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初中英语的写作技巧(推荐20篇)

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英语作文应试技巧

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善于思考勤于积累

要想在中考作文中拿到高分,这需要考生在日常生活中善于观察,不能两耳不闻窗外事,而应积极关注当今社会热点,如人口问题、污染问题、世界和平等一系列现象;要善于思考,勤于把自己的思想用英语正确地表达和记录下来,只有通过不断的积累和磨练,才能练就良好的写作基本功。

认真审题写好提纲

考生在拿到试卷之后,当听力题做完,可以先看一看作文的题目与类型,对它有一个大致的印象和准备,在做语法和阅读题时对自己的作文能有一个初步的构思。应尽可能地留出20分钟的时间来写作文。在正式写作文时,可参照以下步骤:

1、认真审题,确定题目中的关键词。

2、展开一次“BrainStorm”即头脑风暴,对该题引申出各种联想和论点。

3、根据自己已有的经验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论点来写作。

4、确定基本的写作时态,如记叙文通常用一般过去时(时态运用错误是考生们大量失分的主要原因)。

5、对于有能力的同学,注意不能通篇均用简单句型,可适当引入初中的语法重点如状语从句、宾语从句和被动语态等。这会使考生的作文有质的提高。

6、当整篇作文写完,一定要进行仔细的检查,注意使句子流畅,时态运用准确,单词拼写正确,冠词运用正确,名词的大小写正确。

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篇1:初中生英语

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Mother is the most important person to us. Now people celebrate Mother’s

Day every year. It has become more and more popular. This day is on the second

Sunday in May. On that day, children often send their mother flowers to express

their love. And some children make small gifts for their mothers.

In last years Mothers Day, I didnt spend it with my mother because she

was in the hometown and I was at school, which made me feel ashamed. At night, I

called my mother. At that time, I left my tears, and my mother told me that I

should study hard at school. In the end, I said to her “Happy Mother’ Day, I

love you" and she was very surprised and happy.

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篇2:期待初中英语

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Every year, the thing I expect the most is the Spring Festival. My parents

work far from home and they come back one or two times a year. The Spring

Festival is the time they come home. Every time they come back, they bring mangy

things to me. When I was little, they bought me toys, new clothes and shoes.

Now, they often buy me books. They say more reading is good for me. They hope I

can learn more. The time spend with them is always happy but short. They only

have half a month at home. I hope they can stay at home longer.

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篇3:关于清明节的英语作文初中

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Last Qingming Festival,i return home to worship my grandfather.Qingming

Festival is a folk Festival.In the past,the Qingming Festival was called "Arbor

Day". But Today, Chinese visit their family graves to tend to any underbrush

that has grown. Weeds are pulled, and dirt swept away, and the family will set

out offerings of food and spirit money. Unlike the sacrifices at a familys home

altar, the offerings at the tomb usually consist of dry, bland food. One theory

is that since any number of ghosts rome around a grave area, the less appealing

food will be consumed by the ancestors, and not be plundered by strangers.

With the passing of time, this celebration of life became a day to the

honor past ancestors. Following folk religion, the Chinese believed that the

spirits of deceased ancestors looked after the family. Sacrifices of food and

spirit money could keep them happy, and the family would prosper through good

harvests and more children.

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篇4:初中生英语

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I

consider my parents as the most important people in my life. This is not because

they’re wealthy or famous. Rather, what I value about most is the care and love

they show to me.

My

parents might work hard, but they’re always there for me. Whenever I get into

trouble and desperately need a hand, they come over first to support me and

encourage me. I grew up with their constant care and love. While they’re getting

older with grey hair and wrinkles, they never lose dignity in both life and

jobs.

From

my parents, I have learned that one person can really make a difference. I’ll

never forget their care and love. Gratefulness brings a great fullness to life.

I wish they could always be happy and healthy. It is high time we expressed our

gratitude to people we cherish!

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篇5:常用写作手法的答题技巧

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①拟人手法赋予事物以人的性格、思想、感情和动作。使事物人格化,从而达到形象生动的效果。比如朱自清的《春》一文中写春花“你不让我,我不让你,都开满了花赶趟儿”就是拟人句,生动形象地写出春花争艳的美景。

②比喻手法形象生动、简洁凝练地描写事物、讲解道理。

③夸张手法突出人或事物的特征,揭示本质,给读者以鲜明而强表达.........

的情感,增强了文章的表虽烈的印象。《安塞腰鼓》中多次运用夸张,描写黄土高原上的蓬勃的生命力。

④象征手法把特定的意义寄托在所描写的事物上。

⑤对比手法通过比较,突出事物或描写对象的特点。比如《变色龙》一文,把奥楚蔑洛夫因狗主人身份的变化而变化的态度用对比的方式表达出来,具有强烈的讽刺效果。

⑥衬托(

侧面烘托)手法和正面描写。以次要人物衬托主要的人物,表现人物性格特点、思想、感情等。如《藤野先生》中描写他不拘小节的性格就是用的侧面烘托;而写他工作严谨则是正面描写。

⑦讽刺手法。 运用比喻夸张等手段和方法对人或事物进行揭露、 批判和嘲笑,加强深刻性和批判性,使语言辛辣幽默。比如吴敬梓的《范进中举》。

⑧欲扬先抑和先扬后抑。先贬抑再大力颂扬所描写的对象,上下文形成对比,突出所写的对象,收到出人意料的感人效果。比如鲁迅的《阿长与》。

⑨前后照应(首尾呼应)使情节完整、结构严谨、中心突出。

⑩ 设置悬念能引起读者注意,引出文章的说明内容等。

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篇6:生活英语作文初中

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Time spent at a university is a most worthwhile period in a young persons

life. This is a time when a student begins to form his or her ideas about life

in general. Attending classes and studying in the library keep a student busy

and provide him or her with access to valuable information, adding to his or her

knowledge base.

Campus life can also be rich and colorful. Most universities offer a

variety of extracurricular activities such as sports events, contests, and other

social gatherings, enabling the students to experience relief from study and

homework. Students often form lifelong friendships through the varied

experiences of university life.

During the time a student spends at university, he not only develops his

intellectual abilites,he also develops social skills as well as knowledge and

wisdom necessary for choosing a future career. By learning how to balance

intense study and recreation, a student will be well prepared for the challenges

of future responsibilities.

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篇7:小学生状物作文写作技巧分析

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小学生要学会如何写状物作文,那么大家想了解一下小学生状物作文写作技巧吗,下面小编为大家分享一些小学生状物作文写作技巧吧!

一、怎样写物品

研究物品的特点,可以训练我们的观察和写作能力。要写好物品工艺类的状物文,就要做到以下几点:

1、抓住特征 。从大小、形状、颜色、质地(制造材料)等方面,对所写的物品仔细观察。因为不同的物品有不同的特点,即使是同一种物品,也会有某些细微的区别,有它自己的独特之处。抓住物品的特点写,就是抓住了这一物品区别于另一物品的地方写。

2、按照一定的顺序写 。(1)按整体一局部一整体的顺序写。 (2)按物品各部分的空间顺序写。 (3)有的物品,须按先外后内的顺序写,即先写外表,再写里面的顺序。

3、状物需要想象和联想。 展开想象和联想,不仅使所写之物更加具体生动,还可以开拓作品的意境,增强文章的感染力。

比如,下面两段话的描写:

这个文具盒是用塑料做的,长方形,盒盖上面画着青青的草,红红的花,还有一棵古老的树,树下,白雪公主和蝴蝶公主正在笑眯眯地望着我,好像在对我说:“你也是美丽的小公主,你可一定要好好学习哟!”

打开文具盒,可以看到文具盒里面分上下两层。在它的上层,自动铅笔工作后正在休息,铅笔的旁边是它的好朋友——尺子和橡皮,仿佛在随时准备帮助铅笔更好地完成工作。文具盒的下层,彩笔十六兄弟整装待发,仿佛在说:“小主人,我们随时听候您的命令!”这个大家庭的每个成员都可喜欢工作了:当我要写作业的时候,铅笔就会立刻跳到我手中帮助我写字;当我写错字的时候,橡皮就很愉快地过来帮我改正错误;当我要画直线的时候,尺子就会挺身而出,大显身手;要是我想画画了,那一排彩笔就会争先恐后地来到我面前,争相展示自己的美丽…… 它们相处的可好了。当然,这都是文具盒的功劳,要不是文具盒,它们怎么能成为好朋友呢?

二、怎样写动物

大多数小学生都喜爱小动物,看了以后总想把它们写出来。到底用什么方法,才能写好描写小动物的作文呢?

1.写外形 。首先,观察小动物的外形,一般是写小动物的静态。在观察时,包括颜色、长相、个头都要如实写出来。其次,要抓住特点,不能面面俱到什么都写。三是按顺序:先整体一再局部一 最后整体。概括写整体,具体写局部,用总分关系的句群。最后,为使描写更形象、具体,要展开 丰富的想象,恰当地运用比喻。特别要注意提醒小学生“像……”、“犹如……”、“仿佛……”等比喻词的使用。例如,下面这段话:

我有一只小白兔,雪白的绒毛,胖胖的身体,非常可爱! 这只小白兔有一对长长的大耳朵,它的耳朵很灵敏,哪怕有一点动静,耳朵都会立即竖起来。它还有两只红宝石似的眼睛,在伸手不见五指的暗处闪闪发光。最逗人的是那张三瓣嘴,吃东西和呼吸的时候,向三面张开,露出粉红的牙床。

2.写习性。 写小动物,还要细心观察它们的动作、静态和生活习性.例如,写它们吃食物、嬉戏的样子,相互追逐争斗的情形,如何筑巢、休息的情况等等。 小动物也有 感情、情绪,这要靠小学生从它们的叫声和动作中,用拟人的方法去体会和想象,这样就能写出小动物的性格和生活习惯,显示出它们的活泼和可爱. 但重要的还是要在描述当中,自然融入自己的感情,使文章声情并茂,分外生动。

比如说我们观察一只猫,对猫的大小、颜色、形貌,要有大体上的认识,再观察它的头、耳朵、眼睛、鼻子、嘴有什么特点,它的叫声有无变化?它在来生人、外出、进食、睡觉时,又是什么样子的?它对主人的态度如何?与其他动物的关系如何?它什么时候可爱?什么时候闹脾气?等等,这些都是我们要注意的地方。在描写的时候,就要对观察得来的材料,根据文章内容需要进行选择,把最生动具体,最有用的材料写进文章里。

三、怎样写植物

提起植物,小学生的脑海会出现许多花草树木的样子,但是要将平时熟悉的植物写成作文,很多同学却感到很难,有的觉得无话可写,有的三言两语就写完了。怎样才能写好植物呢?

首先,写前要细心观察所写的植物,并做观察记录。观察时,先看整体的形状(外形)特征;再看颜色、枝叶的细部特征及生长环境,并把所看到的详细情况记录下来。

其次,安排好写作顺序。

1、可以从整体到局部 。先写植物的整体特征,再写它的局部特征。例如以主干、枝、叶、花、果等为序,并突出写其中的一两部分。另外写的时候,要求学生从各个角度去详细地描绘、刻画。例如描写树叶,就写它们的形状、颜色和给人的感觉等;描写花,就写它们的大小、香味、色彩、花期等,使人有如身临其境。另外,植物对阳光、土壤、肥料和水的需要如何……但也不需要面面俱到,要抓住最能反映植物特征的部位写。

写作的时候,要注意展开联想和想象,巧妙运用比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。例如下面一段话:

月季花在阳光的照耀下,犹如涂上了一层光亮亮的油脂。光滑而明亮。整个花枝昂首挺胸,接受阳光母亲的沐浴。花的中心有黄色的花蕊,花蕊顶端粘着花粉,散发出诱人的芳香,所以常引来一群群勤劳的蜜蜂和美丽的蝴蝶。

2、按照植物的生长过程进行观察 。很多植物的生长、发育、开花、结果直至枯萎,每个时期的形态各不相同的,所以,可以按照植物的生长过程进行观察。

3、写观察日记。 可以用写观察日记的方法。来描述某种植物在一段时间里的生长、发育情况。

4、以四时变化为序。 很多植物在不同的季节里各具特色,所以,还可以其四时的变换顺序来写。

5、托物抒怀,借物咏志。 写植物,不能仅仅停留在对外形和色彩的描写上,还应该在文章中表达作者的思想感情。例如,感悟人生的哲理、高尚的道德情操、对美好理想的追求等等。用这种方法,要借助例文进行必要的指导,培养学生丰富的联想能力,在描摹植物形态的同时,赋予它们一定的象征意义。

我们在描写植物时,如果能进行人格化描写,就可以使笔下的花草具有思想品质特点,这样写出来的文章就会有情趣。我们在描写植物的时候,也要写出对植物的思想感情的变化,带着自己的感情去描写其特点,那文章会更有滋味。例如下面一段话:

春天,白杨树抽出了嫩绿的新芽,呈现出一片新绿,一场春雨过后,树叶带着晶莹透明的露珠,好像有无数的生命在颤动。

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篇8:初中英语

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This summer, I move to a new city with my parents, and I transfer to a new

school. I used to live in the countryside, so my new life is so different from

before. The school is a little far from my home, so I go to school by bus. After

school, I have many activities in school. Classmates are friendly to me. I learn

English now. Its so interesting that I like it very much. Besides, life in city

is different. There are many interesting places to go. At weekends, my parents

take me outside. We go to the park, the zoo or go shopping. But we are not so

familiar with our neighbors. I think we should build good relationship with

them.

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篇9:关于生活英语作文初中

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Before I entered the middle school, I felt so worried about the life in

middle school, because my cousin told me that I would have to compete with so

many excellent students. Now I get used to the life, I learn many subjects from

Monday to Friday. Though I always meet the difficulties in learning the new

knowledge, I get help from my teachers and classmates. I am not afraid of the

middle school life again, I am so excited to learn new things every day. In the

future days, I will meet many challenges, I believe I can get over them. Life in

middle school has happiness and sorrow, they fulfill my life.

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篇10:自考英语写作基础题型

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一、单项选择题

(1)先易后难:一些考题的答案比较容易选定,可以先从这些考题入手。平时练习时,应以基础为主,主要精力不应放在偏题、怪题上。

(2)分析考查意图、运用相关知识:应学会分析出题者考查的意图,明确相关题的测试点是什么,然后运用所学知识,进行分析、判断,再进行选择。

(3)利用暗示进行选择:注意考题涉及的语境范围。平时应注重对习惯用语表达、惯用法和中英文化差别等方面知识的积累。

(4)运用排除法:可采取语言排除、逻辑排除、语法排除或选择排除等方法。先排除较容易、较明显的错误选项,缩小范围,而后对剩余的选项进行比较分析,最后确定答案。

二、完形填空题

1、搭配判断法。

根据对以往试题的分析,搭配型考题在完形填空题中占的比例最高。搭配型问题主要测试常见搭配的熟练程度,比如说哪些词要搭配不定式、动名词或某种从句,哪些词必须与某个介词搭配。我们在复习时要特别注意短语动词和介词的固定搭配。

2、结构判断法。

结构型问题主要包括句型、句式、连接词的选择等,解题时要运用句法知识,把握关键词,从而做出迅速正确的判断。完形填空题中有很多是利用语法的正确性与逻辑的排斥性间的矛盾来设计的。因此考生应结合上下文的合理性及意义关系的逻辑性选择最佳答案。完形填空中常考的逻辑关系主要有:

(1)转折、让步关系:这种关系表明后一种观点或事实与前一种观点或事实相比有些出乎意料。

常见的表示转折、让步的词或词组有:but,still,yet,however,though,although,no matter,in spite of,anyway,even if等。

(2)因果关系:

表示原因的连词或词组有:because (of ),due to,owing to,thanks to,since,for,as等。

表示结果的词或词组有:so,therefore,then,as a result,in consequence,consequently,thus等。

(3)递进、补充关系:这种关系表示对前一事实或观点做进一步阐述。

常用的词、词组有:moreover,likewise,besides,in addition,also,too,not only…but also,apart from,what‘s more 等。

(4)对比、比较关系:对比观点或事物间的差异性,比较观点或事物间的同一性。

表示对比的词或词组有:in contrast,by contrast,on the contrary,conversely,unlike,oppositely 等。表示比较的词或词组有:like,in comparison,compare…with,as,just as等。

3、词义判断法。

词汇型问题也是完形填空的一个考点,主要测试考生在段落语篇中把握语义连贯性的能力,提供选择的词可能是近义词、近形词也可能是随意拼凑的四个选项,遇到这类题,既要联系上下文,又要具有扎实的词汇基础,有时还须根据自己的文化背景知识做出判断、选择答案。

三、阅读理解

在做阅读理解题时,除了掌握前面介绍的基本题型、基本法则外,还要进行有意识的阅读训练。提高阅读能力的训练主要可以从下面几个方面入手:词汇、方法、侧重点。

1、词汇:猜词的技巧。

在阅读过程中,不可避免地会碰到不认识的单词,考试中又不允许查词典,有些不认识的单词对文章的理解影响不大,可以忽略。但有些不认识的单词则会影响阅读者对文章理解的正确性。在这种情况下,必需猜测词的含义,这就需要利用猜词的技巧了。

最基本的猜词技巧有两种:一是根据构词法的规则猜,构词法的规则在前面的章节中已有介绍,这里就不重复了;另一种猜词的技巧是根据上下文的描述、解释、列举、比较等,运用已有的知识,分析、推断该词的含义。常用的猜词技巧可归纳为以下几种:

(1)利用词根、词缀构词法推测词义。通过构词法推测词义是最常用的方法之一。

(2)分析文中对该词的直接定义推测词义。

作者在行文中有时不得不使用某些难词、偏词,为使读者理解,作者常常会在文章中直接解释该词语。作者或通过同位语,或使用定语从句加以阐明,或用冒号、破折号、括号给出,或用语篇标志词引出,这类语篇标志词有:that is (to say); e.g.;oor,in other words;to put it in another way等。如:

She is bilingual.In other words,she speaks English and French equally well.(bilingual:会说两种语言的)。

(3)分析文中对该词的近义复述推测词义。

同一短文中前后两个句子、短语或单词通常有互释作用,可以从上下文的复述中获取与某一单词或短语相关的信息以猜测词义。如:

It is difficult t

o list all of my fathe‘s attributes because he has so many different talents and abilities.(attribute:特质;才能)

(4)分析文中对该词的对比和并列表述推测词义。

利用上下文中的对比或并列表述猜测词义是最常用、最可靠的方法。有不少句子会在上下文中给出某个生词(尤其是偏词、难词)的同义词或反义词,运用对比或并列表达对这些生词加以推测。通过了解词与词之间的连接关系,特别是一些语篇标志词,如:however;on the other hand;nevertheless等,我们不难推断这些生词的词义。如:

If you agree,write “yes”;if you dissent,write “no”。(dissent:不同意)

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篇11:寒假英语作文初中

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Nowadays it is common to encounter a scene when people want to see things

happen but can‘t make things happen for various reasons. The most important

reason is that they just refuse to create and innovate. With the accelerated

pace of our society,more and more people recognize the importance of creation

that is bound to make a difference in social productivity.

As far as I am concerned,we should all have the notion of being the

participants of supporting creation. First of all,creation is the most vital

factor to improve the inner competitiveness of our nation. For another,it is

certain that creation is so essential that enables many people to find their

positions in the company and careers in their lives.

Measures are also needed to encourage creation . First and foremost,the

government should establish certain rules to sweep up the obstacles of

invention. Some people have already complained much about complicated procedure

of patent applications or high fees to do experiments of inventions.

Additionally,high schools and universities can provide students with

scholarships or overseas learning opportunities,which will stimulate more

youngsters to join the group of invention and innovation.

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篇12:自我介绍初中英语的作文

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自我介绍初中英语作文篇1

My Chinese name is Peng Wanjun and English name is Alice. Im a girl in my 12 years old. I like singing and acting. Besides, I like doing sports. Table tennis is my favorite sport. I have a brother and a sister. They are middle school students. I study in Xing Gong Primary School. Im in Class Two Grade Four. I have three best friends. They are Huang Yue, Xia Yu and Wang Tongtong. We have many things in common. Do you like me?

我的中文名字叫彭万军,英文名字是爱丽丝。我是一个12岁的女孩。我喜欢唱歌和表演。另外,我喜欢运动。乒乓球是我最喜欢的运动。我有弟弟和姊姊。他们是中学生。我在兴工小学学习。我在四年级二班。我有三个最好的朋友。他们是黄阅,夏雨和王彤彤。我们有很多共同之处。你喜欢我吗?

自我介绍初中英语作文篇2

Hello,everyone. Now please allow me to do an introduction. My name is Li Lei. I’m 14 year old. My birthday is on October 11th. My favourite book is twilight. I really love to read the books about vampires. My hobby is singing. Some people say I’m a good singer.My favourite singer is Justin Biber.I think he is a great singer. I love to sing his songs. Besides singing, I love shopping very much. If I have time, I will go shopping with my friends.I’m really good at English, if you have any questions, you can ask me, I will do my best to help you. We can be the best friends forever. Thank you.

大家好,现在请允许我做自我介绍。我的名字叫李蕾。我今年14岁了。我的生日在10月11日。我最喜欢的小说是暮光之城。我非常喜欢那些关于吸血鬼的书籍。我的爱好是唱歌。有人说我唱得很好听。我最喜欢的歌手是贾斯汀比伯。我认为他是个很棒的歌手。我很喜欢唱他的歌

除了唱歌,我还喜欢逛街初中自我介绍英语作文(5篇)自我介绍。如果我有时间,我就会和朋友去逛街。我的英语很好,如果你有什么问题,你可以问我。我会尽我最大的努力帮助你。我们可以成为一生的好朋友。

自我介绍初中英语作文篇3

Good morning, everyone! It’s a great honor for me to introduce myself to all of you. My name is Serena and I’m fifteen years old. I come from Dalian city which is a beautiful and attracting place. Wish you can visit there and I believe that you will be impressed. English and movie are my favorites which can help me learn and relax. I like making friends, especially the ones who share common interests with me. And I think we can have much to share and talk. I hope to make progress with my friends. Thank you.

大家早上好。我很荣幸向大家介绍我自己。我叫Serena,今年十五岁。我来自美丽的海滨城市大连。希望你们可以去那旅游,我相信你们一定会对它留下深刻印象的。英语和电影是我的爱好,它们能够帮助我的学习,使我放松初中自我介绍英语作文(5篇)。我喜欢交朋友,特别是和我有共同兴趣的人。我觉得我们有很多可以分享可以聊的东西。我希望和我的朋友共同进步。

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篇13:春节初中英语作文100字

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The Spring Festival, the most jubilant and important festival in China, is

observed by most Chinese people at home and abroad. Our hometown is not an

exception.

Similar with other places in china, we prepare for the festival about half

a month before. With the lunar New Year approaching, the red lanterns are hung

up along the main streets, making the ancient town filled with the festival

atmosphere. While people clean up their houses, decorate it with traditional

decorations such as Chinese knots and paper cutting. Each family pastes up

Spring Festival couplets to convey their best wishes for the coming year.

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篇14:关于初中英语作文之学校生活

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初中英语作文:初二英语作文 Our School Life

I don't think our school life is colorful. Because we've got so many classes every day. I wonder whether we can change our school life someday. You see, from Monday to Friday, I have to stay at school. the only relaxation is to listen to the radio or play ball games. At weekends, we need to go to school to have classes, too. I know it's very important for us to study well now. As the saying goes, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. "I want to step into the nature. I hope we will have more activities such as visiting museums, taking part in different kinds of contests, attending some lectures and so on. Is it only a dream?

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篇15:高考满分作文写作技巧及方法

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高考作文占高考语文分数的半边天,只有写作好作文,同学们的语文成绩才会高。下面是小编整理的高考满分作文写作技巧方法,欢迎大家阅读!

一、忌复制话题

话题作文,出题者只是提供一个写作的由头,意在引出习作者发表新议论,展开新联想,讲述新故事,抒发新感情。所以,写作时不能将命题所提供的话题材料照搬不误——复制一番,然后才进入自己的“话题”。更不能通篇只是颠来倒去的解释所供材料的含义,引用所供材料的例子在原地打转转。

其实,读者不需要复制,读者需要创新。因为试题所供材料,读者已经听过了,感受过了,下面得看你的感悟和创新如何?如果写议,就要能够帮助读者深刻领悟其中道理;如果写记叙文,就要通过描述自己的亲身体验或讲述新鲜的故事,使读者有更具体、更强烈、更丰富的思想感情。有时,根据写作需要对所供的一组材料概括出具有“共性”或独具“个性”的某一见解而适当引用材料,这种情况当然不能算是“复制话题”,反而体现了写作者的创新意识了。

二、忌穿靴戴帽

近年来,话题作文对学生发挥想象能力,进行创新思维提供了相当宽泛的写作范围。但某些习作者由于领悟能力不够,想象、创新能力欠缺,同样会把原来提供的话题变成僵化呆板、穿靴戴帽的病文章。

例如:近年一次以“答案是丰富多彩的”为话题写作时,某考生居然写了这样的内容:“记得有一次,我们去自然博物馆参观,当我们看到地球仪时,讲解员问我们:‘地球为什么是圆的?’一位同学说:‘因为它在地球仪上,比较好转。’也有的说:‘为了使人看得清楚。’各种回答,千变万化,最后讲解员说:‘有位航海家在大海中一直向西行,最终达到了他的出发点,所以证明地球是圆的。’”然后,这位习作者又归结道:“的确,世界是千变万化的,疑问是层出不穷的,答案是丰富多彩的。”

以上这段文字,根本没有理解原话题的丰富的内涵,仅仅是摘引了一些语句生硬地给自己的文章“穿靴戴帽”而已,习作仍然走在缺少想象力、缺乏创新思维的老路上。

三、忌转移话题

一位考生,他的“心灵悟语”一文开头是这样的:“心,我的心不要悲哀,你要忍受命运的安排。严冬掠走的一切,新春会给你带回来。心,我的心,只要是你情乏所钟,你都可以尽量去爱。”可是后面他又接着写道:“平淡,不是与世无争,也不是无所谓,而是平常与淡然。用一颗平常而且淡然的心去面对社会的艰难和压力,就不会过于烦恼和紧张了。就象面对高考,我从小学到真是12年寒窗苦,为的就是在这人生的转折点上有一个好的开始,但这一路上却充满了艰辛与痛苦,即将要达到终点时,还要考虑万一没有考上大学怎么办?这时,我的平常心和淡然的心对我说话了,他告诉我不要有太多顾虑,在这12年里流的汗水会化作春雨毫不吝啬的浇在你身上,严冬夺取的一切,新春会给你夺回来。”

这篇习作,开头谈的是“爱”,后面写的却是如何看待人生路上的“难”与“苦”,明显属于“转移话题”。“心灵悟语”,可“悟”的话题有许多,“爱”心可以去“悟”,“人生”也可以“悟”,但每一篇“悟”只应围绕一个中心来写,如果前言不搭后语,驴唇不对马嘴,谁知道你“悟”出了什么道理呢。

四、忌文意散漫

一般来说,话题提供的是写作范围,并没有规定写作的主旨。所以,在话题规定的范围内,还要“炼意”,也就是提炼自己文章的中心思想。如果在这一环节下功夫不够,没有考虑好自己究竟要写什么,要表达什么意思,就匆匆忙下笔,就有可能东拉西扯,多头指向,文意散漫,不知所云。

例如:有位习作者写《答案是丰富多彩的》,开头三段写学生学习负担太重;接着写李素丽如何在平凡的岗位上成为劳动模范;再下来写一个故意开枪伤人的派出所所长被判死刑;最后又写到做数学题可以一题多解。这样一篇文章,七零八落,让人不知所云,是典型的文意散漫,东拉西扯的病文。

五、忌缺少创新

话题作文的审题难度大为降低,内容更加宽泛,而且更加淡化文体观念。围绕一个话题,可以议论,可以记叙,可以说明,甚至可以编写出小小说或短剧,形式非常自由。

正由于话题作文在内容和形式上彻底松绑,学生可以极大地发挥创造力和想象力。可是,由于旧教学思想的影响,学生的作文中仍有不少八股味。写记叙文只会一味赞“心灵美”,编造虚假题材;也有写“悲壮美”的,以损害父母身体健康为代价编造所谓“车祸”换来“我追求的品格——坚韧”、“战胜脆弱”的作文得高分者也大有人在。(由于以前作文命题的欠缺,造成虚假、编造的作文已越来越此路不通了。)现代社会,人文精神已渗透到生活的各个领域,在作文中写出活生生的富有个性的人,极有创意、大胆想象的科幻故事等是我们中学生应该尽力追求的目标。但要达到这个目标,必须广泛阅读课外书籍,关心未来世界,着眼科学素质的培养,重视想象力的开发,只有这样,才能使你的作文有创新、有特色。

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篇16:厦门初中英语

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Xiamen is a beautiful seaside city! Come to Xiamen to play the visitors

will be praised thumbs. There are many beautiful scenery in Xiamen, such as

Gulangyu scenic spots and historical sites and beautiful scenery of egrets Chau.

Not only that, Xiamen Cuisine is a lot more. In addition Xiamen also enjoys the

title of "civilized city".

Xiamen not only has beautiful scenery, food is delicious surprise. Gulangyu

Islet pie is very characteristic, where the pie tastes the skin is very crisp,

taste very good, very popular. There are Fried leek dumplings, Fried leek

dumplings is a traditional good point of Xiamen, Fujian and Taiwan folk. Fried

leek dumplings Xiamen early in the prestigious. Fried leek dumplings made of

spiral, epidermal layers with crisp, delicious, crispy and delicious to eat.

There are Griddle Cake, Griddle Cake also called chunbing. Its skin is thin and

flexible, it is delicious, but not greasy. During the festive season, many

places have the custom of eating Griddle Cake. If the volume will become "good

Griddle Cake fried fried Spring rolls, eats is another taste.

Xiamen, ah, you are really a beautiful place!

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篇17:中学生写作技巧方法:变换顺序法

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变换顺序法主要是指在叙事的过程中改变常规的顺叙,而采用倒叙、插叙等叙述方法,从而带给文章一种摇曳多姿的美。

具体来说运用倒叙即是把事件的结局或某个最突出的片断提在前面叙述,然后再从事件的开头进行叙述。

倒叙的类型大致有以下三种:一是把结局提前,如《背影》;二是像《羚羊木雕》那样把中间扣人心弦的部分提前;三是由眼前事物引起对往事的回忆,如《风筝》。

采用倒叙的情况一般有三种:一是为了表现文章中心思想的需要,把最能表现中心思想的部分提到前面,加以突出;二是为了使文章结构富于变化,避免平铺直叙;三是为了表现效果的需要,使文章曲折有致,造成悬念,引人入胜。

使用倒叙应注意以下三点:

一、倒叙实在是一种截叙,是顺叙的变式。那么,关键在于截得恰到好处。或截意外的结局于前,使读者急欲读完全文;或截精彩片断于先,使文章开首即光彩照人。到底怎样截,在什么地方生变,是费心血、见功力的。特别是片断倒叙更是如此。

二、注意顺叙与倒叙之间的衔接。倒叙是顺叙中某个部分提前,倒叙之后还要转为顺叙。所以,倒与顺之间存在着天然的内在联系。使用倒叙既要做到过渡自然,又要把倒叙的起止点交代清楚。

三、不可为倒叙而倒叙。若文章所反映的事件历时较长,情况又较复杂,才适宜用倒叙的方法。对于时间跨度小、情节单纯的事件则不必用倒叙的方式,若勉强使用反倒故弄玄虚了。

插叙,是在叙述中心事件的过程中,为了帮助展开情节或刻画人物,暂时中断叙述的线索,插入一段与主要情节相关的内容,然后再接着叙述原来的内容。插叙与倒叙的区别在于:插叙只是顺叙中的一个片断,不是全文中心事件的一部分;而倒叙所叙的内容是整个事件中的一个组成部分或一个环节。

如鲁迅的《故乡》中有两处插叙。一处是当我的母亲谈到闰土时,作者用这时候,我的脑海里忽然闪出一幅神异的图画来。引出对少年闰土形象的插叙。另一处是对杨二嫂形象的回忆。这两处插叙使闰土、杨二嫂过去与现在的不同形象及不同生活境况形成鲜明对比,充实了文章内容,深入发掘了主题思想。插叙的内容应能对中心内容起补充、解释或衬托作用,根据中心内容的需要可长可短,但不能超越表现中心思想的范围,否则会喧宾夺主、繁琐累赘。使用插叙时,要安排好与中心内容的衔接,使过渡自然,内容贯通一气。

需要指出的是,在运用插叙时不能打乱原来的叙述线索,要注意与上下文的衔接。这样,文章的结构不仅富有变化,而且叙述事情的条理非常清楚。

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篇18:以祖国的变化为题的初中英语作文

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初中英语作文 《祖国变化

Great changes have taken place in China. Many new buildings have been built in cities, towns and villages.

The more cars we have, the more crowed the roads are. So the roads become wider and wider. Many overpasses (立交桥) have been built in big cities. Chinese people’s life is much better than ever before. We have Tv sets, washing machines, fridges, even computers, cars etc.

We’ll study harder and make our countrry stronger and more beautiful.

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篇19:初中英语作文大全我的一天

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初中英语作文大全:我的一天

【—:我的一天】下面是为大家介绍的关于我的一天,好好看看吧。

My Day(我的一天)

I get up early at six every day. After doing some morning exercises, I read English for twenty minutes. At seven I have breakfast. After breakfast I take my schoolbag and go to school. Our class begins at eight, and we have four classes in the morning. After lunch at 12 o’clock, I take a short rest in the classroom. We have three more classes in the afternoon.After school at five , I go back home. I often help my mother do some housework. Sometimes I watch TV. After dinner, I begin to do my homework. Then I take a shower. I go to bed at nine thirty.

以上就是关于我的一天的介绍,同学们你的一天是怎样的,也来介绍一下吧,相信你的一天会更充实的。

初中英语语法之副词

【—语法之副词】下面是对英语中副词的用法知识讲解学习,同学们我们一起来分享下面的知识吧。

副词的用法

(1) 副词在句中可作状语,表语和定语。

He studies very hard. (作状语)

Life here is full of joy. (作定语)

When will you be back? (作表语)

副词按其用途和含义可分为下面五类:

1)时间副词

时间副词通常用来表示动作的时间。常见的时间副词有:now today, tomorrow, yesterday, before, late, early, never, seldom, sometimes, often, usually, always等。例如:

He often comes to school late.

What are we going to do tomorrow?

He is never been to Beijing.

2)地点副词

地点副词通常用来表示动作发生的地点。常见的地点副词有:here, there, inside, outside, home, upstairs, downstairs, anywhere, everywhere, nowhere, somewhere, down, up, off, on, in, out等。例如:

I met an old friend of mine on my way home.

He went upstairs.

Put down your name here.

3)方式副词

方式副词一般都是回答“怎样的?”这类问题的,其中绝大部分都是由一个形容词加词尾-ly构成的, 有少数方式副词不带词尾-ly, 它们与形容词同形。常见的方式副词有:anxiously, badly, bravely, calmly, carefully, proudly, rapidly, suddenly, successfully, angrily, happily, slowly, warmly, well, fast, slow, quick, hard, alone, high, straight, wide等。例如:

The old man walked home slowly.

Please listen to the teacher carefully.

The birds are flying high.

He runs very fast.

4)程度副词

程度副词多数用来修饰形容词和副词,有少数用来修饰动词或介词短语。常见的程度副词有:much, (a) little, a bit, very, so, too, enough, quite, rather, pretty, greatly, completely, nearly, almost, deeply, hardly, partly等。例如:

Her pronunciation is very good.

She sings 初中数学 quite well.

I can hardly agree with you.

5)疑问副词是用来引导特殊疑问句的副词。常见的疑问副词有:how, when, where, why等。例如:

How are you getting along with your studies?

Where were you yesterday?

Why did you do that?

(2)副词在句中的位置

1)多数副词作状语时放在动词之后。如果动词带有宾语,则放在宾语之后。例如:

Mr Smith works very hard.

She speaks English well.

2)频度副词作状语时,通常放在行为动词之前,情态动词,助动词和be动词之后。例如:

He usually gets up early.

I’ve never heard him singing.

She is seldom ill.

3)程度副词一般放在所修饰的形容词和副词的前面, 但enough作副词用时,通常放在被修饰词的后面。例如:

It is a rather difficult job.

He runs very fast.

He didn’t work hard enough.

4)副词作定语时,一般放在被修饰的名词之后。例如:

On my way home, I met my uncle.

The students there have a lot time to do their own research work.

(3)部分常用副词的用法

1) very, much

这两个副词都可表示“很”,但用法不同。Very用来修饰形容词和副词的原级,而much用来修饰形容词和副词的比较级。例如:

She is a very nice girl

I’m feeling much better now.

初中英语作文大全之自然灾害

【—之自然灾害】下面老师就为同学们带来一篇关于自然灾害的范文,供同学们写作参考。

Natural Disasters

In the past hundred years, there have heen frequent natural disasters, such as floods, droughts, mud-rock flows, seismic sea waves, earthquakes, windstorms and the stretching of new deserts.

The disasters have killed millions upon millions of people, destroyed countless homes, and wiped out numerous pieces of fertile land. Now more and more people become aware that those disasters have much to do with what we have done to the earth. We have cut down too many trees in the forests,we have badly polluted the environment, we have shocked our own home-planet time and again with tremendously powerful explosions of nuclear bombs. As a result, climates have become abnormal, rainwater rushes down hillsides angrily, and the underground energy goes up to revenge itself on us.

The earth is our only home-planet. It is urgent for us to stop damaging it, and to do our best to protect it and make it a lovely place suitable to live in, for we have nowhere to go and survive except where we are now.

自然灾害在现今社会已经发生的越来越平凡了,是什么造成了今天的地步呢?同学们想想原因看看吧!

初中英语作文大全之初中暑假英语日记

【—之初中暑假英语日记】下面老师就为同学们带来一篇关于初中暑假英语日记,供同学们写作参考。

I often go to see my grandma and grandpa during my summer vacation.They are both seventy years old and live in the country happily. Summer view of the countryside is very beautiful. I can do many interesting things there. I am used to getting up early in the morning breathing the fresh airlistening to the birds singing and enjoying the green trees red flowers and the river. I like fishing with my friends.

When night comes I sit under the tree with my grandma listening to her telling me many funny stories. And I tell her some new things happening in the city. When I have to go backI am always reluctant to go. I really feel happy living in the country.

同学们在暑假时期是不是遇到很多有趣的事呢?尝试着写下来吧!

初中英语名词所有格语法大全

【—名词所有格】名词所有格也是在英语中是非常常见的一种现象,关于名词所有格,下面就是老师为同学们带来的名词所有格,供学生们学习参考。

1、名词所有格

名词如要表示与后面名词的所有关系,通常用名词所有格的形式,意为"……的"。一般有以下几种形式:

(1)一般情况下在词尾加"s"。例如:

Kates father Kate的爸爸

my mothers friend 我妈妈的朋友

(2)如果复数名词以s结尾,只加""。例如:

Teachers Day 教师节

The boys game 男孩们的游戏

(3)如果复数名词不以s结尾,仍加"s"。例如:

Childrens Day 儿童节

Womens Day 妇女节

(4)表示两个或几个共有时,所有格应加在后一个名词上。例如:

Lucy and Lilys room Lucy 和Lily的房间

Kate and Jims father Kate 和Jim的爸爸

动物和无生命事物的名词的所有格一般不在词尾加"s",而常常用介词of的短语来表示。

a map of China 一幅中国地图

the name of her cat 她的猫的名字

a picture of my family 我的家庭的一张照片

the door of the bedroom 卧室的门

对于名词所有格的相关介绍,上面还是比较全面的,如果同学们还不是很了解的话,可以多多看看。

形容词ashamed的两个搭配

1. be ashamed of (doing) sth 对(做)某事感到羞愧或惭愧。如:

You really ought to be ashamed of that. 你实在应该对此感到惭愧。

He was ashamed of asking [having asked]such a simple question. 他由于问了这样简单的问题而感到难为情。

He is ashamed of his failure [having failed]. 他对自己的失败感到羞惭。

比较以下同义句型:

I am ashamed of that. / I am ashamed of myself for that. 我对此感到羞愧。

He is ashamed of being poor. / He is ashamed of himself for being poor. 他因为穷而感到羞惭。

2. be ashamed to do sth

(1) 因感到难为情或感到差耻而不愿某事。如:

I am ashamed to say so. 这样说我不好意思。

He was too ashamed to ask for help. 他不好意思请求帮助。

(2) 对做某事而感到羞愧或惭愧。如:

You should be ashamed to tell such lies. 撒这样的谎你应该感到羞愧。

He was ashamed to have made some careless mistakes. 他因出了些很粗心的差错而感到惭愧。

注:该用法有时可换成 that 从句。如上面最后一句也可说成:

He was ashamed that he had made some careless mistakes.

再比较:

他因说谎而感到羞惭。

正:He was ashamed of having lied.

正:He was ashamed to have lied.

正:He was ashamed that he had lied.

初中英语作文大全之当学生的好处

【—之当学生的好处】当学生有什么好处呢?下文老师为大家带来当学生的好处的英语范文,供同学们参考!

Good of Being a Student

Many students complain that its difficult to be a student because of the endless classes and examinations. Besides, we spend all our time in study so that we cant do what we really want to do. However, in my opinion, its good to be a student. Firstly, all we need to worry about is our study. As long as we want, we can study with our whole-heart and then play. Secondly, the pressure of a student is much less than to be a worker. After graduation, many things will change and the world seems so different from what we see in school. Finally, teachers are tolerant and patient. They are likely to teach us what we should do and what we cant do. And, if we make mistakes, teachers will help us correct them patiently. After graduation, few people would do these to us. In short, its good to be a student although we have endless homework and examinations.

很多学生抱怨当学生难,因为有无尽的课和考试。而且,我们花所有的时间在学习上以至于不能做我们真正想做的事。但是,在我看来,当学生是好的。首先,我们需要担心的只是我们的学习。只要我们想,我们就可以全心学习然后再玩。其次,学生的压力比工人的压力要少得多。毕业后,很多东西都变了,世界和我们在学校看到的是不一样的。最后,老师是有忍耐力和耐心的。他们会教会我们应该做什么和不能做什么。而且,如果我们犯了错误,老师会耐心地帮我们改正。毕业后,很少有人会对我们做这些。总之,尽管我们有很多作业和考试,当学生还是有好处的。

当学生的好处是否如上处所说的那样呢?同学们也将它的好处例举下来吧!

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篇20:关于清明节的英语作文初中

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Ching Ming festival is a traditional Chinese festival, has a history of two

thousand five hundred years; Its main traditional cultural activities are:

grave, outing, cockfighting, swing, play mat, pull hook, tug-of-war), etc. The

members (the grave), is very old. Tomb-sweeping day, as a traditional culture,

it is a full of mysterious colorific festival, on this day, the pedestrians on

the road are missing people who died, to express their respect and grief!

Ching Ming festival, in hainan many locals call it the "qingming festival".

Middle age the qingming festival is very important, if not as a legal holiday,

they will also take time to go home "qingming festival". This suggests that the

qingming festival has become a culture, become a man of the late express a way

of missing loved ones.

Qingming festival, is a kind of Chinese traditional culture recognition and

respect. Qingming festival is very important in the ancient tradition of a

festival, is also the most important festival of festivals, was the day of

ancestor worship and the grave. This grave, the shrine of the dead an activity.

The han nationality and some minority are mostly in the tombs. According to the

old tradition, the grave, people to carry goods such as especially fruit, paper

money to the grave, will be food for offering in the family tomb, then paper

incineration, new soil up to the grave, fold a few branches pale green branches

ed in the grave, and then salute kowtow worship, finally eat especially home.

The tang dynasty poet tu mus poem "qingming" : "rains fall heavily as qingming

comes, and passers-by with lowered spirits go. Restaurant where? Boy pointed

apricot blossom village." Write the tomb-sweeping day is special atmosphere.

Until today, tomb-sweeping day ancestor worship, mourning the late relatives

customs still prevail. And the more brought to the attention of the people.

Chinese is influenced by its culture, make clear the Chinese memorial

ancestors festival. Ancestor worship in qingming festival people are back, this

is a kind of culture, a kind of habit.

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