2017年深圳中考英语作文（汇集20篇）

As we all know，the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places，we cant see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do?How to protect our environmemt ?For example，we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping baskets not plastic bags when we go shopping，and we can use both sides of the paper when we write .In a word，if everyone pays more attention to our environment ，there will be less pollution and our life will be better。“There is only one earth”，I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

中考即"初中毕业和高中阶段招生考试"，是选拔考试，但又是建立在义务教育基础上的选拔;中考要考虑初中学生升入高中后继续学习的潜在能力，但高中教育还是基础教育的范畴。yuwenmi小编提供一些中考英语写作必备句子给大家，欢迎借鉴!

1.People equate success in life with the ability of operating computer .

人们把会使用计算机与人生成功相提并论。

2. In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.

在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。

3. In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

事实上，我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。

4. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.

我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。

5. People believe that computer skills will enhance their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.

人们相信拥有计算机技术可以获得更多工作或提升的机会。

6. The information Ive collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.

从这几年我搜集的信息来看，这些知识并没有人们想象的那么有用。

7. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation.

现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。

8. This is a matter of life and death--a matter no country can afford to ignore.

这是一个关系到生死的问题，任何国家都不能忽视。

9. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:

我同意后者，有如下理由：

10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides.

在给出我的观点之前，我想看看双方的观点是重要的。

11.There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem :the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

无可否认，空气污染是一个极其严重的问题：城市当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。

12.An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。

13.A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time .In fact ,it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study .As an old saying goes :All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy

一份适当的业余工作并不会占用学生太多的时间，事实上，把全部的时间都用到学习上并不健康，正如那句老话:只工作，不玩耍，聪明的孩子会变傻。

14.Any government which is blind to this point may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。

15.An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.

越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

16.When it comes to education ,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.

说到教育，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。

17.The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills ,which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.

大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。

18.It is indisputable that there are millions of people who still have a miserable life and have to fact the dangers of starvation and exposure.

无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人仍过着挨饿受冬的痛苦生活。

19.Although this view is widely held ,this is little evidence that education can be obtained at any age and at any place.

尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据表明教育能够在任何地点任何年龄进行。

20.No one can deny the fact that a person’s education is the most important aspect of his life.

没有人能否人这一事实:教育是人生最重要的一方面。

21.According to a recent survey ,four-million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

依照最近的一项调查，每年有4,000,000人死于与吸烟相关的疾病。

22.The latest surveys show that Quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework.

最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。

23.No invention has received more praise and abuse than Internet.

没有一项发明象互联网同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。

24.People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation.

人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

25.Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。

26.Nowadays ,many students always go into raptures at the mere mention of the coming life of high school or college they will begin. Unfortunately ,for most young people ,it is not pleasant experience on their first day on campus.

当前，一提到即将开始的学校生活，许多学生都会兴高采烈。然而，对多数年轻人来说，校园刚开始的日子并不是什么愉快的经历。

27.In view of the seriousness of this problem ,effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。

28.Proper measures must be taken to limit the number of foreign tourists and the great efforts should be made to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism.

应该采取适当的措施限制外国旅游者的数量，努力保护当地环境和历史不受国际旅游业的不利影响。

29.An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city .However ,this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents ,who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution.

越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，象犯罪和卖淫。

30.Many city residents complain that it is so few buses in their city that they have to spend much more time waiting for a bus ,which is usually crowded with a large number of passengers.

许多市民抱怨城市的公交车太少，以至于他们要花很长时间等一辆公交车，而车上可能已满载乘客。

Everyone has a dream, everyone dreams of each has its own characteristics.

My dream is to become a singer. Astronauts ya-ping wangs dream is when astronauts, soaring in the sky, after a test, 1 on 1 June 2013 live at 38 points, 5 ya-ping wang realized their dream. Dream is all the motivation, if did not have the power, then you will always be stepped in situ, power will let you constantly burning inner small universe, you want a perennial desire for a better life. Dream, can let you are not afraid of wind and rain, l fearless risk, keep moving forward.

Dancers Liao Zhi lost her legs in an earthquake, also lost daughter, hospitalized for 4 months, finally can was released from the hospital, but she must take prosthesis, thought it wont pain again, but she never thought with prosthesis is how much pain. Back to the home, want to go to the Wc, and calling to dad, mom, called for a long long time no one her. She remembered that mom and dad might not be home, so, she endured the pain with the prosthesis to the toilet. Just walked into a toilet and a load into the toilet, the hair is wet, look in the mirror before their mess, she decided to practice, have not yet learned to walk just learn to dance, in order to dream hard practice for six, seven years.

This reminds me of the dishes during the summer vacation, didnt stick to quit a few days. Will insist on a dream, the realization of the dream is not, make track for to dream on the road requires effort and sweat, and tears. In to abandon, do not give up. Vocabulary, dream, how beautiful dream, only constant efforts, constantly insist, to be courageous ya-ping wang, Liao Zhi insisted.

每个人都有一个梦想，每个人的梦想都各有特色。

我的梦想是当一名歌唱家。宇航员王亚平的梦想是当上宇航员，在天空中翱翔，经过一番的考验，就在2013年6月1住1日5时38分，王亚平实现了自己的梦想。梦想就是一切前进的动力，如果没有了动力，那你将永远的踏步走在原地，动力会让你不断的燃烧内心的小宇宙，激发你对美好生活向往生生不息的渴望。梦想，会让你不惧风雨l，无畏风险，不断前进。

舞蹈家廖智在一次地震中失去双腿，也失去了女儿，住了4个月的医院，总算可以出院了，但她必须带假肢，本以为不会再痛苦了，但她万万没有想到带假肢是有多么痛苦。回到了家，想上Wc，便叫爸爸，妈妈，叫了很长很长时间都没有人理她。她才想起爸爸妈妈可能不在家，于是，她忍着痛苦带着假肢走向了厕所。刚走进厕所便一头载进了马桶，头发也湿了，看着镜子前狼狈的自己，她便下定决心苦练，还没有学会走路就学会跳舞，为了梦想苦苦练习了六，七年。

这让我想起了在暑假里洗碗，没坚持几天就放弃了。有梦就要坚持，梦想的实现并非一朝一夕，追来梦想的道路上需要付出努力和汗水，甚至泪水。在抛弃，不放弃。梦想，是多么美好的词汇，梦想，只有不断的努力，不断地坚持，才能拥有王亚平的勇敢，廖智的坚持。

写作，作为中考英语三大重点模块之一，满分15分，是整张试卷中最难拿满分的部分，也是很多同学头疼的地方。

中考英语作文分四档：第一档（15—13分），第二档（12—9分），第三档（8—5分），第四档（4—0分），每一档都有具体的评分细则。

乐加乐中考研究中心胡赛楠老师强调：“充分认识到写作评分标准的重要性，按照标准要求规范自己的写作并多加修改，才能做到知己知彼、百战不殆。”

首先，审题要准。要点齐全，8分以上；要点不全，直接进入三类文；

其次，一档文应“观点正确”“语言准确”。“观点正确”是文章要积极向上，不可出现反动消极言论；所谓“语言准确”是要忠诚于词汇的惯用法和辨析，要有非常好的文字功底才能达到。

最后，第一档的“句式多样，词汇丰富”与第二档的“语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要”不同，要求更多的句式和词汇。因此，应在作文中适量使用定语从句、感叹句、倒装句、祈使句等特殊句型；此外，一二档文的差别还在于“逻辑性”，在句式、词汇都相当的基础上，逻辑性强的文章容易得高分。

教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。

问：“哪十字？”

“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！”

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be? him one day!

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, whats more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！

Honesty Is Gold（诚实是金）

Honesty means speakingthe truth and being fair and upright in act. He who lies and cheats is dishonest.: Those who gain fortunes not by hard labour but by other means is dishonest.

Honesty is a good virtue. If you are honest all the time,youll be trusted and respected by others. A liar is always looked down upon and regarded as a black sheep by the people around. Once you lie, people will never believe you even if you speak the truth.

However, in the tide of commodity economy today, it seems that more and more people believe in money at the sacrifice of honesty. To them, among such things as health, beauty, m6ney, intelligence, honesty, reputation and talent, honesty is the only thing that can be east away. They dont understand or pretend not to understand that honesty is the biggest fortune humans own, and that it is the prerequisite for doing everything well. I think these people areto be pitied.

In short, honesty is gold. Honest, your reputation will become great;dishonest, your name will be spoiled and your personality degraded. Therefore, we should never make such an excuse as "A little dishonesty is only a trifle thing. We should eradicate immediately the seed of dishonesty once it is sowed in our minds.

谚语是广泛流传于民间的言简意赅的短语，多数反映了劳动人民的生活实践经验，而且一般都是经过口头传下来的。它多是口语形式的通俗易懂的短句或韵语。下面是语文迷小编精心整理的英语考试中常用的谚语，希望你喜欢。

1.Asking costs nothing 问人不费分文。

2.Ask me no questions and I will tell you no lies你不问我，我就不会说谎话。

3.The tongue is boneless but it breaks bones 舌无骨却折断骨。

4.A good name is easier lost than won名誉失之易，而得之难。

5. Every coin has two sides 每个硬币都有两面，比喻事物的两面性。

6. The winter is coming and the spring is not far 冬天已经临近了,春天还会远吗?

7. Failure is the mother of success 失败是成功之母。

8. Practice makes perfect 熟能生巧。

9.Every profession produces its own best行行出状元。

10.Today must borrow nothing of tomorrow 今日事今日毕。

11.Constant dropping wears the stone 滴水穿石。

12.Experience is the mother of wisdom经验是智慧之母。

13.Actions speak louder than words 行动比语言更响亮。

14.From small beginnings comes great things 伟大始于渺小。

15.Money spent on the brain is never spent in vain 智力投资绝不会白花。

16.Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand脑中有知识，胜过手中有金钱。

17.The voice of one man is the voice of no one 一个人的声音没有力量。

18.A great ship asks for deep waters大船要走深水。

19.While there is life, there is hope有生命便有希望/留得青山在，哪怕没柴烧

20.Two heads are better than one 一人不及二人智;三个臭皮匠，胜个过一个诸葛亮。

21.Wise men learn by other mens mistakes; fools by their own聪明人从别人的错误中学得教训;笨人则自己付出代价。他山之石可以攻玉。

22.Good company on the road is the shortest cut 行路有良伴就是捷径。

23.It takes all sorts to make a world 世界是由各种不同的人所组成的。

24.If a thing is worth doing it is worth worth doing well如果事情值得做，就值得好好做。

25.Nothing great was ever achieved without enthusiasm无热情成就不了伟业。

26.Great works are performed not by strength but by perseverance没有恒心只有力量是完不成伟业。

27.It is never too late to learn 活到老，学到老。

28.It is never too late to mend 亡羊补牢，犹时未晚。

29.The secret of success is constancy of purpose成功的秘诀在于持之于恒。

30.Misfortunes never come alone/single祸不单行。

31.Misfortunes come on wings and depart on foot遭祸容易脱祸难。

32.Misfortunes tell us what fortune is不经灾难不知福。

33.To an optimist every change is a change for the better对于乐观者总是越变越好。

34.Truth never fears investigation事实从来不怕调查。

35.A good medicine tasks bitter良药苦口。

36.Great minds think alike 英雄所见略同。

37.Storms make trees take deeper roots风暴使树木深深扎根。

38.Live and let live 自己生活也让别人生活。

39.Better late than never 迟做总比不做好;晚来总比不来强。

40.A bold attempt is half success勇敢的尝试是成功的一半。

41.All things are difficult before they are easy 凡事必先难后易。

42.What we acquire without sweat we give away without regret得之不费力，弃之不可惜。

43.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart只要有一颗意志坚强的心，没事不成。

44.Work makes the workman勤工出巧匠。

45.Constant dropping wears the stone 滴水穿石。

46.He that can have patience, can have what he will唯坚韧者始能遂其志。

47.Self-distrust is the cause of most of our failures我们绝大多数的失败都是因为缺乏自信之故。

48.The talent of success is nothing more than doing well whatever you do without a thought of time成功之路没它，唯全力投入工作，而不稍存沽名钓誉之心。

49.To read without reflecting is like eating without digesting读书不思考，犹如吃饭不消化。

50.The important thing in life is to have a great aim, and the determination to attain it人生之要事在于确立伟大的目标与实现这目标的决心。

51.One of these days is none of these days有这么一天就是没有这么一天。/吾生待明日，万事成蹉跎。

52.Every horse thinks its own pack heaviest每匹马都认为自己所负的背包最重。

53.Nothing down, nothing up 无下则无上。/不经历风雨，怎么见彩虹?

54.A good book is your best friend 好书如挚友。

55. Actions speak louder than words 事实胜于雄辩。

56. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit 吃一堑，长一智。

57. A good beginning is half done 良好的开端是成功的一半。

58. Dont put off till tomorrow what should be done today 今日事，今日毕。

59. Time and tide wait for no man 时不我待。

中考英语作文难不难？其实不难，大部分同学都能得到12分以上，13、14分也是平常，但是要想得到15分甚至以上，就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上？下面是经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流，对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗？实际考试中，许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态，取得高分呢？

归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升，必须进行多次的写作练习。因此，必须合理地设置训练步骤，遵循从初级到高级，从简单到复杂的原则去练习，经过一段写作实践之后，写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

中考英语作文对考生的要求有四点：1、内容要完整。2、语句流畅。3、没有语法错误。4、书写规范。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏，分数是最直接的评分标准，也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准？什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章？

评分标准：

(1)整篇作文满分20分，其中内容8分，语言8分，结构4分。

(2)内容贴切，句子流畅，用语准确，加整体印象分1分。

(3)不满60个词，少1——5个词扣0.5分，6——10个词扣1分。

(4)所有给出问题涉及的三项内容，每少一项扣3分。

(5)每个拼写，大小写，标点符号等错误扣0.5分；同一的拼写错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

(6)语法错误每项扣1分，同一错误不重复扣分，扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分)：

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇；

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

内容(8分)：(总、分)论点、论据支持句；简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分)：

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰；

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系；

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握；

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

三、扣分

内容方面：要点缺失，可酌情扣分。比如中考作文“Iwanttodosomethingformyschool”，若没有写一件具体的事情，是要扣3分以上的；若写的事情太过于虚幻，没有实际内容，也会扣1-2分。

字数：少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

中考英语作文要求60字以上，标点符号不算，少了就要扣分。

但是60字的作文能不能得高分？从我们拿到的实例作文来看，16分以上的作文，没有少于75字的，甚至少于80字的也少之又少。

当然，也极少有超过100字的，因为中考试卷的短线格一共80个，在格子下面大约还有2行的空间，可以加20字左右，再多阅卷人就很难看清了，也会影响卷面的美观。

所以，同学们如果想让作文得到高分，最好是让字数在75-100字之间。

语法和拼写错误：每个扣0.5，重复错误不计；

标点错误：每4个扣0.5。

四、加分

作文的组织结构分。就是根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。只要文章中有1个亮点，基本就可以争取到1分(3分的文采分是很难全部拿到的)。而这1分的亮点，是可以提前准备的。

“万金油”式的复杂句型，例如强调句型、only相关的倒装句等，只要同学们多操练几次，几乎是一定能用到作文当中，从而为自己争取到这1分。

其次就是卷面分。很多家长和同学，尤其是部分书法并不是十分整洁的同学，都会关心是否真的有“卷面分”的存在。虽然在阅卷标准里面并没有卷面分这一项，但是这个分数却真切地反映在了同学们的分数里面。

据阅卷老师的经验，在阅卷的时候并不是按这3个部分逐项打分的，而是在第一遍读完全文之后，心里已经形成了一个“印象分”，然后再细读第二、三遍，把印象分分配到各个打分部分。

因此，这个“印象分”就非常重要，而同学们的书法，也正是在这个环节，影响到了自己的分数。所以初三的考生，如果书法不好，一定要注意。

一、写作决窍

总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

二、写作步骤

1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。

2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

4.先草稿，后抄写。

三、作文案例

[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)

Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

·What exactly your hobby is;

·When and how you became interested in this hobby;

·Why you enjoy your hobby;

·About your hopes and plans for the future.

写作要求：

1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

3.词数60-80.

[学生解答A]

My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

③有少量错误。

[学生解答B]

My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improvemy writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.

①开门见山、点题。

②真情流露，理由充分。

③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、

④巧妙使用句型以表决心。

[点评]：档次13-14分。

①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。

②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。

③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。

[高分突破]

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

A

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest …

B

阅读电视广告词：“If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

提示：

1.生活离不开水。

2.可饮用水在减少。

3.水污染严重。

4.应保护水源，再利用水。

思路点拨与参考答案

A. [思路点拨]：

①文体：记叙文。

②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对比的写作手法，增加感染力。

③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds. Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to preventstarting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.

B. [思路点拨]：

①夹叙夹议(说明现状，谈谈感想)。

②时态：一般现在时态。

③广告词的含义——水很重要，应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

Water is very important to humans.We can’t live without water.The water we can drink is falling.But some people don’t seem to care about it.They waste a lot of water.They pour dirtywater into rivers and lakes.Water pollution is getting more and more serious.So we must do something to stop the pollution.We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.If we don’t do this,the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.

文章摘要：1. 遇见你的那一刻，世界轰然倒塌；两人抬起头有点不相信的盯着我。英语如何写出中考高分作文儿子出院那天，已经夕阳西下了，他笑了笑对儿子说：乖啊，不怕，有爸爸呢，我还有办法。关于事业:没有什么高低贵贱之分,人人为我我为人人,只要合法,能干什么就干什么,口袋没钱最丢人,死要面子活受罪的事千万别干.！

①文体：记叙文。

②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.

③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。

内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓信息，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学B灵活使用连词so...that，so，little by little，when，so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to，became interested in，come true......等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学A也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。

四、培养途径

1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。

2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。

3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。

4.自己纠错，写下反思。

五、备考演练

缙云山是重庆著名的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的信息写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。

写作要求：

1.词数在100左右。

2.条理清楚，语句通顺。

3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest ...

趁现在，没有孩子，没有牵绊，我也不贪图他什么，该是离婚最好的时机吧；他还能自己走路，朋友却已经站不起来了。英语如何写出中考高分作文12、诚实是上策。他们用钱去做坏事!多么痛的领悟，你曾是我的全部，只愿你挣脱情的枷锁 ，爱的束缚，任意追逐，别再为爱受苦。最后只能采取自愿加班的方式。

our city is a new and developing city, and was built at the beginning of 1980s. the infrastructure for water, gas, electricity and other energy in this area is complete and sufficient.

from here one can travel to any place by sea, by air or by land. and there is a highway leading to the capital, beijing. besides there are many other advantages for the investors to work here. for example, the areas around this city are rich in natural resources.

the public order is very nice and so on. the most impor ant. thing is that the government of this city supports foreign investors in many respects. in a sentence, this city is filled with enthusiasm and vigor. it is a good place for investors.

chinese new year is a chinese traditional festival. we also call it the spring festival. it is on lunar january 1st.

on new year’s eve, all the people sit around the desk and have a big family dinner. there are some vegetables, some fish, some meat, some fruits and some drink like juice, coke, pepsi and some nice wine. overall, this is a good and delicious dinner. after dinner, we always watch tv new year progammes. we have a wonderful evening on new year’s eve.on the first day of the spring festival, most of people get up early and say “happy new year” to each other. for breakfast, people often eat dumplings and baozi. after breakfast, people often make many delicious foods, and children often play cards, computer games and fireworks. on the second and third day, we visit friends and relatives.

everyone is busy on chinese new year, and everyone is happy, too.

望着那女孩离去时活泼的倩影，我一时陷入沉思当中.那女孩教会我如何为心灵打开一扇窗

夏天被一声声蝉鸣迎了过来，不过打心底我恨透了夏天，汗流浃背，炎热不给你一丝逃跑的机会.所以一到夏天我的心也跟着浮躁了起来。

一天，我从补习班出来，到了车站，太阳如一个油淋淋的鸡蛋黄淋了下来，天空似乎发出一种类似喘息的声音，车站牌似乎要被烤焦，我望着远远的筼筜湖水似乎也要沸腾起来。“什么鬼天气!”我嘟囔着。

不过我的救星来了，一辆公车开了过来，我不顾一切跳了上去，找了一个位置一屁股坐下.不知何时旁边又坐了个比我小两三岁的女孩子，手中和我一样拿着一瓶矿泉水瓶，天气太热了，我早早就将水一饮而尽。

“哥哥，你能帮我打开一下窗户吗?”一声甜如蜜糖的话从旁边传了过来，我侧过脸，只见那女孩扎着两条麻花辫，有瓷器般光洁白皙的皮肤，脸上浮着一股若有若无的笑意。

“开什么窗，车里开着空调，一开窗岂不热煞我也?”我调侃道。

小女孩用手指指向窗外，示意向外看.映入眼中，像是一个巨大的麻袋，似乎装着不少塑料瓶，视线向下移，竟是一个矮小的老人，背弯得像个虾米，皮肤被烈日烤的焦黑，光着脚行走着，五官聚拢，表情痛苦，显然，他以捡破烂为生。

公车正遇到交通拥堵，老人越来越靠近，我转过脸，看见女孩那双清澈得如清泉的眼瞳，怔住了。

红灯转成绿灯，我好像被针刺了似的一个激灵，打开窗户，女孩将手中的瓶子递放在我手中，老人接住这两个瓶子，抬起头，给了我们一个和善的微笑。汽车启动了，我看见老人的背影渐行渐远，似乎读懂了些什么。

当一个人把自己的心窗轻轻推开，又将自己的帮助献给他人，

从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment” 为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。

内容包含：(1).在购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋; (2).尽可能地再利用使用过的课本;(3).离开教室应关灯;(4).最好走路或骑自行车上学; (5).简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等. 参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment our environment is becoming worse and worse, what can we do for the environment? I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem. The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste. In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

3.为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词; 1.save water, the source of life, protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it; 2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines; 3. save forests, useful ,stop cutting down; 4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources

参考作文：

Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. In order to protect them ,something must be done. Save water. Water is the source of life. No water, no life. So it’s very important for us to do so .Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it. Save electricity. It is crucial. We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it. Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working. Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in. Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans , paper, bottles, and so on. We can save resources in this way. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.

参考译文：

尽管世界发展更快、更好,地球上的资源得到越来越少。为了保护他们,必须得做点什么。要节约用水,水是生命之源。没有水,就没有生命。所以这对我们来说是非常重要的。我们不仅应该保护饮用水和停止污染,但也充分利用它。节约用电。它是至关重要的。我们无法想象没有它的生活将是什么样子。每个人都应该尽力节约用电。别忘了关掉灯或其他电动机器当我们完成工作。拯救森林。他们是有用的。请停止切割下来,转而使用再生纸。让我们的世界一个住在绿色。回收有用的垃圾。大量的垃圾可以回收罐、纸、瓶子、等等。以这种方式我们可以节省资源。我相信我们可以让世界变得更美好。

There’s no doubt that my mother gives all her love to me. I do believe she is a great person who makes my life beautiful and meaningful.

She is an easygoing and kind woman with bright eyes and a lovely smile. Although she is often busy, I still feel that I am taken good care of by her. It’s a great pleasure to chat with her when I get into troubles. She always encourages me not to give up and tries to cheer me up by coming up with good solutions. In addition, I am fascinated by her cooking and writing.

With her love, I feel like a fish swimming happily in a beautiful sea. I’ll cherish her love forever.

[我的母亲英语中考作文

Guyu twenty-four solar term of the sixth year solar term, as the sun reaches 30 degrees for the rain, "rain from the valley". "The filial piety" Qi Wei - aid God said: "after fifteen days Qingming, Guyu Chen refers to the Big Dipper, as, in March, said Yu Sheng hundred valley water is clean."

由于谷雨节气后降雨增多，空气中的湿度逐渐加大，此时我们在养生中应遵遁自然节气的变化，针对其气候特点进行调养。谷雨节气后是神经痛的发病期，如肋间神经痛、坐骨神经痛、三叉神经痛等。同时由于天气转温，人们的室外活动增加，北方地区的桃花、杏花等开放;杨絮、柳絮四处飞扬，过敏体质的朋友应注意防止花粉症及过敏性鼻炎、过敏性哮喘等。在饮食上应减少高蛋白质、高热量食物的摄入。

Because after Guyu solar term rainfall, air humidity gradually increased, so we should change followed the natural solar term in health, nursed back to health according to the climate characteristics. Guyu solar term is the incidence of neuralgia, sciatica, such as intercostal neuralgia, trigeminal neuralgia. At the same time, because of the weather turns warm, peoples outdoor activities increased, the northern region of the peach blossom, apricot blossom is open; Yang Xu catkins, flying around, atopy friend should pay attention to prevent allergy and allergic rhinitis, allergic asthma. In the diet should reduce the intake of high protein, high calorie foods.

春季，肝木旺盛，脾衰弱，谷雨前后15天及清明的最后3天中，脾处于旺盛时期。脾的旺盛会使胃强健起来，从而使消化功能处于旺盛的状态，消化功能旺盛有利于营养的吸收，因此这时正是补身的大好时机。但是补要适当，不宜过，此时进补不能像冬天那样，应适当食用一些补血益气功效的食物。这样不仅可以提高体质，还可为安度盛夏打下基础。谷雨前后还适宜食用一些能够缓解精神压力和调节情绪的食物。多吃一些含B族维生素较多的食物对改善抑郁症有明显的效果。

In the spring, liver wood exuberant, spleen weakness, Guyu before and after 3 days 15 days and the last in the spleen, in a strong period. Spleen stomach the strong will be strong, so that the digestive function in a strong state, strong digestive function is conducive to the absorption of nutrients, so it is a good time to make up the body. But the compensation should be appropriate, should not be too, this time not as winter tonic, should be appropriate to eat some blood and Qi foods. It can not only improve the physique, but also lay the foundation for their summer. Guyu before and after eating some also suitable to relieve mental stress and emotional regulation of food. Eat some more food containing vitamin B has a significant effect on improving the depression.

1.as…as 和……一样

中间必须用形容词或副词原级。例如：

This classroom is as big as that one. 这间教室和那间一样大。He runs as fast as Tom. 他和汤姆跑的一样快。

否定结构：not as/so…as,“不如……,和……不一样”。上面的两个句子可分别改为：

This classroom is not as/so large as that one。

He doesn’t run as/so fast as Tom。

练习：我的书包和你的一样好。 他的英语说的和你一样好。

2. as soon as 一……就……

用来引导时间状语从句。若主句是一般将来时，从句要用一般现在时。例如：

I’ll tell him the plan as soon as I see him. 我一看到他就告诉他这个计划。

He’ll go home as soon as he finishes his work. 他一完成工作就回家。

3. be busy/enjoy/hate/go on/finish doing sth. 忙于/喜欢/讨厌/继续/完成做某事

在enjoy, finish, hate, go on, be busy等词语后，一般用动词-ing形式作宾语。例如：

Lin Tao is busy making a model plane. 林涛忙着做飞机模型。

My mother enjoys taking a walk after supper. 我妈妈喜欢晚饭后散步。

I hate watching Channel Five. 我讨厌看五频道。

When someone asked him to have a rest, he just went on working. 当有人让他休息一会儿时，他仍继续工作。

I have finished writing the story. 我已经写完了故事。

4. fill…with用……装满， be filled with 充满了……, be full of 充满了

①be filled with 说明由外界事物造成的此种状态，表示被动。例如：

The box is filled with food. 盒子里装满了食物。

②be full of说明主语处于的状态。此外，还可表示程度，意为“非常”。例如：

The patient’s room is full of flowers. 那个病人的房间摆满了花。

The young man is full of pride. 那个年轻人非常骄傲。

③这两种结构还可以相互改写。例如：

I fill the box with food. The box is full of food。

5. be good/bad for 有利于/有害于…… 此句型是：be+adj.+for+n。结构。例如：

Doing morning exercises is good for your health。做早操对你的健康有益。

Always playing computer games is bad for your study. 总玩电脑游戏对你的学习不利。

6. be used to(doing) sth. 习惯于……

后必须接名词或动名词，可用于现在、过去、将来的多种时态。be 可用get,become来代替。 例如：He is used to life in the country。(He is used to living in the country。)他习惯于乡村生活。

He will get used to getting up early. 他将会习惯于早起。

注意：be used to do 的意思是“被用来做……”。例如：Wood is used to make paper。木材被用来造纸。

7. both…and…两者都…… 用来连接两个并列成分;当连接两个并列主语时，其后谓语动词用复数。

例如： Both the students and the teachers will go to the History Museum tomorrow。不论老师还是学生明天都会去历史博物馆。

8. can’t help doing sth. 禁不住做某事 help在此的意思是“抑制，忍住”，其后接动词-ing形式。例如：

His joke is too funny. We can’t help laughing. 他的笑话太有趣了，我们禁不止笑了起来。

听到这个坏消息，她禁不住哭了起来。

9. sth. costs sb. some money 某物花费某人多少钱

此句型的主语是物。cost一词带的是双宾语，它的过去式、过去分词和原型一样。

This book cost me five yuan. 这本书花了我五元钱。

10. either…or… 不是……就是……,或者……或者……

用来连接两个并列成分，当连接并列主语时，谓语动词与邻近的主语保持一致。

You may either stay here or go home. 你可以呆在这儿，也可以回家。

Either she or I am right. = Either I or she is right. 不是她对就是我对。

要么你去要么他必须去。 Either you or he to go。

11. enough (for sb。) to do sth. 足够……做……

在此结构中，for用来引出不定式的逻辑主语。例如：

The ice isn’t thick enough for you to walk on. 这冰还没有厚到你可以在上面走的程度。

他年龄做够大，可以自己照顾自己了。

12. feel like doing sth. 想要做……

此处like为介词，后面跟动词-ing形式。此句型与would like to do sth。同义。例如：

I feel like drinking a cup of milk. 我想喝一杯牛奶。

Do you like taking a walk? 你想不想去散步?

13. feel/find/think it adj./n. to do sth. 认为某事……

在此结构中it为形式宾语，不定式短语作真正的宾语。例如：

I find it very interesting to play football. 我发现踢足球很有趣。

She thinks her duty to help us. 她认为帮助我们是她的职责。

14. get ready for sth./ to do sth。

Get ready for sth。意为“为某事做准备”，get ready to do sth。“准备做某事”例如：

We are getting ready for the meeting. 我们正在为会议做准备。

They were getting ready to have a sports meet at the moment. 他们那时正准备开运动会。

15. get/receive/have a letter from 收到……的来信

相当于hear from 例如： Did you receive a letter from John?你收到约翰的来信了吗?

I got a letter from my brother yesterday. 我昨天收到了我弟弟的一封来信。

16. had better (not) do sth. 最好(别)做某事

had better为情态动词，其后需用动词原形。had better常用缩写，变成’d better，其否定形式是在其后直接加not。例如：We had better go now. = We’d better go now. 我们最好现在走吧。 You’d better take a rest. 你最好休息一下。 You’d better not go out because it is windy. 今天刮风，你最好别出去了。

17. have sth. done 使(某事)完成，使发生 (动作由别人完成)

sth。为宾语，done为过去分词作补语。例如：

We had the machine repaired. 我们请人把机器修好了。

注意区分： We have repaired the machine. 我们(自己)已经修好了机器。

18. help sb. (to) do sth./with sth. 帮助某人(做)某事

其中的to可以省略。例如：I often help my mother with housework。我常常帮助妈妈做家务。

Would you please help me (to) look up these words? 请你帮助我查查这些词好吗?

19. How do you like……? 你认为……怎么样?

与what do you think of …?同义。 例如：How do you like the weather in Beijing?你认为北京的天气怎么样? 你觉得这部新电影如何?

―What do you think of your boss? ―He is strict with us。

20. I don’t think/believe that… 我认我/相信……不……

其中的not是对宾语从句进行否定而不是对主句(否定前移)。that可省略。例如：

I don’t think it will rain. 我认为天不会下雨。

I don’t believe the girl will come. 我相信那女孩不会来了。

我认为他并不聪明。

21. It happens that… 碰巧……

相当于happen to do。例如： It happened that I heard their secret。

可改写为： I happened to hear their secret. 我碰巧听到了他们的秘密。

22. It’s/has been +一段时间+since从句 自从某时起做某件事情已经一段时间了。

该句型中since引导的时间状语从句常用一般过去时。例如：

It’s twenty years since he came here. 他来这里已经20年了。

It has been six years since he married Mary. 他和玛丽结婚已经六年了。

如果since从句中的谓语动词是延续性动词，则表示“从该动作结束起一直到现在的时间”。 例如： It’s three days since he stayed here. 他离开这儿有三天了。

我搬家到郑州已经20多年了。 since I moved to Zhengzhou。

23. It is +adj./n. + for sb. to do sth. 做某事对某人来说……

It是形式主语，真正的主语是不定式to do sth., for sb. 是不定式的逻辑主语。例如：

It’s not easy for us to study English well. 对我们来说学好英语并不容易。

It’s a good idea for us to travel to the south. 去南方旅行对我们来说是个好主意。

对我来说把英语学好非常重要。 to learn English well。

24. It’s + adj. + of sb. to do sth。

It是形式主语，to do sth。是真正的主语， of sb. 是逻辑主语，当表语(即形容词)能对逻辑主语描述时，常用介词of,而不用for。例如：It’s very polite of you to give your seat to old people. 你给老人让座，非常有礼貌。 It’s very kind of you to help me。

你能来车站接我真是太好了。 to pick me up at the station。

25. It seems/appears that… (在某人看来)好像……

此句中的it是主语，that引导的是表语从句。例如：It seems that he is lying. 看样子他好像是在撒谎。 It appears to me that he never smiles。

看样子要下雨了。 it’s going to rain。

26. It is +数词+metres/kilometers long/wide… ……是多少米(公里)长(宽)

用来表示物体的长(宽，高)，如数词大于一，名词要用复数。例如：

It is 20 metres long from this end to that end. 从这端到那端有二十米长。

27.It’s time for sb. to do sth. 是某人干某事的时候了

it是形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to do sth.。for sb./sth。是逻辑主语。例如：

It’s time for the child to go to bed. 孩子该睡觉了。

比较下面两种结构：① It’s time for + n. 例如： It’s time for school。

②It’s time to do sth. 例如： It’s time to go to school. 我们该学习英语了。

28. It takes sb. some time to do sth. 花费某人多少时间做某事

it是形式主语，真正的主语是动词不定式to do sth.。例如：

It takes her fifteen minutes to walk to the bus stop from here. 从这儿走着到公交车站将花费她15分钟。

It took the old man three days to finish the work. 那个老人花了三天时间完成这项工作。

我上学坐公交车要花半个小时。

29. keep (on) doing sth. 一直坚持做某事

keep doing sth。一般用于静态动词。keep on doing sth。意为“继续不停地做某事”，一般用于动态动词，但二者的区别并不是很严格，有时可以互换。例如：

Don’t keep on doing such foolish things. 不要再做这样的傻事了。

He kept sitting there all day. 他整天坐在那里。

30. keep…from doing sth. 阻止，使免于做某事

相当于stop…from doing sth., prevent…from doing sth.。在主动句中，stop和prevent后面的from可以省略，但在被动结构中，from不可以省略。例如：

Please keep the children from swimming in the sea. 请别让孩子到海里游泳。

The big noise outside my room stopped me from doing my homework. 屋外巨大的噪音使我不能做作业。

我会尽最大努力阻止他抽烟。I’ll try my best to 。

31. keep sb. doing sth. 让某人一直做某事

不可和keep sb.from doing sth。结构混淆。

例如：Why do you keep me waiting for a long time? 你为什么让我等了很长时间?

32. make sb. do sth. 使某人干某事

make意为“使”时，其后要有不带to的动词不定式。

例如：He made me work ten hours a day. 他迫使我每天工作10小时。

注意：上句如改为被动语态，则work 前的to不能省略。例如：I was made to work ten hours a day。

上个星期天爸爸让我做了一天的作业。

33. neither…nor… 既不……也不……

当连接两个并列主语时，谓语动词与邻近的主语取得一致(就进一致原则)。例如：

Neither we nor Jack knows him. 我们和杰克都不认识他。

He neither knows nor cares what happened. 他对发生的事情不闻不问。

34. not…until… 直到……才

until后可跟名词或从句，表示时间。例如：He didn’t come until late in the evening。他直到晚上很迟才来。 He didn’t arrive until the game had begun. 直到比赛开始他才来。

昨晚我直到做完作业才睡觉。Last night, I didn’t go to bed 。

35. sb. pays money for sth. 某人花钱买某物

此句型主语是人。I’ve already paid 2,000 yuan for the motor bike. 我已经花了2000元买这辆摩托车。

36. spend time/money on sth./(in)doing sth. 花费(时间、钱)在某事上做某事

其中in可以省略，通常主语为“人”。例如：

I spent five yuan on this book. 我在这本书上花了五元钱。

I spent two hours (in) doing my homework yesterday. 昨晚我花了两个小时做作业。

不要在打电子游戏上花太多时间。Don’t 。

37. so…that… 太……以至于……

用于复合句，that引导的是结果状语从句。so是副词，后面应接形容词或副词，如果接名词，应用such。 例如：The ice is so thin that you can’t walk on it. 冰太薄了，你不能在上面走。 He is such a kind man that we all like him. 他是一个非常好的人，我们都很喜欢他。

38. stop to do sth., stop doing sth。

stop to do sth. 意为“停下来做某事”。stop doing sth。意为“停止做某事”例如：

The teacher is coming. Let’s stop talking. 老师来了，咱们别说话了。

You’re too tired. You’d better stop to have a rest. 你们太累了，最好停下来休息一会儿。

39. Thank you for doing sth. 感激你做了……

For之后除了加动名词doing外，还可以加名词。例如：

Thank you for giving me the present. 谢谢你给我的礼物。

Thank you for your help. (Thank you for helping me。) 谢谢你的帮助。

40. thanks to 多亏……;由于……

thanks后的s不能省略，to是介词。例如：Thanks to my friend Jim, I’ve worked out this problem. 多亏了我朋友吉姆的帮助，我已经解决了这个问题。

41. There be句型

①在此结构中，there是引导词，在句中不能充当任何成分，也不必翻译出来。句中的主语是某人或某物，谓语动词be要与主语的数保持一致。例如：There is a man at the door. 门口有一个人。

当主语是由两个或者两者以上的名词充当时，谓语动词be要跟它邻近的那个名词的数一致(就近一致)。例如：There are two dogs and a cat under the table。桌下有两只狗和一只猫。 比较： There is a cat and two dogs under the table。

②There be 句型中的be不能用have来代替，但可以用lie(位于，躺)，stand(矗立)，exist(生存)，live(生活)等词来替换。例如：There stand a lot of tall buildings on both sides of the street. 街道两旁矗立着许多高楼。

There lies lake in front of our school. 我们学校前面有一个湖。

Once there lived a king here. 这儿曾经有一个国王。

There is going to be a sports meeting next week. 下周准备开一个运动会。

与there be 类似的结构： there seem(s)/happen(s) to be…

There seems to be one mistake in spelling. 似乎有一处拼写错误。

There happened to be a ruler here. 这儿碰巧有把尺子。

There seemed to be a lot of people there. 那儿似乎有很多人。

42. The + adj。比较级， the + adj。比较级 越……,越……

此句型表示一方随另一方的变化而变化。例如：The harder he works, the happier he feels。他工作越努力，就感到越幸福。 The more, the better. 多多益善。 这本书我越读越喜欢。The more I read this book, 。

43. too+adj./adj. +to do sth. 太……以至于不……。

此句型为简单句，后面的to表示否定含义。

例如：The ice is too thin for you to walk on. 这冰太薄，你不能在上面走。

The bag is too heavy to carry. 这个袋子太重搬不动。

他太生气了，一句话也说不出来。He was say a word。

44. used to do sth. 过去常常做某事

used to是情态动词，表示过去的习惯动作或状态，现在已不存在，因此只用于过去时态。

例如： He used to get up early. 他过去总早起。

When I was yong, I used to play tennis very often. 我年轻时经常打网球。

否定形式有两种：didn’t use to;used not to,例如： 他过去不常来。He didn’t use to come. = He usedn’t to come。

45. what about…? ……怎么样? 后面可接名词、代词、动名词等。与“how about…?”同义。例如：

We have been to Hainan. What about you? 我们去过海南，你呢?

What about going to the park on Sunday? 星期天去公园怎么样?

46. What day/date is it today? 今天星期几(几月几日)?

―What day is it today? 今天星期几?―Sunday. ―What date is it today? ―June 24th。

47. What’s wrong (the matter) with…? ……怎么了?

What’s wrong with you, Madam? 夫人，您怎么了?

You look worried. What’s wrong with you? 你看上去很焦急，出什么事了?

48. Why not do…? 为什么不做……?

谓语动词用原形。与Why don’t you do…?同义。例如：Why not go to see the film with us?

= Why don’t you go to see the film with us? 为什么不和我们一起去看电影呢?

49. would like to do sth. 想做……

like后用动词不定式作宾语，也可用名词作宾语。例如： I would like to drink a cup of tea。我想喝一杯茶。 疑问句式：Would you like (to drink) a cup of tea? 你想喝杯茶吗?

50. adj./adv。比较级 + and adj./adv。比较级 越来越....。

若形容词/副词为双音节词及多音节词，则这一结构变为“more and more +形容词/副词”。

例如：It’s getting warmer and warmer. 天气变得越来越暖和了。

The little girl becomes more and more beautiful. 小女孩变得越来越漂亮了。

51. adj。比较级+than

than引导的是典型的比较级句型，表示“一者比另一者……”，起前用形容词或副词的比较级，than从句可以用省略形式。例如：I know you better than she does. 我比她更了解你。 This house is bigger than that one. 这所房子比那所房子大。

52. though-从句

though引导的是让步状语从句，意思是“虽然……但是……”。但不能和but连用，英语中表达“虽然……,但是……”时，though和but只能用一个。例如：

Though it was snowing, it was not very cold. 虽然下着雪，可并不太冷。

I was late for the last bus though I hurried. 虽然我拼命赶路，还是没搭上最后一班公交车。

We didn’t feel tired though we walked a long way. 虽然我们走了很长的路程，但是并没有感到累。

53. if-从句

If 引导的是条件状语从句，“如果;假如“。如主句用一般将来时，if从句要用一般现在时(主将从现)。例如：If I go to the GreatWall tomorrow, would you like to come along?

如果明天我去长城，你会和我一起去吗?

If it rains tomorrow, I won’t go. 如果明天下雨，我就不去了。

如果他不来我就不去。I won’t go 。

54. because-从句 引导原因状语从句，“因为”。 例如： He didn’t hear the knocking at the door because he was listening to the radio. 他没有听见敲门声，因为他正在听收音机。

55. so + do/be + 主语

“So + be/助动词/情态动词 + 主语” 表示前面所述内容也适用于另一人或物。be、助动词或情态动词的选择视前面陈述句中谓语动词的时态形式而定。例：He likes football and so do I. 他喜欢足球，我也如此。

Jim was playing football just now and so was Tom. 刚才吉姆在踢足球，汤姆也在踢足球。

比较： “So +主语+be/助动词/情态动词。”结构，是用来证实前一句所表达的内容(起强调作用)。be、助动词或情态动词的选择视前面陈述句中谓语动词的时态形式而定。

A: It is very hot today. B: So it is. 确实如此。

A: He can swim. B: So he can。

56. not only…but also… 不但……而且……

常用来连接语法作用相同的词、短语或句子。连接两个主语时，谓语动词要和紧靠它的主语在人称和数上保持一致。例如：She likes not only singing but also dancing. 她不但喜欢唱歌，而且喜欢跳舞。

He is not only a good doctor but also a good father. 他不但是个好医生而且是个好爸爸。

Not only I but also he is hoping to go there. 不但我而且他也想去那儿。

Not only you but also his father likes football and basketaball. 不但你喜欢足球和篮球，而且她的父亲也喜欢。

57. prefer…to… 喜欢……胜过…。

prefer (doing) sth. to (doing) sth. 意为“两者相比更喜欢(做)其中之一”。在此结构中，to是介词，接名词或动名词，结构中前后所跟成分一样。例如：

He prefers tea to coffee. 茶与咖啡相比，他更喜欢茶。

He prefers doing shopping to going fishing。购物与钓鱼相比，他更喜欢购物。

58. 感叹句型 What (a/an) + adj. + n. +主语+谓语! How + adj./adv.+ +主语+谓语! 例如：

What a clever boy (he is)! How clever the boy is!

What a wonderful film we saw last night! 昨天晚上我们看的电影多精彩啊!

How lovely the weather is! 天气多好啊! How hard he works! 他工作多么努力啊!

59. 祈使句型

祈使句型表示命令、请求、劝告等含义。说话的对象通常为第二人称，习惯上常省略。句末用句号或感叹号。肯定祈使句是：谓语动词用动词原形表示。否定祈使句是：在谓语动词前加do not(don’t)。例如：Be here on time tomorrow. 明天准时到这儿来。 Say it in English! 用英语说!

Don’t be afraid! 别怕! Don’t look out of the window! 不要朝窗外看!

60. 并列句型

用并列连词连接起来的两个或两个以上的简单句叫并列句。连接并列句常用的连接词有：and, but, or, so, however, not only…but also, neither…nor, either…or…等。例如：

I help her and she helps me。

He is very old but he is in good health. 他年纪很大了，但他身体很好。

We must hurry, or we’ll be late. 我们得赶快走，不然就晚了。

Kate does her work carefully, so she never makes any mistakes. 凯特工作很认真，从不出错。

2015年武汉中考英语作文题是《一封英文自荐信》，以下是详细内容：

假设你是一名中学生，名叫田梅。你从南京青奥会英文网站上获悉他们正在招收志愿者，你想给组委会写一封英文自荐信。内容提示见下表：

基本信息

新城中学九年级学生，16岁

个人品质

精力充沛，随和，有耐心

主要特长

英语说的好，擅长与他人合作

相关经历

今年4月，成为“2014无锡国际马拉松赛”志愿者，……

注意事项：

1、自荐信须包含所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯;

2、“相关经历”一栏中省略部分须用2-3句话展开合理想象，作适合发挥;

3、词数在80个左右，信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数;

4、信件内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

参考词汇：

新城中学(New Town Middle School)

志愿者工作(voluntary work)

2014无锡国际马拉松赛(the 2014 Wuxi Tnternational Marathon)

I have a very good friend. His name is Philip. As far as Im concerned, hes very kind-hearted and generous. Once I was in high school, he treated me friendly and sincerely. When I was happy, he was also happy with me. When I was sad, he always comforted me. When I was defeated, he always encouraged me. When I stumbled, he always pulled me up. Although we quarreled at times, we were still in good relationships. We could know each other better after the argument. When my birthday came, he always sent me a special present.

我有一个很好的朋友。他的名字叫菲利普。我觉得他是非常善良和慷慨的。当我在高中的时候，他对我很友好、很真诚。我高兴的时候，他也和我一起开心。当我难过时，他总是安慰我。当我失败时，他总是鼓励我。当我迷茫时，他总是拉我一把。尽管有时候我们会吵架，我们关系仍然很好。争吵之后我们可以更好的了解对方。我生日的时候，他总是送我一份特别的礼物。

Hes very hard-working and intelligent. He always studied hard at school. Because of his hard work, he always did very well in exams. His oral English was better than mine. Most of the time, he was willing to chat with me in English. Owing to his help, I made a lot of progress in oral English.

他非常勤劳也很聪明。在学校他总是很努力学习。由于他的努力，他总是能在考试中取得好成绩。他的英语口语比我好。大多数时候他都愿意用英语和我聊天。由于他的帮助，我在英语口语方面取得了很大的进步。

1、A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world.

知足是人生在世最大的幸事。

——Joseph Addison(美国作家艾迪生)

2、If you would know the value of money, go and try to borrow some.

要想知道钱的价值，就想办法去借钱试试。

——Benjamin Franklin(美国总统富兰克林)

3、If you wish to succeed, you should use persistence as your good friend,

experience as your reference, prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry.

如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友，以经验为参谋，以谨慎为兄弟，以希望为哨兵。

——Thomas Edison(美国发明家爱迪生)

4、Health is certainly more valuable than money,

because it is by health that money is procured.

健康当然比金钱更为重要，因为我们所赖以获得金钱的就是健康。

——Samuel Johnson(英国作家约翰逊)

5、That man is the richest whose pleasure are the cheapest.

能处处寻求快乐的人才是最富有的人。

——Henry David Thoreau(美国作家梭罗)

6、Sometimes one pays most for the things one gets for nothing.

有时候一个人为不花钱得到的东西付出的代价最高。

——Albert Einstein(美国科学家爱因斯坦)

7、Will, work and wait are the pyramidal cornerstones for success.

意志、工作和等待是成功的金字塔的基石。

——Louis Pasteur(法国化学家巴斯勒)

8、All the splendor in the world is not worth a good friend.

人世间所有的荣华富贵不如一个好朋友。

——Voltaire(法国思想家伏尔泰)

9、There is a great different between exposure of

the mind and that of the body.

表露思想和展露身体之间存在极大的不同。

——William Hazlitt(英国批评家散文家哈滋里特)

10、To travel hopefully is a better thing than to arrive,

and the true success is to labor.

怀着希望去旅行比抵达目的地更愉快;而真正的成功在于工作。

——Robert Louis Stevenson(英国作家史蒂文森)

11、The greater a man is, the more distasteful is praise and flattery to him.

一个人越伟大，对表扬和奉承就越反感。

——John Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)

12、I might say that success is won by three things:

first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.

可以说成功要靠三件事才能赢得：努力，努力，再努力。

——Thomas Hardy(英国诗人小说家哈代)

13、Success often depends upon knowing how long it will take to succeed.

成功常常取决于知道需要多久才能成功。

——Charles Montesquieu(法国思想家孟德斯鸠)

14、Only those who have the patience to do simple things

perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.

只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人，才能够轻而易举的完成困难的事。

——Friedrich Schiller(德国剧作家诗人席勒)

15、You have to believe in yourself. Thats the secret of success.

你必须相信自己，这是成功的关键。

——Charles Chaplin(美国演员卓别林)

16、A man can succeed at almost anything for which

he has unlimited enthusiasm.

无论何事，只要对它有无限的热情你就能取得成功。

——C. M. Schwab(美国实业家施瓦布)

17、The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.

凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说“不可能的”。

——Bonapart Napoleon(法国皇帝拿破仑)

18、Progress is the activity of today and the assurance of tomorrow.

进步是今天的活动，明天的保证。

——Emerson(美国思想家爱默生)

20、Our destiny offers not the cup of despair,

but the chalice of opportunity.

命运给予我们的不是失望之酒，而是机会之杯。

——Richard Nixon(美国总统尼克松)

21、Miracles sometimes occur, but one has to work terribly for them.

奇迹有时候是会发生的，但是你得为之拼命的努力。

——C. Weizmann(爱尔兰总统魏茨曼)

22、It never will rain roses.

When we want to have more roses we must plant trees.

天上不会掉下玫瑰来，如果想要更多的玫瑰，必须自己种植。

——G. Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)

23、If you have great talents, industry will improve them;

if you have but moderate abilities, industry will supply their deficiency.

如果你很有天赋，勤勉会使其更加完善;如果你能力一般，勤勉会补足其缺陷。

——Joshuas Reynolds(美国散文家雷诺兹)

24、Great works are performed not by strength , but by perseverance.

完成伟大的事业不在于体力，而在于坚韧不拔的毅力。

——Samuel Johnson(英国作家和评论家约翰逊)

25、Genius only means hard-working all ones life.

天才只意味着终身不懈的努力。

——Mendeleyev(俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)

26、Few things are impossible in themselves; and it is often for want of will ,

rather than of means, that man fails to succeed.

事情很少又根本做不成的;其所以做不成，与其说是条件不够，不如说是由于决心不够。

——(La Racheforcauld(法国作家罗切福考尔德)

27、Dare and the world always yields.

If it beats you sometimes, dare it again and again and it will succumb.

大胆挑战，世界总会让步。如果有时候你被它打败了，不断地挑战，它总会屈服地。

——W.M Thackeray(英国小说家萨克雷)

28、All that you do, do with your might; t

hings done by halves are never done right.

做一切事情都应尽力而为，半途而废永远不行。

——R.H. Stoddard(美国诗人斯托达德)

29、A man can fail many times,

but he isnt a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.

一个人可以失败多次，但是只要他没有开始责怪旁人，他还不是一个失败者。

——J.Burroughs(美国博物学家巴勒斯)

30、You can tell the ideals of a nation by its advertisements.

从一个国家的广告可以看出这个国家的理想。

——Norman Douglas(英国作家道格拉斯)

31、The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today.

实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑。

——Franklin Roosevelt(美国总统罗斯福)

32、The man with a new idea is a crank until the idea succeeds.

具有新想法的人在其想法实现之前是个怪人。

——Mark Twain(美国作家马克?吐温)

33、The important thing in life is to have a great aim,

and the determination to attain it.

人生重要的事情是确定一个伟大的目标，并决心实现它。

——Johann Wolfgang von Goethe(德国诗人、剧作家歌德)

34、Most of the trouble in the world is caused by people wanting to be important.

人世间的大多数烦恼都是由那些想成为重要人物的人惹出来的。

——George Eliot(英国小说家艾略特)

35、If you doubt yourself,

then indeed you stand on shaky ground.

如果你怀疑自己，那么你的立足点确实不稳固了。

——Ibsen(挪威剧作家易卜生)

36、Ideal is the beacon. Without ideal,

there is no secure direction; without direction ,there is no life.

理想是指路明灯。没有理想，就没有坚定的方向;

没有方向，就没有生活。 ——Leo Tolstory(俄国作家托尔斯泰)

37、Ideal are like the stars ——- we never reach them ,

but like mariners , we chart our course by them.

理想犹如天上的星星，我们犹如水手，虽不能达到天上，

但是我们的航程可凭借它指引。

——Carl Schurz(美国政治家舒尔茨)

38、Have an aim in life, or your energies will all be wasted.

人生应该树立目标，否则你的精神会白白浪费。

——R. Peters(美国法学家彼得斯)

39、Dont part with yourxxxs, When they are gone you may still exist,

but you have ceased to live.

不要放弃你的幻想。当幻想没有了以后，你还可以生存，但是你虽生犹死。

——Mark Twain(马克 吐温)

40、Do not, for one repulse,

give up the purpose that you resolved to effect.

不要只因一次失败，就放弃你原来决心想要达到的目的。

——Willian Shakespeare(莎士比亚)

41、Between the ideal and the reality,

Between the motion and the act, Fall the shadow.

理想与现实之间，动机与行为之间，总有一道阴影。

——Thomas Stearns Eliot(T.S.爱略特)

42、A man is not old as long as he is seeking something.

A man is not old until regrets take the place of dreams.

只要有一个人还有所追求，他就没有老。直到后悔取代了梦想，一个人才算老。

——J. Barrymore(巴里穆尔)

43、Change as change is mere flux and lapse; it insults intelligence. Genuinely to know is to grasp a permanent end that realises itself through changes.

如果仅仅就变化论变化，则只是变动不羁，倏忽即逝;这是低能的表现，真正了解变化在于把握住在变化中完成自身的永恒目标。

——John Dewey 约翰·杜威

44、Change is the law of life. And those who look only to the past or the present are certain to miss the future.

变化是生活的法则。只盯着过去或眼前的人注定失去未来。

——John F.Kennedy 约翰·弗·肯尼迪

45、Genius is formed in quiet, character in the stream of human life.

天才悄无声息地诞生，性情却在生命之河里逐渐形成。

——Goethe 歌德

46、With a character both proud and timid, one never amounts to anything.

一个人既自傲又胆怯，将永远一事无成。

——Joseph Roux 约瑟夫·鲁

47、If there is anything that we wish to change the child, we should first examine it and see whether it is not something that could better be changed in ourselves.

假如我们想让孩子在某个方面有所改变，我们应首先检验一下，看看我们自己是否最好在这一方面变一变。

——Jung 荣格

48、The finest inheritance you can give to a child is to allow it to make its own way, completely on its own feet.

你能留给孩子的最好财产莫过于允许他完全独立自主地摸索自己的道路。

——Isadora Duncan 伊莎多拉·邓肯

49、Mans highest merit always is, as much as possible, to rule external circumstances and as little as possible to let himself be ruled by them.

人最大的优点是尽可能多地驾驭外部环境，尽可能少地让环境约束自己。

——Goethe 歌德

50、Dont wait for ideal circumstances, they will never come, nor for the best opportunities.

不要等候最好的条件或者最佳时机，它们永远不会降临。

——Janet Erskine Stuart 珍尼特·厄斯金·斯图亚特

there is no doubt that dr. sun yat-sen is the greatest man that i ever known in my whole life. he set up the republic of china, so we call him our national father.

he was devoted to the revolution about forty years. his aim was to liberate china from the hands of the manchu dynasty. he had not met with result, but he was not discouraged at all. as a result, he accomplished his end in the long run.

to sum up, his strong will and indomitable spirit are worth our worship and imitation (are worth our worshiping and imitating).

译文:

无疑的，中山先生是我一生知道的最大的人物。他建立中华民国，所以我他为我的国父。

他致力革命凡四十年。他的目的是清朝手里解放中国。他曾遭遇屡次的失败，但他却一点也不灰心。那是不需说的。结果，他终于达到目的。

总而言之，他坚强的意志和不屈不挠的精神(是)值得我们的崇拜和仿效。