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我的英语老师200-作文(20篇)

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我的英语老师

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丁夕妍

我有许多老师,严肃的体育老师,温柔的语文老师,多才多艺的音乐老师……这次我要聊一聊美丽大方的英语老师。

英语老师有一头乌黑发亮的长发,平时都会扎起马尾辫,看起来既精神又充满活力。她那浓密的眉毛下有一双水灵灵的大眼睛,扑闪扑闪的,好像会说话。她微笑时嘴角边就会露出两个深深的小酒窝,可爱极了!茅老师身材苗条,配上一条雪白的长裙和火红的高跟鞋,简直是仙女下凡。

英语老师上课时严肃认真,一下课就成了我们的好朋友。每当同学问她问题时,她总是认真仔细的解答。一遍又一遍,不厌其烦地讲到你懂为止。

英语老师上课的方式也是别具一格。记得有一次,布置的作业是让我们剪下书上的小狗,涂上颜色,再把小狗拼装好。第二天,同学们带来了五颜六色的小狗,看着这些可爱的小狗,英语老师用她那会说话的眼睛向我们投来了赞许的目光,并且一边用手机记录下这些精彩的瞬间,一边教我们读关于小狗的英文,让大家在欢乐的气氛中学到了知识,真是太开心了!

这就是我的英语老师,一个美丽而又博学的英语老师!

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篇1:MyTeacher-我的老师英语作文

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My Teacher-我的老师

My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.

Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.

Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.

This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.

译文:

我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位漂亮的女性。她有两只大大的眼睛,一个高高的鼻子和一张小小的红唇。她的脸上总带着笑容。

黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上,她常常坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的乐曲。黄老师跳舞也很棒。有时她也会教我们跳舞。

黄老师非常喜欢狗,因为狗很友好也很可爱。黄老师最喜欢的颜色是蓝色,因为蓝色是天空和海的颜色。

[My Teacher-我的老师英语作文

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篇2:圣诞节送给老师的一封信英语翻译

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Dear Mr Fu,

This is my first letter to you. Its a thank-you letter!

Thank you for what? Thank you for teaching me and helping me.

When I am in trouble, is your warm hand to help me, not when I want to give

up when you use your words to support me, I sincerely thank you! Thank you very

much!

In the coming Christmas, I would like to express my deep thanks to you

again!

I wish you good health and good luck in everything!

Your students

亲爱的复老师

这是我给你写的第一制封,是一封感谢信!

感谢什么呢?感谢你对我的教导,对我的帮助。

在我困难的时候,是你伸出温暖的手帮助我了我,没当我想放弃的时候是您用您的话语支持了我,我衷心的谢谢您!谢谢!

圣诞节到来之际,我再次向你表达我深深的谢意!

祝您是身体健康,万事如意!

您的学生

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篇3:我的英语老师六年级

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在我的身边,有许许多多令我感动的人,其中最让我感动的莫不过是我的英语老师Miss Liang。

Miss Liang 是我的英语老师,为什么说她感动人呢,是因为她对我们的教学工作进行得无微不至。每天早上一来到学校,她都微笑着对我打招呼。有的同学请假缺课了,她总是待他回来后帮他认真地补 上落下的课。还有的同学做了些错事,她都会叫他到跟前,耐心地批评指正。在同学的面前,她显得格外亲切,好似她是我们母亲一样,我们都非常喜欢她,喜欢她讲课时流利的语言,喜欢她和同学们 交流时亲切的眼神,更喜欢她对教学无微不至的优良品质。

记得一节英语课上,和往常一样,Miss Liang 提着录音机走进教室,所不同的是,她好像有点疲惫的样子,而且没有立即叫大家上课,而是在黑板上写道:非常抱歉!顿时,全班立即”热闹“起来了, 所有同学都窃窃私语,不知道发生了什么事:Miss Liang 究竟怎么了?为什么写下这些字?是不是生病了?老师没管我们,咳了几声,在黑板上写下了一些这节课要学的英语单词,然后又咳了几声,吃 力地说:”上课!“我听见她沙哑的嗓音,才知道,原来Miss Liang 嗓子哑了!同学们都大为吃惊,Miss Liang平时嗓音动听,今天怎么突然哑了,应该是天天上课累的吧。

老师叫了一个帮手,让他读她书上写的句子,自己也在旁边指导着,每次说话都很辛苦,有时非常沙哑,有时甚至发不出声音,要咳几下才能继续。我听见Miss Liang 那沙哑的声音,恨不得举起手来, 大声说道:”Miss Liang,我来帮您讲!“

直到下课,Miss Liang那沙哑的嗓音才慢慢离开了我们耳际……

从这件事中,我体会到了Miss Liang 教学的一丝不苟,舍己为人,如果没有这些品德,她可能会在课上随便乱讲应付了事,也可能一点小咳嗽就不上课。可Miss Liang 不是这样,她为了教学呕心沥 血的精神彻底感动了我们!

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篇4:关于老师的学生英语

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Today is September 10th. Teachers’ Day. A teacher was invited to our school to give us a talk. He had taught for fifty years, and had won the gold medals by the Department of Education. He worked hard all his life, and gave all his love to the students. We were deeply moved by his talk. Today many students he had taught before come back to him, and some others from all over the country visit wrote him letters to express their love and thanks.

The old man said that it was the happiest moment in his life.

今天是9月10日教师节。老师被邀请到我们学校给我们做报告。他已经教了五十年,赢得了教育金牌。他一生努力工作,给学生满满的爱。我们被深深地被他的演讲感动了。今天又很多他以前教过的学生都回来了,还有一些来自全国各地的访问写信以表达他们的爱和感谢。老人说,这是他一生中最幸福的时刻。

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篇5:我的英语老师作文400字

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他看起来挺老,打扮的挺帅气,几乎天天都穿着西装,偶尔也穿穿常服。虽然他没生气,但他的脸异常严肃,让人不敢靠近。

这个老师太可怕了,在男同学面前简直就是魔鬼。没完成作业就让你去跑步,没背好书就不准吃饭,他放下狠言:“准备好干粮在教室,别饿死在这里!”他上课手拿一把铁尺,害怕的同学不敢讲话,不害怕的还说得不亦乐乎。如果他一铁尺下去,估计就要了半条命。

他挺负责,一词不落地讲得一干二净,什么也不留下。听懂的同学听懂了,没听懂的也还是那样。

美中不足的是他的字。他的字就像几条毛线缠在一起,让我连n与m都分不清了。每当做笔记的时候,下面的同学都叫苦连天,我戴着眼镜也看不懂他写的什么,他们抱怨:“这写的什么字啊!太难看了!”他好像听到了,笑着说出了一句:“字如其人。”

他就是许老师,我的英语老师。

要是以前的黄老师有许老师这样严格就好了。

要是许老师的字有黄老师那样好看就好了。

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篇6:老师的英语作文

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I thank each teacher teach me, and I want to thank the most, is my Chinese teacher zhu, she is a good teacher, has won many prizes in the aspect of teaching. Mr Zhu short hair become small ponytail, cut the neat bang, wearing a pair of glasses, looks especially beautiful. Mr Zhu due to the daily teaching management guidance place, to be busy all day meeting arrangement work, even to our class time came out. Teacher is both metasomatic task to complete school, evening also want to give us lessons, corrects students papers, often sleep late. Mr Zhu to our requirement is very strict, but I know its love for us! Im glad I am to have such a good teacher, my parents also have said Mr Zhu taught me is my blessing.

Signing up new term begins, I hope can see the magdalene teo Mr Zhus face. But only saw the yellow teacher, miss huang said: "Mr Zhu fractures, very serious!" The whole class is quiet down, and then a series of sighs. The next semester, must let another substitute teacher to teach us.

Back home, I told the story to their parents. Dad said: "alas ~ oh, what a pity!" Who also did not think, Mr Zhu had a fracture at home to rest, also are very concerned about our study. Mr Zhu sent a text message, with Mr Zhu to write inside our expectations and requirements, and refueling. Write pages! I am very touched, dad and grandma more hope that Mr Zhu soon, come back to teach us.

Teachers day arrived, Id like to repay teacher with very good grades, I want to loudly say to the teacher: "teacher, you were laborious! Thank you!" Also to Mr Zhu said: "Mr Zhu, wish you recover at an early date, we are all waiting for you to come back to teach us!"

我感谢教我的每一位老师,而我最要感谢的,是我的语文朱老师,她是一位好老师,曾在教学方面多次获奖。朱老师短短的头发扎成个小马尾辫,剪着整齐的刘海,戴着一副眼镜,显得特别漂亮。朱老师由于负责教导处日常教学等管理工作,整天要忙开会布置工作,连给我们上课的时间都是挤出来的。老师晚上既要完成学校交代的任务,还要给我们备课、批改作业,常常很晚才睡。朱老师对我们要求十分严厉,但我知道那是对我们的爱!我很庆幸我有这样一位好老师,我家长也说有朱老师教我是我的福气。

新学期开始了,我盼望报名的时候能看见朱老师那张慈祥的脸。可是却只看见了黄老师,黄老师说:“朱老师骨折了,十分严重!”全班安静了下来,然后是一串的叹气声。接下来的一个学期,都得让另一位代课老师来给我们上课了。

回到家里,我把这件事告诉了家长。爸爸说:“唉~可惜啊,可惜!”谁也没有想到,朱老师骨折了在家休息,还十分关心我们的学习。朱老师发了个短信,里面写着朱老师对我们的期望和要求,还有加油。写了好几页呢!我十分感动,爸爸和奶奶更加希望朱老师早日康复,回来教我们。

教师节到了,我想以优秀的成绩报答老师,我想大声对老师说:“老师,您辛苦了!谢谢您!”另外还要对朱老师说:“朱老师,祝您早日康复,我们都等着您回来教我们呢!”

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篇7:幽默的英语老师

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陆昊然

“哈哈哈!”经常能听见笑声从教室传出,这肯定就是我们幽默英语老师在上课。

她长得不高不矮,面容清秀,樱桃小嘴,长发披肩,还有双会说话的眼睛,经常逗的我们哈哈大笑。

她才三十几岁,却有着丰富的知识,还会用一些英语说笑话,下课时她会带我们做游戏,给我们东西吃,因此我用英语给她取了个外号叫,“howlong”。

虽然平时龙老师这么幽默,但是一上课就像变了一个人似的,非常严肃,只要是她讲过的题,我们一而再,再而三的错,她就会大发雷霆,但是她一看我们的表情又会哈哈大笑。比如有一次一张试卷上的题要改否定句,一般疑问和特殊疑问句,我们班有13个人没做出来,一开始她发怒了,用马克笔和戒尺重重的敲在白板上,后来我们都会了她就笑了。

这就是我们的龙老师,我会永远记住她。

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篇8:以描写一位老师为话题的初中英语作文

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Mr Qin is our history teacher. He has a wonderful name Qin Han. He is over fifty now, and he is in good health. He likes history. He is not only interested in Chinese history, but also the history of the world. He likes reading, and goes to the book shop every Saturday. He often tells us something interesting in the history, such as the Great Wall, the World War II and so on. We are all happy to have his classes. Mr Qin wrote a thick book on history and it was published last year. We all admire him!

秦先生是我们的历史老师,他有一个好听的名字秦汉。他已经年过半百,可是身体健康。他喜欢历史。他不仅对中国历史感兴趣,对世界历史也感兴趣。他喜欢读书,每星期六都去书店。他经常给我们讲一些历史上有趣的事,如万里长城,第二次世界大战等等。我们都喜欢上他的课。秦先生写了一本有关历史的厚厚的书,去年出版了。我们都很敬佩他!

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篇9:写给老师的一封信英语

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dear teacher,

it has been a long time since i wrote the last letter. nowdays, people

write letters less and less, instead, they make a call or send a sms. however,

it is still a good way for us to communicate with each other by sending a

letter

its my honour to get the chance to write to you. "approachable" is my

first impression of you, because you always keeps smiling. students may fear the

teachers that are serious both in and out of class. smile makes a teacher

popular with his students, you are a teacher of this very kind.

you always arrive at the classroom ahead of any of the students, from which

we could imply that you are a diligent man with regular habit. before the class,

you like to talk to us, at this very time, you are more a friend than a teacher.

to be honest, i was surprised in the first class when i learned a teacher at

your age could speak english insuch a fluent way.(i didnt mean you are old,

youre young at heart.) moreover, you know well how to keep your class

attractive. youve got such an active mind that you can keep talking during the

whole class without a pause. i always appreciated your ideas and enjoyed

listening to you. in your class, i learned not only the writing skills but also

the presentation skills as well as much knowledge of other areas. thanks for

your excellent teaching.

ive got some suggestions for you. it seems that we students have got few

chances to participate in discussion during the class time. most of the time, we

are listening. seldom did we express our own ideas. i suggest that teachers

should interact with students more frequently in the class. besides, id like to

practice writing more, so would you please leave us more assignments?

happy new year.

with every good wish.

yours sincerely dali wang

___

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篇10:给英语老师的一封信

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尊敬的英语老师

你好!

我是您的一名学生,我在这里要替全班同学对你说一声:英语老师对不起!我不应该在你专心的给我们讲课的时候说小话,不应该做小动作。在我们语文老师批评我们的时候,你都有点心疼的样子。在批评两位班长的时候是您宽恕了两位班长,在批评我们的时候也是您宽恕了我们,给了我们一次改过的机会。谢谢您英语老师,我永远都会记在心中。

我觉得您讲的课真的是很有趣,我一定会认真听讲的,我一定要改正我们犯下的错误,我一定要上课坐端正、不做小动作、不说小话。每天都认真听您讲课,再也不敢不听讲了,谢谢您!

此致

敬礼!

人:

日期:

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篇11:描写老师的英语短文

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Our English teacher, Mrs Wang, is about forty years old。 She always wears a pair of glasses。 She is very strict with us。 When we make a mistake, she often makes us stand up。 But we hear that her home is far from our school。 Every morning she has to walk to school for forty minutes。 And she is never late。 Then we come to see that Mrs Wang loves us dearly。 She teaches us so carefully。 In fact, she is a good teacher.

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篇12:我的老师初中英语作文

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My favourite teacher is Miss Meng.shes my new math teacher.Her class is very funny.Shes tall and thin.Shes pretty.Shes very very smart and active.Shes strict,but shes very kind.Her fevourite food are tomatoes.She often reads books on Saturdays and Sundays.

This is my fevourite teacher.I like her!

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篇13:我的英语老师作文450字

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他,戴着鸭舌帽,他,披着一件灰外套,好似一个老干部。他就是我的老师——应老师。还记得我们的师生之旅是从我小升初那年开始的。那时,我来到一个完全陌生的地方,难免有些生疏。可是他的课,我觉得格外亲切。

那是他上的英语课,在课堂上告诉了我们一个记单词的诀窍,就是用音标记单词,可是刚接触音标的我,根本搞不清楚哪几个字母读哪个音,使我的听写没的不堪入目,应老师见了,不由的开起了玩笑:“我可真是伤心啊!”他说完后没有马上走开,反而是帮我认真的分析起来,边说边让我作笔记。让我记清楚,下次听写不要那么多错,那么辛苦的订证。

窗外的鸟儿在欢唱,伴着我“唰唰”的写字声和应老师的讲解声。

“colour,green,smart……。”又是一次听写,可这次,我有了应老师亲身传授的听写宝典,终于破了我的记录,拿了听写的第一个一百分!拿着听写本时,我的耳边好似又响起应老师给我认真的讲解声。

应老师在我的脑海中不只是英语王,还是一个“百科全书”。

在上课的前几分钟,应老师总会来和我们“谈谈人生”,“八婆八婆”。就拿最近几次的英语课来说说吧。

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篇14:我们的新老师英语作文

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our class is a bad class in our school。 but when mr。 johnson came,everything changed。 he looks kind and special。 before he came, we thought classes were boring。 and no one listened to the teachers carefully。 but mr。 johnson has made us the best class only half a year later。

he is fond of talking with us equally and never forces us to study。 he develops our interests in studying。 besides, he tells us how to be a man first, then to be a good student。 he respects our feelings, so we all trust him and feel glad to follow what he says。

[我们的新老师英语作文

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篇15:新年给老师的一封信英语

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Dear teacher takong

Hello, I wish you health and happiness in the New Year!

It is said that one day is a teacher and "life is a father". You have

taught me hard for four years. The knowledge I learned in my four years of

Enlightenment has benefited me a lot. I regard you as "a mother for life". I

often think of three old people -- father, mother and you.

Think of your efforts to us, todays teachers will pay, but their

remuneration is high to the sky. Students who are not good at learning can make

up lessons. In the past four years, there are no repeaters in our class. It was

an excellent class with red scarf in the county. At that time, it was worthy of

the name. It is not like that we have to evaluate what we want to send from East

to west. At that time, there were a lot of poor students. Some students couldnt

even pay the tuition fee of 1 yuan and 6 jiao. You paid it for them. Todays

teachers are impatient to see many poor students.

When you were born to build a new brother, the students invited to see you.

Everyone gathered together a few cents to buy two catties and dried it. You said

that was not good. As long as you had this intention, you would be very happy

and asked everyone to eat it. At that time, you were not sensible and greedy, so

they ate more than half of those sent to you. Now I think of it as ridiculous,

naive and lovely. You told us to listen to the substitute teacher and ask the

monitor to take some poor students to your home with their homework books. You

patiently tell them the reasons why they are not good at their studies, and tell

them about it. An inch of time is worth an inch of money, and an inch of money

is hard to buy an inch of time. If you fail to pass the grade for another year,

its a pity that you have given them supplementary lessons. In order to

consolidate the results, you let the students with good grades help one poor

student, This kind of professionalism has infected us and sowed good seeds in

our hearts. Even when we are adults, we are very dedicated to our work, but not

as good as you.

You said that you often have classmates to see you, said that we have

teacher-student feelings - this is your love for us, so we can not forget you,

so we have to visit you. We know how many years ago you were named a model

teacher, and the students are happy for you; you deserve it!

What moved me all my life is that you came to my sick mother! When you

heard that my mother was seriously ill, you brought the expensive nutriment and

asked to find our home. We all thank you very much. It has been 30 years since

you taught me. Is there any such teacher now? In addition to visiting my parents

every time I go home to visit you, no gift has been given to you. A primary

school teacher remembers the students she taught for decades, Im afraid not

many; Im not a celebrity, Im not a big money, I dont have an official

position, Im a very ordinary person, teacher; you are my cultural benefactor,

the most respected person in our family, when I write this letter to you, my

mother will be happy in heaven, because in her illness, you go to see her, she

is happy for a long time.

New years day, I wish the teacher to enjoy the happiness of his family,

students, you study hard, do not understand the place to ask me, I am a teacher,

"can not mislead peoples children" with this sentence will always linger in my

ears. Teacher, you can live a long life. Now you are 80 years old and still in

good health. I am happy for you. I will not forget you. I will go to see

you.

I wish the teacher health, happiness and longevity

Your student Lu Guiling

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篇16:初二寒假英语日记:做一名老师

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Everybody has own ideal, my ideal is works as an honorable peoples teacher. Teaches the students to study the cultural knowledge, is playing together with them, the life, lets their healthy development. I will use the knowledge rain and dew to moisten childs heart, with the warm compassion cared about that will cherish the children.

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篇17:给英语老师的一封信

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敬爱的英语老师

您好!

不知不觉中,一年半的时间很快就过去了,和你分离的时间已经来了。教室里似乎仍回荡着她那清脆洪亮的声音,同学们似乎仍感受到他那严格中的慈爱。我们,在您的搀扶下,跨上了奔驰的骏马。

小小的粉笔就是你的双手,上课的铃声就是你征程上的冲锋号角。为了我们您废寝忘食,为了我们您鞠躬尽瘁,您无怨无悔,心甘情愿!多少个日日夜夜你无眠,多少回风风雨雨你闯过。一路的酸甜苦辣,一路的欢声笑语,您与我们一起渡过,我们的一声感激会让你甜蜜永久。您像蜡烛一样,燃烧自己,照亮别人。俗话说的好:“春蚕到死丝方尽,蜡炬成灰泪始干。老师是人类灵魂的工程师。”我喜欢看你为我们而高兴的样子,也喜欢看你为我们而激动的样子,个喜欢看你为我们而生气的样子,无论什么样子的你总是如此惹我喜爱。现在,我不仅会尊敬你,而且会把你看做我的好朋友,有福同享,有难同当。回想起以前:刚来这里,我们自我介绍,然后你上课使得喜怒哀乐我全都记得。虽然只有一年半,但我们相识相知,虽然只有一年半,但我们情深意长,我真有点舍不得。是您让我考100分,是您给我当英语科代表的机会,是您让我跨上了奔驰的骏马。您尽职尽责,铁面无私,作为组长也应该这样,我要向你学习。总之,千言万语道不尽,就让他化为一句话:“老师,我爱您;老师,您辛苦了!”希望你以后可以回来看看我们,我们班的活动也要来参加哦,同学们的精彩表演在等着你呢!

此致

敬礼!

您的学生:李雪梅

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篇18:中考英语阅卷老师揭秘满分作文是如何炼成的

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中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷老师的交流,对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点:1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准:

(1)整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。

(2)内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分):

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分):

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面:要点缺失,可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”,若没有写一件具体的事情,是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻,没有实际内容,也会扣1-2分。

字数:少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上,标点符号不算,少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看,16分以上的作文,没有少于75字的,甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然,也极少有超过100字的,因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个,在格子下面大约还有2行的空间,可以加20字左右,再多阅卷人就很难看清了,也会影响卷面的美观。

所以,同学们如果想让作文得到高分,最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;

标点错误:每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点,是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学,尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学,都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项,但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验,在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的,而是在第一遍读完全文之后,心里已经形成了一个“印象分”,然后再细读第二、三遍,把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此,这个“印象分”就非常重要,而同学们的书法,也正是在这个环节,影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生,如果书法不好,一定要注意。

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篇19:英语作文我的英语老师的房子

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My Teacher's House

My English teacher has a big house.

It has a living room, a big dining room, two bedrooms, a study, two bathrooms and a big kitchen.

In the living room, there is a big picture, four brown sofas, white fans and blue walls. The TV set is big. There is a big Chinese knot on the wall. There are lanterns below the lights. I like them.

This is my English teacher’s house.

[英语作文我的英语老师房子

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篇20:高中我的英语老师作文

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一个人静静地坐在书桌前,望着照片上老师那和蔼可亲的脸,心中泛起阵阵涟漪。因为有了您,就有了一个特别的节日--教师节。从此,我们就多了一份对您深深的敬意。是您播种未来,是您点燃我理想之火,是您在我心里播下了快乐的火种,让我感受到的一切欢乐因老师您的爱而起。在我快要站立不住的时候,您给我一个鼓励的眼神。在我悲伤的时候,您点起我的希望之火;在我迷茫的时候,您为我照亮前进的道路!虽然我们只相处了一年!但那些难忘的日子呀!是您--老师,让我学会如何面对困难,如何感受生活,如何珍惜幸福,如何自我发展。

不知您是否还记得那件事那次期中考,我考的很差,伤心了好几天,您知道后,就找我去谈心,您静静的看着我,,眼睫毛时不时眨动着,但您的目光不动。昔日严肃的面庞,挂着一种温和的笑容。那是这样的一种眼神,有关爱,有温馨,有期望,有激励,那么明亮,那么闪烁,给我温暖,给我勇气!霎时间,来自心灵的感觉传遍全身,是震撼,更是感激。悲伤已没有必要,有的只是一个新的起点,一次摔倒后的重新爬起,一次为了成功必须迎接失败。

老师,我们相处的时间是365天,但时间早已悄悄流逝,一晃就过去,也许有人说的对快乐的时光很容易流失,我能感觉到你这段时间尽心尽力的为我们付出。因为您的鼓励,让我有重新起航的信心;因为您的邮件,让我有勇敢面对困难的信心;谢谢您让我对现在充满活力,对未来充满理想。这一年的点点滴滴,一个个动人的情景把我的生活点缀得精彩美丽,也把我的记忆巩固得刻骨铭心。我忘不了您!

我在心底默默地感谢曾经在我学习失败时0,鼓励我成功是从这里起步的;在我悲伤时,安慰我吴晓振作起来的英语老师。然而——一切发生得那么突然,就在我按您的话开始努力的时候,我却即将要离开您了。

“感恩的心,感谢有你,陪伴着我度过快乐的高二。感恩的心,感谢命运,花开花落我一样会珍惜我们的师生情。”老师,感谢你,感谢您一年以来在讲台上用汗水浇洒干渴的我们;感谢你一年来如蜡烛般燃烧自己,照亮我们;

风儿吹下一片落叶,承载着我心中的一句话:老师,我爱你!真的很舍不得离开您!

最后,让我再真诚地说声:“谢谢!”

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