2021最新英语高考作文模拟题目（优秀20篇）

导语：2016年高考越来越近了，你知道英语作文怎么写能拿到高分吗?下面是yjbys作文网小编为您收集整理的资料，希望对您有所帮助。

1.每天听英语听力如VOA、BBC，时间在30分钟内。逆向练习听力，效果最佳。

2.记牢单词表上的单词，一定要循环记忆，否则很快会忘掉。

3.单选主要考语法，词汇辨析，交际英语，动词短语等。

4.完型，阅读，改错每天做几篇，一定要坚持，断了一两天感觉就没了，时间不会很多，30分钟就够了(做题速度要严格要求)，一定要摆脱汉语、生词的束缚。

5.作文要有亮点，如字迹清晰，使用高级词汇，使用复杂句式(定语从句，名词性从句，倒装等)，可从平时训练中摘取学习，也可从范文中找。

6.针对不同地区的新题型加强训练。

7.拿着几次考试卷向老师咨询自己的薄弱环节。

历年真题：

【2013•辽宁卷】书面表达(满分25分)

—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

1. 写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一;

2. 家人团聚;

3. 赏月、吃月饼;

4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。

注意：1.词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。

参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake

【参考范文】

The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。

【2013•江西卷】书面表达(满分25分)

星光中学(Xing Guang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：

1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);

2. 活动的过程;

3. 你对于这次活动的评论。

注意： 1. 词数120左右。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it。

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy。

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

【2013•四川卷】书面表达(共35分)

某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;

2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;

3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施

注意：

1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称

It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits。

【参考范文】

It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study。

I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop。

When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes。

【2013•全国新课标(卷II)】书面表达(25分)

假定你是李华，自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：

1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)

2. 象征意义

3. 价格

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头已为你写好。

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you

【2013•全国新课标(卷I)】书面表达(25分)

假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：

李明：高个子，戴眼镜

航班号：CA985

到达：8月6日上午11:30

注意：1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

[次页标题= 导航短标题=]

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before。

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket。

Looking forward to your reply。

Yours,

Li Hua

【2013•广东卷】Ⅲ写作 (共两节，满分40分)

第一节 基础写作(共1小题;满分15分)

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。

[写作内容] 写一篇关于移民[微博]火星的快讯

[写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容

第二节 读写任务(共1小题;满分25分)

阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文

To many people even the word “work” sounds unpleasant ,not necessarily because they are lazy. The same man, who dislikes his job in the factory or even in the office, may work hard at the weekend ,painting the house or digging the garden。

What is the reason, then? In most cases, it is because these people simply do not enjoy the Job they are doing .It does not give them any real satisfaction. It may be quite easy, like making up wooden boxes, but it is very boring. Very often they are doing a job which is just a small part of a much larger one, such as attaching a door handle to a car. But the part they play in actually making the car is so small that they can never say: I have made something !

Yet in modern society somebody has to do ordinary jobs such as cleaning streets because this is the way society is organized, No matter how ordinary a job is, it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our due respect. Society cannot function a single day without the “dull and boring” jobs。

[写作内容]

1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词谈谈你对平凡工作的想法，内容包括：

(1) 描述清洁工工作的艰辛;

(2) 假如没有清洁工，环境会变得如何?

(3) 你对平凡工作者的看法。

[写作要求]

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【参考范文】

第一节：基础写作：

It is reported that thirty volunteers to be sent to the Mars who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe by the year of 2015. The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the earth once they are immigrated to the Mars. What’s more, it is greatly important for them to try to keep a good relationship with other members. Experts strongly warned that the living conditions on the Mars are very hard, for not only the extremely cold climate would they meet with, but also loneliness and fear. On the contrary , the volunteers insist that they have got tired of the life on the earth, so greatly being eager to experience the unknown, mysterious life on the Mars; meanwhile, if the would be succeeded , they would get the honor to be heroes of human beings。

第二节：读写任务

In the passage, the author mainly stressed the importance of small and ordinary work, such as cleaning the street because of their essentiality for the organization of the society ,and thinks those doing such jobs should be respected greatly。

There is no doubt that what a cleaner does is more harder compared with any other jobs in the society. On one hand, they must get up in the early morning every day to clean the street while we are sill in the sweet sleeping dreams. On the other hand, they also suffer from less respect and lower pay, working all day on the street no matter it is sun shines strongly or snow, wind heavily。

Nobody could imagine what an bad environment we would live in if there were no cleaners in the city. Wherever we go, there is rubbish. Maybe we would soon be drowned in the mountain of rubbish. Even worse, if there were no change about that, diseases would spread at a very quick speed. Is there anything that can be worse than this!

From the above, I can draw the conclusion safely that even the smallest and the most ordinary job, such as cleaning the street is also the necessary part to keep the society going smoothly. Consequently, those who do those most insignificant jobs should get respected as much as those being engineers or doctors。

俗语写作

根据下面中文提示写一篇150词左右的短文。

俗话说：早起的鸟儿有虫吃。请根据你生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功源于干凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作。

The early bird will catch worms

【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习和当今的教育密切相关的话题。一些俗语具有教育意义。2010年有些省份可能对考生进行人生规范、立志等方面有关的俗语进行考查。

【构思点拨】本题属于题目、提纲式作文，给出的要点虽然不多，但要求考生根据生活中亲身经历的一件事，说明一切成功来源于凡事早做规划，不断追求，辛勤劳作这个道理。因此要注意结合自己的经历，谈出自己对此的感受即可。

【参考范文】

The early bird will catch worms

An old saying The early bird will catch worms reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must plan ahead of time and make their efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.

For example, the Chinese athletes excellent performance in 2010 Olympic Winter Games in Vancouver is definitely the result of their early planning and hard training. If they don t set the aim and word work, even though they have the best talents, they cant compete with others and get more medals.

Another case in point is my learning experience. I was good at English, but I couldnt pass the exam, for I wasnt prepared well before the examination. I had many things to solve at that time. As I met the complex things, I was at a loss. The reason was that I had no plan and involved in many things and didnt study more hard, so I failed.

In short, the saying shows us the important of planning, working hard and constantly trying.

为迎接奥运会在中国举行，请写一篇关于讲究文明礼仪的倡议书，具体内容包括：

1、讲究文明礼貌是中华民族的传统;

2、面对外国友人应热情大方、彬彬有礼;

3、要坚决杜绝公共场所大声喧哗、拥挤打闹、随地吐痰等不文明行为;

4、奥运即将召开，我们将代表中国形象。

参考词汇：喧哗 uproar

[范文]

My dear fellow students,

The Olympics are just around the corner. Today I want to talk about good manners and courtesy.

We Chinese have always been respected and highly praised for good manners and courtesy, which have, as well, become precious traditions of our people. In a couple of weeks beyond, a large number of foreign friends will come to China to join us in enjoying the Olympics. Before foreign guests, we should have an easy manner and behave politely and warm-heartedly. In public places, such ugly behaviors as uproar, pushing or squeezing together, spitting and so on should be determinedly forbidden. In a sense, each of us will not simply stand for ourselves but stand for China. Therefore, boys and girls, let’s do it well right now and the eyes of the world are to on us!

[高考英语满分作文一篇讲究文明礼仪的倡议书

阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇文章。(60分)

父母悄悄到孩子的学校探望,却遭到了孩子的冷落.最近,朋友圈里一篇堪称“声泪俱下”的文章《

很多人不赞同女儿的做法，认为她不尊重父母。网友某某留言：“可怜天下父母心啊!有多少孩子能体谅父母?也许只有自己当了父母之后才会明白父母的苦心，只是别等到‘子欲养而亲不待’。”

也有网友认为父母的做法有待商榷，微信网友某某说：“为什么出发前不沟通好探望时间，父母是否明白，这种长假，孩子与同学肯定有安排。因为我们是孩子的爹娘，所以就来了?只能说，因为爹娘忘了尊重子女作为成年人的自主权，所以，他们注定换不来女儿的爱与尊重。”

对此现象，你怎么看?请综合材料内容及含意作文，体现你的思考、权衡与选择。

要求：选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题;不要套作，不得抄袭;不少于800字。

Ten years later I will? Now, I imagine.

If I were a mayor, I will create the Harbin to be more beautiful, but also expand the Harbin, let farmers in the country home children also came to Harbin, school a better place to Harbin.

If I were a scientist, I invented a kind of batteries will be able to start the car, will not let the air pollution, I would invent a kind of chocolate flavor of plastic bags, people and animals can eat, so eat small animals and children even when they also wont have anything.

If I were a singer, I would stand in all kinds of party, wearing a beautiful dress, use my voice to make people comfortable mood.

If I were a designer, I design a few beautiful clothes in the world, and open a dress, skirt. Let people to see. If you want to buy, I will lower the price!

If I were a draw, Ill give people draw self-portrait, free to open a painting exhibition, visitors will also give a leaf stickers!

Ten years later, I no matter be what kind of person, I will make a useful to the people, to make our country a better place.

十年后的我会怎么样呢?下面，我来想象一下。

假如我是市长，我会把哈尔滨创造得更加美丽，还要把哈尔滨扩大，让乡下的农民家的孩子也来到哈尔滨上学，让哈尔滨变得更加美好。

假如我是科学家，我发明一种用电池就能开动的小汽车，不会让空气污染，我还会发明一种巧克力味的塑料袋，人和动物都可以吃，这样小动物和小朋友就算吃了也不会有什么事情。

假如我是一名歌唱家，我会站在各种晚会，穿着漂亮的晚礼服，用我的歌声来让人们心情舒适。

假如我是设计师，我会设计出几个世界上漂亮的衣服，开一个衣服、裙子展。让人们来观赏。如果要买的话，我会减价哦!

假如我是绘画家，我会免费给人们画自画像，还要开一个绘画展，参观的人们还会赠一个叶贴画哦!

十年后，我无论成为什么样的人，我都会做出对人们有益的事情，让我们的国家变得更加美好。

高考英语中常见的话题有哪些呢?下面是语文迷整理的十五大高考英语话题作文素材，希望对你有帮助。

一、面对挑战的感悟

Looking back on this, I realize that whatever challenges I am faced with, I will spare no effort and never give up. I’m sure to achieve final victory and become what I should be.

二、怎样看待司机的行为?

After reading the passage, I felt very angry with the driver. It was what he did that did shock me. I can’t believe the driver is so cruel. Generally speaking, the responsibility of a bus driver is to serve people. However, the driver is short of essential occupational morality. Having known the woman’s arm was stuck in the bus door, he continued to drive his bus. What an evil-minded driver!

三、对交友的看法

In my view, it takes time to build good relationship with others. You can’t expect to become good friends with someone soon after you meet him. You also can’t expect to become good friends with others if you do not spend time with them.

四、对心理问题的看法

As far as I’m concerned, mental problems are serious problems both in universities and middle schools. I believe physical and mental health is more important than good grades. Therefore, parents and teachers should first pay attention to students’ feelings. Only when they feel it fun to study, can they learn their lessons well.

五、对网络教育的看法

Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It can provide different learners with more flexible ways to learn. Most of all, with online education, we can absorb the latest knowledge.

六、怎样应对同伴压力

First of all, since the whole world is full of peer pressure, we have to know that it is not easy for us to avoid it. Secondly, find out the truth about something and you’ll really feel better.

七、态度决定一切的启示

Different attitudes lead to different results. Take Xiao Hua for example, He’s my classmate. He always puts his heart into study, so he has become a top student in our class. With his diligence and concentration, he’s bound to succeed in the entrance examination. However, Xiao Li never cares about his study and turns a deaf ear to the teachers’ advice. As a result, he falls far behind others in his study.

八、对…行为的看法

As for me, Marry is really great because she’s ready to do…that seems very small. Maybe what she is doing is very common in others’ eyes but it will play an important role in our daily life.

九、目标的重要性(看法)

I was greatly inspired by such a story as it makes me realize the power of a goal in shaping one’s success and gives me strength to pursue my goal despite the hardships I’m to go through.

In my opinion, goals are important in our life. To begin with, as goals often enables us to be positive to ups and downs in our life. Moreover, bearing goals in mind, we’re less likely to be distracted from our way to success. Finally, as goals are what we’re longing for, they thus can motivate us to strive for greater achievements, making our life more fulfilling(令人满意的).

十、对考验的感受

From the story I’ve learned that the trials of life are of great importance in our growth. As the saying goes, “No cross, no crown(不经历风雨怎么见彩虹).” Only by facing and overcoming difficulties in our life can we grow up happily and healthily.

十一、对中学生活的感受

As for me, a student from the country, what I do every day is to devote myself to realizing my dream of attending a key university. So I seldom have time to do outdoor activities. Anyway, I’ve become more independent and as a student of boarding school, my experience has become a benefit in my future college life.

十二、有关命运转折点的启示

The passage inspired me greatly as I come to know that the happiness of life lies in our own hands. Although he was hopeless in any sport at school, He didn’t give up. Despite what others say about him, he made up his mind to improve himself push his body to the limit. With his determination and perseverance, he made a difference in his life.

十三、对街头食品的看法

As far as I’m concerned, I often purchase some street food on my way to school in the morning because it is very convenient to me. As a student, I can’t spend much time waiting or eating in a restaurant. It is well-known that street food is very popular in cities and towns because they are tasty, quick and cheap, which attract a large number of customers every day. Most of them are so busy with their study and work that they can’t spare much time to enjoy their meals.

十四、如何更好地鼓励孩子学习

To get kids motivated to learn, I think we should not treat every child in the same way. To some kids, oral praise is essential. Don’t save the praise for only the top score. If possible, involve other adults in praising them. However, this method may not work well with other kids. Maybe what is more important to them is to watch a movie or go on a trip together with their parents. It just depends.

十五、如何适应大学生活

As far as I’m concerned, college life differs from middle school life a lot. So I think the ideal university life should help me get well prepared for society, including obtaining academic knowledge.

I think I will take an active part in all kinds of activities, as well as study hard to achieve my ideal university life.

On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get

people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others

into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and

should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public

life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go

around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting

easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the

Internet makes instant feedback possible.

To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting,

but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for

the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.

Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.

【题目预测】

阅读下面的材料，根据要求作文。

一代人有一代人的偶像。钱学森、袁隆平、宗庆后、张艺谋、马化腾、刘翔……他们是不同时代不同行业的成功者，有无数崇拜者和模仿者追随其后。他们做过什么，又是怎么做的，被写进了种种励志读本，然而，他们的成功很难复制，因为时间在变，万物在变，一个人成功的赋予也在变。

时间不是一个抽象的概念。初夏秋冬，四时更替。物理时间随着时钟的指针分分秒秒匆匆地流逝，而人生的时间，则由大大小小的悲喜堆叠而成过去，由错错对对的选择建构而成未来。所以，人生的真谛不在复制别人的成功，而是认识自己，在合适的时间里做好该做的事!

根据上述材料的含义，以“我的时间”为话题，写一篇不少于800字的文章。要求：题目自拟，立意自定，文体自选(除诗歌外)

【优秀作文】

岁月如梭，光阴似箭。时间的流逝是如此客观，以致没有人可以拒绝。如何才能将自己短暂的一生过出属于自己的精彩?我有我答案。

我不去羡慕别人追求所谓“快餐文化”，只是认真地将我的时间用在值得的地方。或是翻翻古籍,于一豆残灯下,回想辛弃疾”醉里挑灯看剑,梦回吹角连营”的壮志未酬;追忆曹操“老骥伏枥，志在千里”的一片雄心;或是随心走走，在自然怀抱里，体会“天街小雨润如酥，草色遥看近却无”的秀丽春景“欣赏”春江潮水连海平，海上明月共潮生“的壮观绮丽……

我情愿细细地将一事做好，在浮华躁动中独立一隅，静守内心的美好。

我不去羡慕别人能一心二用，只是知道我应该要在适当的时间做适当的事。正如哈佛大学一条著名校训所云“像狗一样地学，像绅士一样地玩”，我要将自己的时间分门别类，不同的时间就要用来做不同的事。诚然，总是有人能边看电视边写作业，或是一边读书一边聊天，但于我而言，这些只能是漫无边际的空想。毛泽东曾说过“年轻人是八九点种的太阳”，所以我们更要趁这美好的时光，竭力地将自己提升得越充实越好，这样，才能像保尔`科察金所说的一样，“当我回首往事时，既不因虚度年华而悔恨，也不因碌碌无为而羞愧。”

我情愿本分地做好自己该做的事，心满意足地为自己的付出点赞。

我不去羡慕别人将时间用于无聊的娱乐八卦，只是将我的时间尽最大可能地铺展开来。在慵倦的清晨，我不愿蜷在舒适温暖的被窝里，而更愿抖擞精神到山间漫步;在无所事事的午后,我不愿在闲谈里蹉跎了时光,而更愿掏出单词书好好记忆;在机场等候的漫长时光里,我不愿留恋于各种社交媒体,而更愿找出一份报纸静静阅读.

我情愿利用好那些碎片般微小的时间,尽自己的力量将它们串成灯塔般明亮.

人的时间如何度过,就决定了他将度过怎样的一生.这是我的时间,也是我对自己生命旅程的一份答卷.

In order to provide a good guidance and reference for nearly 1000 senior high graduates in our school, the Student Union made a survey on the filling applications for the college entrance examinations among the previous year graduates. According to the statistics of the survey, half of the graduates accepted their teachers’ suggestions for the reason that teachers have a better understanding of their interests, specialties and schooling experiences. 35% of the graduates followed their parents advice as they are used to obeying their arrangements and trusted their decision. 10% of the graduates preferred to make an independent choice as they hold that nobody know them better than themselves and since it is their rights to fill applications they hope to win respect from teachers and parents. The remaining 5% just made their choices accordingly after they got the results of the final published scores and ranking.

下面语文迷网为大家带来了5个高考英语写作中的高频句型，一起来看看吧。

1. It is important for everyone to learn English well in our rapidly developing world.

在这个迅速发展的世界里，对每个人来说，学好英语是非常重要的。

同样句型包括：

It is important/(necessary, difficult, convenient, possible) for sb. to do sth.

例句：It is necessary to shake hands when you first meet someone.

与第一次见面的人握手是非常必要的。

2. The harder you work at it, the more progress you will make.

你工作越努力，你取得的进步就越大。

1)The+比较级..., the+比较级...

2)比较级+and+比较级(The world is getting smaller and smaller.)

3. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.

如果每个人都为保护环境做出贡献，世界会变得更加美好。

类似的句型还有：If necessary…, they can…

4. The job was hard, which made me so tired that I almost quit half way.

这份工作太辛苦，差点使我半途而废。

1)直接使用：so… that…

例句：The job was so tired, boring and seemed endless that I almost quit half way.

这份工作太累、太无聊，而且没完没了，这使我差点半途而废。

2)能够增加句子层次的高级连词还有：

(Not only …but also…)、(Because…)、(because of…)、(As long as…)、(so long as…)

5. Good habits are the crosscut to success.

好习惯是成功的捷径。

高考已经进入倒计时了，这时候多看看写作技巧准没错。下面是语文迷为大家整理的英语写作高分技巧，希望对你有帮助。

一、把握文体

话题作文往往不限文体，允许考生自由发挥。但是，不限文体并不等于不要文体。话题作文的“文体不限”其实是指不限于一种文体，让学生有选择文体的自由。当你选定了一种文体时，还得按照这种文体的特点来谋篇布局进行写作。有的同学观察能力强，生活积累丰富，不妨将生活中精彩的片断撷取出来写成一篇生动感人的记叙文;有的同学想象丰富，擅长编写故事，不妨写写童话、寓言或科幻小说;有的同学逻辑思维能力强，擅长推理，不妨写成一篇理据充分的议论文;有的同学感情细腻丰富，不妨写成一篇优美抒情的散文，肯定会非常出色。

二、缩小范围

话题作文只提供写作的话题，而没有中心、材料、结构、文体、语言等等的限制;给了考生一个比较开放的构思空间，使考生能最大限度地发挥想象力和创造力。但是，如果不注意把握话题，缩小写作的口子，就会出现“下笔千言，离题万里”的毛病。因此，不管所给的话题多么宽泛，我们都要善于缩小“包围圈”，要选择一个小小的切入口，如一件事、一个人、一样物品、一种感受、一点看法等等，集中笔力加以突破，把你所选择的话题角度写细写深写透，做到“以小见大”。

三、拟好题目

标题是文章的“眼睛”。俗话说：“题好一半文”。话题作文允许自己拟题目，因此，我们要努力提高拟题水平，力争使自己拟的题目准确、凝炼、含蓄、新奇，使阅卷老师“一见钟情”。

四、善于联想

话题作文是一种开放性的作文形式，要求考生放开手脚，尽情地驰骋在想象的空间，善于多方位地展开联想，这样，才能生发出丰富多彩的思路来。比如话题“风”，你可以联想到自然界的风：微风、大风、狂风、飓风、龙卷风等等;你还可以联想到社会风气：拍马风、送礼风等等;你可以联想到一种像风一样的流行时尚：金庸热、韩寒热等等;你甚至可以联想到假如你是风，假如你遇到风等等。

五、写出新意

话题作文既然是应试作文，总得给评卷老师一个好的感觉，得—个好的分数。因此，写出特色、写出新意是十分重要的。我们在写作时，要善于“独辟蹊径”，也就是要求我们在立意上要有特的感悟，不入云亦云;选材上要有独到的眼光，不陈题旧话;构思上要独具匠心，不四平八稳，波澜不惊语气上要有独到的魅力，不平铺直叙泛泛而谈。

西城这次大小作文给人的感觉都有点随意。大作文本着开放的原则，一口气给出了两个半命题，确实做到了不在审题上为难学生，给出的“自由”“英雄”“经典”和“青春”四个词比较常见，很多学生在中考时就已写过，而且还可以自己拟词，简直就是写什么都可以的节奏了。

虽然在半命题的给出部分有所限制，但是作文一个一模的作文题目来说，还是失之平淡，缺乏高度和亮点，比较容易出现平淡的作文。会让学生考完感觉还不错，但分数未必高的局面。而且写惯了给材料作文的部分学生，可能还会出现无法下笔之窘。呵呵。

就给出的几个词语来说，真正的自由是什么?脱离不愿意耽搁的环境抑或是离开不喜欢的地方，或者是追求心灵的解脱，也可能是不随波逐流找到自己心灵的方向，过自己想过的日子。真正的青春是什么?不是肉体的年轻和容光焕发的外表，而是一颗生机勃勃的灵魂?真正的英雄?大概很多孩子会写平凡小事小人物吧，关于真正经典的讨论倒是还算有点意思。后面的“__________之窘”约等于没有出，因为在思考第一个题目“真正的_________”时，就已经思考到了第二个题目的要求范围。所以第二个题目基本废了。

相比之下，朝阳的“点赞”和“一万小时定律”倒还算得上是新旧结合别具特色了。实际上丰台区的看图作文“捷径”和后面关于蒋英的“我自己就是艺术家、声乐教授。” 也都比较让人有话说。连顺义的“自媒体时代”和“慢运动”也是中规中矩。

总体来说，西城还是一贯比较保守的风格。期末考试的时候新题型基本未出现，本次一模大约也是基于稳妥的路线了。不过海淀区一直是考试改革的积极应对派，各种反应都非常的迅速，在西城如此平淡的作文情况下，让我们对海淀区的大作文拭目以待。

附各城区2015一模语文作文题

西城

六、本大题共2小题，共60分。

22、微写作(10分)

阅读下面文字，从后面三个题目中任选一题按要求作答，不超过150字。

汉字，是世界上最古老、最富有文化传统同时也最具形象美感的文字之一。目前汉字书写中的问题非常突出，这引起了社会各方面的关注。

①一位初学汉语的外国朋友有兴趣了解汉字，请写一段文字向他介绍汉字的特点。

要求：内容明确具体，语言简洁。

②校学生会建议设立本校“汉字书写日”，请写一段文字阐述提交这一建议的原因。

要求：理由充分合理 ，有感召力。

③很多人在汉字书写中都有自己的独特体验，请写一段文字来抒发自己对汉字的情感。

要求：情感健康真挚，富有文采。

23、作文(50分)

纷繁的生活中，很多事物需要我们真诚面对 并深入思考。

请在“自由”“英雄”“经典”和“青春”中任选一词，也可以自拟一词，填入下面横线中任意一处并以其为题，写一篇不少于700字的文章，自定文体(诗歌除外)。

①真正的_________ ②__________之窘

I have a best friend, I can only use one word to describe her - thin. Her fingers can be like a bamboo, face on both sides of the narrow if sunken go in, let a person feel she has a cold and lonely, but her personality, on the contrary, she is a kind and brave man, she is my good friend -- small kaori.

One day, she took a walk through in the class, found that there are a lot of garbage on the ground, he picked up the broom swept up. After a while, a classmate came and said to her: "alas! Monitor to this extent, poor thing." He said with a smile: "everybody is responsible for keep the classroom environment health, I am the class monitor, it should be a good start. Even if Im not the monitor, I will do it."

In a short time, the whole class was her clean, I used to ask her: "dont you tired?" She did not cash out in front of me tired, but happy said: "in such a good learning in the classroom, again tired also worth it."

Her behavior and talk made me feel ashamed of myself, I can see so much waste in our class is not clean. Shes right, to do well every classmate, he must do. The composition

My friend is a very sensible monitor, let I touched her helpful phenomena, from here, I know that shes every move add beauty to the class, she let you felt happy because of her presence.

我有一个要好的朋友，我只可以用一个字来形容她——瘦。她的手指可像一枝竹子一样，脸狭两边好像凹了进去，让人觉得她有一种冷漠、孤独的样子，但她的性格恰恰相反，她是一个善良、勇敢的人，她就是我的好朋友——小薰。

有一天，她在班里走了走，发现地上有许多垃圾，便拿起扫把扫起来。过了一会儿，有一个同学走过来对她说：“唉!班长沦落到这种地步啊，真可怜。”他微笑着说：“保持课室环境卫生人人有责，我是这个班的班长，更应该带好头做起。就算我不是班长，我也会这样做。”

不一会儿，整个班被她打扫得干干净净，我过去问她：“你不累吗?”她在我面前没有变现出累的样子，而是开心的说：“能够在一个这样好的教室里学习，再累也值得。”

她的行为和说话让我感到惭愧，我看见我们班这么多垃圾也不清洁一下。她说得对，要每一个同学做好，自己必须做好。作文

我的朋友是一个非常懂事的班长，她乐于助人的现象让我感动，从这里我知道：她的一举一动都为班级增添美丽，她让大家因为她的存在而感到幸福。

今天，我和爸爸一起去扫墓，坐爸爸的车一起去山上。

Today, I and my father went to sweep the tombs, sitting in my fathers car to go to the mountain.

在坐车的路上，我望着窗外的风景。窗外的风景真美，花草树木，绿树丛阴。

In the car on the road, I looked at the scenery outside the window. The scenery is beautiful, the flowers and trees, shade of green trees.

“清明时节雨纷纷。”我们踏着泥腻的山路，走到山上，终于到了太公，太婆的墓前，爷爷点了一把香，给了我们每人三根香，在太公，太婆墓下拜了拜。

"Qingming Festival have rain." We follow the mud with the mountain, go to the mountain, and finally to the squire, womans tomb, Grandpa lit incense, give each of us three stick of incense, in the space, woman tomb the worship.

我们拜完之后，就开始给太公，太婆烧阴间的钞票和金银财宝，烧完了以后，我们又再次拜了一拜，才依依不舍地离去。

When we worship, began to burn the woman too, money and treasures, burnt out, once again we worship a worship, to be reluctant to part.

My Friend-我的朋友

John is the most diligent student in our class.He is one of my friends.As a matter of fact,he gets along with his classmates.He might spend just five to ten minutes talking to you once in a long while,but he talks with enthusiasm and energy,and he likes to share his thinking and ideas with you.He is honest; he does not like to waste his time and energy.He never appears sleepy and tired in the classroom.He always hands in homework on time and also does well in his examinations,yet he has time practicing playing football and his violin skill.I admire him.I hope I can be as diligent as he is; John is persistent,attentive,and energetic.

John是我们班上最勤奋的学生.他也是我的一个朋友.实际上,他和班上的同学相处的都很融洽.也许过好长时间他才只是花5分钟或10分钟和你聊天,但是他的谈话充满了活力和热情,而且他喜欢和你分享他的思想和想法.他是诚实的,他不会无谓的浪费他的时间和精力.在教室里,他从没有显得困倦或是疲惫.他常常会按时交作业,考试中也会取得好成绩,然而他仍会有时间踢足球和练小提琴.我羡慕他,我希望自己能象他那样勤奋.John是个执着、专注、充满活力的人

[题目是我的朋友的英语作文及翻译

阅读下面的文字，按照要求作文。

微博上流传着一个段子：一部高档手机，70%的功能都是没用的;一款高档轿车，70%的速度都是多余的;一栋豪华别墅，70%的房间都是空闲的。你是否也会恍然大悟：哦，是这么回事!环视一下自己，你那高配置的生活里，有多少资源待在角落里被闲置着，浪费着?

也许是时候，我们把身段放低一点儿，要求降低一点儿了。低配一点儿，越来越成为年轻人的生活态度，不勉强，不逞强，有力掌控自己的生活，这才是真正的幸福人生。

请以“低配人生”为题写一篇不少于800字的文章。

优秀作文素材：【低配人生】

拥有一颗闪亮的星星，何必再去奢望满天繁星?拥有一株芳香的鲜花，何必再去要求整个春天?降低物欲要求，低配人生才是幸福人生。

宁静淡泊是她的人生基调，生活虽然简单，但她过得幸福安然。没有豪华别墅，也没有高端大气的书房，可杨绛先生依旧天天手持书卷。家中没有书房却处处是书房，卧室、客厅都摆着书架，上面慢慢都是书。低配的生活中，她有力掌控了自己的人生，《走在人生边上》《我们仨》屡屡惊艳世人。

我热爱大自然，其次就是艺术。我不与谁争，和谁争我都不屑。我双手炙烤着生命之火取暖，火萎了，我也准备走了......,朴实无华的语言一如先生那淡泊简朴的低配人生，但正是这份淡泊质朴让我们读懂了生命的真谛。低配生活，低的是纷扰的物质生活，高的是面对生活的从容和淡泊!

安于低配人生的人，不会过分在乎鲜花和掌声，也不会过分注重名利和世人的评价。享受低配人生的人，对自身要求严格，却不会过分要求生活。

中国光学之父,王大珩为中国科研事业的建设和发展做出极大贡献。面对,中国光学之父,的美誉，他却说自己只是一根火柴，不能照亮整个中国，而努力和成绩是大家的。多么低调的语言，多么高尚的人格!王大珩、钱学森、邓稼先，我们中国正是因为有这样一根根不追求物质享受，过着艰苦朴素的生活却燃烧自己，照亮世界的,火柴,，才能取得今日之成绩。低配人生，低的是自己的物质生活，高的是燃烧自己奉献祖国的情操!

而如今，在日趋纷繁的社会中，我们更需要有低配的生活态度。,表哥,,房叔,们，物质如此丰富，为何生活还是如此忐忑?选秀美女们，为何坐进了宝马，还要哭泣，还要对坐在自行车上笑的生活有一点留恋和向往?因为，再丰富的物质生活也满足不了精神需求，高配置的生活代表不了思想的高度。与其让那么多宝贵的资源在角落里闲置，与其为了那物质的享受而放弃尊严甚至原则，不如降低对物质的要求，放慢追逐名利的脚步，过低配人生，掌控幸福生活。

低配人生不是对生活一无所求，而是不过分要求;低配人生不是小富即安、胸无大志，而是懂得满足，适可而止。低配人生是新一代年轻人对生活应有的态度，降低一点物质要求，有力掌控自己的生活，这才是真正的幸福人生。

高考将至，环保作文已成为社会热点。小编整理了几篇相关环保的英语话题作文，快来看看吧。

英语环保作文预测一

最近，你是吴明，和笔友李华都很关注“可持续发展”的话题。现在你写一封信给他，谈谈江苏的省情，介绍耕地的使用及保护的情况。

词数：150左右。信的开头号和结尾已经给出。必须包含以下要点：

1、江苏是我国经济发达的省份之一，位于我国的东部，人口多，占地少。

人口：7000多万;土地面积：10多万平方公里。自然资源贫乏。

2、随着经济的发展和人口的增长，越来越多的良田被征用来建造住房和工厂。耕地面积逐年减少。

3、人们正认识到保护耕地的重要性，政府积极采取措施禁止非法用地。

4、保护土地资源，是每个公民应尽义务，也是造福子孙后代的需要。

Dear Li Hua,

How are you? With this letter I’d like to introduce my hometown—Jiangsu Province to you .Situated in the east of China, Jiangsu is one of the most developed provinces of our country. It is a province with a large population of 70,000,000 but not much farmland for people to live on, and it lacks natural resources with an area of more than 100,000 km2 .

With the development of economy and growth of its population, more and more good farmland has been used to build houses and factories. As a result, farmland is decreasing year by year.

Fortunately people are realizing the importance of protecting farmland and the government has taken measures to stop the illegal use of farmland.

In my opinion, it’s our duty to protect our farmland as well as our obligation to benefit the younger generations.

Looking forward to your reply.

Best wishes.

Yours

英语环保作文预测二

假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike从电视上得知前段时间北京多个地方出现雾霾(haze)，非常担心，写E-mail询问有关情况，请回复。回复应包括以下要点：

1.实况描述;

2.对生活造成的影响;

3.成因简析与教训;

4.你个人的情况。

One possible version:

Dear Mike，

Thank you very much for your concern. Last month several places in Beijing were blanketed(覆盖)with thick yellow fog. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. Traffic jams were commonly seen in the streets. Many people, especially children .

{C}niors, even found it difficult to breathe. As a result, local hospitals were crowded with people who had problems with their noses and lungs. Part of the cause was the dry weather, but the severely damaged environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. Personally I didn’t get any health problems in the haze because I stayed mostly indoors. But to make a significant change we really have to do more to protect our environment. To live a better life.

Our life have to push on with the economy, but it wound be meaningless if we have to achieve it at the cost of our breathing air.

Regards!

Yours,

Li Hua

英语环保作文预测三

近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点：

1。不浪费粮食和纸张

2。尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋

3。毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用?

注意：

1。不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节;

2。词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数;

3。参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks

Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.

Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled.

Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.

关于英语环保作文的句子：

1) To cherish the environment is to love ourselves

2) 爱护环境就是爱护我们自己

3) I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation

4) 我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状

5) We are sure that we’ll win the battle

6) 我们坚信我们能赢得战斗

7) Keep our mountains green, the water clean, and the sky blue

8) 使我们山更绿，水更清，天更蓝

9) Our earths days are numbered without urgent help

10) 没有及时的帮助我们的地球就屈指可数了

11) (Sth)are bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blink eye to them

12) 如果我们继续睁一只眼闭一只眼的话，一定会有恶劣的后果

13) 近来环保已经引起了全球的关注。

14) Environmental protection has caused global concern recently

15) 我们应该马上采取措施来保护我们的环境免受污染

16) It’s high time we took immediate measures to protect our earth from being polluted

17) 每个人都应该提高保护地球的意识。

18) Everybody should raise the awareness that it’s our duty to protect our mother earth

19) 你不难发现每个人都在伤害地球，然而他们可能自己都没有意识到这一点。

20) You cannot difficultly see that everybody actually is causing damage to the mother earth, which , however, they may not be realizing

21) 无论如何我们不应该牺牲我们的环境来发展我们的经济。

22) On no account should we develop our economy at the cost of our environment

23) 我们不能否认每个人都曾破坏过环境，所以我们不能否认每个人都有责任来保护我们赖以生存的星球。

24) We can’t deny that everybody has done something to damage the nature, so we can’t deny that

25) everybody should take the responsibility for protecting our living planet

26) To cherish the environment is to love ourselves爱护环境就是爱护我们自己Water is the source of our lives水是生命之源

27) I make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状

28) Our government is doing its best to take measures to fight against pollution

29) 我们政府正努力制定措施与污染作斗争

30) We are sure that we’ll win the battle

31) 我们坚信我们能赢得战斗

32) Its high time that we should protect our environment from being polluted

33) 是时候我们应该防止环境污染了

在紧张的高三备考阶段，英语老师为了提高复习效率，广泛征求学生意见。假如你叫张华，请根据以下提示，给英语老师写封信，表达你们的需求和建议。

·适当放慢进度，留出思考时间

·反复训练重要、易错知识点

·指导方法

·减少作业量以保证质量

·给予鼓励

注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;

3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation.

______________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________

范文(One possible version)

Dear Mr. Wang,

We’re so pleased that you are willing to share our views.

In the course of the general revision, what we need is solid foundation. As you know, we didn’t learn well enough in the first two years, so please slow down and make sure we have really mastered something. Besides, we need a little more time to think for ourselves. As for those important points which also make us confused, would you please give us more practice in case we forget? Meanwhile, we need your instruction, for example, in how to write in natural English. I still have another request: assign us less homework in order that we can do it more efficiently.

By the way, we often feel frustrated, which has a very bad effect on our study. We would appreciate it if you would give us some encouragement from time to time.

以下是由语文迷网小精心整理提供的关于高考的英语写作技巧，一起来看看吧。

一、要善于模仿

一些同学的办法往往是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，真正的模仿重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的词汇。有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在高考(课程)写作中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在中国如此的流行：“The bicycle is very popular in China for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”。如果要表示“总是能够”的概念，很多同学提笔就会写can always，但理想的句子应该是用双重否定表示强烈的肯定，用never fail to。

二、要灵活变通

在批改过上万份同学们英语(课程)作文中，经常能发现一些将中文生硬地翻译成英文的表达法。有一句话叫做“立志如山，行道如水”，写英文作文，一定要有决心把它写好，有信心把意思表达清楚，这是“立志如山”;但关键是遇到问题时要有个灵活的态度，能像流水一样变通解决问题。有个翻译界的故事说：在某大型国际会议的招待会上，一道菜是用鸡蛋做的。与会的客人问翻译：“What is it made of”本来是非常简单的一个问题，结果翻译太紧张，忘了“egg”这个词，但是他急中生智，回答：“It is made of Miss Hen’s son.”这里，就是一个灵活变通的范例。绕道表达，是写作中应该常常运用的一种方法。

三、要细心观察

注意英语中一些表达上的习惯。比如在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn’t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，阿拉伯数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。

许多同学在写作文时，习惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。

四、要心有全局

英文写作如果结构意识良好，应试写作就简化成为一个填空的过程了，适当地填入观点、素材，文章就自然而然立起来了。

临考在即，同学们要牢记英语写作的基本要领，特编顺口溜如下：细审题，巧构思，列要点，防遗漏。写日记，同汉语;书信，通知格式要牢记。看清图表细梳理，写人记事按顺序;完稿后查遗漏，整洁干净莫忘记。

一、素材

言语类

(一)名人名言

1.愚蠢的人，从远处寻找幸福;聪慧的人，从脚下根植幸福。——詹姆斯?奥本海姆

2.拥有未来幸福的最好办法，就是尽可能地享受今天的幸福。——查尔斯?W?埃利奥特

3.幸福是一种习惯，培养它。——埃尔伯特?哈伯德

4.幸福不在于你拥有什么或者你是什么人，而在于你正在做什么。

——莉莲?艾克勒?沃森【美】

5.每个人都是自己幸福的缔造者。——艾普斯?克劳迪厄斯【美】

6.幸福不在于拥有金钱，而在于成功的喜悦和创造的激情。——富兰克林?D?罗斯福【美】

7.一只脚跟踩扁了紫罗兰，而它却把香味留在那脚跟上，这就是宽容。

——安德鲁 马修斯

8.所谓幸福，是在于认清一个人的限度而安于这个限度。——罗曼?罗兰

9.一个知足的人生活才能美满。——狄更斯

(二)妙语集锦

23.就算是天气转凉了，我要送我的朋友们一件外套：口袋叫温暖;领子叫关怀;袖子叫体贴;扣子叫思念;让这件外套紧紧伴着朋友渡过每一分每一秒，一定要幸福喔!——手机短信

24.这是心的呼唤，这是爱的奉献;这是人间的春风，这是生命的源泉;再没有心的沙漠，再没有爱的荒原;死神也望而却步，幸福之花处处开遍;啊---只要人人都献出一点爱，世界将变成美好的人间……——韦唯《爱的奉献》 25.成长的路上，总有许多相识不相识的人带给你情感的滋润、难忘的教益，不管什么时候想起，总有一份感动、一缕甜蜜溢满心田……

26.有一位社会调查员，在调查幸福是什么时，有人回答说：“能关爱他人。”能关爱一个人，是一种幸福，这种幸福不仅仅是帮助别人，了解别人，更是一种拓宽心胸之后的畅快。送人玫瑰，手留余香。

27.一个整天想着去算计别人的人，即使他成功了，可他能感到极致的快乐与幸福吗?不会，因为狭窄的心胸把他的灵魂捆得太紧。学会关爱一个人，是放开心胸的开始，是幸福的开始。日子久了，容纳的东西多了，幸福便洋溢在身边。

28.关爱他人，你能提高自己的修养;关爱他人，你能感到幸福天天存在。关爱他人，你能发现生活的乐趣与美;关爱他人——你的心会更宽广，眼更明亮!

事例类

寓言故事

给幸福画一条底线

作家史铁生曾写道：“生病的经验是一步步懂得满足。发烧了，才知道不发烧的日子多么清爽。咳嗽了，才体会不咳嗽的嗓子多么安详。刚坐上轮椅时，我老想，不能直立行走岂不把人的特点搞丢了?便觉天昏地暗，等又生出褥疮，一连数日只能歪七扭八地躺着，才看见端坐的日子其实多么晴朗。后来又患尿毒症，经常昏昏然不能思想，就更加怀恋起往日时光。终于醒悟：其实每时每刻我们都是幸运的，任何灾难前面都可能再加上一个‘更’字。”

从心底说出这话的人，一定吃尽了“疾病”或“便宜”的苦头，所以才把自己的“幸福底线”定得如此之低。但当他们意识到什么是真正幸福的时候，生命留给他们享受幸福的时间已经少得不能再少。许多人一生在茫茫红尘中奔走，陷在名与利的泥潭里不能自拔，蓦然回首，才发现真正的幸福恰恰就在出发的原点，而当初他们却坚信它在更远的地方。

所以，从今天起，我们应该给自己的幸福画一条最浅的底线，去学会从最平常的日子、最琐碎的事情里品尝幸福的滋味。

[点拨]不错，每时每刻我们都是幸运的，应该把“幸福的底线”定的很低，才可以感受到生活的美好和幸福。名利是身外之物，我们应该学会从“最平常的日子、最琐碎的事情里品尝幸福的滋味”。

[适用话题]这个个素材可以用在“珍惜、幸福、生活”为主题的作文中。

10.越是别人都羡慕我的幸福，我就觉得这幸福更有滋味。——巴尔扎克

11.承担更大的责任，他们就更加幸福。——雨果

12.巨大的幸福压弯了腰。他感觉他的四肢软弱无力;在他的胜利面前，这人从来没有被危险动摇过

的人，开始战栗起来。——雨果

13.因为真正的幸福就是：成为完全客观，从而体现自己的抱负。——罗曼?罗兰

14.世界上没有幸福，但有自由和宁静。——普希金

15.我们的幸福与否，决不能凭借我们获得了或者丧失了什么，而只能在于我们自身怎样。——罗曼?罗兰

16.哪里有生活，哪里就有幸福。越往前去，它就越多，越多。——罗曼?罗兰

17.幸福并不存在于外在的因素，而是以我们对外界原因的态度为转移，一个吃苦耐劳惯了的人就不可能不幸福。——托尔斯泰

18.我一生中，还从未尝到一滴没有掺和毒汁的幸福。——高尔基

19.太阳是幸福的，因为它光芒四射;海也是幸福的，因为它反射着太阳欢乐的光芒。——高尔基

20.幸福只不过是一种期待。——高尔基

21.幸福这东西就像星星一样，黑暗是遮不住它们的，总会有空隙可寻。我们在人生的历程中，不管犯了多少过错，产生过多少误解，然而，在过错和误解的空隙之中，不正闪烁着幸福之光吗?——泰戈尔

22.要使孩子们从小就懂得和领会到：他的每一步、每一个行动都会在他身边的人——同志、父母、教师和“陌生者”的精神生活引起反响。只有当他不给别人带来灾难，不欺负和扰乱别人时，才能成为一个生活得平静而又幸福的人。——苏霍姆林斯基

1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

People differ about____ .Some people hold that ____.

2.俗话说(常言道)……，它是老一辈人的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying that______. Its the experience of the older generation，however，it is still the case even today.

3.现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have done damage to our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.

4.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people care for ______ because ______. Besides，______.

5.任何事物都是有两面，……也是如此。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and so does ____，it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为……，在他们看来，……

People’s views about ______ vary from person to person. Some people think that ______.To them,_____.

7.人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Humans are now confronted with a big problem: ______ which is becoming more and more serious.

8.……已成为人们担忧的事情，特别是在年青人当中，并且引发了激烈的辩论。

______ has become a public concern，especially among the young, and thus heated debates are stimulated.

9.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢?

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ . Obviously，______，but whats the reason behind?