写妈妈的英语作文4篇 作文初一汇总20篇

It was Sunday and I didnt have to go to school. I finished my homework the day before. So I decided to help mother do housework. I washed some clothes after I got up. Then I went shopping with a basket. I bought some meat, eggs and some vegetables in the market. After I came back, I started to cook dinner for the whole family. In the evening, I sat at the table and began to write down on my notebook what I had done during the day.

当看见那些地上和妈妈一起乞讨的乞丐，再看看母亲，中有一种莫名其妙的感觉，似是同情，似是觉得幸福。我的妈妈是一个胖乎乎的中年妇女，脸上最为显著的便是那弯弯的眉儿，眼睛炯炯有神，还长着一张能说会道的樱桃小嘴。现在猛地发现原来妈妈是如此的美，一种神圣的美，仿佛一个遗落在人间的天使。与其说我和妈妈是一种母子关系，倒不如说是一对朋友，时而闹别扭，时而一起嬉戏玩耍。每一次闹完别扭，我们总会在第一时间内和好。

那天中午，我刚从绍兴读完英语，拖着疲劳不堪的身子骨，一骨碌躺在了床上鼾鼾大睡，妈妈走过来，说：“好好睡吧，待会去夏老师那里时我叫你。”不知不觉中又过来许久，耳边传来了妈妈急促地催叫：“两点了，快起来去夏老师那里了。”好好的睡梦被人打搅了，心中十分的郁闷，非常不高兴，甚至有一些愤怒，因为被打扰了睡梦，所以对原来很喜欢的信息技术也觉得是一个罪人，开始讨厌了，还有些不想学的感觉。

无论我如何不干，妈妈还是硬塞给了我三块，让我坐三轮车过去，在路上，我想了很多，意识到刚才是因为睡梦被打扰生气而导致对学习的厌恶，看来一切都是我的错。眨眼间一个下午过去了，刚我小心翼翼地走进家门，担心妈妈会因为刚才的事而生气时，妈妈走了过来，仿佛没发生过争吵似的，笑咪咪地说：“我做了肉丸子，很好哦。”现在在我脑海中只有一句诗句——“谁言寸草心，报得三春晖”

有一句话我多么想对妈妈您说。那便是：我爱你，妈妈。

转眼间，我已经长这么大了，而您的鬓角已增了几丝白发。无情的岁月在您头上轻轻的刻了几条皱纹。

妈妈，我在您的呵护下，茁壮成长，您在女儿的心目中一直是“神”。

我一生最好的老师就是您，我的母亲。我从小就让您操心。虽然，我也记不大清楚这么多事了，但我知道，您让我穿最好的，吃最好的，用最好的。可您呢？却天天省吃俭用把好的都给我和弟弟。我竟然有时还说您偏心什么的。

妈妈，您的胳膊是由慈爱构成的，女儿睡在里面怎能不甜？

纪伯伦曾经说过：人的嘴唇所能发出的最最甜美的字眼就是母亲，最美好的呼唤就是“妈妈”。

在我成功时，谁都是朋友。可在我失败时，您才是我最好的侣伴。

我还记得，您出外打工时，经常打电话问我乖不乖，有几朵小红花？在电话里头，你总不忘叫我背唐诗——《悯农》《静夜思》《咏鹅》……

在您的读书声里我慢慢长大，可我仍旧那么不懂事、不成熟。

每次母亲节时，我是多么的想把我对你的爱表达出来。说一句；妈妈，我好爱您。可话已到嘴边又咽了下去。而表达我对您的爱时只能通过教弟弟朗诵母亲的诗歌向你表达，然而你却孜孜不倦的听着……

在您的田园里，我是轻轻地禾苗。您对我施过肥，扶过犁，可我何时才能为您献上累累麦穗。

妈妈，我爱你，更离不开你。总有一天，我会向您表达我心头的那句话——妈妈，我爱你。

June 23rd Sunday Sunny

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright. I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate, He Song. The animals were so interesting that all the people loved them. When a bear asked for some food by waving its ann, a visitor threw something to it. At once I went up to him and said without thinking,Dont do that. Its bad for it. If you really love them, take good care of them. His face turned red and answered he wouldnt do that again.

6月23日星期日睛

今天是个风和日丽的好天，我和同学贺松去了北京动物园。动物们是那么可爱，大家都非常喜欢它们。一只熊挥动着胳膊向人们要吃的，一个游客就投进去了什么东西。我想都没想就走过去说：不要那样做。你的做法对它们没好处。如果真的喜欢它们，就应该爱护它们。他的脸红了，并且回答说他不会再那么做了。

[初一英语作文 爱护动物

午后的阳光把人晒得慵懒，我捧着《茶花女》看得泪眼朦胧，妈妈，你却还在客厅扶着腰拖地，只听拖把“咯吱咯吱”作响。我放下手中的书，想对你说些话。

这些话该从哪儿说起？我不知，因为我有一肚子的话想和你说，却一时词穷，只剩下一句“我爱你！”

记得今年三八妇女节那天，我给你买了三朵康乃馨。一个人溜进花店琢磨了半天。那朵太小了，不饱满；这朵已经盛开，快枯了。最终选中一朵鹅黄、一朵玫红、一朵淡粉。又经被这一星半点孝心感动的老板娘好心赞助，才买下了。

虽没有惊喜，但你还是用透明花瓶放水好好养着，坐在椅子上给这朵摆摆造型，给那朵调调位，和我精心制作的贺卡放在一起，后退两步将手机横着拍全景，后又将镜头贴近花瓣儿来个特写。拍了许多照，晒上朋友圈，迎来好友评论。你回复时，脸上笑了，是欣慰。于是，指尖打出的字，也带着些许骄傲了。

妈妈，在你看来，我做的这些已是很了不得了，已是很让你开心了，却未曾想过，我做的同你为我付出的比起来，算上什么？冰山一角吗？不，不足的。

记得那年临近期末，我却不争气，数学题次次一抓一把错。那段日子，母女俩天天一场大战。那夜又是折腾到夜里十一点多，我爬上床，隐约听见你在隔壁带着哭腔与谁打电话：“你说这可咋弄啊！唉，我也没有办法了唷！”我吓坏了，你近日给我的都是严厉，没想到竟急哭了！我的眼泪又顺着方才未干的泪痕淌了下来。

第二天清晨，我观察你的言表，你却未表现出奇怪的样子。晚上散学归来，我史无前例地一次性将所有题目做对。那晚上床，我又听见你同人讲话：“她今儿不知咋了，题目全对哦！不晓得能不能保持……”语气中有担忧，有惊喜。

妈妈，你为我做了太多，付出太多，失去太多，多得我有些来不及应了，多得我不知怎么报答了。不过也对，滴水之恩当涌泉相报，你对我的恩已汇成一股泉，我报不尽，报不完的！

客厅里，又传来拖把咯吱，我走出去看，你依旧扶着腰拖地，你望见了我，笑笑……

妈妈，我不知该对你说多少煽情的话语才能足够向你表白我的心声，只知，妈妈，我爱你！

in the spring,everything become green,the grass come out,there are flowers everywhere.

in the summer,its very hot,you can hear birds chirping in the tree and frogs singing in the riverside.

in the autumn,everything become yellow,the fruits are mature,and wheat is ripe,its the harvest time.

in the winter,it snows here.everything is covered with whiteness.

how beautifel my hometown is!but i like winter the best.i can make a snowman and play outdoor.it is so exciting.

“世上只有妈妈好……”电视里传出了这首人人都会唱的歌。桌前坐着小时的一家，小时的爸爸张三“激动”地用手指着电视屏幕说：“瞧，我为咱娘七十大寿点的歌。”而这位70岁的老奶奶正在为他们端饭送菜，累得两腿发软，头昏眼花。那么张三又为什么为他妈妈点歌呢这里面还有缘故……

说起这个张三哪，他是个不孝之子。张三一家人吃好的，唯独让那位年近七旬的老奶奶吃粗茶淡饭;张三一家人身穿羽绒大衣，脚踏高级皮鞋，而老奶奶穿的还是六十年代的老棉袄，一点儿也不挡风，张三也舍不得为他娘添置些新衣服。因此，张三被别人称为“脏”三。他们一家人换下来的衣服、鞋子、袜子等，都要老奶奶一个人去洗，他们自己连块小手帕都懒得洗。小时不满父母这样对待奶奶，可他人小不顶事，因此，奶奶继续操劳着。

一天，“脏”三在外面赌输了钱回到家就往老奶奶身上发泄不满，吼叫道：“老不死的，都怪你，让我输了钱。快拿杯饮料来，渴死了。”老奶奶听了，从栖身的地方——小库房挪动着三寸金莲，颤巍巍地到壁橱里拿了杯果汁，向客厅走去，边走边咳嗽。“还不快点!”“脏”三喊道。在这个家庭里，老奶奶似乎已经没有了尊称，取而代之的是“老不死的”。“脏”三夫妻的做法很快引起了左邻右舍们的不满，他们纷纷指责“脏”三。众怒难平，这不，老奶奶过生日，“脏”三为了掩人耳目，就去电视台点了一首《世上只有妈妈好》。“脏”三老婆还特地“关照”：别太浪费了，老不死的快入土了，衣服不要买了，穿不穿也没啥。

还是回到开头那幕。小时看奶奶也辛苦了，就招呼说：“奶奶歇歇吧!吃块蛋糕，这蛋糕可好吃了。”可小时爸爸说：“那么大年纪，还嘴馋。”这时小时再也忍不住了，插嘴道：“爸爸，你可别忘了，奶奶辛辛苦苦把你养大，现在该是你养奶奶的时候了，这是中华民族的传统美德。你们要是还执迷不悟，还这样对待奶奶，将来你们老了，我也这样对你们。”

“脏”三夫妇做梦都没想到孩子会说这样的话，两人的脸红了，又羞又愧。忽然，张三像是醒悟过来了，他去厨房把老奶奶扶到桌前，说：“妈，真对不起，多亏孩子的提醒，我连孩子都不如。”小时的妈妈也应和着说“是是是”，奶奶说：“你们都别自责了，我原谅你们。”一家人高高兴兴地坐在餐桌旁吃饭。多少年来，生活在底层的奶奶吃了她一生中最好的，也是最舒心的一顿饭。

从此以后，小时妈妈再也不让奶奶干这干那、对她呼来唤去了。奶奶幸福地度过了晚年。当然，“脏”三又变成原来的张三了。

Pressure seems to be a natural part in our daily life in this competitive

society. Like it or not there is always pressure of one kind or another. And it

seems there is hardly any way to avoid it or get rid of it. Moreover, as the

pace of modern life continues to quicken, pressure seems to be on the increase

all the time.

Different people have different ideas about pressure. Some hold that

pressure is something very vicious. If there is too much of it, it will lead to

the decline of ones physical and mental health. So they are always complaining

about it or trying to flee from it. They think, only relaxation, the opposite of

pressure, is what we should desire. On the other hand, others argue that

pressure is not as bad as is often thought. In fact a certain amount of pressure

is essential to provide motivation and meaning to our life. It is pressure that

propels our progress and contributes to our success.

Personally, Im in favor of the latter idea. I believe that a little

pressure is certainly an important incentive in life. It is only when the

pressure gets out of control can it lead to poor performance and bad health.

Since it is impossible to avoid pressure, certainly there is no sense trying to

do so or complaining about it.

In the third grade, I met a girl called Zhang Zheyu, dont see her name is not outstanding, but she is very cute! She has a pair of watery big eyes, like talking, full of reiki. She has a special long braids, black beauty. A bright and cheerful disposition, she receives a good laugh at from time to time. We soon became good friends.

Once, on a drawing class, I very not easy finished works have been deskmate accidentally broke, no place is reserved for internal heat. At this moment, Zhang Zheyu pen dropped on the ground, rolled under my chair. She asked me to help her pick up the pen. I was angry and my work was broke, she also mood let me help her pick up a pen? So I pretended not to hear, not to her.

After class, angry, I also wrote a piece of paper, says she has no hands. But soon, I will regret it, Zhang Zheyu just asked me to help her pick up the pen, ou spirit how can I talk to her? I was about to go apologize to her, but I found that there is a pink pencil case paperboard, it says, I know your work was damaged, I have a double-sided adhesive can lend it to you...

Looked at her silk show words, my face burning hot, at this moment, must be better than the rising sun is red.

在三年级时，我认识了一个叫张哲玉的女孩，别看她的名字不太起眼，可她很可爱呢!她有一双水汪汪的大眼睛，仿佛会说话似的，充满了灵气。她有一条特别长的辫子，乌黑漂亮。她的性格开朗极了，不时会逗得人哈哈大笑。很快我们就成为了好朋友。

有一次，在图画课上，我好不容易画完的作品被同桌不小心弄破了，正憋着火气没处撒。这时，张哲玉的一支笔掉在了地上，滚到了我的椅子下面。她让我帮她捡一下笔。我生气极了，我的作品被弄破了，她还有心情让我帮她捡笔?于是，我装作没听见，没有理她。

下课后，怒气冲冲的我，还写了一张纸条，说她没有手。可不久，我就后悔了，张哲玉只不过是让我帮她捡笔嘛，我怎么能跟她怄气呢?我正想去给她道歉，可我发现文具盒中有一条粉红色的卡纸，上面写着：我知道你的作品被弄坏了，我有双面胶可以借给你……

看着她绢秀的文字，我的脸滚烫滚烫的，这时，一定比初升的太阳还红。

亲爱的妈妈：

您好! 您的爱天天在感动着我，可平日里，只要我的要求得不到满足，我总是任性地喊道：“你不爱我!你是一个坏妈妈!”看到您黯然神伤的表情，我是如此地后悔，也许您不知道您的女儿其实是非常地感激和热爱您的。

记得有一年的母亲节，刚好是同学的生日。在生日会即将结束的时候，同学建议一块儿去买花送给妈妈。当我捧着一束水灵灵的康乃馨递到您面前时，您无比激动，双手颤抖着接过花。我忽然发现，您的眼中含有晶莹的泪珠，我震惊了!这是我第一次送您礼物，从小到大只有您送我礼物，而没有我送您礼物。我怎么也没有想到，原来来自女儿的那么一点小礼物也能让您如此感动。从此，每年的妇女节、母亲节我都会为您送上一束鲜花，来报答您对我无私的爱! 从来我都是心安理得地接受您的关心和照顾，不曾想过我在渐渐长大，而您在慢慢变老，您也需要女儿照顾了。

记得有一次，爸爸不在家，您一个人躺在沙发上看电视。夜渐渐深了，您在沙发上不知不觉地睡着了。我发现您的睡容是那么疲惫，就象一头经过长途跋涉而倒在沙漠上的骆驼，我的心被轻轻触动。于是，我轻轻地唤醒您，将您扶到床上，再把热水袋放进您被子里，替您盖好被子，然后我才自己睡了。想不到我这么小小的一个举动，竟使您感动得彻夜未眠。我又一次震惊了，原来您是那么需要女儿的照顾。于是，我下定决心，以后一定要好好照顾您! 妈妈，也请您原谅我的不懂事给您带来的麻烦。这个学期，因为学校条件不如家里好，也没家里舒适，我决定走读。可是，您远在萧山工作，为了我，您必须每天回到杭州照顾我。早上又得早早地起床为我烧早饭，再叫醒我。曾经，您告诉过我这些后果，可是为了自己生活得更加舒适，我依然任性地选择了走读。

今天，我终于意识到了，妈妈我错了!我不能再增加您的负担了，下学期我还是选择住校吧!以后我一定要关心、体贴妈妈，在自己力所能及的范围内帮助妈妈! 妈妈，您如此无私地照顾我，爱我，我十分感动。我也明白，不管哪一个伟大的母亲都需要孩子对她的关心、照顾。我还要向您保证我一定会努力学习，来报答您对我的付出!

爱您的女儿

My name is Susan. Im 12 years old.My favorite subject is Math.

Because I think its difficult but funny.I like green very much.I often

play volleyball after school.I think its interesting .I like

playing the violin and the piano.My favorite day is Sunday.Because in that

day I dont go to school.

It is time for sports It is about half past four.It is time for sport.The

students are on the playground.

They are playing a football match.LiDong is one of them.He is good at

football.He plays well.He is on the school football team.LiDong says,"I like

playing football.It is my favourite sport."LiDongs friends,PanChen and

WangHaisay,"Hes a football fan.Ronaldo is his favourite player."

Look at the boys around the basketball court.Many boys are watching a

basketball match.The tall boy,Tanglin,is very good at playing basketball.He is

very fast and he plays well.Many of his friends say,"He is a good basketball

player.His favourite basketball player is YaoMing.His team is sure to win.

I hope they can be the good players of our country,too.

I have a home, there is an ordinary mother. I love my home and love my mom too.

My mother with a pair of bright and piercing eyes, a black hair mixed with a few silver hair, it may be her tired life witness.

Other mothers are very concerned about their children, my mother is no exception.

I remember it was winter afternoon school home, the sky is under heavy rain, when I went up the stairs, always feel the top ten feet, one home, they fell on the bed. Evening, tired of the day the mother came back from work to see me lying in bed, touch my hot forehead, looked at my painful look, and looked out the window of heavy rain, apart from anything else, put on a raincoat carrying me to the hospital Go. Along the way, the wind roar more powerful, the rain was even bigger, the wind and rain ruthlessly hit us. To the hospital, my mother hung me a number, the doctor gave me a needle, I fell asleep stumbled. When I woke up, I found my mother sitting at the bedside. See me woke up, my mother finally exposed his mouth smile, I looked at her mothers wet clothes and hair, nodded his head, excited to speak.

Mother, you are loving, you are harsh, in your care, I will thrive.

Hello, everyone!My name is Winnie. Im a 15 years old girl. I live in the

beautiful city of Rizhao.

Im an active, lovely, and clever girl. In the school my favorite subject

is math. Perhaps someone thinks its difficult to study well. But I like it. I

believe that if you try your best, everything can be done well.

I also like sports very much. Such as, running, volleyball and so on. Im

kind-hearted. If you need help, please come to me.I hope we can be good

friends!

OK. This is me .A sunny girl.

Day, night, and finally ushered in the long-awaited summer vacation. In

these two months, can"t play games every day! Besides, even if I think so, mom

and dad are certainly can"t promise. Only done to make them more satisfied, my

freedom is a bit more, this summer vacation will have a more pleasant. Combined

with the requirements of the teacher and I wish mom and dad, have a preliminary

arrangement.

My mother tall tall, black hair, white face, my mother still have a pair of bright eyes, in my eyes my mother is the most beautiful.

Once I went to the store to see a colorful rope skipping, I liked it very much. I said to my mother, "I like the rope skipping, and I want to buy it." Mother said, "You do not have one, can not be so wasteful." I thought I had to get that rope, one day, I "My mother is very happy to give me money, but I did not buy text, but I bought the favorite rope skipping, it hidden in my bag."

Later, my mother helped me when finishing the bag when found that rope skipping, fiercely criticized me: "Why do you want to lie?" I scared to cry, this time, my mother came to comfort me said: "Do not cry , Know the wrong change is a good boy "You see my mother is not a harsh and kindly good mother?

Since then, I have never said a lie, I love my mother!

今天是5.11母亲节，我为妈妈洗了一次令我难以忘怀的双脚。

“妈，就让我服饰一下您的脚吧！”妈妈干瘦的脸上展出惊讶的笑意，妈妈也只好难为情的让我为她洗脚。

于是，我潺潺跌跌的把一盆特地煮好的开水，放在妈妈的脚前，慢慢地脱下妈妈的袜子，一双干干瘪瘪的脚显露出来，暮然间，我震惊了，喃喃道：“难怪妈妈以前从不让我们洗脚，原来是这一双“丑怪”的脚，可是这双脚承受了多么大的作用吖！”我默默的用手一下一下的撩着热水，心里总是热乎乎的，我细心地、慢慢地、一丝不苟地揉搓这妈妈瘦弱的脚，直到每一个脚趾、每一个脚趾缝。我手捧住妈妈的脚，心潮起伏，思绪万千，眼前溢满了泪水。妈妈啊，从前，您就是凭着这双脚，天天送我上学；您就是凭这一双脚，把我辛辛苦苦的带大；您就是凭着这样的一双小脚，包了家里所有的家务……一件件一桩桩往事不断的浮现在脑海里。我潸然泪下。妈妈，现在看到您的双脚，我深深地读懂了您当时因这双脚承受的巨大痛苦和饱经的苦难。这双脚写满了您一生的苦难经历。

那双脚浓缩了妈妈的一生一世的沧桑，携刻着妈妈养育儿女的满腹辛酸，妈妈正靠了那双脚奔波，才一次又一次为我带回我成长的希望，妈妈的脚踩出了儿女的未来，却送走了自己的年华，妈妈的那双脚，像支蜡烛，照亮了儿女前进的航程，却流干了自己的心血，那双脚不仅仅世脚，在我的眼中，他是托举未来与希望的桥梁。

初一英语作文如何教好呢，老师们有何看法？下面一起去看看小编整理的初一英语作文教学方法吧！

写作是书面表达和传递信息的重要途径，培养学生初步的写作的能力，是初中英语教学的目的之一。但是长期以来，中学英语写作教学一直徘徊于不理想的状态，尤其是在农村中学来讲更是不堪入目。平素测验中，不少学生只能写出寥寥数语，而且文章中拼写错误和其他语病随处可见，学生英语作文的质量不尽如人意。即使在有些学校所谓的实验班级效果也不是怎么理想。尽管在平素的教学评价环节中，我们花费大量的时间用于批改学生的作文，但是学生一次又一次的反馈给我们的并不是我们预期所料的，甚至是差之千里。如何解决这一难题，成为现阶段我们英语教学工作者面前的“拦路虎”。本文就这一问题作一些粗浅分析，力求找出了中学英语写作教学的瓶颈所在，结合教学实践，探索性的作一些关于中学英语写作教学的交流——“读、改、写”的实践。

七年的初中英语教学下来，留给我无穷的思考与困惑：不管在什么样的测试中，只要谈到英语写作，很多学生都感到头痛？即使有部分学生能动笔写写，其中的语法错误也是随处可见，写作要点不明确，语句不通顺，语言、词汇档次低，语言不地道或是汉语式的英语写作，让人看后很是费解。即使给材料作文学生也感到无从下手，在他们看来：翻译又是个问题，或是上面所说的汉语式的直接翻译出来。导致这些问题的缘由何在？是平时的教学没有到位，存在写作教学走过场？重视不够？还是学生根本就不是学英语的那块料？困惑，苦思、冥想！多方寻缘由。究其原因，我认为英语写作教学效果不理想主要问题出在平素的教学环节上。长期以来，我们很多英语教学者都重复着同一种模式：教师布置写作内容——学生完成作文——教师批阅作文——作文发还给学生。缺乏对学生的有效地针对性的指导，像那种简单而粗暴的评价方式，从根本上起不到什么作用。久而久之，还会使学生厌恶英语作文写作，甚至产生“写作恐惧症”，进而影响整个英语学习及考试效果！现我就英语写作教学的几点感悟与大家一起共勉。

一、读中不忘写，在阅读中适时穿插写作教学。

“读中教”指的是写作与阅读联系挂钩。因为单靠指导学生掌握写作要领进行写作，在实际的教学工作中是完全不够的，而当我们教学一篇篇阅读理解文章，才正是学生们学习写作的好时机，阅读理解也是我们教学写作的最有效武器，毕竟好文章是写作最好的老师和范例，更是我们教写作的法宝。因此，在每次学习和欣赏一篇阅读理解文章的时候，尤其是文中含有经典语句时，我都给学生设定四个目标：第一，理解作者写作的用意，即作者在文章中阐明了什么观点和段落的安排及其如何阐述的。第二，弄清作者运用了什么样的写作方法。比如是说明、记叙还是论证，包括文章运用的时态、语态以及其他种种语法手段。第三，学习作者的一些用词来扩大词汇量，积累词汇，同时让学生学习短语的搭配并收集词汇和短语。第四，收集作者在文章中写出的佳句、妙句、绝句。为今后的写作奠定基础。几年的教学实践证明了这样的教学有其独具的特色与效果

因此，我认为：写作教学完全应该，而且必须与阅读理解相结合才能真正让学生领悟和掌握写作方法与写作技巧的要领，没有阅读哪里来的模仿和借鉴？所以“读中教”是我的第一步，之后，在感性的基础上，我再给学生讲解具体的写作方法，这一点是我接下来要做的第二步“写中教”。

二、写作中不失恰如其分的指导，适时地开展“写中教”。

所谓“写中教”，就是在学生学作时给予写作方法的指导，通常我从三个方面入手：首先，概括初级写作的文体特点。书面表达在文体上以记叙文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、说明书等）的形式为多见。然后，概括其形式特点。近年来，初级写作题型在形式上以看图说话和根据中英文提出写作两种类型出现频率最高，要求能根据图画所提供的情景和英汉提出的词语，建立联想，创造性地运用所学过的词汇和语法知识来进行表达，比如根据一副或多幅图画及提示语，写出语法正确的六至八句话，或者一篇字数在60－100字的短文，充分地运用自己所学的知识，完整、准确地表达所需求的意思，考查的重点是在领会图意和提示语的前提下能简单创造语言的能力。最后是概括题材特点。在题材上，初级英文写作的表达题所给的大部分内容是比较贴近孩子们生活的人物和事件，诸如饮食、运动、爱好、环境、交友、旅行、娱乐等等，考查的是生活知识和语言知识学与用综合能力。

根据以上文体、形式、题材特点，我要求学生在看图写话时，掌握好以下一个要领：

1、看图说话书面表达题要领

首先，认真审题，弄清画意，把握中心。一般来说，写作题所提供的几幅图画虽然是整个故事情节中的一个或数个重要的情景片段，但每幅图的主体内容一定是清清楚楚、脉络分明的，这一点务必要准确把握，只有具体、透彻的理解画意，方能抓住抓准表达的重点。紧扣暗示内容，分析表达重点，看图题若也有语言提示，那么首先要细审提示材料。若是英文提示语，那就更加重要了，因为提示词语不但能有助于理解画意，而且告知如何围绕这些重点词语组织材料，然后表达出图画内容。但应注意，无论哪种形式的看图写话均不会给出所有的词语，因此，必须紧扣画面暗示的内容，再结合提示语的补充，酌情填补一些关键词语。

其次，运用正确的表达方式和准确的写作方法。用正确的表达方式准确地写出图画所表现的内容，形成一句或一段切合画意又无语法错误的句子是关键。具体应注意以下几点：

（1）确定基本时态。动词是做谓语还是做非谓语？是否需要用第三人称单数？这些必须考虑清楚再动笔。要抓住提示语中提供的或自己设置的时间状语，或抓住第一画图反映出来的故事背景。

（2）注意词语的变化。如该用形容词还是副词？名词是否可数？前面是否需用冠词？词尾是否丢失s或者其他变化形式？特指的定冠词the是否要用或不用？这些在平时演练时，都需要“斤斤计较”，养成习惯。

（3）句型的选择。尽量用自己所学过的句型表达，能用简单句尽量用简单句。

（4）书写规范、准确。

（5）反复检查。要逐字逐句检查词语搭配和句子的结构，是主系表还是主谓宾，注意时态是否完整等等。

2、写中英文提示作文的提纲要领

在做没有图画只有中英文提示语的书面表达题时，对学生要求更高，写作的难度也更大了。这种题型对八年级（下）和九年级学生较多用。我指导学生运用以下六条要领：

（1）、审清题意。反复仔细阅读、推敲提示，分析出文章的重点，弄清文章的格式，确定写什么内容，以免离题；

（2）、概括简要的中文提示中的部分要点，此时切记不可逐句翻译，题前所给的英文提示词语最好全部用上，采用扩写的方式，根据所给材料进行适当的恰如其分的扩写，可以由词到句，再有句到段，最后到篇的“点及面”的写法。

（3）、将提示中的有关信息融入自己的语句中，尽力做到语言规范、准确，文字通顺。

（4）、在抓住重点，不偏离主题的前提下，合理想象，拓展思路；

（5）、用好介词和连词，使文章简练、纹理通顺，尽量使用自己有把握的句式来表达，避免使用不熟练的词、短语和句型；

（6）、最后，正确把握文中的时态和语态，仔细揣摩、合理灵活变化时态和语态。

三、在写作评价中适时地给与指导，积极开展“改中教”。

我的最后一步是走“错误路线”，即在批改学生习作中利用学生的“错误资源”进行写作教学。在批改学生的习作时，我把其中的错字、别字以及大量的令人啼笑皆非的病句收集起来，这些东西常常是学生们的通病，虽说使我苦恼，但经验告诉我，其实这也是一种资源，颇有利用价值，而且用好了还是一剂治病句的“良药”呢！与此同时，我们也要善于发现学生的优点，适时不忘鼓励教学的开展，从而激发学生的写作兴趣。对于写得有水平、有档次的习作可以范读，从而进一步的调动学生的写作热情。

对于大多数学生容易犯的错误，我把一些比较典型的病句展示在黑板上，然后让学生互相订正。许多时候学生在“欣赏”他们自己的劣作时都忍不住哄堂大笑，但笑过之后，错误也在轻松愉快的气氛中改正了，这样既活跃了写作课堂的气氛，又达到了让学生纠正错误的效果。除此之外，我让每个学生准备一个纠错本，将他们平时在练习、造句和作文中出现的病句摘录在册并认真纠正，以避免重复出错，使文章中的病句逐渐减少。

以下是我在学生习作中遇到的典型案例，原文如下：

Nowadaays,the environment gets more and more bad.because of the pollution.Although the  government take any measures  to carry  it , it isnt working well  in it.

There is only one earth.I think we should do something useful we can to protect the environment.sach as we can use both sides of each piece of paper and use cotton handkerchiefs,not the paper ones to protect soil .if we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.

If  we  all do that,we will have healthy and  happy.

从整体看，本文错误较多，汉语思维较严重.但总的来讲这篇作文的思路还是比较清晰的，

于是我和学生一道对该文进行了分析：

1、本文首先缺一个主题，从正文中我们不难看出本文是要求写作如何保护环境问题，作者应根据题目要求拟定题目，再进行写作！譬如：我们可以拟定为：HOW  TO  SAVE  OUR  MOTHER等。

2、该文的第一句就出现拉严重的语法错误，The environment gets more and more bad.变得越来越糟糕，应该是“worse  and  worse".在提出问题时，最好创设一定的语言情景，逐步导入,俗话说得好“好的开始就是成功了一半”。以本文为例，我们完全可以以这样导入：With  the  development of  economy  ,more and more factories have built .But there is more and more pollution coming.

3、该文的第二句中的take any measures to carry  it  。意思没有表达清楚，让人看了费解，其实作者可能是想说政府采取一些措施去阻止污染。而采取一些措施去制止污染应为：take  some  measures  to  keep pollution.然而效果不好应为:it  doesnt  work  well.

4、在第二自然段中有单词拼写错误及名词单复数误用的现象，比如“sach as ”应为"such as".

5、表意不清。"not the paper ones to protect soil"和we can also plant more trees and grass to protect air.都存在表意不清的现象。其应该表达为：第一句最好这样表达：not to use paper or use less paper to protect  trees and  because the trees  can  keep the earth from washing.第二句改写为we  can also plant more trees and grass to keep the air clean and fresh.

5、标点符号用得不够恰当，如If we go to a short distance.we can walk or by bike.在这里我们最好这样用要好一些：If we go to a short distance，we can walk or by bike.

6、在最后一段发起倡议时，最好使用感叹句型或祈使句型这样会显得更有力！文章会显得更深入.如;my dear friends, lets get together to protect "The Blue Sky"!等。

除了上述“九字法”英文写作教学模式，我们还应重视做足“平时功夫”以促进学生写作。所谓平时功夫，是指背诵名篇佳作；收集各种话题，布置学生在假期或周末练笔，提倡“一周一文"；传阅、张贴、展览学生优秀习作以资鼓励等。鼓励学生善于从平素的练习中总结经验、吸取教训，只要持之以恒，我们完全可以让越来越多的学生逐渐学会用第二语言来表达自己的思想，而且可以像用母语一样轻松自如。

结束语

路漫漫其修远兮。英语写作教学的探究征程远而富于变化，需要各位同仁在实际工作中不断探索。在英语写作教学中如何教学及讲评需要继续探索。但有一点鄙人是这样认为的：宽松、愉悦、不断获得鼓励的环境中，学生的思维才会变得活跃。所以教师要及时抓住学生稍纵即逝的新奇、独特的想法，给予赞扬，使学生的创造性思维得以发展。多给学生创造性思维活动的机会，鼓励学生勇于尝试，并在失败面前不气馁。在平素的写作教学实践中，教师应最大限度地创设和实施多种鼓励机制，充分调动全体学生动笔写作的积极性，这样才能促进学生的写作能力更快更好地实现，从而从整体上提高学生的英语语言应用能力。

狗是人类的好朋友，你喜欢狗吗?下面小编为你整理的我喜欢狗初一英语作文，希望对你有帮助! 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇1

I like dogs, because they are man s good friends. They can do many helpful things to us, such as guarding our houses, greeting guests, helping the police, and so on. Some trained dogs can even lead the blind people and save people s lives. So they re treated as our family members. I hope someday dogs will be in great harmony with human-beings.

我喜欢狗，因为它们是人类的好朋友。他们可以为我们做很多有用的事情，如，保护房子，问候客人，帮助警方等等。一些受过训练的狗甚至可以引导盲人、拯救人们的性命。所以他们都被当做是我们的家庭成员。我希望有一天狗能与人类和谐共处。 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇2

Dog is my favorite animal. The reason why I like it most is because it’s very competent. Dog is the best friend for mankind. It is also the best companion for the old people. The dog can feel the human nature. So many old people will raise dogs if their children are not with them. The old can give their love for their children to the dog to make themselves feel warmly. I believe the seeing eye dog is very famous. They are special dogs. Those dogs will guide their owners whose eyes is blind to go the correct way. See, I say dogs are very competent.

我最喜欢的动物是狗。我最喜欢它的原因是因为它很能干。狗是人类最好的朋友。它也是老人们最好的伴侣。狗是通人性的。如果他们的孩子不在他们身边，很多老年人会养狗。老年人可以把对他们孩子的爱放到狗狗的身上，这也能温暖他们的心。导盲犬是非常有名的。他们是特殊的狗。这些狗会引导眼睛看不见的主人找到正确的路。看，我就说狗狗是非常能干的。 我喜欢狗初一英语作文篇3

I like dog.

Dogs are friends of human beings.And it is known to us that dogs are very honest.They can help people do many things when people are out of home .For example ,dogs can take a good care of babies when people go to work.They also can watch the house to make sure that it is safe for his master.Dogs are friendly to people.

In a word, i love dogs better than cats.I prefer dogs because they are loyal to human,besides they are the best friend of humanity.these days ,dogs have become pets of us. they are not in the wild any more.they get put clothes on and wear bowknot.they have fogotten how to prey.as a human, I love dog as a pet but I feel much pity that dogs have lost so much of their instinct.

I like dogs,because they are so clever、beautiful and cute.I can play with them,they are our good friends, and that is why I like him a lot.i regard dogs as better pets .first ,they are faithful to hosts.we have heard lots of stories about dogs faithfulness.second,they are lovely . there are many cute pictures of dogs on internet.besides,they are brave . when hosts are in danger , dogs often try to rescue their hosts.

This year, the Lantern Festival, after dinner, we went to watch the lantern and fireworks.

Just after seven, we came to the new city watching lanterns, huge crowds of people here, lantern variety, novel design, various shapes, municipal government before the entire street Christmas, dazzling, attracted tens of thousands of people come to watch; have people doing business early to set up stalls, some car came from the countryside for miles also, the little boy rode on his fathers neck, holding Tomatoes on sticks while eating. Eight oclock, the sky in the municipal building next to a blossoming fireworks display, wow! What a beautiful night sky! I saw the deep blue sky full of colorful fireworks, fireworks open as a ball, like snowflakes, like a ribbon with the meteor, the dark sky shine like day, the Lantern Festival night become very beautiful, I was fascinated by the.

A colorful fireworks in the sky, fireworks explode after a blossoming flowers falling down, and even some flowers with a shiny things, like a colorful meteor; some fireworks exploded after the double decker, went on to become the animal shape; some later began to explode like a meteor shower. Brush down; and as a gold color, the sky became the city of The brightness dazzles the eyes. are boiling...... The colorful lanterns were hung high in the air and sparkled. The beautiful lantern has added a beautiful color to it. How beautiful the night of the Lantern Festival is!

My mother is a doctor, she is very beautiful, very gentle. I love her very much.

Her height is not high also not short, long curly hair, neat bang, big eyes double-fold eyelid, twinkle. Nose a little big, cherry small mouth, speak to one, very cute. How her shapely, great body, never sick. Her character lively and outgoing, can with my classmates mother shao half a day; She was a gourmet, often take me to eat a lot of delicious things.

She is also very industrious, sweep the floor mop the floor every day, cooking laundry, cleaning, have to hurry. I said to her: "mother, give yourself a break! Today is the international working womens day, I send you a small gift." Mother touch my head and said: "good boy, do you really understand, when you grow up, what small gifts?" I took out a hand cream on her mothers hand in the heart, said: "mother, your hands are split, very ache! This can make your hand is very smooth. I wish mom happy holidays!" Mother took the hand cream, his eyes filled with tears, held me in her arms, said "thank you, children, as long as you study hard, have a good life, grow up to become a social good and mother satisfied."

In the future I want to listen to your mother, not a bit angry mother, study hard, strive for the greatest advances, repay mothers love for me.

我的妈妈是一名白衣天使，她很漂亮，很温柔。我很爱她。

她的身高不高也不矮，长长的卷发，齐刘海，大大的眼睛双眼皮，炯炯有神。鼻子略微有点大，樱桃小嘴，说起话来一张一张的，很可爱。她身材匀称，身体很棒，从来不怎么生病。她的性格活泼，比较外向，和我同学的妈妈在一起能韶半天;她还是个美食家，经常带我一起去吃很多美味可口的东西。

她也很勤劳，天天扫地拖地，做饭洗衣，整理房间，忙得不停。我对她说：“妈妈，你休息一会儿吧!今天是妇女节，我送你一个小礼物。”妈妈摸摸我头说：“好孩子，你真懂事，你长大了，什么小礼物啊?”我拿出一只护手霜放在妈妈的手心里，说：“妈妈，你的手都有裂口了，很疼吧!这个可以让你的手变得很光滑的。祝妈妈节日快乐!”妈妈接过护手霜，眼睛里充满了泪水，把我抱在怀里，说“谢谢你，孩子，你只要好好学习，好好做人，长大成为社会有用之才，妈妈就满足了。”

我今后一点要听妈妈的话，不惹妈妈生气，刻苦学习，争取最大的进步，报答妈妈对我的爱。

Today’s story is about Mary ,a girl from the US.She’s now studying in China,Beijing.Tomorrow is the Spring Festival. Now ,Mary is staying in China.One years ago,last Spring Festival ,Mary was 11 years old, very little girl. Now, she’s a 12- year- old- girl.Just 1 year,she learns many thing in China.Gradually,she loves China.

Now, she is living in her aunt home.At 9:00 a.m. in Beijing ,Mary make a phone call to her family. When they talk on the phone ,they are so happy .We a

ll know Mary’s mother misses Mary long time. Mary misses her family long time,too. And she was happy to live in China.But talking with family is more important than everything. What a warm story!

From this story, we know noting is important than family. No place like home!