever.

我们将努力使今天成为您过得最愉快的母亲节。

On this day we honor you, dear mother.

亲爱的妈妈，我们向您致敬。

Where would we be without you, mom?

妈妈，没有您我们将流落何方呢?

On this day we all sit back and think about how much our mothers do for us.

在这一天，我们将会抽空休息一下，想想妈妈们帮我们做了多少事。

Ive tried many times to tell you, but Ill say it again: I love you mother.

我已经告诉您许多次了，但是我将再说一次：我爱您，妈妈。

Though it is hard to tell you sometimes, I do love you dearly, mom.

虽然有时要告诉您并不太容易，但是我真的非常爱您，妈妈。

We will try to make this your best Mother’s Day ever.

我们将努力使今天成为您过得最愉快的母亲节.

我也许并不常挂在嘴上，但我真正爱您。

There are little things that I should have said and done to show my gratitude, but it is appreciated what you do.

尽管我为表示谢意所说的和所做的都那么少，但同样也是表达对您所做一切的感激之情。

I dont take the time to tell you this often, but I love you, mom.

虽然我经常没有时间告诉您，但我真的爱您，妈妈。

Sometimes I cry and make you sigh, but you know that I love you so.

有时候我哭泣而使您叹息，但您却知道，我是如此地爱您。

To mother on Mothers Day: Thank you for all of the wonderful things that you h ave done for me.

母亲节给妈妈：谢谢您为我做了那么多奇妙的事。

Today is your day to relax and let us take care of you. Happy Mother’s Day.

今天是您休息的日子,让我们来照顾您.母亲节快乐.

On this day we honor you, dear mother.

亲爱的妈妈,我们向您致敬.

更多英语写作材料共享：

A等(27—30)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容具体，层次清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面清洁。

B等(24—27)：切题，思想健康，中心明确，内容比较具体，层次较清楚，语句通顺，标点使用比较正确，错别字少，卷面整洁。

C等(18—24)：基本切题，思想健康，中心基本明确，内容欠具体，层次不够清楚，语句基本通顺，标点使用大体正确，错别字多。

D等(18分以下)：不合题意，中心不明确，内容很不具体，层次不清，语句不通，标点错误和错别字多。

其中：错别字每个扣0.5分，扣足5分为止;标点错误每个扣0.5分，扣足3分为止;卷面太乱，字迹潦草酌扣1—2分。

一、引出开头

1. It is well-known to us that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

我们都知道知识在我们生活中扮演重要的角色。

2. Nowadays,the problem of the air pollution has been brought into focus.

如今，空气污染问题引起了关注。(***成为人们瞩目的焦点)

3. Nowadays,the Internet has been playing an important role in our everyday life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has also brought some problems.

如今,互联网已在我们生活中扮演越来越重要的角色，它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些问题。

4. With the development of our society，more and more people believe that knowledge is very important.

随着社会的发展，越来越多的人认为知识很重要。

5. A lot of people think that knowledge is very necessary.

很多人认为知识很必要。

6. Peoples opinions about the Internet are different. Some think that it can bring a lot of benefits. However, others think that it dose harm to our health.

人们对互联网的观点各有不同，有些人认为互联网给我们带来了很多益处，然而，其他人却认为他对我们有害。

7. Everything has two sides and the Internet is not an exception ,it has both advantage and disadvantage.

每个硬币都有两面，互联网也不例外，它既有优点有与缺点。

8. Human beings are facing a big problem ,the air pollution ,which is becoming more and more serious.

人类正面临一个严重的问题，大气污染，这个问题变得越来越严重。

9. On the contrary，there are some people think it not useful.

相反，有一些人认为它没有用。

二、重要句子

1. It is time that we should take measures to solve this problem.(虚拟语气)

该是我们采取措施解决问题的时候了。

2. Only in this way can we solve this problem.(倒装)

只有这种办法才能解决这个问题。

3. If we dont take measures, the problem wont be solved.

如果我们不采取措施，问题将不能被解决。

4. There are many reasons for this problems.Firstly,****.Secondly,****.Last but not least,****.

这一现象存在有很多原因。第一，***。第二，***。最后但也是最重要的是，***。

5. On the one hand,……On the other hand,

……一方面……另一方面……:

6. The best way to solve the problem is that……

解决这些麻烦的最好办法是……

7. It has the following advantages.它有如下优点。

8. It has more disadvantages than advantages.

他有很多不足之处。(他的缺点多于优点)

9. We should try our best to overcome the difficulties.

我们应该尽最大努力去克服困难。

10. We should solve the problems that we are faced with.

我们应该解决我们面临的困难。

11. It has increased/decreased from…to…

他已经从…增加/减少到…

12. No one can deny the fact that the Internet is very useful.

没人能否认这个事实:互联网很有用。

13. I prefer to read ,rather than watch TV.

与看你电视相比我更喜欢阅读。

14. As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.

作为一个学生，我非常赞成这个观点。

15. For example,some parents think that many students become addicted to the Internet.

例如，一些家长认为学生沉迷于网络。

三、万能结尾

1. All in all, it can be said that the Internet is very important.

总之，他的意思是互联网很重要。

2. Taking all these factors into consideration, we can come to the conclusion that……

把所有的这些因素加以考虑，我们自然可以得出结论……

3. As a result,it is not difficult to come to the conclusion that...

因此，我们不难得出结论……

4. As far as I am concerned that we cant live without the Internet .

就我而言，我们的生活不能没有互联网。

5. There is no doubt that the Internet is very useful for people.

毫无疑问互联网对人们非常有用。

6. However，we also try to use it in a right way , not waste a lot of time in it .

然而，我们也应该尝试正确的方式运用它，切记不要浪费过多时间在它上面。

7. The reason why the Internet is very necessary is that it is useful .

互联网很必要的原因是它很实用。

英语作文模板

模板1. 信的格式

Dear Li,

Glad to receive your letter .*******

******

Looking forward to receiving your letter.

Yours

Jim

模板2. 观点对比

Nowadays,the Internet has been playing an important role in our everyday life. There are two sides of opinion about it.Some students say … is their favorite. They think that… (理由一).What’s more, …(理由二).Moreover, … (理由三)

However, others think that… is a better choice. There are three reasons. (然而，其余的人认为做某事是一种较好的选择，有三个方面的理由) Firstly, … (第一). Secondly, ...(第二)Last but not least, …(最后也是最重要的是)

As far as I am concerned that cant live without the Internet .The reason why ...is that…(……的原因是……)

模板3. 好处与坏处的对比

Nowadays,the Internet has been playing an important role in our everyday life. There are many advantages in it. Firstly, … (第一). Secondly, ...(第二)Last but not least, …(最后也是最重要的是)

However, everything has two sides and the Internet is not an exception ,it has both advantage and disadvantage.There’re some disadvantages. …. (之一). What’s more, ….(之二). Moreover, …. (之三)

As far as I am concerned that it has more disadvantages than advantages.(依我看，它有更多好处多于坏处)… However，we also try to use it in a right way , not waste a lot of time in it .

模板4. 问题与建议

Nowadays,human beings are facing a big problem ,the air pollution ,which is becoming more and more serious.(如今，人类面临一个问题，空气污染，这个问题变得越来越严峻).There are many reasons for this problems. For example,....

It is time that we should take measures to solve this problem.Firstly, … (第一). Secondly, ...(第二)Last but not least, …(最后也是最重要的是)

As far as I am concerned that solve these problems are very necessary.(就我而言，解决这些问题非常必要)。。。Only in this way can we solve this problem.

需记忆的词组及单词

well-known 众所周知 important 重要的 pollution 污染

focus 面对 benefit 益处 development 发展

society 社会 knowledge 知识 necessary 必要的

opinion 观点 harm 危害 exception 例外

advantage 优点 disadvantage 缺点 serious严峻的

measures 措施 solve 解决 overcome 克服

increase 增加 decrease减少 deny 否认

prefer 喜欢 example 例子 addicted 沉迷

useful 有用的

play an important role in our life在生活中扮演重要角色

with the development of our society 随着社会的发展

bring a lot of benefits 带来很多益处

everything has two sides 任何事物都具有两面性

Become more and more serious 变得越来越严峻

on the contrary 相反 take measures 采取措施

solve this problem 解决这个问题

the best way to 最好的方法

overcome the difficulties 克服困难

be faced with 面对

No one can deny the fact that 没有人能够否认这个事实。。。

in favour of 赞同 支持 For example 例如

become addicted to the Internet 沉迷于网络 All in all 总之

come to the conclusion 得出结论

As far as I am concerned that 就我而言

There is no doubt that 毫无疑问

in a right way 正确的方法

waste a lot of time 浪费时间

高考英语满分作文:社会呼唤英雄 Society Calls for Heroes

请你参加我们有关“英雄”问题的讨论，写一篇100词左右的议论文。短文需包括以下内容，题目自拟。

1．英雄具有什么样的品质?

2．为什么现在英雄(见义勇为的人)越来越少?

3．如果让你选择，你愿意做英雄还是普通人?

注意：

词数100左右。

Society Calls for Heroes

In my opinion, it is not so easy to be a hero. First,a hero must be brave. When he sees someone do a bad deed, he must be brave enough to catch him or to stop him. Secondly, he must be strong enough, otherwise he himself will be beaten to death. There are fewer heroes now because of several reasons. I think the most important reason is that people dont want to mind other peoples business. Because they think it will do them no good. But I think society calls for heroes. Fighting against crimes is not just the job of the police. Its the duty of every citizen.

社会呼唤英雄

在我看来，它不是那么容易就可以做一个英雄。第一，一个英雄要勇敢。当他看到有人做坏事，他必须勇敢地抓住他或制止他。其次，他必须足够强大，否则他会被殴打致死。由于几个原因少英雄现在。我认为最重要的原因是人们不想考虑其他人的业务。因为他们认为它会做不好。但我认为，社会呼唤英雄。打击犯罪不仅仅是警察的职责。这是每个公民的义务。

高考英语满分的作文Tiger(老虎)

A tiger is a kind of catamount animal. It looks like a cat, but much bigger than a cat. A tiger is very ferocious and it eats mainly meat. It has yellow and black streaks all over its body and it looks very beautiful. Its tail is long and strong and it can hit its quarry dying.

Tigers live in the thick forests and small animals in the forests are tigers food.

During the past years, many forests have been cut down and the living conditions of the tigers are becoming worse and worse. There are fewer tigers left in the world now. Tigers are the animals of the world, and they should have their own living spaces. We must do our best to protect the tigers and their living environment.

老虎

老虎是猫科动物的一种，它看起来像猫却比猫大很多。老虎非常凶猛，是肉食性动物。它全身是黑黄相间的斑纹，看起来非常漂亮。它的尾巴又长又有力，能够打死它的猎物。

老虎生活在密林里，以森林中妁小动物为食。

在过去妁几年中，许多森林被砍伐，这使者虎的生存环境越来越糟。现在世界上老虎的数量非常少。老虎是世界性妁动物，它们应该有自己的生存空间。我们必须尽全力保护老虎和它们的生存环境。

高考英语满分作文:Mobile Phone 手机

Being a product of high-technology,mobile phones are being more and more widely used. Its small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offering fast and convenient service for communication.Its of multi-function. The users use it for calling, sending short messages and internet-surfing.

In recent years, mobile phones have become popular among middle school students. Quite a few use them at school to keep in touch with their families and friends instead of writing letters, which, of course brings convenience to them. But I dont think its good to do so.

In spite of the advantage mentioned above, student users often waste a lot of time chatting over the phone in their spare time, some even use them to cheat in exams. In addition, mobile phone bill is also a heavy burden on students families.

手机是高科技的产物,被越来越广泛的应用。它很小,重量轻,便于携带,提供快捷、方便的服务进行通信。这是多功能的。用户用它来打电话,发短信和上网。

近年来,手机已经成为受中学生的欢迎。不少使用它们的学生可以在学校保持与他们的家人和朋友的联系,而不是写信,当然,这给他们带来了方便。但我不认为这样做很好。

尽管上述优势,但学生用户经常浪费很多时间，在业余时间在电话里聊天,有些人甚至使用它们在考试作弊。此外,移动电话费也是一个学生的家庭沉重的负担。

满分作文 做一个好听众 Being a Good Listener

【试题回放】

实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表，更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为 “Being a Good Listener” 的英文演讲稿。

注意：

1、对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2、词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone.

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.

Thank you for your listening!

大家下午好。

今天我演讲的题目是“做一个好听众”。

善于倾听，能表现出尊重，增进理解，增进人际关系。

许多人认为父母应该多听他们的孩子，这样他们就会更好地理解他们，并发现很容易缩小代沟；教师应该多听他们的学生，然后他们可以满足他们的需要更好，并把自己在一个良好的关系，学生，学生应该多听他们的同学，从而他们将帮助和相互学习，和友谊可能会形成。

我想强调的是，我们每个人都应该听从别人的要求。表现出你的尊重，从不停止别人的谈话，表明你对一个支持性的沉默或是一个微笑的微笑很感兴趣；对不同意见的人持开放态度，即使你不喜欢他们。用一个词，好的听力可以使我们彼此接近。

谢谢你的聆听！

【名师点评】

这是一篇感情真挚、热情洋溢的演讲稿，文中大量运用排比句型，不但准确流畅地表达出题目中所提供的信息，而且体现出作者熟练运用英语的能力以及不俗的文采。第三段中所使用的相同结构的复合句式，将倾听的对象及其作用阐述得淋漓尽致;而第四段中用一系列的祈使句议论应如何倾听，则更进一步地增强了这篇演说稿的说服力。

高考满分英语作文 母亲的眼睛（My Mothers Eyes）

作文一：

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. With her eyes,she observed my mood, gave me courage and made me strong. Therefore, I could face difficulties.

When I was a baby learning to walk, my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled with praise. Later as I grew up, I met with more difficulties. But whenever I was frustrated, my mothers eyes always

gave me hope and encouragement. Once I failed in exams, my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons. Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better. At last I overcame the difficulty. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。那双眼睛能洞察我的心情，给我鼓励，促我坚强，因此我能面对一切困难。

孩提学步时，妈妈总是帮助我，鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠地扑进她怀抱时，她的双眼充满了赞扬之情。成长过程中，我遇到了很多困难，但灰心失望时，妈妈的双眼总给我以希望和鼓励。一次我考试不及格，妈妈没有责备我，而是鼓励我找出原因，提高我的成绩。最后我终于度过了难关。现在，我长大了，不用再让她操心了。但每当遇到挫折时，妈妈的眼睛总是伴随着我，给我鼓励。

作文二：

My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak. Whenever I encounter difficulties, her eyes will encourage me and help me cheer up.

When I began learning to walk, mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to stand up while I fell down. As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes Smiled with praise. Aftei I entered the school, mothers eyes still encouraged me. Once I failed my Chinese exam, my mother helped me find out the reasons instead of blaming me. Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mothers eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.

我的母亲有一双敏锐的、会说话的眼睛。每当我遇到困难时，这双眼睛总是鼓励我，帮我振作起来。

在我开始学走路时，母亲总是帮助我，鼓励我摔倒了就爬起来。最后我晃晃悠悠扑进她怀抱时，她的双眼充满赞扬之情。我长大上学后，母亲的眼睛仍旧鼓励我。一次，我语文考试不及格，母亲没有责备我，而是帮助我找出原因。现在，我长大了，不再让她操心了。但每当我遇到挫折时，母亲的眼睛总是伴随着我，给我鼓励。

高考英语作文满分范文背诵18 探索学习 On an exploring study

On an exploring study

探索学习

Number 46 Jiangan avenue ,Beijing, China. February 28th 2003.

2003年2月28日，中国北京市江安大道46号

Dear Mr and Mrs Brown,

亲爱的布朗夫妇，

I was so move to hear that youd like to send me to another school. Thank you very much for your kindness.However,I cant go to school now. I have a good job and if I go to school, I will have to give up the job, besides. I have a good teacher who is a famous painter.He teaches me painting in my spare time. I am so glad that you like my painting. Right now, I am working on the new work, I think, I can send you a copy next month. Thank you again for your kindness.

听说你们想让我去其他学校上学，这让我很感动。你们对我真好。但是，我现在还不能上学。我现在有稳定的工作，如果我去上学，我就要辞职，此外，我认识一名老师，他是一位著名的画家。闲暇时间里，他会教我画画。你喜欢我的作品，这让我感到非常高兴。我现在正在创作一幅新的作品，我想下个月送你一个复印版。再一次感谢你。

Yours

敬礼。

Lili.

莉莉。

导语：广场舞是舞蹈艺术中最庞大的系统，因多在广场聚集而得名，融自娱性与表演性为一体，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

假定你是李华。近日有网友在推特贴出了中国大妈带领美国大妈在新泽西大跳广场舞的照片，你的美国朋友David看过后，很想了解中国流行的广场舞(square dance)的相关情况。请你用英语给他写封回信，要点包括：

1)广场舞跳的时间、地点、参与人员等;

2)广场舞流行的原因;

3)广场舞的缺点。

注意：

1)词数100左右;

2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3)开头语和结束语已为你写好。

范文：

Dear David,

I am writing to tell you something about the square dance in China. In the morning or after dinner, people, especially elderly women, will gather in squares to dance to popular music. More and more young people are also joining in now.

There are many reasons behind its popularity. First of all,China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades, and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves. Besides,doing the square dance is a good way for people to keep fit.

However, just as each coin has two sides,this kind of dance has also leads to some problems. For example, dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places, which annoy many other people.Maybe square dancers need to make some changes.

Yours,

LiHua

【参考译文】

亲爱的戴维，

我写信是要告诉你关于在中国广场舞的东西。在早上或晚饭后，人们，特别是老年妇女，将聚集在广场跳舞流行音乐。现在越来越多的年轻人也加入进来。

它的流行背后有许多原因。首先，中国在过去几十年的社会和经济发展取得了巨大进步，人们有更多的时间和精力去享受自己。此外，做广场舞是人们保持健康的好方法。

然而，正如每个硬币都有两面一样，这种舞蹈也导致了一些问题。例如，舞者大声地演奏音乐，占据了许多公共场所，这让许多人感到不安。

你的好朋友，

李华

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3.介绍光盘行动的英语作文

4.介绍红楼梦的英语作文

5.介绍英国文化的英语作文2篇

6.介绍丝绸之路的英语作文

7.介绍英国的高考英语作文

8.介绍英国文化的英语作文

Dragon Boat Festival is the traditional day in China, it is on the 5th day

of the 5th lunar month. The common activity for different places are dragon boat

competition and eating zongzi. In my hometown, there will be the dragon boat

competition every year. A lot of teams join this activity and there are full of

audiences stand on the river side, wathing and yelling for the teams. It is one

fo the biggest matches in my hometown. What’ more, making zongzi is also the

tradition. My mother makes the zongzi at this time every year, she told me that

she learned it from my grandma and she would teach me in the future.

1.however

We will never countenance violence, however serious the threat against us.不管威胁多么严峻，我们永远不会容忍暴力。

2.rather than

Because love consists of accepting other person as he or she is rather than regulating her or

him.爱一个人就是接受他原来的样子而不是重塑他(以成为你期望的样子)。

3.instead of

She frittered away her time in going to the cinema instead of studying.她不把时间花在学习上，而是浪费在看电影上了。

4.but

On the one hand I admire his gifts, but on the other I distrust his judgment.一方面我羡慕他的才华，而另一方面我却怀疑他的判断力。

5.yet

Although I have not read through the Book of Persons, yet I will try to read it in every sense.尽管我还没有读完这本“人之书”，但我会一直努力从各个方面去阅读。

6.on the other hand

But on the other hand there is a wounded child inside you who wants recognition and appreciation from the outside world.但另一方面在你心中又有一个受伤的小孩想要来自外在世界的认同和欣赏。

On the other hand, users gather in this community and have fun.而另一方面，用户们也快乐的扎堆在这个社区里。

7.unfortunately

Unfortunately we do not have that luxury: we have only one planet.但不幸的是，我们没有这种奢侈：我们只有一个地球。(环保加分句)

8.whereas

Arid uplands are irrigated and planted with leafy gardens, whereas, on fertile plains, the parks are paved with stone.

在干旱的高地上引水灌溉，种植阔叶园林;然而在肥沃的平原上，公园里铺着石头。

[高考英语作文高频语法词汇

简练

简练就是要简短而精练，简，要简得明白，练要体现干练。让人一看就觉得不敢多字也不得少字，且言简意赅。要注意的是，简练并不是用字数来衡量的，而是从字与词的结合中所表达的意义给人的感觉来判断的。简练的文题是用最少的字给人最明确的意义和感情倾向。

新颖

新颖是现代社会追求的一种潮流，无论什么时候，我们都不能忘了想出办法让自己的东西新颖，那就是用一种与众不同的视角，道出自己的个性思考。但是，新颖决不是标新立异，必须合情理。应该说，我们所说的新颖只是别人想漏了的，或者说只是一时还没有想到的，而决不是怎么想也想不通的，想不到的东西。

切主题

话题作文虽然没有一个明确的主题思想，但大都有一个主题意向，写作者在写作的过程中也会把这个主题意向尽量的明确化。这时，如果你的作文题能够对作文的主题有一定的暗示或提示作用，那当然是最好不过的了。这样，阅卷教师可以很快地抓住你的作文的主题思想，给阅卷者一个先入为主的阅卷思考，有利于考分的提高。就算你的作文对主题的表现不是很突出，但有文题的补充也是相得益彰的。

有文采

阅卷教师大都是一些很有文采的人，他们对文采是非常敏感而且也很看重的，如果你的文题能拟出一定的文采，无疑会一下子唤出阅卷教师心中那份珍藏的美感，让人产生作者也一定是一位有一定文采的人的猜想，从而获得高分。当然，作文的内容也应该有一些文采。

有内涵

文题还应该有一定的内涵，应该是耐寻味。当然，考场作文在阅卷的过程中由于阅卷教师时间的关系，这一点很可能被忽略，但，真正有内涵的让那些阅卷高手们落眼就见的东西，还是可以起到很重要的作用的。

项目类别内容语言结构书写一类（46——50分）

思想感情健康，立意深刻，内容充实，中心突出文从字顺，语言准确生动，表达好结构严谨，层次清楚字体工整，书写规范，卷面整洁二类（40——45分）

思想感情健康，内容具体，中心明确文从字顺，表达较好结构完整，层次比较清楚字体工整，书写规范，卷面较整洁 三类（35——39分）

思想感情健康，内容尚具体，中心基本明确语言通顺，病句少结构基本完整字迹清楚，有少量错别字，少量涂改四类（30——34分）

思想感情基本健康，内容不够具体，中心不够明确语言基本通顺，病句不太多结构不够完整字迹潦草，错别字较多，卷面不整洁五类（29分以下）

思想感情不健康，内容不具体，中心不明确语言不通顺，病句多结构不完整字迹不易辨认，错别字多，卷面很不整洁。

[河南省中考作文评分标准

Instant noodles are great to eat no matter what the situation may be. They are easy, extremely quick to make and require little knowledge to make them taste delicious.

First, the noodles must be placed in a bowl with about five hundred milliliters of boiling water. There is a small package with spices that should be added into the noodles. Cover the container and wait for about three minutes until the noodles are soft. Upon lifting the cover you will find a tasty and filling dish that took you less than five minutes to make.

So if youre in a hurry or just craving for instant noodles, tear open a package and see for yourself just how easy it is.

在任何情况下方便面都是食用佳品。食用方便、迅速，而且不需要什么知识。

首先，用大约500毫升的沸水将方便面泡在碗里。把一小包调料放在面条里，盖上容器不要管它，大约三分钟后面条变软。当打开盖后你就会吃到荚味、加好调料的面了。整个过程不到五分钟。

如果你忙碌或只是想吃到方便面，打开一包自己试试，真是太容易了。

If you are in a hurry or hungry, what would you like to eat? I guess the answer should be instant noodles. Yes, instant noodles are easy to make and taste good. It can save you lots of time because it doesnt need cooking.

Now let me tell you how to have it.

First, put the noodles in a bowl, along with the soup stock.

Then, pour in 500ml boiling water.

Next, cover the bowl and stands for three minutes.

Now, lift the cover and you can have the noodles at once.

It takes less than five minutes.

It is really easy, isnt it?Please try it by yourself!

如果你很忙或很饿，你想吃什么?我猜一定是方便面。对，方便面很容易做且味道不错。它不需烧煮，因此很省时间。

现在让我来告诉你如何食用方便面。

首先，将面和汤料放入碗中。

然后，加入500m1沸水。

接着加盖3分钟。

现在打开盖，你马上就可吃到面了。

整个过程不到五分钟。

真的很容易，是吗?你亲自试试吧!

My Favorite Food 我最喜欢的食物

There are many different kinds of food. My favorite food is fried rice.In China, most of the people in the south eat rice. And I like fried rice best.

It’s really delicious. When I go home from school, I am always hungry. At that time I always make fried rice by myself. I often cook it carefully and it is so delicious. It makes me happy. After eating it, I am not hungry any more. Fried rice is my favorite.

世界上有许多不同种类的食物。我最喜欢的食物是米饭。在中国，大多数人在南方吃米饭。我最喜欢炒饭。

它真的很美味。当我从学校回家，我总是饿。那时我总是自己做炒饭。我经常认真地做饭，它是如此美味。它使我快乐。吃了它之后，我不再饿了。炒饭是我的最爱。

Cupcake 纸杯蛋糕

Last night, when I saw the TV series, I find a new food，that is the cupcake. The show shows me that the cupcake is just like the cake, but it is a little different. It is smaller and has many favors. So I go to the cake shop, but I can’t find the cupcake, then I learn that it is special. Only few shops sell it. I want to taste it.

昨晚，当我在看电视剧的时候，我发现了一种新的食物，那就是纸杯蛋糕。节目展示了纸杯蛋糕就像蛋糕一样，但是有点不同。它更小，有很多风味。所以我去蛋糕店，但是找不到纸杯蛋糕，我才知道纸杯蛋糕是比较特别的。只有一些小的商店才有。我想要尝尝。

巨大的水果味蛋糕 Huge fruit flavored cake

youll need the following: a cup of water, a cup of sugar, four large eggs, two cups of dried fruit, a teaspoon of baking soda, a teaspoon of salt, a cup of brown sugar, lemon juice, nuts, and a bottle of whisky.

你需要以下几点：一杯水，一杯糖，四个大鸡蛋，2杯干果，一茶匙小苏打，一茶匙盐，一杯红糖，一杯柠檬汁，一瓶威士忌，一瓶威士忌。

sample the whisky to check for quality.

样品的威士忌要检查质量。

take a large bowl. check the whisky again. to be sure it is the highest quality, pour one level cup and drink. repeat. turn on the electric mixer, beat one cup of butter in a large fluffy bowl. add one teaspoon of sugar and beat again.

拿一大碗。再次检查威士忌。要确保它是最高品质，倒一杯酒。重复。打开电动搅拌器，在一个大碗里打一杯黄油。再加一茶匙的糖，再打一次。

make sure the whisky is still okay. cry another tup. turn off the mixer. break two leggs and add to the bowl and chuck in the cup of dried fruit. mix on the turner. if the fried druit gets stuck in the beaterers pry it loose with a drewscriver.

确保威士忌仍然是好的。另一个有哭。关上搅拌机。打破二雷格斯和添加的碗和盘干果杯。特纳的混合。如果炸druit卡住的beaterers它撬松一drewscriver。

sample the whisky to check for tonsisticity. next, sift two cups of salt. or something. who cares? check the whisky. now sift the lemon juice and strain your nuts. add one table. spoon. of sugar or something. whatever you can find.

品尝威士忌检查tonsisticity。下一步，筛选双杯盐。或某事。谁在乎呢？检查威士忌。现在过滤柠檬汁和你的坚果。加一张表。匙。糖或某物。无论你能找到什么。

grease the oven. turn the cake tin to 350 degrees. dont forget to beat off the turner. throw the bowl out of the window, check the whisky again and go to bed

在烤箱中润滑。把蛋糕变成350度。别忘了击败特纳。把碗扔到窗外，再检查一次威士忌，然后去睡觉

鸡肉三明治 Chicken sandwich

1．First ,put the mayonnaise on a slice of bread .The cut u an onion and a tomato .Add these to the sandwich .Next ,put some lettuce and the chicken slices an the sandwich .Put the relish on the chicken .Finally ,put another slice of bread on the top.

1。首先，沙拉酱放在一片面包上。砍你一个洋葱和一个西红柿。把这些加在三明治上。接下来，把一些生菜和鸡肉片的三明治。鸡上放些佐料。最后，把另一片面包放在上面。

食品安全问题之我见 My View on Food Security

Over the past couple ofyears, several cases of the food scandal have been disclosed on various media.The problem of food security has become a hot button across society. Theprevalence of food insecurity has greatly impacted public health, which thegovernment could not afford to ignore, according to the online edition of thePeople Daily. -

在过去的几年中，几起食品丑闻案件已经在各种媒体上披露。全社会的食品安全问题已经成为一个热题。食品不安全的盛行已经大大影响了群众的健康，根据人民日报网络版，政府不应该忽视这一问题。

There are a couple of drivingforces, I would argue, behind this undesirable tide. First, in the course ofthe rapid economic evolution, we ignore moral education, giving rise to therising rate of the problem. More importantly, the lack of adequate regulationand punishment on those illegal producers enforces the trend. -

我认为这一不良行为的背后有很多驱动力。首先，在快速的经济进化过程中，我们忽视了道德教育，从而导致了这一问题不断上升。更重要的是，缺乏足够的对那些非法生产者的监管和处罚加强了这一局面。

As Confucius instructed, itis better late than never. Prompt and strict measures should be taken to turnback this evil trend. The government should launch a massive moral campaign toeducate all citizens and draw up tougher laws to crack down on those irresponsiblecorporations and prohibit them from entering the food industry again. I amfirmly convinced that through our combined efforts we are bound to enjoy morerisk-free foods in the days ahead.-

正如孔子教导的，迟到总比不到好。我们应该采取及时严厉的措施来扭转这一不好的局面。政府应该发起大量的道德运动以教育所有的市民，并制定更严厉的法律打击那些不负责任的企业，并禁止他们再次进入食品行业。我坚信，通过我们的共同努力，我们一定会在未来的日子中享受更多的无风险食品。

Each of us should stay healthy, which is the foundation of our activities.Here are some ways to stay healthy.

First, we should spend one to two hours a day in regular exercise; try to walk instead of ride.Second, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and so on.They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.When we are in trouble, try to relax our mood, listen to the soft music.It also enables us to maintain a good health.Finally there is a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body.We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep.If we can do follow these advice, I believe we can have a healthy body, a better life.

我们每个人都应该保持健康,这是我们活动的基础。这里有一些方法来保持健康。

首先,我们应该每天花一到两个小时定期锻炼,试着走而不是骑。第二,我们应该吃一些健康的食物比如蔬菜、水果等等。他们可以帮助我们保持健康的身体。当我们陷入困境,试着放松我们的心情,听轻柔的音乐。它还能使我们保持健康。最后有一个良好的睡眠可以保证我们一个健康的身体。我们应该每天睡7到8小时保持足够的睡眠。如果我们能做到遵循这些建议,我相信我们可以有一个健康的身体,更好的生活。

导语：忙绿的高考已经结束了，全国各地高考英语满分作文也相继出来了，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)

注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

范文：Dear Ms Jenkins,

I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考译文】

我是李华，我写信告诉你我的暑假计划，我也希望你帮我一个忙。

为了获得一些实际经验，我打算在一家外资公司做兼职工作。我已经完成了我的工作申请和个人简历。但这是我写的申请和个人简历的第一时间，我甚至不知道有什么要注意。所以，我写信给你，希望你能给我一些帮助。如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。

期待你的回复。我真的很感激。

导语：高考英语书面表达想拿高分并不容易，首先你要避免一些在学生中比较常见的几种错误才行。下面小编为大家整理了高考英语写作常见的错误，希望大家在考试中能够避免。

有的同学对于否定的概念模糊，不知如何否定，有时会写出不合规则或有异义的句子。

1. 我认为没有必要买大的。

误：I think its not necessary to buy the bigger one.

正：I don’t think it is necessary to buy the bigger one.

析：有些动词如think, believe, expect, suppose, imagine, guess, fancy等的主语是第一人称单数且一般现在时，表示否定的观点应用I don’t think…，而I think… not则属于汉语式表达习惯。

2. 我们直到天全黑了才到家。

误：We arrived home until it became completely dark.

正：We didn’t arrive home until it became completely dark.

析：此汉语句子里面尽管没有否定词，但until用于肯定句时意为“直到…为止”;用于否定句时，其意为“在…以前”。因此，表示“直到…才”用not…until。

3. 如果没有受到邀请的话，我是不会去参加舞会的。

误：I’ll not go to the party unless I’m not invited.

正：I’ll not go to the party unless I’m invited.

正：I’ll not go to the party if I’m not invited.

析：unless“除非”、“如果不”，常可用if…not来替换。误句中的条件状语从句双重否定表示肯定，结果与原句意思相反。

4. 那孩子不够大不能去上学。

误：The child is not old enough not to go to school.

正：The child is not old enough to go to school.

正：The child is too young to go to school.

析：这是学生最容易写错的句子。enough to“足以、足够”。原句中“不够大不能去上学”意思是“不够上学的年龄”，故应译为not old enough to go to school。

5. 他们两个都不说英语。

误：Both of them don’t speak English.

正：Neither of them speaks English.

析：中国学生特别对于all…not 和both…not等这种部分否定结构，很容易理解成全部否定。两者全部否定用neither, 三者以上用none。

6. 开车时再小心也不过分。

误：You can be too careful in driving a car.

正：You can not be too careful in driving a car.

析：cannot…too“无论作…也不过分”。

想要写好一篇英语作文有哪些方法步骤呢?下面来看看语文迷网为大家带来的写作指导吧。

(一)仔细审题，确定要点。在开始写作这前一定要认真阅读题目中的所有信息(中文提示、图示、注意事项等)把需要表达的全部信息要点列成提纲，列要点时，如果提示是图表，要认真审图，从图中找出要表达的信息要点，如事件发生的背景，人物的衣着、表情、动作、位置、年龄、外貌、图中的英汉文字等，如果有参考词汇，一定要用上。

(二)根据要点，先词组句。近年来高考书面表达的要求不断提高，高分文章要有较多的词汇，较高级的词汇用法。比如表达丰富可以用rich,但如果你用abundant这个词就属于较高级的词汇。再比如“他强调小心驾驶的重要”这个句子 He emphasized the importance of careful driving.其中“强调”这个词如果你用 attach much importance to 效果更佳。

(三)确定时态及人称，内容连贯，结构紧凑。高考书面表达评分标准明确规定，如人称错误要扣分，不同的文体一般都有基本时态。日记通常记叙发生过的事情，多用一般过去时。议论文多用一般现在时，通知等文体通常用一般将来时。每个句子写好之后，句与句之间要选择恰当的连接词。比如：(1)表示承接、递进用语，besides(并且)、whats more(并且)，moreover(而且)，firstly,secondly,finally(最后)，from now on (从此)，afterwards I after that(后来)，to make things worse/ whats worse(使事情更为糟糕的是)，the worst thing of all(最糟糕的是)。(2)表示转折关系用语。but bowever,otherwise,though,despite,in spite of...(尽管)on the other hand(另一方面)，as(尽管)，all the same(尽管如此)。(3)表示因果关系用语。because/because of......for(因为)，owing to (由于)，thanks to (由于)，due to (由于)，so that (结果)。(4)归纳总结用语。to summarize(总而言之)，in short/in a word(简而言之)，on the whole(从总体看)，generally speaking(一般说来)，in my view(我的观点)，in conclusion(总之)。

(四)句式丰富，避免单词。英语书面表达评分标准第五档(21-25分)要求，“应使用较复杂结构，这要求学生不仅会运用基本句型，也要有意识地使用复杂句型，这是文章的亮点。如何使用复杂结构，我认为适当运用非谓语结构(分词短语、动名词或不定式短语)适当运用各种从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句)是有效什么途径。比如：when he arrived in Beijing,he gave me an e-mail.(时间状语从句。一般)→On arriving in Beijing,he gave me an e-mail.Having arrived in Beijing.he gave me an e-mail.(使用了动名词，分别作状语。高级) Hardly had he arrived in Beijing when he gave me an e-mail.(改变时态，句子结构。高级)I wont believe what he says.(一般)→No matter what he says,I wont believe.(让步状从句，高级)。

(五)认真答写，卷面整洁。高考书面表达评分标准中对书写有较高要求。尤其今年英语作文要进行网上阅卷，如果书写较差，会影响到扫描质量，因此，考生在答卷时，一定要认真、清楚规范地书写，以保卷面整洁。