关于拯救地球的英语作文初三精品20篇

生活中，每个人都会遇到各种各样的困难，但每个人面对困难都有不同的选择，有的迎难而上，有的知难而退。

In life, everyone will encounter all sorts of difficulties, but everyone in the face of difficulties have different choices, some difficulties, some place.

记得前几天，我做数学课外练习上面的一道思考题。那道题目很难，我做了好几遍怎么也做不对，于是，我就放弃了这道题目。突然，妈妈走了过来，问我为什么不做我说：“太难了，我不会做!”妈妈跟我讲了一个故事。外国有位撑杆跳运动员，叫布勃卡，他曾经创造过35次世界纪录，迄今还没人打破。他以前在训练时，也遇到过困难，总是跳不过去。那段时间里，他苦恼过、沮丧过，甚至怀疑自己的潜力。他真的想放弃了，教练告诉他，一定要有信心，让心先过去，身子就跟着过去了。布勃卡听了教练的话，重新跳了几次，他真的跳过去了...... 听了妈妈讲的故事,我重新思考这道难题，我反复地思考，反复地演算，终于做出来了。我心里可高兴啦!

I remember a few days ago, I do maths extracurricular practice the above sikaoti. The problem is difficult, I do a few times do it wrong, so, I give up this question. Suddenly, the mother walked over, asked me why I dont do what I say: "too hard, I cant do!" My mother told me a story. Foreign a pole vaulter, called Bubka, he had created the world record 35 times, no one has yet to break. He used in the training, also encountered difficulties, always can jump. During that time, he was annoyed, depressed, or even suspect that their potential. He really want to give up, the coach told him, must have confidence, let the heart to the past, the body will follow the past. He listened to the coachs words, to jump a few times, he really jumped... Listen to the mothers story, I to think about this problem, I repeatedly thinking, repeatedly calculus, finally did come out. My heart is happy!

是啊，世上无难事，只要肯登攀，困难像弹簧，看你强不强，你强它就弱，你弱他就强。在困难面前，我们一定要信心十足、战胜困难，做一个决不向困难低头的人!

Yes, the world is difficult, if you put your heart into it, the difficulty is like spring, you look strong, you are strong it weak, you are weak he is strong. In the face of difficulties, we must have confidence, overcome difficulties, to do a never bow to difficulties of the people!

When I was a little girl,my mother usually tell me that I must be a good person.But how to be a good person?I cannot understand at that time.Howerver ,as I grow up every day,I become to know it.

In my opinion,to be a good person,frist of all,should be polite.If you behave polite,others want to make friends with you.Then ,you should be kind and warm-hearted,for these are the source of good person.When you give a hand to people ,they would feel you are really a good person,and you also can feel happy.

However,a good person has many good characters and abilities,so I cannot list them all out.Gerenally speaking ,as long as you do good to others ,you are a good person.

[关于初三英语作文推荐：How to be a good person

Yesterday, we had a discussion. the topic is. What is my dream? Every one has his dream. Some want to be teachers,others want to be scientists. My dream is to become a doctor.

My friends asked me why. I told them my story. When I was a small boy I was very weak. Once I was terribly iii. I had a high fever. My parents sent me to the hospital but the doctors could do nothing for me. then my parents heard there was a very good doctor in another town. they took me there. I was saved.

A good doctor can save people s lives. From then on I decided to become a doctor. I know it is not easy to be a doctor.But I am determined to study hard. I am sure my dream will come true.

Last March, my mother told my father and me that my grandfather would come in April. We were very happy because my grandfather was an interesting old man and he had not visited us since he went to Hong Kong. On April 1 my father and I bought a lot of food from the supermarket and bought a big bunch of flowers home. Then we did some cleaning at home. At night when we were waiting for my grandfather, the bell rang and in came my mother. She smiled to us and said "April fools"!

Dear Sandy,

亲爱的桑迪，

I offer my warmest congratulations to you for receiving the first prize of The Olympic English competition for the middle school students. I know that you are always good at English. You often win the praise of our English teacher and always in the first place of our class. So I’m surprise at all that you become champion for this competition. However, in my mind, this match is very difficult. So I becomemore and more admire you. Sincere congratulation to you again.

我表示热烈的祝贺你接收的获得了中学生奥林匹克英语竞赛一等奖。我知道你的英语一直都很好。你经常赢得我们的英语老师的表扬而且在班里总是第一。所以我一点都不惊讶在这个竞赛中你会成为冠军。然而，在我看来，这竞赛是很困难的。所以我越来越佩服你了。真诚的祝贺你。

Best wishes,

Mandy

曼迪

拯救地球学院

在20XX年，人类对自然的破坏没有一点要停止的意思，大自然无法再忍受，向人类发起反击——在位于美国本土的西部的森林上空，地球的“保护伞”出现了一个大洞。

太阳射线穿过大洞，射向大森林。大森林燃烧起来了，人类也无能为力。随着“空洞”的扩大，森林被烧为灰烬，钢铁铸造的大桥被烤化，冰冷的海水沸腾起来，数以千计生活在那儿的人被烧死。情况仍在变糟。

联合国也只好启用拯救地球的预案——建立拯救地球学院。

联合国在世界各地的环保学校寻找自愿保护地球的人们。他们首先来到了中国的环保大学。

回到三年前

我叫李方，今天我太高兴了，我终于考上了我心中理想的学校——中国环保大学。从今天开始，我就可以为自己最爱的环保事业出一份力了，太好了！如今的环境太差了，将来像我这样的环保人士，一定有自己的用武之地，O(∩_∩)O哈哈哈~！

工作人员在学校转了一上午，也没发现合适的人选。因为这次拯救地球的行动很危险。工作人员决定先去吃饭，毕竟人是铁，饭是钢。在去食堂的路上，要经过一片森林，工作人员看到了一个忙着植树的年轻人。他叫赵刚，是我的好朋友。

工作人员高兴极了，问赵刚愿不愿意去，赵刚同意了，并把我和王勇也推荐给了工作人员。

经过三年的刻苦攻关，我们顺利地拿到了毕业证，成了拯救地球学院第一批毕业生。

三个月之后

毕业三个月后，我们一行三人来到了美国太平洋上的一个军事基地。我们决定先去事发地看一看。来到事发地，发现空洞又扩大了许多。我们各界的环保人士都认为停止一切工厂，联合固立刻向世界宣布。联合国认为，我们要进入事发地，测出射线强度，来确定“空洞”可以可以“自动愈合”。我和王勇身体强壮，被选中了。

我们一共23人，身着太空衣进入事发地，因为只有太空衣才可抵住这强大的太阳风暴的辐射。队长带我们来到中心点，我们放下并打开同样包裹着太空衣材质的设备。经过360项检查，以及专家多次研讨，我们认为只有关闭大部分的工厂，估计地球可在一年内恢复正常。

但在此时，我发现我身上带着的氧气不够用了。我的两个氧气瓶其中一个没氧气了，可能在来的路上……我急忙向王勇报告。王勇也不知该怎么办。突然，王勇想到了一个办法，把他的氧气让我们两人一起用。氧气管不停地在我们两人的接气口中接来接去。最终我们成功地走出了森林。一个小时后，大家全都安全地走出来了。

听说“空洞”可以恢复，全世界的人们都很开心。

七个月后

七个月后，地球恢复了平静，“空洞”也逐渐缩小，人们也都积极投身于环保事业，我们成功地拯救了地球。请相信，人类永远也不会放弃我们自己的家园，放弃那美丽的地球。

【老师点评】：文中创设了一个地球发现“空洞”的情境，然后通过拯救地球学院的三名学员的不懈努力，最终完成了任务，拯救了地球！

[拯救地球学院环保作文

The earth moves round the sun,and the moon moves round the earth.When our part of the earth turns to the sun,it is day. When our part of the earth turns away from the sun,it is night.

The sun is bigger than the moon.But sometimes the moon looks bigger than the sun,because it is much nearer to the earth.

The sun is very bright.It gives very strong light.The moon looks quite bright,too,but it doesnt give any light at all.The light from the moon comes from the sun.

The moon looks much bigger and brighter than the other stars.But in fact many stars are much bigger and brighter than the moon.They look smaller than the moon because they are farther away from the earth.

[初三英语作文之The space

恐惧的时刻越来越近了，我屏神凝气，有点像等待过山车或灾难大片的开幕，毛骨悚然却隐藏了几分刺激的期待，所不同的是这回我们，每一个地球人将会无可逃脱地成为灾难片的主角……

尽管如此，我始终不敢、不愿相信这一刻真的会到来。近几年来，天气一反常态，异常酷热，让我几乎忘却了那句诗：春有百花秋有月，夏有凉风冬有雪，四季分明的杭州只剩下夏季，全国、甚至全球气候都在变暖，专家早己预警：南极的冰川正在消融，全球的海拔正在骤然上升……可是，这一刻真的会到来吗？

此刻的我正和小伙伴在海边捡拾贝壳、堆沙城堡，这是我最爱的度假方式，可现在一切变得索然无味，我找不到喜爱的贝壳，堆了一半的沙城堡被的涨潮海水冲走，我仿佛看见了暗流涌动，危机四伏！突然间，太阳隐没了踪影，黑云聚拢过来，将我们头顶的天空团团围住。大雨没头没脑地向我沷来，没等我反应过来，一个滔天巨浪把我卷进了大海。虽然我会游泳，可在洪流中毫无用武之地，只好猛烈拍水，我绝望了，完了，真完了，地球末日终于到来了！

漂流了三天三夜，雨停了，风浪平静了下来。我吃力地游到水面，乌云消散了，但是陆地却成了一片汪洋。我很惊奇自己还活着，庆幸我的小伙伴们还在！这时，一艘飞船正向我们的方向飞来。我们赶忙脱下湿透的衣服，在头顶挥舞。飞船立即向我们飞来，平稳地停在一片汪洋之上。在阳光下银色飞船熠熠生辉，我看见飞了船上写着“诺亚”的字样，啊，这原来就是传说中的诺亚之舟啊！我和小伙伴们钻进了船舱，里面空间狭小，却十分热闹，挨挨挤挤地塞满了床铺、食物。我们暗无天日地也不知过了多久，终于有一天，听到了广播：现在我们到达了火星，请大家忘却地球，重新创造新的家园！

我鼻子一酸，差一点落下泪来。我们己经失去了地球，失去了我们的家园！火星上一片荒凉，仿佛回到了天地玄黄、宇宙洪荒的时代。所有人都沉默不语。大包大包的种子被抬下飞船，动物们无声无息地加入进来，火星上没有弓剑与猎枪、没有征战与伐戮、没有歧视与霸权，也没有了尾气与汚染，只有深深的忧伤与惨痛的记忆！

“同学们，这次诺亚拯救地球的演习结束了，请大家回教室继续上课！”班主任老师的声音打断了我的幻想。不知何时我己泪流满面，泪光中我贪婪地凝望着校园春意盎然的碧草、洁白的玉兰，吮吸着空中的似有若无的芬芳，眼前的一切如此美好！我突然明白了，我们就是诺亚，拯救地球的就是我们自己！

July 13 2014

It was the first day of our summer holiday. All of us were very happy. Why? Because we have one months to do things we love to do. We are free. Although we have some homework. But we can finish them in several days. And the rest time we can make good use of. My god! We have been very tired after hard studying. In summer holidays, I will have a good rest.

【参考翻译】

2014年7月13日

这是我们的暑季假期的第一天。我们大家都非常高兴。为什么呢?因为我们有一个月做我们爱做的事情。我们是自由的。虽然我们有一些功课。但我们可以在数天内完成。和休息时间，我们可以好好利用。我的上帝!我们一直很疲倦经过艰难学习。在冬季假期，我将有一个良好的休息时间。

[初三英语日记带翻译范本

The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me， Liu Xiang is

the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.

Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004， he won his first Olympic gold medal

in the men，s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the

same event in Lausanne.Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu

Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.

With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This

encourages me to study harder from now on.

文章结尾的作用是概括全文内容，进一步强调或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意义表达得更加深刻。

文章结尾的形式也是多种多样的，常见的有以下几种：

1、首尾呼应，画龙点睛

在文章的结尾，把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题，深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如I Cannot Forget Her (我忘不了她)的结尾：

After her death，I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away，but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.

2、重复主题句

结尾回到文章开头阐明的中心思想或主题句上，达到强调的效果。如I Love My Home Town(我爱家乡)的结尾：

I love my home town，and I love its people. They too have changed. They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.

3、自然结尾

随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如Fishing(钓鱼)的结尾：

I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours，but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing，we lay down on the river bank，bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.

初三英语作文：Our Monitor

Li Ming is our monitor. She is tall, healthy and lively. She does well in all subjects. She is fond of sports and is good at singing and dancing.

Li Ming works hard at English. When she came to the school, she had quite a lot of difficulties with the language. But she was not afraid of them and always tried hard to overcome them. She was active in class and did a lot of practice after class. No pains, no gains. With great efforts she made much progress in English study.

Li Ming is modest and always ready to help others. She is very strict with herself in her work and daily life. She sets us all a fine example.

初一英语作文：My Brother

Li Pings brother is a PLA man. He is a handsome, tall young man with big eyes and broad shoulders.

He was born in 1971. He was a good student in school. When he was seventeen, he finished middle school. Then he joined the Peoples Liberation Army. In the army, he studied hard and took an active part in the military training. In 1991, he went to Anhui Province to help in fighting against the flood disaster. He did a lot of good deeds there.

Yesterday afternoon Li Pings brother came to our school and gave us a talk. Weve learned a lot from him.

初一英语作文：My sweet home

Most people has a sweet home,so have I.I think my home is sweet because it is my best place to have rest or have fun with my friends or my parents.

I can remember clear.Once I came back home late because my teacher didnt want me leave until

I finished my work.At that time,the weather became colder and the wind became stronger.I was so hungry and cold at that time!I felt I cant take it any more,so I ran to my home quickly.When I got my home,I felt much more warmer and happiness than ever before!

Thats why I love my sweet home,Dont you think so ?

初三英语作文：My Family

There are five people in my family. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother and I .

My father is doctor. He works in Yueqing. He goes to work on foot everyday. My father is not very tall, but he is strong, he is very kind to his patients and he loves his work.

My mother is teacher. She works in a middle school in Yue Qing. She goes to work by car. She is a very good teacher in my eyes.

I am a student in Yueqing FLS. My school is very beautiful. There are many tall buildings, green tress, nice flowers in our school. We have wonderful teachers too. I like studying in my school.

My grandparents don’t go to work any more. They have retired. They stay at home everyday. In the morning they go to the park and do morning exercises. In the afternoon, they drink tea with their friends. In the evening, they enjoy themselves watching TV and reading newspapers.

We have a happy family. I can’t say how much I love it!

初三英语作文：My Best Friend

I have a friend. Her name is Gong Haijuan. She is a clever girl. She is kind to others. She has good grades in all subjects. She often comes first or second in the exam. She is like a boy. She is brave and helpful. One day, her friend’s keys fell into the pool. She jumped into the pool and found the keys. We all admire her. The owner of the keys master was grateful for her help. But she said, “We are classmates. We should help each other.” Sometimes when I have some hard questions, she will help me.

She is clever and cheerful. She can organize class activities and wall paper. Her wall paper won the first prize last term.

She is strong and good at sports. She likes playing volleyball and football. Sometimes she plays basketball with boys. The sports meeting is coming. She wants to get a good prize for class.

She is a nice girl. I think she can get better.

初三英语作文：My Dream School

I always feel tired after eight classes a day, so my dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We can choose our favorite lessons to learn. We can spend more time doing some outside reading. The students do after-school activities for one and a half hours every day. We needn’t do a lot of homework. We are all happy to stay at school.

Besides that, my dream school looks like a big garden. There are many kinds of flowers around the modern buildings. Sweet perfumes are diffused all around. If I want to have a rest, I can lie on the grass, listen to music by the lake or look out at the flowers from the classroom windows.

The teachers here are kind and helpful. They are not only our teachers but also our good friends. The students are polite and friendly. We all know how to keep our school clean and tidy. There is no litter around the campus.

I love my dream school. We will grow up to be happier there.

[关于初三英语作文：Our Monitor

201x is coming, we this a group of lovely children on holiday again!

Winter vacation coming, do you have any good plan? I have oh! In this cold winter holiday, I plan to continue here in shenzhen longgang. I also want to mom and dad, brother elder sister go to shenzhen window of the world! We are the window of the world spent a happy afternoon. In the evening, its a good time for a rising tide, this is my cousin told me oh!

So, when we had dinner in the evening go to the big plum sand for a swim. Swim there is super fun! Also recommend everyone out to play together! In the big plum sand there, we can play with sand, and picking up shells and sand building! Is really fun. After hearing what I said, do you have the idea of want to go to the big plum sand?

My winter holiday and plan! Im going to buy some books about learning. Well, I have put the drawing technology, painting a picture of the difficulty of general drawing every day. I have a winter holiday plan, that is the preparation in advance. Know what meaning be? What I mean is this: on the computer to find information related to the grade four part ii, the text... I prepare to "offer". In class, so I can answer the teacher asked the question a lot!

This is my winter vacation plan, do you like?

201x来临啦，我们这一群可爱的孩子们又放寒假啦!

寒假来临，你们有什么好计划呢?我就有哦!在这个严寒的寒假，我打算继续在深圳龙岗这里过。我还要和爸爸妈妈，哥哥姐姐一起去深圳市的世界之窗哦!我们要在世界之窗度过一个快快乐乐的下午。晚上，正是涨潮的好时间，这是我的表姐告诉我的哦!

所以，我们晚上吃完饭的时候一起去大梅沙游泳。那里游泳超级好玩的哟!也推荐大家一起出玩玩哦!在大梅沙那里，我们可以玩踢沙子之战，还有沙子建筑和捡贝壳呢!的确是很好玩的。听我这么一说，你们有没有想去大梅沙的念头呢?

我寒假还有计划呢!我要去买一些关于学习的书本来看。还有呢，我还有把画画技术提高，每天画一幅难度一般般的画。我还有一个寒假计划呢，那就是提前预习。知道是什么意思吗?我的意思是这样的：在电脑上找到与四年级下册有关的资料、课文……来“提供”我预习。这样在课堂上，我就可以多多回答老师问的问题了!

这就是我的寒假计划，你们喜欢吗?

Every studentis excited about the freshmen year, they are looking forward to seeing theirclassmates and will open the new chapter of their lives. While when the senioryear comes, it means saying goodbye to their classmates and is it time to leaveschool. Freshmen year brings happiness and senior year brings sorrow, students don’twant to say goodbye to their classmates, after the long time’s acquaintance,classmates have built strong friendship, it is hard to say goodbye. In China,there is an old saying that all good things must come to an end, for everystudent, they will leave school and fight for each other’s future. Thoughsenior year is a little sad, it is another turning point for the students, theysome will find a job, some will study abroad, all of them are fighting for theirfuture. Senior year in not the end, it is the beginning.

每个学生都会对入学季感到兴奋，他们期待看到新同学，即将展开新的生活篇章。然而当毕业季到来的时候，这意味着和同学说再见，是时候离开学校了。入学季带来了快乐，而毕业季带来了悲伤。学生不想要和同学说再见，经过长时间的认识，学生间已经建立了深厚的友谊，很难说再见。在中国，有一句方言“天下无不散之筵席”，对于每个学生来说，他们将要离开学校，为彼此的未来奋斗。虽然毕业季有点悲伤，但是确实另一个转折点，有些同学找工作，有些同学出国深造，他们都要为将来奋斗。毕业季不是终点，而是开始。

导语：在即将到来的暑假里，你准备做什么呢?下面是yuwenmi小编为大家整理的优秀英语作文，欢迎阅读与借鉴，谢谢! ​

In the coming summer holiday, I am going to do a lot of interesting things.

First, I will finish my holiday homework. Second, I am going to have a good rest. I am going to play computer games or listen to music when I am free, because I like them very much. But I am not good at them now. Then, I will join a basketball club to play basketball. Even if I was a girl, I like basketball very much. It can not only make me become sunny, cheerful, but also can make me healthy. Finally, I am going to visit some of my friends. We are going to play together. Maybe we will go sightseeing.

I think I will have a great summer holiday.

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在即将到来的暑假，我打算做很多有趣的事情。

首先，我会完成我的暑假作业。第二，我打算好好休息一下。我打算在我有时间的时候玩电脑游戏或者听音乐，因为我很喜欢它们。但是现在我却还不擅长。之后，我会参加篮球俱乐部来打篮球。虽然我是个女孩，但是我却非常喜欢篮球。它不仅可以使我变得阳光，开朗，而且也可以使我健康。最后，我要去拜访一些朋友。我们打算一起去玩。也许我们会去观光。

我觉得我将会有一个很棒的暑假。

My idol is Chairman Mao. I think he must be many people’s idol. He is a great hero. It is him makes us live a better life. Without him, maybe we still can’t satisfy our hunger nowadays. We may not live comfortable, eat delicious food and so on. All the happiness we have now maybe is due to his wise leadership. Though he made mistakes once, no one is perfet. I admire him. I think all the people should respect him.

我的偶像是毛主席。我想他一定是很多人的偶像。他是一个伟大的英雄。是他使我们过上了更好的生活。没有他，也许我们还不能解决温饱问题。我们也许不能舒适的住着，吃美味的食物等。我们现在所有的幸福生活都是源于他的英明领导。尽管他曾经也犯过错误，但是人无完人。我很敬佩他。我觉得所有人都应该尊敬他。

One day, I went with the group to a nearby river. We wanted to check if it was clean. We did many scientific tests to see if the river was healthy. Surprisingly, it was! We still, though, took any rubbish we could find out of the river.We wanted to make sure fish could live there happily.

Recently, I helped the group plant flowers at our school. Were hoping the flowers will bloom this spring and make the school look beautiful. How did we pay for all the plants? We made T-shirts and sold them to our friends! Were still got some money left from selling the T-shirts. We hope to use it to buy some recycling bins for the school.

Yesterday, there was a discusion in our class. We talked about whether we should do housework or not. I agreed with with Sharon. She said,“The middle school students should do some housework. Because doing housework can let our parents feel relaxed. At the same time, doing housework can train us to be more useful.” I think we should do some housework. Doing housework can improve ourselves. But I also think students’ major job is studying. Doing too much housework is bad for our study. So, I think doing housework is good, but at the same time we should pay more attenion to our study. Right?

[Should the middle school students do housework初三优秀英语作文

初三英语作文：Our Dreams Of Life

As soon as we became students of Grade 3, we had to make up our minds to study hard. Because we have the motive forces of study. They may be our dreams of life.

We must all want to study in Haimen Middle School in the future, so the competition for study will be very fierce. Both in class and after class, we think about our knowledge and work on the hard problems. We all believe that the harder we study, the better we will become.

But we have to face difficulties and hardships. Even though, we cant give up our life dreams. When you suffer a setback, think about your dream, then rally your forces. Make a spurt towards your dream!

[关于Our Dreams Of Life的初三英语作文

When we read newspapers, we often come across the wordPollution. This word was not familiar to the people some decades ago. But now, it is a serious threat to us because.it means the poisoning of the air, seas, rivers and lands, which would do harm to our health.

There are many factories that bring pollution to us. We can not have fresh air in the morning. This is mainly because of the poisonous smoke coming from factories, especially chemical ones. In rivers, seas and oceans, there are industrial wastes. Some factories just throw their wastes into seas or let them flow into rivers. When people drink the water from such rivers, they get poisoned. Besides, there is rubbish from ships and when sometimes an accident occurs in an ocean, oil flows out from tankers.

On land, the accumulation of rubbish in the streets may dirty the city and ruin our health. This is mainly due to the improper disposal of rubbish by people.

If we do mot fight against pollution, surely one day all of us will be killed. Some people like to put the blame on the industrial revolutions. On the contrary, the pollution problem will be solved only with the help of modem science and technology.

[初三优秀英语作文:Pollution

一、认真审题，切中题意

《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容，在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，审清格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。

二、围绕中心，拟定提纲

书面表达评分原则有四条：(1)内容要点;

(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;

(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。

由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。

三、语言通顺，表达准确

(1)避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用

自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。

(2)多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当地使用陈述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。

(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。(4)描写人物时，要生动具体，例如：①外表特征：tall，short，fat，thin，strong，weak，ordinary-looking等;②内心境界：

glad，happy，sad，excited，anxious，interested等;③感情描写：love，like，hate，feel，laugh，cry，smile，shout等;④动作描写：come，go，get，have，take，bring，fetch等。

(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，同学们应注意下面过渡的用法：①表示并列关系的过渡词：and，aswellas，or等;②表示转折关系的过渡词：but，yet，however等;③表示时间关系的过渡词：first，andthen，

finally，after，before，atlast，atthattime，later，inthepast，immediately，inthe

meanwhile等;④表示空间关系的过渡词：near(to)，far(from)，inthefrontof，beside等;⑤表示比较关系的过渡词：inthesameway，justlike，justas等;⑥表示对照关系的过渡词：but，still，yet，however，ontheotherhand等;⑦表示递进关系的过渡词：also，and，then，too，inaddition，moreover，again等;⑧表示因果关系的过渡词：because，since，then，thus，otherwise，so，therefore，asaresult等;⑨表示解释说明的过渡词：forexample，infact，inthiscase，for，actually等。

四、不会表达，另辟蹊径

中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分。”如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。

五、锦上添花，量力而行

如果你还有时间和精力，想把书面表达写得更好，那么，请注意以下几点：(1)句型多样化，不要i(we)……到底，使人觉得乏味;(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句;(3)进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句;(4)适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词;(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感;(6)适当调换一下状语在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同;(7)上下句子紧接时，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以节省篇幅。

六、书写工整，卷面整洁

字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。

七、检查错误

检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)格式是否有错;(2)拼写有无错误;(3)语言是否用错;(4)时态、语态错误;(5)标点错误;(6)人称是否用错。

总之，只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧，合理分配时间，在中考时一定能写出高质量的作文，得到令人满意的考分。