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植树节英语作文带翻译小学(精彩20篇)

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快乐的英语课小学一年级优秀作文

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星期四上午,一位来自加拿大的老师给我们上了一节快乐英语课。

上课铃响了,这位长着满头金发的外籍老师走进了我们班的教室。同学兴奋极不已,热情地向老师问好,教室里热闹极了!

课堂上,同学们聚精会神,老师教的每一个字母,我们都认真地读,老师说的每一句话,我们都认真地听。这节课,老师教了我们“笑”、“哭”、“想”等很多英语动词,还教我们给单词配上了有趣的动作,我们很感兴趣,每个人都学得津津有味。

不知不觉,下课的时间到了。老师动情地大声对全班同学说:“I love you!”可同学们都舍不得这位英语老师,簇拥着老师离开教室。

我希望下个星期快点到来,再一次见到这位漂亮的外国老师,再上那快乐的英语课。

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篇1:有关友情英语作文小学

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There are various emotions in the world. People need valuable emotions

which can support them both in mind and in life. Friendship is one of the most

vital emotions.

It is not easy to deal with friendship. As for friendship, sometimes you

and your friend may meet difficulties. Trust is the most remarkable trait of

forever friendship. Trust plays a very important role in daily communication. As

the saying goes, “Between friends all is common.” Furthermore, tolerance is also

a considerable factor in remaining good friendship. If your friend makes a

mistake accidentally, you should have largeness of mind. Friendship is too

precious. When we face some misunderstandings, we need to make joint efforts to

protect our friendship. We should not give up friendship at random. We should

treat our friends as treasures.

Friendship is so pure, clear and beautiful. We cannot be lack of friendship

in our life. Try our best to insist our trust in making friends.

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篇2:封信小学生英语

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Dear Prof. Li,

I, the undersigned, am a senior in the Computer Science Department of Tsinghua University. I am applying for an MS degree under your guidance so that I write to you today for a further contact. The reason for my application for the major — utilization of computer in farming — can be illustrated as follows. I belong to farmers. I am from the West. I was born and brought up in the countryside so that I intend to learn what can be used in the countryside.

After graduation, I want to make use of what I learn in university to make contribution to the development of my hometown, which is still one of the ten counties in poverty.

Best wishes to you!

Sincerely Yours

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篇3:关于幽默英语作文小学

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When we are chatting with our friends happily, suddenly if we are talking

about the awkward topic, we need to do something to change this situation, what

are we gonna do? The answer is using your humor to make things seem easy, and

then your friends won’t take your awkward topic seriously. Humor is very

important, it can adjust the atmosphere, making things work easily. Life needs

humor, without humor, life would be boring. Foreign people like to make friends

with humorous people, they can feel relax when they are chatting, while most

Chinese people are always taking things too seriously. I like to make friends

with humorous guys, they make me feel life is easy, and we should positive about

life.

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篇4:小学自我介绍英语模板

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good! i jiaoli its far this year, 12-year-old, changsha city in the rice fields junior secondary school reading. i am good at playing table tennis, china is the second in the team; i like playing the piano, for two years has been a five-level 5. i like to eat kfc, so why fat. this is the first time participate in the english game, or lack of experience, but i hope i can play great! next, i bring you a song - edelweiss

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篇5:寒假计划英语作文附翻译

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寒假即将到来,请根据下面提示,写一篇70~90字的寒假计划

提示:rest, Spring Festival,visit,help parents,play with friends, do homework,mend up English,prepare for new term. Plan for the winter Holiday

winter vacation plan

How time flies(时间过得真快),unconsciously(不知不觉地) the next winter vacation (寒假)will soon come.In order to improve(提高) myself as well as enjoy a happy holiday,I made the winter vacation plan.

Firstly i want to continue with my study,i think study is a life process,so no matter what the situation I am in,i will look for chances to continue it.I have bought several new books ,including those books on my major(专业)and some novels ,I will try to finish reading them in the holiday and write notes.

Secondly,since it is the holiday,I will share it with my family and friends .You know the spring festival will soon come, I believe I would chatting and play games with my friends and family .I think I will enjoy the vacation.

寒假计划

时间过得真快,不知不觉得下一个寒假就要到了,为了提高我自己同时快乐的度过假期,我制定了寒假计划。

首先,我会继续学习,我认为学习是一种终身的过程,所以不管我处在那种情况之下,我都会寻找机会学习。我已经买了一些新书,这些书有的跟我的专业有关,也包括一些小说。我将努力读完他们并写下读书笔记。

其次,既然是放假,我将和我的家人朋友一起度过,你知道春节就要来临了,届时我会和我的家人朋友一起聊天啊,玩游戏啊等等,我相信我定会度过一个快乐的假期。

[寒假计划英语作文附翻译

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篇6:短篇英语日记带翻译

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Today was realiy boring.I went nowhere,I just stayed at home because the

weather was rainy.The rain was raining heavily in the sky.And there was much

dirty water on the ground.

今天可真无聊。我哪儿也没去,就呆在家里,因为今天是雨天。天空中下着倾盆大雨,而且地上汇集着许多污水。

I watched TV,but all the shows were long and long soap operas.I didnt like

them!Then I read a book,but they were too difficult for me.So I couldnt get

it!Computer games were also difficult and boring...

我看了电视,但是所有的节目都是长长的电视连续剧,我不喜欢它们!然后我读了一本书,但是它对我来说太深奥了,我无法理解!电脑游戏也很困难而且无聊……

In short,the day was boring.I flet so bad!

总而言之,今天真无聊。我感觉太差了!

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篇7:短篇英语日记带翻译

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As is well known,books teach us to learn life,truth,science and many other

useful things.They increase our knowledge,broaden our minds and strengthen our

character.In other words,they are our good teachers and wise friends.This is the

reason why our parents always encourage us to read more books.

Reading is a good thing,but we must pay great attention to the choice of

books.It is true that we can derive benefits from good books.However,bad books

will do us more harm than good.

众所周知,书籍教会我们学习生活、真理、科学和许多其他有用的东西。它们增加了我们的知识,开阔了我们的思想,增强了我们的品格。换句话说,它们是我们的良师益友。这就是为什么我们的父母总是鼓励我们多读书。

读书是一件好事,但我们在选书上一定要十分注意,好书的确能给我们带来好处,但坏书弊大于利。

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篇8:小学英语自由的

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New York is the first city in America. When people come to take a visit of

America, they always choose New York as their destination. New York has many

world-famous tourist attractions and people can find them in the Hollywood

movies. The Statue of Liberty is one of the symbolic building, which represents

America. The statue is a gift to the people of United States from people of

France. The meaning of freedom and friendship are shared by both countries.

Today, the meaning of this statue is admitted by the world and when people see

it, they think of freedom. On the right hand, the woman holds a torch and on her

left hand is the book called Declaration of Independence. Whats more, on her

foot is the broken chains. All of these stands for freedom.

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篇9:我的坏脾气英语作文翻译

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I have a bad behavior, when I get angry, I will fight back and say the bad words which will hurt other people. Once my friend Lucy missed the time we had ordered, she was late for half an hour, when she arrive, I got angry and said I did not want to see her again. Two days later, Lucy explained and I felt so sorry to her, I must learn to control my bad temper.

我有一个坏习惯,当我生气的时候,我会反抗,说一些不好听的话,伤到别人。曾经我的朋友露西错过了我们约定的时间,她迟到了半个小时,当她来到的时候,我很生气,说再也不想见到她。两天以后,露西解释了原因,我感到很抱歉,我必须学着去控制自己的坏脾气

[我的坏脾气英语作文翻译

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篇10:关于失败英语作文小学

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It is quite usual that one meets failures, for ones life can never be

plain sailing. However, diffhrent people hold diffhrent attitudes towards

failure. Some people think it a heavy blow to fail in achieving something and

they can not endure failure. When they meet failure, they will be seriously

dejected and can never pluck up their courage to try again. However, others

think it natural to meet failures in ones career. Therefore, they are

psychologically prepared. When they meet failures, they will not be frustrated.

Instead, they will continue to meet new challenges. As to me, Im in favor of

the latter view. Failure is really a terrible thing but it is also the mother of

success. If one draws lessons from failures, in most cases he will get success

in the future. Furthermore, ones life can never be smooth sailing; it must be

full of difficuhies and setbacks. If one is daunted by difficuhies and

frustrations, he will always be a failure. However, if one holds a positive

attitude toward failure, he will overcome difficulties and frustrations to win

victory.

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篇11:我的春节小学生英语

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The Spring Festival is the most solemn and most grand festival of the year. The Spring Festival, the streets and lanes, men and women, young and old face with a smile, enjoy the happiness of the festival.

The new year is to eat dumplings, I helped my mother wash the coins, then Zhaomaohuahu also together to wrap dumplings. All kinds of dumplings are like a treasure, carrying peoples longing for a good life. Steaming dumplings on the table at the end, the father ate the first, I didnt think the first coin, and then my brother, mom, the most fortunate, of course, I am! Our family is happy and laughable, tasting delicious food and talking about the happiest things of the day. Of course, my brother and I are most happy, of course, is "congratulations on getting rich, the red envelopes are coming". This year I also learned an interesting event, listen to my grandma said, send kitchen is celebrated on the twenty-four day of the twelfth lunar month, the day God banished to the emperor to report the things of the earth. People want God to speak, so this day people will prepare such a tribute special worship god. This new years Eve and day was the old man back in the day, of course also cannot neglect. I help grandma for fruit and snacks, on the three minute reverent and respectful, pray our family happiness, health, happiness in the coming year.

We have been playing late at night, the sound of the outside, the sound of laughter in the house! I like the Chinese new year, because I can eat dumplings in the new year, see the Spring Festival evening, and the most important thing to enjoy the fireworks is to share happiness with you. Its a good feeling for the New Year!

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篇12:小学植树节年级

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今天是3月12日,是植树节后的第五天,正逢周日,我们参加了江南晚报组织的植树活动。虽然天公不作美,下起了雨,可阻挡不住我们的脚步,浇灭不了我们的热情,我们还是按计划一起去植树。

我们乘车来到前州,下车后,因为下雨双脚都踩在了泥浆里,可谁也没有退缩。我们各自拿了一把大铁锹,三个人一组合作植树。我看见不远处地上倒着一棵小树苗,原来这就是我们要种的树。我还看见地上已经挖了一个大坑,心想:不就是把树放进坑里,然后再把泥土填进去吗?这有什么难的!

等我走近时,脚上已经全部粘满了潮湿的泥土,十分沉重,就像是脚上放了许多铁块似的。这时,旁边的一个同伴费力地把树苗扶起来,然后把它放进坑里,我和另一个同学就赶紧拿起铁锹铲土。可是不管我怎么用力都没法铲出泥土来,自己反而差点被滑了一跤。我用脚使劲地把铁锹往泥土里踩,又奋力用双手握住手柄,终于在我的努力下,一大铲子泥被挖了出来,我连忙把这些泥填入坑中,接着还这样干,没多久就和同伴一起把坑填满了,终于一棵树种好了,我们还给小树挂上了爱心卡。就这样,我们越种越顺利,种完了一棵就去种下一棵,雨越下越大了,可我们种树的热情丝毫未减。到最后数一数,我们小组一共种了八棵树呢。

“集合了!”远处传来了老师的声音,此时同伴们全身都是泥巴,如同惠山泥人了。大家的笑声久久回荡在我们种的树林上空……

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篇13:关于梦想的英语作文小学

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I have a dream. Compared toMartin Luther King’s, my dream is very small. I

want to be a teacher in the future. And then I can have a two long vacations for

traveling. I can travel around the world. I can go America, Canada, New York,

New Zealand, Hong Kong, Beijing, Shanghai and so on. It’s perfect. Yes, going

travel around the world is my dream. Even I want to go to the moon for

travel.

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篇14:寒假生活小学英语作文

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I like the winter holiday very much.Though its very shortI can enjoy the

Spring Festival.I can watch cartoon every day.

I neednt go to school frepuently.Sometimes I can go to play with my friend

outside.With the festival comingI can play all the time.I can play video game

with my brother.I am good at playing PC game.

So I often beats my brother.Then more and more relative came to my home.We

had dinner together.Its so lively that Iam very happy.But I still have to do my

homework.

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篇15:小学英语日记

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我一天的学习生活 My School Day

I get up at six in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth.

After a quick breakfast, I go to school in my mothers car. It takes us more

than half an hour to get there.

我早晨六点起床,然后我洗脸、刷牙。匆匆吃完早饭,我坐妈妈的车上学。我们要用半个多小时才能到达学校。

We have four hour classes in the morning. I have lunch at my grandparents,

because their home is nearer to my school.

我们上午上四节课。我在爷爷奶奶家吃午饭,因为他们家离学校更近些。

After two classes in the afternoon, school is over. Then we clean our

classroom.

下午上两节课后就放学了,然后我们打扫教室。

I get home at about half past five. We have dinner at seven. After dinner I

do my homework. If I finish my homework early, I can watch TV for half an hour.

I go to bed at half past nine or ten.

我大约五点半到家。我们七点吃晚饭。晚饭后我做作业。如果我完成作业早一些,我可以看半小时电视。我九点半或十点睡觉。

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篇16:封信英语翻译

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Where There is Life, There is Music

What is music, no one can explain.

Just imagine for a moment that you are sitting in a magnificent concert

hall. The conductor waves his shiny baton with a graceful swing through the air.

A beautiful melody floats slowly around you

You sit quietly with your eyes shut, your heart open. The delicate vibratos

of the violins carry you to a mood of heavenly bliss. An airy solo of the flute

draws you to the imagination, the notes flow like some jumping swallows dancing

and singing calling for the coming of Spring.

I like music from my childhood. My father often says when I was a baby I

would never go to sleep without soft, beautiful lullabies crooning around my

ears . Now music is a part of my life. When I feel tired, disappointed or in low

spirits, I usually turn to music. Music, nothing but only music can have so

wonderful an effect on my heart, on my pond of feeling.

Music comes with us. Where there is life, there is music. Where there is

music, there is hope. It lies in everyday life, in everyone’s life, in

everything we see, in everything we hear-- in the rhythm of the sea, in the

whisper of a gentle wind, in the melody of a bird’s singing, in the harmony of

village chimes. You can hear music wherever you may go . A man who doesn’t know

music will lose half the world. A nation that pays little or no attention to

music will be a sad nation. A world without music would be the one for the dead

and devils.

So dear friends, let’s open our arms to embrace music and enjoy it

throughout our lives. Love music and love life.

Thank you.

哪里有生活,哪里就有音乐

音乐是什么,无人能解释清楚。

想象此刻你正坐在富丽堂皇的音乐大厅里,乐队指挥手中的闪闪发亮的指挥棒在空中优雅的舞动。悠扬悦耳的音调飘扬在你的周围。

静静地闭上双眼,敞开心扉。小提琴精妙的振颤会把你带入到天堂祈福的心境;大提琴微弱低沉的叹息会使你想起一位老人在风中散步,沉浸在童年时代宁静和挚爱的回忆中;长笛轻快的独奏使你从想象中猛醒;流畅的音符像一群飞舞歌唱的燕子在呼唤春天的来临。

从童年时代音乐就是我的挚爱。父亲经常说,我在襁褓中,没有温柔甜美的摇篮曲在耳边低吟,就难以入眠。现在音乐是我生活的一部分。每当我感到疲倦,失望或情绪不振时,我就求助于音乐。音乐,除了音乐,没有什么对我的身心和情感有如此奇妙的影响。

音乐与我们同在,哪里有生活,哪里就有音乐;哪里有音乐,哪里就有希望。它存在于每个人的日常生活,存在于我们耳闻目睹的一切事物之中;存在于海的波涛,清风细语,悦耳鸟鸣,和谐的乡村钟声之中;无论你身在何处,都会听到音乐。一个不了解音乐的人将失去半个世界。一个不重视音乐的民族将是一个悲哀的民族。一个没有音乐的世界将是逝者和恶人生存的世界。

亲爱的朋友,让我们伸开双臂去拥抱音乐,在人生中享受音乐的乐趣。热爱音乐,热爱生活。

谢谢大家。

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篇17:MyBestFriend四年级英语作文及翻译

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四年级英语作文:My Best Friend

I have a best friend.

She has long,straight,black hair,big,black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind,she is cute,too. Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.

She favorite season is summer,because it‘s hot ,she can eat ice- cream.She like playing the piano ,reading books and singing songs.

Who‘s she? She is my best friend ---Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name,too---Angle.

译:

我有个个最好的朋友。

她有着长长的黑色直发,大大的黑眼睛和一个小鼻子。她很瘦,对人非常和蔼,她也很可爱。她的英语和语文非常好。她学习十分认真。

她最喜欢的季节是夏季,因为夏天很热,她能吃冰淇凌。她喜欢弹琴,读书和唱歌。

她是谁?她就是我最好的朋友——孙梦琪。她还有一个很好听的英文名——Angle.(安琪儿)

[My Best Friend四年级英语作文及翻译

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篇18:业余爱好的小学英语作文

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hobbies are very important to a person. without having any hobby, life wont be as colorful as it should be. i have a variety of hobbies, such as collecting stamps, playing musical instruments, reading, and doing sport activities.

when i am free, i will spend time on my hobbies. when i am in a blue mood, i will also do my hobbies to cheer myself up. hobbies can help us improve our moods. many hobbies requires devotion. for eample, when you play a musical instrument, you have to practice over and over in order to perform good music.

after a period if you still enjoy it, gradually it will become a hobby of yours. but, remember: a hobby is like gold under the ground; no hobby will come to you unless you dig it out yourself. if you can treat study as one of you hobbies, learning will be more enjoyable. i hope all of you can find your own hobbies and also have fun from them.

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篇19:不要浪费时间英语作文及翻译

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篇一:不要浪费时间

I am a senior school student。 Now,I am in grade two。 To be honest,Im not agood child or student。 I aiways think studying is very boring 。 And I m also lazy in my subjects。 But on the other hand,I never want to be a girl who has no knowledge for some things。Believe it or not, I m looking forward to being a diplomat of elact。 So I know I can not waste m y time to do something awful and terrible。。And frow now on ,Ill do what Ican to learn much better! I am so into English ,I hope you are the same as me 。

我是一名高中学生。现在,我在2年级。老实说,我不是agood儿童或学生。余aiways觉得学习是很枯燥。我米也懒,我科目。但另一方面,我从未想成为一个女孩谁没有一些things。Believe与否的知识,我米期待着身为elact外交官。所以我知道我不能浪费我的时间做一些可怕,可怕。。而佛柔现在开始,我将做什么ICAN在学习得更快!我成英文的话,我希望你像我一样。

篇二:关于养宠物的好处

My View on The Advantage of Keeping Pets。When it comes to the topic of keeping pets, some may think it is a waste of both time and money; some people, may find it is a great joy。 As for me, I hold that keeping pets can bring me happiness。

关于饲养宠物,有的人认为这既浪费时间也浪费金钱,而有的人则认为这是乐趣所在。至于我,我认为养宠物能带来快乐。

Firstly, keeping pets can keep us company when we feel lonely。 As we know that it is impossible for us to stay with others all the time, and sometimes we have to stay all by ourselves。 At this time we may feel lonely, if you have a pet, it will help to keep company with you。 You can play with your pet and regard it as your friend。

首先,宠物能在我们感觉孤独是陪伴我们,因为我们不可能时刻都有人相伴左右,而有的时候我们更愿意独处,这个时候可能会感觉孤独,如果有宠物,它就会是很好的陪伴。我们可以和动物一起玩,可以把它当朋友。

Secondly, keeping pets makes our world more harmonious。 Animals are good friends to us human beings; it will make our world more harmonious to build friendship with them。

其次,宠物能让世界更和谐。动物是人类的好朋友,和动物建立朋友的关系将会使我们的世界更加和谐。

Last but not least, keeping pets makes us more patience。 Animal needs careful cares, and we need bath them, feed them and take them out every day, which is time consuming。 If we have a pet and can do that every day, we will become more patient。

最后,动物会使我们更有耐心。动物需要细心的照料,我们要给它洗澡、喂饭,还要每天带出去遛遛,这都很费时。如果我们有宠物,并每天这样照料它,我们会更有耐心的。

In a word, keeping pets can keep us company, make our world more harmonious and make us more patient, so I think it is a great for us to keep pets。

总的来说,宠物能陪伴我们,让我们的世界更加和谐,并锻炼我们的耐心,所以我认为养宠物对于我们来说是很好的。

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篇20:我的父亲英语作文及翻译

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My Father

There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that were living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We cant have anything without him. Now Im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

父亲的光辉形象永远是一种生活在我的心里吧.”那是我亲爱的爸爸.在许多其他人的眼中,父亲似乎是一个很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特别,自从我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奋、敬业、保健、乐观.

作为一个农民,父亲在田里工作很努力.收获的季节,他每天从早到晚工作,直到午夜时.他很少像其他的农民享受休闲,即使在农场工作不多的时候.他选择一个繁忙的生活不情愿停下来。

父亲为了我们这个家奉献了他的全部.当我们贫穷时,他总是尽自己最大的努力来支持我们的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的学费.为整个家庭,为哥哥和我,他总是不停地在地里工作一整年.现在他因为过度辛勤工作已经有了一个满是皱纹的脸和白色毛发,岁,比任何其他与他相同的年龄的人.虽有这一切的事,父亲从不抱怨.这是他的全部奉献,我们正处在一个更好的生活.这是他的全部奉献,我的兄弟和我都能在大学读书。

父亲十分关心我们,和我母亲一样.每当有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是让我们吃自己吃少点.如果我和我兄弟生病,他会毫不犹豫地让拿些药给我们或带我们去看医生.我的母亲受严重的疾病.父亲照料得很认真.他从不让妈妈在家里和田间做什么繁重的工作.感谢他的母亲,她经常在别人面前称赞他为模范丈夫。

父亲是一个十分乐观的人.他从不抱怨我们贫穷的生活.他从未灰心丧气.他经常告诉我们,一切都会好起来的,如果我们有足够的信心.由于他的乐观,我们都是自信的面对我们的生活和工作。我们都认为,父亲是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我们能不能有什么东西.现在我继续进修大学远离的父亲.我怀念他.我经常看到他在我的梦.他的伟大的形象深深刻在我的脑海里.

评语: 本文作者以朴实的语言充满感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象,分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人,行文简洁流畅,结构清晰,组织有条有理,首尾呼应,给读者以强烈的感染力。 作者用词简洁精确,并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达,使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多复杂的句式,但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法,恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的变化,使文章更耐读。

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