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1000小学教师新年寄语
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+ 加入清单亲爱的同学们:
你们好!
再缤纷的焰火和欢快的乐曲中,新的一年向我们走来。辞旧迎新之际,我们总是百感交集、思绪万千。在新的一年,我们有许许多多的事情要做,有许许多多的任务要去完成,我们将面临新的挑战和新的机遇,不知你们是否已经意识到自己长大了,未来的道路要自己去走,要走的道路要付出艰苦努力,你是否已经做好了充分的思想准备?
我将以最诚挚的心意、用最吉祥的语言祝福你们,祝福每一位同学,祝同学们美梦成真,学习进步,身体健康!同学们,新年的阳光将洒在你们的身上,新年的春风将吹在你们的脸上,请坚信,我将和你们同行,因为我对你们的爱是那么深沉和执着! 在我的心中,你们早已如同我自己的孩子一样,为你们焦虑,为你们担忧,为你们的进步而欣喜万分,为你们的懈怠而忧心如焚。曾经,你们把那么信任的目光投向我。
今天,明天,我也将会用自己全部的知识、爱心与责任呵护着你们的成长。有人说饥饿时食物最美、疾病时健康最美、无助时朋友最美,而困惑时老师是最美的,老师的心会对你们每一个孩子敞开着。我愿意与大家共同奋战、策马扬鞭、张帆启航,直抵那胜利的彼岸!
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篇1:小学一年级英语作文:Thesea
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+ 加入清单What do know about the sea? Some people have seen it but others havent. The sea looks beautiful on a fine sunny day and it can be very tough when there is a strong wind. What other things do you know about it? Of course, the sea is very large. In the world there is more sea than land. If you have swum in the sea, you know that the sea is salty. Rivers carry salt from the land into the sea. Some places of the sea are saltier than the other places. Do you know the Dead Sea? It is so salty that you cant sink when you are in the water! And fish cannot live in it!
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关于海洋有什么了解?有些人见过它,但有些人还没有看到。在晴朗的天气里,大海看起来很美,大风时会很困难。你还知道其他什么事情吗?当然,大海很大。世界上有比陆地更多的海洋。如果你在大海中游泳,你知道海水是咸的。河流把盐从陆地运到海里。有些地方的海水都比其他地方的咸。你知道死海吗?它太咸了,当你在水里的时候你是不会下沉的!鱼不能生活在里面!
篇2:我的朋友小学英语写人作文
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+ 加入清单I have a nice friend. His name is Roy. He lives in XieQiao. He’s 12 years old and his birthday is in March. He speaks Chinese. He can speak English, too. He’s short. His hair is short. He wears a pair of yellow glasses. He likes swimming in the river in summer. Swimming can make him happy. His math and English are very good. Sometimes he teaches me math. Usually I read books with him. He will be my good friend forever.
我有一个很好的朋友。他的名字叫罗伊。他住在谢桥。他12岁,他的生日是在3月。他会说汉语也会说英语。他不高。他的头发是短的。他带着一副黄色的眼镜。他喜欢在夏天到河里游泳。游泳能使他开心。他的数学和英语都很好。有时他教我数学。我常常跟他一起看书。他永远都是我的好朋友。
篇3:小学教师教学周记
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+ 加入清单不知道当时我出于什么样的冲动想法,去做了你们的老师.孩子们,我真的没有想过我会站在讲台上为你们讲语文,讲算术,讲故事...
我开始以为只是单纯过来看看大家,不要你们太放肆就好了,结果...成了你们的老师.
孩子们,你们知道吗?我每天最开心的时候就是我来教室的时候,你们围过来争先恐后地喊"老师好"的时刻,那种感觉真的是很幸福,很幸福...不知道为什么,老师写到这句话的时候,脸颊有滚烫的东西落下来...因为老师突然觉得时间很快.
记得第一天来看你们的时候,说实话,老师在讲台上的时候很紧张,虽然我装做很镇定...我记得当时有人跟我唱反调,老师当时很气愤,有点想一走了之,但是最后事实证明老师没有错,你们很喜欢老师.
第一天老师给你们讲了白雪公主的故事你们还记得吗?看着你们那样认真的表情,老师不仅很有成就感,而且当时就喜欢上了你们这群单纯可爱的孩子.
第二天,老师来很晚,听说你们一早就在问老师怎么还没有来,听到这样的话,老师心里很温暖,因为我们认识只有一天.
第三天的时候,老师一走进学校你们就疯扑过来,牵我的手,围住我,说实话,那么多人把我包围住真的还有一点点尴尬,但是老师保证,更多的开心.
第四天,老师教给你们讲了一些汉字,你们还记得吗?下次如果有机会,我回来还会考你们哦.然后老师给你们讲的成语故事,名字对于你们的记忆难了一点,"狐假虎威"要记好哦.下次回来,老师还要请同学讲给老师听呢.
时间很快,今天是最后一天了.老师特意起很早,想给你们一个很好的结束.虽然前一晚睡很晚.老师来的时候你们还在疯,你们没有注意到老师,但是当你们发现我走进教室的时候,你们还是露出了欣喜的声音,老师很开心.今天给大家讲的1-10以内的数字你们都记好了吗?不会再告诉我1+3=5了吧.你们很聪明.真的!
于是时间就这样走到了尾声,从来没有感受到一周星期如此之快,当老师上午放学告诉你们,今天是老师给你们讲的最后一堂课的时候,你们沉默了,老师知道,你们还小,很多感情无法表达,但是老师从你们的沉默中读出了你们想说的话...可是老师要很抱歉也很遗憾的对大家说,老师没有来得及跟你们道别,反正你们也不明白分别的意思,反而老师怕自己会在你们面前丢脸(老师此刻有点控制不住自己的感情,对不起)
老师承认,你们真的很调皮,你们甚至不怕我,和我疯,但是我是老师,我可不能被你们操控了,要不然,老师比你们还疯呢.老师也承认,有好几次,有点生气,你们不认真上课,你们总和我顶嘴,还总是在下面影响我上课,所以老师也骂过你们一些孩子,但是现在想起来,不正是这些单纯和幼稚才真正是属于你们最大的财富吗?
因为你们,我想起了我的童年,我曾经也和你们一样,走路蹒跚,撒丫子满操场的跑,在地上打滚,毫不顾及衣服弄脏的到处爬来爬去.那个时候好象真的是什么都不用想,什么都不用考虑,就算死哭活哭不要坐到这里,等不到几分钟,看着大家玩得高兴,自己也什么都忘了,脸上还挂着泪珠就又疯跑去了.这就是童年,这么简单,这么晴朗,这么快乐...可是人为什么要长大.
孩子们,好好加油吧,因为老师看得出来你们真的都很聪明,说不定在很久以后你们中间会出现一个状元,一个比尔盖茨哦.老师没有和大家照相,因为老师会有点害怕在以后的日子里看到这样的照片,因为老师是很敏感很脆弱的,你们不懂这两个词的意思,等你们长大就明白了.
恩,调整了一下,因为刚才真的觉得很想孩子们,觉得还有好多知识没有教给你们,还有好多故事没有讲给你们听...
孩子们,你们真的很可爱,你们生活的每一个细节都深深的印在我的记忆里,虽然时间短暂,但是真的真的,你们的天真,你们的纯朴,你们的幼稚,你们的可爱都成为了我这个寒假很珍贵的收获.我想,这比起我在电台代班,比起我去参加文艺活动都要有意义很多很多.老师现在眼睛好痛,你们让我体会了久违了"排水健康法",谢谢~
孩子们,要答应老师,以后的日子里要好好的听你们老师的话,要好好保护自己,希望换个时间还能和你们见面,你们要让老师看到你们的进步哦.
还是很习惯你们叫我老师,还是很习惯一靠近学校就有你们闹喳喳的声音,还是很习惯一走进校园就有你们扑过来牵住我的手,把我包围住,争先恐后的喊"老师好".还是很习惯你们什么事情都向老师汇报,还是很习惯你们把老师当做很厉害的人物.你们要记得老师给你们讲的故事,教给你们的汉字和算术哦,要记得老师教给你们的礼貌和好习惯.要记得你们的墙壁上有老师的杰作,要记得老师我哦...
好啦,孩子们,此刻你们已经进入梦乡了吧.老师很高兴能给你们上一个星期的课.老师在这里为你们写下老师人生里的第一篇教师周记.送给你们喜欢的"小白船",虽然这个版本你们一定听不懂,老师听到这首歌会想起你们每一个细节,包括笑,包括哭,包括在操场疯跑追逐.包括你们唱歌参差不齐的声响,包括闹哄哄的教室,包括你们认真跳舞的表情,包括你们装做端正坐姿的样子,包括试图翻过铁栅栏,包括趴在栅栏上小小的影子.时间很快,老师也该要回自己的学校做一名学生了,或许这篇文章老师写得很乱,或许你们看来稀松平常,或许你们并没有很了解老师,但是这对于老师真的是很大的财富,至少那见面时的一声"老师好"会让老师想念很久很久,老师离开以后,你们会想老师吗?
篇4:小学教师个人寄语大全
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+ 加入清单励志的寄语可以给予我们很大正能量,以下是小编整理的小学教师个人寄语大全,欢迎阅读参考!
1、其实理想是完美的,但没有意志,理想但是是瞬间即逝的彩虹。
2、我们人生的旅途并非花团锦簇,坎坷磨难常常使你以伤痕累累来诠释,而生活的热情不能就此冷却,路,还得走下去。
3、如果你聪明好学,学习踏实,作业认真,自觉守纪。望以后多参加群众活动,变得活泼开朗些!
4、你像个永远长不大的小不点儿,活泼开朗,谑而不虐。老师最喜欢你在课堂上转动眼珠认真思考的模样,可老师又担心你的马虎和粗心会使你聪明反被聪明误。期待着你能树立远大的目标,并朝此目标跑步前进,老师将是你强有力的支持者!
5、其实在老师的眼中你是个朴实天真活泼可爱文质彬彬的男孩。比大海更广阔的是人的胸怀,对同学多一分宽容,少一分计较,会使你成为一个真正的男子汉。你聪明好强,爱唱歌,爱学习,这些都是你的优势,老师相信优势加上持之以恒的努力,你必须会更出色!
6、你是个乖巧伶俐有音乐特长的人,你平时一贯表现很好,在运动会上也展示了你坚强勇敢的一面。你是一个各方面素质很好的女孩。感谢父母赋予了你灵气。珍惜它,好好发挥自己的特长,扎扎实实地学习,成为最优异的毕业生吧!我相信你必须能做到,对吗?
7、要知道天道酬勤。人世间没有不经过勤劳而成为天才的。愿你日夜勤奋,早日成才!
8、生活靠自立,学习靠自己,不怕困难多,只要决心大。
9、你的学习从此刻开始,无论承受多大的困难和挫折,你都要每一天进步一点点。你会行动,你必须会行动。你正在付出行动。你的意志和行动将体现你的风采。我不想是否能够成功,既然选择了高考,便只顾风雨兼程。
10、其中勤奋是通向成功的必要条件。
11、其实最好不是在夕阳西下的时候去幻想什么,而要在旭日初升的时候即投入学习。
12、记住无论何时:用心的态度象太阳,照到哪里哪里亮;消极的态度象月亮,初十五不一样。
13、小小的一副眼镜,给你平添了不少书卷气,一看便知你是一个办事稳重干练很有才气的男孩。勤勤恳恳脚踏实地使你的学习成绩永居前列。可老师和同学却很少听到你的声音。孩子,大胆一些吧,把你的才华淋漓尽致地展现出来。如果再将你的小脾气改一改,你会更优秀的!你有一种永不服输的精神,喜欢对问题追根究底,希望你能将运动场上的潇洒带到生活中来,再多一点“细心”,你的人生也将会更加丰富多彩。
14、在明天,这是个美丽灿烂辉映着五光十色的迷人的字眼。愿你的明天无限美丽无限灿烂无限迷人!
15、亲爱的同学们:你们个个都是聪明可爱天真活泼的孩子。你们就像老师的开心果,和你们在一起,我便没有了烦恼,忘却了疲劳。
16、我觉得你是个十分懂事听话的同学,老师十分喜欢你。在学习上,你一丝不苟,踏踏实实;劳动中,你用心肯干,也十分遵守纪律,懂礼貌,有礼貌,老师由衷地希望你不懈地努力,取得更加可喜的进步,表现更出色。我们期待着。
17、你的多才多艺,你对工作的认真负责,上课的认真态度,让老师觉得班上不能少了你。你为班上做出了巨大的贡献。每期黑板报都有你的足迹;每次做操,你都那么认真地组织,陈老师无法不喜欢你。你是一个素质很好的学生,你长大后必须是个不可多的的人才。加油吧!陈老师为你喝彩!
18、在求学的道路上,老师愿做你们的朋友,和你们一同成长。努力吧,孩子们!让我们一起学习,一起讨论,一起交流,一起创新一起想象,一起描绘多姿多彩的人生,一起设计完美的未来!
19、为理想而战,其乐无穷;为击败对手而战,其乐无穷;为实现目标而战,其乐无穷。
20、是啊帅气的你像动漫世界里的大男孩。特殊的家庭使你有着和其他孩子不一样的经历,但坚强的你却能微笑应对。强者从生活的波涛中探索人生的真谛,而你把特殊的家庭遭遇看作是生活对自己的考验,你就是生活的强者。你应感到自豪,因为你比那些离不开父母呵护的孩子勇敢得多。时来运转,否极泰来。一切都会好起来的。请相信:无论你遇到任何困难,老师都会为你排忧解难帮忙你。
21、或许有人认为你有些调皮好动,可在老师心目中你一向是个好学上进的孩子。有人说:“兴趣是根,勤奋是叶,毅力是干,成功是果。”望你要持之以恒,把学习的热情融入每时每事,静下心来,认真思考,勤学好问,你必须会十分出色,努力吧!
22、在我心目中,你是一个坚强又有求知欲的孩子。长期的病痛一向折磨着你,但你没有向病魔低头!只要感觉稍微好一点,你就会坚持到校。虽然你耽误了一些课,但成绩却没有下降。令我感动的是:家庭生活并不富裕平日生活异常节俭的你,竞在“抗非典”活动中带头捐出元钱,成为同学们的榜样!衷心地祝你早日康复!希望你加强锻炼,有一个健康的体魄!
23、老师真感谢你本学期为班级劳动所做的贡献,也极欣赏你在课堂上的落落大方。严格要求自己吧!你将来必须是个有出息的孩子!
24、也有人说:“人人都能够成为自己的幸运的建筑师。”愿你们在前行的道路上,用自己的双手建造幸运的大厦。
25、你是一个活泼机灵的小男孩,老师忘不了你那会说话的眼睛;忘不了你回答问题的那股用心劲儿;更忘不了你说话时的那张可爱的充满笑意的小脸。在生活中你总是严格要求自己,做好身边的每一件事,看着你那认真的样貌,真让人感动。希望你继续严格要求自己,让自己的人生更精彩。
26、爱说爱笑的你一天天长大了。每当看到你迫切想要回答问题的眼神;看到你为了提高表达潜力,一遍遍认真练习的样貌;看到大家给你指出缺点后,你虚心理解并及时改正的姿态,老师打心眼里高兴。如果你能更加严格地要求自己,自觉遵守纪律,肯定会有意想不到的收获,快试试吧!
27、啊,愿你们在飞逝而去的时间波涛上,乘风破浪,驶向成功的彼岸!
28、新学期,新思想,新形象,新的开始;抓常规,主动学,刻苦学,学而不厌。
29、作为班主任,我最想对你说的是,老师多谢你!老师喜欢你!你是老师最好的帮手,你也为同学们的学习创造了很好的条件。同时,你也为同学们作出了表率作用。你热爱学习,团结同学,写得一手漂亮的钢笔字,能跳出优美的舞蹈。你没有理由不成材。我希望有一天你能成为国家的栋梁,让老师因为你而骄傲!
30、“玉不琢,不成器;人不学,不知道。”学习与艰苦为伴,读书与困难并存。你有那么聪明的头脑,有那么优越的环境,有那么关爱你的父母,不要被困难和艰苦羁绊前进的步伐。老师真心地期望你用努力奠基,用毅力为墙,用智慧为梁,建造起属于你的成功殿堂。
31、文静内向的你也有大方开朗的一面。老师很喜欢你的性格。老师在那里还要感谢你认真负责地为班记“班务日志”。好好努力吧,明天的你必须会更优秀!
32、其中信心细心耐心——高考成功的保证。
33、你长着一对翅膀。坚韧地飞吧,不要为风雨所折服;诚挚地飞吧,不要为香甜的蜜汁所陶醉。朝着明确的目标,飞向完美的人生。
34、我愿你像那小小的溪流,将那高高的山峰作为生命的起点,一路跳跃,一路奔腾,勇敢地勇敢地奔向生活的大海??
35、钟声哨声脚步声,声声催人;你紧我紧大家紧,紧紧相追。
36、从你步入校门的那一刻起,你那纯真甜美的笑容,伶俐轻盈的身影就时时吸引着老师和同学们的眼球。你是聪慧的,学习成绩名列前茅;你是健壮的,运动场上英姿飒爽……但是,为什么老师总是见到你形单影只?孩子,你知道吗?两人共尝痛苦,只是半个痛苦:两人共享欢乐,却是两个欢乐。望你广择良朋,多交好友。
37、其中语言是思维的外壳。你在课内外许多精彩的言辞和辩论反映出你敏捷的思维。聪明好学努力上进注定了你在学业上必将有所成就。但目前的状况还不尽如人意,怎样改变现状呢?好好思考一下吧。老师送你一句话:不可偏执,须踏实,方可成大事!
38、你聪明活泼有礼貌,也很懂事,本学期在学习上有进步,在班级活动中也很用心,是一个自尊心强有群众荣誉感的好孩子。老师很喜欢你。希望你在以后的时间里更加努力地学习,掌握好扎实的基本功,长大后作国家的栋梁,成为老师的骄傲!
39、用拼搏的汗水灌注无悔的高三路。考前不怕,考后不悔。
40、你知道吗?你很聪明,理解新知识很快,计算潜力也很强,本学期学习劲头也很足。看到你一点一滴的进步,我真得感到很欣慰。同时,我也为你担忧,怕你不稳定。希望你学习更加扎实牢固些,而且把字写好。老师相信你必须是最优秀的一位学生!
41、因为你善于动脑,经常能够解答令大家为难的问题;因为你勤于读书,随时能让我们和你一起学到许多书本以外的知识。“读书虽可喜,何如躬践履”。如果你在多看多问多说的同时,还能做到多写,透过不断地积累,你会进步得更快。
42、在各项活动中都会看到你活跃的身影,听到你甜美的声音。你的热心爱心诚心感染了许多人,赢得了大家的喜爱。老师相信你必须会以用心进取的精神,锲而不舍的毅力勇敢地战胜学习中的各种困难。成功之路就在脚下。
43、你是一个个性有才华的聪慧男孩,你有一颗善良包容的心,你能够和每个同学都成为好朋友。真的,我一向担心丧母之痛会使你沉沦,事实并非如此,你一如既往,坚强而不自馁,依然能够笑对人生。老师知道你已将悲痛深深地埋在心底,你是要以骄人的成绩来告慰在天之灵。让悲痛化作力量,让眼泪闪出彩虹。
44、你是一个恬静懂事的男孩,你的热情感动着老师感动着同学们,你利用会熟练运用计算机的特长为班群众做了很多事情:那一张张美丽的图片一份份精致的评比表,无不吸引着班里的每一个人,老师为有你这样的学生而自豪。老师觉得你比以前坚强多了,很少流泪了,情绪更稳定了,进步更大了。记住:你是男孩子,要有男子汉的坚强勇敢自信。老师相信你必须会有更大的成功!
45、听他们叫你“大帅”,这是同学们送你的“雅号”吧?挺好听的。你是个乐于助人的孩子,记得那次放学晚了,是你陪胆小的女生走下楼去,嗯,还挺有大帅气度;你是个爱劳动的孩子,在卫生大扫除中,总会看到你忙这忙那,干完自己的还帮忙别人,嗯,还真有大帅风度,如果你在学习上也能一展大帅风采,必须会令同学们刮目相看。大帅,在学习上投入更大的热情吧,努力学习,别怕吃苦,不做语言的巨人行动的矮子,你就会成为名副其实的“大帅”。
46、朴实热情的性格,来自军人父亲的遗传;上进的精神来自教师母亲的培养,你不愧是他们的好儿子。高大威猛的你有着军人般豪放教师般细腻,因此大家都愿意与你为邻,与你为友。你不J魄是大家的好伙伴。更希望你用勤奋的飞瀑冲毁学习的樊篱,用思索的钥匙打开智慧的大门。
47、成功需要拼搏,拼搏就是努力,。就是付出,就是与一切消极因素进行斗争。
48、你用热爱群众的举动热情为大家服务的行为,回报了老师和同学们的期望。相信在今后的学习生活中能经常看到你灿烂的笑容;看到你高高举起的小手;看到你更加工整的作业和出色的表现!
49、你很聪明,工作认真负责。关心群众,乐于助人。我想你将会成为一名作业认真,持之以恒的好学生!
50、一个人的真正伟大之处就在于他能够认识到自己的渺小。
篇5:小学生关于秋天的英语
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+ 加入清单美丽的秋天来了,果树上挂满了红艳艳的“小灯笼”。乡下的孩子欢蹦乱跳地跳着喊着,田野里回荡着他们银铃般的笑声。
Beautiful autumn, the trees hanging lanterns with red "". The children in the countryside and dance and skip with joy shouting, the field echoed with their laughter.
村里的人都忙忙碌碌的,姐姐带着弟弟去山上摘果子。到了果园,天呐!果树上的果子都成熟了,姐姐和弟弟欢天喜地的摘了满满三篮子。
All the people in the village were busy, and the elder sister took her younger brother to the mountain to pick the fruit. When we get to the orchard, God! The fruit on the tree was ripe, and the sister and brother picked up three baskets with great joy.
果园里的果子像海边的沙子一样多。秋天里漂浮着许多香甜的气味,梨香香的,苹果甜甜的,菠萝酸酸的,还有很多种香气在空气中漂浮着。
The fruit in the orchard is as much as the sand by the sea. There are many sweet scents floating in autumn. The pears are sweet, apple, sweet, pineapple and sour, and there are many kinds of scent floating in the air.
秋天它把黄色给了银杏树,它把红色给了枫叶,它把金黄色给了田野,它把橙红色给了果树,它把紫红的、淡黄的、雪白的给了菊花仙子。
In autumn, it gave yellow to the ginkgo tree. It gave the red to the maple leaves. It gave the golden color to the fields. It gave the orange red to the fruit trees. It gave the chrysanthemums the purple, the yellow and the snow-white.
秋天真美啊,我爱秋天!
Autumn is beautiful, I love autumn!
篇6:小学一年级写小狗的英语作文
全文共 860 字
+ 加入清单Last year, my friend gave me a little dog. i was fond of him very much. i liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever i went. i was very glad that i had a "body guard".
Last winter i was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.however, no matter how late i went home, my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me. when i passed there, he barked two or three times then ran towards me. it seemed that he was calling me.
My dog not only,took good care of me, but also was respoasible at home. when strangers came to my house, he barked at them but not hurt them. what a lovely dog he is! (135 words)
我家的小狗
去年,朋友送我一只小狗,我非常喜欢它,放学后就和它一起玩耍,无论我走到哪儿它都跟在身后。我很高兴有这样一位“保镖”。
去年冬天我忙于功课,每天回家都很晚。然而无论我到家多晚,这只小狗总是在学校附近的一个角落处等我。当我从那经过时,它全冲我叫两声然后跑过来,似乎它是在叫我。
我家的狗不但对我照顾周到,而且还肩负着看家的重任,每当有陌生人来到我家,它总是叫个不停,但并不咬他们。多么可爱的一只狗啊!
篇7:小学语文教师读书心得体会
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+ 加入清单我阅读了《小学语文教师》六月刊的《随文练笔研究专辑》,让我在作文练笔教学这一块中顿感明朗,读着读着,时而倍有同感,时而像被指引导航,时而灵感顿生,让我对随文练笔教学有了更宽广的了解,更系统的认识。
随文练笔是伴随着阅读教学进程,引导学生巧妙利用有关阅读内容进行的一种短平快的写作训练。因为随文练笔选材角度小,内容简短,贴近实际,紧随阅读教学,而且形式多样,丰富学生的习作色彩,学生负担少,因而在课堂中是颇受师生欢迎的一项习作训练。但在实际教学中,随文练笔设计的随意性,练笔的时机、方法、难易度把握不当等,往往导致训练低效甚至无效。如何实施有效的随文练笔策略,是我们当前值得思考和探讨的问题。而在文本教学中找准切入点,是随文练笔练习有效性的重要前提与保证。本人就学习前人的经验以及结合自己的教学实践,为找准随文练笔的切入点整理及提出以下几点看法。
对于选择随文练笔的切入点,我们常常会有水满汀洲,何处寻芳草的困惑,其实在备课的时候,我们能够潜心会文,何愁天涯无芳草呢?
一、拓展文本空白处与文本角色对话
文本是一个召唤读者参与的意义空间。文质兼美的文章大都有让读者自由想象的空间,只要我们善于挖掘,自有一片与文本交流的空间。如人教版十一册《草虫的村落》,课文的许多地方都留下了想象的空间,可以引发学生进一步思考,巧设练笔的空间。如,它们意味深长地对视良久,然后一齐欢跃地走回洞穴里去。意味深长地对视良久,这是甲虫夫妻间爱意的流露,在这深情的对视中,作为与丈夫阔别多时的妻子的你,会与丈夫倾诉些什么呢?又如,蜥蜴面前围拢了一群黑甲虫,对这庞然大物投以好奇的目光。它们友好地交流着,好像攀谈得很投机似的。如果你是蜥蜴,看着这群好奇的小甲虫们,你会如何向它们讲述外面的大千世界呢?它们会向你提出那些新奇有趣的问题?在这里,充分调动了学生的生活体验,让学生那奇异的想象得到驰骋,加上受到作者文中童心童语的感染,有了作者笔下草虫的世界这个大环境的渲染,学生练笔的情感被激发了,必然又产生一幕幕生动、有趣的情景。当然学生的语言也得到了有质量的训练。
二、 丰润文本空白处为文本主角代言
《语文课程标准》指出:阅读应让学生在主动积极的思维和情感活动中,加深理解和体验,有所感悟和思考,受到情感熏陶,获得思想启迪而在阅读教学中适时插入文本空白填补,让孩子们充当故事的主人翁,想他所想,说他所说,填补故事中主人公心理、语言的空白处,在这过程中孩子们直接进入了角色,融入了自己的心情和感受,和主人公的感情融为一体,这样的练笔是学生和文本的对话,是孩子们纯洁的心灵与主人公的融合,这样的练笔带动的是孩子们真实的感悟和思考,在思维与情感引发主动积极的情态下,学生所言就会言之有物,言之动情,让文本生色不少,同时也能更好地深化了文本的主题,达到以读促写,以写促读的互利效果。
在教学人教版第九册《地震中的父与子》时,我们可以引导学生想象模拟被压在废墟底下的阿曼达在死神面前如何鼓励同学与死神搏斗,争取时间最后获救的情景,让学生从身心参与中感受到了阿曼达的了不起,丰富了阿曼达的勇敢坚强的形象。又如人教版第十一册《老人与海鸥》一文中,意想不到的事情发生了一群海鸥突然飞来,围着老人的遗像翻飞盘旋,连声鸣叫,叫声和姿态和平时大不一样,像是发生了什么大事。海鸥们像炸了营似的朝遗像扑过来。它们大声鸣叫着,翅膀扑得那样近,我们好不容易才从这片飞动的白色旋涡中脱出身来。老人生前视海鸥如亲人,从他十年如一日般坚持给海鸥喂食中,从他对海鸥一声声熟悉而亲切的呼唤中,可见他对海鸥的一片深情,然而海鸥们十多天找不到这位与它们相依相随十多年的老人,它们心中是多么的焦急、忧虑啊!当它们眼前出现老人的遗像时,它们翻飞盘旋,连声鸣叫,它们当时可能说些什么呢?当海鸥们意识到人们要把遗像带走,它们要与老人永别了,海鸥们像炸了营似的朝遗像扑过来。它们再一次大声鸣叫着,它们多么希望再多看老人一眼,希望遗像能多留一会,它们的大声鸣叫想对老人说什么?想对人们说什么?此情此景,海鸥们的伤痛、无奈、焦虑,千言万语让学生们流泻于笔下,人鸥情深的一幕便永远定格于学生的脑海中。
三、延续文本意犹未尽处续作者未言之意
有些课文结尾(或中间)的语言嘎然而止,耐人寻味,有一种余音缭绕之感。这种余音正是作者没有言尽,情感表达最为强烈、深沉、含蓄的地方。在教学中,我们就可以把这种余音挖掘出来,这些语言的空白赋予了学生广阔的思维空间和创作的财富。让学生写写作者没有言尽的话,把课文中情节跳跃的空白处补上,使已经接近尾声的情节再掀波澜,使文章内容更具体、完整,也使小读者能过把小作家的写作瘾。如《小摄影师》一课,课文的结尾让人觉得意犹未尽,想象的空间比较大:小男孩到底给高尔基照成相了吗?如果他来,会做些什么,说些什么?如果不来,又发生了什么事呢?在此练练笔,学生兴趣盎然,创意无限。又如《凡卡》一文的结尾处余意未尽,给读者留下了广阔的想象空间。课文在凡卡熟睡在那甜美的梦中结束了,然而梦总是要醒的,为此,我设计这样一次练笔:凡卡美梦可以成真吗?当他醒后会发生什么事?学生在学习课文的基础上展开合理想象,延续了故事的情节,道出了沙皇统治下俄国穷苦儿童的悲惨命运。他们有的写道:凡卡睡醒以后,他偷偷写信的事被老板发现了,结果遭到了一顿毒打,他那虚弱的身体承受不住而死了。还有的这样写道:凡卡每天翘首期盼爷爷到来,但当时的现实社会是残酷的,它没有怜悯这可怜的小孩,凡卡的希望在一天天无了期的等待中扑灭了,凡卡在绝望中饱受老板的虐待,最终死去。
四、捕捉文本典型处实现语言的迁移运用
曾看过一同行说过,语文的学习说白了,其实就是对课文规范语言的吸纳后融会贯通,为我所用。所以,让语文走在回家的路上,切不可丢弃文本的语言示范作用。遇到好的文章或精彩、典型的片段,我们就不应该错失学习和模仿的机会。仿写可以针对全第进行,也可根据实际情况进行片断练习,可以是句式表达、开头结尾、过渡照应、总分结构等模仿。仿写时,首先找准具有鲜明特征的典型或精彩文段。如《北京的春节》一文中作者列举了大量老北京过春节的习俗,但全文安排有序,脉络清晰,衔接紧密,详略得当,推进自然,是引导学生学习按一定顺序,有详有略的表达方法的典型文章。因此,在学习本文后我马上指导学生联系生活实际,写一写家乡的传统节日,主要训练点落实到对文章写作顺序的安排以及内容详略的处理方法上,结果收到了令人满意的效果。当然有些文章的精彩片段的仿写或迁移写法也不容有失。例如《穷人》一文中对人物心理活动的真实描写的片段,透过桑娜的心理活动充分展示了穷人宁可吃苦也要帮助别人的美好心灵,尤其段中省略号的连续运用,更能逼真地写出了桑娜当时时断时续、忐忑不安的心理。学习本段后,我让学生结合现实生活中自己遇到过的焦急、忧虑、担心、害怕的生活情景写一写,例如早上睡过头而迟到了、一个人处于黑暗无助当中、进行比赛前的紧张状态中等,让学生在练笔中实现语言迁移的运用,在先扶后放的过程中提高语言表达的能力。
随文练笔的切入点皆于文本中,我们要潜心会文,识于慧眼,找准落点,让我们的学生妙笔生花。
篇8:LeigangPark小学四年级英语作文
全文共 398 字
+ 加入清单I like Leigang park.
In the Leigang Park, we can see many trees and flowers there. Some flowers are red, and some are purple. The trees are big and tall. We can see a hill in the park. At the foot of the hill, we can see many houses and many roads.
There are many people in the park. Some are walking and singing. Some are dancing or playing games.
All the families are having a good time in the park.
篇9:关于我最喜欢的动物小学生英语作文
全文共 602 字
+ 加入清单i have two turtles, they are cute. i′ve had them for two years.
they carry heavy shells,just like carrying a school bag. they have eyes which shines just like black beans. they are funny.
they are like to eat the watermelon in the summer. mother always buy more for the turtles,so i think that they like to cool down as well, but they are shy when eating, they don′t want to be watched, as they inhaling the food . the ofter day , i bried to observe how they eat their food.
the way they eat is really funny.no wondey why they are so shy.
grauing up, fradually. i want to stay with him as long as he lives.
篇10:小学生英语作文大象
全文共 1359 字
+ 加入清单Elephants are the greatest animals on land. They have strong legs and fan like ears. Although they are very strong, people feel great and powerful; but they also have a cute little eyes.
The elephants long nose is like our small hand, and doing a lot of things can be used. They use their noses to bathe, take things, contact others, and so on. The elephants thick thigh walked up the road and made a heavy sound. Standing next to them, it feels like its very powerful in a five magnitude earthquake.
People may be a little scared when they see giant elephants. In fact, the elephant is a kind and clever animal. If you dont hurt them, they wont hurt you.
The year before, I went to an elephant school in Thailand. Its an elephants paradise. Some Thailand tutors teach elephants to draw, kick, push the trunk, and so on. This kind of animal is not all called "stupid", they are both smart and sensitive. They quickly learn to learn all kinds of activities.
In the performance, every elephant behaves well. The paintings they draw are more beautiful than mine. I feel amazing. A thick and heavy nose can control fine brushes and draw a beautiful picture. The wonderful football match is even more amazing, who would think that the thick leg can kick the ball into "Longmen"!
I rode an elephant and took a bath with them. Im glad to be a good friend of the elephant!
篇11:关于我的小学生活英语作文
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+ 加入清单Our school life
Our shool is big and nice.There are about one thousand students in our school. Every day we have four lessons in the morning and three lessons in the afternoon. Our morning lessons begin at half past eight and we finish school at four oclock We take the same subjects at school. Such as Chinese, maths, Englsh, PE and so on.The school day is long. But we love our school life.
篇12:小学生英语日记带翻译
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+ 加入清单July 9 2009
It was the second day of our summer holiday. I felt good. I felt I am free. I had a lot of time to do things I like. My parents are in Zhongshan. So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely. But I didn’t do something special. I stayed at home and watched TV. Oh! I wrote an Englishdaily composition. It was my homework. Today, I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired. It was time for dinner. I must go! I am very hungry.
这是我们第二天的暑假。我感觉很好。我觉得我很自由。我有很多时间做我喜欢。我的父母都在中山。所以,我独自生活,但我并不感到孤独。但是,我没有做什么特别。我住在家里看电视。噢!我写了英语日记组成。这是我的功课。今天,我睡了14 小时.我以为我很疲惫。现在是吃晚饭。我必须去!我非常渴望。
篇13:自我介绍的小学生英语
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+ 加入清单Hello, My name is Gu Siyao. My English name is Hellen. I am 12 years old. I form Xiouzhou Experimental Shool. I love my school. Because my school is very beautiful and big .The trees are green and the sky is blue. The classes are interesting and exciting. The teachers are not strict. And the students are very lovely. They always help each other.
篇14:小学六年级英语写一封信
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+ 加入清单Dear Ms. Smith,
Im Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". It’s my honor if you can accept our invitation. Please call me at 123456 if you have any question.
I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
篇15:优秀小学生英语自我介绍
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+ 加入清单Good morning everyone! Today I am very happy to make a speech here. Now, let me introduce myself. My name is xiaoxiao. I am from No.1Primary School. I live with my parents and we love each other deeply. I like my family, my school, my motherland. How lucky I live in such a happy family, such a strong country, such a modern time.
At school, I study Chinese, Math, English, Computer, and so on. I like all of them. I am a monitor, so I often help my teacher take care of my class. I think I am a good help. And I like Tuesday best because we have English, music, computer and P.E. on Tuesdays.
When I am at home, I often help my mother do some housework and my mother says I am a good help, too. My mother is a teacher. She works hard. She is kind. Many people like her. She often teaches me the way of learning well. (If you want to learn English well, here is some of my advice. At first, you must read many articles and know many words. If you meet up with some new words, you can look them up in the dictionary. You should know their meanings, how to read them and spell them. If you keep working hard, you will be successful. Then, you ought to speak English as much as possible. 可省) In any case,remember an old saying; Nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart into it.
In my spare time, I have many hobbies. I like reading, playing the piano and dance. I am so good at dancing that I have got many awards.
This is me, a lovely pupil in the school, a dear apple of my parents’ eyes, and a little bud of the country. Please remember me, xiaoxiao from No.1Primary School. That’s all, thank you.
篇16:小学4年级英语写一封信
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+ 加入清单22 May 2006
Dear Sir,
I understand your well-respected college offers a number of places to overseas students every year, and I am writing to enquire about the application procedure.
I am at present a student at Mary High School, Hong Kong, where I have been studying for the past five years. I passed the Hong Kong Certificate of Education Examination last year with distinctions in English and History, and credits in Economics and English Literature. My advanced-level subjects are History, Economics and English Literature. In addition to these subjects, "Use of English" is also a compulsory subject because a pass in English is a minimum requirement for admission to most faculties of the University of Hong Kong.
Apart from academic work, I have been actively involved in extra-curricular activities. I am Chairman of the English Club and I have represented my school in many inter-school contests.
On the advice of my friends, I have decided to further my studies in England because I wish to widen my horizons and benefit from the scholarly heritage of your country.
I wish to continue to study the above-mentioned subjects at your college in the 2006/7 academic year before I sit the Advanced-level Examinations in England.
As regards my character, Mrs. Chen, my Principal, and Mr. Huang, my English master, have agreed to act as my references.
As I come from a family of fairly limited means, I would like to know if there is any financial assistance available for overseas students.
Attached is a summary of my qualifications for your reference.
I should be grateful if you would kindly consider my application and notify me of the result at your earliest convenience.
Should you require any further information, please feel free to contact me or my references.
Yours faithfully,
Lily Chen
篇17:小学生英语作文新年
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+ 加入清单Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. And it is the most popular festival in China. People often do different things before Spring
Festival. Some of them clean and decorate their houses. Some of them go shopping and buy some flowers. Some of them stay at home and do nothing. I usually help my mum clean the house. People get together and have a big meal at Spring Festival. They often eat fish, pork, goose, chicken, vegetables, soup and so on. I like Spring Festival very much, because adults give me some lucky money.
篇18:闹元宵英语作文小学80字
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+ 加入清单Usually, the Valentine’s Day has no connection with the traditional Chinese
festival, but this year, the Lantern festival falls on the same day with the
lovers’ day. Well, some young will face a dilemma,especially for those who
doesn’t get married. Should they spend the day with their families or their hot
lovers? That’s a question. I’ve got a key that can solve this problem.
Family comes first of course. You should wake up a little earlier in the
morning, and help your mother in the kitchen. On the Lantern Festival, making
rice balls and dumplings are the traditional activities. Having a reunion dinner
with the whole family is also very important, so you need to show up and stay
with your family for the whole morning. Spend some time with your family. Keep
them company and make them happy. In the afternoon, there are maybe not so busy,
you can plan for the Valentine’s Day with your girlfriend or boyfriend, you can
have some snacks in 4p.m, and tell your parents you will hang out with your
friends at night and not having supper at home tonight. They would be
understood. Then you can take your girlfriend or boyfriend to a nice restaurant
and see the latest movie after dinner. Do not forget to present the gift you
prepare for your lover. Make your lover happy, too.
I think everybody should find a balance between family love and lover’s
love. If I can only choose one, I will choose family love over the other.
Because I know my family never leaves me and my parents are aging. How many days
can I still be with them? So I really appreciate the days that I can still be
with them. I know you will do the same just like me.
篇19:小学一年级关于小动物的英语作文
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+ 加入清单Dog is my favorite animal. The reason why I like it most is because it’s very competent. Dog is the best friend for mankind. It is also the best companion for the old people. The dog can feel the human nature. So many old people will raise dogs if their children are not with them. The old can give their love for their children to the dog to make themselves feel warmly. I believe the seeing eye dog is very famous. They are special dogs. Those dogs will guide their owners whose eyes is blind to go the correct way. See, I say dogs are very competent.
我最喜欢的动物是狗。我最喜欢它的原因是因为它很能干。狗是人类最好的朋友。它也是老人们最好的伴侣。狗是通人性的。如果他们的孩子不在他们身边,很多老年人会养狗。老年人可以把对他们孩子的爱放到狗狗的身上,这也能温暖他们的心。导盲犬是非常有名的。他们是特殊的狗。这些狗会引导眼睛看不见的主人找到正确的路。看,我就说狗狗是非常能干的。
篇20:假期有趣的事小学生英语
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+ 加入清单Today, as I have nothing to do, my father decides to take me to the gym. There are people playing all kinds of sports. I see my father play badminton and he teaches me how to play. It is so easy for me to learn, after a while, I can play with my father. I fall in love with this sport, I will play it on the weekend.
今天,当我无事可做的时候, 爸爸决定带我去健身房。人们在玩各种各样的运动。我看到我的父亲在打羽毛球,他教我怎么玩。这对我来说很容易学习,过了一会后,我可以和父亲一起打。我爱上了这项运动,我会在周末去玩。