高三英语作文朋友100词热门20篇

若说风令人清爽，书则宁静而淡雅。朋友，如果说世间还有一块净土，圣洁的地方，那就是书。

童年时，我总爱抱着一本故事书，无意蹲在地上，阳光斜斜的照在书面上，我默默地抱着洒满阳光的书，呆呆地注视着。当我看到猎人把凶恶的狼打死之后，我就会在心里偷偷笑，一边笑还一边想：活该，你那是自作自受。当我看到坏蛋在无端的欺负小女孩的时候我便会愤怒不已。就这样在无数的故事书的陪伴下，我走过了童年。

慢慢地，我长大了。进入了中学，我变成了中学生。在夜深人静的时候，我总是不由自主的打开灯，捧起你。就算灯再微弱些，也挡不住我对你的一片深情。就算满头大汗。我也会执著的捧着你，一本一本书流汇成的知识的海洋。也许闪耀的辉煌不会属于我；编织的名利不会青睐我；绚烂的权势不会属于我；但我相信：你将会永远陪伴着我。因为你是我的好朋友。

书是我的知己，我因为它有无尽的知识，是它让我辩清美与丑、善与恶；是它伴我风雨兼程；是它使我变得自强、自立、自信了；是它……

朋友，爱书吧！让我们一起去书海中遨游吧。

There have been many environmental protection problems in recent years . One of the most serious problem is greenhouse gas emissions have caused climate change ,At the same time ,lots of trees have been used and wasted.So our earth is becoming warmer and warmer . .That brings us illnesses and death.

Luckily ，,many countries have done a lot to stop environmental pollution。Its the most important in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion ,on the one hand ,through education we should make people realize that destroying the environment means destroying ourselves,..On the other hand ,we should try to do something to produce fewer greenhouse gas emissions.

In a word .we must develop low-carbon economy

现在这些年已经有很多关于保护环境的问题。其中最严重的一个问题就是温室气体排放已经造成了气候改变。同时，很多树木被砍伐掉了，而且大量别的资源已经被用完或者浪费。所以我们的地球变得越来越温暖(热)。这样带给我们的是疾病和死亡。。

幸运的是，很多国家已经采取了很多措施来控制环境污染问题。如今，这是最重要保护环境的措施。

我认为，一方面，虽然教育我们应该让人们意识到破坏环境就是伤害人类自己。另一方面，我们应该尽力做一些事情来控制温室气体增长。

总之，我们必须发展低碳经济。

导语：感恩生活，给予我酸甜苦辣，让我的人生千姿百态；感恩生活，给予我磨练，让我的生命春光灿烂；感恩生活，给予我梦想，让我的脑海拥有曙光；以下是小编整理感恩朋友的英语作文的资料，欢迎阅读参考。

The four seasons, flowers and flowers, life in the world, people are not alone. Because besides the parents, everyone has many friends around, we should be grateful to the parents for the grace, but we also have to be grateful to our friends. Because it is a friend that makes us feel the friendship of the world.

Kinship, love and friendship are the most beautiful emotions of human beings.

Compared with family and love, friendship is the most insipid of these three emotions. It is not like affection, nor is it like love. But friendship is the most powerful of the three. Many people can be your friends if you like, familiar and unfamiliar. Friendship, sometimes insipid and sometimes exciting, different times it has different beauty.

Friendship can travel through time and space. Decades of time, stone wear, decades of time, enough to make the world witness the beauty of the pale. However, friendship in the passage of time, but can be like old wine, the longer the more fragrant. The friendship of youth, like a brush painting, the pursuit of the details of lifelike, even if there is a bit of defect, will affect the effect of the whole painting. The friendship of old age is like a painting of ink and ink, and the pursuit of the likeness. They each have their own characteristics, but they will not fade.

A friend that makes us grateful, grateful friend call mind, like the earth gave us grateful friends bring us happiness like a flower, grateful friend like rain moisten our hearts, grateful friends like the cool breeze bring us relaxed.

翻译

四季轮回，花开花落，生活于人世间，人并不是孤单的。因为除了父母，每个人身边都会有许多朋友，我们应该感恩于父母的养育之恩，但是我们同样也要对朋友怀着一颗感恩的心。因为是朋友，使我们感受带人世间的友情。

亲情，爱情和友情是人类最美好的情感。

与亲情，爱情相比，友情是这三种情中最平淡的，它不像亲情意绵绵，也不像爱情那样轰轰烈烈。但是，友情是三种感情中最博大的。如果你愿意，许多人都可以成为你的朋友，有熟悉的，也有陌生的。友情，有时是平淡的，有时又让人充满激情，不同的时候它有着不同的美。

友情是可以穿越时空的。几十年的时光，足以滴水石穿，几十年的时光，足以使天地见证容颜的失色。然而，友情在时光的流逝中，却能如陈年老酒一样，愈久愈香。年轻时的友情，就像一幅工笔画，追求的是细节的逼真，哪怕有一点瑕癖，都会影响到整幅画的效果。年老时候的友情，就像一幅水墨画，追求的是神似。它们各有自己的特色，却不会褪色。

让我们感恩朋友吧，感恩朋友像大地一样赋予我们拨打的胸怀，感恩朋友像鲜花一样带给我们芬芳，感恩朋友像雨露一样滋润我们的心田，感恩朋友像清风一样带给我们清爽。

Is a lovely girl, her innocence is the origin of our happy, brings us her happy smile.

Her name is li zhang, her eyes wide, mouth like a cherry, very lovely, long hair, she is good at jumping rope, run, jump, etc...

Shes good at her grades in school, take the first every time, once dropped her grades, was beaten by her mother and father, the next day I went to school found that she didnt come to school.

I came to her shes at home, a corner to cry, I used to have a look at herll hurt all over, I asked her, "whats wrong with you." She said to me: "mom hit me, I good sad, she is the first hit me."

I was angry for her mother said: "shes your daughter, even if she is bad to also can not call her again." Her mother said: "Im sorry, daughter, mother is wrong, please let we trust." Li sent zhang said: mom, I would like to challenge you.

This is my friend, my good friend forever.

是一个可爱的女生，她的天真是我们快乐的起源，她的快乐带给了我们笑容。

她的名字叫李送张，她的眼睛大大的，嘴巴像樱桃，可爱极了，头发长长的，她擅长跳绳，跑步，跳远，等等……

她在学校她的成绩很好，每次都拿第一，有一次她的成绩下降了，被她的爸爸妈妈打了，第二天我来到学校发现她没来上学。

我来到她家她在家的一个角落哭，我过去一看她满身都是伤，我问她：“你怎么了。”她对我说：“妈妈打我，我好伤心，她是第一次打我。”

我生气的对她的妈妈说：“她是你女儿，即使她考的再不好也不可以打她啊。”她妈妈说：“对不起，女儿，妈妈错了，请你愿谅。”李送张说：妈妈我愿谅你。

这就是我的朋友，我永远的好朋友。

my name is tang shanshan, my english name is alice. i am 10 years old. i study in linpu no.1 primary school. i am beautiful. i have long hair, big eyes.

my favourite day is friday. we have music and english class. potatoes are my favourite food, they’re tasty and healthy. my favourite drink is coffee. they’re tasty and healthy too. i like animals. but i don’t like frog and spider, they’re ugly.

i like playing table tennis and playing the piano. i’m helpful, i can make the bed, sweep the floor, water the flowers, empty the trash, put away the clothes and many other housework. do you want to be my friend?

猫，相信大家都见过。它是一种淘气又可爱的小动物，它能够给人带来无穷无尽的欢乐。那么，我家也有这样一位小成员，请大家听我讲讲吧。

我这个动物朋友，它有一双水汪汪的大眼睛，黑白相间的毛，尖尖的小耳朵，毛茸茸的小爪子。我给它取名叫做“夜煞”。

它有一个特点贪吃。我去冰箱里拿了一点吃的东西，它的眼瞪得像一个大铁球一样大，里边仿佛有三个大字“给我吃”，可我故意不给它，它的眼睛里就有了“杀气”，于是我赶紧把吃的放在了地上。天啊，是何方神圣不到十秒钟就把我的食物吃没了。

要说它是哪来的，那得从我八岁说起。故事发生在在一条小巷中，我正在练习骑自行车，路过这条小巷。突然，我听见了“喵喵”的声音，于是寻声走了过去，看见一只小猫蜷缩在一个旧纸箱中，可怜巴巴地望着我，好像在说;“求求你，做我的小主人吧!”于是，我抱起小猫咪，把它带回了家。

我很喜欢这位动物朋友。我保证过我要保护它，不让它再回到流浪的生活。

今天的作文课上，老师让我们介绍一下自己的动物朋友，我第一个就想到了我家的仓鼠——“珍珠奶茶”。

你们知道为什么叫珍珠奶茶吗？嘻嘻，是这样的，在我第一次见到它的时候，它还是个小宝宝，身披着一件浅棕色的毛绒外套，两颗圆溜溜的小眼睛镶嵌在上面，就像奶茶杯里那珍珠一般，所以我才给它取名“珍珠奶茶”。

在过去的几个月里，它渐渐地长大，我和它的关系也逐渐亲密起来。

有一次，我刚从补习班回来，就看见它全身沾满了灰尘，而它还不自知，一双小眼睛笑盈盈地看着我，我抱怨着说：“我的小乖乖呀！你怎么变得这么黑，不行，不行，我要帮你洗一下澡。”珍珠奶茶一听见要洗澡，它就用哀求的眼神看着我，好像在说：“主人，我不想洗澡，求求你了，主人。”看它这可怜兮兮的眼神，我就心软了。但是洗澡这件大事不能拖延，就向洗澡盆指了指，威胁着：“小宝贝，如果你不洗澡，那我把你的小零食全部没收，你就不能吃了。”它似乎听懂我要对它干什么，立刻迈着自己的小短腿，往澡盆冲去，随后乖乖钻到澡盆里吱吱地叫着，好像在说：“那好吧，但我洗完澡，你要奖励我。”我也摸摸它的头，安慰着说：“好，只要你乖乖洗澡，我就给你吃。”它一听，立刻张开四肢，似在叫我赶紧给它洗澡。这“贪吃鼠”真是令人无奈啊。

俗话说干啥啥不行，干饭第一名。这句话就是在说我家的“珍珠奶茶”。它特会吃，每当开饭时间，我饭都没有吃完，它就已经抱着一个小饼干，小门牙“咔嚓咔嚓”地啃着，腮帮子越来越鼓，没一会儿就给啃完了，我也真是服了它，像我虐待了它，几天没吃饭似的。

这就是我的特殊朋友，我喜欢它，它给我带来了无穷的欢乐！

How time flies, it is a year, this morning, the winter holiday will begin school. I like past holidays, there will always be on the first day of the holiday started, make a plan for the feasible, purpose is in order to be able to make myself in the holiday, have a more happy and substantial, and can learn more knowledge outside, and after a joy.

I want to develop my interests and hobbies, I want to practice calligraphy, together with dad grow up can also write good word. See the TV news report, understand the society. I more exercise and keep healthy.

I want to insist on keeping a diary, composition. Before, I write diary "dry", mainly is the lack of observation; Later, Im going to look at 30 minutes a day of extra-curricular, put some thoughts and recorded during winter vacation, and some meaningful person or thing written in the article. See some excellent composition, learn other peoples writing strengths. To find on the Internet to write good articles, learn from somebody elses learning. In addition, I have a brochure, called "diary of a small material", at ordinary times is trivial to observe, record some wonderful things, writing an article that is a good material! When the time comes to write something, then dont worry about "theres nothing to write"!

Visiting relatives and friends, do civilized manners, respect their elders, to the relatives and friends about their own learning, to their peers share their experiences in learning.

This is my winter vacation plan, I not only want to strengthen learning, also want to do more to help parents, do you think I do this winter holiday plan?

时间过得真快,转眼又是一年,今天上午，学校开始放寒假了。我与以往放假时一样，总会在假期开始的第一天，订一个切实可行的计划，目的是为了能够使自己在假期中，过得更加的充实和快乐，并能学习到更多的校外知识，欢欢喜喜喜过个年。

我要培养我的兴趣和爱好，我要跟爸爸一起练练书法，长大以后也能够写一手好字。多看电视里的新闻报道，了解社会。我还要多锻炼身体，保持身体健康。

我要坚持写日记、作文。以前，我写的日记“干干的”，主要就是缺少观察;以后，我打算每天看三十分钟的课外书，在寒假期间把一些所见所闻记录下来，并把有一些有意义的人或事写成文章。看一些优秀的作文，学习别人的写作长处。在网上查找写的好的文章，向人家学习学习。另外，我还要一个小册子，起名为“日记小材料”，平时发生一点小事都要留心观察，把一些精彩的东西记录下来，那可是写文章的好材料哟!到时候要写东西，那就不愁“没事可写”了!

走亲访友，做到文明礼貌，尊敬长辈，向亲戚朋友介绍自己的学习情况，向同龄人交流学习心得。

这就是我的寒假计划，我不但要加强学习，也要多帮爸妈做事，大家觉得我这个寒假计划怎么样?

在我家的小鱼缸里，养着两只可爱的小乌龟，那是妈妈在花街上买回来的。我可喜欢了，把它当宝贝似的精心喂养起来。

小乌龟真可爱！它的头呈三角形，头前方两颗比芝麻还小的黑眼睛滴溜溜直转，看上去挺机灵的。瞧！它的眼前还有一道嫩黄色的斑痕，看起来显得幼嫩，背上还驮着一个墨绿色的硬壳，活像背着一块护身盾牌。身后一条小尾巴一翘一翘的，有趣极了！

小乌龟胆子很小，我只要用手轻轻地碰一碰它的背，它的头、脚、尾巴全都缩进壳里，好像一个石头疙瘩，你再逗它，它也无动于衷。

小乌龟很有趣。有一天，我把它放在水泥路上，它就往前爬。我把它翻了过来，让它四脚朝天。小乌龟的脚就使劲向上乱蹬，可是小乌龟怎么蹬也翻不过来。它不甘心，连忙拨动后腿，可拨了半天还是翻不了身。这时，它就四肢和头一齐用力，头往地上猛地一顶，只听“啪”的一声，身子一下子就翻过来了。看着它那笨手笨脑的样子和滑稽的神态，我不由得哈哈大笑起来。

还有一次，我把小乌龟放进鱼池里，鱼池里的水又深又多，小乌龟一见水就撒起欢来。在水里游来游去，四只小爪子就像小船桨一样，不停的划动着，小尾巴也左右摇动，游过来，游过去的。它游过的地方留下了一条淡淡的痕迹。它一边游，一边还不时地把头露出水面，微微张开口那月牙形的小嘴，好像在换气，乌龟的游泳姿势不美，但凭它的技巧，也可以称得上是游泳能手了。我费了好大的功夫，才把它从鱼池里捞上来。

小乌龟给我们的生活增添了许多的情趣，我越来越爱我的小乌龟了。

2016年1月北京各区高三期末英语作文

海淀区

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节（15分）

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的班长李华, 你们班的外教Lisa已经结束本学期的教学工作回到美国，请代表你们班给她写一封邮件。邮件的内容包括：

1. 询问她的近况；2. 回顾在外教课上的收获；3. 表达对她的感谢和祝福。 注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lisa,

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Yours,

Li Hua

One possible version

Dear Lisa,

How have you beenYou must be enjoying your life back at home. We still miss the days we spent together.

In the last term, we all benefited a lot from your lessons. We improved our oral English and became more confident to express ourselves. In addition, we learned so much about western culture and tradition.

On behalf of my class, I would like to thank you for teaching us English! We wish you joy and happiness in the new stage of life!

Yours,

Li Hua

第二节（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“A visit to the Museum of the Anti-Japanese War”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍你们班同学参观抗日战争纪念馆的过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

二、内容要点：

1．到达； 2．参观； 3．听故事；4．合影。

One possible version

Last Saturday, our class visited the Museum of the Anti-Japanese War. When our school bus arrived at the Museum, we got off and entered in line. The moment we went into the exhibition room, we were attracted by the pictures and descriptions about the war on the wall. Some students took notes while others had a little discussion. We were shocked at the cruelty of the war. Then we gathered in another room and listened to an old soldier telling the stories about the war. Therefore, we had a better understanding of the history.

Before we left, we all came to the front of the museum and took a picture with the old soldier in memory of our visit. We were very glad to meet such a true hero.

We hope by visiting the museum more people can remember what happened in the war and treasure the peaceful life.

西城区

第四部分：书面表达 (共两节，35分)

第一节（15分）

作为交换项目的一部分，学校将于本周五下午两点组织美国交换生到红星小学进行志愿者活动。假设你是校学生会主席，请向他们口头通知此事，内容包括：

1. 集合时间、地点； 2. 活动内容（介绍美国文化、教英文歌等）； 3. 活动意义。

注意： 1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

May I have your attention, please

That’s all. Thank you.

One possible version:

May I have your attention, please

This Friday you will visit Hong Xing Primary School as volunteers, which is a very important part of the exchange program. The school bus will pick you up at the school gate at 2 p.m. This trip aims to give the kids there a taste of American culture. You may prepare some mini lectures and teach the kids some simple but beautiful songs.

Through sharing your culture with them, you will know more about this country in return. We wish you all a good trip!

That’s all. Thank you.

第二节（20分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍你和家人在去年9月3日观看国庆阅兵活动的过程，并以“An Unforgettable Day”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿。

注意： 1. 词数不少于60；2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词：阳台 balcony朋友圈

WeChat Moments

An Unforgettable Day

On September 3, a military parade was held to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the victory of World War II.

二、内容要点：

1．等待观看 2．观看阅兵 3．阳台拍照 4．分享感受

One possible version:

An Unforgettable Day

On September 3, a military parade was held to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the victory of World War II. Ten minutes before the big event, we seated ourselves in front of the TV, eager to watch the live broadcast.

Soon the parade started. Seeing the soldiers and military equipment proceed along Chang’an Street, past Tian’anmen Square, we couldn’t help cheering and applauding for our powerful country.

Then the roaring of military aircraft overhead caught our attention. We rushed to the balcony and took photos of the planes flying in formation. What an impressive scene!

I couldn’t wait to share my pictures and feelings with friends on WeChat

Moments. To my surprise, WeChat was already flooded with numerous pictures and comments expressing love for our motherland. What an unforgettable day!

东城区

第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）

第一节（15分）

假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的外教Mr.Black写一封信，邀请他参加你们年级举行的英语读书会（reading circle）活动，邮件的内容包括： 介绍读书活动的相关信息（例如：时间、地点、活动内容等等）；

说明你发出邀请的原因；询问对方的意向。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Black,

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Yours,

Li Hua

One possible version:

Dear Mr. Black,

I’m writing to invite you to take part in the reading circle in Grade 3. It will be held in the library next Monday from 3:30 to 5:00 p.m .We are going to read some popular English stories. Could you come and give us some guidance

We are looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

My good friend is Mei. Shes a girl. She is my classmate.

Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in the summer holiday. She likes pink and white. She is in Class Four, Grade Six with me. She usually goes to school by motor cycle. Sometimes she goes to school on foot. We often go shopping together on the weekend.

We will be good friends forever.

我的好朋友是美。她是个女孩。她是我的同班同学。

梅又高又瘦。她有两只大眼睛和长头发。她喜欢听音乐和看书。有时我们一起听音乐。她喜欢夏天。因为她可以在暑假游泳。她喜欢粉红色和白色。她在四班，六年级和我在一起。她通常是通过摩托车去上学的。有时她步行去学校。我们经常在周末一起去购物。

我们将永远是好朋友。

我有一只小猫，他全身黑黑的，毛长长的，软软的，摸起来舒服极了！一双黑色的大眼睛炯炯有神，在漆黑的夜里，那双大眼睛可以看清楚夜里所有的东西，如果你不开灯去喝水时，小猫的那一双大眼睛就像两个绿油油小灯泡，发出闪闪的光芒。对了，我的表妹给它取了一个好听的名字：米小咪。

米小咪不仅长得可爱，他还十分尽职。记得有一次，一只又肥又大的老鼠在半夜跑出来偷粮食吃，被米小咪发现了，他把眼睛睁得大大的，“呼”地朝那只大老鼠扑去，谁知老鼠灵敏地躲开了米小咪的攻击，米小咪只好使用他的必杀技：装死，只见米小咪“扑通”一声倒在地上，眯着眼睛，屏住呼吸，一动不动，老鼠见了，以为米小咪真的死了，就跑到他面前，“吱吱吱”叫个不停，似乎在说：“真没有想到，堂堂猫王也会死在我们老鼠面前。”就在这时，米小咪“喵”地站起来，用爪子用力按住那只得意洋洋的大老鼠，用他那锋利如刀的牙齿咬断了老鼠的脖子，然后津津有味地吃了起来。说他贪玩吧！是呀！每天的傍晚他都会出去玩，跑过小河，跑过田园，跑过小山坡……他喝过凉凉的、甘甜的山泉水，吃过又红又大的野果，还闻过散发出清香的野花和野草。

这就是我的小猫，一只可爱、尽职、贪玩的小猫！

我喜欢我的小猫——米小咪，在我的眼里，他是独一无二的。

张天乙是我最好的朋友。她很会安慰别人，也能给我鼓励。

那是我们田径队要比赛的时候。因为每天都要训练，所以与张天乙在一起的时间少了。

比赛前一天，我紧张的不行，但却装作很自然的样子，对张天乙说：“老大啊！明天我就比赛了。”张天乙仍然不改她那副样子，说：“比就比呗！怎么了？”我苦恼地对她说：“老大啊！我400米跑不下来呀！如果我跑完后虚脱了，你一定要去看我啊！”张天乙说：“你这家伙，怎么自己诅咒自己呢？再说了，你跑步那么快，怎么能跑不下来呢？你可是我们班唯一一个田径队的啊！”我想，张天乙，你真不愧是我的死党，你的话让我有了自信心；你的话让我不再害怕明天的比赛；你的话让我镇定下来，发挥出自己的水平，没必要拿第一、第几的，自己努力就行了。

跑400米时，我跑了300多米就没劲了，想走过去。但我一想这是比赛，又想到张天乙和为我喊加油的同学和老师，便坚持了下来。张天乙，你是我永远永远的朋友，最好的朋友。

My English friend name is Jim.

HE is ten years old, his family in london,he and his family member comes our china to play.He has a cosin,he name is qianyu hi is oniy four years old,but he has a lot of questions.look he is pointing at the chopsticks to ask that my this is anything.

I and jim has become the good friend .Several days later Jim said that he wanted, he said that i love China .I will forget that you zhou lei, will have free time london to look at me .Ok see you Jim.see you.

Great Wall -- -, the symbol of the Chinese nations backbone, is to build the longest in the world, the largest country in the volume of military defense project. It together with the sweat and wisdom of our ancestors, is the pride of the Chinese people, but also the pride of the whole world.

The famous Great Wall, like a dragon, lithe winding, PAM fell on the earth. Its east of hebei shanhaiguan, west to jiayuguan in gansu province. Its vertical and horizontal hebei, Beijing, shanxi, Inner Mongolia, ningxia, shaanxi, gansu and other seven provinces and autonomous regions, and total length of 6700 km, therefore is called the "Great Wall".

The Great Wall has a long history, was founded in the spring and autumn period and the warring states period, more than 2000 years history. Since the qin dynasty, built the Great Wall has been a big project. According to records, qin shi huang use nearly millions labor to build the Great Wall, 1/20 of the population. There was no any mechanical, all labor by manpower, and the work environment is hills, cliff deep. As you can imagine, lots of people without hard work, is unable to complete the great project. Condensed the Great Wall of Chinas ancient working people of blood and sweat.

The Great Wall, the mountains, the cliffs, wear wasteland, horizontal amount, and at the top of the mountains, the other shore of the Yellow River and the coast of the bohai sea. , ancient and modern, Chinese and foreign people who have been to the Great Wall cant hold their wonder at the grand finale, grand scale. The Great Wall is like a towering monument, standing on the earth, standing in the heart of the people of the world.

The Great Wall, majestic, magnificent, is the epitome of the Chinese nation, is also a symbol of the Chinese nation civilization, is unique in human history, the only one like you!

长城---中华的象征，民族的脊梁，是世界上修建时间最长，工程量最大的国家军事性防御工程。它凝聚着我们祖先的血汗和智慧，是中国人民的骄傲，也是整个世界的骄傲。

着名的万里长城，像一条矫健的巨龙，蜿蜒曲折，蟠伏在中华大地上。它东起河北省的山海关，西到甘肃省嘉峪关。它纵横河北、北京、山西、内蒙古、宁夏、陕西、甘肃等七个省市自治区，全长6700公里，因此被称为“万里长城”。

长城历史悠久，始建于春秋战国时期，历史达2000多年。自秦朝开始，修筑长城一直是一项大工程。据记载，秦始皇使用了近百万劳动力修筑长城，占全国人口的1/20!当时没有任何机械，全部劳动都得靠人力，而工作环境又是高山峻岭、峭壁深壑。可以想象，没有大量的人进行艰苦的劳动，是无法完成这项巨大工程的。长城凝聚了我国古代劳动人民的鲜血和汗水。

长城越群山，经绝壁，穿荒原，横瀚海，起伏在崇山峻岭之巅，黄河彼岸和渤海之滨。古今中外，凡到过长城的人无不惊叹它的雄伟气势、宏伟规模。长城犹如巍峨丰碑，屹立在地球上，屹立在世界人民心中。

万里长城，气势磅礴，雄伟壮丽，是中华民族的缩影，也是中华民族文明的象征，是人类历史上独一无二、举世无双的!

My few friends characteristics, face pianpian, eyes are very big, is like the moon.

My friends love practical jokes. Once, he came to my home, immediately ran into my room, and no one to come in. After a while, he called me in, I didnt think I just get it into a big pillow, he saw me in his design agencies, just laughed, also throws the banana skin on my face, I was so angry ran to him like a volcanic eruption, just want to which he had stumbled over a rope.

My friend is very naughty. On one occasion, our teacher said that he didnt listen attentively in class, love play footsie, but he dont in my heart, such as the teacher say that finish, he whispered: "pass you what things, what is you ah, your courage is too big." After listening to these words we all laughed, the class teacher was so angry almost hit him.

How, my friend isnt practical jokes are both naughty and love?

我的朋友特点很少，脸扁扁的，眼睛非常大，真像月亮一样。

我的朋友爱搞恶作剧。有一次，他来到我家，马上就跑进我的房间里，谁也不让进来。过了一会儿，他叫我进去，没想到我刚进去就被大枕头砸到了，他看到我中了他设计的机关，就哈哈大笑，还往我的脸上扔香蕉皮，我气得像火山爆发一样向他跑了过去，刚要到他哪就又被绳子绊倒了。

我的朋友非常调皮。有一次，我们的老师说他上课不专心听讲、爱搞小动作，可他一点儿也不放在心里，等老师说完，他就小声说：“关你什么事，你算什么呀，你的胆子太大了。”听完这句话我们全班同学都笑了，老师气得差一点就打他了。

怎么样，我的朋友是不是既调皮又爱搞恶作剧呢?

He is my best friend, also is the popularity of the best in the class, the students were happy to together with him, because he is always worthy of our learning place.

Remember once the exam, because I am reading a book to see very late at night, and rose up in the morning, due to the tense and forgot to bring my ruler, until it was time for the upcoming exam only to find that, when he is in class exam next door, saw me at the door, worried, and came out, he asked me: "whats wrong with you, how fast the exam, you still hovering outside, isnt it too nervous?" I said: "of course not, Im reading a book to see the very late last night," "then why are you still outside the door back and forth?" Because reading late last night, and woke up this morning was a little nervous, he forgot to bring my ruler, you know, take an examination of mathematics must be ruler drawing, oh, oh, so you wait, also said he ran back, and then come back soon, put him in front of my new ruler is broken, so good, you first take out it, the exam must refueling oh! Then he went back, I stood in the doorway leng for a few seconds, then went back to the seat, of course, the exam was a success.

Another time is crowded bus, he and I are in the class when the bus there were so many people, and dont have a space, such as car after a few stand, less people down, Ill pull him see there are two locations often sitting position, when the car came to a very old old man, looked at him slowly pace, heart began to not worry, when the car is all as if nothing has occurredly sitting, I was just standing, thought that the look of surprise, but he did not for the likelihood of standing next to me, make me have a little embarrassed.

他是我最好的朋友，也是班上人缘最好的，同学们都很乐意与他在一起，因为他身上总有值得我们学习的地方。

记得有一次考试，因为我晚上看书看到很晚，早晨起来的时候，由于紧张而忘记带尺子，直到快要考试的时候才发现的，当时他就在隔壁班考试，看见我在门外转来转去，心急如焚的样子，便走了出来问我说：“你怎么了，怎么快考试了，你还在外转来转去的，是不是太紧张了?”我说：“当然不是了，昨晚我可是看书看到了很晚的，”“那你怎么还在门外来来回回?”就是因为昨晚看书到很晚，而且今天早上起来的时候有点紧张，便忘了带尺子，你知道的，考数学一定要尺子作图的，哦，这样啊，你等着，还不等说完他便跑了回去，接着又马上回来，当着我的面把他新买的尺子折断了， 这样好了，你先拿出用吧，这次考试要加油哦!接着他便回去了，我站在门口愣了几秒，便回到了座位上去了，当然，考试考的很顺利。

还有一次是我和他在下课挤公交的时候，当时公交车上人很多，没有一个空位，等车过了几站，人便少了下来，我看见还有两个位置便马上拉他往往位置上坐，这时车子来了一位年纪很大的老爷爷，看着他慢慢的步伐，心便不由的担心起来，这时车上的人却都若无其事的坐着，我刚好的站着，没想到诧异的目光，他却不为以然的站着我旁边，弄的我都有点不好意思了。

今天，我们和小外公两家人一起去叶清源鱼塘抓鱼。

从早上一直到中午十二点五十一分，都没有抓一条鱼，但是捡到了很多螺丝。因为天气炎热，姐姐、弟弟和我就先回到家。

下午两点，小外公他们就回来了。我下楼一看，有很多鱼，一共有五十二条鱼。有熊鱼、草鱼和红鲤鱼。最小的三四斤，十几斤。鱼摇头摆尾，非常得意。那一片片鱼鳞，在阳光下忽闪忽闪的，真像穿了一身银亮的盔甲。鱼在水里游来游去，像士兵在走来走去。有的鱼一动不动，像一个雕像。你用树枝轻轻一打，鱼动了起来。一动不动的鱼跟死了一样，它身上有很多泥巴。

我们家也抓了很多很多的鱼，和小外公家的鱼品种一样，但是都很小。的鱼有《新华字典》一样那么大，最小的也就小盒子那么大。可是小鱼游动的速度非常快，是大鱼的三倍。我看着这些鱼，高兴地说：“小鱼在桶里，一直在动，尾巴轻轻一摆，真像神龙摆尾啊!”水面上的小鱼一听，更得意了，游得更欢了。可是在下面的小鱼根本听不见，因为它们没有缝隙，听不到我的声音。我很好奇：小鱼在水塘里到底吃什么呢?鱼为什么能在水里呼吸?……我一定会想办法了解它们的。

听说奶奶买了一只小鸭子，我心里一直痒痒的，真想马上见到它，因为想想小鸭子是那么可爱。于是我就央求着，非要奶奶带我去看那只可爱的小鸭子。

一到奶奶家，我就迫不及待地跑到院子里，去找那只小鸭子，小鸭子的家暂时是一只纸箱子。这只小鸭子太可爱了，黄黄的绒毛、扁扁的橘黄色小嘴、一双小眼睛嘀溜溜的乱转，远看就像一坨黄黄的棉花。它一看见我来，身子就一阵扑腾，双脚不停地跳着，似乎是非常害怕。我连忙拿起食物喂它吃，但它对我的好意根本就不领情。一定是小鸭子不认识我，还不知道我是大好人呢!

我捧着它来到草地上，小鸭子一看见草地就像鱼儿见到水一样，就要从我手上往下跳，还没等我放手，它就从我的手里挣脱出来，向远处跑去，我见它跑远了，也追过去，但它却跑得更欢了。就这样，我跑它也跑，我停它也停，可把我折腾够了。我想，不能让它牵着我的鼻子走啊。我看见它似乎在找食物，于是便蹲下来，摘了一片菜叶来喂它，它看到我给它食物，就屁颠屁颠地跑过来，我趁它不注意，一把抓住了它，并且在它脚上拴了一根线子，高兴地说：“看你往哪跑!”

就这样，我带着小鸭子玩了很久很久，直到天色很晚，才恋恋不舍地带着小鸭子回家。

书面表达评分标准“最高档”要求:“应用了较多的语法结构或词汇;语法结构或词汇方面有少许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;有效地使用了语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。”从历年书面表达高分文章来看,每篇文章都有“亮”点,即在用词、造句或段落安排上都有独到之处。要想获得高分就应在“正确”表达的基础上写出自己的特色,写出自己的“亮”点。

一、词汇选择——标新立异

在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。

1)这栋房子在芳草街的一栋楼上。

A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.

B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.

分析:is in是常见词语,而situates in则是《大纲》上没有的,属于高级词汇。

2)在周末我们做很多作业。

A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.

B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.

分析:B句在表达时没有使用过于直接的a lot of,而是使用了endless。endless就是由《大纲》词汇end加后缀-less变化来的。

3)洗澡间和厨房都很好。

A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.

B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.

在表达要点时,B句使用了well furnished,这比good语气强,也显得生动。

在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然,哪怕整篇文章只用上一个,也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。

二、结构造句——与众不同

在造句时,既要使句子生动,又要使其简明扼要。

1、使用与人不同的表达方式,特别是提倡打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子更受欢迎。

1)唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。

A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.

B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.

大多数同学使用了there be结构,这是对的,但是B句却摒弃了常见句式。另辟蹊径而使用了“主语+谓语+宾语”结构,且使用了terrible,hit/strike这样的词汇,更是难

可贵的。

2)你八月十五日的来信我今天早晨收到了。

A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多数人使用的方式)

B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(与多数人使用的方式不同,简洁)

2.使用一些强势句式,如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等,增强语句的表现力。如:

3)阿福救了我妹妹。

A: Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式)

B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister.(强调句式)

4)我们看到庄稼和蔬菜长势喜人很是高兴。

A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陈述句)

B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感叹句)

3、句式多样,复杂得体。在写作中应避免使用相同长度的相同句型,而应注意句式的变化,如长短句结合,简单句、并列句与复合句共用,还可使用简化句等;一些较复杂的结构如独立主格,分词结构等也可使用。下面的表达中A句简单句多,而且多处使用there be结构,显得单调、乏味,而B句就有自己的特色(请同学们自己分析)。

5)这是一套25平方米的住房,住房里面有卧室、有洗澡间、有厨房;卧室里有床、沙发、桌子和椅子等。

A: Its a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.

B: Its a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

三、布局谋篇——独具匠心

在写作中,我们可按时间、空间或其它逻辑顺序来安排各要点,同时为使主题突出,结构严谨,我们应注意学习和使用交代句以及段落的主题句等。在布局谋篇上,2002高考范文堪称典范。请看:

Opinions are pided on the question.

60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.

1)该文使用Opinions are pided...作交代句,开门见山,随后两个段落均使用了主题句，使全文结构紧凑,表达严谨。

2)在表述要点时范文还对要点出场顺序作了调整,如“40%的同学认为应收门票,但不宜过高。”前部分作为主题句放在句首,而后部分另起一句放在句末:They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.这样就分清了轻重缓急,主题突出,条理清楚。

3)范文使用了and, what is more, however等连词,在段落之间使用了on the other hand(说明前后两个观点是相悖的),这些连接手段的运用加强了句子之间、段落之间的联系,使文章表达连贯,浑然一体。

4)范文在第二段为说明不收门票的“原因”时增加了Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away.等细节,这也是解决句与句之间缺少连贯性的常见方法。

总之,要想使自己的文章有亮点,吸引读者,在考试中获得高分,就应在用词、造句、谋篇上下功夫,哪怕是有一处特长都是“亮”点,都是值得肯定的。

我家养了一只小仓鼠，我叫它小乐，因为它总是乐呵呵的。

它住在一个无比豪华，甚至可以说是奢侈的总统级房子里，里面有两层楼，上层是卧室，下层是活动的场地，中间用一根长长的滑梯连接着。下层有一个暖和的睡袋和许多的木屑，在它的房子里面有一个大大的滚轮，木屑里还藏着少许的谷物和面包虫干，随时随地都有美食伺候着，他的日子过得比猪还舒坦！

我每次去给小乐喂食物，只要我的身影前一名秒刚靠近笼子，后一秒笼子里一双乌黑发亮的大眼睛就出现在笼子面前，扑闪扑闪的盯着我手里的食物，满是期待。我心中暗想：我的天呐，他什么时候跑得这么快了！就在我发愣的时候，它见我老半天不给他吃食物，就俯下身子跟着我，喉咙里发出低沉的吱吱声，似乎在威胁我动作快点。每逢这时我心中总会打冷战，他的一个眼神令我不敢再继续想下去了，我飞快的把食物放到他的专属碗里，刚想走开它又威胁我等他吃完，无奈之下我只好跟个小二一样服侍他，真是虎落平阳被犬欺啊！

小乐的性格实在有些古怪，说他威武吧，那也对！不然我怎么会被他吓得给他当小二呢？可他也有害怕的时候，有一次我把它带到我的书桌上，小乐好奇的左顾右盼，它看见不远处有一团卷起的东西，走进一看立马吱吱的乱跑，好像在说：不好了，有一条蛇，我总算是知道什么叫做好奇心害死猫了，救鼠啊！它到处乱跑跟只无头苍蝇似的。跑着跑着没力气了，也还算聪明，竟然装死：整个趴在地上，一动不动的把小舌头伸出来，眼睛半睁半闭，装的还挺像，真像个经验丰富的演员，别提多搞笑了。

我很喜欢我的小仓鼠。