作文给英语老师的一封信热门20篇

我的英语老师非常年轻，应该是我所有的老师中最年轻的老师了，她好像毕业没有几年，就来到了我们学校，而且我们可能是她的第一批学生呢！英语老师姓康，讲课绘声绘色，我们都觉得她是一个好老师。

康老师讲课有好多特点，我一个一个讲给你们听。第一个特点就是发音标准。康老师的英语发音特别标准，而且非常柔和，谁听了都觉得好听。妈妈说在康老师的影响下，我的英语发音也比以前标准了。

第二点就是先进。康老师好像是八零后，所以喜欢用幻灯片配合着讲课，我感觉这样学的更快乐。而且康老师还有配套的光碟。在动画中学课文，我感觉更有兴趣。

特点三是善于互动。康老师特别善于与我们互动，几乎每节课都会做几个小游戏，使得课堂中中充满欢乐。

特点四是吸引人。康老师讲课为什么吸引人呢？因为老师还喜欢用肢体配合。比如学大熊猫这个单词，老师就会一边念着单词，一边学大熊猫的样子，这样，我们也容易明白。

还有一个特点，康老师讲课、布置作业都比较宽松。比如别的老师都是布置这篇文章读几遍，而康老师则是规定读熟，在读几遍的地方画一条横线，我们自己决定，这样，我们应该是心理上感觉少一些。

康老师已经教了我们两年了，在这两年中，也发生了许许多多的事情，可能我对老师的评价随着时间在变化。但是有一点是可以肯定的：康老师是我见过的最好的英语老师了。师恩难忘，我会牢记在小学教了我们好几年的康老师。

Dear teacher, As the Spring Festival is coming. I wish you to have a good mood to spend this festival .Time flies fast , the pasy days always remind me of you. Still now , I can still remember the words you have said to me which encouraged me a lot . Your encouraging words are still inspiring me . Under your care and education, Ive already enterd a new school .As a sdudent , Im proud that I used to have such a good teacher and thats also the reason why I choose to be an English teacher. I will sduty hard and make use of my knowledge to repay your hard work and behave myself as you. In the future, I will also treat my students with patience and encouragement . With my best wishes! Sincerely,.

In my middle school I had many good teachers, but Mr. Zhang was the one I partic ularly liked and respected. He was a middle-aged intellectual who lived a simple and hard working life but was always optimistic and spared no effort in teaching us.

He was a scholar of Chinese literature and history. We felt that he knew everything in this field. His knowledge and eloquence, as well as his klndness, made his lectures so attrative and touching that we were reluctant to hear the bell ringing to dismiss the class.

One lesson he gave us that I cannot forget concerned some quotations from a pupil of Confucius, who always felt at ease in spite of his life of abject poverty. In his lecture, Mr. Zhang revealed his true feelings in devoting himself to teaching all his life. This deeply moved us all.

I respect Mr. Zhang and should learn from his noble spirit and do my best to study hard for our great socialist country.

我的英语老师中等个子，不胖也不瘦，她长着一双明亮的大眼睛，好像会说话似的。当你做了不应该做的事时，她就会用责备的眼神盯你好一会，知道你低下头来承认错误为止；当你做了令她高兴的好 事时，她便用含笑的眼睛足足看你两分钟，好像是在欣赏一件什么宝贝似的。

她对我们的学习，要求很严厉：课文要背熟，句子要会写，单词要记牢。有一次，有位同学单词不过关，老师让他练会，可是他直到放学也没练。于是放学后老师就陪着他练，知道练会为止。就这样 不是我们班的每一个同学成绩落后。

一次，英语老师布置了一个非常非常多的作业：M1—M10的单词一词8个，放学前必交！而当时已是第六节课！同学们赶紧奋笔疾书，写啊——为了节省时间，同学们看了一眼单词后，默记下来，然后快 速地写八遍。终于，大家都交上了作业。这时大家发现：默写的单词都记下来了！原来这是老师让我们背住单词的方法！

可有时，他还会闹出一些小笑话。有一次，老师给我们讲练习册，本来是要讲第一单元和第二单元的，可是她刚讲完第一单元就把练习册给收了。同学们七嘴八舌地说：“老师，第二单元还没讲呢！ ”“对呀！”“对呀！”老师这才恍然大悟：“快！快把练习册传下去！”我们都笑个不停。

这就是我们的英语老师，有可亲又可敬。

My English teacher is a young lady. Her name is Kate. She looks beautiful. Her English is very good. She teaches us many things, and she likes to introduce foreign countries to us. She works very hard, because she likes teaching. I like her spoken English. She has good pronunciation and writing. All of my classmates like her.

我的英语老师是一位年轻的女士。她的名字叫凯特，看上去很漂亮。她的英语很好，教了我们很多东西，而且她喜欢向我们介绍外国的国家。她工作很努力，因为她喜欢教书。我很喜欢她的口语，她的发音和书写都很好。所有的同学都喜欢她。

She was born for teaching and does a great jib. In her class, she can get her students involved in learning and doing exercises. They are attracted by the topics she gives and this makes her class lively. As a result, most students like to be in her class.

Li Xin is a good teacher not only because she has a good way of teaching, but also because she loves her students and never spoil them. She is kind and considerate, and is ready to help her students who meet with difficulties.

My teacher, Li Xin, is not only our good teacher, but also our best friend. We all like her and will remember her forever.

我的老师——李欣

李欣，23岁，新疆人，是一位年轻的中学英语老师，教书三年了。她身材苗条，长得秀气，脸上总挂着灿烂的笑容。

她天生就是教书的料。课上她能调动学生积极参与的兴趣。学生喜欢她给出的讨论话题，课堂气氛活跃。因此学生都很喜欢她的课。

李欣不仅教学方法不错，而且爱却不宠学生。她和蔼可亲，关心体贴，总热心帮助有困难的学生。

我的老师李欣不仅是我们的好老师，还是我们的好朋友，我们都很喜欢她并将永远记得她。

Dear Mr. X,

Hello!

You are the most respected teacher in my mind, although you are very

strict, but you put your heart on us. You work from dawn to dusk, thinking about

better teaching methods. You are like a candle, let me feel the infinite future

of the bright, but burned themselves.

Trees cant grow without sunshine, rain and dew, only their selfless

charity, will have a vibrant. The life of a flower is inseparable from the

earth. With the nutrition provided by the earth, there will be a beautiful and

moving flower. And our life, inseparable from the teacher, with your enthusiasm

to help, with your inculcate, will have our healthy growth... Thank you so much,

teacher! Shi-en is like a fish in water. In the past three years, you have

taught us with great care. Every one of your epigrams is still vividly in my

mind, which reminds me of a lot of things.

It is because of your education, we can have todays knowledge, will have

todays such a talent to learn, it is because of your care, we these "flowers of

the motherland" to healthy growth, it is because of your little teachings, we

understand the truth of life. You are like a tree, we thrive under your shade.

You give us care like a mother, let me feel very happy, let me have the interest

of learning, let me feel that you give endless strength, let me feel that you

are my rely on, let me feel inseparable from you. Teacher, our good grades

cannot do without your hard education, our good grades cannot do without your

careful cultivation. Every step forward is inseparable from your hard sweat.

Teacher, thank you for our serious and responsible education, thank you for

your concern about us, thank you for teaching us a lot of knowledge, thank you

for your selfless dedication to us, one thousand ten thousand "thank you" can

not return your teaching to us.

merry

A healthy body

Your students

敬爱的x老师：

您好!

您是我心目中最敬重的好老师，您虽然十分严厉，但是您把一颗心扑在我们身上。您起早贪黑，琢磨着更好的教学方法。您就像蜡烛一样，让我感到前途无限的光明，却燃烧了自己。

树木的成长，离不开阳光雨露，只有他们无私的施舍，才会有生机勃勃。花朵的生活，离不开大地，有了大地提供的营养，才会有花儿的艳丽动人。而我们的生活，离不开老师，有了您的热情帮助，有了您的谆谆教诲，才会有我们的健康成长……老师，太谢谢您了!师恩如鱼得水，这三年来，您苦口婆心的教育我们，您的每一句金石良言，我一直还历历在目，由此让我想起了很多很多。

正因为有您的教育，我们才能有今天的见识，才会有今天这样的才学，正因为您的呵护，我们这些“祖国的花朵”才能健康的成长，正因为您的点滴教诲，才使我们明白做人的道理。您好比大树，我们在您的树荫下茁壮成长。您给了我们像妈妈一样的关怀，让我觉得无比幸福，让我有了学习的兴趣，让我觉得您给了无穷无尽的力量，让我觉得您是我的依靠，让我觉得离不开您了。老师，我们的好成绩离不开您的辛苦教育，我们的好成绩更少不了您的细心培养。我们每前进一步，都离不开您洒下的辛勤汗水。

老师，谢谢您对我们认真负责的教育，谢谢您对我们的关心，谢谢您教给了我们许多知识，谢谢您对我们无私的奉献，一千声一万声“谢谢”都无法回报您对我们的教导。

敬祝

身体健康

您的学生

亲爱的邓老师：

您好!

最近工作愉快吗?我很想您，我最喜欢英语了。自从您开始教英语时，我的成绩从来都是90分以上。有一次，我考了97分，您奖给了我一个本，当您说;“李佳仪，这次考的不错!”时，我非常高兴，我一定要继续努力!

邓老师，我最不喜欢星期三。因为，那天没有英语课。还有一次，您让我们给们您写纸条，……第二节下课你叫我到你办公室,抱着我笑着说：“这里的作业确实很好，我什么时候对你不理睬了?”我嘻嘻的笑了两声。您经常跟我拉手，您的手多么光滑，多么柔软。老师，您在我心中是最好的老师，我最喜欢您了!

祝您越来越年轻，越来越漂亮。

您的学生：李佳仪

A number of people will exert aprofound influence on children’ character-training, mental growth and future life. Parents, of course, are our first and foremost teachers. On balance, however, the irreplaceable role of teachers should not be ignored.

To my certain knowledge, instructors play an increasingly critical role in children’ academic study and impose a far more significant impact on social development compared with parents. First of all, students need teachers who would teach them logic, mathematics, literature, foreign language etc.. More importantly, as for them, because the majority of time is spent in the campus, teachers will impose a subtle impact on their cultivation of study habits or learning methods. Mr.Shine, let us say, is such a teacher, who not only imparts knowledge to their students but also helps them to cultivate good study habits. He proficient inprofessional knowledge summarizes the core of knowledge and has deeper insight into the common sense of education, allowing students to benefit a lot.

In sum, it is fortunate for students to encounter a responsible teacher. As we all know, a man without an education is an unfortunate victim of adverse circumstances, deprived of one of the greatest twentieth-century opportunities.

Teacher’s Day comes on September 10th every year. On the day we usually give our teachers cards to show our thanks. I thank them for helping me when I am in trouble, and I thank them for teaching me how to be a real man.

Of course they are very friendly to everyone. They always get on very well with their students. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. They love us very much and we love them,too.

每年的九月十日是教师节。在那天，我们通常送卡片采表示我们对老师的谢意。我感谢他们在我困难的时候帮助我，我感谢他们教会我怎样做人。

当然他们对所有的学生都很关心，他们与学生的关系非常融洽。他们不仅是我们的老师，而且还是我们的朋友。他们十分爱我们，而我们也非常敬爱他们。

[感恩老师教师节英语作文

我最喜爱的英语老师——汪老师。上汪老师的课，我总会被她的感情所左右。她不是演员，但她情感的微妙变化却似春末夏初变幻莫测的“云”，使我难忘。

这一天，汪老师又在投入地讲课。首先她在电脑上按出了这节课的内容，内容是让我们读出巧克力和花生小饼的英语单词。我们有许多人举起了小手，汪老师笑眯眯地请了我，我熟练地读了巧克力的英语单词，出乎意料的是汪老师从自己的小罐子里拿出了一颗巧克力放在我的桌子上当成奖励，我高兴极了。

后来，她又从讲台上拿出一罐的花生小饼，我们全班同学都高高地举起了56双手，汪老师又是高兴地让我们准确地读出了花生小饼的英语单词，每读一个就从手里掏出一个花生小饼奖励给我们。汪老师手上的零食都奖励给了我们，每个人脸上都洋溢着快乐，课堂的气氛真是好极了。最后，汪老师继续讲着下一个内容，她每讲一个内容都非常精彩、非常有趣，又能让我们简而易懂地记住句子和单词。

教室外面传来了下课的铃声，我知道这堂课又要结束了，恋恋不舍地说：“唉！怎么搞的，这节课的时间这么短，都还没过瘾呢。”汪老师的英语课真令人难忘啊……

敬爱的英语老师：

您好!

时间过得飞快，不知不觉中，一年半的时间很快就过去了，和你分离的时间马上就要来了。教室里似乎仍然回荡着您清脆洪亮的声音，同学们也似乎仍能感受到您的严格和慈爱。我们，在您的搀扶下，跨上了奔驰的骏马，进入人生下一段旅途。

小小的粉笔就是您的双手，上课的铃声就是您征程上的冲锋号角。为了我们您废寝忘食，为了我们您鞠躬尽瘁，无怨无悔。多少个日日夜夜你无眠，多少回风风雨雨你闯过。一路的酸甜苦辣，一路的欢声笑语，您与我们一起度过，我们的一声感激会让你甜蜜永久。您像蜡烛一样，燃烧自己，照亮别人。俗话说的好：“春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。老师是人类灵魂的工程师。”我喜欢看你为我们而高兴的样子，也喜欢看你为我们而激动的样子，个喜欢看你为我们而生气的样子，无论什么样子的你总是如此惹我喜爱。现在，我不仅会尊敬你，而且会把你看做我的好朋友，有福同享，有难同当。回想起以前：刚来这里，我们自我介绍，然后你上课使得喜怒哀乐我全都记得。虽然只有一年半，但我们相识相知，虽然只有一年半，但我们情深意长，我真有点舍不得。是您让我考100分，是您给我当英语科代表的机会，是您让我跨上了奔驰的骏马。您尽职尽责，铁面无私，作为组长也应该这样，我要向你学习。总之，千言万语道不尽，就让他化为一句话：“老师，我爱您;老师，您辛苦了!”希望你以后可以回来看看我们，我们班的活动也要来参加哦，同学们的精彩表演在等着你呢!

老师，感谢您用自己的生命之光，照亮了我们人生的旅途。下面请看语文迷为大家提供的关于老师的英语作文，希望对你有帮助。

You are like a third parent. We all love you and respect you.The primary purpose of education is not to teach you to earn your bread, but to make every mouthful sweet.

——James AngelWe all like having you as our teacher. You have our respect and gratefulness.This is Teachers Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers.

This profession deserves the special recognition and respect.

There is no more appropriate time than this to honor you and others in your chosen field. You have my eternal gratefulness. Have a happy Teachers Day.We are more thankful than we can express.

You have been a qualified teachers and even better friend. Thank you for all that you have done.

Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire.The man who can make hard things easy is the educator.Send you our everlasting feeling of gratefulneand thankfulneon this special day.A teacher affects eternity; he can never tell where his influence stops. — Henry AdamsIt is the most appropriate time to show you our thanks.This small gift is only a tiny token of our gratefulness. We all want to thank you.

I am truly grateful to you for what you have done.

Dear teacher, thank you for illuminating my voyage of life with your own light of life. My grateful sentiments come from the bottom of my heart.

The whole secret of the teachers force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you. One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.Thank you for ma-ki-ng learning not a dull thing but a great joy.We all pitched to buy this gift. We are all grateful to you. Without your unselfish dedica- tion could we achieve no suc- cetoday.Our beloved teacher, you are the spring shower that moistens our hearts. The love and care you have given us will encourage us to go through a long and arduous journey.You are not only a good teacher but our close friend. Thank you for helping us make something of our lives.My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher. On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me. What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view. On this day I honor you sincerely.

导语：从小到大，有哪个老师让你印象深刻呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

The person I admire best in the middle school is my head teacher.

He is a responsible person. He cares about us very much. He often tells us that we shouldn’t wait for what we want to come and we should try our best to go after what we want. He not only teaches us knowledge, but also tells us how to face difficulties and challenges, what to do with the career in the future and how to communicate with friends.

He is a strict person. He always says to us that details decide success or failure. Even if we make a small mistake, he will encourage us to deal with it and correct it in a proper way.

He is also an intellectual person. He is good at math and physics. Besides, he has a wide knowledge of literature and art. So he always gives us great help on our studies.

In short, he is a good teacher. He helps us understand how important the study is, inspire us to keep advancing, share the happiness and sorrow of our studies. With the help of such an excellent teacher, we will study better and more happily.

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在中学我最钦佩的人是我的班主任。

他是一个负责任的人。他非常关心我们。他经常告诉我们，我们不应该等待我们想要的东西，我们应该尽全力去追求我们想要的。他不仅教我们知识，而且告诉我们如何面对困难和挑战，如何对待未来的事业以及如何与朋友交流。

他是个严格的人。他总是对我们说细节决定成败。即使我们犯了一个小错误，他也会鼓励我们处理它，并以适当的方式改正它。

他也是一个知识分子。他擅长数学和物理。此外，他对文学和艺术有广博的知识。所以他总是在我们的学习上给我们很大的帮助。

简言之，他是一个好老师。他帮助我们了解学习是多么的重要，激励我们继续前进，分享我们学习的快乐和悲伤。在这样一位优秀教师的帮助下，我们会学得更好、更快乐。

I have a Chinses Teacher。 Her name is Lui Xiaohong。 She is from Lanchang。 She’s very active and strict。 She has two big eyes。 She’s very nice。But she is short。 She like to smile。 I don’t know what season she like。 Because I don’t know her very well。 Her class is very funny， I like it。

In a word， I love my Chinese Teacher。

自从我上了初中以来，我最喜欢上的课就是英语课。因为上英语课非常有趣。

我的英语老师姓寇，她非常的漂亮。寇老师个子不高，圆圆的脸，大大的眼睛，戴着一副近视镜。

今天的活动课上，英语课代表把昨天的英语练习册发下来了，我打开练习册,一个个鲜红的错号就映入我眼帘，这时候，我就特别难受，甚至开始讨厌英语课，讨厌英语老师。下节课就是英语课，我生怕老师对练习册上的答案。

上课铃响了，寇老师走了进来，我的心“咚咚”地跳着，只听见寇老师说：“同学们，拿出练习册，这节课我们来对练习册。”我最担心的事情发生了。我慢吞吞地掏出练习册，不情愿地翻开书。老师开始讲题了，我用手挡住书，低着头，不敢看老师的眼睛。这时候，寇老师突然咳嗽起来，而且声音越来越大，我小心翼翼的抬起头，发现寇老师的额头上出现了豆大的汗珠，我体会到了寇老师为我们上课是多么辛苦!我真想对寇老师说：“您辛苦了!”

这次期中考试，我的英语成绩很不理想，当寇老师看了我的成绩后，马上把我叫到了办公室，我本以为寇老师会批评我呢!每想到我刚走进办公室，寇老师就温和的把我叫到跟前，给我讲错题。我被感动了，我下定决心，一定要努力，考个好成绩，不会让寇老师失望!

功夫不负有心人，这次月考成绩，我考了98分，寇老师当着全班同学的面表扬了我。

我喜欢我的英语老师——寇老师。

我们班的英语杨老师，是一个活泼而又严肃的好老师。她那炯炯有神的大眼睛，一看就知道很有文化，经常扎着一个马尾辫，显得特别有精神，脸上常常面带温柔的微笑，让人觉得特别亲切。

以前，我英语成绩不好，自从杨老师教我们，我就喜欢上了英语，英语成绩也有了较大的提高。杨老师在学习上可关心我了，如果有不会的，她就亲自教我。老师就像蜡烛，点燃自己，照亮我们，我要好好谢谢我们的杨老师。记得有一次，上课我没好好听讲，还和前边的同学说起了小话。杨老师发现了说：“你有什么不懂的，就问我，不要在下面说悄悄话。”一句话说得我面红耳赤。我暗暗下定决心：以后再也不说悄悄话了。

如今，我们取得了好成绩，我们千万不能忘了老师，因为这都是老师培养和鼓励的结果。砀老师，你在我心中就远都是最美丽的，我会就远爱您!

刚开学，我们班上就来了个新的英语老师——熊老师。

熊老师瘦瘦的，鼻子上还架着一副白色的眼镜，黝黑的长发上有一个发卡。

第一天，熊老师刚走进教室，闹哄哄的教室立刻安静了下来，大家都目不转睛地望向这位新的英语老师。刚开始，熊老师的声音很小，几乎第一排的同学都听不见，好在熊老师有扩音器。看来熊老师还 有点“胆小”。

熊老师对我们的要求很高，要我们每个人听得懂、读得来，考试要考好。另外，熊老师还在班上分了小组，让每个小组比赛，来培养兴趣。结果，大家通过比赛都提高了成绩，有了学习英语的兴趣，看 来熊老师真有办法，我们慢慢喜欢熊老师了。

熊老师，她真好！

A great change is now taking place in higher education throughout our country。 Teachers are being held responsible as never before for how well they serve their students。 It has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students。 In some universities students＇ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness。

This， however， has caused great controversy。 Some are in favor of the rating system。 They hold that since students attend the teachers classes everyday， they should have their opinion about their teachers＇ effectiveness。 Others， on the contrary， are strongly against it。 They think that students＇ rating is easy to administer and score， but it also is easy to abuse。 They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students＇ rating forms。 Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials used are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject。These judgments require professional knowledge， which is best left for the teachers＇ colleagues。

I think students＇ rating of their teachers is necessary， but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers＇ performance。 Instead of rating the teachers＇ knowledge on the subject， students should be asked to estimate what they themselves have leaned in a course， and to report on such things as a teacher＇s ability to communicate with students， his relationship with students， and his ability to arouse interest in the subject。

[学生评价老师的英语作文

她长着一双炯炯有神的眼睛，看起来显得特别有智慧，在额头上一个迷人的斜流海总是用一个可爱又漂亮的小拤子，夹在一边，显得特别年轻﹑可爱，她还扎着一个高高的马尾辨，显得特别有精神，脸上挂着笑容，她就是我们的英语老师----郭延华。

英语老师在课上特别的严，就像一名交通警察，她会把“闯红灯”（搞小动作）和“乱摁喇叭”(讲话的学生)“车”（学生）抓起来。

英语老师对工作特别认真，在批改作业时就像一名安检员，她会把同学们生产的“产品”（作业）审查清楚，把“违规”（错误）的“产品”（作业）打回去“重新加工”（重新做一遍）。

英语老师上课特别有感情，读课本时总是带着音调，忽高忽低，就像被电子琴弹出来的一首首小歌，在弹得过程中，重音键和低音见分的那么清楚，老师讲的课那么丰富多彩，每一各章节都仿佛在我们的心里打开了一扇窗户，让我学到更多的知识，感受英语的乐趣。

从英语老师身上我领悟到了花儿的芬芳离不开园丁的勤劳，小草的翠绿离不开春雨的无私奉献，我们的茁壮成长离不开您的谆谆教导。

花儿以迷人的芬芳回报园丁，小草已浓浓的翠绿回报春雨，我们就以优异的成绩回报您----老师。

[我的英语老师作文450字

dear teacher,

how time flies! it is ahnost a month since i arrived here and began a new life as a university student. but all this time, i have been missing you and my dear school. i just can not tell you how grateful i am to you for the help you gave me during my preparation for the university entrance examination. now i will tell you something about my university and life here.

our university lies at the foot of mount zijin, in the eastern suburbs of nanjing city. the campus is very big,with a big sportsground surrounded by lots of modern classroom buildings. what have impressed me most are the big library and the well-equipped language lab. our campus is also very beautiful. there are quite a few well-kept gardens. every road is lined with trees. how happy we are to study in such an enviromnent!

life here is both busy and coloufful. we have classes every morning. in the afternoon, we either work in the laboratory or do assignments in the classroom. in the evening, we can go to talks or do reading in the library. this keeps us occupied most of the week. but on weekends, there are always many entertainments. we may go to the club to have a dance or go to the cinema to see a fihn. sometimes we may also hold a party to practise oral english. in a word, we like our life here very much.

are you still teaching one of the senior classes? i really think that the students in your class are lucky for they will certainly benefit greatly under your instruction. but take care not to overwork yourself. i do hope you will have a chance of visiting me here.

with best wishes for you and your family. i will be looking forward to hearing from you soon.

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。