2017年深圳中考英语作文通用20篇

一篇文章通常由开头、正文内容和结尾三个部分构成。的名师表示，这三个部分的比例安排要合理，只有合理的文章构成，才能拿到令人满意的分数。

文章的开头一般来说应尽量做到开门见山，用简单明白的叙述引出文章的话题，使读者了解文章要谈论什么，一下于引起读者的兴趣。

作文常见的开头形式大致有以下几种：

1、直叙主题开门见山

文章一开头就交待清楚文章的主题是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎样度假)的开头是：

I Spent my last vacation happily.

下面是题为“Honesty”(谈诚实)一文中的开头：

Honesty is one of the best virtues.An honest man is always trusted and respected.On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a "liar",and is looked upon by honest people.

2、交代文章背景开头

在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan” (去金山旅游)的开头：

The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.

3、 以回忆来开头

用回忆的方法来开头。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的开头是：

I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.

4、以概括的方式来开头

即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一个概括性的介绍。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(读书的快乐)的开头：

People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.

5、铺垫环境来开头

即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介绍的事物。如“An Accident”(一场事故)的开头是:

It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.

6、表述目的来开头。

在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个什么问题等。如“Pollution Control”(控制污染)的开头：

In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.

以上就是中考英语作文满分、高分分段的同学常使用的几种开头方式，您也可以依据自身的习惯来挑选适合自己的开头方式。不论用什么开头，目的都只有一个，那就是取得高分。

20**World University Games

The 26th World University Games, also named as the Little Olympic Games, will be hold in Shenzhen on August 23,20**.

The emblem ’’ the happy U ’’ which has no fixed meaning is very open in that people can imagine it varyingly. And it has evolved into a smiling face to be the mascot. Besides, the slogan of the game is ’’Start here’’ whereas the slogan of the volunteers’ watchword is ’’ I’m here ’’.

After its first being held in Italy in 1959,the World University Games has being developed rapidly.The first game for there to be only 45 participating countries.Then till the 18th World University Game which was organized in Japan in 1995 there were vast number of athletes from 162 countries competed in the game. Today, Shenzhen will set 24 contests to welcome the athletes from the whole world and we do hope the World University Game will be held successfully.

[关于深圳大运会的英语作文

This is my family.They are my mother,my father and me.My father is a teacher.He works in a school.He is of medium height and of medium build.He has shortstraight black hair.He looks young.Now he is reading books.

这是我的家庭。他们是我的母亲，我的父亲和我。我的爸爸是一位老师。他在一所学校工作。他中等身高，中等身材。他很高留着短而直的黑头发。他看起来很年轻。现在他正在看书。

My mother is a reporter.She works in a TV station.She is of medium height and a little thin.She has long curly black hair.She is very beautiful.Now she is watching TV.I am a student.I am tall and thin.I have long straight black hair.I am doing my homework,now.

我的母亲是一位记者。她在电视台工作。她中等身材，有点瘦。她有一头长长的黑发。她很漂亮。她现在正在看电视。我是一个学生。我又高又瘦。我有长而直的黑头发。我做我的家庭作业现在。

This is my family.

这是我的家人。

panda―the national treasure

panda is one of the scarcest animals. people in the world like it very much. there used to be many pandas in china long ago.

as the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer, pandas became less. but at present, the number of pandas is increasing year by year. there are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.

nowadays, the biggest nature park for panda in china is in sichuan. there is a research centre for nature and wild life there. scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.

1. Our world is full of happiness. 世界上充满了幸福。

2. Everybody is eager to happiness, feeling so well being of everyone. The supreme happiness of life is the conviction that we are love parents.人人都渴望得到幸福，人人都在感受幸福，生活中，最高的幸福就是拥有对父母的爱。

3. This is a small thing, but in my heart it is a big happiness.这虽然只是一件小事，但是在我的心里却是一个很大的幸福。

4. No rose without a thorn. 玫瑰都有刺。(没有十全十美)

5. Content is happiness. 知足常乐。

6. Happiness is always around us.幸福都在我们周围。

7. Love, give me happiness. There is still a long way for me to run. I believe that working hard will bring me a bright future; we will be the happiest people. 爱，给我幸福。 我还有很长的路要走。我坚信努力工作能给我带来光明的前途，我们将会是最幸福的人。

8. Our happiness from everything in life. 我们的幸福来自于生活中的每一件事。

9. Two brainstorming can usually think better than one and faster, too. 三个臭皮匠赛过诸葛亮。

10. Mother’s love is like a circle, it has no beginning and no ending.母爱像一个圈，它没有起点也没有终点。

11. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。

12. Time waits for no man. 时间不等人。

13. Laugh and the world laugh with you. Weep and you weep alone. 笑，全世界陪你一起笑。哭，你一个人哭。

14. It is easy to say things, but it is difficult to do them. / Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。

15. What’s more 更多的是….

16. No pains, no gains. 没有付出，就没有回报。

17. There are many beautiful flowers in the world, but in parent’s eyes, their children are the most beautiful of all.世界上有许多漂亮的花，但是在父母的眼里，他们的孩子是最漂亮的。

18. As the saying goes, you don’t know that happiness is until you lost it. 俗话说:直到失去了，你才直到幸福是什么。

19. Bacon said: “knowledge is power.” 培根说:“知识就是力量。”

20. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。

21. If you take a nap now, you will only have a dream. If you study hard now, you will achieve your dream (your dream will come true).如果你此时打盹，你将做梦。如果你此刻努力学习，你将梦想成真。

22. I just couldn’t believe my eyes. 我只是不能相信我的眼睛。

23. Time is valuable, we should cherish time.时间是宝贵的，我们应该珍惜时间。

24. Never give up during the difficult days and better time are sure to come some day. 在困境中绝不放弃，美好的日子总会到来。

25. If winter comes, can spring be far behind? 冬天来了，春天还会远吗?

26. Nobody is perfect, but everyone is different from others.人无完人，但每个人又有不同。

27. Parents are our first teachers. They teach usually lessons of life. 父母是我们的第一任老师，他们教我们人生的课程。

28. Life is like a piece of white paper, on which we may draw the newest and finest pictures. 生活就像一张白纸，我们可以在上面描绘出最新、最好的图片。

29. Hope is always around us. 希望总会有的。

30. Happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. 如果你用心感受，幸福就在我们周围。

31. As an old saying goes: “it’s never too late to learn.” 老话说:“活到老学到老。”

32. The man who laughs last laughs best. 笑到最后的才是笑得最好的。

33. Thought is the key which opens the door of the world. 想象是打开时间之门的钥匙。

34. How time flies! 光阴似箭。

35. Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸金。

36. No one can call back yesterday. 没有人能让昨日重现。

37. Nothing is impossible in the world if you put your heart on it. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。

38. Nothing is impossible if you work hard. 如果你努力学习，一切皆有可能。

39. Our life is full of moving stories among which there are the most beautiful stars shining in our life.我们的生活充满了令人感动的故事，它们就像是最美的星星在我们的生命当中闪耀。

40. Life is wonderful. And I also have lots of wonderful memories in my wonderful life. 生活是精彩的，在精彩的生活中我也有很多精彩的回忆。

What Can We Do for the Environment

our environment is becoming worse and worse，what can we do for the environment?I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem。

The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste。

In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

导语：健康对一个人的生命是很重要的，下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的相关英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢!

You can take away our money, house, car, or even our clothes and we can survive. But if our health was taken away, we would surely die. That is why we always try to eat in a healthy way and exercise regularly.

In order to eat healthily, I usually avoid eating food high in fat, like French fries or cookies. I also eat little meat. I eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit which are full of vitamins.Taking exercise every day helps us build a strong body. Regular exercise is an important part of keeping me healthy.Whats more, I think friends are an important part of ones health. Many studies show that people with a wide range of social contacts get sick less than those who dont. I always feel better when I am with friends than when I am alone. When I am with my friends, I always laugh. Laughing is also an important part of health. I like to laugh with my friends.

By eating properly and exercising regularly, I can keep my body at a proper weight and keep healthy. By spending time with my friends, I can keep my mind as well as my body happy. these things sound easy to do, but not many people can manage them. I think a strong will is necessary if we want to keep healthy.

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你可以拿走我们的钱，房子，汽车，甚至我们的衣服，我们可以生存。但是，如果我们的健康被带走，我们一定会死。这就是为什么我们总是尝试吃健康的方式和定期锻炼。

为了健康饮食，我通常避免吃高脂肪食物，如薯条或饼干。我也吃很少的肉。我吃很多蔬菜和新鲜的水果，富含维生素。每天锻炼有助于我们强健体魄。经常锻炼是保持健康的重要组成部分，而且我认为朋友是健康的重要组成部分。许多研究表明，社会接触广泛的人比不喜欢的人生病少。当我和朋友在一起的时候，我总是感觉比独自一人好。当我和朋友在一起的时候，我总是笑。笑也是健康的重要组成部分。我喜欢和我的朋友一起笑。

通过适当的饮食和经常锻炼，我可以保持我的身体在适当的体重和保持健康。花时间和朋友在一起，我可以保持我的身心健康。这些事情听起来容易做，但没有多少人可以管理他们。我认为坚强的意志是必要的，如果我们想保持健康。

As we know，water is very important to man，we cant live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people dont care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse，they pour dirty water into rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers，too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. And I think its a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water. I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can. For example，we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it. We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces. Its also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me!Only in this way can we live happily. If we dont save water，the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us. I believe if everyone makes a little effort，we can make a big difference.

The 21st century, the thought of the teenagers, we and our beloved one generation, will never be able to melt together, seems to have no why, I do not know why. Adults like to impose their ideas in a new generation of us, and we, must also accept the ideology of "unreasonable", if not accept, perhaps, in the eyes of an adult, our behavior is what is called a rebellious, not sensible, wings hard, but, you never know what we carry in our hearts, can only silently bear all this, buried our own thoughts, not move to the attraction.

We are the -- the future of The Times. We have our own dreams, we have our own in the future, we have our own life to live, all this, go to our own, you can never be with us life, the way back, but also to go on our own. Please let go of your generous hand, let us fly yourself.

Times are changing, the life also is changing. Different time, different people, have their own way. Dear, father, mother, we grow up, learn to walk, bumpy road ahead, lets face it alone, raising more than ten years, we wont forget, you also should have a rest.

二十一世纪，我们这些青少年的思想，与我们所敬爱的上一辈人，永远无法融在一起，似乎没有为什么，也不知道为什么。大人们喜欢把他们的思想强加在我们新一辈人的身上，而我们，也必须接受这种“无理”的思想，如若不接受，也许，在大人的眼睛里，我们的行为就是所谓的叛逆、不懂事、翅膀硬了，可是，你们永远不会知道我们心中所想的一切，只能默默地承受这一切，埋藏我们自己的思想，不动生色。

我们是这个时代的——未来。我们有自己的梦想，我们有自己的未来，我们有我们自己的生活要过，这一切，要我们自己去承担，你们永远不能陪伴我们一生，往后的路，还要靠我们自己去走。请你们放开你们那宽厚的手，让我们自己飞翔吧。

时代在变，生活也在变。不同的时代，不同的人，有自己的路。亲爱的——爸爸，妈妈，我们长大了，学会走路了，前面坎坷的路，让我们独自面对吧，十几年的养育之恩，我们不会忘记，你们也该休息休息了。

1.如今微信已成为我们生活中的一部分，尤其受到年轻人的欢迎。其优点如下：1.可以非常迅速地与朋友进行文字、表情等交流;2.可以与朋友分享图片、音乐、视频等;3.不仅能发送语音讯息，而且可以直接通话;4.使用时不受时间地点限制;5.使用时免费。

词数为80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Nowadays, WeChat has been a part of our life. It is becoming more and more popular with young people because of the following advantages. First, we can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly. Second, we can share pictures, music and videos with them. Third, we can not only send voice messages to them but also speak to them directly. Besides, we can use it in any time. Last but not least, we use it for free and can save money. In my view, although WeChat has improved our lives, it should be used properly. We shouldn’t lose ourselves in it.

中考英语试卷写作的分数各个省市有所不同，一般在15-20分之间。下面从阅卷老师的角度分析一下中考英语作文的得分点和扣分点。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。 2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。

一：先看一下扣分点：

1.内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“I want to do something for my school”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的;若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

2.字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。但是60字的作文能不能得高分?从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

3. 语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计;

4. 标点错误：每4个扣0.5.

二：加分点

除了这些扣分点，还有一些得分点：比如说作文的组织结构分，就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。

只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。例如，有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分

很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。所谓的书法并不需要写的很漂亮，符合3个简单的标准即可：没有斜体、没有连笔、涂改较少。

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As we all know，the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places，we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example，we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping，and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word，if everyone pays more attention to our environment ，there will be less pollution and our life will be better。“There is only one earth”，I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

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Each of us should stay healthy, which is the foundation of our activities. Here are some ways to stay healthy.

First, we should spend one to two hours a day in regular exercise; try to walk instead of ride. Second, we should eat some healthy foods such as vegetables, fruits and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body. When we are in trouble, try to relax our mood, listen to the soft music. It also enables us to maintain a good health. Finally there is a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can do follow these advice, I believe we can have a healthy body, a better life.

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我们每个人都应该保持健康,这是我们活动的基础。这里有一些方法来保持健康。

首先,我们应该每天花一两个小时在经常锻炼;尽量步行而不是骑。第二,我们应该吃一些健康的食物比如蔬菜、水果等等。他们可以帮助我们保持健康的身体。当我们陷入困境,试图放松我们的心情,听轻柔的音乐。它还能使我们保持身体健康。最后有一个好的睡眠也能保证我们一个健康的身体。我们应该每天睡7到8小时,保持充足的睡眠。如果我们可以遵循这些建议,我相信我们可以有一个健康的身体,更好的生活。

期中初二英语作文篇1

Everyone wants to know their future, but nobody knows it. I hope my future will like that. I think I will be an excellent lawyer in the future. I help many people who is in difficulty. I will help the people are in need, no matter they are rich or poor. Then I think I will have a good reputation among the society. In order to have a good body, I will do some exercise every week. My family will be proud of me and always stand behind me. I will work hard to reach my future. Ok, this is the future in my dream. What’ yours?

每个人都想知道自己的未来，却没有人可以知道它。我希望我的未来会这样的。我想将来我会成为一位出色的律师。我会帮助很多人有困难的人。我会帮助那些有需要帮助的人，无论他们是富人还是穷人。我会在社会中享有良好的信誉。为了身体健康，我每个星期都会做一些运动。我的家人为我感到骄傲，而且会永远支持我。我会努力实现那样子的未来。好了，这就是我梦想中的未来。你的是什么呢?

期中初二英语作文篇2

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Bird there is less and less fresh water in the world.Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking a car. We had better use shopping basketbets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. We should use both sides of the paper when we write. Dot use paper cups. At our school dinning room, use our own bowls and chopsticks instead of disposable ones. We can reuse the water and save the electricity.In a word, if everyone pays more attention to ourenvironment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.

"There is only one earth", I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

期中初二英语作文篇3

The leaves circled in the air and were written with a grateful movement, which was the trees thanks to the nourishment of the earth; the white clouds drifted in the blue sky and painted the picture of the sky, which was the blue sky Thanksgiving. Because Thanksgiving will have this colorful society, because Thanksgiving will have sincere friendship. Because thanksgiving let us know the true meaning of life - inscription

From the babys "wah-wah" to fall to nurture him grow up, parents spent a lot of effort and sweat, weaving the number of day and night; from primary school to junior high school, and even the number of teachers for his painstaking efforts , Quietly dedicated light and heat, burning their own, lit up others.

Thanksgiving is from the heart. As the saying goes, "dripping of grace, when the Yongquan phase reported." Moreover, parents, relatives and friends to pay you not only "a drop of water", but a vast ocean. Whether you handed a cup of warm tea after your parents were tired, handed a card on their birthday, and greeted and comforted them when they were lost. They often poured hard and energy for us, and why did we remember them Of the birthday, to experience their tired, and whether it is aware of the strands of silver, that trace of wrinkles. Thanksgiving need your heart to experience, to repay.

Thanksgiving is respectful. Marie Curie as a famous scientist, twice won the Nobel Prize, but she saw her primary school teacher at the meeting, with a bouquet of flowers to express her gratitude; great Mao Zedong also sent to the teacher in the holiday season Deeply grateful. Since ancient times the great man all have a grateful heart, grateful do not need to earth-shattering, just need your greeting, a call, a trace of emotion.

Thanksgiving is meaningful. Love to keep the world spinning. Parents pay far more than the mountains, than the sea deep, and as we only know rice to mouth, clothing to reach out. And it seems that there is a separate zone, let us become selfish, forget the parents have to pay, forget that the sound of happiness, learn to appreciate others is their own conscience, a filial piety, because it will have Harmony, there is happiness, there is respect between each other.

With a grateful heart, to look at the community, look at their parents, look at friends and relatives, you will find yourself how happy, let go of your mind, so start falling rain to wash your mind pollution. Learn to be grateful because it will make the world a better place and make life more fulfilling.

材料：据中国国家地震台网测定，北京时间2008年5月12日14时28分，在我国四川汶川发生的里氏8级特大地震，造成巨大的人员伤亡和财产损失，我们估计，地震造成的直接经济损失在4000-5000亿元之间。

据民政部报告，截至19日12时，四川汶川地震已造成69180人遇难，374008人受伤，失踪17406人。但无论如何，地震造成的直接经济损失远大于雪灾，灾后重建需要较长的时间。

身在灾区的同龄人，在校舍大面积倒塌的情况下，他们面临入学的困境，他们很想学习，但没有校舍，有的痛失亲人,有的财产损失极其严重……对此，作为同龄人的你们，一定有很多话想对他们说。

请“给灾区学生的一封信”为题，写一篇不少于600字的文章，注意书信格式。

Food safety is very important for every one of us, because food safety is related to the physical and mental health of each and every one of us.

We eat, for example, often eat junk food will cause great harm to the body. So the first thing to see if you eat food safety food, generally have the safety and production of a trademark can we eat, because of security and production of a trademark in general can guarantee food safety. If food has environmental protection sign, so much the better, because environmental protection sign of food to put it another way of green food, eat more security, and nutrition. So I suggest that we eat more green food.

In fact we all have a common bad habit, that is love to eat junk food.

What is junk food? We love to eat KFC, McDonalds, usually happy Tom inside of Fried food is junk food, and it is the small food is junk food sold outside the school gate.

Ill give you an example to eat KFC: there is a person, every day he is to eat KFC, the results longer than pig fat, ugly. Students often eat at the school gate shop in the small food also easy to cause the stomach is bad.

So we must not eat KFC and other 3 without the product.

食品安全对我们每一个人都很重要，因为食品安全关系到我们每一个人的身心健康。

例如我们吃东西的时候，经常吃到垃圾食品就会对身体造成很大的伤害。所以首先要看看你吃的食品是不是安全食品，一般要有安全商标和生产商标我们才能吃，因为安全商标和生产商标一般可以保证食品安全。假如食品有环保标志，那就更好了，因为环保标志的食品换一种说法就是绿色食品，吃了更安全，而且还有营养呢。所以我建议大家多吃绿色食品。

其实我们大家都有个共同的坏习惯，那就是爱吃垃圾食品。

那什么是垃圾食品呢?我们平常最爱吃的肯德基、麦当劳、开心汤姆里面的油炸食品就是垃圾食品，还有就是学校门口卖的小食品也是垃圾食品。

我给大家举一个吃肯德基的例子：有一个人，他每天都是吃肯德基，结果长的比猪还胖，多难看。同学们经常吃学校门口店子里的小食品也容易引起肠胃不好。

所以我们大家一定不要吃肯德基和其他的三无产品。

Shenzhen is a modern city with many places of interest.If you come to Shenzhen,you must visit the following places.The Window of the World is where you can see many famous “buildings” around the world such as the Eiffel Tower and the Tower of London.Shenzhen Happy Valley is a wonderful place for children to have fun.If you want to enjoy traditional

Chinese culture,you can visit Chinese Folk Culture Village.You will have a wonderful time in Shenzhen.

一、纵观近年各地中考英语写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、日记、书信、通知、便条等文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。下面结合一些常见的题型介绍一下写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。

1、以图表提供情景的作文要以“读”为主，首先要读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码、序号以及相互间的变化关系，对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括、去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性，尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不得有误。

2、以图画提供情景的作文应以“看”为主，通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、环境、数字等，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章，但要注意，文章不能停留在图画的浅表，而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵。

3、以提纲提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把各个提纲加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

4、以书信格式提供情景的作文。首先要了解书信的格式，英文书信格式与中文有所不同，(1)、一般在信纸的右上角写上写信人的地址和日期，地址应按从小到大的顺序排列；(2)、左边顶格写上收信人的姓名；(3)、正文部分；(4)、祝愿的话；(5)、写信人签名。信的内容一定要按所给的要求写，不要漏写。

二、各地的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面：整体印象、语言表达、词数规定等几方面内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取有加分点。当然用英文写作不同于用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到生词、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的异同性，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。

1、为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。

2、不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词你不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“have an accident”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。

3、注意不同语言的表达习惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“My ambition is to do/make a singer，”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”则表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”；又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspaper”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。

4、有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就要把平时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联词的使用，如“so that”、“not…but”“not only。。。but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。

5、最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，而且很多地区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。

三、最后将中考写作的基本步骤和技巧归纳为以下几个环节：

1、细心审题细读题目中每一项提示或观察所给的每一幅画，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。

2、理顺要点在所给提示或图上标出要点，然后按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图作文，则要按图构思，这样做既可避免要点遗漏，又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、构成框架将理顺的要点或每幅图画的含义加以连贯，构成写作的整体框架，进一步定人称、定时态语态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾。基本框架构成后，写作就有了把握。4、组织句子用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。

5、串句成篇将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文浑然一体，层次分明，过渡自然。6、检查修改文章草成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、习惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。

一个转身

大约十年前，周润发主演了一部电影叫《纵横四海》，里面有一个镜头至今记忆犹新：“周润发”在一次打斗中，失去了双腿，坐上了轮椅。他一直逃避着他爱的那个女人。而有一次，这个女人猝不及防地找到了他的住处，站在他的面前。他愣了一下，马上转动轮椅，转过身，背对女人，紧接着，他又迅速转过身来，望着女人，脸上竟是一片微笑，像深秋的阳光一样，温暖，迷人。那个女人流泪了没有?不记得了。如果是我，一定会在那一刻泪流满面———为那片刻之间的坚强和脆弱。

人生也是如此啊，有时候，我们只需要一个转身，只要几分钟时间，喘息片刻，作一个小小的调整，小小的停顿，然后就可以从容地将心底的悲伤换作脸上的笑容。

看过一个女作家写的文章，名字就叫不扶。说她在一个雨天，看到街上一个打扮入时的女人摔倒了，而她并没有去扶她，怕给她造成尴尬，怕使她更加难堪。像那个转身一样，只几秒钟时间，那个女人就从容站起，继续前行。

而许多时候，好心的人们不愿给我们转身的时间和自由，非要将我们的一切探个究竟不可，使我们无处躲藏。所以，我们只好将眼泪流在脸上，将脆弱和不堪呈现给别人———这样恰恰加重了我们的痛苦。

人，有些时候，实在需要一个转身，不被打搅地独自悲伤。

Nowadays, there are a considerable number of individuals who prefer to lead a low-carbon lifestyle which find expression in the fact that more and more commuters are using public transportation system in their daily life.

Low carbon lifestyle can endow us and our society with numerous benefits. Firstly, it goes beyond doubt that low carbon lifestyle contributes a lot to the environmental protection and it is a favorable way to slow down the rate of climate change of our earth, which also means a lot to our health.

We are supposed to undertake the responsibility to lead a low-carbon lifestyle, which is of great significance. And there is a diversity of measures we can take so as to lead such an environmental-friendly life. For one thing, we are expected to minimize the use of private cars, which emit a large amount of greenhouse gases. For another, we are supposed to cultivate the public awareness of energy conservation for energy in the world today is decreasing rapidly. For instance, we can turn off electrical appliances if not necessary as well as using renewable materials. Furthermore, at our leisure, we can seek opportunities to plant more trees which can absorb carbon-dioxide.

In brief, low-carbon lifestyle is nothing but the best choice for us and only in this way can we form a harmonious relationship with the environment.

如今,有相当数量的个体们喜欢领导一个低碳生活方式的表现,越来越多的通勤者使用公共交通系统在他们的日常生活。

低碳生活方式可以使我们和我们的社会有诸多益处。首先,它超越怀疑低碳生活方式很多有助于环境保护和它是一个有利的方式来减缓气候变化的速度,我们的地球,这也意味着很多我们的健康。

我们应该承担责任领导一个低碳生活方式,具有重要意义。和有一个多样性的措施,我们可以采取这样一个环保的生活。一方面,我们预计会减少私家车的使用,排放大量的温室气体。另一方面,我们应该培养公众对能源的节能意识是当今世界上迅速减少。例如,我们可以关掉电器如果没有必要使用可再生材料。此外,在我们的闲暇,我们可以寻找机会种植更多的树木可以吸收二氧化碳。

总之,低碳生活方式不过是我们的最佳选择,只有用这种方法我们才能形成一个和谐的关系与环境。