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+ 加入清单We are always educated to be kind and helpful, so when we see others in
trouble, we should give them a hand. But nowadays, some the bad guys make use of
people’s kindness to do criminal things. Recently, an article about a father
called on people to help her sick daughter was widespread in Wechat. Most people
had transported to let more people know. But later the media exposed the fact
that the father was rich and he wrote this article just to catch more fans.
Until then people were angry as they were cheated. The public condemns the
cheating behavior. The warm hearts should not be used of. It needs to be
cautious when people see the information about asking for help.
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篇1:初中生高分作文的写作技巧
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+ 加入清单写作技法,是一个在写作实践中不断地被创生出来,并永远被创生下去,没有止境的东西。小编收集了初中生高分作文的写作技巧,欢迎阅读。
一、写作技法的重要性
如果说,“好人出在嘴上,好马出在腿上”,那么我说:好记叙文就出在写作的技法上。写作方法犹如刀上的刃,刃上的钢一样,直接决定着记叙文品质的优劣。忽视写作技法,文章是徒具形体的行尸走肉;充分运用写作技法,就会把文章妆扮得清秀美丽。可以说:一切优秀的记叙文,都是大量使用写作技法的记叙文;极多写作效果较差的记叙文,主因归结在忽视使用写作技法上。
写作技法既然如此重要,那么,写作技法到底有哪些呢?
二、写作技法有哪些
写作技法多得数不胜数,浩如烟海。如果哪个老师说:“同学们,我现在把所有的写作技法都归纳整理给你们”,那只能说明这个老师知识的浅薄而绝不是渊博。因为,写作技法源于在写作实践中,对成功案例,所做的规律性的提炼总结。它与人们在生产劳动实践中摸索劳动技巧相类似。所以说,写作技法,是一个在写作实践中不断地被创生出来,并永远被创生下去,没有止境的东西。在写作技法的大海里,我们只有不断地去探寻、去发现、去认识、去整理、去积累,并谨慎地说,我已经掌握了沧海中的一粟或一桶或一湾水域,但绝不能狂妄地说已掌握了它的全部。
我这样说,只是想让同学们明确:我下面讲的,仅是初中生记叙文写作中,常见并常用的一些写作技法,它仅是整个写作技法中冰山的一角,而不是全部。更多的写作技法,还需要靠同学们自己在阅读大量的文学作品中去探寻,去积累。
(一)修辞手法:比喻、拟人、拟物、排比、夸张、引用、反问、设问、反复、顶真、双关、反语、借代、对偶、对比、仿词、移用等。
(二)表达方式:1、记叙:顺叙、倒叙、插叙、补叙等。2、描写:景物(环境)、场面、间接(侧面)、直接(正面)、特写、动作(行为)、语言、心理、外貌(肖像)、神情等。3、说明。4、议论。5、抒情:直接、间接。
(三)选择句式:陈述句、肯定句、判断句、否定句、双重否定句、疑问句、设问句、反问句、感叹句、祈使句、选择句、排比句、对偶(对仗)句、顶真句、回环句、连动句、整散句、长短句、独词句等。
(四)篇章结构:时间推移式、空间转换式、景物更迭式、串糖葫芦式、起承转合式、线索引导式、一波三折式、思想意识式、逐层推进式、由远及近式、总分总式、悬念式、对照式、套娃式、顶真式、填充式、分列式、插叙式、倒叙式、释疑式、见闻式、引子、题记、附记、后记等。
(五)推敲运用新颖、灵动、精准的动词,恰当使用形象、生动、传神、富有表现力的修饰语。
(六)其他的基础写作技法:开门见山、首尾呼应、卒章显志、先抑后扬、托物言志、点面结合、融情于景、情景交融、虚实相生、以古讽今、以小见大、动静相衬、对比烘托、人称变换、摩拟语气、言近旨远、兴波澜、转动法、剥笋法、拟人法、拟物法、五觉法、详略法、矛盾句、哲理句、中心句、警句、伏笔、线索、过渡、照应、设悬、象征、隐意、升华、点睛、类比、回环、通感、文眼、注释、联想、想像、物品自诉法、动物自诉法、远眺近看法、彩笔描绘法、特征举例法、实验证明法、季节变换法、日内变换法、现场目击法、成长变化法、赞美颂扬法、群体描写法、言已尽意无穷等。
另外,还有异彩纷呈、新颖别致的开头和结尾的众多写作技法,限于翻陈出新太多太快,虽列举些许皮毛,终免不了顾此失彼,举一斑而失全豹,道一足而全象尽失,也就不再罗列了。
三、怎样使用技法
了解一些基础的写作技法,只算完成了一步;如何适当使用这些写作技法,是我们要走好的另一步。走好这一步尤其迫切而关键。
(一)不能无目的地滥用。
初学写作的人,知道了运用写作技法的重要性,并掌握了一些写作技法,就开始在文章中大量地运用了。虽说是无法不成文嘛,这也不是什么坏事;何况,学生能从不去用,到有意识地大量地使用,这本身也是一个巨大的进步,是可喜可贺的事。但作为指导教师来说,发现了问题还是要说问题的。
出现的问题是:一些初始习作的中学生,为了最大限度地追求采用写作技法的效应,就出现了写作技法无目的滥用的情况。表现是:在文章该略写处,也运用大量的写作技法去藻饰、染色,这样,的确是增强了表现力和感染力,增强了生动、形象、传神性,也增强了文采,可惜的是挥拳打错了地方,射箭脱离了靶子。
我们知道,写文章该详处一定要详,该略处也是一定要略的。否则,把该略的写详了,就会出现主旨不明朗,废话有的是,宣宾夺主,不知所云的弊病。要纠正这个弊病,就要求,运用写作技法也一定要注意写作的目的性,一切是为表现中心思想服务,切不可把宜略处写具体详细了。
(二)要用得自然,少一些刻意雕琢之痕。
俗话说:万法皆归自然;历尽沧桑而归淡泊;大智若愚,大勇若钝。这里面包含一个至理:反璞归真。也就是说,道的最高境界是平淡、自然。写作方法的运用就是这样,追求的最高境界应该是:看似平易实则内蕴其法,千山万壑皆敛于平淡自然之中。
晏殊的“无可奈何花落去,似曾相识燕归来”,之所以成为名句,主要原因之一是:看似信手拈来,实则对仗工整。王维的“大漠孤烟直,长河落日圆”脍炙人口,也是由于这两句语言浅易,看似平白无奇,实则意象阔大,内蕴至丰。我也曾拜读过一些语言大师(如叶圣陶、吕淑湘、俞敏等人)的手笔,发现他们存在一个共性,那就是:追求平易、自然。〔注1〕
写作方法要用得巧、用得妙、用得自然、用得浑然天成。而应尽量避免刻意的斧刻雕琢之痕,尽量避免牵强附会,以免产生惺惺作态的令人生厌的反效果。
(三)要善于综合混用,而不必非此即彼,孤立使用。
优美的语句文段,通常都是综合混用了写作技法的。这就像做菜一样:几种菜杂烩在一起,再辅以油、盐、各种调料,做出来后,要远比清炖单一菜的味道好得多。写作技法不必单一孤立使用,而要综合混用,道理就在于此了。〔注2〕
初学习作的中学生,要注意,不必把写作技法孤立地使用,而可以尽量地综合混用它们。
(四)不要墨守成规,宥于定式,提倡有新意。
“文无定法”,没有谁规定文章必须怎样写,而不能怎样写;也没有谁规定写作技法必须这样用,而不能那样用。运用写作技法决不必墨守成规、宥于定式,完全可以不拘一格〔注3〕。老套熟套可以做借鉴用,但不可以做限定用。能有创意,才有新意。
(五)再好,终究是别人的;最好,是自己的。
再好的写作技法,终究是踏着前人的足迹亦步亦趋,这样纵是捷径,终是踩在了巨人的肩上眺望。把我们目光投注到深远,将来我们中学生中的某个人或某些人,若能在文学之路上走向高峰,则我殷切地期望,你能在文学领域,开创出一片全新的天地。再好,终究是别人的;最好,是自己的。我期望你能最终跳下巨人的肩膀,自己做个巨人。
篇2:少壮不努力老大徒伤悲初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单Almost everyone knows the famous Chinese saying:A young idler,an old beggar. Throughout history,we have seen many cases in which this saying has again and again proved to be true.
It goes without saying that the youth is the best time of life,during which ones mental and physical states are at their peaks. It takes relatively less time and pains to learn or accept new things in a world full of changes and rapid developments. In addition,one is less likely to be under great pressure from career,family and health problems when young. Therefore,a fresh mind plus enormous energy will ensure success in different aspects of life.
Of course,we all know:no pains,no gains. If we dont make every effort to make good use of the advantages youth brings us,it is impossible to achieve any goals. As students,we should now try our best to learn all the subjects well so that we can be well prepared for the challenges that we will face in the future.
篇3:感恩节的英语初中
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+ 加入清单Thanksgiving Day
In the United States, the fourth Thursday in November is called Thanksgiving Day。 On that day, Americans give thanks for the blessings they have enjoyed during the year。Thanksgiving Day is usually a family day。 People always celebrate with big dinners and happy reunions。 Pumpkin pie and Indian pudding are traditional Thanksgiving desserts。 Relatives from other cities, students who have been away at school, and many other Americans travel a long distance to spend the holiday at home。
篇4:篮球是我的最爱初中英语作文
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+ 加入清单i’m a tall and lively boy. i like playing basketball very much because it’s interesting. i like nba, too. there are many famous stars in it. such as alan, iveson, tim, donken, jordan, kobe, o’neal and so on. yao ming is in the nba, too. he’s chinese. he plays basketball well. he’s a center forward. he’s our pride. all the ball stars can jump, shoot and pour in the basket. so each game of the nba is wonderful. sometimes the players can perform miracles, i think.
this year’s champion is spur team. it’s one of the strongest contenders.
i like nba. i love basketball.
篇5:初中英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单Recently, I saw an interested video that was shot by a young foreigner. He
played two roles-a Chinese mother and an American mother. He imitated the
reaction about how the mothers treated their children in education. It was so
obvious that Chinese mothers took care of their children all the time and they
would do all the things for them. While the American mothers focused on the
childrens independence. They would ask the kids to do housework and when they
grew up, they asked the kids to move out. Both parents showed different ways to
love their children and their love was equal, for every mother is a great
heroine.
篇6:高考英语写作错误分析:否定模糊
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+ 加入清单导语:高考英语书面表达想拿高分并不容易,首先你要避免一些在学生中比较常见的几种错误才行。下面小编为大家整理了高考英语写作常见的错误,希望大家在考试中能够避免。
有的同学对于否定的概念模糊,不知如何否定,有时会写出不合规则或有异义的句子。
1. 我认为没有必要买大的。
误:I think its not necessary to buy the bigger one.
正:I don’t think it is necessary to buy the bigger one.
析:有些动词如think, believe, expect, suppose, imagine, guess, fancy等的主语是第一人称单数且一般现在时,表示否定的观点应用I don’t think…,而I think… not则属于汉语式表达习惯。
2. 我们直到天全黑了才到家。
误:We arrived home until it became completely dark.
正:We didn’t arrive home until it became completely dark.
析:此汉语句子里面尽管没有否定词,但until用于肯定句时意为“直到…为止”;用于否定句时,其意为“在…以前”。因此,表示“直到…才”用not…until。
3. 如果没有受到邀请的话,我是不会去参加舞会的。
误:I’ll not go to the party unless I’m not invited.
正:I’ll not go to the party unless I’m invited.
正:I’ll not go to the party if I’m not invited.
析:unless“除非”、“如果不”,常可用if…not来替换。误句中的条件状语从句双重否定表示肯定,结果与原句意思相反。
4. 那孩子不够大不能去上学。
误:The child is not old enough not to go to school.
正:The child is not old enough to go to school.
正:The child is too young to go to school.
析:这是学生最容易写错的句子。enough to“足以、足够”。原句中“不够大不能去上学”意思是“不够上学的年龄”,故应译为not old enough to go to school。
5. 他们两个都不说英语。
误:Both of them don’t speak English.
正:Neither of them speaks English.
析:中国学生特别对于all…not 和both…not等这种部分否定结构,很容易理解成全部否定。两者全部否定用neither, 三者以上用none。
6. 开车时再小心也不过分。
误:You can be too careful in driving a car.
正:You can not be too careful in driving a car.
析:cannot…too“无论作…也不过分”。
篇7:放松英语作文初中
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+ 加入清单Recently, we have little time to keep close contact with nature. We spend
too much time on study or working. We almost forget that how green the grass is,
how beautiful the flowers are, and how sweetly the birds are singing outside our
windows. A saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy". It means
that we need to relax ourselves and go out to breathe more fresh air. We can
also climb a hill in the suburbs.Its good for our health.
Lets go outing.
篇8:2024初中英语教师个人工作计划
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+ 加入清单一、指导思想:
围绕课改完善和深化学科教学常规,严格执行教研室、学校的各项教育、教学制度和要求,加强英语学科与信息技术的整合,聚焦常态课堂,关注教师成长,强调团队合作精神,全面提高英语教学质量,切实抓好校本科研、校本培训,从而促进全体英语教师的业务水平。
二、基本思路:
1、教学目标:培养兴趣,加强学法指导,抓常态课堂、高效课堂,稳固提高英语教学质量。
2、教研目标:组织进行校内外的教学研究活动,认真撰写论文,组织老师上研究课、示范课,通过研讨、评课等形式,做好课后反思,使本组教师理论与实践水平共同提高。
三、具体工作:
1、加强理论学习,更新教学理念,全面推进素质教育。全体英语教师都要抽出时间学习新理论,以先进的教育理念指导自己的教育教学实践。改进评价内容和评价方法,即努力做到关注学生学业成就的同时,还要关注学生情感态度、行为方式的发展,注重培养学生综合实践的能力,全面提高学生的素质。
2、强化教学常规的落实,提高课堂教学效率,组织教师认真学习学校教学常规,指导检查教师的教学工作,特别抓好“备课”、“上课”、“课后辅导”、“培优辅导”等主要环节,鼓励教师充分发挥教学特长,有效提高教学效率。
3、加强集体备课仍是本学期教研组工作的重点,因此要做到有计划、有目标、有实效,不走形式,各备课组每周至少活动一次,时间固定,要紧紧围绕教研组活动的主题,并有活动记录。以集体力量、集体智慧来提高英语组全体教师的业务水平。
4、打造“常态课堂、高效课堂”。教研组各教师认真学习常态课堂的基本要求,并每人按计划上一次公开课,要求集体备课,及时评课,找出不足,共同学习,共同促进,以学生的主体作用为重点,以合作学习的时效性为重点,从而来实现高效课堂。
5、加快信息技术学习进程,从而推动学科教学与信息技术的整合。组织所有教师运用现代教学理念设计多媒体教学辅助课件,组织多媒体教学观摩活动等,达到能将多媒体高效运用于英语教学中。
6、加强初三毕业班工作的研究,提高毕业班教学效率,组织全组成员认真学习《大纲》、《中考说明》,加强对中考动向的信息收集和试题研究。抓好听、说、读、写综合技能的培养,特别注重学生阅读能力的训练,另外所有英语教师要协助九年级教师搞好中考复习和模拟考试,力争中考第一仗顺利。
7、组织本教研组教师撰写论文。英语组要确定教研专题,全体英语教师通过理论学习和校本培训,不断反思、探索,并联系实际积极撰写英语教育教学论文。
总之,在校领导的带领下我们英语组全体组员会开拓进取,不断完善自己,将教学质量放首位,为学校的教育事业贡献力量。
篇9:初中这就是我英语作文
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+ 加入清单My name is Li Xing, a boy in fourteen years old. I come from Dalian, Liaoning Province, which is a beautiful and energetic city. Every year, thousands of tourists visit there. There are three people in my family, my parents and I. My parents are doctors who work in a big hospital in my city. I have many interests. Swimming, reading and movie are my favorites, which bring color to my busy study life. In study, I am good at Chinese and English, while math is my weakness. I work very hard to improve it, but it doesn’t work very well. Besides, I am easygoing and likely to make friends with others. Friendship is an important part of my life.
我叫李兴,今年十四岁。我来自辽宁省大连市。这是一个美丽而又充满活力的城市。每年都有成千上万的游客来这里参观。我家共有三口人,父母和我。我的父母都是大医院的医生。我有很多爱好,其中游泳,阅读和电影是我最喜欢的。它们给我忙碌的学习生活带来了很多色彩。我擅长语文和英语,而数学则是我的弱项。尽管我很努力去提高它,但是并没有很大的作用。除此之外,我也是个外向的人,喜欢和别人做朋友。友情是我生活中重要的一部分。
这就是我,一个完完整整的我,一个不一样的我,一个地球上仅有的我,希望我给大家留下很好的印象哦。
[初中这就是我英语作文
篇10:初中英语语法大全之主谓语法一致原则
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+ 加入清单(1)以单数名词或代词,动词不定式短语作主语时,谓语动词要用单数;主语为复数时,谓语用复数,例如:
He goes to school early every morning.
The children are playing outside.
To work hard is necessary for a student.
(2)由and或both……and连接的并列成分作主语时,谓语动词用复数。例如:
Both he and I are right.
Mr Black and Mrs Black have a son called Tom.
但并列主语如果指的是同一人,同一事物或同一概念,谓语动词用单数。例如:
His teacher and friend is a beautiful girl.
The poet and writer has come.
(3)由and连接的并列单数主语之前如果分别由each, every修饰时,其谓语动词要用单数形式。例如:
In our country every boy and every girl has the right to receive education.
Each man and each woman is asked to help.
(4)主语是单数时,尽管后面跟有 but ,except, besides, with 等介词短语,谓语动词仍用单数。例如:
The teacher with his students is going to visit the museum.
Nobody but two boys was late for class.
Bread and butter is a daily food in the west.
(5) 一些只有复数形式的名词,如people, police, cattle, clothes等作主语时,谓语动词要用复数。例如:
A lot of people are dancing outside.
The police are looking for lost boy.
(6)由each, some, any, no, every 构成的复合代词作主语时,谓语动词都用单数。例如:
Is everybody ready?
Somebody is using the phone.
(7)有两部分构成的物体的名词,如glasses, shoes, trousers, chopsticks, scissors 等作主语时,谓语动词用复数。例如:
Where are my shoes? I can’t find them.
Your trousers are dirty. You’d better change them.
如果这类名词前用了a pair of等,则往往用作单数,谓语动词的单复数形式往往取决于pair的单复数形式。例如:
Here are some new pairs of shoes.
My new pair of socks is on the bed.
篇11:期待初中英语
全文共 440 字
+ 加入清单The new term is coming and I will be carefully . Because I will learn more
konwlege .
I will listen carefully in class . I will do more sports , such as running
, volleyball . Sports are really interesting . I will read more English books to
improve my English . I will solve more difficult maths problems and be
interested in them . English is important and I will spend more time on it . I
will get up early . I will read book loudly everyday .
篇12:我们周围的污染中考英语作文_初中英语作文1000字
全文共 913 字
+ 加入清单Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Its very bad for our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off ) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand ) . We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We havent enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. Its very necessary and important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful , and our life will be better and better .
我们周围的污染
近年来我们的生活越来越好。但是,我们的环境越来越糟。它对我们的生活很糟糕。现在很多人都有空调和汽车,他们生产的(出)废气。越来越多的树被砍伐。有那么多的沙子在地球(只留下沙)。我们经常看到工厂把废水倒入河流或湖泊。河里的水很脏。我们没有足够的干净的水的城市。现在我们有危险。这是非常必要和重要的保护好环境。我想,如果每个人都尽自己最大的努力去保护环境,世界将变得更加美丽,我们的生活会越来越好。
篇13:初中英语作文大全
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+ 加入清单My grandparents came to visit me in the weekend. I was so happy because I
hadnt seen them for a long time. I missed my grandmas delicious food, because
she always knew what my stomach liked. My job was to take them to hang around
the city. I took them to the famous sites, where were so leisure and full of
local features. Walking on the old street with historical materials, they had so
much feelings, and thought about the old times and taught me to cherish the
things I had. I kept their words in mind. At night, I helped my grandma to cook
dinner. All the people sat in the table and had a nice talk.
篇14:关于写动画片的初中英语
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+ 加入清单ILoveWatchingCartoons
Cartoonismyfavoritething.EverydaywhenIgethome,thefirstthingIdoistoopentheTVandwatchthecartoons.Maybesomazuowenldthinkthatwatchingcartoonsisasonaivething,butIdontthinkso.Cartoonsrefertomanythings,containingsomeprofoundthought,whichoftenmakesmethinkaboutitalot.
Toconclude,Ilovewatchingcartoons.Cartoonsgivemehappinessandcausemetothinkdeeply.
篇15:我的小屋初中英语作文例文
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+ 加入清单I am living in. It has a wonderful envirnment. I can see flowers and trees from my house. there is a playground right in front of my block.
Children always play there and senior citizens do exercises. Public transport is convience. School, hospital and super market are only a few minutes away. I like my housing estate very much.
篇16:关于清明节的英语作文初中
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+ 加入清单"Qingming Festival is one of the most important traditional festival China.
It is not only the people pay homage to their ancestors, cherish the memory of
their ancestors Festival, is also the Chinese nations link to find ones
origin, is a hiking outing, close to nature, protecting the new spring
ceremony."
As an important content of the festival Ching Ming Festival sacrifice,
outing custom comes from the cold food festival, Shangsi festival. The cold food
festival and the understanding of the nature of the. In China, cold food after
the rebirth of the new fire is a kind of new transition ceremony, said the
seasonal alternation information, a symbol of starting the new season, new hope,
new life, new cycle. Then there is the "thanksgiving" means, more emphasis on
the "past" Remembrance and gratitude. Cold food observance ban fire cold food
festival tomb sweeping outing travel, take new fire. Before the Tang Dynasty,
cold and clarity is the two successive but the theme of different festivals, the
former Qiu Xin Memorial nostalgia, the nursing students; Yin and Yang, a breath
of life, the two have close relationship with the. Fire ban is for fire,
sacrifice to the Archilife dead, it is cold and clear the inherent cultural
association. Tang Xuanzong, the court had to order in the form of folk customs
in the Ching Ming Festival fixed sweep the tombs of the cold food festival,
Hanshi and Qingming is closely connected with in time, cold food festival and
Qingming associated with early, sweep the tombs from the extended to the
Qingming cold food.
篇17:初中英语作文年轻人减肥的态度
全文共 1503 字
+ 加入清单When we watch TV, there are so many beautiful models, wearing beautiful dress with their skinny body, they are sending out such message that if you are skinny, you’ll be looking gorgeous just as them. Affecting by the trend, young people loose weight by no means.
当我们看电视的时候看到很多漂亮的模特,纤瘦的身材,穿着漂亮的衣服,他们在发出一种信息,如果你纤瘦,漂亮的衣服,他们在发出一种信息,如果你纤瘦,你也会看起来像他们美丽。受潮流影响,年轻人不惜使用一切方法来减肥。
On the one hand, some young people lose weight by taking medicine, even eat no food. The ads are always leading the young people to the wrong thought, they tell people that they can loose weight quickly by taking some pills, which are doubted by the doctors. In order to look as the movie starts, people even reject to take food, they eat fruit and fight against hunger.
一方面,一些年轻人通过服药减肥,甚至不进食。广告总是让年轻人产生错误的想法,广告告知人们可以通过服药来快速减肥,这是被医生怀疑的。为了看起来像电影明星一样,人们甚至拒绝进食,吃少量水果,和饥饿做斗争。
On the other hand, some young people keep the clear mind, they make themselves look perfect by doing exercise and keep balanced diet. Their purpose is not looking as good as movie starts, but for keeping fit. They don’t believe in the ads, they believe that lose weight not properly will hurt the body, so they pay special attention to the health.
另一方面,一些年轻人保持清醒的意识,他们通过运动和平衡饮食来让自己看起来完美。他们的目的不是为了像明星一样好看,是为了保持健美。他们不相信广告,相信不适当的减肥会导致身体受害,因此他们特别注重健康。
Loosing weight is hard work, even dangerous thing, if we are so blind to loose weight, we will lose our life. Young people should take care to the healthy way.
减肥是艰辛的工作,甚至是危险的事情,如果完美盲目减肥,会丢掉性命。年轻人应该注重健康的方法。
篇18:初中英语写我的同学作文
全文共 825 字
+ 加入清单我的同学My Classmate
请以"My Classmate"为标题写一篇记叙文
要求:1、主题明确,语言流畅,思路清晰。 2、字数在100字以内。
思路点拨:
写记叙文要按照事物发展的客观规律叙述,所叙述的内容要交代清楚,条理清晰,重点突出,主次分明,详略得当。
这篇文章也是记叙文,主人公应该用第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。本文以主人公为中心线索,以一、两件事件为重点内容去组织材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整个内容情节要合情合理,有真实感,叙述时可按事情发展的顺序进行,同时加以点评。
参考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school,he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived,and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom,the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
[初中英语写我的同学作文
篇19:初中英语作文大全
全文共 594 字
+ 加入清单March 12th is Tree Planting Day. This year our school bought enough trees
before that day . On that day , we didnt had classes . The teachers and our
classmates planted trees around our school.
We began to planted trees as soon as we got to school . some students dug
the holes . Some students put the trees into the holes.
Some students put the earth back to the holes. Then we pushed the earth
hard with our feet . At last we watered the trees as much as possible.
From then on we looked after the trees carefully and the trees grew very
well. It made our shcool more beautiful .And How happy we are!
篇20:应指导学生掌握一些基本写作技巧
全文共 329 字
+ 加入清单一篇好的作文,不仅需要良好的素材,充沛的感情,同时也需要一定的写作技巧进行适当处理。在实际教学过程中,教师也应该指导学生掌握一些基本的写作技巧,为自己的作文加分。比如,在文章的开头如果比较有新意,往往会给阅卷老师眼前一亮的感觉,可以增加第一印象。同样,如果文章的结尾有一个漂亮的总结,为整篇文章划上一个完美的句号,也可以为整篇作文加分。因此,学生在写作时,应在开头、结尾的地方多花点心思。
综上所述,作文教学在高中语文教学中占有极其重要的地位,对于提高学生的文学素质和综合素养具有极其重要的作用。新时期下,教师应转变教学理念,加强和学生之间的有效互动,激发学生的写作兴趣。同时应引导学生多阅读,积累素材,并且传授学生一些必要的写作技巧,全面提高作文教学有效性。