2017年高考英语写作指导汇编四篇 作文范文【汇编20篇】

考场的高分作文，在有些考生看来则又是可望而不可及的。下面整理了一些高考作文的写作技巧，希望对大家有所帮助！

一、理顺强化内在逻辑

大考前，应该对自己曾写过的文章进行一次大的梳理。查看与反思一下，特别是是深入高三之后，自己写过的文章内部的思路、逻辑、层次、结构是否都合理，有什么不顺通之处吗，该如何改正呢?如果，上述问题基本做得还好，那么，还应该进一步想一想，有没有更佳的思路与表现的角度?在层次与结构上，还可再作那些完善与突破?

一篇考场佳作，需要把握好段与段之间的内部关系。每一文出，必有其内在的行文逻辑，此逻辑一定要顺达严整，合理自然，不偏不拗，不离不散。高分作文，非常重要的一点，便是文脉清晰，文理畅达。

二、牢固拓展写作内容

无论高考作文如何命题，一般而言，题目控制的是题旨，是方向，对于写作内容往往是不加干预的。择选恰切的自我熟悉的内容构思成文，这是考生的写作自由。这一特点，及体现了新课标的核心理念，也是作文成功备考的关键所在。作文命题的题旨与方向，考生一定是事前未知的，但无论怎样的题旨与方向，都需要充实有效的写作内容来支持;而充实有效的写作内容则一定需要考生提前准备，也必须提前准备。当然，这样的准备，不是讲考试的时候，简单的照搬照抄，考生需要依据题目的具体要求对自我写作内容进行恰当的取舍与整合;而取舍与整合的基础则必须是事先的充分拥有。

拥有，分为两步。一为牢固，一为拓展。高三作文备考，教师很重要的工作就是能够不断激发、牢固、拓展考生的写作内容。这是因为，在某种程度上讲：考场，时间紧，考生，阅历浅，在考场上写出有深刻思想内涵的文章实属不易。因此，高考作文思想内涵之争，就往往容易演化为写作内容之争。

高考写作内容的准备包括哪些重要的方面呢?择其要，概括为9类：生命发现、情怀依依、精神强度、艺术之光、万物有灵、中西对比、生活温度、质疑追问、民族文化。此9类，需要考生重点加以关注。

三、增强完善表达方式

我们常提及的5种表达方式记叙、议论、说明、描写、抒情，是对一个人具有较好表达能力的要求，作文备考过程中于此5种方式不容我们忽视。这5种表达方式，在写作运用中，考生朋友可以有所侧重，有所擅长，但应该有一个基本前提，那便是这5种表达方式应该基本都能运用，没有死结，没有盲点。

一些学校，在备考中，只练议论文;有的考生还错误地认为，议论文可以弥补自己语言表现力不足的问题。这些做法与想法都是有片面性的。选用怎样的表达方式，实际上是依据命题特点而定的，不好刻舟求剑。例如，上海卷曾有一个题目曰我想握住你的手，此题写成严正板直的议论文恐怕就不易。再如2011年重庆卷情有独钟，完全可以写成一篇有较为浓郁的抒情氛围的文字。特别是炼就高分作文，更应该达到5种表达方式均可运用得较为自如的程度。因为，表达方式的恰切选用，对于高考作文命题而言，才可以做到新颖独创，异军突起;而这一点恰好是成就高分作文最主要的一个原因。

作文，在高考语文中占据着举足轻重的作用，要在有限的时间、紧张的环境下写出一篇让阅卷老师喜欢的文章不仅需要好的写作能力还需要掌握一定的应试技巧。每当我们拿到作为题目时，大部分同学都会有一种感觉：没的写，不知从何下手。造成这种问题的原因主要是在于阅读量少，头脑中没有可用的素材，很难找到可用材料，因此，就会造成看到题目时出现“大脑空白”的情况。下面笔者就针对同学们在写作文中经常遇到的“没的写，不知如何下手”的问题进行下写作策略分享，希望对学子们有所帮助，并有效提高自己的写作水平。

一、多读多记名人名言，从中找到作文论点

名人名言、俗语等都是知识的高度总结与概括，往往是用很简单的字词、语句涵盖了大道理，其实这些就是写作文尤其是写议论文中的论点，如果能将这些内容合理地运用到自己的作文中，那么就将会为作文增添不少色彩，同时，不会造成偏题的现象，并突出自己的写作主题，让考试官最快地发现作者的观点。因此，在日常的学习中，同学们要养成良好的学习习惯，去多读名人名言或者背些相关语句，不仅可以在作文写作中增添有力亮点，还可以提高个人的文化修养。在这里，需要提醒同学们的是，写出的名人名言、俗语要进行解释说明，对引用的观点加以合理阐述。

名人名言分类例举

①勤奋类

·精选列举，学问勤中得，萤窗万卷书。三冬今足用，谁笑腹空虚?─辛弃疾·业精于勤，荒于嬉。行成于思，毁于随。─韩愈

·锲而舍之，朽木不折;锲而不舍，金石可镂。--《荀子·劝学》

·在所有的过错中，我们最易于原谅的就是懒散。─拉罗什富科

②财富类

·把金钱奉为神明，它就会像魔鬼一样降祸于你。--菲尔丁

·没有钱是悲哀的事。但是金钱过剩则倍过悲哀。--托尔斯泰

·金钱和时间是人生两种最沉重的负担，最不快乐的就是那些拥有这两种东西太多，却不知怎样使用的人。--约翰生

③励志类

·人生应该如蜡烛一样，从顶燃到底，一直都是光明的。--萧楚女

·人生的价值，即以其人对于当代所做的工作为尺度。--徐玮

·春蚕到死丝方尽，人至期颐亦不休。一息尚存须努力，留作青年好范畴。--吴玉章

④时间类

·尊重生命、尊重他人也尊重自己的生命，是生命进程中的伴随物，也是心理健康的一个条件。---弗洛姆

·人生有两出悲剧：一是万念俱灰，另一是踌躇满志。-肖伯纳

·懂得生命真谛的人，可以使短促的生命延长。---西塞罗

⑤诚信类

·欺人只能一时，而诚信才是长久之策————约翰·雷

·当信用消失的时候，肉体就没有生命————大仲马

·人类最不道德订户，是不诚实与懦弱————高尔基

⑥集体类

·任何一种不为集体利益打算的行为，都是自杀的行为，它对社会有害。--马卡连柯

·正如树枝和树干连接在一起那样，脱离树干的树枝很快就会枯死。--奥涅格

·一堆沙子是松散的，可是它和水泥、石子、水混合后，比花岗岩还坚韧。--王杰

⑦劳动类

·我们世界上最美好的东西，都是由劳动、由人的聪明的手创造出来的。--高尔基

·我觉得人生求乐的方法，最好莫过于尊重劳动。一切乐境，都可由劳动得来，一切苦境，都可由劳动解脱。--李大钊

·在人的生活中最主要的是劳动训练。没有劳动就不可能有正常的人的生活。--卢梭

⑧工作类

伟大的事业是根源于坚韧不断的工作，以全副精神去从事，不避艰苦。------罗素

教师的人格就是教育工作者的一切，只有健康的心灵才有健康的行为。------乌申斯基

果实的事业是尊贵的，花的事业是甜美的，但还是让我在默默献身的阴影里做叶的事业吧。------泰戈

⑨学习类

·培育能力的事必须继续不断地去做，又必须随时改善学习方法，提高学习效率，才会成功。——叶圣陶

·青春是有限的，智慧是无穷的，趁短暂的青春，去学习无穷的智慧。——高尔基

·我们的事业就是学习再学习，努力积累更多的知识，因为有了知识，社会就会有长足的进步，人类的未来幸福就在于此。——契诃夫

⑩幸福类

一无所有的人是有福的，因为他们将获得一切!--罗曼。罗兰

人生并非游戏，因此，我们并没有权利只凭自己的意愿放弃它。--列夫。托尔斯泰

严肃的人的幸福，并不在于风流、娱乐与欢笑这种种轻佻的伴侣，而在于坚忍与刚毅。--西塞罗

二、多读经典寓言、名人故事，在作文中引经据典

前面的名人名言为作文写作中增添论点，那么经典寓言、名人故事就是作文写作中的最佳论据了。为了证明论点，就必须找到最有力的论据对论点加以阐述和说明，从而为文章增添色彩与可信度，因此，在作文中引经据典，去挖掘名人、专家等有影响力人物的成长故事，就将会让作文非常具有吸引力，增加文章整体的可读性。

故事精选例举

1、孙中山：伟大的革命先行者孙中山，40年如一日，为中国的独立富强而耗尽了毕生的精力。他自己别无家产，仅有书籍、衣服、一所华侨捐献给他的小住宅。他革命一生的原动力是什么?就是“适乎世界之潮流，合乎人群之需要”的崇高信仰。

素材分析：孙中山执着无悔于革命，在于他有崇高的信仰，即“人群之需要”。信仰如山，仰之弥高。因此可写话题可参考：“成功与信仰”、“成功的动力”、“可贵的信仰”等等。

2、牛顿在花园里散步，突然，一个熟透了苹果从树上掉下来，正好打在他头上。这件很平常的事引起了牛顿深深的思考。他想：苹果离开树枝，为什么一定要向地下掉呢?为什么不飞向天空和别的方向呢?因此，他推想地心有一种吸引力，又推想这种吸引力对任何物质都存在。他通过研究，提出了计算引力大小的公式。就这样，牛顿由掉苹果而发现了震惊世界的“万有引力定律”，对科学事业的发展做出了巨大贡献。

素材分析：思考，是通往成功的前提与首要条件，牛顿正是有了对苹果落地深深的思考，才发现了震惊世界的“万有引力定律”。因此可写话题可参考：“思考的力量”、“成功的条件”、“创造性思考的奇迹”等等，

3、居里夫人曾获得过许多令世人羡慕不已的荣誉，但她却从不因此而陶醉。居里夫人的一位朋友曾应邀到她家里做客，走进屋里竟看见她的小女儿正在玩弄英国皇家协会刚刚授予她的一枚金质奖章，不禁大吃一惊，马上对居里夫人说：“现在能够得到一枚英国皇家协会的金质奖章，是极高也是非常难得的荣誉，你怎么能给孩子玩呢?”居里夫人笑了笑说：“我就想让孩子们从小知道，荣誉就像玩具，只能玩玩而已，决不能永远守着它，否则就会一事无成。”守着成绩，会使自己一事无成，能看到这一点实在是很重要。

素材分析：“淡泊明志，宁静致远”，不把眼前的名利看得轻淡就不会有明确的志向，不能平静安详全神贯注的学习，就不能实现远大的目标。因此可写话题可参考：“追求与目标”、“人生的境界”等等。

4、《林则徐对联立志》，这个故事讲的是清代着名的民族英雄林则。林则徐小时候就天资聪慧，两次机会下，作了两幅对联，这两幅对联表达了林则徐的远大志向，不仅敢于立志，而且读书刻苦，长大后成就了一番大事业，受到了后世的敬仰。《文天祥少年正气》，南宋末年着名的民族英雄文天祥少年时生活困苦，在好心人的帮助下才有机会读书，一次，文天祥被有钱的同学误会是小偷，他据理力争，不许别人践踏自己的尊严，终于证明了自己的清白，而且通过这件事，更加树立了文天祥金榜题名的志向。

以上两点同学们要学会灵活运用，一定要在理解题目的基础上加以说明，否则就会适得其反。

同时，现在的中、高考作文也越来越多的关注于身边的故事，因此，同学们也要养成每天看新闻的习惯，至少让自己的脑海里有对相关事情的了解，这样在考试时也不会造成对问题的盲从。为自己的写作提供素材需要长期的积累，如果能够坚持下去，同学们便会在考试中真正地做到“下笔如有神”。

一、叙事记叙文写作指导

【教学目标】让学生学会准确运用书面语表达自己要说的话，选取一个生活事件或其中的一个片断进行记叙。

【教学重点】选取生活事件或片断进行记叙。

【教学难点】同上

【教学课时】四课时

二、写作指导

在 记叙文 写作中，叙述好一件简单的事，这是一项基本功。练好这个基本功，以后进行复杂的叙事，也就有了基础。德国大作家歌德曾经说过：“一个人只要能把一件事说得很清楚，他也就能把许多事都说得清楚了。”

●那么，怎样记叙好一件简单的事呢？

1、要交代清楚事情发生的地点、时间；要把事情的经过、因果写明白。一件事，总离不开时间、地点、人物、事件、原因、结果等六个方面的内容，因此，只有把这些方面写清楚了，才能使别人明白你写了一件什么事。

然而，交代这六个方面内容不应该呆板，要根据文章的需要灵活掌握。时间、地点也并不是非要直接点明不可的，有时候可以通过描述自然景物的特征及其变化，将它们间接表示出来。 如“鸡喔喔叫了起来”，就是指天将亮了；“西边的太阳就要落山了”，指的是傍晚，等等。

2、要把事情经过写具体，并做到重点突出。在 记叙文 六个方面的内容中，起因、经过和结果，是构成事情最主要的环节。为了把事情写得清楚、明白，在记叙中一定要写好事情的起因、经过和结果，特别要把事情的经过写具体，给人留下完整而深刻的印象。

3、记叙的条理要清晰。一件事都有发生、发展和结果的过程，按照事情发展的顺序记叙，文章的条理就会清楚明白。

确定记叙的顺序以后，还要安排好段落层次。适当地分段，可以使文章眉目清楚。要做到记叙的条理分明，必须在动笔之前，仔细地想一想，文章应该先写什么，再写什么，然后写什么，把记叙的轮廓整理出来。 写 记叙文 ，必须考虑哪些先写，哪些后写，安排好记叙的顺序，否则就会头绪杂乱，条理不清。

●那么，怎样安排记叙顺序才能使文章条理清楚呢？

1、运用顺叙。

顺叙，是按照事物发生、发展的先后次序进行叙述。 这样写，可以将事物的发展过程，有头有尾地叙述出来，来龙去脉，十分清楚。运用顺叙写成的文章，它的层次、段落和事物发生、发展的过程是基本一致的。

顺叙有以时间为顺序的，有以事物发展规律为顺序的，也有以空间变换为顺序的。在叙事性的文章中，大多是以时间为顺序和以事物发展规律为顺序的。

按时间顺序进行叙述时，必须严格地安排好顺序，写清楚叙述的时间。现实生活中任何事情都不会突然发生，它总有一个发生、发展的过程。因此，作者常常要根据事情发生、发展、高潮、结局这一事情发展的规律来进行叙述，文章的层次也是清楚、明了的。

当然，有的文章事情比较简单，因而不一定非要写出事情过程的四个层次（发生、发展、高潮、结局）。

2、运用倒叙。

倒叙，就是把事件的结局或某个最突出的片断提在前面叙述，然后再从事件的开头进行叙述。

需要指出的是，运用倒叙的写法，必须注意交代清楚倒叙的起讫点，顺叙和倒叙的转换处要有明显的界限、必要的文字过渡。这些地方处理不好，会使文章脉络不清，头绪不明，影响内容的表达。

3、运用插叙。

插叙是指在叙述中心事件的过程中，由于某种需要暂时中断叙述的线索而插入的关于另一件事情的叙述。

需要指出的是，在运用插叙时不能打乱原来的叙述线索，要注意与上下文的衔接。这样，文章的结构不仅富有变化，而且叙述事情的条理非常清楚。

有些同学看见别的同学写出一些好文章来，便惊叹道：“这些内容，我也熟悉的，怎么我没能把它们写出来！”这个问题值得深思，说穿了，那是因为你缺乏从小事中写出深意的能力。生活中，惊天动地的事情是少见的，一般人所经历的大多是平凡的、细小的事情。自古以来，好文章数也数不尽，大多写的也是平凡的、细小的事。《红楼梦》写的是封建社会大官僚仕宦家族中的生活琐事，这些生活琐事在那样的门第中可以说是平常又平常的了，但它反映的思想意义却是深刻的，成为举世公认的巨著。

●那么，怎样从小事中写出深意呢？

1、提高思想水平，训练一副见微知著的好眼力。

照相机能摄像，人的双眼也能摄像。然而人和照相机毕竟不同，双眼是带着感情去选镜头的。观察的人本身要有一定的思想水平，只有这样，才可能看到事情的里层，发现其中蕴含的深意。

2、深入思考、分析、挖掘、寻找出事情所蕴含的深意。

在日常生活中，要做到凡事多加留意，尽可能深入地去想一想，不只注意到它的表象，还要去挖掘它的本质，弄清它的来龙去脉。这样，就能有敏感的头脑和锐利的好眼力，挖掘、寻找出事情中所蕴含的深意。

3、把事情放在一定的背景中去写。

背景就是时代环境，指的是社会变迁和政治动态等。一件小事，孤零零地看，是不起眼的，如果把它和事情发生的背景联系起来，那就不寻常了。

4、“事”与“意”的榫头要对得合适。

从小事中写出深意来，容易犯的毛病是“事”和“意”的榫头对得不准，往往是主观上（意）想“深”，客观上（事）显得内容单薄。因此，我们在具体写的时候，避免在提示事情所蕴含的意义时候犯任意“拔高”的毛病。

有一篇题目叫《节日的早晨》作文，叙的内容是一家人愉快地吃早点的情形，结尾是： 吃完早点，我开了院门一看，只见人们穿着美丽的新衣服，三个一群五个一伙的，走向热闹的大街，走向光明的共产主义明天。

这段话的结尾处，犯有“拔高”文章思想意义的毛病。如果写好吃早点的情形，体现人民生活水平在共产党的领导下步步提高是可以的，可是将它和“走向光明的共产主义明天”联系在一起，那“事”和“意”的榫头就对得不合适了。

总之，我们只要提高自己的思想水平，对听到或看到的事深入地想一番，认识它的意义，鉴别它的价值，并把它放在特定的环境中去写，就能从小事中写出深意来。

不少同学的作文，不是写拾到皮夹子交公，就是写为抱小孩的妇女让座；不是写帮助同学补课，就是写送迷路的小孩回家……总之，尽是写一些人家写“烂”的材料。于是语文老师常常在他们的作文后面写上类似的评语：选材陈旧，希望今后选择新颖、独特的材料。

●那么，怎样才能选择到新颖、独特的材料呢？

1、从自己的生活中去找

不少同学看到作文题目，不是到自己的生活中去找材料，而是道听途说，或者是从概念出发去记叙、描写。记好人好事，总是写“拾皮夹”、“让座”、“为人补课”，不管此事自巳是否经历过，是否有感触。这样的内容，怎么会给人耳目一新的感觉呢？

其实，我们每个人居住的环境不同，兴趣爱好不同，经历的事情必然不同。能把自己那些与众不同的经历作为选材的内容，那么，你所选择的材料一定是自己独有的，新鲜生动的。

2、做生活的有心人。

常听一些同学说，我们是学生，生活贫乏，看不出有什么新鲜、独特的事情值得记叙。同学们生活面不广是事实，要扩大作文选材的范围，就要求我们尽可能地广泛接触生活。那么是不是我们同学生活圈子小，就没有新鲜、独特的材料可以写呢？不是的。只要做生活的有心人，就会有独特的材料让你挑选。住在城里的人，恐怕都见过老年人跳迪斯科吧？可是有的同学熟视无睹，竟然让这样的材料从眼皮底下悄悄溜走了。

3、选择新角度，让常见的材料放出异彩。

一般来说，同学们的生活圈子小，家庭、教室、操场。接触的人少，家人、老师、同学。同学们在作文时，所叙述的事往往是常见的。常见的材料中就没有新鲜的东西吗？不是的。只要我们开动脑筋，对常见的材料改变一下叙述的角度，也会让它放出异彩。

4、打开思路，扩大视野。

有相当一部分同学，思路比较狭窄，他们的目光只注意好人好事，作文的材料老是不能扩大。如果我们同学把观察的目光投射到整个生活里，既看到那些好人好事，也看到那些坏人坏事，作文的材料一定会丰富多采起来。

法国巴黎艺术馆里，陈列了一座伟大的文学家巴尔扎克的雕像，奇怪的是：他的雕像却没有手。他的手呢？是被艺术家罗丹用斧头砍去了。罗丹为什么要砍掉巴尔扎克雕像的双手呢？原来，在一个深夜里，罗丹好不容易完成了巴尔扎克的雕像，非常满意，连夜叫醒了他的学生来欣赏雕像。他的学生把雕像反复地看了个够，后来，目光渐渐地集中在雕像的手上：巴尔扎克的那双手叠合起来，放在胸前，十分逼真。学生们不禁连声地说：“好极了，老师，我可从没见过这样一双奇妙的手啊！”罗丹的脸上笑容消失了。他突然走到工作室的一角，提起一把大斧，直奔雕像，砍掉了那双“完美的手”。

罗丹的雕像是要表现巴尔扎克的精神、气质，现在那双手（次要部分）突出了，人们看了雕像，只欣赏手的完美，而忽略了主要的内容。所以，罗丹砍掉了雕像的双手，以突出雕像所要表现的意义。

雕塑是这样，写作文也是这样，只有围绕中心安排详写和略写，叙事的重点才能突出。

●那么，在记叙的过程中，怎样妥当地安排详写和略写呢？

1、事情的发生和结果要略写，事情的发展过程要详写。事情的发生阶段，往往是交代时间、地点、人物，以及起因，事情的结果部分，往往是写出事情的结局或点明事情的中心。它们在整个事情中，或者说在整篇文章中，仅仅是枝节部分，所以要略写。事情的发展过程，是整个事情，或者整篇文章中的主体部分，它往往具体体现中心思想，因而要详写。

2、有点有面地叙事，“面”要略写，“点”要详写。有点有面地叙事，“面”上的内容往往是渲染气氛，交代背景，起烘托的作用。“点”上的内容往往是文章的重点。直接体现中心思想的，所以要详写。这里需要说明的一点是：在文章中，重点突出详写的部分时，不能忽视略写的部分。略写虽是寥寥几笔，但运用得好，可以对文章重点的突出、主题的表现，起到“绿叶映衬红花”的作用。

一篇文章，好比一架运转正常的机器，文章中的一个个段落就好比机器中那些大大小小的零件，这些零件不仅相互照应，而且那些大零件需要小零件把它们连接起来。文章里的段落也需要相互照应，也需要一些“小零件”，即过渡段和过渡句把它们自然、紧密地连接起来。 不然，文章就会显得支离破碎。所以，写文章时，一定要注意段与段之间的过渡和照应。

一般说， 记叙文 在下面几种情况需要过渡：

1、由这件事转到另一件事时需要过渡。

2、记叙的时间发生变化时需要过渡。

3、由倒叙转入顺叙时需要过渡。

4、运用插叙时的起止处需要过渡。

●一般来说，插叙内容写完以后要注意与原来的叙事线索衔接。叙事中的照应有三种情况：

1、文题照应。在叙事过程中，我们所写的内容务必切题，要和文章的标题相照应。

2、首尾呼应。文章的开头和结尾遥相呼应，可以使文章结构紧凑。

3、前后照应。在一篇文章中，前面的内容和后面的内容要互相照应。

总之，过渡和照应，是叙事文章中必不可少的，我们在作文时千万不能忽视。

写文章应该怎样开头？怎么结尾？谁也不会带着这个问题去问警察，因为警察不是教语文的，跟他关系不大。然而有一则外国幽默，却说有人向警察请教作报告的诀窍，而这个警察终于谈出“门道”来了。

现将全文摘抄

有人向警察请教作报告的诀窍，警察说：“作报告时，首先要有信心，报告的开头要像逮捕犯人一样，富于戏剧性；报告中间要像审讯犯人一样有条不紊；报告的结尾要像宣判一样简洁明快。”

看了这则幽默，同学们可能会捧腹大笑，有的笑那个“向警察请教作报告”的人，是向聋子借听力，是向盲人问路；有的笑那个警察是：“不懂装懂，胡说八道。”其实，那位外国警察谈的作报告的诀窍也一样适用于写文章，所谓开头要“富于戏剧性”，就是说开头要漂亮；所谓结尾要“简洁明快”，就是说结尾要干脆有力。

●做到“开头漂亮”的主要途径是：

1、叙述好事件的起因。如《边线》作文，开头这样写道：“大扫除刚结束，不知哪个‘缺德鬼’把一小团废纸扔在五年级的走廊上。”文章的开头便是军军和牛牛争吵这件事的起因，具有夺人眼目的力量。

2、描写环境，烘托气氛。如《风》作文，作者一开头就描写了风的猛烈：“走在路上，风要把我吹得飘起来。”甚至“前面路口的大杨树被风刮得东倒西歪，发出‘唰唰’的响声……”文章的开头交代了上学路上的恶劣环境，正是为了适应表达中心思想的需要，也增强了感染力。

3、激人兴趣，引人入胜。如《一堂有趣的自然课》，作者开头就写道：“清脆的上课铃声刚止住，马老师就抱着一大堆毛皮子、丝绸帕、玻璃棍和橡胶棒等东西，快步走进了教室。”马老师究竟要干什么？难道你不想看下去吗？

4、开门见山，点明题旨。如《“雷锋”来到运动场》作文，作者开头写道：“学校十三届田径运动会结束了。在总结会上，老师和同学们纷纷赞扬一位不知名的‘雷锋’。”这样直截了当，一下子把读者注意力吸引到中心思想上，起到总领全文的作用。

●做到“结尾有力”的主要途径是：

1、把事件的结局交代清楚。如《一堂有趣有自然课》，是这样结局的：

下课铃声响了，当同学们恋恋不舍地放下手中的实验时，一个个不由自主地埋怨道：“怎么搞的，这节课时间这么短！”

这种顺着情节的发展，以事情的终结作全文的结尾，干净利落，不枝不蔓，事情结束，文章也就结束了。

2、语言含蓄，发人深思。在 记叙文 中，作者以独特的认识和理解，写下深刻含蓄的结语，力求意味深长，发人深思。

3、结尾同开头呼应。结尾照应开头，能使文章结构谨严，浑然一体。

4、篇末点题，突出中心。篇末点题，尤如画龙点睛，这“睛”点得好，会使全篇顿生光彩。画龙点睛式的结尾，能帮助读者悟出全文的深意，给人留下深刻的印象。

三、写作台阶训练一

叙事如何生动具体。

1．教师指导、示范（以"记一次打架"为例），让学生明确叙事要生动、具体，必须做到以下几点：

A、交待清楚记叙的六要素。

B、对场面要进行观察、描写。

2．学生训练：题目：《发生在班里的一件事》

处理方法：

（1）分学习小组进行。

（2）以小组长为中心，确定所选的事件，定好后，小组成员展开讨论，讨论问题：

A、我们可以写这件事的哪些方面，（如当时的情况，人们的心理等）

B、对这些方面我们如何去写。

3．教师抽查一两组的讨论情况。

四、台阶训练二

开头、结尾训练：

1．教师讲述常见的开头、结尾方式。

2．学生书面写《发生在班里的一件事》的开头、结尾。

3．抽读优生的作示范。

4．范文欣赏（全篇）

五、大作文训练

题目：发生在班里的一件事

要求：1、字数在500字以上。

2．要有适当的议论、抒情。

3．叙述事件要生动、具体。

4．书写工整。（因升中考卷面分4分，所以每次作文均要求书写工整）

你的英国朋友正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文。

1．通常方式：

(1)生日聚会；

(2)生日礼物；

(3)生日祝福。

2．我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由。

注意：100—120词。(2005年浙江卷)

Birthdays

Chinese students celebrate their birthdays in different ways.But the most common way is to have fun by drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents.Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children.Since birthday celebration is one of the important activities in one＇s life.It can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love.

生日

中国的学生用不同的方式来庆祝他们的生日。但最常见的方式是通过饮酒、唱歌和跳舞来取乐。一个人在他生日那天通常会收到许多朋友和父母送给他的礼物和祝福。有时，父母们也会准备一个非常特殊的晚餐或一块蛋糕来表达他们对孩子的爱。既然庆祝生日是人一生中最重要的活动之一，那么可以用其他更有意义的方式来庆祝。例如，在那天，我们可以亲自为我们的妈妈买一些花或做一顿丰盛的饭菜，用这种方式来回报父母对我们深深的爱。

我回想起了姐姐在我新入学前说过的话。她的话中所显示的，是高中生活及高考的残酷现状的存在，我想我的未来大概也会像她所说的那样吗?仿佛我就被无形中的带入高考，观看高考的残酷性，脑中被灌输高考的现状。这一切的一切使我的高中生活被添上了一层不可名状的苦楚，仿佛身体不由自己的被扯入了一个未知的深渊，生命仿佛都是为了高考而活，身心上添上了一道道的痕迹，忽然才隐约听到一个声音在高声叫着，“高考”，“高考”。

至现在，已经在高中度过了我的1又23个学期，在这期间，我们完全努力使自己感受着高考的存在，尽管我们并不希望高考的存在，也不愿相信高考的存在和它的残酷性。但现实又往往摆在人们的眼前，的确高考存在，现实往往与幻想相违背，我们还有高考这个“门槛”要跨过，要获得自由，也就必须“打破”高考这把枷锁的禁锢，只有当我们完全正视了“一切”的时候，也就是我们自由之日的到来。

我尽最大的努力来阐释高中生活和高考的关系，理解它们之间的内在关系：通过努力发现高中生活中的一切的一切全在于高考。所以高中生活的全部最核心内容就是两个字“高考”，能够完全感受高考，跟着高考的路标走。再一条，高中生活的其他一切内容，除了高考的内容，其他的一切的一切都似乎是题外的内容。这所阐释的一切是高考，还应该说是为了高考。

难怪呀!每打高三走过，那等在高考中的孩子的脸如茄子的开落。我想我们的高中生活也是这样，每天等待的是苦恼，除了苦恼还是苦恼。难怪有一诗为“不知少年愁?”少年真的不知愁吗?看着高三学子的苦楚，我想我们也将有那么一天吧!我们苦恼，可是又有谁理解我们的苦恼呢?唉，真是人外人不知人中人模样，人中人亦不知人外人模样。

曾经有一篇很好的文章放在我的面前，只是我不知道珍惜，假如我有机会再拿到这篇文章的话。我希望能好好读出它之中的内涵。它的名字就是《少年维特的烦恼》。

可惜时间不待人，我们转眼就会身处高考之中，那时才是高中生活真正的苦恼的开端，一切为高考，使得人人自危，害怕一不小心就每法走出高考。

高考成为高中生活的全部，有又成为了我们苦恼的直接原因，我们为它苦恼，同时也为它高兴，希望能“击破”它，走出它的捆绑，走向新时期。

总之，高考成了我们这一代甚至下一代或者再下一代的苦恼的对象，为此忧伤，为此苦恼。

假如高考成为了你高中生活的苦恼，不要害怕，不要忧伤，因为快乐的日子会来临，苦恼的日子将会过去，一切都会好起来的。

啊!高考，曾经成为高中生活的全部，我们为它苦恼过，但是我想它不一定永远成为我们的苦恼，随着改革制度的到来，我相信终将有一种新的制度将来之取代，那苦恼的深渊也会消失，梦想与现实将会完整的统一结合，那时梦想离我们还远吗?

Keeping a diary in English does a great deal of good to my English study. Keeping a diary can help you review all the English knowledge you have learned. For example， you must know the correct spelling of each word needed in the diary； you must use the phrases correctly and choose the suitable sentence patterns， meanwhile， it is also necessary to use you knowledge of grammar in a correct way.Keeping a diary can help you not only to console your knowledge of English， but to form the habit of thinking in English. Practice makes perfect. By and by， your English writing will be greatly improved.

[谈写英语日记的好处英文写作

书面表达： 假设你的名字是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现招募志愿者。你希望成为志愿者。申请信的格式已经写好了，你直接写内容就可以。你的个人情况：年龄性别学历，个人条件。英语好，爱好体育，擅长交际，乐于助人。承诺提供最佳服务。字数100左右。

范文：

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one. Thanks. Li Hua

当我听说冬季奥运会将在我的城市里举行，我感到非常兴奋。我的名字是李华。我是一个高中学生，一个18岁的男孩。我想做一名志愿者。我非常喜欢英语和体育。我喜欢交朋友，我随时准备帮助别人。我可以做一个好的翻译，在每一个体育的时间。希望奥运会取得巨大的成功。希望我会被选为一个。谢谢李华

[志愿者申请 Volunteer Application高考英语满分作文

导语：要取得别人的信任，首先要对自己有信心。倘若自己都觉得自己无足轻重，又怎么去挑起重担呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的写作素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

二战后某国受经济危机的影响，失业人数剧增，工厂效益也很不景气。

一家濒临倒闭的食品公司为了扭亏为盈，决定裁员。有三种人名列其中：一种是清洁工，一种是司机，一种是仓管人员。

经理找他们谈话，说明了裁员意图。

清洁工说：“我们很重要，如果没有我们打扫卫生，没有清洁优美、健康有序的工作环境，职工怎么能全身心地投入工作?”

司机说：“我们很重要，如果没有我们，这么多产品怎么能迅速销往市场?”

仓管人员说：“我们很重要，如果没有我们，这些食品岂不要被流浪街头的乞丐偷光!”

经理觉得他们说的话都很有道理，思考再三决定不裁员，重新制定了管理策略。

最后经理让人在厂门口悬挂了一块大匾，上面写着：我很重要。

从此，每天当职工们来上班，第一眼看到的便是“我很重要”这四个字。

这句话调动了全体职工的积极性，不管一线职工还是管理阶层，都认为领导很重视自己，工作起来非常卖命，两年后这家公司已经成为全国有名的公司。

要想让别人相信你，你自己得首先相信自己，任何时候都不要看轻自己，其实你真的很重要!

【相信自己】要取得别人的信任，首先要对自己有信心。倘若自己都觉得自己无足轻重，又怎么去挑起重担呢?

【用人不疑】团队协作的能量，是由团队所有成员共同发挥的;实现这种协作，首先要做到的就是疑人不用、用人不疑。

【激发潜能】遇到困境时，节衣缩食一再退让，只是一时缓兵之计;真正能解决问题的方法，是充分激励现有力量的潜能。

The winter solstice, the winter solstice as the "holiday" in han dynasty, the rulers to congratulate ceremony known as "He Dong", official holidays, routine officialdom popular each "winter" worship custom. "Were" has such records: "before and after the winter solstice, the gentleman place static body, baiguan, scenes, and then pick an auspicious day Chen save trouble." So on the court and off to rest, to the army on standby, frontier retreat, business travel out of business, family and all distinctions to food, visit each other, a joyous festival "place static body". When in the six dynasties, the winter solstice is called "the age", people to elders to extend holiday greetings to your parents; After the song dynasty, the winter solstice festival gradually become the sacrifice to ancestors and gods.

Tang and song period, the winter solstice is to worship the day of worship ancestors, the emperor held outside the day to worship, the people in this day to the parents or elders worship. Ming and qing dynasties, the emperor have to worship, of "winter solstice jiao days". There has to be given to a emperor, table officials ritual, but also to each other for congratulations, like New Years day.

Winter festival also called yesterday, hand in winter. It is one of the 24 solar terms, is a traditional festival of China, have "the winter solstice as big as a year". Winter solstice supplements, is Chinas traditional customs, folksay: fill a lump-sum winter, in the coming year without pain. Summer volts, winter lump-sum. The winter solstice mend, nutrients.

冬至到了，汉代以冬至为“冬节”，官府要举行祝贺仪式称为“贺冬”，官方例行放假，官场流行互贺的“拜冬”礼俗。《后汉书》中有这样的记载：“冬至前后，君子安身静体，百官绝事，不听政，择吉辰而后省事。”所以这天朝廷上下要放假休息，军队待命，边塞闭关，商旅停业，亲朋各以美食相赠，相互拜访，欢乐地过一个“安身静体”的节日。魏晋六朝时，冬至称为“亚岁”，民众要向父母长辈拜节;宋朝以后，冬至逐渐成为祭祀祖先和神灵的节庆活动。

唐、宋时期，冬至是祭天祀祖的日子，皇帝在这天要到郊外举行祭天大典，百姓在这一天要向父母尊长祭拜。明、清两代，皇帝均有祭天大典，谓之“冬至郊天”。宫内有百官向皇帝呈递贺表的仪式，而且还要互相投刺祝贺，就像元旦一样。

冬至节亦称冬节、交冬。它既是二十四节气之一，是中国的一个传统节日，曾有“冬至大如年”的说法。冬至进补，是我国传统风俗，俗语云：三九补一冬，来年无病痛。夏养三伏，冬补三九。冬至补一补,一年精气足。

高考英语写作紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求，以有指导的写作为主，要求考生在短时间内构思成文。由于它是对学生语言综合运用能力的考查，因此在高考中令很多考生感到十分苦恼，也是一个失分率很高的题型。对此，笔者有如下几条建议：

1上海高考英语作文命题特点

1.写作话题

每年高考在即，会出现许多对高考英语写作话题的预测，但这种具体的预测往往是徒劳的。分析近年来真题规律，上海市高考英语写作的话题都是跟高中生的生活密切相关，而非政治性或社会性话题。例如，2006年的话题是选择大学的问题；2007年的话题是礼物；2008年的话题是集体舞比赛；2009年是参加夏令营的课程；2010年则是学生上课情景。这些话题都源于高中生的日常生活。因此，考生不必担心无话可说。在备考过程也不必将过多精力放在一些重大的社会性及政治性话题上。

2.写作体裁

近年来，上海市高考英语写作从体裁上来说主要是偏重于叙议结合的文章，例如在2008年的高考中，考生首先要说明自己是否要参加集体舞比赛，之后要阐述自己的理由。又如，在2009年的高考中，考生首先要根据材料说明自己要参加夏令营的哪个课程，其次要阐述自己的理由以及描述一下希望从课程中学到的内容。刚刚结束的2010年高考题要求学生描述图片以及自己同时期上课的情景，再简单发表感想。纵观近三年的高考，都是夹叙夹议的文章，因此这种体裁的文章是考生接下来备考的重点。

2.如何写好高考作文

高考英语作文的考核目标是看学生能否根据题意连贯、贴切地进行书面表达。我们在写作时应注意：

1.认真审题，确定内容。弄清写作要求是写好作文的前提，也是书面表达的基础。审题时应注意以下几个方面：

1)审题时要确定文章的体裁。

例：(2010年高考)下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况，做出比较并谈谈你的感受。你的作文必须包括：描述图片里学生上课的场景；比较你同时期的上课情况；简单谈谈你的感受。

这篇文章的内容必须覆盖题目给出的三块内容，其中前两项描述图片里学生上课的场景和比较你同时期的上课情况皆是记叙和描绘的部分。只有最后一部分简要发表感想是议论。

2)审题时，把握题目中的关键内容，以免跑题或遗漏。

例：(2009)高考作文：某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺(gardening)、烹调(cooking)、防身术(self-defense)、护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名)，写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：你感兴趣的课程；你期望从这门课程中学到什么；为什么想学这些内容。

这个命题的关键内容有三块：是什么、为什么和学什么。很多同学在审题时把重点放在了为什么要学上，却忽略了想学什么这个关键内容。文章的主体段只交待了为什么要学习某个课程，却只字不提想学习这个课程的哪些方面，遗漏了关键的内容。

2.语言表达上要从三方面把好语言关。

1)准确性：在写作的过程中最好用自己熟悉的句型和词语，力求语言表达正确流畅。

2)句式多样性：在写作过程中，过多使用简单句和短句，会使文章显得罗嗦，幼稚。我们在书面表达时应学会合并短句，并注意句式的多样性。

3)语言恰当性：在高考英语写作时，还应注意用词的恰当性。有些同学喜欢用一些词汇等级较高的词以显示语言的水平，但若不贴切文章的内容，效果往往适得其反。比如，在一篇描写同学间友谊的文章中，用Itisuni－versallyacknowledgedthatfriendshipisveryimportanttous这样的语句来开头，就显得过大，十分不适合文章的主题和作者的身份。

3.组织结构上要做到结构正确，层次分明，运用适当的连接词使上下文连贯一致。

1)注意篇章结构，合理布局开始部分(Openingparagraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分(Bodyparagraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。结尾部分(Concludingparagraph)——对全文的总结和概括。

2)运用适当的连接词使段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。记叙文一般按照时间顺序来写，用一些表示先后顺序的连接词能使记叙的事件脉络更清楚。议论文中用一些连接词可以使文章层次分明，上下连贯。

3.高考作文的写作步骤：

高考写作理想时间是30分钟，最少不能少于20分钟，拿到考题后，写作的一般步骤为：

第一步：审题

第二步：谋篇布局

1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。

2)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些词汇和句型等。

3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性

第三步：写后检查，写后复查全文，看内容要点有无遗漏，标点、格式、大小写是否规范，是否有语病，卷面是否整洁等。

[ 高考英语作文这样拿高分

导语：高考是条独木桥，差一分就会被挤下去，下面我们来看看高考考场作文有哪些技巧，帮助我们取得高分。

一、慧眼传神的标题

要在考场中取悦阅卷老师，先用传神的标题去构建作文的佳境，尝言：标题是眼睛。好作文就要有一双迷人的慧眼。现在我们训练了大量的话题作文，大量同学却把标题拟得老气横秋，或者干脆用话题作为文章的标题，让人一看就不愿给高分。所以作为考生的你要充分意识到阅卷老师的疲惫，用尽量新、雅、美的标题去引起老师的注意，标题拟好了，实际上也是在为考场作文创设景致，而独特的标题更是作文独僻佳境的最好体现，会让人为之一震。

二、一言九鼎的识见

对于中学生的作文，阅卷老师尤其看重学生的思想认识与观点见解。在阅卷的过程中，老师始终在留意或寻找考生作文中最能代表其识见的内容。因为任何一篇文章总是为表达一定的思想主题服务的，识见的水平如何，直接关涉到作文得分的高低，因此作为考生应该不断磨砺语言，砥砺思想，尽可能在作文中表达一言九鼎的识见。而实践证明，精要而有深度的认识与见解，会使本来很平常的作文内容为之境界全新，无眼之龙也会因为你的点睛之笔而畅游九天之外。

三、千描百绘的特写

考场记叙文，阅卷老师最看重有没有场面描写，看场面描写时，老师又最看重有没有特写镜头。因为写好特写镜头在阅卷老师看来，就是写好记叙文的最佳境界。什么是特写镜头，即考生借鉴电影艺术的表现手法，对人物、景物的局部特征加以浓墨重彩式的描写或精细刻画，从而凸现一个感人的形象，展示一个精彩的细节，使文章具有强烈的感染力的艺术手法。所以为了与一般平铺直叙式的记叙文境界有别，考生应该独辟特写的佳境，让考场记叙文因为特写而牵制住老师的眼球。

四、诗情画意的意境

考场散文的最高境界是诗情画意，有时即使寥寥几笔，也让阅卷老师如获至宝。意境就是作者的思想感情和客观事物的高度融合，就是作者所创造的那种情景交融、形神兼备的艺术境界。散文要富有诗意，就应有意捕捉优美的意象并寄托感情，形象一点说，就是要在写散文的时候，感到仿佛是在写诗和作画，要表达出情味、画面和韵致，同时要追求语言的诗化，主要表现在凝练含蓄、形象具体、音韵节奏等方面。要特别善于用精炼语句点染诗意，通过绘形绘色绘声的描写让阅卷老师生发丰富的联想和想象，从而满目生辉，满口溢香。

五、生动形象的说理

考场论说文的最高境界是议论生动形象，阅卷老师特别害怕大段罗列高深理论，板着面孔说教，愿意看到考生把议论中抽象的，难懂的道理或见解，采用一定的方法和手段，使之变得具体、变得形象;把议论中冗长的客观的论述，采用一定的技巧，使之变得生动活泼，摇曳多姿。比如使用比喻论证，因为喻体的为人熟知，而本体与喻体之间又具有相似点，议论起来就会独僻蹊经，别开生面。而如若在议论中始终贯穿生动形象的说理，则自成妙境。

六、“听唱新翻”的境界

内容是由材料来完成的，考生常常觉得只有那些虽显陈旧却典型的材料才切合题意，因而写出来的文章就显得陈旧无新意。阅卷老师评改同一道作文题，若考生总是使用同几则材料而无新意，这样的作文无疑就会被打入冷宫。所以不妨“听唱新翻”，以另外全新的角度去驾驭材料，比如说到屈原，XX年的一考生开篇一句就亲切的询问：“是你吗?”紧承而来是一连串的问话，似为不解之惑，实则屈原精神的再现，将屈原心灵的选择——爱国展现无遗。诸如此类的“新翻”，不仅会使阅卷者欣欣然，也会使自身的作文境界为之一新。

七、飞扬多姿的文笔

考场作文，语言和内容是阅卷老师最为看重的两个方面，也是体现考生写作潜能最重要的两个方面。在作文中，如果写景状物，绘形绘色;写人叙事，生动传神;议事言理，生动风趣。在语言上广采博学，遣词造句力求神韵，甚至广用修辞，文笔飞扬多姿，那么通篇就会文采洋溢，处处精彩，也就达到了文章的另一种境界与高度。语言“有文采”，可以弥补发展等级其他方面的不足，用语言的恣意挥洒来张扬考场作文个性化的境界，已是考场作文成功的最为公开的秘密。

八、溢出纸外的真情

构思是文章的骨架，内容是血肉，而情感则是神经。阅卷老师认为“文章不是无情物”，一篇好文章，就应该具有良好的情感态度，换言之，即使文章的内容很平实，但情感却足够真挚，就像朱自清先生的《背影》，同样也能憾人心魄。在考场作文中，写人记事发议论，心中饱藏真情，让现实生活的“境”与溢出纸外的真情相呼应，则自成佳境。没有情感的“境”，如同行尸走肉，令人生厌。用真情关照生活，虽一花一草，一人一物，也熠熠生辉!

九、精思巧构的设计

一篇作文最能体现佳境的是构思，而篇章的创意又最能体现构思的匠心。在佳境创意上求新，一是要有奇特的想象，二是要学会变换角度。首先通过奇特想象创设佳境。奇特的想象主要是指创造性想象，是作者按照自己的创见形成某种独立性想象的心理过程。在具体运思中，作者由命题去构造新的形象或建设新的理论。如果囿于一个观察点，庐山只能给你固定不变的老面孔;调整视角，“横”看“侧”眺，那么奇峰异岭就会迎面而来，获得“远近高低各不同”的审美愉悦。只有用创新的眼光审视话题，运思谋篇，佳境才会脱颖而出。构思时，机智地寻找“变异”点，形成变异式佳境;反弹琵琶、逆向思维、形成反向式佳境;避开由范例引发的“第一构思”，把目光投向“另类”，形成另类式佳境;避实就虚，以虚驭实，形成就虚式佳境等等，都会使文章创意不凡。

十、迷众勾魂的文面

在考场中，最能引起阅卷老师直观好感的就是文面。文面就是文章书写、标点符号、行款格式所构成的整体面貌。优美的文面应该是：书写规范，字体工整，整洁美观;标点符号使用正确规范;行款格式正确，卷面美观可人，这些也是考生语文能力的最直接的体现。文面能够迷众勾魂，有时即使也内容与语言有较大缺憾，阅卷老师也会爱屋及乌，给你一个满意的成绩。谁说绝美的文面不是一种作文成功的佳境呢?!

当然，考场作文的评分依据不是唯一的，衡量一篇作文好坏的标准也不是唯一的，这就给我们考生平时的个性化选择提供了广阔的空间。上面罗列的考场作文独僻佳境的10种方式，是站在广义的角度，以一个高考阅卷老师的身份来提醒大家的，在考场作文中，这10种方式可以单独、可以综合几种一起使用，其实，考场作文独僻佳境的方式还远远不止这10种，限于篇幅，不再一一罗列，希望能够给大家带来一些帮助。

高考作文获得满分是许多学生的梦想，因为作文在整个高考中占有的分量是举足轻重的，如果能够获得满分，那将给学生争取不少的机会，下面我们就介绍五个字，如果把握好了这五个字，高考作文获得满分不再是一件难事情。

第一：全

全即文章的结合呼应，给人完整感。阅卷人的心理，对文章的开头、中间、结尾很看重，特别是结尾的结构呼应或者主题升华的语言等等。

第二：亮

亮就是试卷上的亮点。亮点是多方面的，字迹端正、卷面整洁是其中第一要着。文章无错别字，没有明显的病句，没有明显的涂改痕迹，行款漂亮等等，都会让阅卷老师一翻到试卷就精神大振，产生好感，不忍心打低分。

第三：显

由于时间关系，高考阅卷老师不能细细揣摩文章，也不能明晓考生的作文功底，考生要特别讲究一个“显”字。

首先，文章的主旨要明了，平时作文，有学生喜欢写些含蓄的文字，以求文学的含蓄美，也得到了老师的青睐，甚至发表了不少的文章，但是高考场上不能这样做，太含蓄了，就会使文章走进隐讳的死胡同，短时间内难以让人读懂，就很容易被阅卷老师误认为离题打入冷宫。

其次，文章的分论点最好用分段的方式明确摆出，开头、中间、结尾都要顾及体现自己中心思想的语句，最明显的方法就是把它们放在段首，好让阅卷者一目了然。

第四：虚

虚就是虚构。高考作文能写实固然好，但由于我们长期处在学校——家庭两点一线的生活方式，很难发现生活中真实动人的故事。高考作文要求有创新，必然把原本平淡无奇的事情编得生动曲折。

第五：简

简即简笔勾勒。高考的一般议论文也好，一般记叙文也好，最好需要多种材料的荟萃，这样信息量大，以符合“内容充实”的要求，因而不欢迎一些时间、地点、人物、发生、发展、高潮、结局俱在的材料啰嗦记叙。

如果在高考作文的时候，能够很好的把握上面五个字，那高考作文将有可能获得满分。

导语：光阴似箭，岁月如梭，浪费时间等于浪费自己的生命，不要做个拖延症的人，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

I always think there is not enough time. For example, I have just taken a three-day holiday. But when I look back, I just feel that its only one day. There goes a proverb, Time is money. Now I want to say, time is more precious than money, because when money is spent, we can earn some more again. However, when time is gone or lost, never will it return.

Time goes without being noticed. The time for our study and work is usually limited. So I think we must make full use of our time. But its a pity that I am always not aware of the importance of time until its too late.

So I think, I should get into the good habit of saving time because wasting time is equal to wasting ones life. Do not put off what can be done today till tomorrow!

【参考译文】

我一直认为没有足够的时间。举例来说，我刚才已采取了三天假期。但是，当我回头看，我只是觉得这只是一天。有云的一句谚语，时间就是金钱。现在我想说的是，时间比金钱更宝贵，因为当钱用，我们可以再多赚点。然而，当时间走了或丢失了，永远不会了回来。

时间的流逝而不被发现。时间对我们的学习和工作中通常是有限的。因此，我认为我们必须充分利用我们的时间。但它是我永远不知道时间的重要性，直到为时已晚可惜。

所以我觉得，我应该进入节省时间的好习惯，因为浪费时间等于浪费自己的生命。不要推辞今天能完成的事拖到明天!

1.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Bill来信询问language teacher. 你家乡是否有雾霾天气，情况如何.请按下面写 What frequently brings back memories of 一封电子邮件1.感谢他得关心2.介绍情况:(1)my school teacher is his special qualities. First of 去年以来以发生数次雾霾天气(2)人们已认识all, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember 到雾霾天气的危害，正采取各种举措减少其发we always long for his class with great eagerness 生(3)你自己为此做了什么或打算做什么Dear because his lecture were humorously delivered, Bill,I’m glad to receive your letter, thank you for never failing to provoke loud laughs. Second, he your caring for the weather and my health. Now gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer-- an I’d like to tell you something about the smog. awakening of a passion for learning. He not only Since the winter last year, the smog has occurred led us to an appreciation of the beauty and a lot of times. it has done great harm to our daily perfection of Chinese and literature, but also life. many traffic accidents happened just because aroused our great interest in exploring something of the heavy smog weather, more and more deeper in this field. Finally, I was deeply people have to go to see the doctor because the impressed by the respect he showed for us, for he serious disease caused by the smog, quite a lot of treated us like friends rather than students. flights have to be put off, a great number ofAlthough it is nearly 10 years since I people have to stay at home for fear of the attended his last class, he is the talk of our old poisonous air caused by the smog. classmates, and I know part of him has alreadyPeople have realized the great harm caused stayed in my heart. by the smog and the importance of protecting the 5.Is English Not Important Any More（英语不再environment. people all over the country are 重要） taking measures to reduce the smog weather. the Recently, the Ministry of Education has drafted a government suggests people go to work or school

Firstly, self-confidence enables us to have the

ambition of being successful. Only when you have the ambition to be successful, can you be successful eventually. Secondly, once we gain self-confidence, we will possess the courage and strength to overcome the setbacks and difficulties. With self-confidence, no one and nothing can stop you to success.Thirdly, with self-confidence we may accomplish something which seems to be impossible previously. No great thing is easy for us, therefore we should hold the idea that

anything is possible. We should, or have to trust in ourselves.

In short, self-confidence is the spiritual pillar of a person as well as the inherent power, which is of great importance and value to a person.

9. 节约是中华人民的传统美德，然而，当前国人的浪费现象却十分严重，尤其是餐桌上的浪费。请用英语写一篇100-120词的短文，描述你的一次“餐桌浪费”经历，并结合当前的“光盘行动”(Clear Your Plate Campaign) With large amounts of food thrown away with the public traffic, such as the bus and the

underground. Also we should plant more trees.

or on foot, and I won’t throw the waste According to me, I will go to school by bike

in addition, I will tell the people I meet to protect anywhere. the environment as possible as they can. would you like to tell me some good forward to your reply.

ideasI’m looking 2.作文要求：例：1、生活中确实存在不讲诚信

的现象2、举一例说明(如，有毒奶粉、考试

作弊等)3、讲求诚信的意义Honesty is a

virtue Comes the Wolf Almost all of us heard the story （诚信是一种美德）

What we can learn from the story is that we must

“ when we were little kids.

“ Here

be honest. However, thereof dishonesty nowadays. ’re lots of phenomena other people but also to yourself. Take the case of Being dishonest does great harm not only to fake milk powder for example. After drinking this

kind of milk, the babies had big heads while their

legs and arms were still thin, which badly affected

their health. To our great relief, the producers got

accused and punishedconsequences in the end. for all the serious reliable will make other people trust you, which Having the reputation of being honest and will provide you many benefits and give you

opportunities that others may not get. Being

honest, you will find it easier to cooperate with

others and people will be friendly to you and

support you. In a sense, if life is a long journey, honesty will be the backpack that should be taken along all the way. and start the wonderful journey! Let’s pick up our “ backpack “ —honesty, 3.build an energy-saving society(

型社会)

建立一个节约

近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会

献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。

请你根据以下要点：1.不浪费粮食和纸张 2.

尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋 3.毕业生将书赠

给低年级同学循环使用？参考词汇：方便筷

disposable chopsticks

Recently，there has been an activity of

“doing your bit for an energy-saving society” in

our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned

about the increasing lack of energy and provide

their own suggestions.

Some students suggest that we shouldn’t

waste any food or paper, though they appear very

easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think

it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks

and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly

recommended that those used textbooks as well

as reference books of graduates, which are still in

good condition, not be thrown but recycled.

Actually, there are still quite a lot that we

can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride

bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these

will definitely help to build an energy-saving

society.

4.有关“人与事件”话题The Most Unforgettable

Person in my memory

(1)我生活中最难以忘怀的人是(2)为什

么他 (或她)一直在我心中 (3)结论

In my life I have met many people who are

really worth my recalling. But perhaps the most

unforgettable person I ever knew is my Chinese

reform about English, it is said that English will be not the subject that take into account of the College Entrance Exam, a lot of students feel excited, because they think English will not be their burden. The reform may relieve some students who are week in English, they think they donEnglish, because English is not important any ’t need to spend so much time in learning more. The fact is that they get the wrong idea,

English still important even though it will be no more considered to be the College Entrance Exam. The trend is people learning English since they are young, parents pay special attention to the children’s second language, so most students now are good at English. What’s more, English is the most widely used language, it can enhance a student’s competition. So English is still important to learn. 6.Work and SuccessSince we go to school, we are taught that no pain, （付出与成功） no gain, it means that if people want to be successful, they must work hard. But the truth is that not everyone can get what they want, even they work hard so much, but if working hard does not bring success, why should they still need to work hard. In my opinion, working hard doesn’t mean the person can success certainly, success needs more factors, like the time, the luck and other things.There is no doubt that if the person does not work hard and fight for his goal, there is no way for him to get what he wants. Some actors start their career at the very young age, when they are also 40, they become famous suddenly, if they give up, they can’t be waiting for their reputation. So working hard, there is much chance to get succeed. 7.No Pains, No Gains（一分耕耘，一分收获） It is obvious to everybody that the only way to achieve ones goal is to work hard. Just as the old saying goes;no mill, no meal; Have you ever seen a man who succeeds just by idling aboutOf course, the answer is; No; so we know if you want to gain something, you will have pains.The farmers harvest by a year of arduous work; the scientists gain achievements by years of devoted researches; students get good marks by working hard; even the little ants have their food by working hard day and night. 1 know there are always some people who wait for the opportunities falling on them. They may attribute their failures to lack of good chances. Therefore, there are so many people gaining nothing at last. Clever men know that the more effort they make, the bigger chance they will have to be successful.So, when others achieve their aspirations and you still gain nothing, dont complain about the unfair fate and dont give up, either. Remember: no pains, no gains. 8.The Importance of Self-Confidence（自信的重要 ） People say that self-confidence is half of the success that can bring you courage to stick to what you do. Without self-confidence, one can not do well in anything. Self-confidence is of great importance and value to a person. each year, the problem of food waste is

widespread in China. Last Spring Festival, my father invited several friends to dinner in a restaurant. My father ordered a lot to show respect and display generosity.

What surprised me was he ordered an extra dish before we could finish all! When we stood up to leave, there were many dishes unfinished. Out of embarrassment, my father was reluctant to take the leftovers home. Later, we all shared the opinion that it was a great waste.

Recently, the Clear Your Plate Campaign started nationwide. I firmly believe that if everyone does his bit, the food waste will be significantly reduced.

10.【校园生活】假如你是诸暨二中高三(1)的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。 (1)对获得的帮助表示感谢;(2)消除与 同学之间的误会;(3)努力学习，实现人生梦想;(4)对学弟、学妹的建议。

High school is regarded as the best time in a persons life. As a senior three student, it wont take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.

Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, its high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and

smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, Ive made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "no pains, no gains."Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men.

11.根据下面提示，有关“财富、健康、幸福”话题

(1)写一篇《财富与快乐》的短文。一些人认为财富能带来快乐。

(2)另一些人认为钱多了不是一件好事。(3)注意：单词数提出自己的看法。120个左右。

Wealth and Happiness

happiness to them. It is true that most of them try Some people think wealth can bring

to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. They work hard and overcome many difficulties. After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased. Even their spending money is a kind of happiness them happiness. For example, when one gets a But some people believe wealth can。

’t bring fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him. And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more. And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing. What a terrible result!

wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that society. If you have money you can lead a

comfortable and colorful life. But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth. Remembermoney is not everything12。

： 生态游，你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看

空气;有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾;真正的生态游 享受自然，同时也是一种责任’要保护自然，保护野生动物’带走美好回忆，留下青山绿水Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers as while going sightseeing.. Some 2

I don’t think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our

responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.

第三部分 英语写作经典句型

By +doing, … can … 通过/借着...，..能够.. Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.虽然我们的国家富有我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意

By taking exercise, we can always keep fit.通过做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。

Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

… enable + Object(受词)+ to + V ...使..能够.. What an important thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事!

How important a thing it is to keep our promise! 遵守诺言是多么重要的事!

On no account can we ignore the value of

knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 On no account can we + V =by no means, … 我们绝对不能...

Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. 既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the

conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是， 7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论

8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好 四.举例句型

1.Lets take...to illustrate this.2.lets take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.3.

Here is one more example. 4.Take … for example. 5.The same is true of….6.This offers a typical instance of….7.We may quote a common example of….8.Just think of…. 五.常用于引言段的句型

1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。

2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.多年来，……一直被视the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen (known/ heard/ had/ read, ) the + ~ est + + seen (known/ heard/ had/ read, etc)

名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever A + be + 形容词最高级 + B + have/ has ever + (known/ heard/ had/ read, etc)

Bai jing is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.白晶是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

The + 较级 + S + V … 形容词比较级愈… + S + V愈…

, the + 形容词比The harder you work, the more progress you make. The more books we read, the more learned we 你愈努力，你愈进步。

become. 我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。 Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V;;;Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to +V

Nothing is +形容词比较级+ than to + do sth. Nothing is easier than to give up.容易的事了。

没有比放弃更Nothing is more important than to receive education.It is time + S + 没有比接受教育更重要的事。过去式 该是...的时候了 It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.

该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

It is conceivable that knowledge plays an

important role in our life. 可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

It is conceivable + that It is obvious + that 从句从句 (明显的 (可想而知的)

) It is apparent + that 从句 (显然的) It pays to help others.It pays to do sth. ...是值得的。帮助别人是值得的 There is no doubt

+ that 从句 毫无疑问的...

There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

There is no one but … 没有人不...

There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。

… cannot emphasize the importance of … too much.再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。 We cannot emphasize the importance of

protecting our eyes too much. 保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调

The reason why + 从句 is + that 从句 ...的原因是..The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 That is the reSummer is sultry. That is the reason why I don’t ason why … 那就是...的原因 like it. 夏天很炙热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。 An advantage of An advantage of using the solar energy is that it is + that 从句.的优点是... won’t create (produce) any pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

Due to / Owing to / Thanks to sth./ doing因为. Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.So + adj. + be + 因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想。 So precious is time that we can‘t afford to waste 主语 + that 从句：如此.以致于 it.

by no means = in no way 一点也不

be+forced/ compelled/ obliged + to do不得不 Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.Those who … ...违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。的人...

Smoking has a great influence on our health.对我们的健康有很大的影响。

抽烟have a great influence on 对...有很大的影响 Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.染对我们的生存造成一大威胁

污Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益 Overwork does harm to health.有害do good to对...有益do harm to工作过度对健康对..有害高考英语作文万能句子：8种实用句型 一.开头句型

1.As far as ...is concerned就……而言

2.It goes without saying that... 不言而喻，... 3.It can be said with certainty that... 地说......

可以肯定4.As the proverb says， 正如谚语所说的， 5.It has to be noticed that... 6.Its generally recognized that... 它必须注意到，它普遍认为... ...7.Its likely that ... 这可能是因为... 8.Its hardly that... 9.Its hardly too much to say that... 这是很难的......

它几乎没有太多的说…

10.What calls for special attention is that...别注意的是

需要特11.Theres no denying the fact that...毫无疑问， 12.Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是…

13.whats far more important is that..更重要的是 二.衔接句型

1.A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是...2.As is often the case...由于通常情况下...

3.As stated in the previous paragraph4.But the problem is not so simple. Therefore 如前段所述然 而问题并非如此简单，所以…… 5.But its a pity that... 6.For all that...对于这一切但遗憾的是...... In spite of the fact …

that...尽管事实......

7.Further, we hold opinion that..为

此外我们坚持认8.However , the difficulty lies in..然而困难在于 9.Similarly, we should pay attention to... 我们要注意...

同样，10.not(that)...but(that)...不是，而是

11.In view of the present station.12.As has been mentioned above...鉴于目前形势正如上面所提到的…

13.In this respect, we may as well (say) 角度上我们可以说

从这个14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 一方面，即 … 然而我们还得看到事物的另三.结尾句型

1.I will conclude by saying... 2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...最后我要说… 因此，我们有理由相信…

3.All things considered,safely said that...它可以有把握地说总而言之 It may be ......

4.Therefore, in my opinion, its more advisable...因此，在我看来，更可取的是…

5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨

为……，但今天的情况有很大的不同。

3. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我认为这个论点是正确的，因为…

4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that ….我无法完全同意这一观点的… I believe….5. My argument for this view goes as follows.我对这个问题的看法如下。

6. Along with the development of…, more and more….随着……的发展，越来越多…

7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….有一个长期运行的辩论，是否…

8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….它通常是认为…

9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.就我而言，我完全同意前者/后者。

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is

essential to look at the argument of both sides.在给出我的观点之前，我想有必要看看双方的论据。

六 表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法 1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.3. A and B differ in…. 4. A differs from B in….5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….7. A…, on the other hand,/in is generally believed that A …, I believe B….9. contrast,/while/whereas B….8. While it Despite their similarities, A and B are also

different.10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B…. 七 演绎法常用的句型

1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.有几个原因……，但一般，他们可以归结为三个主要的。 2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.有许多因素可能占...，但以下是最典型的。 3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.面的可能是最有效的。有很多方法可以解决这个问题，但下

4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.5. The reasons are as follows. 一般来说，这些优势可以列举如下。 八 因果推理法常用句型

1.Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.

2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot. 3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, weve learned a lot.

4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, weve learned a lot. 由于阅读这本书，我们已经学到了很多。

5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.6.Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.7. The

effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight. 吃太多导致超重。

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导语：自私是指只为自己、只为个人利益考虑. 于是,在社会生活中的各个场合、各个角色里就有了自私. ­ 拥挤的公交车上,自私是不顾他人地乱挤; 下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关高考素材，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

有些文章你注定一辈子没法忘记。我做编辑时，接到过一篇来稿，读后，感动异常。这位作者名不见经传，但，我把它一字一字地抄了下来。

现在，我把这篇文章抄给你：

这是一个听来的故事。

越南战争中，一个美国士兵打完仗后回到国内，在旧金山旅馆里他辗转反侧，夜不能寐。午夜，他给家中的父母打了一个电话。

“爸爸，妈妈，我要回家了。但是我要你们帮一个忙，我要带一个朋友一起回来。”

“当然可以。”父母亲回答说。“我们见到他会很高兴的。”

“但是，有件事一定要告诉你们，他在那可恶的战争中踩响了一个地雷，受了重伤，他成了残疾人，少了一条腿和一只手。他已无处可去，我希望他能和我们住在一起。”

“我们为他感到遗憾，孩子，我们帮他另找一个地方住下，好吗?”

“不，他只能和我们住在一起。”

“孩子，你不知道，这样他会给我们造成多大的拖累，我们有我们的生活。孩子，你自己一个人回家来吧。他会有活路的。”话没说完，儿子的电话就断了。

父母在家等了许多天，未见儿子回来。一个星期后，他们接到警察局打来的电话，被告知他们的儿子坠楼自杀了。悲痛欲绝的父母飞到旧金山，在停尸房内，他们认出了他们的儿子，然而，他们惊愕地发现：他们的儿子少了一条腿、一只手。

我说过，有的文章注定让你记住一辈子。因为，它震撼我们的心灵。

导语：水是生命之源，我们要保护水资源，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

Spring is tht best season of the year. The weather gets warmer and warmer. My clas iamates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty. But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.

With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers. It has caused serious pollution. The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it. The river is giving off a terrible smell.

We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation. Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.

Water is tho source of our lives. It is very important to protect water.

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春天是一年中最好的季节，天气变得越来越暖和。我和我的同学们进行了一次环城一日游，所到之处景色宜人。但当我看到沿着城区流过的河流时，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。

随着现代工农业的发展，越来越多的污水排进河里，河水被严重污染。河水变得如此的肮脏以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水发出难闻的气味。

我们急切呼吁采取措施改变这种状况。政府应当建立各种设备，例如污水处理厂，并且鼓励科学家们想出更多更好的办法以减少水污染。

水是生命之源，保护水资源十分重要。

by the time children enter school, they’ll have spent up to one-third of their waking hours in front of tv. the enormous influence of television is just beginning to be realized. while many parents take television as an electronic baby-sitter, they neglect the fact that television may be more harmful than it is beneficial to children.

those who encourage small children to watch television claim that many programs for children on tv are helpful to develop children’s interest and enrich their knowledge. they also argue that preoccupied with tv programs, children are prevented from doing mischief. although at a first glance these arguments sound true, the behavior of some children doesn’t seem to prove them.

in the first place, programs for children are not always beneficial to them. one science fiction serial keeps telling about some supernatural beings who can fly and always fight against evildoers. after watching several episodes, a small child was so enchanted that he imitated the heroes and “flew” from his room on the second floor. there are also reports of children running away from home to the mountains to practice martial art. these incidents are naturally credited with tv programs for children.

further, being preoccupied with tv programs is not a good way for avoiding mischief. in the days before tv, parents used to gather together with their children, telling stories or reading poems to them. the communication between parents and children was thus better, so it was easier for children to understand what was good conduct.those who approve of children’s watching tv neglect television’s bad effects on children. firstly, children are surrounded and bombarded by commercials for toys and foods. they are tempted into becoming consumers. they earnestly ask their parents to buy things which they do not really need. as a result, the parents are in a financial dilemma, and the children themselves always become victims of bad products because of false advertising.

another bad effect of television is that children are over-exposed to violence. they watch hours of murders, fights, and crimes every week, with no adult around to tell them that life is not like that most of the time. the effect of the heavy dose of violence is to suggest to children that violence is an ordinary way of life, and that shooting and cheating are ways to success.most serious of all, children who often watch tv are becoming passive. they just sit back and let things happen to them. children are inventive; they have the ability to imagine a whole world of their own. but what happens when their imagination is not needed, when tv does all the imagination for them? obviously, these children are not going to grow up as inventive and imaginative as their parents, for they have been robbed of creative impulses by television.

to sum up, children’s indulgence in television is harmful. the problem, nevertheless, is not one of prohibition. parents should supervise and guide their children’s watching tv instead of parking them in front of the tube, hoping it will act as a baby-sitter.

一个句子必须按照一定的模式来组织，这个模式称为句式。下面是语文迷为大家提供的高考英语写作优秀句式，供大家参考。

1) on the other hand, the contribution of day schools cant be ignored.

2) due to high tuition fee, most of ordinary families cannot afford to send their children to boarding schools.

3) since it is unnecessary to consider students routinelife, day school can lay stress on teaching instead of other aspects, such as management of dormitory and cafeteria.

4) furthermore, students living in their own home would have access to a comfortable life and have more opportunities to communicate with their parents, which have beneficial impact on development of their personal character.

5) from what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that both of day schools and boarding schools are important to train young students for our society.

6) there is much discussion over science and technology. one of the questions under debate is whether traditional technology and methods are bound to die out when a country begins to develop modern science and technology.

7) According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

8) The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

9) No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

10) People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

11) An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

12) When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

13) Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a persons physical fitness.

14) Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful

15) An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

16) Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus, which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

17) There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

18) An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

19) A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

20) Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.

21) Nowadays, many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately, for most young people, it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

22) In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

23) The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

24) It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to face the dangers of starvation and exposure.

25) Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

26) No one can deny the fact that a persons education is the most important aspect of his life.

27) People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer.

28) In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.

29) In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

30) We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

31) People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

32) The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.

33) Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.

34) This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.

35) For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:

36) Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.

37) This view is now being questioned by more and more people.

38) Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information Ive collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.

39) Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.

40) In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like bicycle are more important than any time before.

41) Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams.

42) Despite many obvious advantages of bicycle, it is not without its problem.

43) Bicycle cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.

44) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.

45) There is a general discussion these days over education in many colleges and institutes. One of the questions under debate is whether education is a lifetime study.

46) This issue has caused wide public concern.

47) It must be noted that learning must be done by a person himself.

48) A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that they had completed their education when they finished their schooling. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that a persons education is a most important aspect of his life.

49) As for me, Im in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation, for the following reasons:

50) It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.

51) Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.

52) It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

53) For lack of distinct culture, some places will not attract tourists any more. Consequently, the fast rise in number of foreign tourists may eventually lead to the decline of local tourism.

54) There is a growing tendency for parents to ask their children to accept extra educational programs over the recent years.

55) This phenomenon has caused wide public concern in many places of world.

56) Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up.

57) In the first place, extra studies bring about unhealthy impacts on physical growth of children. Educational experts point out that, it is equally important to take some sport activities instead of extra studies when children have spent the whole day in a boring classroom.

58) Children are undergoing fast physical development; lack of physical exercise may produce disastrous influence on their later life.

59) In the second place, from psychological aspect, the majority of children seem to tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward additional educational activities.

60) It is hard to imagine a student focusing their energy on textbook while other children are playing.

61) Moreover, children will have less time to play and communicate with their peers due to extra studies, consequently, it is difficult to develop and cultivate their character and interpersonal skills. They may become more solitary and even suffer from certain mental illness.

62) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldnt be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school.

63) Any parents should place considerable emphasis on their children to keep the balance between play and study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.

64) There is a growing tendency for parent these days to stay at home to look after their children instead of returning to work earlier.

65) Parents are firmly convinced that, to send their child to kindergartens or nursery schools will have an unfavorable influence on the growth of children.

66) However, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts, who point out that it is unhealthy for children who always stay with their parents at home.

67) Although parent would be able to devote much more time and energy to their children, it must be admitted that, parent has less experience and knowledge about how to educate and supervise children, when compared with professional teachers working in kindergartens or nursery schools.

68) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.

69) Parents should be encouraged to send their children to nursery schools, which will bring about profound impacts on children and families, and even the society as a whole.

70) Many leaders of government always go into raptures at the mere mention of artistic and cultural projects. They are forever talking about the nice parks, the smart sculptures in central city and the art galleries with various valuable rarities. Nothing, they maintain, is more essential than such projects in the economic growth.

71) But is it really the case? The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that artistic and cultural projects may be less useful than many governments think. In fact, basic infrastructure projects are playing extremely important role and should be given priority.

72) Those who are in favor of artistic and cultural projects advocate that cultural environment will attract more tourists, which will bring huge profits to local residents. Some people even equate the build of such projects with the improving of economic construction.

73) Unfortunately, there is very few evidence that big companies are willing to invest a huge sums of money in a place without sufficient basic projects, such as supplies of electricity and water.

74) From what has been discussed above, it would be reasonable to believe that basic projects play far more important role than artistic and cultural projects in peoples life and economic growth.

75) Those urban planners who are blind to this point will pay a heavy price, which they cannot afford it.

76) There is a growing tendency these days for many people who live in rural areas to come into and work in city. This problem has caused wide public concern in most cities all over the world.

77) An investigation shows that many emigrants think that working at city provide them with not only a higher salary but also the opportunity of learning new skills.

78) It must be noted that improvement in agriculture seems to not be able to catch up with the increase in population of rural areas and there are millions of peasants who still live a miserable life and have to face the dangers of exposure and starvation.

79) Although rural emigrants contribute greatly to the economic growth of the cities, they may inevitably bring about many negative impacts.

80) Many sociologists point out that rural emigrants are putting pressure on population control and social order; that they are threatening to take already scarce city jobs; and that they have worsened traffic and public health problems.

81) Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

82) An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.

83) For the majority of people, reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.

84) For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn.

85) There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students doing a part-time job.

86) By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.

87) Although peoples lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades, it must be admitted that, shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day

88) Consequently, the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.

89) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job, which will benefit students and their family, even the society as a whole.

90) These days, people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.

【示例一】

①With the rapid advances of ________ in recent years, ________has ________(引出现象). ②However, ________has ________, as ________(提出问题). ③As a result, ________(指出影响),which has aroused close social attention from all walks of life.

【示例二】

①With the rapid development of science and technology (electronic industry/higher education), more and more people come to realize that ________(引出现象). ②It is estimated, over the past decade, that ________(用具体数据说明现象).

1、游记：是描写游览中的所见所闻，表达自己思想感情的记叙文。

2、游记的题材非常广泛，凡是游览中见到社会生活、风土人情、山川景物、名胜古迹以及听到的神话传说等，都可以作为游记的材料。

3、游记分为很多种：以记录行程为主的是记叙型游记；以抒发感情为主的是抒情型游记；以描绘景物、景观为主的是写景型游记；通过记游来说明一个道理的，是说理型游记。

4、何才能把游记写好呢？

一、中心明确、重点突出。首先，在写游记的过程中一定要把主体交待清楚，如，游的人或者集体、要写的景物等，要交代具体。其次，要注意在描写中一定要有一个明确的中心。另外，要努力观察，把所要描写的景物有重点、有层次地写具体，写形象。

二、线索清楚。写游记一定要有一条合理的线索贯穿其中。可以按游览路线写，可以按空间顺序写。

三、抒发自己的真情实感，看了那些风景名胜，你一定会有自己的想法、态度，那么我们就要把它写到作文中去，抒发自己的感情。

In order to provide a good guidance and reference for nearly 1000 senior high graduates in our school, the Student Union made a survey on the filling applications for the college entrance examinations among the previous year graduates. According to the statistics of the survey, half of the graduates accepted their teachers’ suggestions for the reason that teachers have a better understanding of their interests, specialties and schooling experiences. 35% of the graduates followed their parents advice as they are used to obeying their arrangements and trusted their decision. 10% of the graduates preferred to make an independent choice as they hold that nobody know them better than themselves and since it is their rights to fill applications they hope to win respect from teachers and parents. The remaining 5% just made their choices accordingly after they got the results of the final published scores and ranking.