高中英语作文教学反思英文【热门20篇】

1.There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.有几个原因……，但一般，他们可以归结为三个主要的。

2.There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.有许多因素可能占...，但以下是最典型的。

3.Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.有很多方法可以解决这个问题，但下面的可能是最有效的。

4.Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.一般来说，这些优势可以列举如下。

january 18 XX

i have rested for a week. i began to feel bored. so i went out with my friends. they are my best friends in the middle school. we didn’t go to someplace special. we just saw the other. we had lunch together. while we were having lunch, we were still talking about the new school and new friends. yes! a year later, we have grown riper. and we learned much more things and got new life. we haven’t enough time to play, to waste and to lose the way. we only have two years. two years to go, we will get the real life which belongs to us.

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1月18日XX

我已经休息了一个星期。我开始感到无聊。所以我和我的朋友出去。他们是我最好的朋友在中学。我们没有去特别的地方。我们只是看到了其他。我们一起共进午餐。当我们吃午饭,我们仍在谈论新的学校和新朋友。是的!一年后,我们变得成熟。和我们学到了更多的东西,得到了新的生活。我们没有足够的时间去玩,浪费和损失。我们只有两年。两年去,我们会得到真正的生活,是属于我们的。

january 19 XX

i have stayed in shanghai alone for a week. it’s time for me to go to my real home—it is in beijing. my parents are waiting for me. although outside is no matter how beautiful, beijing is still my home. in fact, there is many fresh things. like red bayberries. in the afternoon, i took a bus to beijing. i was very unlucky that my mp3 was stolen. i was very sad. i didn’t know why thieves went to steal other’s things. why don’t they hunt for a job? i don’t why! i hope there is no thief in our motherland.

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1月19日XX

我独自在上海呆了一个星期。我去的时候我真正的房屋,它是在北京。我的父母正在等我。虽然外面是无论多么美丽,北京仍然是我的家。事实上,有很多新鲜的东西。喜欢红色月桂树。下午,我乘公共汽车去北京。我很倒霉,我的mp3被偷了。我非常伤心。我不知道为什么小偷去偷别人的东西。为什么他们不寻找工作吗?我不为什么!我希望没有小偷在我们的祖国。

january 20 XX

when i got home, it was very dark. why? there is no electric. every year in beijing, there is lack of electric to supply. because there are a lot of factories. and it is very cold in winter. so the government decided: supply electric to resident and the factories must stop working. my house is in the manufacturing district. i was unlucky. it was very cold. so my father use the electric making machine to make electric. oh! what a unlucky winter!

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1月20日XX

当我回到家,它很黑。为什么?没有电。每年在北京,有缺乏电力供应。因为有很多工厂。在冬天,它很冷。所以政府决定:电力供应居民和工厂必须停止工作。我的房子在制造业。我真倒霉。它很冷。所以我父亲使用电力电气制造机。哦!多么不幸的冬天!

january 21 XX

it was cooler than yesterday. one of my father’s friends invited me to eat red bayberries. you must know it is unusual. because we will climb the hill to eat red bayberries. there is no chance to eat red bayberries in the hill for the people who don’t live in beijing. on the hill, you can breathe the fresh air, you can listen birds singing and you can eat red bayberries. it was enjoyable. it is said there are wild pigs in the hill. what a beautiful natural.

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1月21日XX

这是比昨天凉爽。我父亲的一个朋友邀请我去吃红月桂树。你必须知道它是不寻常的。因为我们将爬山吃红色的月桂树。没有机会吃红杨梅山上的人不要住在北京。在山上,你能呼吸新鲜空气,你可以听鸟儿唱歌,你可以吃红月桂树。这是令人愉快的。据说山上有野猪。多么美丽的自然。

刘少云

古人云：“穷则变，变则通，通则久。”我们作为语文教师要想要突破作文教育，那就要想如何“思变”。 孔子曰：“学而不思则罔。”以下是我对语文作文教学的一些心得与反思。 美国著名的教育家，心理学家加德纳，把人的智能分成八种不同的表现形式，而语言技能（语文应用能力）位于首位，由此可见在教育家的眼里，学生的语言智能的发展是多么重要。然而，长期以来学校教学中形成的一个怪圈，就是学校的师生天天用，天天练的语言，却在分数最高的作文中缺乏成就感，于是很多学生不敢说自己语文学得好，连语文教师也不敢说自己的语文教得多好。究其原因在于：语文的语言表达能力的提高，取决于一个基础的问题，一个长期积累语言材料的问题。一个人语言贫乏，必然带来思维的贫乏；而思维的贫乏必然影响学习能力的提高。在我所带的两个班中，学生语言材料贫乏表现得十分突出，特别是理科班。课堂上比较活跃，课后却把大部分时间放在了学习其他科目，因而语文知识积累不够，语文能力也不高，尤其是在作文的审题立意上让每一位老师头疼。在新的教学改革下如何写好作文，尤其是写好高考的材料作文是我们要深入思考的问题。

首先：引。如何使学生端正态度引导学生写好作文呢？常言说得好：“方向明，决心大”。树立坚定的信念，是我们写好作文的关键。如果学习的方向不明确，学习态度不端正，必然会使人产生惰性心理。高中阶段的作文 “特困生”，大多是学习方向的不够明确，学习态度不够端正，因此，我们教师应该要根据实际情况，帮助作文“特困生”克服模糊观念，坚定信念，端正态度。

其次：帮。无论是老师还是学生都需要有良好的耐性。老师需要课前充足的备课准备，需要细致入微的引导讲解，帮助学生在一定情况下把握方向（不是所有的时候都是这样），让学生有信心耐心的去做准备，去写。例如材料作文：一群城里人去山里旅游，感叹着山水的秀美，恨不得定居下来。好奇地问当地的一个年轻人：“你觉不觉得你们很幸福，生活在这么美的环境里?”他笑着说：“不觉得呀，看习惯了。如果有机会的话，我倒想跑出这山沟沟，去城里生活。”众人皆笑。 原来，当我们这群被大自然驱逐出境的城里人，在这山沟沟里贪婪迷醉时，这些山里人家，正挖空心思地想往都市里“跳龙门”呢!看来所谓旅游，只是相互的串串门。首先审题，帮助学生明确审题对象。材料涉及三个（组）对象可确定三个立意角度：城里人、山里人 、城里人与山里人 。然后找出关键句，从关键句中揣摩命题人意图。城里人 --感叹着山水的秀美，恨不得定居下来。山里人--不觉得呀，看习惯了。如果有机会的话，我倒想跑出这山沟沟，去城里生活。 城里人与山里人 ---当我们这群被大自然驱逐出境的城里人，在这山沟沟里贪婪迷醉时，这些山里人家，正挖空心思地想往都市里“跳龙门”呢!看来所谓旅游，只是相互的串串门。最后让学生综合大家的意见来确定最佳立意角度，并用用简

洁的语言概括自己的观点。学生的结论有很多都非常正确。如“珍惜身边的幸福” “学会欣赏身边的风景” “熟悉的地方也有风景 ”“ 美就在自己身边 ”“不要舍近求远(何必舍近求远) ”“ 做好自己，又何羡乎? ”“ 围城心理”“ 生活在别处 ”“ 各有各的精彩”“ 距离产生美 ”“ 活在自己的‘天堂’” “彼岸，灯火阑珊 ”等等。

再次，改。教师批改学生作文时一般采用以下两种做法：一是对学生作文进行细致修改。虽然这也能使学生认识到自己作文上的不足，但不能使他们明白自己不足的原因及怎样改正。二是作文交上来，教师具体指出不足之处后再发下去让学生再修改。事实证明，让学生再修改，是提高作文质量的有效途径。

学生再修改自己的作文，是教师手把手指导作文到"能使学生改其文"的必由之路，再修改作文不是重复而是"升华"，它可以使学生发现自己作文的欠缺之处，提高作文水平，且增强了自力更生、自强不息的精神品质。教师在批改时不仅要通过作文的批阅评点具体地给学生指明错误及错误原因，还要从理论上教学生再修改作文的方法。所以，当学生在遇到叙事没条理、层次不清等问题时，要指导他们如何谋篇布局，理清层次，甚至"重建骨架"。 一、确定讲评目标，针对一点突破

作文讲评的范围比较广泛，每次讲评不可能面面俱到，而必须突出重点。因此，一节讲评课的目标应该是讲一点写作知识，讲一个具体的写作技能，使学生收到实效。例如，苏教版教材五年级上册习作五，要求学生写一个小动物，并且能使用过渡句衔接上下文，讲评时就围绕学生是否运用过渡句展开。

二、精选讲评资料，引起学生共鸣

1、根据讲评目标选择典型资料

教师要根据讲评目标选取一些能代表这次作文优点或不足的典型作文讲评资料，这些作文可以是学生写的文章，也可以是范文，在课上读给全班同学听，通过讲评让学生领悟文章该怎么写。

2、选择不同水平的作文做讲评资料

作文讲评要适合不同层次的学生需要，因为每位学生之间都存在着差异，作文水平也参差不齐。作文讲评要充分考虑学生的个性差异，不能一刀切，要针对不同学生不同情况进行“因材施教，因人施教”。因此，选出的作文要有上、中、下各等级，这样才能面向全体学生，触及每个层次的学生写作的得失，引起他们的共鸣。

三、多样讲评形式，活跃课堂气氛

1、教师示范与

教师将一两篇有代表性的文章，用多媒体播放,一句一句地评改。 遇到作文的成功之处说明认为其成功的原因，并标上相应批改符号。遇到不足之处，分析其原因，提出修改方案，让学生掌握改文的方法,知道如何下手改,改哪些方面等。这样既能帮助学生提高修改作文的能力,又能培养他们良好的作文习惯。

2、集体交流

正所谓“仁者见仁，智者见智”，这样的交流能充分发挥学生的主体作用，使他们互相启发，提高认识能力和表达能力，同时还会使他们懂得如何正确评价自己和别人的优缺点。

3、小组合作

具有强烈的好奇心是小学生典型的心理特征之一，他们对同伴的作文时时充满

好奇，可以有意识地去让他们进行比较，取长补短。不仅使学生找出他人文章的问题所在，而且能从不同的文章中汲取精华，达到互相促进、共同提高的目的。

4、学生自评

众所周知，学生能够独立的修改自己的文章，才是作文评改训练的最终目的。这一过程，要求学生遵循“多读”的原则，俗话说“文章怕念”，让学生多读自己的作文，读着读着就会发现不当之处。自评时，至少要读三遍文章，首先轻声读一遍，统观全文，边读边思考；接着逐句逐段的细读，边读边加批注，边读边改；改好后再进行复查，直到自己满意为止。教师要鼓励学生多改、改好，同时教育学生要细心、认真、说真话，公正合理的自我评价，并养成自改自查的良好习惯。

根据自身条件综合使用以上几种方法，定能收到事半功倍的效果。

四、注意讲评方法，激发学生兴趣

作文讲评要讲艺术，讲评作文，不是批评作文，教师要善于捕捉学生习作中的闪光点，热忱鼓励，让每位学生感受到成功的喜悦，努力诱发学生的习作动机。因此，讲评时要多鼓励，多表扬，少挖苦，少批评，多使用激励性的语言，对学生习作中的不妥之处，提出的意见要亲切、温和，让他们不但容易接受教师的意见，而且在听了点拨之后有一种豁然开朗后的该绝。对于一些作文写得不太好的学生，尤其要注意鼓励，因为他们更渴望得到重视和赞同，所以教师在讲评这类学生的作文时，要用“放大镜”找优点，从“差”中求优，发现一点一滴的进步，不放过写得好的一句话，一个标题，写得好的一个词，一个标点，增强他们的自信心，激发写作兴趣，变怕作文为爱作文。

总之，作文评讲是作文教学的一个重要环节，只有重视和强调对学生作文的评析，激发学生进一步写好作文的动机，让学生不断对作文活动本身产生兴趣，才会真正从根本上提高作文水平，我们的作文课堂教学才会出现新的生机与勃勃活力。

从学生的习作中归纳出带有共性的问题，并提出行之有效的改进措施

这样做不但可以让学生明白评分标准、注意事项和失误原因，还可以让他们举一反三，通过一个问题懂得一类文章的写法。如批阅学生的作文时，我发现学生在关系型话题作文方面普遍存在的问题有：不懂得文章的中心论点必须是概念间的关系，或只写一方面，或分开写，或另起炉灶；不知道常见的逻辑关系有哪些种类；缺乏分析能力，

不会判断、推理。据此，作文讲评课上，我将重点放在训练学生判断事物间的关系、阐述判断的理由等能力上，然后再要学生写“行动与结果”“追星与修己”“中心与边缘”等关系型话题作文，这样由一篇到一类，由写作到指导再到写作，学生议论文的写作能力得到了有效提高。

又比如学生的习作文句不通时，除了书面纠正之外，很重要的一点是再口说，然后再把事情连贯地写下来。口说是学生自我发现语句毛病的有效手段之一。我曾带学生去敬老院慰问老人，回来后要求他们写一篇题为《慰问老人》的文章。文章写成后，让他们再口述，根据自己所写的文章，再根据口述时对语言的感受对其原文加以修改，效果明显好得多。在讲评过程中，针对学生的问题，如：文句不通，前后不连贯等情况，要把说和写沟通起来，反复说，以说促进写，从而帮助学生把原文修改通顺。

社会的不断发展要求小学生的素质也要不断提高，要提高他们的写作水平，再修改作文是其中必不可少的一个重要环节。因此，我们必须培养小学生再修改作文的能力。

所谓最佳角度，首先是指在多个对象的材料中要学会根据命题人意图确定最准确的立意对象；而在单个对象的材料中学会确定最切合命题人意图的角度。 其次是指在切合题意的基础上选择自己行文最有把握，占有素材最多的角度。 最后才考虑立意的“新奇”与“深刻”，千万不能以“新”害“意”。

审题在众多学生的参与下可以得出这样的观点： ①回归自然 ②选择适合的位置 ③从不同的角度看问题 ④知足常乐、安于现状

再次：批。老师的批改是关键，它是老师与学生沟通的桥梁，但讲究方法。“语文课程评价一方面要尊重学生的主体地位，指导学生开展自我评价和促进反思，另一方面要鼓励同伴、家长等参与到评价之中，使评价成为学校、教师、学生、同伴、家长等多个主体共同积极参与的交互活动。”高中语文作文批改要有新突破，必须以新课程理念为基础。那就是在作文批改中也引进“自主、合作、探究”的教学理念和大胆采取“指导学生开展自我评价、促进反思，并鼓励同伴参与到评价之中”的高中语文作文批改新思路。具体做法如下： 第一步，分好学习小组。第二步，进行作文批改教学。 第三步，针对作文根基差的同学进行个别辅导。 第四步，办好“发表园地”。当然，这些需要教师的充分准备，要提前设置预案，要精心组织，切不可偷懒，随意应付；同时教师还需不断提高自己的写作素养，尽量和学生一起写写“下水文”。这样，也许会形成所谓“万紫千红总是春”的局面，高中生作文的春天。

原文地址：新材料作文审题指导（示例）作者：lgh9617

阅读下面文字，根据要求作文。(60分)

Today, many young people are crazy about their idols.

Many years ago, in

order to see the idol, a girl made her father threaten the star, finally, the

father dropped down the river and ended his life. It is such a horrible

incident, the public criticizes the girl for her blindness in worshipping star.

Many students even skip their class, just to see their idols in the airport.

What’s more, they spend a lot of money to buy the products about their idols.

The students don’t have money, they ask their parents to give the money, it is

not right to do it. The young people should treat the stars in the right way,

they need to figure what is right and wrong. If they follow their stars in the

wrong way, they will ruin themselves. So people need to support their stars in

the wise way.

In Chinese Spring Festival Gala, the song of Where Has the Time Gone became popular.

The words are so touching that when people listen to this song, many memories will come out.

For our parents’ generation, they married, raised the kids and then watched them become independent, how time flies.

It is just like that they became parents yesterday, and then they become grandparents today.

Time flies so fast that they don’t realize they are old. I am so thankful to my parents, for they do so many things for me.

I want to return their love, so I must become more independent and mature. So that my parents will be less worried about me and can go travel to enjoy their lives. For me, I want to cherish every moment, enjoy my own life and let the time go more slowly.

在中国的春节联欢晚会上，歌曲“时间都去哪儿了”很受欢迎。歌词很动人，以至于人们听到歌曲的时候，很多记忆都涌现出来。

对于我们父母那一代人来说，他们结婚，生孩子，然后看着孩子独立，时间过得真快啊。一切就如他们昨天成为父母，然后今天就成为了祖父母。

时间过的如此的快，他们都没有意识到自己老了。我很感激父母，因为他们为了做了那么多事情。

我想要回报他们的爱，所以我必须变得更加的独立和成熟。这样父母就不用为我操那么多的心，可以去旅游，享受生活。对于我来说，我想要珍惜每一刻，享受我的生活，让时间走得慢些。

[高中英语作文：时间都去哪儿了

成功的教学不仅教会学生知识，而且要教会学生学习，即，不仅要学生“学会”，而且要学生会学，要学生会独立、主动地去获取已有知识。下面是小编带来的是农村中学语文作文教学反思论文，希望对您有帮助。

语文是一门陶冶人的情操，净化人的心灵，增长智慧的学科。它不仅在学生的学习中起着举足轻重的作用，在他们以后的工作中更为重要，生活中处处都有语文。可是在多年农村中学教学中，我发现学生对学习语文兴趣不高，甚至有的学生还歧视语文，表现出种种消极、抵触的心理，似乎语文是可学可不学的学科。下面结合我在农村中学教学的经验，略谈一下造成这种现象的原因及反思。

一、当前语文学习的现状

1.基础差。我们所在学校的生源大多来自山区和坝子，优秀的学生大部分被民族中学、城里的学校所选择，条件稍好一些的少许学生也纷纷到城里读书，剩下的优秀学生甚少。我校有百分之五十的学生对拼音学习很吃力，不会正确注声调，不能完整的拼读生字，多音字不能正确区分，同音字、同义字相互代替，滥用成语，作文记流水帐、病句多、重复嗦、没有内容、写字潦草，不会预习、不会复习，做综合性学习更是难上加难，更谈不上读一些课外书籍，学习始终处于一种被动状态。百分之三十的学生稍微能跟上老师，但思维不灵活；百分之十五的学生很聪明，但不愿意多学，投机取巧；只有百分之五的学生学习有奔头。

2.环境影响。丽江旅游经济的发展，推动了周边地区的经济，许多家庭卖地租房，手头也就宽裕，他们不再追求知识改变命运。同时，现在村子毕业的大学生进入服务业的较多，因为考取事业单位、公务员难上加难，村民们认为反正自家的孩子以后只有进入服务行业，晚进不如早进，读不读书效果都一样，对孩子的要求也就降低了。村民的价值观一发生了变化，孩子学习更加失去了兴趣，没了奋斗目标，更不要说学好语文了。

3.学校理念。众所周知，语文在所有学科的比例中最重，但依学校实际情况来看，却是语文次于数学和英语。因为他们认为在农村语文再提高也不会超过城里的学生，能提高的幅度小，而且费时费力。而理科可以在很短的时间内得到提高。到了初三，更是如此，甚至有些班主任还会对课后看语文的学生进行干涉。在这样理念的灌输下，学生对语文课的学习就可想而知了。

二、对当前状况的反思

谁都知道语文是需要日积月累，不可能一蹴而就，它对一个人的影响是深远的。面对这些具体情况，我不断探索，总结了两点：

1.在课堂中创设诱人情境，点燃激情的火花。孔子说：“知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。”爱因斯坦也说：“兴趣是最好的老师。”可见，爱好和兴趣在学习活动中的重要性。因此，我们就要在语文课堂中，根据教材特点积极创设愉快的教学情境，激发学生的学习兴趣，活跃课堂气氛，让学生充分发挥自己的主观能动性。如讲到杜甫的《石壕吏》，有的同学提出他们要自己诠释，在课堂占主权的我有点诧异，但看他们真诚的眼神，我同意了，给他们课后准备一周的时间。等到一周以后，他们准备了话剧，同时加上自己丰富的想象，把拓展题也完成了。不但把握了人物特点，记住了课文内容，理解了人物的情感，还当堂完成背诵，收到了意想不到的效果。一场表演，对于城里的学生来说不足为奇，可是，对农村学生来说，这一次大胆的尝试，让他们尝到了甜头，找到了自信。以后的古诗词可以尽量让他们去展示，不拘泥于一格。通过这次，我发现，尽量可以朝这个方向发展。

2.学习李元昌老师“不求一日分数高低，但求未来无限发展”的大语文素质教育，致力于调动不同层次学生的内在动力，让每个学生都看到自己的潜能，循循善诱。因为在农村，只要你考不上高中，父母不会再强迫你读书，很多同学都走上各行各业的道路。鉴于这样的考虑，教会学生写通知、失物招领、告示等各种应用文体；同时，让学生读名著，提高自己的素养，拓宽自己的眼界，这样，对走上工作岗位的学生来说，会建立一个正确的人生观、价值观，不至于失去人生目标；对于继续深造的同学来说，会成为一个你不断发展的宝库，引你不断发掘。

总之，农村语文教学任重而道远，吾将上下而求索。

This year is the 66th anniversary of the founding of new China! On October 1st， our whole family sit by the TV and waiting to watch early time big parade。

At ten o clock， the National Day military parade formally started， only saw many soldiers standing in front of tiananmen， navy， air force， army。。。 Stand straight， straight， like hits the forceful pine， President hus review。 The parade shows the motherland strong defense force， peaceful country and safe people， the motherland prosperity of beautiful landscape。

During the National Day， grandpa and I went to play in the humble administrators garden。 The car on the road， I saw the window renmin bridge garlands made of flowers on both sides， in the sunshine more bright beautiful， make the atmosphere of the National Day more strong! Walk in the small street to the humble administrators garden，Www. ZixueKaoShi .neT see stalls on both sides of the street with a red flag with five stars， to express the affection to the motherland。 Many foreign visitors to see the beautiful scenery heartfelt held out a thumb。 In the humble administrators garden is the chrysanthemum， chrysanthemum can be more color， yellow， red， white， colorful， beautiful!

The National Day make me deeper understanding of the motherland; A profound feelings for the motherland also; Make me more love my motherland China!

中文翻译：

今年是新中国成立66周年!十月一日这天，我们全家早早的坐在电视机旁等待观看盛世大阅兵。

十点钟，国庆阅兵式正式开始了，只看见许多军人站在天安门前，有海军、空军、陆军……都站得笔直笔直的，像一棵棵挺拔的青松，接受胡锦涛同志的检阅。整个阅兵式展示了祖国雄厚的国防力量，国泰民安，祖国繁荣昌盛的美好景象。

国庆期间，我和爷爷去了拙政园玩。汽车在路上行驶着，我看见窗外人民桥两旁用鲜花做成的花环，在阳光下更加亮丽，使国庆的气氛更加浓厚了!走在通往拙政园的那条小街上，看到街的两旁的摊位都插着五星红旗，表达对祖国的深厚感情。许多外来游客看见了这么美的景色由衷的伸出了大拇指。拙政园里有菊花，菊花的颜色可多了，有黄色的、红的、白的，五彩缤纷的，美丽极了!

国庆节使我对祖国的了解更深了，对祖国的感情也更深厚了，使我更加热爱我的祖国中国!

1、 Today and friends of foreign travel, outside air is very good, people feel very comfortable. We all appreciate the fine girls bicycles. We enjoyed the beautiful nature brought. We happily spent a happy day. 今天和朋友一起出外交游，外面的空气很好，人感觉很舒服。我们骑着自行车一路欣赏鸟语花香。享受着大自然带给我们的无限美好。大家开开心心地度过了愉快的一天。

2、 Today Mailehaoduo clothes, and parents take to the streets is happy, the parents have to pay to buy things. Unlike in their street to buy things they like to take a long time but saw the price, Ha-ha, is really very happy. I love my parents, I too thank them for the care and love. `` 今天买了好多衣服，和父母上街就是愉快，买东西有父母帮付钱。不像平时自己上街买东西碰到喜欢的但看了价钱都要考虑好久，呵呵，真的是很开心。我爱我的父母，太感谢他们对我的关心和爱戴了。`

3、 HOW TO GET HAPPINESS 如何获得快乐

there is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得快乐，你须注意下面两点。

健康是快乐的要诀。唯有身体强壮的人才能享受人生的乐趣。

快乐在于知足。一个不满于现状的人终是处在痛苦之中。

4、 BOOKS 书籍

As is well known, books teach us to learn life, truth, science and many other useful things. They increase our knowledge, broaden our minds and strengthen our character. In other words, they are our good teachers and wise friends. This is the reason why our parents always encourage us to read more books.

Reading is a good thing, but we must pay GREat attention to the choice of books. It is true that we can derive benefits from good books. However, bad books will do us more harm than good.

如众所周知，书籍教我们学习人生，真理，科学以及其它许多有用的东西。它们增加我们的知识，扩大我们的心胸并加强我们的品格。换句话说，它们是我们的良师益友。这是为什么我们的父母终是鼓励我们要多读书的理由。

读书是一好事，但我们必须多加注意书的选择。不错，我们能从好书中获得益处。然而，坏书却对我们有害无益。

5、 Fri.,Feb. 5 Rainy

In my dream

Last night ,I dreamed I became a very beautiful brid.I dreamed that I was in a forest. In tht forest,there were a lot of animals.Then,an old bird told us,"we have a very beautiful forest,we should therefore protect it from pollution."All the animals agreed with him.

But the second day,people came into our forest.Many animals were caught.The people wanted to build house and parks in our forest.Many old trees were felled.And then suddenly,nothing was left standing.

I was so shocked and then I bursted out crying.I woke up at midnight.It was only a dream.

二月五日 星期五 雨

在梦中

晚我梦见我变成一只非常漂亮的鸟.我梦见我在一座森林,森林里有很多动物.然后有一只老鸟告诉我们,"我们有一座非常美丽的森林,

因此我们应该保护它,免受污染"所有的动物都赞成他.

但是第二天,人们进入我们的森林,许多动物被逮捕.这些人要在我们的森林地上建造房子和公园.许多年老的树木被砍下,然后,突然间,一切都被夷平了.

我很震惊,接着突然大哭起来.我在半夜醒来,原来只是个梦.

Tourism in China

Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What’s more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism, and regard it as a life style. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

中国旅游

最近几年，在中国的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行，28%的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入。

面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。

Dear Miss Jiang,

I am writing to share my ideas about our English class. Now, our main

material in the class is the textbook, which is reasonable. But I think we can

get some other resources, such as English magazines, songs, movies and so on. We

can learn the basic knowledge from out textbook, and get some more from other

materials. In addition, those materials are more authentic and practical, which

will be useful to our learning. Besides, by doing so, we can get more fun from

learning and develop our interest to English. Please take good consideration of

my advice. Thank you!

Sincerely yours

Bella

尊敬的蒋老师：

您好!我写信是想和你谈谈我对英语课的想法。现在我们上课用的主要材料是课本，这是合理的。但是我认为我们可以获取一些其他资源，比如英语杂志，歌曲，电影等等。我们可以从课本上学到基本的知识，同时从其他材料获取更多知识。另外，那些材料更真实和实用，这对于我们的学习会有好处的。此外，通过这样做我们可以从学习中获得更多乐趣从而培养我们对英语的兴趣。请您认真考虑我的建议，谢谢!

A Day in the Zoo

There has been a long time for my family not to go out for the activity, because my father is busy all the time. But last week, my father finally finished his project, so that he could take a rest for some time. My father advised us to go to the zoo, I was so excited, because I hadn’t seen many animals in my life. In the zoo, there were so many people, it was so lively. I saw the monkey, the giraffe and so on. I saw these animals in the TV usually, but I saw them in front of me that day. The peacock impressed me so much, it looked homely when it laid down the ground, but when it stood up and opened the wings, it was so gorgeous. People said peacock was proud, indeed, it would not please people. I had a good time in the zoo.

对于我的家人来说，我们已经有很长一段时间没有外出活动了，因为爸爸总是很忙。但是上周，我的爸爸终于完成了他的项目，所以他能休息一段时间。爸爸建议我们去动物园，我很兴奋，因为我目前还没有看到过很多动物。在动物园里，有很多人，非常热闹。我看到了猴子，长颈鹿等等。我平常在电视上看到这些动物，但是那天我亲眼看到了。孔雀给我的印象很深刻，在它躺在地上的时候，看起来很普通，但是当它站起来，打开翅膀，是那么的美丽。人们说孔雀是傲慢的，确实，它不会取悦人们。在动物园里我度过了一段美好的时光。

[高中英语作文动物园一日游

Nowadays, pets become so close and friendly to our human-beings that more

and more people enjoy keeping them. Pets can bring them a lot of joys and

happiness, because playing with pets is a good way to communicate with the

nature. Besides, pets can comfort old people who live alone. With the companion

of pets, they won’t feel lonely. Nevertheless, I’m not interested in keeping

pets at all. For one thing, keeping pets is bad for environmental protection,

since pets usually make a lot of noise and contaminate the roads. For another,

the virus carried by pets may cause fatal disease. What’s more, sometimes pets

may attack people when they are unhappy. Consequently, we had better not keep

too many pets, so as to ensure our health and security. Besides, those pet

lovers must take some effective measures to prevent their pets from hurting

people and polluting our environment.

这次英语期试我没有，没有达到考试前制定的目标。我知道父母和老师对于我有着很大的期望，可是我还是没有。对于这点我感到十分抱歉。但是既然犯了错误就要改正，所以，通过考试我也想了很多。我知道期中考是一面清澈的镜子，在它面前，我羞愧地低下了头。

仔细看看试卷发现 竟然错了很多不该错的地方。我的基础知识部分扣了很多分，主要是单词掌握不好。阅读题扣了26分，说明我的阅读量不够，我的阅读速度慢影响了做后面的题，思考的时间少了。老师狠狠地批评了我。我的这次英语作文只得了6分，这与我的词汇量不够，阅读积累不够有很大的关系。

分析原因，主要是课前没有做好预习，课堂上没有积极的举手发言，课后不认真复习，把写作业当成一种完成任务。于是，在考试的时候，我得到了我应有的“报应”。经过我的仔细反思，有这样的结果是我在做作业时，囫囵吞枣，没有仔细审题，认真做题，这让我失去了一次特别好的自我提高的机会。我应该把写作业当成一个新的开始，而不是上一段学习的结束，每一次的作业都要当做一次小的考试。我要增加一些仿写和阅读的练习。

在今后的学习中，在课堂上我要积极回答问题做好笔记，多记一些老师拓展的知识点，每天回家要复习一遍老师讲的内容，认真完成一篇阅读与完形填空，我有上进心想去学的英语知识，自己努力，超越自己，比别的同学更好。

I have a cat named mimi. Its hair is as white as snow. I often play games with it. It amuses me a lot and I treat it as a little friend. Every morning, I would say goodbye to it before I go to school and mimi would wave its front-legs to me. It brings me a lot of pleasure. But it takes time and costs money to keep the cat. My parents and I spend much time taking care of it, feeding it and cleaning it. We have to clean the house from time to time, or the cat will make them dirty and smelly.

我有一只猫，名叫咪。它的毛像雪一样白，我经常和它一起玩。它使我很开心，我也把它当小朋友一样对待。每天早上，我去上学之前都会跟它说再见，它也人向我晃晃前爪。它给我带来了很多快乐。但是，养猫是要花费时间和金钱的。我父母和我花费很多时间照看它，喂它饭，给它洗澡。我们得经常打扫房间，否则，猫就会把屋子弄得又脏又难闻。

Some people like to work alone while others enjoy teamwork. In my opinion,

everyone had better learn to work with others together because teamwork is

definitely necessary and important in modern society.

First, working in a team provides a chance for us to communicate with each

other. Just as the saying goes, “many hands make light job.” Working in a team,

teammates share their ideas with each other, which is helpful to create a better

achievement. Second, working in a team is a way to broaden our horizon.

Teammates in a team can learn something from each other because they are from

different places, owning various experiences and hold different views towards

things. Therefore, getting along with other teammates is also a process of

increasing our knowledge. Finally, working in a team is also a way to establish

our friendship. Teammates in a team have chances to help each other, to solve

the problems together, to share the happiness of being successful, which make a

great contribution to establishing friendship. Thus, working in a team is one of

the most effective ways to extend our personal relationships.

To sum up, to learn to work in a team is really necessary and important and

we should try to enjoy it.

Every year on October 4th is the World Animal Day. It is proposed by the

Italian monk St Francis in 12th century. He lives in the forests of Assisi

Island for the long time, building a good relationship with the animals. So he

asks people to express thanks to the animals on October 4th. He sets a good

example for our human beings about how to deal with the relationship with

animals. In order to memorize him and what he does, we make October, 4th to be

World Animal Day. Nowadays, people from all over the world will hold various

activities to celebrate on that day. The aim of this festival is to remind

people to care for all animals and build a harmonious relationship with

them.

As the Christmas Day is coming, our class decided to send some gifts to our

teachers, because we wanted to show our gratitude to them. At first, we had no

idea what to buy, because we wanted to do something special. So at last an idea

came to my mind. I advised to write a card, pasting some pictures of classmates

on it. Everybody agreed with me, so we spent a day to take some funny pictures,

and everybody wrote down their names on the card. When we sent this gift to the

teachers, they loved it so much. They were so impressed by this precious

surprise and would keep it forever.

《走进田园，热爱乡村》是第八册语文园地六的习作内容，乡村的景物，乡村的趣事，对于乡村的孩子是很熟悉的。所以我选择了这一内容作为研讨课。我首先出示了一幅幅美丽的乡村图，当同学们看到一幅幅美丽动人的乡村图时，惊喜万分，争先恐后的发言：“春天，我们的乡村好美呀，看，粉红的桃花，雪白的梨花，金黄的油菜花，它们争奇斗艳……”

对于孩子们而言，这是一堂快乐的作文课。对于老师而言，也是一堂收获惊喜的作文课。孩子们细致入微的观察，以及喜悦的心情，在习作中都得到了详尽的描述。作文的过程是一个快乐的过程，在本节课得到了充分体现，这节作文课引发了我的如下思考：

一、孩子感到快乐是写好作文的前提

“知之者不如好知者，好知者不如乐之者。”要想动笔习作，首先要喜欢习作，要让孩子从内心深处真正体验到作文是件快乐的事情。观察自己的家乡、做游戏等都是作文课的形式，习作可不是只有一种形式，不是只有一个阵地──课堂。广阔的大自然，应是孩子们学习的大课堂，到操场上去，到大自然中去，让孩子们感到高兴，增加体验，增强学习的信心，这样对于孩子们来讲，作文的过程将是一个快乐体验的过程。

二、知识积累是写好作文的保证

“我们的乡村，无论什么时候，什么季节都是一个五彩缤纷的世界。”“红红的柿子像一个个红灯笼，挂在树上，你挤我碰，等着人们去摘呢。”这些语句，是需要平时在阅读中去积累的，在习作中才能灵活去运用。有的同学在习作中能写出优美的语句，有的同学就写不出来。因此，平时建立一个摘抄本，是解决在写作时腹中空空，无话可写的好方法。在阅读时，把碰到的好词好句随时记下来，积少成多，这样就会在习作时产生下笔如有神，文如泉涌的奇妙境界了。

三、充分利用好身边的资源是作文的源泉

第六单元的习作内容是写乡村的生活，根据学生的生活实际，我组织了学生去观察乡村的田园风光，了解乡村的生活，拍摄乡村的图片，搜集乡村的资料，然后在课堂上介绍自己的乡村，学生讲得生动有趣。有个学生说：“我们乡村有趣的事很多，有时钓鱼，有时放牛等，我们玩得最有趣的是‘西班牙斗牛’……这是一节很成功的作文课，我充分利用了可以利用的教育资源，相信孩子们对于这样的作文课一定会很喜欢。

通过这节作文课，我体会到我们的语文课堂有着广阔的学习空间，让语文学习的外延与生活的外延相接是我们每个语文教师的责任。

[《走进田园 热爱乡村》四年级作文研讨课教学反思

January 23 20XX

I have rested for XX days. In these days, I felt very bored. I didn’t know to do what. Although I had a lot of things to do, I felt unnetfortable. I was ill because of the cold weather. I was tired, sleepy and had no strength. My parents are worried about my health. in fact, it didn’t matter. I was always in the room with air-conditioner and opened it in a low temperature. So when I went out, the high temperature disagreed to me. Finally, I was ill.

January 24 20XX

Today, when I awaked up, I found the air-conditioner didn’t work. I used the control, but it still didn’t work. I knew the air-conditioner was in trouble. I went downstairs. My father told me two air-conditioner and two netputer had been broken. Because my father used electric making machine to make electric, so the voltage was not stable. It led to the trouble. Oh! Whenever the government will let the factory use electric? If it lasts longer, I will be crazy!!

January 25 20XX

It doesn’t matter that the air-conditioner has been broken. But my notebook-netputer also was broken. I really don’t know what to do. So I went to play basketball. I didn’t know any one in that place. And I was the first time to go there to play basketball. At first, there was no person playing basketball. So I played basketball alone. A few minutes later, some students came to play. So we played together. Of course, we had a match. And It lasts two hours. After the match, I felt I would be dead. I was too tired.

January 25 20XX

No netputer, I will not know to do what. I have no solution to the problem. So I sent my notebook-netputer to the Asus netputer netpany. I must have my netputer repaired. And the other one, it was thoroughly broken. It can’t be repaired again.The netputer netpany told me that my notebook netputer needed one week to repair. The electric led to all trouble. And many electrical appliances are broken. I don’t know when our country can solve the problem.

January 26 20XX

I have lost two netputers, but I had another one. I bought it about five years ago. It can be called curio. Though it was old. But it can still work. Although it works slowly, I was pleased. I can go on internet again. Chatting with my friends is a good relaxing. In the internet, one of my old friends invited me to tomorrow’s party. He told me that some friends would go, too. So I promised to go. A-ha! I can see my old friends. I was very happy and hopeful.

John has lived in London for afew years, but he isnt so familiar with that city, because he seldom goes out.One foggy morning, he had to go somewhere to attend an important meeting.

Because of the heavy fog, he was unable to get the right way.

Although he askedmany people for the direction, no one paid attention to him, for they were allin a hurry.

He looked so anxious. At this very moment, a woman came out of thefog and said, “Let me help you, Sir.

Please go with me." John followed thewoman, and then she led him to the right place.

It took them about half anhour. John owed his great thanks to her. However, to his great surprise, hefound that the woman was blind.

“How can you take me here?" John asked. “Ihave been living in London since I was born, so Im very familiar with everystreet in this city." the woman answered.

约翰在伦敦住了几年，但他对那个城市并不是很熟悉，因为他很少出门。

在一个有雾的早晨，他要去参加一个重要会议。由于雾太大，他无法找到正确的方向。虽然他向很多人问方向，没有人注意到他，因为他们都在赶时间。

他看上去很着急。在这个非常时刻，一个女人从大雾中走出来对他说，“先生，我来帮助你吧。请跟我走吧。”

约翰跟着她，之后她带他带到正确的地方。他们大约花了半个小时。约翰非常感谢她。

然而，令他吃惊的是，他发现那个女人是盲人。“你是怎么能带我到这里来？”约翰问。“我从出生开始就一直生活在伦敦，所以我非常熟悉这个城市的每一条街道。”女人回答说。

[高中英语作文：走出迷雾

“姐姐，姐姐，跟我玩呀！”哎，弟弟老是玩也不是办法，我要给他来个“幼儿园学前启蒙教育”，当他的启蒙教师，培训一下他的英语。也许他的天资不够高，但只要他“笨鸟先飞”，说不定就会赶上别人的哦！

说起“启蒙教育”，我还真的挺自豪的，因为那些杯子、衣服之类的日常用品都是我教弟弟学会的，也算是“半个老师”。我本想教英语只要像了英语老师教我们那样，老师读一遍，学生跟着读一遍就学会了，没想到……哎，真是一波三折呀！

我拿来一块小黑板和几支彩色笔，让他坐着。“来，跟姐姐念‘A’。”“姐姐，我好渴，我要喝果汁。”“不行，你念会这个字母了，我就让你喝。”“哇……”（哭声）没办法，只好让他先喝个痛快了，喝完果汁他就会乖乖学吧，没想到他又要动我的作业本了，噼里啪啦……哎，太不乖了！

第二天，我又开始不厌其烦地教他，功夫不负有心人，终于有了进度。“来，跟姐姐念‘one’。”“one。”接着便是我的掌声了。在我的鼓励下，他学会“one”，“two”，“three”，“four”。只不过有时念“four”时会念错。（已经很不错了！）

没想到，当老师这么累，我不紧要教他知识，还得管他乖不乖，要不要喝茶。我现在终于知道老师的辛苦了。

这次我可是既教会弟弟英语又懂得老师的艰辛哟。在这里我也要奉劝各位淘气包们：不要再惹老师生气了，收敛一下吧！